读后续写·情感描写之后悔（讲义＋武汉语境题组）

读后续写·情感描写之后悔

高三第一轮复习　｜　讲义与武汉语境题组　｜　建议 2 课时

后悔落在已经来不及的事上。人物会把那件事在心里再过一遍，手停在同一处，明明知道改不了还去按一下。这一讲的例句都写这种停住的动作，不写心里怎么想。

Ⅰ.词汇积累

五组词先过一遍，再定人物是刚发现出了事，还是已经在回想。regret、guilt 这类词留给最难受的一句，前后都用动作撑着。

名词

regret懊悔　guilt内疚　an entry form比赛报名表　an empty seat空着的座位　a promise许下的承诺

动词

go back over把经过重想一遍　leave behind把某物落下　press按住　promise答应　write down记下

形容词

guilty内疚的　careless粗心的　empty空着的　steady稳住的　quiet安静的

副词

again又一次　twice两遍地　slowly慢慢地　still仍然　without a word一言不发地

词块

go back over the ride把一路上的经过重想一遍　keep one’s word守住承诺　leave sth lying on a seat把某物落在座位上　take the next bus赶下一趟车　keep one’s hand on sth手一直按着某物

Ⅱ.主题佳句积累

十句按发现东西不在了、回想经过、认下并动手补救三段排。最后两句是收尾，仿写时不要漏。

1．He put his hand into his bag a second time, though he knew the pocket was empty.

他又一次把手伸进包里，明明知道那个口袋是空的。

2．The seat beside her was bare, and she could not remember when she had last held the folder.

旁边的座位空着，她想不起上一次拿着文件夹是什么时候。

3．“It was in my hand when I got on,” he said, and then said nothing more.

“上车时还在我手里”，他说完就没再出声。

4．Again and again he went back to the moment he had set the folder down.

他一遍遍回到把文件夹放下的那一刻。

5．She could still see herself turning to answer a question, with the form resting on the seat.

她还记得自己转身去答话的样子，表格就搁在座位上。

6．He had promised to hand it in that morning, and the promise came back with every stop.

他答应过那天上午交上去，车每停一站，这句话就回到心里一次。

7．“If only I had checked before I got off,” she said, but she did not finish.

“要是下车前看一眼就好了”，她话没说完。

8．The bus had gone, and with it the one thing he had been asked to keep safe.

车开走了，连着那件别人托他保管的东西一起。

9．He took out his phone and began the message he owed his friend.

他掏出手机，开始写那条该给朋友的消息。

10．By the time he sent it, his hands were steady enough to hold the phone still.

等消息发出去，他的手已经稳得能拿住手机了。

Ⅲ.范文佳句积累

五句出自本讲两篇范文，前三句在微练，后两句在进阶。

①I read the two options again, though I had already read them three times.

我把两个选项又看了一遍，其实已经看过三遍了。

②I kept my thumb on the place where I had changed my answer.

我把拇指按在改答案的那一处。

③Then I folded the sheet along its old crease and put it into my pocket.

然后我把草稿纸按原来的折痕折好，放进口袋。

④I read the time on my phone twice, though it had not changed.

我把手机上的时间看了两遍，其实它并没有变。

⑤I kept the phone in my hand the whole way.

一路上我始终把手机攥在手里。