内容正文:
Section B (3a-3c)
单元话题写作讲练
What a Delicious Meal!
Unit5
本单元教材写作情境为“针对关于如何制作你最喜欢的菜肴的帖子写一
个回复”,属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“做人与做事”这一主题群,涉及子主
题“劳动实践”及“勤于动手,乐于实践”。常见的写作任务是描述某种食物的
制作过程。体裁多为说明文。
It’s called Cross - Bridge Rice Noodles 过桥米线
Do you know what kind of noodle this is ?
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Lead in
2. Do you know what’s this dish?
1. Do you like this dish?
3. What ingredients does this dish use?
FOOD
DELICIOUS
Guoqiao Rice Noodles
Let’s know something about its history
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Ingredients:
FOOD
DELICIOUS
Lead in
3. What ingredients does this dish use?
vegetables
meat
rice noodles
chiken soup
mushrooms
egg
shrimp
vegetables
vegetables
meat
rice noodles
chiken soup
egg
What else do you know about it?
Let’s read and find out more about it.
Let’s learn about the history and how to make it.
Why the "@" is used at the start?
On social media or blogs, “@ + name” tells readers who wrote the post and where it comes from.
How did the writer end his post and why?
By putting forward a question.
To share something with the fans and encourage more interaction(互动).
What’s purpose of this post from the ending?
Fast-reading
Fast-reading
(1) What is the passage mainly about?
(2) What is the main content of the article about?
Read the post and circle the ingredients that the chef uses.
One chef’s favourite Dish: Guoqiao Rice Noodles
This is about the history of Guoqiao Rice Noodles and how to make this dish.
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Reading
1. How many parts are there and what is the main idea for each part?
the folk stroy behind it
the folk stroy behind it
the recipe
interaction with readers
the recipe
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the folk stroy behind it
when
who
where
long ago
a couple
in Yunnan Province, China
poblem
solution
food got cold after a long way
studied on a island
went a long way to send meals
put everything into the soup when reaching
boiled the chicken soup and kept it warm
kept the ingredients separate
Why does the writer tell the stroy?
Reading
Because it shows love, care, and support .
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the folk stroy behind it
the recipe
interaction with readers
when
who
where
long ago
a couple
in Yunnan Province, China
poblem
solution
food got cold after a long way
put everything into the soup when reaching
boiled the chicken soup and kept it warm
kept the ingredients separate
love, care, and support
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the folk stroy behind it
the recipe
interaction with readers
the reasons why you like it
the brief introduction
beginning
body
ending
My favourite dish:_____________________
Why I like it:_________________________
Ingredients:_________________________
Steps:_____________________________
Story:_____________________________
What else:_________________________
Writing
It tastes really good/great/delicious.
first, next, then, after that ....finally...
It reminds me of home/holiday.
There’s an interest story behind it.
Long ago, there was/were...
What’s yours?/How about you?
We need ...
Here is my favourtie...
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Reading
the recipe
What do you tbink of the steps?
Easy and fun.
Why are the ingredients and rice noodles added last?
To keep the dish warm and fresh.
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the folk stroy behind it
when
who
where
long ago
a couple
in Yunnan Province, China
poblem
solution
food got cold after a long way
put everything into the soup when reaching
boiled the chicken soup and kept it warm
kept the ingredients separate
love, care, and support
the recipe
interaction with readers
Easy and fun.
To keep the dish warm and fresh.
Let’s write our own post
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Writing
the folk stroy behind it
the recipe
interaction with readers
Let’s write our own post
What else can we write about?
the reasons why you like it
the brief introduction
beginning
body
ending
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Writing
the folk stroy behind it
the recipe
interaction with readers
Let’s write our own post
the reasons why you like it
the brief introduction
beginning
body
ending
My favourite dish:_______
Why I like it:____________
Ingredients:____________
Steps:________________
Steps:________________
What else:____________
开头句
1.I love to cook because it is a good way to share love with others.
(教材Section B 1e)
仿写:吃一顿营养均衡的早餐是让你精力充沛地开启一天的好方法。
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Having a balanced breakfast is a good way to start your day with energy.
2.How to make fruit salad?Let me show you.(用“疑问词+动词不定式”升
格为一句话)
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3.Fruit salad is healthy and delicious.(用not only…but also…升格)
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Let me show you how to make fruit salad.
Fruit salad is not only healthy but also delicious.
中间句
1.You must mix them well.(用make sure to do sth.升格)
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Make sure to mix them well.
2.首先,洗蔬菜和蘑菇。(教材Section B 3a)
翻译: ______________________________________
First,wash the vegetables and mushrooms.
3.Next,cut the chicken and pork into thin pieces.(教材Section B 3a)
仿写:把水果切成片。
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Cut the fruit into pieces.
4.最后,把煮好的米粉加到碗里。(教材Section B 3a)
翻译: ___________________________________________
Finally,add the boiled rice noodles to the bowl.
结尾句
1.Now you can enjoy it.(用“It’s time to…”句型升格)
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2.It’s quite simple to make fruit salad.(用how引导的感叹句升格)
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3.You can have a try.(用“Why not…?”句型升格)
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Now it’s time to enjoy it.
How simple it is to make fruit salad!
Why not have a try?
【名言积累】
1.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。
2.Food is the first necessity of people.民以食为天。
3.No housewife can cook a meal without rice.巧妇难为无米之炊。
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Writing
the folk stroy behind it
the recipe
interaction with readers
the reasons why you like it
the brief introduction
beginning
body
ending
教材写作品读
My Favourite Dish
Hi!My favourite dish is tomato
and egg noodles. They are really
delicious.①Here’s how to make it.
Let’s have a try.
②To make the tomato and
egg noodles,we need to get
tomatoes,eggs and noodles. 教材原句
①【Section B 3a】Here’s how to
make the dish.(Here’s how to
make…这是制作……的方法)
②【Section A Pronunciation 2】To
make a banana milk shake,you need
to get…(动词不定式作目的状语)
③First,wash two tomatoes and ⑧
cut them into pieces.Break the eggs
and mix them.④Next,pour some
oil,eggs,tomatoes,water into the pot
⑨one by one.⑤Then,add the
noodles.⑥After that,cook them for a
few minutes. Don’t forget to add
some salt. ③④⑤⑥⑦【Section B 3a】
First…Next…Then…After
that…Finally…(灵活运用表示顺序
的词)
⑧【Section A 1c】Wash the
potatoes and cut them into pieces.
(cut…into pieces把……切成片)
续表
⑦Finally,⑩put the cooked noodles
into a big bowl.
Now,it’s time to enjoy the
tomato and egg noodles. ⑨⑩【Section B 3a】After that,put
the ingredients into the bowl,one by
one.(put…into…把……放
进……;one by one逐个地)
续表
Post-writing
THE FOURTH PART
04
Please check the article with your partner.
Content
内容 It contains:
1. My favourite food
2. The reason why I like it
3. The ingredients and instructions
language
语言 Students can use:
1. first, then, next, after that, Finally
2. Imperative sentences
3. exclamatory sentences
Grammar
语法 Students can use correct tense
hand-writing书写 neat
@......Hi! My favourite dish is tomato and egg noodles.
I like it because the taste is really wonderful — the sweet and sour tomatoes mix perfectly with the soft eggs, and the hot noodles make it a warm and comforting meal. It always reminds me of the time with my mom.
The ingredients are simple: noodles, two tomatoes, three fresh eggs, a little salt, some cooking oil, and a spoon of sugar..
Here’s how to make it. First, boil the noodles in a pot of water until they’re ready, then take them out and put them in a bowl. Next, wash the tomatoes and cut them into small pieces. Break the eggs into another bowl and stir them a bit. Then, heat some oil in a pan. Put the egg in first and cook until it turns golden. Add the tomato pieces and cook for about 3 minutes, until they become soft. Add a little salt and the spoon of sugar. Finally, pour this tomato - egg sauce over the noodles in the bowl.
Now you can enjoy this delicious dish! Would you like to try some too?
【提升版
假如你是李想,你校正在举办以
“我是料理达人”为主题的英语征文大
赛。请你根据以下图片提示,写一篇
80词左右的英语短文,跟大家分享一
下制作水果沙拉的过程。
审题指导
1.文体: ________
2.人称: __________
3.时态: ____________
4.写作要点: ________________________
说明文
第二人称
一般现在时
描述制作水果沙拉的过程
审题指导
1.文体: ________
2.人称: __________
3.时态: ____________
4.写作要点: ________________________
说明文
第二人称
一般现在时
描述制作水果沙拉的过程
思路点拨
Lead into the topic:How to make fruit salad
Describe how to make fruit salad
Express your feeling
小试身手
【基础版】One possible version:
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Fruit salad is healthy and delicious.Do you know how to make it?
To make fruit salad,you need to have some yogurt and some fruit you
like. For example,you can buy an orange,an apple,a banana and some
strawberries. First,wash the apple and strawberries,and peel the banana and
the orange. Then,cut the fruit into pieces and put them into a bowl.
Finally,pour the yogurt into the bowl and mix it with the fruit pieces.You
must mix them well. Now you can enjoy it.
It’s quite simple to make fruit salad. You can have a try.
【提升版】One possible version:
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How simple it is to make fruit salad!Why not have a try?
Fruit salad is not only healthy but also delicious.Now let me show
you how to make it.
To make fruit salad,you need to have some yogurt and some fruit you
like. For example,you can buy an orange,an apple,a banana and some
strawberries. First,wash the apple and strawberries,and peel the banana and
the orange. Then,cut the fruit into pieces and put them into a bowl.
Finally,pour the yogurt into the bowl and mix it with the fruit pieces.
Make sure to mix them well. Now it’s time to enjoy it.
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