读后续写·情感描写之悲伤（讲义＋武汉语境题组）-2027届高考英语一轮复习专项

读后续写·情感描写之悲伤

高三第一轮复习　｜　讲义与武汉语境题组　｜　建议 2 课时

难过的时候，人的动作会慢，同一件小东西会反复摸，一句话说到一半就停住。写这一段，先把旧物放到人物手里，再写他怎么看、怎么放回去，不必点明心情。下面的词按词性分组，选两三个就够用。

Ⅰ.词汇积累

词按五组排开，先想清楚人物是刚碰到那件旧物，还是已经缓了一阵。grief、sorrow 这样的重词留到情绪最满处用一次，其余交给动作。

名词

sorrow悲伤　grief悲痛　tears眼泪　silence沉默　an ache一阵隐痛

动词

choke back把……忍回去　tremble发抖　stare凝望　swallow咽下　smooth抚平

形容词

heavy沉重的　faded褪了色的　empty空落落的　still静止的　dull发闷的

副词

slowly慢慢地　gently轻轻地　quietly静静地　without a word一言不发地　over and over一遍又一遍地

词块

a lump in one’s throat喉咙发紧　hold back tears忍住眼泪　eyes fixed on ...眼睛盯着……　let out a long breath长长呼出一口气　put sth back in its place把某物放回原处

Ⅱ.主题佳句积累

十句的次序是：前三句写看见旧物，中间五句写情绪上来，最后两句写慢慢收住。可以整句仿写，也可以只取一个动词。

1．She turned the faded ticket over, then turned it back again.

她把那张褪色的票翻过来，又翻了回去。

2．The paper was soft at the corners, as if it had been held many times.

纸角已经发软，像是被人反复捏过。

3．He did not open the box at once; he kept one hand on the lid.

他没有马上打开盒子，一只手一直搭在盒盖上。

4．A lump rose in her throat, and she had to stop before the next word.

喉咙一阵发紧，下一个字出口前她不得不停住。

5．His voice came out lower than he meant it to.

他开口时声音比自己预想的还低。

6．She read the date twice, though she already knew it by heart.

日期她早就记熟了，还是又看了一遍。

7．“I thought I had lost these,” she said, and then said nothing more.

“我以为这些早丢了”，她说完就没再出声。

8．He stared at the empty chair for a long time before he moved.

他盯着那把空椅子看了很久才动。

9．Then she smoothed the paper flat and put it back in its place.

然后她把纸抚平，放回原处。

10．By the time she closed the box, her hands were steady again.

合上盒子的时候，她的手已经稳住了。

Ⅲ.范文佳句积累

五句都出自本讲范文，微练三句、进阶两句。

①I picked it up and held it in both hands, though I had not meant to.

我把它拿起来，两只手捧着，其实并没有打算这样。

②Its face was still set at ten past seven, the hour he used to come home.

表针还停在七点十分，那是他从前到家的钟点。

③I turned the little knob three times and held the watch to my ear.

我拧了三下小小的发条旋钮，把表贴到耳边听。

④I turned it over twice before I read the word on the back.

我把那张票翻了两次才去看背面的字。

⑤Then I smoothed the tickets flat, gathered them in order, and put the bundle back in the tin box.

然后我把票抚平，按顺序收拢，放回铁盒里。