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译林九下 · Unit 1 A world of cultures 笔尖下的亚洲 Integration (D) · 用笔记写一篇国家介绍 写作课 范文进阶 读国家笔记 · 品教材范文 · 升级自己的作文 Lead-in 看图猜国家 开课抢答 2 译林九下 · Unit 1 A world of cultures · Integration 上节课我们说好要推荐一个亚洲国家——Millie 已经选好了，先看两张图猜猜是哪儿！ Taj Mahal 泰姬陵 Ajanta Caves 阿旃陀石窟 抢答：两处名胜都在同一个国家——India! 今天我们就学 Millie，把一个国家写成一篇好文章。 学习目标 Learning goals 目标 3 译林九下 · Unit 1 A world of cultures · Integration 1 读 读懂 Millie 的笔记和范文，理清“笔记 → 范文”的写作路径 2 记 积累 8 个写作话题词 + 6 个“加分句型”（教材原句 + 必刷题高阶句） 3 改 用 6 处升级点把一篇普通作文改成高分作文（先改后升） 4 写 12 分钟完成一篇介绍国家/家乡的邮件初稿，同桌互评 Part D1 Millie 的印度笔记 教材 P17 写作素材 4 译林九下 · Unit 1 A world of cultures · Integration Mr Wu 请大家推荐一个亚洲国家并写介绍文。Millie 选了印度——先读她的笔记。 Country: India Location: In South Asia Population: About 1.4 billion, one of the largest populations in the world Languages: Hindi and English as official languages Food: Curry, often served with rice Attractions: Taj Mahal, Ajanta Caves Taj Mahal 泰姬陵 Ajanta Caves 阿旃陀石窟 写作地图 笔记怎么变成文章 D1 → D2 教材逻辑 5 译林九下 · Unit 1 A world of cultures · Integration 开火车：笔记里 6 项内容，分别写进了范文的哪一段？ 开头 引出话题：为什么推荐这个国家 如果你对不同的文化、美食和名胜感兴趣… 正文① Location + Population India is located in South Asia. With about 1.4 billion people… 正文② Languages The country has two official languages—Hindi and English. 正文③ Food Indian curry is popular all over the world. 正文④ Attractions The famous Taj Mahal … is well worth a visit. 结尾 美好祝愿 A trip to India will be the experience of a lifetime. 一句话记住：笔记是“料”，范文是“菜”——按 开头—正文—结尾 的顺序下锅！ Part D2 精读范文 Discover India 教材 P18 教材范文 6 译林九下 · Unit 1 A world of cultures · Integration Read Millie's article about India. 边读边想：每一段对应笔记里的哪一项？ If you are interested in different cultures, delicious food and popular tourist attractions, India is a good choice for you. India is located in South Asia. With about 1.4 billion people, it has one of the largest populations in the world. The country has two official languages—Hindi and English. So you can use English if you visit big cities there. Indian curry is popular all over the world. It is a type of dish with meat and vegetables cooked in a spicy sauce, and it is often served with rice. The famous Taj Mahal, one of the wonders of the world, is well worth a visit. The design of the building is amazing. It is made of a type of special hard white stone. Another great site is the Ajanta Caves. There, you can see sculptures and paintings—the best examples of ancient Indian art. In India, there is so much to see and do. A trip to India will be the experience of a lifetime. 范文好句赏析 这四句要背下来 必背 金句 7 译林九下 · Unit 1 A world of cultures · Integration 四人小组：先自己读，说说好在哪里！ 开头推荐 India is a good choice for you. 点拨：a good choice 推荐万能句——换国家直接用 名胜描写 The famous Taj Mahal, one of the wonders of the world, is well worth a visit. 点拨：同位语 one of… + be well worth a visit 双加分 名胜描写 There, you can see sculptures and paintings—the best examples of ancient Indian art. 点拨：破折号补一句赞美，句子立刻有层次 结尾祝愿 A trip to India will be the experience of a lifetime. 点拨：the experience of a lifetime 一生的珍贵体验——收尾金句 Part D3 Useful expressions 写作万用句 分分类 教材 P18 8 译林九下 · Unit 1 A world of cultures · Integration 这 9 句就是“万能积木”——先读一遍，再说说哪几句放开头、哪几句放正文、哪句放结尾。 1. … is an interesting country to visit. 开头 2. I would like to recommend … to visit. 开头 3. … is a good choice for you. 开头 4. It is located in … 正文 5. The official language(s) of … is/are … 正文 6. The population of … is … 正文 7. One attraction not to be missed is … 正文 8. … is a must-see. 正文 9. A trip to … will be the experience of a lifetime. 结尾 口诀：一推荐、五介绍、一祝愿——开头勾人，正文实在，结尾升华。 高分词句储备① 话题词汇 词义抢答 必刷题 9 译林九下 · Unit 1 A world of cultures · Integration 写邮件推荐旅行地，这 8 个词是“刚需”——先遮住中文抢答词义！ frank 直爽的；坦率的 places of interest 名胜 hotel 旅馆；旅社 stop by 顺路来访 seafood 海鲜 ice and snow world 冰雪世界 population 人口 have fun / enjoy oneself 玩得开心 提醒：population 提问用 what、形容多用 large——上节课的考点还热乎呢！ 高分词句储备② 佳句仿写 学以致用 必刷题 10 译林九下 · Unit 1 A world of cultures · Integration 这四句都来自教材——句型一换，就能写自己的家乡。同桌开火车：一人仿一句！ 1. … I'm in love with Rome. (be in love with) 仿写：I'm in love with this small town. 我爱上了这座小镇。 2. It was well worth visiting! (be well worth doing) 仿写：This ancient city is well worth a slow visit. 这座古城很值得慢步游览！ 3. … it is interesting to talk to them about their lives. (it is + adj. + to do sth.) 仿写：It is relaxing to go surfing by the sea. 去海边冲浪令人放松。 4. A trip to India will be the experience of a lifetime. (the experience of a lifetime) 仿写：A trip around China will be the experience of a lifetime. 环游中国会是一生珍贵的体验。 范文进阶① 真题呈现与审题 必刷题 2026 无锡期末 11 译林九下 · Unit 1 A world of cultures · Integration 假如你是林浩，你的美国笔友 David 想来中国旅游。请你根据表格中的提示内容给 David 发一封电子邮件，给他推荐一些旅游胜地或特色活动。 Beijing the capital of China; places of interest; the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace … Dalian, Qingdao surf in summer Harbin go skiing or skating in winter 要求：1. 不得使用真实姓名和校名；2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；3. 字迹工整，词数 100 左右。 审题四问（点击核对）： 体裁 = 应用文（邮件） 时态 = 一般现在时＋一般将来时 · 人称 = 第一、三人称 要点 = 北京历史名胜＋其他城市特色活动 范文进阶② 列提纲：总—分—总 必刷题 结构 12 译林九下 · Unit 1 A world of cultures · Integration 本文适宜采用“总—分—总”结构——开火车说一说：每一段写什么？ 开头 开篇表明知道朋友想来中国 From your email I learn … / That's a good idea. 中间 介绍北京（历史+名胜），其他城市特色活动 Beijing is … / a world of ice and snow 结尾 表达美好祝愿 I'm looking forward to … 提纲 3 分钟画完——先搭架子再填肉，写起来才不会“东一榔头西一棒”。 范文进阶③ 一篇“不错但普通”的作文 你来当评委 先改后升 13 译林九下 · Unit 1 A world of cultures · Integration 林浩的初稿语法没大错，但只有 12 分上下——拿出红笔，找出 3 处可以“升级”的地方！ Dear David, From your email I know you want to visit China. That's a good idea. As you know, Beijing is the capital of China. It has a long history. In Beijing, there are many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace. The best time to come here is autumn. It's fun to go surfing in Dalian or Qingdao in summer. Besides, you can visit Harbin in winter. It's a world of ice and snow. It's a great place to go skiing or skating. You can also visit the Ice and Snow World that is famous around the world. I think you'll enjoy yourself in China. I hope you'll come soon and wish you a lot of fun. Yours, Lin Hao 范文进阶④ 升级点 1–3：让句子“高级”起来 逐条点击 先改后升 14 译林九下 · Unit 1 A world of cultures · Integration 先说初稿哪里弱，再点击看升级句——红句就是要抄进积累本的高分句！ 1 初稿：I know you want to visit China. 升级：I learn that you plan to pay a visit to China. 考：know→learn；want→plan to pay a visit（正式） 2 初稿：That's a good idea. 升级：…, which is a fantastic idea. 考：which 非限定从句，把两短句并成一句 3 初稿：many places of interest, such as … 升级：many places of interest, including the Great Wall … 考：such as→including，列举更书面 范文进阶⑤ 升级点 4–6：结尾最出彩 逐条点击 先改后升 15 译林九下 · Unit 1 A world of cultures · Integration 4 初稿：It's fun to go surfing in Dalian or Qingdao. 升级：It is really relaxing to go surfing in coastal cities like Dalian and Qingdao. 考：it is + adj. + to do（教材句型）+ like 举例 5 初稿：It's a great place to go skiing or skating. 升级：Harbin is well worth a winter trip. 考：be well worth + n.——教材“well worth a visit”直接迁移 6 初稿：I hope you'll come soon and wish you a lot of fun. 升级：I'm looking forward to your arrival and hope you will have the experience of a lifetime here. 考：look forward to + n. / the experience of a lifetime 收尾 发现没有？升级句全是教材和上一页的“存货”——背金句就是为了今天能掏出来！ 高分作文 6 个“加分句型” 齐读 积累本 16 译林九下 · Unit 1 A world of cultures · Integration 全班齐读一遍，然后合上嘴背给同桌听——这 6 句就是阅卷老师眼里的“朱砂印”。 1 I learn that you plan to pay a visit to … 2 …, which is a fantastic idea. 3 …, including … and … 4 It is really + adj. + to do … in … like … 5 … is well worth a visit / a winter trip. 6 I'm looking forward to … and hope you will have the experience of a lifetime. 实战强化训练 给 Peter 介绍你的家乡 课堂写作 2026 徐州期末 17 译林九下 · Unit 1 A world of cultures · Integration 假如你是李平，请用英文写一封邮件介绍你的家乡，并邀请你的英国笔友 Peter 来旅游。 Location in Sichuan Province, China Population about 300,000 Weather cool in summer Places to visit villages, mountains, lakes, grasslands Things to eat mushrooms, yak meat (牦牛肉) 要求：邮件必须包含表格信息，可适当增加细节；不得出现真实姓名校名；词数 80–100，开头结尾已给出、不计入总词数。 开头已给：Dear Peter, Have you ever seen a place as beautiful as my hometown in summer? 写作第一步 列提纲（5 分钟） 限时 小组合作 18 译林九下 · Unit 1 A world of cultures · Integration 对照表格，把提纲填完整——四人小组一人一项，写在草稿本上。 开头 招呼 + 总起（开头句已给，接一句“总体推荐”） 正文① Location + Population：in Sichuan Province / about 300,000 正文② Weather：cool in summer——所以夏天来最舒服（加一句评价） 正文③ Places：villages, mountains, lakes, grasslands（挑 1–2 个细写） 正文④ Food：mushrooms, yak meat（加一句“味道如何”） 结尾 邀请 + 祝愿：I'm looking forward to … 口诀：地点人口天气好，玩什么来吃什么，最后邀请不能少。 写作第二步 课堂限时写（12 分钟） 计时开始 独立写作 19 译林九下 · Unit 1 A world of cultures · Integration 安静写作 12 分钟——用上今天至少 2 个加分句型！ 1 包含表格全部 5 项信息，可适当加细节； 2 开头句和结尾署名已给，不计入总词数，词数 80–100； 3 至少用 2 个加分句型（which is… / including / be well worth / looking forward to …）； 4 写完读一遍：有没有第三人称单数、名词单复数的小错？ 名师支招：先用“笔记体”把 5 项写成 5 句，再用 and / besides 连句——先求对，再求好。 写作第三步 同桌互评 互画朱印 互评量表 20 译林九下 · Unit 1 A world of cultures · Integration 交换作文，对照 5 条打勾——全勾的画一枚朱印，缺哪条就在旁边写清建议。 ✓ 要点全 表格 5 项信息一项不缺 ✓ 结构清 开头总起—正文分段—结尾祝愿，一段一个重点 ✓ 句型亮 至少 2 个加分句型，用得自然不生硬 ✓ 语法准 动词时态、主谓一致、名词单复数无错 ✓ 书写美 字迹工整、卷面干净、词数达标 评完把作文还回去——3 分钟当面订正一处最大的问题，比回家改十遍都管用。 Summary 这节课你带走了什么 小结 21 译林九下 · Unit 1 A world of cultures · Integration 一条路径 笔记 → 提纲 → 范文 总—分—总：开头勾人、 正文分段、结尾升华 一批金句 a good choice / well worth the experience of a lifetime including / which is … 一套流程 审题四问 → 列提纲 限时写作 → 对照互评 3 分钟当面订正 写作如水墨：先有骨（提纲），再运笔（句型），最后落印（检查）——你的作文也能“气韵生动”。 分层作业 Homework 课后巩固 22 译林九下 · Unit 1 A world of cultures · Integration 必做 把课堂作文誊写一遍，按互评意见修改后交； 誊写作文 必做 积累本：抄写 6 个加分句型 + 各仿写一句； 积累本 选做A 用今天学的方法，再写一封“介绍另一个亚洲国家”的邮件（词数 80–100）； 迁移写作 选做B 把 Discover India 读给家人听，用中文讲讲泰姬陵和阿旃陀石窟。 开口表达 $