Unit2写作讲义 2026-2027学年译林版七年级英语上册

新版译林七年级上册Unit2 Hobbies教师版 Unit2 Hobbies单元同步写作讲义 话题解读 本单元围绕兴趣爱好展开。写作要把“喜欢什么”推进到“平时怎样做、向谁学习、爱好怎样帮助 自己”。选择一个中心爱好，用具体活动呈现乐趣与收获，再把榜样、梦想和当下行动联系起来。 开头|爱好与理由 。爱好：选择一个中心爱好 ·理由：快乐体验+实际收获 My hobby 中间|活动与榜样 。活动：时间频率+地点 兴趣爱好 ·同伴：一起做什么+分享 ·榜样：是谁+向其学习什么 结尾「收获与愿望 ·收获：能力进步·情感体验 。愿望：未来目标·实际行动 写作指导 你校英语网站开设“Hobby Comner'栏目。假如你是李晨，请根据下面的信息，以My favourite hobby为题介绍自己的爱好。 ·爱好与理由：剪纸；喜欢动手制作东西；感到快乐，变得更有耐心。 ·活动：每周六在奶奶家和她一起练习，剪出花朵和动物。 ·分享：与朋友分享自己的作品。 ·榜样：奶奶；有耐心，经常教你新技巧。 ·梦想：成为美术老师，用剪纸技能教孩子们美术。 要求：包含全部要点，可合理补充；80一100词，标题不计；人物信息使用虚构内容。 ◆破题◆ 读者是校园网站上的同学，目的是分享一项爱好。文章围绕剪纸展开，写清练习与分享活动， 再写奶奶的指导和自己的梦想，让“活动一榜样一成长”形成联系。 ◆定题材与时态◆ 本篇属于说明介绍类，以第一人称、一般现在时写爱好和日常活动；介绍奶奶用第三人称单 数。梦想可用want to、hope to表达。 I practise every Saturday.My grandmother teaches me new skills. 115 新版译林七年级上册Unit2 Hobbies教师版 经历感受类围绕一次已经发生的活动展开，叙事常用一般过去时。 I made a paper flower yesterday.Ifelt proud. 观点讨论类说明对爱好价值的看法，一般性的观点和理由常用一般现在时。 I think hobbies are useful because they help us relax. ◆定结构与提纲◆ 第一段：爱好与理由 一个中心爱好→喜欢做什么→快乐或耐心等收获 第二段：活动与榜样 频率、地点、同伴一→作品与分享一榜样及其具体做法 第三段：梦想与联系 未来目标→爱好技能怎样帮助实现目标 ◆写作模板◆ 第一段 我最喜欢的爱好是剪纸。我喜欢动手制作东西。它给我带来快乐，也帮助我变得更有耐心。 My favourite hobby is paper-cutting.I enjoy making things with my hands.It brings me joy and helps me become more patient. 第二段 我每周六都在奶奶家和她一起练习。我们经常剪出花朵和动物。我也和朋友们分享作品。奶奶 是我的榜样。她很有耐心，经常教我新技巧。 I practise with my grandmother every Saturday at her home.We often cut out flowers and animals.I also share my work with my friends.My grandmother is my role model.She is patient and often teaches me new skills 第三段 我将来想成为一名美术老师。我的剪纸技能可以帮助我教孩子们美术。 I want to be an art teacher in the future.My paper-cutting skills can help me teach art to children. ◆连句成篇◆ My favourite hobby My favourite hobby is paper-cutting.I enjoy making things with my hands.It brings me joy and helps me become more patient.My simple designs also make lovely gifts. I practise with my grandmother every Saturday at her home.We often cut out flowers and animals.I also share my work with my friends.My grandmother is my role model.She is patient and often teaches me new skills.When a design is difficult,she shows me each step I want to be an art teacher in the future.My paper-cutting skills can help me teach art to children. 215 新版译林七年级上册Unit2 Iobbies教师版 素材积累 ◆开头句◆ *I have a great interest in making model planes. 我对制作飞机模型很感兴趣。 Reading is an important part of my everyday life 阅读是我日常生活中重要的一部分。 Through the lens of my camera,I see beauty in small,everyday things 透过相机的镜头，我能发现日常小事物中的美。 For me,playing the guitar is more than a hobby;it is a way to share my feelings. 对我而言，弹吉他不只是一项爱好，也是表达情感的一种方式。 ◆中间句◆ *I spend half an hour drawing after school every day. 我每天放学后花半小时画画。 *I learn new drawing skills by watching my art teacher at work. 我通过观察美术老师作画来学习新的绘画技巧。 *My art teacher sets a good example for me with her careful work. 我的美术老师作画认真，为我树立了好榜样。 The more I practise,the more confident I feel about my dream of becoming an artist. 我练习得越多，就对自己成为画家的梦想越有信心。 ◆结尾句◆ *I plan to make time for reading every day. 我计划每天留出时间阅读。 With every new drawing,I get a little closer to my dream. 每完成一幅新画作，我就离梦想更近一点。 *My dream of becoming an artist gives me a reason to practise every day 成为画家的梦想给了我每天练习的动力。 *Although I still have much to learn,I will keep working towards my dream. 虽然我还有很多东西要学，但我会继续朝着自己的梦想努力。 ◆高分句型◆ *I prefer making model planes to playing computer games 比起玩电脑游戏，我更喜欢制作飞机模型。 *I improve my drawing skills by studying the shapes of everyday objects. 我通过仔细观察日常物品的形状来提高绘画技能。 My grandmother teaches me how to cut flowers out of paper. 奶奶教我如何用纸剪出花朵。 315 新版译林七年级上册Unit2 Hobbies教师版 *My father shows me that being good at a hobby takes patience as well as practice. 父亲让我明白，要擅长一项爱好，除了练习，还需要耐心。 ◆过渡表达◆ 爱好安排效果 As for...To make time for it,...This leaves me time to... As for my hobby,drawing is my first choice.To make time for it,I finish my homework soon after school. This leaves me time to draw before dinner. 困难指导进步 During practice,...With...'s help,...Gradually,... During practice,I sometimes find a song difficult to play.With my music teacher's help,I work on one short part at a time.Gradually,I learn to play the whole song. 榜样行动成长 With...as my role model,...-To move closer to my dream,...Step by step,... With my art teacher as my role model,I want to become an artist.To move closer to my dream,I practise drawing every day.Step by step,I learn new skills and become more confident. ◆话题谚语◆ Rome wasn't built in a day.罗马不是一天建成的。 Where there is a will,.there is a way.有志者，事竟成。 A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行，始于足下。 小试牛刀 ◆佳句仿写◆ 1.I spend twenty minutes reading after school every day. 我每天放学后花半小时画画。 参考答案：I spend half an hour drawing after school every day. 讲解：spend+时间+doing sth表示花时间做某事；draw用drawing,half an hour表示半小时。 2.I learn new drawing skills by watching my art teacher at work 我通过观察奶奶的操作来学习新的剪纸技巧。 参考答案：I learn new paper-cutting skills by watching my grandmother at work. 讲解：by后接动词-ing形式，表示学习的途径；at work在这里指正在动手操作。 3.I prefer reading stories to watching films. 比起玩电脑游戏，我更喜欢制作飞机模型。 参考答案：I prefer making model planes to playing computer games 讲解：prefer A to B表示比起B更喜欢A;to是介词，making和playing保持形式一致，不能写成to play。 4/5 新版译林七年级上册Unit2 Hobbies教师版 4.I dream of becoming a writer,so I read a little every day. 我梦想成为一名音乐老师，所以我每天练习弹吉他。 参考答案：I dream of becoming a music teacher,.so I practise playing the guitar every day. 讲解：dream of后接动词-ing形式；practise后也接动词-ing形式；so引出为了梦想而采取的行动。 5.My grandmother teaches me how to cut flowers out ofpaper. 我的美术老师教我如何用简单的线条画动物。 参考答案：My art teacher teaches me how to draw animals with simple lines.. 讲解：teach sb how to do sth表示教某人如何做某事；how to后用draw,主语是My art teacher,谓语 用teaches。 ◆写作任务◆ 学校英语社团开设“Hobby Stars专栏，征集读书会分享者。请以My friend's hobby为题，介绍朋 友陈浩的阅读爱好，并说明推荐他的理由。 ·阅读习惯：每天放学后读20分钟，周五与同学分享故事。 ·榜样：爸爸；他每晚阅读，并认真倾听陈浩讲故事。 ·梦想与行动：成为作家，尝试写自己的短篇故事。 ·推荐理由：结合阅读习惯或榜样影响，说明他适合分享者的原因。 要求：包含全部要点，可合理补充；80一100词，标题不计；人物信息使用虚构内容。 My friend's hobby My friend Chen Hao loves reading.He reads for twenty minutes after school every day and shares stories with his classmates on Fridays. His father is his role model.They read together every evening.His father listens carefully to Chen Hao's stories,and Chen Hao learns to be patient. Chen Hao dreams of becoming a writer.Reading gives him ideas,and he often writes short stories.I recommend him as a speaker for our reading club because he is happy to share and ready to listen. ◆范文讲解◆ 破题：读者是社团专栏的同学，文章要把朋友的阅读习惯、榜样影响、梦想与推荐理由连起 来。范文正文为86词，标题不计。 定题材与时态：属于说明介绍类，以第三人称、一般现在时介绍朋友；结尾用I1 ecommend..表 达推荐。写梦想用dreams of becoming,不把整篇改成将来时。 定结构：第一段写爱好与具体阅读习惯；第二段写榜样及所学品质；第三段写梦想、写作行动 与推荐理由。 展开细节：“每天20分钟”和“周五分亨享故事”让阅读习惯具体；爸爸认真倾听，让榜样影响落到 耐心这一品质；尝试写短篇故事，把阅读与作家梦想接起来。 衔接与句型：learns to be patient写从榜样身上学到什么；Reading gives him ideas写爱好的实际 帮助；because引出适合分享者的理由。 语言要点：Chen Hao作主语时用loves.、reads、shares、dreams、writes;Reading作主语时用 gives;dream of后接becoming。his、him指陈浩或爸爸时，要结合前文使指代清楚。 515新版译林七年级上册 Unit 2 Hobbies 学生版 Unit 2 Hobbies 单元同步写作讲义 话题解读 本单元围绕兴趣爱好展开。写作要把“喜欢什么”推进到“平时怎样做、向谁学习、爱好怎样帮助自己”。选择一个中心爱好，用具体活动呈现乐趣与收获，再把榜样、梦想和当下行动联系起来。 写作指导 你校英语网站开设“Hobby Corner”栏目。假如你是李晨，请根据下面的信息，以 My favourite hobby 为题介绍自己的爱好。 • 爱好与理由：剪纸；喜欢动手制作东西；感到快乐，变得更有耐心。 • 活动：每周六在奶奶家和她一起练习，剪出花朵和动物。 • 分享：与朋友分享自己的作品。 • 榜样：奶奶；有耐心，经常教你新技巧。 • 梦想：成为美术老师，用剪纸技能教孩子们美术。 要求：包含全部要点，可合理补充；80—100词，标题不计；人物信息使用虚构内容。 ◆ 破题 ◆ 读者是校园网站上的同学，目的是分享一项爱好。文章围绕剪纸展开，写清练习与分享活动，再写奶奶的指导和自己的梦想，让“活动—榜样—成长”形成联系。 ◆ 定题材与时态 ◆ 本篇属于说明介绍类，以第一人称、一般现在时写爱好和日常活动；介绍奶奶用第三人称单数。梦想可用 want to、hope to 表达。 I practise every Saturday. My grandmother teaches me new skills. 经历感受类围绕一次已经发生的活动展开，叙事常用一般过去时。 I made a paper flower yesterday. I felt proud. 观点讨论类说明对爱好价值的看法，一般性的观点和理由常用一般现在时。 I think hobbies are useful because they help us relax. ◆ 定结构与提纲 ◆ 第一段：爱好与理由 一个中心爱好 → 喜欢做什么 → 快乐或耐心等收获 第二段：活动与榜样 频率、地点、同伴 → 作品与分享 → 榜样及其具体做法 第三段：梦想与联系 未来目标 → 爱好技能怎样帮助实现目标 ◆ 写作模板 ◆ 第一段 我最喜欢的爱好是剪纸。我喜欢动手制作东西。它给我带来快乐，也帮助我变得更有耐心。 My favourite hobby is ______________. I enjoy _______________________. It brings me _____ and helps me ___________________. 第二段 我每周六都在奶奶家和她一起练习。我们经常剪出花朵和动物。我也和朋友们分享作品。奶奶是我的榜样。她很有耐心，经常教我新技巧。 I practise with ______________ every _________ at _________. We often cut out ________ and ________. I also share _________ with ___________. My grandmother is ______________. She is ________ and often ______________________. 第三段 我将来想成为一名美术老师。我的剪纸技能可以帮助我教孩子们美术。 I want to be ______________ in the future. My paper-cutting skills can help me ______________________. ◆ 连句成篇 ◆ My favourite hobby My favourite hobby is paper-cutting. I enjoy making things with my hands. It brings me joy and helps me become more patient. My simple designs also make lovely gifts. I practise with my grandmother every Saturday at her home. We often cut out flowers and animals. I also share my work with my friends. My grandmother is my role model. She is patient and often teaches me new skills. When a design is difficult, she shows me each step. I want to be an art teacher in the future. My paper-cutting skills can help me teach art to children. 素材积累 ◆ 开头句 ◆ ★ I have a great interest in making model planes. 我对制作飞机模型很感兴趣。 ★ Reading is an important part of my everyday life. 阅读是我日常生活中重要的一部分。 ★ Through the lens of my camera, I see beauty in small, everyday things. 透过相机的镜头，我能发现日常小事物中的美。 ★ For me, playing the guitar is more than a hobby; it is a way to share my feelings. 对我而言，弹吉他不只是一项爱好，也是表达情感的一种方式。 ◆ 中间句 ◆ ★ I spend half an hour drawing after school every day. 我每天放学后花半小时画画。 ★ I learn new drawing skills by watching my art teacher at work. 我通过观察美术老师作画来学习新的绘画技巧。 ★ My art teacher sets a good example for me with her careful work. 我的美术老师作画认真，为我树立了好榜样。 ★ The more I practise, the more confident I feel about my dream of becoming an artist. 我练习得越多，就对自己成为画家的梦想越有信心。 ◆ 结尾句 ◆ ★ I plan to make time for reading every day. 我计划每天留出时间阅读。 ★ With every new drawing, I get a little closer to my dream. 每完成一幅新画作，我就离梦想更近一点。 ★ My dream of becoming an artist gives me a reason to practise every day. 成为画家的梦想给了我每天练习的动力。 ★ Although I still have much to learn, I will keep working towards my dream. 虽然我还有很多东西要学，但我会继续朝着自己的梦想努力。 ◆ 高分句型 ◆ ★ I prefer making model planes to playing computer games. 比起玩电脑游戏，我更喜欢制作飞机模型。 ★ I improve my drawing skills by studying the shapes of everyday objects. 我通过仔细观察日常物品的形状来提高绘画技能。 ★ My grandmother teaches me how to cut flowers out of paper. 奶奶教我如何用纸剪出花朵。 ★ My father shows me that being good at a hobby takes patience as well as practice. 父亲让我明白，要擅长一项爱好，除了练习，还需要耐心。 ◆ 过渡表达 ◆ 爱好 安排 效果 As for… → To make time for it,… → This leaves me time to… As for my hobby, drawing is my first choice. To make time for it, I finish my homework soon after school. This leaves me time to draw before dinner. 困难 指导 进步 During practice,… → With…'s help,… → Gradually,… During practice, I sometimes find a song difficult to play. With my music teacher's help, I work on one short part at a time. Gradually, I learn to play the whole song. 榜样 行动 成长 With…as my role model,… → To move closer to my dream,… → Step by step,… With my art teacher as my role model, I want to become an artist. To move closer to my dream, I practise drawing every day. Step by step, I learn new skills and become more confident. ◆ 话题谚语 ◆ Rome wasn't built in a day. 罗马不是一天建成的。 Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者，事竟成。 A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. 千里之行，始于足下。 小试牛刀 ◆ 佳句仿写 ◆ 1. I spend twenty minutes reading after school every day. 我每天放学后花半小时画画。   2. I learn new drawing skills by watching my art teacher at work. 我通过观察奶奶的操作来学习新的剪纸技巧。   3. I prefer reading stories to watching films. 比起玩电脑游戏，我更喜欢制作飞机模型。   4. I dream of becoming a writer, so I read a little every day. 我梦想成为一名音乐老师，所以我每天练习弹吉他。   5. My grandmother teaches me how to cut flowers out of paper. 我的美术老师教我如何用简单的线条画动物。   ◆ 写作任务 ◆ 学校英语社团开设“Hobby Stars”专栏，征集读书会分享者。请以 My friend's hobby 为题，介绍朋友陈浩的阅读爱好，并说明推荐他的理由。 • 阅读习惯：每天放学后读20分钟，周五与同学分享故事。 • 榜样：爸爸；他每晚阅读，并认真倾听陈浩讲故事。 • 梦想与行动：成为作家，尝试写自己的短篇故事。 • 推荐理由：结合阅读习惯或榜样影响，说明他适合分享者的原因。 要求：包含全部要点，可合理补充；80—100词，标题不计；人物信息使用虚构内容。 My friend's hobby                             / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $新版译林七年级上册 Unit 2 Hobbies 教师版 Unit 2 Hobbies 单元同步写作讲义 话题解读 本单元围绕兴趣爱好展开。写作要把“喜欢什么”推进到“平时怎样做、向谁学习、爱好怎样帮助自己”。选择一个中心爱好，用具体活动呈现乐趣与收获，再把榜样、梦想和当下行动联系起来。 写作指导 你校英语网站开设“Hobby Corner”栏目。假如你是李晨，请根据下面的信息，以 My favourite hobby 为题介绍自己的爱好。 • 爱好与理由：剪纸；喜欢动手制作东西；感到快乐，变得更有耐心。 • 活动：每周六在奶奶家和她一起练习，剪出花朵和动物。 • 分享：与朋友分享自己的作品。 • 榜样：奶奶；有耐心，经常教你新技巧。 • 梦想：成为美术老师，用剪纸技能教孩子们美术。 要求：包含全部要点，可合理补充；80—100词，标题不计；人物信息使用虚构内容。 ◆ 破题 ◆ 读者是校园网站上的同学，目的是分享一项爱好。文章围绕剪纸展开，写清练习与分享活动，再写奶奶的指导和自己的梦想，让“活动—榜样—成长”形成联系。 ◆ 定题材与时态 ◆ 本篇属于说明介绍类，以第一人称、一般现在时写爱好和日常活动；介绍奶奶用第三人称单数。梦想可用 want to、hope to 表达。 I practise every Saturday. My grandmother teaches me new skills. 经历感受类围绕一次已经发生的活动展开，叙事常用一般过去时。 I made a paper flower yesterday. I felt proud. 观点讨论类说明对爱好价值的看法，一般性的观点和理由常用一般现在时。 I think hobbies are useful because they help us relax. ◆ 定结构与提纲 ◆ 第一段：爱好与理由 一个中心爱好 → 喜欢做什么 → 快乐或耐心等收获 第二段：活动与榜样 频率、地点、同伴 → 作品与分享 → 榜样及其具体做法 第三段：梦想与联系 未来目标 → 爱好技能怎样帮助实现目标 ◆ 写作模板 ◆ 第一段 我最喜欢的爱好是剪纸。我喜欢动手制作东西。它给我带来快乐，也帮助我变得更有耐心。 My favourite hobby is paper-cutting. I enjoy making things with my hands. It brings me joy and helps me become more patient. 第二段 我每周六都在奶奶家和她一起练习。我们经常剪出花朵和动物。我也和朋友们分享作品。奶奶是我的榜样。她很有耐心，经常教我新技巧。 I practise with my grandmother every Saturday at her home. We often cut out flowers and animals. I also share my work with my friends. My grandmother is my role model. She is patient and often teaches me new skills. 第三段 我将来想成为一名美术老师。我的剪纸技能可以帮助我教孩子们美术。 I want to be an art teacher in the future. My paper-cutting skills can help me teach art to children. ◆ 连句成篇 ◆ My favourite hobby My favourite hobby is paper-cutting. I enjoy making things with my hands. It brings me joy and helps me become more patient. My simple designs also make lovely gifts. I practise with my grandmother every Saturday at her home. We often cut out flowers and animals. I also share my work with my friends. My grandmother is my role model. She is patient and often teaches me new skills. When a design is difficult, she shows me each step. I want to be an art teacher in the future. My paper-cutting skills can help me teach art to children. 素材积累 ◆ 开头句 ◆ ★ I have a great interest in making model planes. 我对制作飞机模型很感兴趣。 ★ Reading is an important part of my everyday life. 阅读是我日常生活中重要的一部分。 ★ Through the lens of my camera, I see beauty in small, everyday things. 透过相机的镜头，我能发现日常小事物中的美。 ★ For me, playing the guitar is more than a hobby; it is a way to share my feelings. 对我而言，弹吉他不只是一项爱好，也是表达情感的一种方式。 ◆ 中间句 ◆ ★ I spend half an hour drawing after school every day. 我每天放学后花半小时画画。 ★ I learn new drawing skills by watching my art teacher at work. 我通过观察美术老师作画来学习新的绘画技巧。 ★ My art teacher sets a good example for me with her careful work. 我的美术老师作画认真，为我树立了好榜样。 ★ The more I practise, the more confident I feel about my dream of becoming an artist. 我练习得越多，就对自己成为画家的梦想越有信心。 ◆ 结尾句 ◆ ★ I plan to make time for reading every day. 我计划每天留出时间阅读。 ★ With every new drawing, I get a little closer to my dream. 每完成一幅新画作，我就离梦想更近一点。 ★ My dream of becoming an artist gives me a reason to practise every day. 成为画家的梦想给了我每天练习的动力。 ★ Although I still have much to learn, I will keep working towards my dream. 虽然我还有很多东西要学，但我会继续朝着自己的梦想努力。 ◆ 高分句型 ◆ ★ I prefer making model planes to playing computer games. 比起玩电脑游戏，我更喜欢制作飞机模型。 ★ I improve my drawing skills by studying the shapes of everyday objects. 我通过仔细观察日常物品的形状来提高绘画技能。 ★ My grandmother teaches me how to cut flowers out of paper. 奶奶教我如何用纸剪出花朵。 ★ My father shows me that being good at a hobby takes patience as well as practice. 父亲让我明白，要擅长一项爱好，除了练习，还需要耐心。 ◆ 过渡表达 ◆ 爱好 安排 效果 As for… → To make time for it,… → This leaves me time to… As for my hobby, drawing is my first choice. To make time for it, I finish my homework soon after school. This leaves me time to draw before dinner. 困难 指导 进步 During practice,… → With…'s help,… → Gradually,… During practice, I sometimes find a song difficult to play. With my music teacher's help, I work on one short part at a time. Gradually, I learn to play the whole song. 榜样 行动 成长 With…as my role model,… → To move closer to my dream,… → Step by step,… With my art teacher as my role model, I want to become an artist. To move closer to my dream, I practise drawing every day. Step by step, I learn new skills and become more confident. ◆ 话题谚语 ◆ Rome wasn't built in a day. 罗马不是一天建成的。 Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者，事竟成。 A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. 千里之行，始于足下。 小试牛刀 ◆ 佳句仿写 ◆ 1. I spend twenty minutes reading after school every day. 我每天放学后花半小时画画。 参考答案：I spend half an hour drawing after school every day. 讲解：spend＋时间＋doing sth表示花时间做某事；draw用drawing，half an hour表示半小时。 2. I learn new drawing skills by watching my art teacher at work. 我通过观察奶奶的操作来学习新的剪纸技巧。 参考答案：I learn new paper-cutting skills by watching my grandmother at work. 讲解：by后接动词-ing形式，表示学习的途径；at work在这里指正在动手操作。 3. I prefer reading stories to watching films. 比起玩电脑游戏，我更喜欢制作飞机模型。 参考答案：I prefer making model planes to playing computer games. 讲解：prefer A to B表示比起B更喜欢A；to是介词，making和playing保持形式一致，不能写成to play。 4. I dream of becoming a writer, so I read a little every day. 我梦想成为一名音乐老师，所以我每天练习弹吉他。 参考答案：I dream of becoming a music teacher, so I practise playing the guitar every day. 讲解：dream of后接动词-ing形式；practise后也接动词-ing形式；so引出为了梦想而采取的行动。 5. My grandmother teaches me how to cut flowers out of paper. 我的美术老师教我如何用简单的线条画动物。 参考答案：My art teacher teaches me how to draw animals with simple lines. 讲解：teach sb how to do sth表示教某人如何做某事；how to后用draw，主语是My art teacher，谓语用teaches。 ◆ 写作任务 ◆ 学校英语社团开设“Hobby Stars”专栏，征集读书会分享者。请以 My friend's hobby 为题，介绍朋友陈浩的阅读爱好，并说明推荐他的理由。 • 阅读习惯：每天放学后读20分钟，周五与同学分享故事。 • 榜样：爸爸；他每晚阅读，并认真倾听陈浩讲故事。 • 梦想与行动：成为作家，尝试写自己的短篇故事。 • 推荐理由：结合阅读习惯或榜样影响，说明他适合分享者的原因。 要求：包含全部要点，可合理补充；80—100词，标题不计；人物信息使用虚构内容。 My friend's hobby My friend Chen Hao loves reading. He reads for twenty minutes after school every day and shares stories with his classmates on Fridays. His father is his role model. They read together every evening. His father listens carefully to Chen Hao's stories, and Chen Hao learns to be patient. Chen Hao dreams of becoming a writer. Reading gives him ideas, and he often writes short stories. I recommend him as a speaker for our reading club because he is happy to share and ready to listen. ◆ 范文讲解 ◆ 破题：读者是社团专栏的同学，文章要把朋友的阅读习惯、榜样影响、梦想与推荐理由连起来。范文正文为86词，标题不计。 定题材与时态：属于说明介绍类，以第三人称、一般现在时介绍朋友；结尾用 I recommend… 表达推荐。写梦想用 dreams of becoming，不把整篇改成将来时。 定结构：第一段写爱好与具体阅读习惯；第二段写榜样及所学品质；第三段写梦想、写作行动与推荐理由。 展开细节：“每天20分钟”和“周五分享故事”让阅读习惯具体；爸爸认真倾听，让榜样影响落到耐心这一品质；尝试写短篇故事，把阅读与作家梦想接起来。 衔接与句型：learns to be patient 写从榜样身上学到什么；Reading gives him ideas 写爱好的实际帮助；because 引出适合分享者的理由。 语言要点：Chen Hao 作主语时用 loves、reads、shares、dreams、writes；Reading 作主语时用 gives；dream of 后接 becoming。his、him 指陈浩或爸爸时，要结合前文使指代清楚。 / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $新版译林七年级上册Unit2 Hobbies学生版 Unit2 Hobbies单元同步写作讲义 话题解读 本单元围绕兴趣爱好展开。写作要把“喜欢什么”推进到“平时怎样做、向谁学习、爱好怎样帮助 自己”。选择一个中心爱好，用具体活动呈现乐趣与收获，再把榜样、梦想和当下行动联系起来。 开头丨爱好与理由 ·爱好：选择一个中心爱好 ·理由：快乐体验+实际收获 My hobby 中间|活动与榜样 ·活动：时间频率+地点 兴趣爱好 ·同伴：一起做什么+分享 。榜样：是谁+向其学习什么 结尾|收获与愿望 。收获：能力进步·情感体验 ·愿望：未来目标·实际行动 写作指导 你校英语网站开设“Hobby Comer'栏目。假如你是李晨，请根据下面的信息，以My favourite hobby为题介绍自己的爱好。 ·爱好与理由：剪纸；喜欢动手制作东西；感到快乐，变得更有耐心。 ·活动：每周六在奶奶家和她一起练习，剪出花朵和动物。 ·分享：与朋友分享自己的作品。 ·榜样：奶奶；有耐心，经常教你新技巧。 ·梦想：成为美术老师，用剪纸技能教孩子们美术。 要求：包含全部要点，可合理补充；80一100词，标题不计；人物信息使用虚构内容。 ◆破题◆ 读者是校园网站上的同学，目的是分享一项爱好。文章围绕剪纸展开，写清练习与分享活动， 再写奶奶的指导和自己的梦想，让“活动一榜样一成长”形成联系。 ◆定题材与时态◆ 本篇属于说明介绍类，以第一人称、一般现在时写爱好和日常活动；介绍奶奶用第三人称单 数。梦想可用want to、hope to表达。 I practise every Saturday.My grandmother teaches me new skills. 115 新版译林七年级上册Unit2 Hobbies学生版 经历感受类围绕一次已经发生的活动展开，叙事常用一般过去时。 I made a paper flower yesterday.Ifelt proud. 观点讨论类说明对爱好价值的看法，一般性的观点和理由常用一般现在时。 I think hobbies are useful because they help us relax. ◆定结构与提纲◆ 第一段：爱好与理由 一个中心爱好→喜欢做什么→快乐或耐心等收获 第二段：活动与榜样 频率、地点、同伴一作品与分享→榜样及其具体做法 第三段：梦想与联系 未来目标→爱好技能怎样帮助实现目标 ◆写作模板◆ 第一段 我最喜欢的爱好是剪纸。我喜欢动手制作东西。它给我带来快乐，也帮助我变得更有耐心。 My favourite hobby is I enjoy It brings me and helps me 第二段 我每周六都在奶奶家和她一起练习。我们经常剪出花朵和动物。我也和朋友们分享作品。奶奶 是我的榜样。她很有耐心，经常教我新技巧。 I practise with every at We often cut out and I also share with My grandmother is She is and often 第三段 我将来想成为一名美术老师。我的剪纸技能可以帮助我教孩子们美术。 I want to be in the future.My paper-cutting skills can help me ◆连句成篇◆ My favourite hobby My favourite hobby is paper-cutting.I enjoy making things with my hands.It brings me joy and helps me become more patient.My simple designs also make lovely gifts. I practise with my grandmother every Saturday at her home.We often cut out flowers and animals.I also share my work with my friends.My grandmother is my role model.She is patient and often teaches me new skills.When a design is difficult,she shows me each step. I want to be an art teacher in the future.My paper-cutting skills can help me teach art to children. 215 新版译林七年级上册Unit2 Hobbies学生版 素材积累 ◆开头句◆ *I have a great interest in making model planes. 我对制作飞机模型很感兴趣。 *Reading is an important part of my everyday life. 阅读是我日常生活中重要的一部分。 Through the lens of my camera,I see beauty in small,everyday things. 透过相机的镜头，我能发现日常小事物中的美。 For me,playing the guitar is more than a hobby;it is a way to share my feelings. 对我而言，弹吉他不只是一项爱好，也是表达情感的一种方式。 ◆中间句◆ *I spend half an hour drawing after school every day 我每天放学后花半小时画画。 *I learn new drawing skills by watching my art teacher at work. 我通过观察美术老师作画来学习新的绘画技巧。 *My art teacher sets a good example for me with her careful work. 我的美术老师作画认真，为我树立了好榜样。 *The more I practise,the more confident I feel about my dream of becoming an artist. 我练习得越多，就对自己成为画家的梦想越有信心。 ◆结尾句◆ *I plan to make time for reading every day. 我计划每天留出时间阅读。 With every new drawing,I get a little closer to my dream. 每完成一幅新画作，我就离梦想更近一点。 *My dream of becoming an artist gives me a reason to practise every day. 成为画家的梦想给了我每天练习的动力。 Although I still have much to learn,I will keep working towards my dream 虽然我还有很多东西要学，但我会继续朝着自己的梦想努力。 ◆高分句型◆ *I prefer making model planes to playing computer games. 比起玩电脑游戏，我更喜欢制作飞机模型。 *I improve my drawing skills by studying the shapes of everyday objects. 我通过仔细观察日常物品的形状来提高绘画技能。 *My grandmother teaches me how to cut flowers out of paper 奶奶教我如何用纸剪出花朵。 315 新版译林七年级上册Unit2 Hobbies学生版 *My father shows me that being good at a hobby takes patience as well as practice. 父亲让我明白，要擅长一项爱好，除了练习，还需要耐心。 ◆过渡表达◆ 爱好安排效果 As for...To make time for it,...This leaves me time to... As for my hobby,drawing is my first choice.To make time for it,I finish my homework soon after school. This leaves me time to draw before dinner. 困难指导进步 During practice,...With...'s help,...Gradually,... During practice,I sometimes find a song difficult to play.With my music teacher's help,I work on one short part at a time.Gradually,I learn to play the whole song. 榜样行动成长 With...as my role model,...-To move closer to my dream,...Step by step,... With my art teacher as my role model,I want to become an artist.To move closer to my dream,I practise drawing every day.Step by step,I learn new skills and become more confident. ◆话题谚语◆ Rome wasn't built in a day.罗马不是一天建成的。 Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者，事竟成。 A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行，始于足下。 小试牛刀 ◆佳句仿写◆ 1.I spend twenty minutes reading after school every day. 我每天放学后花半小时画画。 2.I learn new drawing skills by watching my art teacher at work 我通过观察奶奶的操作来学习新的剪纸技巧。 3.I prefer reading stories to watching films. 比起玩电脑游戏，我更喜欢制作飞机模型。 4.I dream of becoming a writer,so I read a little every day. 我梦想成为一名音乐老师，所以我每天练习弹吉他。 4/5 新版译林七年级上册Unit2 Hobbies学生版 5.My grandmother teaches me how to cut flowers out of paper. 我的美术老师教我如何用简单的线条画动物。 ◆写作任务◆ 学校英语社团开设“Hobby Stars专栏，征集读书会分享者。请以My friend's hobby为题，介绍朋 友陈浩的阅读爱好，并说明推荐他的理由。 ·阅读习惯：每天放学后读20分钟，周五与同学分享故事。 ·榜样：爸爸；他每晚阅读，认真倾听陈浩讲故事。 ·梦想与行动：成为作家，尝试写自己的短篇故事。 ·推荐理由：结合阅读习惯或榜样影响，说明他适合分享者的原因。 要求：包含全部要点，可合理补充；80一100词，标题不计；人物信息使用虚构内容。 My friend's hobby 515