11 英语作文之图画图表类（专项训练）（上海专用）2027年春季高考英语

函学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 11英语作文之图画图表类 目录 01课标达标练 难考向01图画作文 重考向02图表作文 02核心突破练（名校试题） 03真题溯源练 01 课标达标练 考向01图表作文 【来源】上海市华师二附中2025-2026学年高三3月测试英语试题 明启中学上周组织动物园春游，部分学生在游览后对园中动物的生存状态感到忧虑，因此学校的英文报社 对全校学生进行了问卷调查，并发布数据（如图)。请简要分析图表，谈谈你的立场，并说明理由。 LAST WEEK'S POLL Last week,we asked if all zoos should be closed. Most of you felt that would be unfair, because zoos do more good than harm. 1/8 函学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 > 考向02图画作文 (上海市杨浦区20242025学年高三上学期12月模拟质量调研英语试卷) Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你是新华中学学生，你校英文报正进行主题为My Favorite Cartoon Character的征文活动。请撰写征文，在 征文中： 1)表明你最喜欢的卡通角色（可参考下图或另选其他）： 2)简述该角色最打动你的瞬间； 3)谈谈该角色对你的影响。 Ne Zha Mulan The Little Prince Doraemon … 2/8 西学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 02 核心突破练 Passage 1 【来源】上海市徐汇区上海中学2025-2026学年高三上学期练习二英语试题 3.Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese 简要描述图片内容，结合生活实际，就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。 你们让我自己将好吗？ Passage2 （上海市建平中学20242025学年高三下学期3月考试英语试卷) 你是明启中学的高三学生李明，你学校的校报专栏”Pictures talk”提供了两幅图片，并向广大师生征文。 3/8 西学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 你有感而发，想向该专栏投稿。你的文章必须包含： 1.对图片的简要描述； 2.你的看法。 Passage3 【来源】上海市格致中学2025-2026学年高三上学期期中英语试卷 假设你是明启中学高三学生李明。外教o老师希望了解学生在课余时间的阅读习惯，以便更好地设计 和安排适合大家的阅读课程。为此，他请你在班级中开展了一次调查。请你根据所得数据（见下表）写一 篇短文，向Tom老师汇报调查结果，内容应包括： (1)简要介绍调查结果和同学的阅读习惯： (2)就阅读课程的安排提出建议并说明理由。 学生课余阅读习惯调查 阅读类型 占比 示例说明 英文原著或报 5% 阅读英文小说、新闻报道等 刊 网络文章 65% 浏览公众号、网络短文 4/8 西学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 课外学习资料 309% 阅读学习指南、模拟试题集等 Passage4 （上海市大同中学2024-2025学年高三下学期3月考试英语试卷) 当今社会，短视频已成为高中生获取信息的渠道之一，日前，某网站对某地高中生使用短视频的现状作了 调查，结果如下： 获取短视频内容的类型 受访者平均使用时间占比（该内容浏览时间总浏览时间) 辅助学习类 48% 娱乐休闲类 31% 生活技能类 12% 其他 9% 请简单描述该图表，并结合自身或他人情况，谈谈你的看法。 (文中不得出现考生姓名，学校等真实信息) Passage 5 (2025年上海市建平中学高三下学期三模考试英语试题) Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 5/8 学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查，调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学 生李华，请就此话题谈谈你的看法，写一篇150-180的作文，文章内容需涵盖： 教师是否会被人工智能取代 不能确定， 10% 是，34% 否，56% 1.简要描述图表： 2你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代： 3.你的理由。 03 真题溯源练 (2015·上海·高考真题) 学校即将举办“读书节”，目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳，你已找到以 下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容： 6/8 函学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 1.简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片； 2.阐述你用这幅图片宜传“读书节”的理由。 。 (2016上海·高考真题) 7/8 西学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为“父母是否以子女为荣”。通过调 研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）。根据图表写一份报告，在 报告中，你必须： 1描述调研数据； 2分析可能导致这一结果的原因。 父母：我以孩子为荣 80% 孩子：父母以我为荣 60% 06 2000 40°o 600。 800o 1009 8/8 11 英语作文之图画图表类 目录 01 课标达标练 考向01 图表作文 考向02 图画作文 02 核心突破练（名校试题） 03 真题溯源练 · 考向01 图表作文 【来源】上海市华师二附中2025-2026学年高三3月测试英语试题 明启中学上周组织动物园春游，部分学生在游览后对园中动物的生存状态感到忧虑，因此学校的英文报社对全校学生进行了问卷调查，并发布数据（如图）。请简要分析图表，谈谈你的立场，并说明理由。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Last week, Mingqi Middle School’s spring field trip to the zoo left some students concerned about the animals’ living circumstances. A school English newspaper survey on zoo closure revealed that 81% of students opposed it versus merely 19% in favor, as most believed zoos’ merits outweigh their demerits. I side with this viewpoint. To begin with, zoos serve as immersive educational platforms, enabling people, particularly youngsters, to understand animals up close and foster their animal protection awareness. Furthermore, zoos provide endangered species with a secure haven and professional care, shielding them from natural perils and human hunting. Last but not least, zoos conduct breeding research to safeguard biodiversity. In brief, zoos are irreplaceable for animal protection and education. With better living conditions for animals, zoos surely deserve to exist. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表类议论文。要求考生根据动物园是否该关闭的调查数据进行简要分析，明确自身立场并阐述理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 赞成：side with→subscribe to 揭示：reveal→uncover 培养：foster→cultivate 避难所：haven→sanctuary 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：To begin with, zoos serve as immersive educational platforms, enabling people, particularly youngsters, to understand animals up close and foster their animal protection awareness. 拓展句：To begin with, zoos serve as immersive educational platforms, which enable people, particularly youngsters, to understand animals up close and foster their animal protection awareness. 【点睛】【高分句型1】A school English newspaper survey on zoo closure revealed that 81% of students opposed it versus merely 19% in favor, as most believed zoos’ merits outweigh their demerits.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和as引导的原因状语从句) 【高分句型2】Furthermore, zoos provide endangered species with a secure haven and professional care, shielding them from natural perils and human hunting.(运用了现在分词短语作伴随状语) · 考向02 图画作文 （上海市杨浦区2024-2025学年高三上学期12月模拟质量调研英语试卷） Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你是新华中学学生，你校英文报正进行主题为My Favorite Cartoon Character的征文活动。请撰写征文，在征文中： 1）表明你最喜欢的卡通角色(可参考下图或另选其他)； 2）简述该角色最打动你的瞬间； 3）谈谈该角色对你的影响。 Ne Zha Mulan The Little Prince Doraemon … ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                    My Favorite Cartoon Character Among all the cartoon characters, my favorite one is Ne Zha. I’m deeply attracted by his rebellious spirit and his courage to face difficulties. The moment that touches me most is when Ne Zha decides to sacrifice himself to save his parents and the people in his hometown. Despite being misunderstood and facing great pressure, he still chooses to shoulder the responsibility. Ne Zha has had a profound impact on me. He teaches me to be brave in the face of challenges and to never give up easily. Whenever I encounter difficulties in my studies or daily life, I think of Ne Zha’s spirit and gain the strength to move forward. In a word, Ne Zha is not only a cartoon character to me, but also a role model that encourages me to be a better person. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以新华中学学生的身份，撰写一篇征文介绍自己最喜欢的卡通角色、打动自己的瞬间及该角色对自己产生的影响。 【详解】1.词汇积累： 吸引：attract→draw 牺牲：sacrifice→give up one’s life 面对：face→be faced with 获得：gain→attain 2.句式拓展： 同义句 原句：The moment that touches me most is when Ne Zha decides to sacrifice himself to save his parents and the people in his hometown. 拓展句：What touches me most is the moment when Ne Zha decides to sacrifice himself to save his parents and the people in his hometown. 【点睛】【高分句型 1】The moment that touches me most is when Ne Zha decides to sacrifice himself to save his parents and the people in his hometown.（运用了that引导的定语从句修饰the moment以及when引导的表语从句） 【高分句型 2】Whenever I encounter difficulties in my studies or daily life, I think of Ne Zha’s spirit and gain the strength to move forward.（运用了whenever引导的时间状语从句） Passage 1 【来源】上海市徐汇区上海中学2025-2026学年高三上学期练习二英语试题 3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 简要描述图片内容，结合生活实际，就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                           Overprotection in Daily Life     In the picture, a child trying to ride a bicycle is surrounded by three adults — they are overly anxious, reaching out to help or guide. The child, however, looks frustrated and asks, “Can you let me ride on my own?”     This scene mirrors a common issue in real life: parents or elders often overprotect kids out of love. For example, many students are not allowed to handle daily chores alone, which robs them of chances to learn independence.     Overprotection may keep kids safe temporarily, but it hinders their growth. We need to let children face small challenges on their own. Only by trying and even failing can they develop problem-solving skills and build resilience, which are essential for their future life. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于看图作文，要求简要描述图片内容，并结合生活实际谈对“过度保护”主题的感想。 【详解】1.词汇积累 围绕：surround→circumfuse 沮丧的：frustrated→discouraged 阻碍：hinder→impede 韧性：resilience→tenacity 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：This scene mirrors a common issue in real life: parents or elders often overprotect kids out of love. 拓展句：This scene mirrors a common issue in real life that parents or elders, who care deeply about kids, often overprotect them just out of love. 【点睛】【高分句型 1】For example, many students are not allowed to handle daily chores alone, which robs them of chances to learn independence.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型 2】Only by trying and even failing can they develop problem-solving skills and build resilience, which are essential for their future life.（运用 了“only + 介词短语” 开头的部分倒装结构和which引导的非限制性定语从句） Passage2 （上海市建平中学2024-2025学年高三下学期3月考试英语试卷） 你是明启中学的高三学生李明，你学校的校报专栏”Pictures talk” 提供了两幅图片，并向广大师生征文。你有感而发，想向该专栏投稿。你的文章必须包含： 1. 对图片的简要描述; 2. 你的看法。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】In the first picture, a young man tries repeatedly to shoot arrows at a target but fails to hit the center. He looks frustrated and wonders whether all his efforts mean failure. In the second picture, the man gives up and throws his bow and arrows into a trash can, leaving the target behind. From my perspective, these two pictures show that failure is part of the process towards success. The man who keeps trying may feel disappointed, but this is how one learns and grows. If we give up too soon, we will never know how close we might have been to our goals. Therefore, it is essential to learn from mistakes and keep making progress. As long as we persevere, every “failure” becomes a valuable lesson leading us closer to success in the end. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生需在学校的校报专栏”Pictures talk” 提供了两幅图片，并向广大师生征文。你有感而发，想向该专栏投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 沮丧的：frustrated→disappointed 放弃：give up→abandon 目标：goal→target 重要的：essential→important 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Therefore, it is essential to learn from mistakes and keep making progress. 拓展句：Therefore, it is essential that we should learn from mistakes and keep making progress.. 【点睛】[高分句型1] He looks frustrated and wonders whether all his efforts mean failure. (运用了whether引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2] As long as we persevere, every “failure” becomes a valuable lesson leading us closer to success in the end. (运用了as long as引导的条件状语从句) Passage3 【来源】上海市格致中学2025-2026学年高三上学期期中英语试卷 假设你是明启中学高三学生李明。外教 Tom 老师希望了解学生在课余时间的阅读习惯，以便更好地设计和安排适合大家的阅读课程。为此，他请你在班级中开展了一次调查。请你根据所得数据（见下表）写一篇短文，向 Tom 老师汇报调查结果，内容应包括： （1）简要介绍调查结果和同学的阅读习惯； （2）就阅读课程的安排提出建议并说明理由。 学生课余阅读习惯调查 阅读类型 占比 示例说明 英文原著或报刊 5% 阅读英文小说、新闻报道等 网络文章 65% 浏览公众号、网络短文 课外学习资料 30% 阅读学习指南、模拟试题集等 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Tom, As you requested, I conducted a survey on students' after-class reading habits in our class, and here are the results. A mere 5% of the students prefer reading English original works or newspapers, like English novels and news reports. The majority, accounting for 65%, choose to read online articles, such as those on official accounts and short online essays. Meanwhile, 30% of the students read extracurricular learning materials, including study guides and mock test collections. Based on these findings, I suggest that in the reading courses, you could incorporate more online materials. Since most students are interested in online articles, this can arouse their enthusiasm for reading. Also, for those who read original works, you might provide some classic English novels with detailed explanations to help them better understand the content. And for students focusing on learning materials, you could design reading tasks related to exam skills. This way, the reading courses can meet the diverse needs of different students. Best regards, Li Ming 【导语】这是一篇开放性作文。请考生根据所得数据（见下表）写一篇短文，向 Tom 老师汇报调查结果。 【详解】1.词汇积累： 进行：conduct→carry out 激发：arouse→stimulate 纳入：incorporate→include 多样的：diverse→various 2.句式拓展： 原句：Meanwhile, 30% of the students read extracurricular learning materials, including study guides and mock test collections. 拓展句：Meanwhile, 30% of the students read extracurricular learning materials, which include study guides and mock test collections. 【点睛】【高分句型 1】 The majority, accounting for 65%, choose to read online articles, such as those on official accounts and short online essays.（运用现在分词作后置定语） 【高分句型 3】 Based on these findings, I suggest that in the reading courses, you could incorporate more online materials.（使用虚拟语气和that引导的宾语从句） Passage4 （上海市大同中学2024-2025学年高三下学期3月考试英语试卷） 当今社会，短视频已成为高中生获取信息的渠道之一，日前，某网站对某地高中生使用短视频的现状作了调查，结果如下: 获取短视频内容的类型 受访者平均使用时间占比（该内容浏览时间/总浏览时间） 辅助学习类 48% 娱乐休闲类 31% 生活技能类 12% 其他 9% 请简单描述该图表，并结合自身或他人情况，谈谈你的看法。 （文中不得出现考生姓名，学校等真实信息） ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】A survey conducted by a website is aimed at figuring out the situation about high school students’ use of short videos as a channel for gaining information. As is clearly shown in the table, about 48% of their total screen time has been spent on contents that are of benefit to their study while time distributed to videos related to entertainment and leisure accounts for 31%.In addition, 12% of their time is taken up by watching videos concerning some important life skills. And 9% is spent on random contents. As far as I am concerned, it is the advances of the Internet that make it accessible for students to help with their study, relieve themselves of stress and improve their knowledge of life skills through short videos. Thus, it is no wonder that a large proportion of their time is spent on short videos. I am sure that this trend will continue and last forever. 【导语】本文是一篇图表类型作文。要求考生表格展示的内容去描述某地高中使用短视频的现状。 【详解】1.词汇积累 旨在：be aimed at→ be intended to do 与……相关：related to→ with regard to 除此以外：in addition→ additionally 提高：improve→enhance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：In addition, 12% of their time is taken up by watching videos concerning some important life skills. 拓展句：In addition, 12% of their time is taken up by watching videos that are relevant to some important life skills. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As is clearly shown in the table, about 48% of their total screen time has been spent on contents that are of benefit to their study while time distributed to videos related to entertainment and leisure accounts for 31%.（运用了as引导的非限制定语从句以及that引导的限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】As far as I am concerned, it is the advances of the Internet that make it accessible for students to help with their study, relieve themselves of stress and improve their knowledge of life skills through short videos.（运用了强调句型以及make it+形容词+for sb. to do sth.的结构） Passage 5 （2025年上海市建平中学高三下学期三模考试英语试题） Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查，调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学生李华，请就此话题谈谈你的看法，写一篇150-180的作文，文章内容需涵盖： 1.简要描述图表； 2.你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代； 3.你的理由。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Recently, our school conducted a survey on the topic of whether teachers will be replaced by artificial intelligence. 10% of respondents were unsure. 34% said they thought teachers would be replaced by artificial intelligence, while 56% said no. Personally speaking, teachers won’t be replaced by artificial intelligence. Because in addition to teaching students knowledge, teachers have a more important mission, which is to educate people. In terms of educating people, teachers possess qualities that cannot be replaced by artificial intelligence. Teachers are rich in feelings and wisdom, knowing how to imperceptibly into the excellent quality of education. Besides, artificial intelligence is only a partial replacement of teachers’ labor, and cannot replace the role of teachers. This is because although robots have communication functions such as dialogue and movement, they are far from the rich and delicate feelings of human beings. That is to say, the possibility of teachers being replaced is very small, and teachers become one of the jobs that artificial intelligence is difficult to replace. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文，最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查，调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学生李华，请就此话题谈谈你的看法，写一篇150-180的作文，文章内容需涵盖：1.简要描述图表；2.你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代； 3.你的理由。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 取代：replace→supersede 拥有：possess→take possession of 重要的：important→significant 也就是说：that is to say=in other words 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Teachers are rich in feelings and wisdom, knowing how to imperceptibly into the excellent quality of education. 拓展句：Teachers are rich in feelings and wisdom, who know how to imperceptibly into the excellent quality of education. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Because in addition to teaching students knowledge, teachers have a more important mission, which is to educate people. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Teachers are rich in feelings and wisdom, knowing how to imperceptibly into the excellent quality of education. (运用了现在分词作状语) （2015·上海·高考真题） 学校即将举办“读书节”，目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳，你已找到以下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容： 1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片； 2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Sir/Madam, Since the Reading Festival is around the corner, I’m writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading. In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read. It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion. Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration, as far as I’m concerned, it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated. Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots. You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you can’t help sharing it with your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well. The moment you mention the book, the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own. My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book. To sum up, the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading, instead of being dull and isolating, can be full of participation and common interest. I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Pan Yang 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐自己找到的三幅“读书节”宣传册图片中的一副。 【详解】1.词汇积累 将……考虑在内：take…into consideration→take…into account 真诚地：sincerely→genuinely 提高：enhance→promote 错综复杂的：intricate→complicated 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots. 拓展句：Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story which has fascinating and intricate plots. 【点睛】【高分句型1】In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read.(运用了现在分词短语作伴随状语和what引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you can’t help sharing it with your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句) （2016·上海·高考真题） Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为“父母是否以子女为荣”。通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）。根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须： 1.描述调研数据； 2.分析可能导致这一结果的原因。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     Recently, we made a survey about whether the parents agree that they are proud of their children. The result shows that 80% of parents are proud of their children while only 60% of children hold the same opinion. According to the survey, we can conclude that the number of parents who approved the idea is 20% more than of children. There seems to be two causes as we tried to figure out what led to this subtle difference. First, conservative Chinese parents are never accustomed to conveying directly how much they are proud of their children. This tendency to conceal feelings hardly helps children develop a strong sense of self-confidence. Second, the current education system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance, thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud. This bias unfairly undermines the significance of talents for art and sports, which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves. Without the genuine encouragement from parents and the reversal of exam-oriented educational methods, a kid would never end up with a positive grown-up． 【导语】本篇书面表达属于图标作文。考生最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为“父母是否以子女为荣”。通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）。根据图表写一份报告。 【详解】1.词汇积累 导致：lead to→result in 以……为自豪：be proud of→take pride in 帮助：help→assist 重要性：significance→importance 2.句式拓展 同义句 原句：Second, the current education system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance, thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud． 拓展句：Second, the current education system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance, which forces children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud. 【点睛】[高分句型1] This bias unfairly undermines the significance of talents for art and sports, which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] According to the survey, we can conclude that the number of parents who approved the idea is 20% more than of children. (运用了who引导的定语从句) 1 / 54 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $