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人教版八年级英语上册单元写作专项训练
Unit 5 What a Delicious Meal!
一、写作任务
Can you cook a dish? Please write a short passage about a delicious dish you can cook: how you make it step by step (use first, next, then, finally), and how your family like it. Please try to use exclamatory sentences. (80-100 words)
你会做菜吗?请写一段短文介绍一道你会做的美味菜肴:你是怎样一步一步做的(用上 first, next, then, finally),家人对它的评价如何。请尝试使用感叹句。词数80-100。
二、审题要点
(1)主题:
开头
引出菜肴(My favourite dish is tomatoes with eggs. / I can cook a delicious meal.)
正文
准备食材(First, wash the tomatoes and cut them up. / Next, break three eggs into a bowl.)
烹饪步骤(Then pour the oil into the pan. / Finally, add some salt and mix them up.)
结尾
家人的评价与感受(What a delicious meal! / My family love it very much.)
三、词汇 / 短语积累
【核心词汇】
1. 美味的
2. 一餐;饭
3. 做饭;烹调
4. 菜肴;盘
5. 食谱
6. 添加;增加
7. 糖
8. 盐
9. 油
10. 混合;掺入
11. 切
12. 倒;灌
13. 煮沸;烧开
14. 汤
15. 盘子
16. 片;块
17. 黄油
18. 奶酪
19. 三明治
20. 面包
21. 洋葱
22. 西红柿
23. 首先
24. 接下来
25. 然后
26. 最后
27. 打开(电器)
28. 锅
29. 鸡蛋
30. 香味;气味
【核心短语】
1. 做一道菜
2. 我最喜欢的菜
3. 西红柿炒鸡蛋
4. 切碎
5. 把……倒入锅里
6. 把……放进碗里
7. 加一些盐
8. 搅拌均匀
9. 打开煤气
10. 炒两分钟
11. 一条好建议
12. 一片面包
13. 尝起来很香
14. 闻起来很香
15. 多么美味的一餐啊!
16. 全吃光
17. 一步一步
18. 做饭给我吃
四、句式练习
第一段(开头):引出菜肴
我会做西红柿炒鸡蛋,它是我的拿手菜。(核心词:can cook, tomatoes with eggs, my best dish)
第二段(中间):按步骤介绍做法
首先,把西红柿洗净切碎,把三个鸡蛋打进碗里搅匀。(核心词:First, wash the tomatoes, cut them up, break three eggs, mix them)
然后,往锅里倒一些油,把鸡蛋倒入锅里炒一分钟。(核心词:Then, pour some oil into the pan, pour the eggs, cook for one minute)
最后,加入西红柿炒两分钟,再加一点盐就可以了。(核心词:Finally, add the tomatoes, cook for two more minutes, add a little salt)
第三段(结尾):家人的评价与感受
多么美味的菜啊!家人都把它吃得精光,我太开心了。(核心词:What a delicious dish, eat it all up, so happy)
五、进阶高分句型专练
(一)感叹句:What a / an + adj. + 名词!/ How + adj.!
句型公式:What a delicious meal! / How delicious the meal is!
注意:What 修饰名词(a/an + 形容词 + 名词),How 修饰形容词或副词;不可数名词前不加 a/an
◆ 多么好闻的味道啊!妈妈做的汤真是太好喝了。(核心词:What a good smell, How delicious, the soup, tastes)
(二)祈使句表步骤:动词原形开头
句型公式:First, do... / Next, do... / Don’t forget to do...(别忘了做……)
注意:祈使句以动词原形开头;否定祈使句用 Don’t + 动词原形
◆ 先把西红柿切碎。别忘了往锅里倒点油。(核心词:First, cut up the tomatoes, Don’t forget to, pour some oil)
(三)顺序连接词:first / next / then / finally
句型公式:First... Next... Then... Finally...(首先……接着……然后……最后……)
注意:描述做菜的步骤时按顺序使用,使过程清晰;finally 表示最后一步
◆ 首先烧开水,接着下面条,然后加个鸡蛋,最后加点盐。(核心词:First, boil the water, next, cook the noodles, then add an egg, finally add some salt)
(四)感官动词:taste / smell / look + 形容词
句型公式:主语 + taste(s) / smell(s) / look(s) + 形容词.(It tastes delicious.)
注意:taste、smell、look 是系动词,后接形容词作表语,不用副词
◆ 这个汤尝起来有点咸,但是闻起来很香。食物看起来真不错!(核心词:the soup, tastes a little salty, smells good, the food looks great)
六、写作
A Delicious Dish I Can Cook
七、参考答案与详细解析
【审题要点】
(1)主题:介绍一道菜肴的做法(西红柿炒鸡蛋)
【核心词汇】
1. delicious
2. meal
3. cook
4. dish
5. recipe
6. add
7. sugar
8. salt
9. oil
10. mix
11. cut
12. pour
13. boil
14. soup
15. plate
16. piece
17. butter
18. cheese
19. sandwich
20. bread
21. onion
22. tomato
23. first
24. next
25. then
26. finally
27. turn on
28. pan
29. egg
30. smell
【核心短语】
1. cook a dish
2. my favourite dish
3. tomatoes with eggs
4. cut up
5. pour... into the pan
6. put... into the bowl
7. add some salt
8. mix it up
9. turn on the gas
10. cook for two minutes
11. a piece of good advice
12. a piece of bread
13. taste delicious
14. smell good
15. What a delicious meal!
16. eat it all up
17. step by step
18. cook meals for me
【句式练习参考答案】
第一段(开头):
1. I can cook tomatoes with eggs, and it is my best dish.
第二段(中间):
1. First, wash the tomatoes and cut them up. Next, break three eggs into a bowl and mix them up.
2. Then, pour some oil into the pan and pour in the eggs. Cook them for one minute.
3. Finally, add the tomatoes and cook for two more minutes. Then add a little salt, and the dish is ready.
第三段(结尾):
1. What a delicious dish! My family eats it all up, and I feel so happy.
【高分句型专练参考答案】
(一)感叹句:What a / an + adj. + 名词!/ How + adj.!
参考答案:What a good smell! How delicious the soup tastes!
(二)祈使句表步骤:动词原形开头
参考答案:First, cut up the tomatoes. Don’t forget to pour some oil into the pan.
(三)顺序连接词:first / next / then / finally
参考答案:First, boil the water. Next, cook the noodles. Then add an egg, and finally add some salt.
(四)感官动词:taste / smell / look + 形容词
参考答案:The soup tastes a little salty, but it smells good. The food looks really great!
【写作范文】
A Delicious Dish I Can Cook
I can cook tomatoes with eggs, and it is my best dish. It is easy but delicious. First, wash two tomatoes and cut them up. Next, break three eggs into a bowl and mix them up. Then, pour some oil into the pan and pour in the eggs. Cook them for one minute. Finally, add the tomatoes and cook for two more minutes, then add a little salt, and the dish is ready. It smells so good! My family loves it very much. Every time I make it, they eat it all up. What a delicious dish! I feel so happy when I see them enjoy it. Cooking makes my family life sweeter.
【写作点评】
范文用 first / next / then / finally 清晰呈现做菜步骤,祈使句和感官动词 smells / tastes 使用得当,结尾以感叹句 What a delicious dish! 收束,充满生活气息。
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