Unit 4 Looking Good,Feeling Good 单元话题写作 -2026-2027学年高中英语译林版必修第一册

Unit4 单元话题议论文投稿+建议邮件写作 题目一：如今许多青少年深受容貌焦虑困扰，盲目追求瘦削的身材，尝试极端方式减肥。请你以 True Beauty Lies Within 为题写一篇英语议论文，向校英文报投稿。 内容包括： 1. 现象描述 2. 你的观点与理由 3. 总结倡议 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、一.审题 ✔ 体裁：议论文，向校英文报投稿 ✔ 标题：True Beauty Lies Within 真正的美源于内心 ✔ 人称：第一人称we；第三人称teenagers ✔ 时态：一般现在时（描述现象、表达观点、提出倡议） ✅ 三段式结构（严格匹配题目要求） 1. 开头段：现象描述 — 很多青少年受容貌焦虑困扰，盲目追求瘦削，采取极端方式减肥，损害身心健康 2. 主体段：观点+理由 — 外表短暂；善良、自信等内在品质才能长久，带来尊重；不追逐严苛审美，培养健康习惯、接纳自我 3. 结尾段：总结倡议 — 自信和好品格才使人真正有魅力，每个人都是独一无二的 二、积累短语 1. ___________________________遭受容貌焦虑困扰 2. ___________________________采取极端方式 3. ___________________________良好的品格 4. ___________________________对身心健康造成巨大伤害 5. ___________________________以貌取人 6. ___________________________ 以我们自己的方式 7. ___________________________内在品质 8. ___________________________自信 9. ___________________________永远伴随我们 10. ___________________________ 记住…… 11 ___________________________ 给身边人带来快乐 12. ___________________________赢得真正的尊重 13. ___________________________更有价值 14. ___________________________追逐严苛的审美标准 15. ___________________________ 养成健康的生活习惯 三、句型拆分：开头句 / 主体句 / 结尾句（带语法标注） ① 开头现象句 1. where引导定语从句（先行词society）；which引导非限制性定语从句，指代前面整件事 如今，许多青少年饱受容貌焦虑困扰。在一个以瘦为美的社会里，一些青少年甚至采用极端方式快速减肥，这对他们的身心健康伤害极大。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ ② 主体高分句 2.在我看来，我们不应该仅仅以貌取人。 _____________________________________________________________________ 3. while 并列连词，表对比 外在美不会长久，然而善良、自信这类内在品质可以永远陪伴我们。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 4.There is no doubt that … 毫无疑问，内在美更有价值。 _____________________________________________________________________ 5.instead of + doing 不要追逐严苛的审美标准，我们应该养成健康的生活习惯，学会接纳真实的自己。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ ③ 结尾高分句（重点！包含强调句+keep in mind that） 6. It is … that … 强调句型 总而言之，正是自信与良好的品格，让我们拥有真正的魅力。 _____________________________________________________________________ 四、句型仿写 1. There is no doubt that …（毫无疑问……） 毫无疑问，内在力量远比外表重要。 _____________________________________________________________________ 2. It is … that …（强调句） 正是自信赋予我们勇敢面对挑战的勇气。 _____________________________________________________________________ 3. where引导的定语从句 在一个将苗条视为美的社会环境中，青少年有时会采取极端节食方式，以期在短时间内减轻体重。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 五．满分范文 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 题目二：假定你是李华。你的英国笔友Mary来信倾诉：她对自己外形不满意，十分自卑，想要节食快速减肥。请你写一封回信。要点： 1. 表示理解； 2. 提出建议（接纳自我、健康运动、重视内在品质）； 3. 给予鼓励。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、审题 ✔ 体裁：建议信（书信），笔友Mary因外形自卑，打算节食快速减肥，写回信安慰并提建议 ✔ 人称：第一人称 I；第二人称 you ✔ 时态：一般现在时（表达理解、提建议、阐述道理） 文章结构（三段式） 1. 开头段：表达理解与同情，点明写信目的 2. 主体段：给出3条建议，搭配亮点句型拓展 3. 结尾段：给予鼓励升华 + 礼貌结束语 二、积累短语 1. ______________________因……感到焦虑 2. ______________________严格节食 3. ______________________提供实用建议 4. ______________________节食；不吃正餐 5. ______________________… 记住…… 6. ______________________损害某人健康 7. ______________________定期锻炼 8. ______________________保持均衡饮食 9. ______________________获取精力 10. ______________________建立自信 11. ______________________在于 12. ______________________ 内在品质 13. ______________________而不是 14. ______________________为……感到自豪 15. ______________________ 不切实际的审美标准 16. ______________________对某人有所帮助 三、句型拆分：开头句 / 主体句 / 结尾句 ① 开头句（共情，点明写信目的） 1. 听到你因外形感到焦虑，打算严格节食减肥，我很难过。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ ② 主体高分句 2. It作形式主语 + which引导非限制性定语从句，which指代前面整件事 节食减肥是不明智的，这会对你的健康造成很大伤害。 _____________________________________________________________________ 3.介词+which 非限制性定语从句 坚持规律运动、保持均衡饮食，通过这些方式，你可以获取精力、建立自信。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 4..instead of + doing 你应该接纳自我，为自己的闪光点自豪，而不是盲目追随不切实际的审美标准。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ ③ 结尾高分句（书信鼓励升华句） 5..keep in mind + that宾语从句 永远记住，你的价值远不止你的外表。 _____________________________________________________________________ 四、句型仿写 1. It is not wise to do sth, which…（形式主语+非限定定语从句） 毫无疑问，频繁熬夜是不明智的，这会影响你的学习与健康。 _____________________________________________________________________ 2. ……, through which ……（介词+which定语从句） 我们应该对生活保持积极的态度，凭借这种心态，我们能够克服遇到的任何困难。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 3. keep in mind that…（宾语从句） 永远记住，你的内在美远比外表更加耀眼。 _____________________________________________________________________ 五．满分范文 Dear Mary, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $Umt4单元话题议论文投稿+建议邮件写作 题目一：如今许多青少年深受容貌焦虑困扰，盲目追求瘦削的身材，尝试极 端方式减肥。请你以T1 ue Beauty Lies Within为题写一篇英语议论文，向校英文 报投稿。 内容包括： 1.现象描述 2.你的观点与理由 3.总结倡议 一审题 体裁：议论文，向校英文报投稿 √标题：True Beauty Lies Within真正的美源于内心 √人称：第一人称we;第三人称teenagers √时态：一般现在时（描述现象、表达观点、提出倡议） √三段式结构（严格匹配题目要求） 1.开头段：现象描述一很多青少年受容貌焦虑困扰，盲目追求瘦削，采取极 端方式减肥，损害身心健康 2.主体段：观点+理由一外表短暂；善良、自信等内在品质才能长久，带来尊 重：不追逐严苛审美，培养健康习惯、接纳自我 3.结尾段：总结倡议一自信和好品格才使人真正有魅力，每个人都是独一无 二的 二、积累短语 I.suffer from appearance anxiety遭受容貌焦虑困扰 2.turn to extreme ways采取极端方式 3.good character良好的品格 4.do great harm to physical and mental health对身心健康造成巨大伤害 5.judge people by their looks以貌取人 6.in our own way以我们自己的方式 7.inner qualities内在品质 8.self-confidence自信 9.stay with us forever永远伴随我们 l0.keep in mind that...记住... 11.bring joy to those around him给身边人带来快乐 12.win true1 espect赢得真正的尊重 l3.of greater value更有价值 l4.run after strict beauty standards追逐严苛的审美标准 15.develop healthy living habits养成健康的生活习惯 三、句型拆分：开头句/主体句/结尾句（带语法标注） ①开头现象句 1.where引导定语从句（先行词society):which引导非限制性定语从句，指代前 面整件事 Nowadays,many teenagers suffer from appearance anxiety.In a society where thinness is regarded as beauty,some teenagers even turn to extreme ways to lose weight quickly,which does great harm to their physical and mental health 如今，许多青少年饱受容貌焦虑困扰。在一个以瘦为美的社会里，一些青少年甚 至采用极端方式快速减肥，这对他们的身心健康伤害极大。 ②主体高分句 2.From my point of view,we should not judge people only by their looks. 在我看来，我们不应该仅仅以貌取人。 3.while并列连词，表对比 Outer beauty won't last long,while inner qualities such as kindness and self-confidence can stay with us forever. 2 外在美不会长久，然而善良、自信这类内在品质可以永远陪伴我们。 4.There is no doubt that.. There is no doubt that inner beauty is of greater value.毫无疑问，内在美更有价值。 5.instead of+doing Instead of running after strict beauty standards,we should develop healthy living habits and learn to accept who we are 不要追逐严苛的审美标准，我们应该养成健康的生活习惯，学会接纳真实的自己。 ③结尾高分句（重点！包含强调句+keep in mind that) 6.Itis.that..强调句型 All in all,it is confidence and good character that make us really attractive. 总而言之，正是自信与良好的品格，让我们拥有真正的魅力。 四、句型仿写 1.There is no doubt that..（毫无疑问..) There is no doubt that inner strength matters more than appearance.毫无疑问，内在力 量远比外表重要。 2.Itis.that..（强调句) It is self-confidence that gives us the courage to face challenges bravely. 正是自信赋予我们勇敢面对挑战的勇气。 3.where引导的定语从句 In a society where being thin is often seen as being beautiful,teenagers sometimes follow extreme diets to lose weight in a short time.在一个将苗条视为美的社会环境 中，青少年有时会采取极端节食方式，以期在短时间内减轻体重。 五.满分范文 Nowadays,many teenagers suffer from appearance anxiety.In a society where thinness is regarded as beauty,some teenagers even turn to extreme ways to lose weight quickly,which does great harm to their physical and mental health From my point of view,we should not judge people only by their looks.Outer beauty won't last long,while inner qualities such as kindness and self-confidence can stay with us forever.A person with a warm heart can bring joy to those around him and win true respect.There is no doubt that inner beauty is of greater value.Instead of 3 running after strict beauty standards,we should develop healthy living habits and learn to accept who we are. All in all,it is confidence and good character that make us really attractive.We should keep in mind that each of us is unique and show our beauty in our own way. 题目二：假定你是李华。你的英国笔友May来信倾诉：她对自己外形不满 意，十分自卑，想要节食快速减肥。请你写一封回信。要点： 1.表示理解 2.提出建议（接纳自我、健康运动、重视内在品质）： 3.给予鼓励。 一、审题 √体裁：建议信（书信），笔友May因外形自卑，打算节食快速减肥，写回信 安慰并提建议 √人称：第一人称I;第二人称you 时态：一般现在时（表达理解、提建议、阐述道理） 文章结构（三段式） 1.开头段：表达理解与同情，点明写信目的 2.主体段：给出3条建议，搭配亮点句型拓展 3.结尾段：给予鼓励升华+礼貌结束语 二、积累短语 1.suffer from anxiety about因...感到焦虑 4 2.go on a strict diet严格节食 3.offer practical suggestions提供实用建议 4.skip meals节食；不吃正餐 5.keep in mind that...记住... 6.do great harm to one's health损害某人健康 7.take1 egular exercise定期锻炼 8.keep a balanced diet保持均衡饮食 9.gain energy获取精力 10.build confidence建立自信 11.l1iein在于 12.inner qualities内在品质 13.1 ather than而不是 14.take pride in为...感到自豪 I5.nrealistic beauty standards不切实际的审美标准 l6.be of some help to sb对某人有所帮助 三、句型拆分：开头句/主体句/结尾句 ①开头句（共情，点明写信目的） 1.I'm sorry to hear that you are suffering from anxiety about your appearance and plan to go on a strict diet. 听到你因外形感到焦虑，打算严格节食减肥，我很难过。 ②主体高分句 2.It作形式主语+which引导非限制性定语从句，which指代前面整件事 It is not wise to skip meals to lose weight,which may do great harm to your health. 节食减肥是不明智的，这会对你的健康造成很大伤害。 3.介词+which非限制性定语从句 Take regular exercise and keep a balanced diet,through which you can gain energy and build confidence. 坚持规律运动、保持均衡饮食，通过这些方式，你可以获取精力、建立自信。 4..instead of doing:You should accept yourself and take pride in your strengths instead of following unrealistic beauty standards blindly 你应该接纳自我，为自己的闪光点自豪，而不是盲目追随不切实际的审美标准。 ③结尾高分句（书信鼓励升华句） 5.keep in mind+hat宾语从句 Always keep in mind that your value is far more than your appearance. 永远记住，你的价值远不止你的外表。 四、句型仿写 l.It is not wise to do sth,which..（形式主语+非限定定语从句) It is not wise to stay up late frequently,which may affect your study and health. 毫无疑问，频繁熬夜是不明智的，这会影响你的学习与健康。 2...,through which...（介词+which定语从句) We should keep a positive attitude towards life,with which we can overcome any difficulty we meet. 我们应该对生活保持积极的态度，凭借这种心态，我们能够克服遇到的任何困难。 3.keep in mind that..（宾语从句) Always keep in mind that your inner beauty shines brighter than your appearance 永远记住，你的内在美远比外表更加耀眼。 五.满分范文 Dear Mary, I'm sorry to hear that you are suffering from anxiety about your appearance and plan to go on a strict diet.I'm writing to offer you some practical suggestions It is not wise to skip meals to lose weight,which may do great harm to your health.To begin with,take regular exercise and keep a balanced diet,through which you can gain energy and build confidence.More importantly,true beauty lies in inner qualities rather than appearance.Last but not least,accept yourself and take pride in your strengths instead of following unrealistic beauty standards blindly. Above all,always keep in mind that your value is far more than your appearance. I hope my advice will be of some help to you. Yours. Li Hua 6