2027届高考英语读后续写专项复习----淋雨重拾童心------导学案

阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I am told that we are experiencing a long drought here in Maine. In August, it seemed that some of the trees were already acquiring their fall colors, but on closer examination, I saw that they were turning brown for lack of water. There is a certain irony (讽刺) here, because Maine is a “water state”. However, I did look at the drought as a guarantee that I could confidently take a long walk without getting rained on. And so I set out over the dry grass of my backyard and headed for town under a cloudless sky. What a difference a short trip can make. On my return journey, the sky began to darken with thunder heads and, moments later, a downpour. My first impulse (冲动), of course, was to run, in hopes of making it home before getting soaked. But within a couple of minutes, I slowed down, realizing that running was pointless. I couldn't get any wetter than I already was. I walked along in the rain at a leisurely pace, and as I did so, I recalled charging out into the downpours with my friends, running wildly with arms and voices raised. This is a fundamental difference between childhood and adulthood: A grown-up is too careful, too concerned with manners and comfort, to deliberately walk in the rain, while a kid embraces the thick, pounding drops as a welcome change of pace. As I passed a house, a kind woman opened her front door and waved me in. “You're getting soaked,” she said, but I declined her well-meaning offer, smiled, and walked on. 注意：(1) 续写词数应为150左右；(2) 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1: Raindrops kept pouring down, washing away my worries little by little. Paragraph 2: When I finally got back home, I stood on the porch for a while. 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 缅因州遭遇长期干旱，树木因缺水枯黄 → “我”趁无云晴天出门散步前往镇上 → 返程时天空乌云密布，片刻后突降倾盆大雨 → _________________________________ → 悠闲慢行中回忆童年和朋友冲进大雨嬉戏，感慨成人的拘谨与孩子的畅快 → 路过好心女士家，婉拒避雨好意继续前行 →（续写）雨水逐渐冲刷掉烦恼，“我”放下体面与顾虑，像孩子一样享受大雨 →（续写）回到门廊驻足回味，重新找回久违的轻松与童心 4. 细节问答 What was happening in Maine?： ________________________________________________________________ Why were the trees turning brown?： ________________________________________________________________ Why did the writer set out for town confidently?： ________________________________________________________________ What happened on the return journey?： ________________________________________________________________ What was the writer's first impulse?： ________________________________________________________________ Why did the writer slow down?： ________________________________________________________________ What did the writer recall as he walked in the rain?： ________________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?： ________________________________________________________________ 5．情节线 缅因州长期干旱、树叶缺水枯黄 → “我”趁晴天无雨出门散步去镇上 → ________________________________________ → 回忆童年雨中嬉戏，对比成人的拘谨与孩子的畅快 → 婉拒路人避雨好意，继续冒雨前行 →（续写）雨水逐渐冲刷掉烦恼，“我”放下成人的顾虑，尽情享受大雨 →（续写）回到门廊驻足，回味雨中的体验，重新找回轻松与童心 6．情感线 I：confident and casual → startled and flustered → calm and reflective → relaxed and liberated → ___________ → peaceful and refreshed（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文： ________________________________________________________________ 英文： ________________________________________________________________ 8. 重点句式 同位语从句、状语从句、宾语从句、分词作伴随状语 ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 成长感悟类：_______________________________________ 二、情节构造 Paragraph 1: Raindrops kept pouring down, washing away my worries little by little. 衔接思考：How did I feel in the rain? What did I do like a child? ________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: When I finally got back home, I stood on the porch for a while. 衔接思考：What did I do on the porch? What realization did I have? ________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：雨点不停落下，一点点洗去我的烦恼。 →①__________________________________________________________ →②_________________________________________________________ →③_________________________________________________________； 第二段：终于回到家，我在门廊上站了一会儿。 →④_________________________________________________________ →⑤_________________________________________________________ →⑥_________________________________________________________。 四．段落续写 Paragraph 1: Raindrops kept pouring down, washing away my worries little by little. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: When I finally got back home, I stood on the porch for a while. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案（教师用） 一、文本分析 1．角色 I（成年人，雨中释怀、重拾童心的叙述者）；the kind woman（开门招手邀“我”避雨的好心女士，背景人物） 2．视角 第一人称（跟随 I） 3．时空线 缅因州遭遇长期干旱，树木因缺水枯黄 → “我”趁无云晴天出门散步前往镇上 → 返程时天空乌云密布，片刻后突降倾盆大雨 → “我”先想奔跑避雨，几分钟后放慢脚步，意识到跑也无意义 → 悠闲慢行中回忆童年和朋友冲进大雨嬉戏，感慨成人的拘谨与孩子的畅快 → 路过好心女士家，婉拒避雨好意继续前行 →（续写）雨水逐渐冲刷掉烦恼，“我”放下体面与顾虑，像孩子一样享受大雨 →（续写）回到门廊驻足回味，重新找回久违的轻松与童心 4. 细节问答 What was happening in Maine?：A long drought was hitting Maine. Why were the trees turning brown?：They were turning brown for lack of water. Why did the writer set out for town confidently?：The drought made him believe he could take a walk without getting rained on. What happened on the return journey?：The sky darkened with thunder heads and a downpour began moments later. What was the writer's first impulse?：To run home before getting soaked. Why did the writer slow down?：He realized running was pointless, for he couldn't get any wetter than he already was. What did the writer recall as he walked in the rain?：He recalled charging out into downpours with friends, running wildly with arms and voices raised. What does the story tell us?：We should not be too careful about manners and comfort; enjoying the moment like a child brings freedom. 5．情节线 缅因州长期干旱、树叶缺水枯黄 → “我”趁晴天无雨出门散步去镇上 → 返程突降暴雨，先想奔跑躲避，后放弃、悠闲慢行 → 回忆童年雨中嬉戏，对比成人的拘谨与孩子的畅快 → 婉拒路人避雨好意，继续冒雨前行 →（续写）雨水逐渐冲刷掉烦恼，“我”放下成人的顾虑，尽情享受大雨 →（续写）回到门廊驻足，回味雨中的体验，重新找回轻松与童心 6．情感线 I：confident and casual → startled and flustered → calm and reflective → relaxed and liberated → joyful and carefree → peaceful and refreshed（续写） 7. 综合概括 中文：长期干旱的晴天，“我”出门散步，返程突降暴雨；从想奔跑躲避到悠然慢行，回忆童年雨中嬉戏，婉拒避雨继续前行，雨水洗去烦恼，让“我”重新找回久违的轻松与童心。 英文：During a long drought, I walked to town on a cloudless day and was caught in a sudden downpour on my way back. After giving up running, I leisurely recalled childhood rain fun and declined shelter. The rain washed away my worries and helped me regain the carefree spirit I had lost in adulthood. 8. 重点句式 同位语从句：I did look at the drought as a guarantee that I could confidently take a long walk without getting rained on. 状语从句：There is a certain irony (讽刺) here, because Maine is a “water state”. 宾语从句：I am told that we are experiencing a long drought here in Maine. 分词作伴随状语：I recalled charging out into the downpours with my friends, running wildly with arms and voices raised. 9. 本文主题 成长感悟类：不必过度拘谨于体面与舒适，偶尔放下顾虑、像孩子一样拥抱生活，能让身心重新松弛下来。 二、情节构造 衔接思考1：I stopped caring about my wet clothes, spread my arms and laughed in the rain like a child, letting all my anxieties wash away. 衔接思考2：I watched the rain from the porch, felt light and peaceful, and realized a grown-up need not be so careful all the time. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：①冰冷的雨水顺着头发和脸颊流下，“我”却不再在意湿衣和体面→②我张开手臂，像童年那样仰起头笑对大雨，脚步变得轻快→③所有焦虑与烦恼都被雨水一点点冲走，心里只剩下畅快； 第二段：①我站在门廊上，望着仍在落下的雨幕→②浑身湿透却一身轻松，回味刚才雨中漫步的经历→③我忽然明白，不必总被谨慎和体面束缚，偶尔做回孩子，生活会变得轻盈许多。 四．段落续写（范文） Raindrops kept pouring down, washing away my worries little by little. The cold drops ran down my hair and cheeks, but I no longer cared about my wet clothes or my appearance. I spread out my arms and tilted my head back, laughing like the child I used to be. My steps grew light, and all the anxieties I had carried for weeks faded away. I even hummed a soft tune, letting the rain sweep every heavy thought away. When I finally got back home, I stood on the porch for a while. I watched the rain fall across the yard, my hair and shirt still dripping. I felt soaked, yet strangely light and peaceful. Breathing in the fresh wet air, I smiled at myself. I realized a grown-up did not have to be so careful all the time. Sometimes a sudden shower helped me step out of my manners and welcome the world like a little kid again. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $