Unit 5 What a Delicious Meal 作文My Favorite Dish讲解课件2026-2027学年人教版八年级英语上册
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2026-2027学年人教版八年级英语上册
Unit 5 What a Delicious Meal!
作文讲解 My Favorite Dish
—— 西红柿炒蛋 · 制作过程 · 美食分享 ——
作文题目
你和朋友们打算在周末举办一个美食派对,每位朋友带一种美食来一起分享。你会制作西红柿炒蛋,请根据以下思维导图,用英语写一篇短文介绍美食的制作过程。
思维导图三点:
① 这道美食赋予的意义;② 美食的制作过程;③ 呼吁。
注意:可适当拓展;不得出现真实校名、地名、人名;词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
审题与任务分析
写什么
介绍西红柿炒蛋这道美食
三点必须写
意义 + 制作过程 + 呼吁
用什么时态
介绍菜用一般现在时;步骤用祈使句
高分句型
not only...but also; first/next/then/after that/finally; hope
字数要求
80词左右,可适当写到100词
头脑风暴
① 意义
favorite dish; easy to cook; family love; warm memories
② 制作过程
cut tomatoes; beat eggs; heat oil; fry; add sugar
③ 呼吁
try it; enjoy a happy meal together; share with friends
食材与准备
西红柿
two tomatoes
鸡蛋
three eggs
调料
a little salt; a little sugar; some oil
工具
a pan; a bowl; chopsticks
连词成句(一):意义
在我会做的所有菜中,西红柿炒蛋是我最喜欢的。它不仅容易做,而且象征着家人的爱。
提示:among all the dishes; not only...but also; a symbol of family love
Among all the dishes I can make, tomato and egg stir-fry is my favorite. It is not only easy to cook but also a symbol of my family love.
小时候妈妈经常做这道菜,它总是带给我温暖的回忆。
提示:when I was a child; bring me warm memories
My mother often made it when I was a child, and it always brings me warm memories.
连词成句(二):制作过程
首先,把两个西红柿切成小块。接下来,把三个鸡蛋打散,加一点盐。
提示:first; cut...into small pieces; next; beat eggs; add a little salt
First, cut two tomatoes into small pieces. Next, beat three eggs and mix them with a little salt.
然后,在锅里倒一些油,把鸡蛋炒到变黄。之后,加入西红柿炒几分钟。最后,把它们放在一起,加一点糖。
提示:then; heat oil; fry eggs; after that; add tomatoes; finally; add a little sugar
Then, heat some oil in a pan and fry the eggs until they are yellow. After that, add the tomatoes and cook for a few minutes. Finally, put everything together and add a little sugar.
连词成句(三):呼吁
这道菜简单又美味。我希望我的朋友们都能尝一尝,和我们一起享受快乐美食。
提示:easy and delicious; hope; try it; enjoy a happy meal together
This dish is easy and delicious. I hope my friends can try it and enjoy a happy meal together.
范文赏析
Among all the dishes I can make, tomato and egg stir-fry is my favorite. It is not only easy to cook but also a symbol of my family love. My mother often made it when I was a child, and it always brings me warm memories.
First, cut two tomatoes into small pieces. Next, beat three eggs and mix them with a little salt. Then, heat some oil in a pan and fry the eggs until they are yellow. After that, add the tomatoes and cook for a few minutes. Finally, put everything together and add a little sugar.
This dish is easy and delicious. I hope my friends can try it and enjoy a happy meal together.
红色=从句/高级句型 蓝色=步骤词 绿色=亮点表达
文章结构总览
第一段:意义
最喜欢的菜 + 为什么有意义
第二段:过程
First → Next → Then → After that → Finally
第三段:呼吁
简单美味 + 希望朋友品尝
时态
一般现在时;步骤用祈使句
字数
约105词,符合80词左右要求
语法结构总览
1. not only ... but also ...
不仅……而且……
2. when 引导时间状语从句
当……时候
3. 祈使句
Cut... / Beat... / Heat...
4. First, Next, Then, After that, Finally
步骤顺序词
5. hope (that) ...
希望……
语法精讲① not only ... but also
原句:It is not only easy to cook but also a symbol of my family love.
翻译:它不仅容易做,而且象征着家人的爱。
仿写(点击显示完整答案):
1. 这道菜不仅好吃,而且健康。
答案:This dish is not only delicious but also healthy.
2. 他不仅学习好,而且乐于助人。
答案:He is not only good at study but also ready to help others.
语法精讲② 步骤词
原句:First, cut... Next, beat... Then, heat... After that, add... Finally, put...
翻译:首先切……接下来打……然后加热……之后加……最后放……
仿写(点击显示完整答案):
1. 首先洗苹果,接下来把它们切碎。
答案:First, wash the apples. Next, cut them into pieces.
2. 最后把它们放在盘子里。
答案:Finally, put them on a plate.
语法精讲③ hope
原句:I hope my friends can try it and enjoy a happy meal together.
翻译:我希望我的朋友们都能尝一尝,和我们一起享受快乐美食。
仿写(点击显示完整答案):
1. 我希望你能来参加我的生日派对。
答案:I hope you can come to my birthday party.
2. 我希望我们每天都开心。
答案:I hope we can be happy every day.
语法精讲④ 祈使句
原句:Cut two tomatoes into small pieces. Beat three eggs.
翻译:把两个西红柿切成小块。打三个鸡蛋。
仿写(点击显示完整答案):
1. 请打开书,翻到第10页。
答案:Please open your books and turn to Page 10.
2. 上课不要迟到。
答案:Don't be late for class.
重点短语必背
1. tomato and egg stir-fry
西红柿炒蛋
2. be easy to cook
容易做
3. a symbol of family love
家人爱的象征
4. cut...into pieces
把……切成块
5. beat eggs
打鸡蛋
6. heat some oil
加热油
7. add a little sugar
加一点糖
8. enjoy a happy meal
享受快乐一餐
短语闯关
1. 西红柿炒蛋
tomato and egg stir-fry
2. 容易做
be easy to cook
3. 家人爱的象征
a symbol of family love
4. 把……切成块
cut...into pieces
5. 打鸡蛋
beat eggs
6. 加热油
heat some oil
7. 加一点糖
add a little sugar
8. 享受快乐一餐
enjoy a happy meal
背诵闯关(一)
在我会做的所有菜中,西红柿炒蛋是我最喜欢的。它不仅容易做,而且象征着家人的爱。
结构提示:among all the dishes; not only...but also
Among all the dishes I can make, tomato and egg stir-fry is my favorite. It is not only easy to cook but also a symbol of my family love.
小时候妈妈经常做这道菜,它总是带给我温暖的回忆。
结构提示:when I was a child; bring me warm memories
My mother often made it when I was a child, and it always brings me warm memories.
背诵闯关(二)
首先,把两个西红柿切成小块。接下来,把三个鸡蛋打散,加一点盐。
结构提示:first; cut...into pieces; next; beat eggs
First, cut two tomatoes into small pieces. Next, beat three eggs and mix them with a little salt.
然后,在锅里倒一些油,把鸡蛋炒到变黄。之后,加入西红柿炒几分钟。最后,把它们放在一起,加一点糖。
结构提示:then; heat oil; after that; finally
Then, heat some oil in a pan and fry the eggs until they are yellow. After that, add the tomatoes and cook for a few minutes. Finally, put everything together and add a little sugar.
这道菜简单又美味。我希望我的朋友们都能尝一尝,和我们一起享受快乐美食。
结构提示:easy and delicious; hope; try it
This dish is easy and delicious. I hope my friends can try it and enjoy a happy meal together.
易错提醒
步骤词不能少
First/Next/Then/After that/Finally 至少用4个
祈使句用动词原形
Cut, Beat, Heat, Add 不能写成 To cut
not only...but also 并列
并列两个形容词或两个动词,不要前后不一致
不要真实信息
不能写学校名、地名、人名
字数控制
80词左右,不要少于70,也不要超过120
写作技巧总结
三段式
意义—过程—呼吁,思路清晰
过程词
First/Next/Then/After that/Finally
高级句
not only...but also; when; hope
祈使句
步骤用动词原形开头
要点齐全
意义/制作/呼吁三点不能少
Keep writing, keep improving.
多读多写,熟能生巧
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