读后续写·情感描写（讲义＋武汉语境题组）-2027届高考英语一轮复习专项

读后续写·情感描写（紧张）

高三第一轮复习　｜　讲义与武汉语境题组　｜　建议 2 课时

续写里的紧张不能只写一个 nervous。同样是紧张，在等候室里、站上台时、游到江心，写法不一样。紧张要落到身体上：心跳、手心、喉咙、腿、手指。一段里写两处身体反应，再补一个动作或一点声音，读的人就能感觉到。这一讲先积累词句，再仿写一段，最后成篇。

Ⅰ.词汇积累

下面五组词按词性排列。用的时候先定一个动作，再接一个身体部位。

名词

nervousness 紧张　anxiety 焦虑　tension 紧绷　panic 慌乱　unease 不安

动词

tremble 发抖　shake 颤抖　pace 来回踱步　clench 攥紧　swallow 咽口水　stammer 结巴

形容词

nervous 紧张的　anxious 焦虑的　uneasy 不安的　tense 绷紧的　restless 坐立不安的　apprehensive 忧惧的

副词

nervously 紧张地　anxiously 焦急地　uneasily 不安地　restlessly 烦躁地

词块

one's heart pounds/races　心跳得厉害

one's palms sweat　手心出汗

a knot in one's stomach　心里揪紧

hold one's breath　屏住呼吸

one's mind goes blank　脑子一片空白

with one's heart in one's mouth　提心吊胆

bite one's lips　咬着嘴唇

shift one's weight from foot to foot　两只脚来回换重心

a lump in one's throat　喉咙发紧

Ⅱ.主题佳句积累

十句按“等候—临场—临场之后”排列，前三句写等候，中间五句写临场，最后两句收在临场之后。背的时候连着场景一起记。

1. Her heart pounded so hard that she could hear it in her ears.

她的心跳得厉害，耳朵里都听得见。

2. He kept shifting his weight from one foot to the other, his eyes fixed on the door.

他不停地把重心从一只脚换到另一只脚，眼睛盯着门口。

3. A knot tightened in her stomach as the announcer called her name.

广播念到她的名字时，她的胃一下子揪紧了。

4. Her mind went blank the moment she stepped onto the stage.

一走上台，她脑子就空了。

5. He wiped his palms on his trousers and took a deep breath.

他在裤子上擦了擦手心，深吸一口气。

6. She bit her lip and swallowed hard, trying to keep her voice steady.

她咬着嘴唇使劲咽了一下，想让声音稳下来。

7. The queue moved forward an inch, and with it came a fresh wave of panic.

队伍往前挪了一寸，又是一阵慌乱。

8. His fingers trembled as he fastened the last button.

扣最后一颗扣子的时候，他的手指在抖。

9. She told herself it was only three minutes, but three minutes felt like three hours.

她告诉自己只有三分钟，可这三分钟像三个小时。

10. Then the whistle blew, and the tightness in his chest loosened all at once.

哨声一响，他胸口的紧劲一下子松开了。

Ⅲ.范文佳句积累

五句取自本讲后面的两篇范文。写的时候想不起来，翻到第Ⅳ、Ⅴ部分看它出现在哪一段。

1. Her heart pounded so hard that she could hear it above the drums.

她的心跳得厉害，盖过了岸上的鼓声。

2. Her first twenty strokes were all wrong, her arms catching the water at the wrong angle.

头二十下全乱了，手臂入水的角度不对。

3. She lost the red cap among all those arms. A knot tightened in her stomach.