读后续写·情感描写之愤怒（讲义＋武汉语境题组）-2027届高考英语一轮复习专项

读后续写·情感描写之愤怒

高三第一轮复习　｜　讲义与武汉语境题组　｜　建议 2 课时

写愤怒，先别让人物把话喊完。气到头上时，话会短下来，手里的东西放得比平时重，眼睛也避开对方。这一讲的词句都落在这些动作上；动笔前先想清楚人物手里拿着什么、那句要顶回去的话咽下之后手做了什么。

Ⅰ.词汇积累

五组词按名词、动词、形容词、副词和词块排开。落笔前先定人物此刻是忍着还是已经发作：rage、fury 这类重词留给爆出来的那一句，通篇都用反而没有轻重。

名词

anger怒气　irritation恼火　resentment怨气　a flush of heat一股火气　a tight jaw绷紧的下巴

动词

clench握紧　slam摔　bite back把话咽回去　glare怒视　storm out冲出去

形容词

furious暴怒的　annoyed恼火的　stiff僵硬的　tight-lipped抿着嘴的　heated情绪激动的

副词

sharply尖刻地　coldly冷冷地　abruptly突然地　under his breath低声地　without a word一言不发地

词块

hold one’s tongue忍住不说　keep one’s voice level把声音压平　a rush of blood to the face血往脸上涌　turn on one’s heel转身就走　let the words out把话放出来

Ⅱ.主题佳句积累

十句分三段排：前三句写憋着，中间五句写压不住，最后两句写收住。仿写挑四五句就够，不必全用。

1．He set the cup down carefully, as if the table had done something wrong.

他把杯子轻轻放下，像是桌子做错了什么。

2．A flush of heat rose to his face, but he kept his voice level.

一股火气涌上脸，他还是把声音压平了。

3．She counted to three before answering, and still the first word came out sharply.

她数到三才开口，第一个字还是带了刺。

4．His jaw tightened, and the pen snapped in his hand.

他下巴绷紧，手里的笔断了。

5．He pushed back his chair so abruptly that the legs scraped the floor.

他猛地推开椅子，椅脚刮过地面。

6．“That is not what we agreed,” he said, each word cut short.

“我们说好的不是这个”，他一字一顿地说。

7．She wanted to shout, but all that came out was a dry laugh.

她想喊，出口的却是一声干笑。

8．He glared at the door long after it had closed.

门关上很久了，他还盯着那里。

9．Then he picked up the pieces of the pen and put them in the bin.

然后他捡起笔的碎片，扔进垃圾桶。

10．By the time he spoke again, the anger had gone out of his voice.

等他再开口，声音里的火气已经没了。

Ⅲ.范文佳句积累

下面五句从本讲两篇范文里摘出，前三句在微练，后两句在进阶。

①He set the book down a second time and did not let go of it at once.

他把书重新放好，手没有马上松开。

②He heard his own voice rise, and stopped in the middle of the sentence.

他听见自己的声音抬高，话说到一半停住了。

③When he finally looked up, the room had gone quiet.

他终于抬起头时，屋里已经安静了。

④He said nothing, but his fingers had stopped moving.

他一句话没说，手指倒停住了。

⑤He turned the card over twice before he read it.

他把卡片翻了两次才去看上面的字。