Unit 8 写作讲义 2026-2027学年译林版英语七年级上册

新版译林七年级上册 Unit 8 Let's celebrate! 教师版 Unit 8 Let's celebrate! 单元同步写作讲义 话题解读 节日写作既要交代“何时过、怎样过”，也要写出“为什么珍惜”。介绍习俗用一般现在时，描写眼前的庆祝场景用现在进行时；用一两个家庭细节，把食物、活动与团聚的意义连起来。 写作指导 学校英语校刊正在征集“The Mid-Autumn Festival”主题短文。请介绍你最喜欢的中秋节，并结合以下家庭场景，写出这个节日对你的意义。 • 节日时间：农历八月十五；是家人团聚的日子。 • 通常活动：一家人聚在一起，吃月饼、赏满月。 • 今天的场景：在祖父母家庆祝；爸爸摆餐桌，奶奶切月饼，你为大家泡茶。 • 个人感受：月饼很甜，与家人共度的时光更珍贵；说明团聚带来的感受。 要求：包含全部要点，可合理补充；正文80—110词，标题不计；不使用真实校名。 ◆ 破题 ◆ 读者是校刊读者。先说清中秋节的时间和习俗，再用今天一家人的分工呈现团聚画面，最后说明珍惜的是什么；重点不能只停留在食物名称。 ◆ 定题材与时态 ◆ 本篇属于说明介绍类，以第一人称介绍家庭习俗。通常做什么用一般现在时；今天眼前正在做什么用现在进行时，转换处用Today交代。 We usually eat mooncakes together. Dad is laying the table now. 经历感受类侧重某一次过节的经过和感受，如回顾昨晚的家庭聚会，主要使用一般过去时。 We enjoyed the full moon together last night. 观点讨论类围绕保留节日习俗的意义表达看法，通常使用一般现在时，并用具体活动支撑观点。 Family celebrations keep our traditions alive. ◆ 定结构与提纲 ◆ 第一段：节日概况 最喜欢的节日 → 农历时间 → 团聚意义 第二段：习俗与现场 通常活动 → 今天的地点 → 爸爸、奶奶和我的分工 第三段：个人感受 月饼的甜 → 家人相伴更珍贵 → 亲近与幸福 ◆ 写作模板 ◆ 第一段 中秋节是我最喜欢的节日。它在农历八月十五。这是家人团聚的日子。 The Mid-Autumn Festival is my favourite festival. It falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month. It is a time for family reunion. 第二段 我们通常聚在一起，吃月饼、赏满月。今天，我们在祖父母家庆祝这个节日。爸爸正在摆餐桌，奶奶正在切一块月饼。我正在为大家泡茶。 We usually get together, eat mooncakes and enjoy the full moon. Today we are celebrating it at my grandparents' home. My father is laying the table, and my grandmother is cutting a mooncake. I am making tea for everyone. 第三段 月饼尝起来很甜，但与家人共度的时光对我来说更有意义。这个节日让我们更亲近，让家中充满幸福。 The mooncakes taste sweet, but time with my family means more to me. This festival brings us closer and fills our home with happiness. ◆ 连句成篇 ◆ The Mid-Autumn Festival The Mid-Autumn Festival is my favourite festival. It falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month. It is a time for family reunion. We usually get together, eat mooncakes and enjoy the full moon. Today we are celebrating it at my grandparents' home. My father is laying the table, and my grandmother is cutting a mooncake. Grandma is saving the first piece for me. I am making tea for everyone. The mooncakes taste sweet, but time with my family means more to me. This festival brings us closer and fills our home with happiness. 素材积累 ◆ 开头句 ◆ ★ The Dragon Boat Festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month. 端午节在农历五月初五。 ★ For my family, the best part of the Mid-Autumn Festival is being together. 对我的家人来说，中秋节最美好的部分就是团聚。 ★ Each family has its own way of welcoming the new year. 每个家庭都有自己迎接新年的方式。 ★ With the Lantern Festival just around the corner, our town is getting ready for a lively evening. 元宵节即将到来，我们的小镇正为一个热闹的夜晚做准备。 ◆ 中间句 ◆ ★ My grandparents are busy preparing food for the family dinner. 我的祖父母正忙着为家庭聚餐准备食物。 ★ While Dad is putting up the couplets, Mum is hanging a red lantern. 爸爸正在贴春联，妈妈则正在挂一盏红灯笼。 ★ The Lantern Festival is known for its colourful lanterns and lively celebrations. 元宵节以色彩缤纷的灯笼和热闹的庆祝活动而闻名。 ★ The full moon is a symbol of reunion in Chinese culture. 在中国文化中，满月是团圆的象征。 ◆ 结尾句 ◆ ★ It is time to sit down and enjoy our family dinner. 是时候坐下来享用我们的家庭晚餐了。 ★ I wish you and your family a happy and peaceful festival. 祝你和你的家人度过一个快乐、平安的节日。 ★ By sharing these old stories with children, families carry their traditions forward. 家人们通过与孩子分享这些古老的故事，将传统传承下去。 ★ The celebration ends, but the warmth of being together stays with us. 庆祝活动结束了，但相聚的温暖留在了我们心中。 ◆ 高分句型 ◆ ★ The festival brings together family members living in different cities. 这个节日让居住在不同城市的家庭成员团聚在一起。 ★ While Grandad is telling a story, the children are listening with bright eyes. 爷爷正在讲故事，孩子们则眼睛发亮地听着。 ★ The round moon is a symbol of reunion, reminding us to treasure time with our families. 圆月是团圆的象征，提醒我们珍惜与家人共度的时光。 ★ No matter where we are, the festival brings us together in spirit. 无论我们身在何处，这个节日都让我们的心相聚在一起。 ◆ 过渡表达 ◆ 准备 当天 夜晚 Before the festival,… → On the day itself,… → As night falls,… Before the festival, we prepare gifts for our relatives. On the day itself, we enjoy a big family meal. As night falls, we watch the moon and share old family stories. 眼前 同时 附近 Right now,… → Meanwhile,… → Nearby,… Right now, Mum is setting out fruit in the garden. Meanwhile, Dad is making tea for everyone. Nearby, my little sister is carrying plates to the table. Our family celebration is almost ready. 传统 家庭 延续 Behind these traditions,… → For our family,… → Year after year,… Behind these traditions, there is a wish to stay close to loved ones. For our family, a shared meal means listening to Grandma's stories. Year after year, the festival keeps that warm connection alive. ◆ 话题谚语 ◆ East or west, home is best. 金窝银窝，不如自己的草窝。 The more, the merrier. 人越多，越热闹。 When in Rome, do as the Romans do. 入乡随俗。 小试牛刀 ◆ 佳句仿写 ◆ 1. Mum is busy making mooncakes in the kitchen. 奶奶正忙着为全家准备晚餐。 参考答案：Grandma is busy preparing dinner for the whole family. 讲解：be busy doing表示“忙于做某事”；Grandma后用is。 2. While Mum is making tea, Dad is putting fruit on the table. 爸爸正在挂灯笼，我则正在帮奶奶包粽子。 参考答案：While Dad is hanging lanterns, I am helping Grandma make zongzi. 讲解：while连接同时进行的动作；Dad用is，I用am，后接动词-ing。 3. It is time to put up the Spring Festival couplets. 是时候和家人坐在一起赏月了。 参考答案：It is time to sit with our families and enjoy the moon. 讲解：It is time to后接动词原形；and并列sit和enjoy。 4. The Lantern Festival is known for its beautiful lanterns. 端午节以龙舟赛和粽子而闻名。 参考答案：The Dragon Boat Festival is known for its dragon boat races and zongzi. 讲解：be known for表示“因……而闻名”，for后接闻名的原因或特色。 5. We wish our friends a happy new year. 我们祝家人度过一个快乐、平安的节日。 参考答案：We wish our families a happy and peaceful festival. 讲解：wish＋人＋祝愿内容；此处不用wish sb to do。 ◆ 写作任务 ◆ 你的英国笔友Emma在邮件中询问中国家庭怎样过端午节。她对中国节日和食物了解不多。假设今天正是端午节，请以Lin Yue的身份给她回一封英文邮件，介绍习俗及家中此刻的活动，并表达感受。 • 时间与习俗：农历五月初五；通常吃粽子、看龙舟赛。用一句英语解释粽子是什么。 • 此刻的场景：妈妈正在包粽子，你正在帮她；爸爸和弟弟正在电视上看龙舟赛。 • 感受与回应：说明你喜欢这个节日的原因，并邀请Emma明年来一起庆祝。 要求：包含全部要点，可合理补充；正文80—110词，称呼与落款不计；不使用真实校名。 Dear Emma, Thanks for asking about the Dragon Boat Festival. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month. People usually eat zongzi and watch dragon boat races. Zongzi are parcels of sticky rice wrapped in leaves. Today is the festival. Mum is wrapping zongzi, and I am helping her. Meanwhile, Dad and my brother are watching a race on TV. They are cheering for their favourite team. I love this festival for its exciting races and time with my family. Come and celebrate it with us next year! Best wishes, Lin Yue ◆ 范文讲解 ◆ 破题：写给不了解中国习俗的英国笔友，既回答“怎样过端午”，也要让对方明白zongzi是什么。称呼、回应和邀请共同体现邮件的交流目的。正文89词。 题材与时态：本篇以说明介绍为主。时间和习俗用一般现在时；Today引出此刻的家庭场景，再用现在进行时，不能把每年的习俗一律写成正在发生。 结构：第一段回应来信，交代时间、习俗并解释食物；第二段写家人此刻的分工；第三段说出喜爱的原因，邀请对方参与。 细节：用sticky rice和wrapped in leaves解释粽子，照顾读者的文化背景；补充为喜欢的队伍加油，让电视前的场景更生动。 衔接：usually与Today区分习俗和眼前活动；Meanwhile连接同时发生的两组动作；They指爸爸和弟弟，her指妈妈，避免重复人名。 语言要点：现在进行时保留be，Mum后用is，I后用am，Dad and my brother后用are；wrap写成wrapping。for后接喜爱原因，结尾用祈使句发出友好邀请。 / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $新版译林七年级上册 Unit 8 Let's celebrate! 学生版 Unit 8 Let's celebrate! 单元同步写作讲义 话题解读 节日写作既要交代“何时过、怎样过”，也要写出“为什么珍惜”。介绍习俗用一般现在时，描写眼前的庆祝场景用现在进行时；用一两个家庭细节，把食物、活动与团聚的意义连起来。 写作指导 学校英语校刊正在征集“The Mid-Autumn Festival”主题短文。请介绍你最喜欢的中秋节，并结合以下家庭场景，写出这个节日对你的意义。 • 节日时间：农历八月十五；是家人团聚的日子。 • 通常活动：一家人聚在一起，吃月饼、赏满月。 • 今天的场景：在祖父母家庆祝；爸爸摆餐桌，奶奶切月饼，你为大家泡茶。 • 个人感受：月饼很甜，与家人共度的时光更珍贵；说明团聚带来的感受。 要求：包含全部要点，可合理补充；正文80—110词，标题不计；不使用真实校名。 ◆ 破题 ◆ 读者是校刊读者。先说清中秋节的时间和习俗，再用今天一家人的分工呈现团聚画面，最后说明珍惜的是什么；重点不能只停留在食物名称。 ◆ 定题材与时态 ◆ 本篇属于说明介绍类，以第一人称介绍家庭习俗。通常做什么用一般现在时；今天眼前正在做什么用现在进行时，转换处用Today交代。 We usually eat mooncakes together. Dad is laying the table now. 经历感受类侧重某一次过节的经过和感受，如回顾昨晚的家庭聚会，主要使用一般过去时。 We enjoyed the full moon together last night. 观点讨论类围绕保留节日习俗的意义表达看法，通常使用一般现在时，并用具体活动支撑观点。 Family celebrations keep our traditions alive. ◆ 定结构与提纲 ◆ 第一段：节日概况 最喜欢的节日 → 农历时间 → 团聚意义 第二段：习俗与现场 通常活动 → 今天的地点 → 爸爸、奶奶和我的分工 第三段：个人感受 月饼的甜 → 家人相伴更珍贵 → 亲近与幸福 ◆ 写作模板 ◆ 第一段 中秋节是我最喜欢的节日。它在农历八月十五。这是家人团聚的日子。 The Mid-Autumn Festival is __________________. It __________ the ______________ of the eighth lunar month. It is a time for _______________. 第二段 我们通常聚在一起，吃月饼、赏满月。今天，我们在祖父母家庆祝这个节日。爸爸正在摆餐桌，奶奶正在切一块月饼。我正在为大家泡茶。 We usually _____________, ______________ and ___________________. Today we _______________ it at my __________________. My father ___________________, and my grandmother ____________________. I ______________ for everyone. 第三段 月饼尝起来很甜，但与家人共度的时光对我来说更有意义。这个节日让我们更亲近，让家中充满幸福。 The mooncakes ____________, but time with my family ___________ to me. This festival ________________ and _______________ with happiness. ◆ 连句成篇 ◆ The Mid-Autumn Festival The Mid-Autumn Festival is my favourite festival. It falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month. It is a time for family reunion. We usually get together, eat mooncakes and enjoy the full moon. Today we are celebrating it at my grandparents' home. My father is laying the table, and my grandmother is cutting a mooncake. Grandma is saving the first piece for me. I am making tea for everyone. The mooncakes taste sweet, but time with my family means more to me. This festival brings us closer and fills our home with happiness. 素材积累 ◆ 开头句 ◆ ★ The Dragon Boat Festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month. 端午节在农历五月初五。 ★ For my family, the best part of the Mid-Autumn Festival is being together. 对我的家人来说，中秋节最美好的部分就是团聚。 ★ Each family has its own way of welcoming the new year. 每个家庭都有自己迎接新年的方式。 ★ With the Lantern Festival just around the corner, our town is getting ready for a lively evening. 元宵节即将到来，我们的小镇正为一个热闹的夜晚做准备。 ◆ 中间句 ◆ ★ My grandparents are busy preparing food for the family dinner. 我的祖父母正忙着为家庭聚餐准备食物。 ★ While Dad is putting up the couplets, Mum is hanging a red lantern. 爸爸正在贴春联，妈妈则正在挂一盏红灯笼。 ★ The Lantern Festival is known for its colourful lanterns and lively celebrations. 元宵节以色彩缤纷的灯笼和热闹的庆祝活动而闻名。 ★ The full moon is a symbol of reunion in Chinese culture. 在中国文化中，满月是团圆的象征。 ◆ 结尾句 ◆ ★ It is time to sit down and enjoy our family dinner. 是时候坐下来享用我们的家庭晚餐了。 ★ I wish you and your family a happy and peaceful festival. 祝你和你的家人度过一个快乐、平安的节日。 ★ By sharing these old stories with children, families carry their traditions forward. 家人们通过与孩子分享这些古老的故事，将传统传承下去。 ★ The celebration ends, but the warmth of being together stays with us. 庆祝活动结束了，但相聚的温暖留在了我们心中。 ◆ 高分句型 ◆ ★ The festival brings together family members living in different cities. 这个节日让居住在不同城市的家庭成员团聚在一起。 ★ While Grandad is telling a story, the children are listening with bright eyes. 爷爷正在讲故事，孩子们则眼睛发亮地听着。 ★ The round moon is a symbol of reunion, reminding us to treasure time with our families. 圆月是团圆的象征，提醒我们珍惜与家人共度的时光。 ★ No matter where we are, the festival brings us together in spirit. 无论我们身在何处，这个节日都让我们的心相聚在一起。 ◆ 过渡表达 ◆ 准备 当天 夜晚 Before the festival,… → On the day itself,… → As night falls,… Before the festival, we prepare gifts for our relatives. On the day itself, we enjoy a big family meal. As night falls, we watch the moon and share old family stories. 眼前 同时 附近 Right now,… → Meanwhile,… → Nearby,… Right now, Mum is setting out fruit in the garden. Meanwhile, Dad is making tea for everyone. Nearby, my little sister is carrying plates to the table. Our family celebration is almost ready. 传统 家庭 延续 Behind these traditions,… → For our family,… → Year after year,… Behind these traditions, there is a wish to stay close to loved ones. For our family, a shared meal means listening to Grandma's stories. Year after year, the festival keeps that warm connection alive. ◆ 话题谚语 ◆ East or west, home is best. 金窝银窝，不如自己的草窝。 The more, the merrier. 人越多，越热闹。 When in Rome, do as the Romans do. 入乡随俗。 小试牛刀 ◆ 佳句仿写 ◆ 1. Mum is busy making mooncakes in the kitchen. 奶奶正忙着为全家准备晚餐。   2. While Mum is making tea, Dad is putting fruit on the table. 爸爸正在挂灯笼，我则正在帮奶奶包粽子。   3. It is time to put up the Spring Festival couplets. 是时候和家人坐在一起赏月了。   4. The Lantern Festival is known for its beautiful lanterns. 端午节以龙舟赛和粽子而闻名。   5. We wish our friends a happy new year. 我们祝家人度过一个快乐、平安的节日。   ◆ 写作任务 ◆ 你的英国笔友Emma在邮件中询问中国家庭怎样过端午节。她对中国节日和食物了解不多。假设今天正是端午节，请以Lin Yue的身份给她回一封英文邮件，介绍习俗及家中此刻的活动，并表达感受。 • 时间与习俗：农历五月初五；通常吃粽子、看龙舟赛。用一句英语解释粽子是什么。 • 此刻的场景：妈妈正在包粽子，你正在帮她；爸爸和弟弟正在电视上看龙舟赛。 • 感受与回应：说明你喜欢这个节日的原因，并邀请Emma明年来一起庆祝。 要求：包含全部要点，可合理补充；正文80—110词，称呼与落款不计；不使用真实校名。 Dear Emma,                         Best wishes, Lin Yue / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $