期中考书面表达策略指导2026-2027学年仁爱科普版英语八年级上册

聚焦语篇建构，赋能句型迁移——

八上期中考书面表达策略指导

书面表达1：

青少年是国家和民族的希望，是建设社会主义现代化的未来栋梁。拥有一个快乐、有价值的人生，对青少年和整个民族都具有重要意义。请根据以下要点和要求, 从中学生的角度, 以“How to live a happy life”为题写一篇短文。

注意事项：

1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总数；

2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。

How to live a happy life

As teenagers, we are the hope of our country and nation. Living a happy and valuable life is important.

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一、词汇与句型搭建 (Vocabulary & Sentence Building)

目标：把导图里的“词块”变成“句子”，逐个分支进行“造句训练”

分点 1: Living habits

词块: have enough sleep, eat healthy food, do more exercise (补充)

句型1: We should + 动词原形 + ...

造句：We should have enough sleep and eat healthy food.

句型2：It is + adj. + to do sth.  It is important/necessary for us to do...

造句: It is important for us to have enough sleep.

句型3：动名词作主语

造句: Eating healthy food is good for our health.

分点 2: Hobbies

词块: hobbies, feel relaxed, bring joy

句型1：Doing sth. / Having a hobby can make us...

造句: Having a hobby can make us feel relaxed.

句型2：并列连词 and/not only...but also...

造句: Hobbies can not only make us feel relaxed but also bring us joy.

或者简单点: We can do what we like. It can make us feel relaxed and bring us joy.

分点3: Dream

词块: dream, try one's best, come true

句型：1 使用if引导的条件状语从句

造句: If we try our best, our dreams will come true.

句型2：使用as long as引导

造句: As long as we try our best, our dreams will come true.

二、连句成篇与逻辑连接 (Structuring & Linking Words)

目标：学会如何排版，如何用连词把散句串起来。

1. 开头段（已给出）

As teenagers, we are the hope of our country and nation. Living a happy and valuable life is important.

学会使用过渡句：

How can we live a happy life? Here are some suggestions/tips for us.

Here are some suggestions/tips on how to live a happy life.

2. 主体段

第一点：First of all / Firstly (关于生活习惯)

第二点：Secondly / Besides (关于爱好)

第三点：Finally / Last but not least (关于梦想)

3. 结尾段

In a word / All in all (总之), let's try our best to live a happy life!

三、总结--【框架总览】

第一段（总）： 开门见山，点明主题（引用题目给出的开头），并加上一句过渡句引出下文。

第二段（分）： 分点论述（分点1生活习惯、分点2爱好、分点3梦想），用逻辑连接词串联。

第三段（总）： 总结全文，发出呼吁/展望未来。