Unit 4 A Glimpse of the Future单元写作作业设计（学生版+教师版）2026-2027学年高中英语外研版选择性必修第三册

外研版选择性必修三 Unit 4　A Glimpse of the Future 单元写作作业 一、单元写作任务 假定你是李华，你校英文报正在开展以"A Day in 2045"为主题的征稿活动，请想象并记叙二十年后你生活中的一天（可涉及交通、学习、医疗等方面），内容包括： 1. 描绘2045年某一天你的生活场景（两至三个方面）； 2. 写一件当天发生的、让你印象深刻的小事； 3. 表达你对未来的期待与思考。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 二、审题建模（动笔前先想清楚这六件事） 项目 写作要点 体裁 想象类记叙文（英文报征稿）：设定时间—按时间顺序记叙一天—落在一件事—收在感悟，标题已给。 人称 第一人称（I）记叙，行文中可用 it/they 指代智能设备。 时态 想象未来用一般将来时（will do / will be doing），穿插一般现在时谈普遍状况；结尾谈思考可用一般现在时。 结构 四段式（Para 2、3 也可合为一段，写成三段）。Para 1：一句点题（2045年的一个清晨醒来）；Para 2：写两三个场景（无人驾驶通勤、虚拟课堂、远程医疗）；Para 3：一件小事（AI 医生帮祖母诊病/全息影像里"见到"外地的父母）；Para 4：期待与思考（技术为生活服务，但温度仍来自人）。 要点 想象要"有凭据"：从今天的趋势合理外推（新能源、自动驾驶、远程医疗），不写成科幻小说；必须落到"一件小事"，否则容易堆砌场景、有景无情。 语气 新奇中带温情。多用具体画面（阳光、屏幕亮起、祖母的笑脸），少用"科技改变世界"式空话。 三、话题词块梳理 Ⅰ. 话题词汇（根据提示补全单词或词义） 话题词汇 1. future n. ____________ 2. ____________ vt. 预言；预测 3. prediction n. ____________ 4. ____________ n. 技术；科技 5. artificial intelligence ____________ 6. ____________ n. 机器人 7. virtual adj. ____________ 8. ____________ vt. 使改观；使转型 9. intelligent adj. ____________ 10. ____________ adj. 自动的；自动驾驶的 11. medical adj. ____________ 12. ____________ vt. 治愈；治好 13. energy n. ____________ 14. ____________ adj. 太阳的；太阳能的 15. renewable adj. ____________ 16. ____________ adj. 可持续的 17. convenience n. ____________ 18. ____________ n. 进步；进展 vi. 前进 19. breakthrough n. ____________ 20. ____________ n. 屏幕 21. explore vt. ____________ 22. ____________ n. 想象（力） 23. trend n. ____________ 24. ____________ n. 应用；申请 Ⅱ. 话题词块（根据汉语补全短语，或根据短语写出汉语） 话题词块 1. in the future ____________ 2. ____________ 二十年之后 3. come true ____________ 4. ____________ 做预测 5. dream of ____________ 6. ____________ 多亏；由于 7. play an important role in ____________ 8. ____________ 配备有 9. get around ____________ 10. ____________ 触手可及；唾手可得 11. have access to ____________ 12. ____________ 过着……的生活 13. keep in touch with ____________ 14. ____________ 处理；解决 15. cure diseases ____________ 16. ____________ 以……为动力 17. no longer ____________ 18. ____________ 取代；替代 19. look forward to ____________ 20. ____________ 带来；引起 21. a glimpse of ____________ 22. ____________ 对……感到好奇 23. as for ____________ 24. ____________ 视为理所当然 25. wake up ____________ 26. ____________ 全息影像 27. self-driving car ____________ 28. ____________ 虚拟教室 29. to be honest ____________ 30. ____________ 更重要的是 Ⅲ. 词块升级（把左边的“基础表达”换成右边更高级的说法） 基础表达 升级表达 1. In the future, cars will be very smart. ____________________ 2. Technology will change our lives. ____________________ 3. We can see the doctor at home. ____________________ 4. Life will be very convenient. ____________________ 5. I think the future is good. ____________________ 6. People will not get sick easily. ____________________ 7. I will live in a smart house. ____________________ 8. We should welcome the future. ____________________ 四、教材好句精选（根据汉语补全句子，注意课文句式与词块的用法） 1. 二十年后，人工智能将深刻改变我们的生活方式。 　　In twenty years' time, artificial intelligence ________ ________ ________ the way we live profoundly. 2. 无人驾驶汽车将载着我在城市间穿行。 　　________ cars will carry me smoothly from one corner of the city to another. 3. 多亏了远程医疗，祖母足不出户就能看上专家门诊。 　　________ ________ telemedicine, Grandma can see a top doctor without leaving home. 4. 未来的教室将是虚拟的，老师来自世界任何角落。 　　Classrooms of the future will be virtual, with teachers ________ ________ any corner of the world. 5. 那天早上，我的房间被晨光而不是闹钟唤醒。 　　That morning, my room was ________ ________ by sunlight instead of an alarm. 6. 曾经令人恐惧的疾病，将能被早发现、早治愈。 　　Diseases that frighten us today ________ ________ caught and cured before they start. 7. 借助全息影像，我"来到"了两千公里外的祖母身边。 　　With a ________ ________, I "arrived" at my grandma's side, two thousand kilometres away. 8. 无论技术多么发达，我们都不能把它视为理所当然。 　　No matter how advanced technology becomes, we should never ________ ________ ________ ________. 9. 正是那次视频问诊，让我第一次感到未来触手可及。 　　It was that video consultation that made me feel the future ________ ________ ________. 10. 只有让技术服务于人，未来才会真正美好。 　　Only when technology serves people ________ the future ________ truly bright. 11. 我们期待的不是更快的机器，而是更温暖的生活。 　　What we look forward to is not faster machines, ________ ________ ________. 12. 那一天让我明白：未来不在别处，正在我们手中。 　　That day taught me that the future lies ________ ________ but in our own hands. 五、句式升级与仿写（按要求改写下列句子，体会“高级感”从何而来） 1. In the future, cars will drive themselves. 要求：加一个地点/方式状语，让画面更具体 → ____________________________________________________________ 2. My grandmother is ill. She lives far away. 要求：用 with 复合结构合并，并用远程医疗表达 → ____________________________________________________________ 3. We will have classes at home in the future. 要求：用 There be 句型 + 定语从句改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 4. Technology makes life convenient. 要求：用 so…that… 改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 5. People will no longer wait in long queues at hospitals. 要求：用 It + will be + adj. + to do 句型改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 6. I believe the future will be wonderful. 要求：用 What…is that… 改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 7. Machines will do many jobs for us. 要求：用 not only…but also 的倒装句扩展 → ____________________________________________________________ 8. If we use technology wisely, life will be better. 要求：用祈使句 + and 改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 9. The future is full of hope. We should work for it. 要求：用 which 引导的非限制性定语从句合并 → ____________________________________________________________ 10. I woke up in a smart home in 2045. 要求：用分词短语开头改写，增强画面感 → ____________________________________________________________ 六、课外材料精编（读一读，背一背，用一用） The best way to predict the future is to create it. 预测未来最好的方式，就是创造未来。　（不定式作表语 + 对称） Technology will rewrite the way we live, learn and heal. 技术将改写我们生活、学习与疗愈的方式。　（the way 后省略关系词 + 三项排比） In 2045, my home will wake me with sunlight, not an alarm. 2045年，唤醒我的将是阳光，而不是闹钟。　（not 对比收尾） What machines will never copy is the warmth of a human hand. 机器永远无法复制的，是人手的温度。　（what 主语从句） Diseases that frighten us today will be caught and cured before they start. 今天令我们恐惧的疾病，将来来得及在开始前被捕获、被治愈。　（定语从句 + before 状语从句） The further we travel into the future, the more we realise what matters never changes. 我们向未来走得越远，越会明白：真正重要的东西从未改变。　（the + 比较级, the + 比较级） Only when screens learn to listen will people truly learn to speak. 只有当屏幕学会倾听，人们才真正学会表达。　（only + when 从句倒装） So fast is technology moving that yesterday's science fiction is tomorrow's homework. 技术飞速向前，昨日的科幻已是明日的作业。　（so…that 倒装） With every question answered by a machine, let us keep some for each other. 当机器回答一切问题时，请留一些问题给我们彼此。　（with 复合结构 + 祈使句） The future is not a place we go to, but a world we build. 未来不是一个我们要抵达的地方，而是一个我们要建造的世界。　（not…but… + 定语从句） Convenience should save our time, not replace our lives. 便利应当节省我们的时间，而不是取代我们的生活。　（should + not 对比） A glimpse of 2045 tells us less about machines and more about ourselves. 对2045年的惊鸿一瞥，与其说让我们看见机器，不如说让我们看见自己。　（less…and more 对比） Never has a generation stood closer to tomorrow than ours. 从来没有哪一代人比我们离明天更近。　（否定词前置倒装 + 比较级） Where the road ends, imagination begins. 道路的尽头，正是想象力的起点。　（where 引导地点状语从句 + 对偶） 七、同话题高考真题【改编自高考应用文真题·主题征文，情境已替换】 某英文网站正就"My Life in Twenty Years"征集短文。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 描述二十年后你的职业与生活方式； 2. 说明为此你正在做的准备； 3. 表达你的信心或期待。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 本题根据高考英语应用文"网站征文"真题改编，情境已替换为本单元话题。 八、范文赏析 【参考范文】 A Day in 2045 　　On a bright morning in 2045, sunlight—not an alarm—wakes me up. A self-driving pod glides me to the community learning centre, where my virtual classroom is already waiting. 　　History class feels like time travel: with a pair of smart glasses, I walk through the Palace Museum of a hundred years ago. In the afternoon, Grandma has her monthly check-up at home. The AI doctor reads her reports in seconds, but it is the real doctor's video call, smiling and joking, that makes her laugh. 　　That evening, I think about the day: machines have taken over our chores, but never our hugs. I look forward to 2045—not because everything will be fast, but because what matters will remain human. 【学生习作】 A Day in 2045 　　In 2045, the world will be very different. Everything will be smart. Cars can fly in the sky. Robots will do all the housework for us. We will not need to work any more. 　　In the morning, I will wake up and the robot will make breakfast for me. Then I will go to school by flying car. At school, teachers will be robots too. We will learn everything on computers. 　　In the evening, I will play virtual reality games. Life will be very easy and fun. I think the future will be wonderful. I can't wait! 【自我修改清单】（写完对照检查） □ 想象是否"有凭据"：从今天的科技趋势合理外推，而不是凭空科幻？ □ 是否按时间顺序记叙了"一天"，并落在一件让你印象深刻的小事上？ □ 结尾是否有对未来的期待与思考（科技与人的关系），而不是空喊"未来真美好"？ □ 时态是否以一般将来时为主，句式是否有多样性（倒装、强调句、with 复合结构）？ □ 是否用上了本单元词块（thanks to、get around、have access to、look forward to 等）至少4个？ □ 细节是否有画面感（阳光唤醒、祖母的笑脸），而不是只报设备名称？ 九、参考答案 三、话题词块梳理 Ⅰ. 话题词汇 1. future n. 未来；将来 2. predict vt. 预言；预测 3. prediction n. 预言；预测 4. technology n. 技术；科技 5. artificial intelligence 人工智能 6. robot n. 机器人 7. virtual adj. 虚拟的；模拟的 8. transform vt. 使改观；使转型 9. intelligent adj. 智能的；聪明的 10. automatic/autonomous adj. 自动的；自动驾驶的 11. medical adj. 医学的；医疗的 12. cure vt. 治愈；治好 13. energy n. 能源；能量 14. solar adj. 太阳的；太阳能的 15. renewable adj. 可再生的 16. sustainable adj. 可持续的 17. convenience n. 方便；便利 18. advance n. 进步；进展 vi. 前进 19. breakthrough n. 突破；重大进展 20. screen n. 屏幕 21. explore vt. 探索；探究 22. imagination n. 想象（力） 23. trend n. 趋势；倾向 24. application n. 应用；申请 Ⅱ. 话题词块 1. in the future 在将来 2. in twenty years' time 二十年之后 3. come true （梦想等）实现 4. make predictions 做预测 5. dream of 梦想；向往 6. thanks to 多亏；由于 7. play an important role in 在……中起重要作用 8. be equipped with 配备有 9. get around 出行；四处走动 10. at one's fingertips 触手可及；唾手可得 11. have access to 有权使用；能接触到 12. lead a...life 过着……的生活 13. keep in touch with 与……保持联系 14. deal with 处理；解决 15. cure diseases 治愈疾病 16. run on 以……为动力 17. no longer 不再 18. take the place of 取代；替代 19. look forward to 期待；盼望 20. bring about 带来；引起 21. a glimpse of 一瞥；……的缩影 22. be curious about 对……感到好奇 23. as for 至于；关于 24. take...for granted 视为理所当然 25. wake up 醒来 26. holographic image 全息影像 27. self-driving car 无人驾驶汽车 28. virtual classroom 虚拟教室 29. to be honest 说实话 30. what matters more 更重要的是 Ⅲ. 词块升级 1. In 2045, cars will drive themselves quietly through streets lined with solar trees. 2. Technology will rewrite the way we live, learn and heal. 3. A full check-up will take place at home, with the hospital a call away. 4. Life will move at a gentler pace, yet everything we need will be at our fingertips. 5. The future, I believe, is bright with promise. 6. Diseases that frighten us today will be caught and cured before they start. 7. My home will wake me with sunlight, not an alarm. 8. Rather than fear what is coming, we should welcome it with open arms. 四、教材好句精选 1. In twenty years' time, artificial intelligence will have transformed the way we live profoundly. 2. Self-driving cars will carry me smoothly from one corner of the city to another. 3. Thanks to telemedicine, Grandma can see a top doctor without leaving home. 4. Classrooms of the future will be virtual, with teachers joining from any corner of the world. 5. That morning, my room was woken up by sunlight instead of an alarm. 6. Diseases that frighten us today will be caught and cured before they start. 7. With a holographic image, I "arrived" at my grandma's side, two thousand kilometres away. 8. No matter how advanced technology becomes, we should never take it for granted. 9. It was that video consultation that made me feel the future at my fingertips. 10. Only when technology serves people will the future be truly bright. 11. What we look forward to is not faster machines, but warmer lives. 12. That day taught me that the future lies nowhere else but in our own hands. 五、句式升级与仿写 1. In 2045, self-driving cars will glide silently through streets lined with solar trees. 2. With telemedicine available everywhere, my grandmother's doctor is always a call away. 3. There will be a virtual classroom at home, where we can attend lessons given by teachers from far away. 4. Technology makes life so convenient that almost everything is at our fingertips. 5. It will be unnecessary for patients to wait in long queues at hospitals. 6. What I believe is that the future will be as warm as we make it. 7. Not only will machines do repetitive jobs for us, but they will also free our time for creation. 8. Use technology wisely, and the coming decades will reward every one of us. 9. The future is full of hope, which is exactly why we should start working for it now. 10. Waking up in a smart home in 2045, I found sunlight already waiting at my bedside. 七、同话题高考真题【改编自高考应用文真题·主题征文，情境已替换】 审体裁：网站征文（第一人称叙述+议论），三段式，无称呼落款。 审人称：第一人称（I）贯穿全文。 审时态：二十年后的生活用一般将来时；现在的准备用一般现在时或现在进行时。 审内容：Para 1 二十年后的画面（AI 辅助的乡村医生）；Para 2 现在的准备（学好生物与英语、坚持长跑）；Para 3 期待收束（科技越发达，越需要"人味"）。 审语气：自信而不夸口；用具体职业与具体准备让"未来"落地。 【参考范文】 My Life in Twenty Years 　　In twenty years, I see myself as a village doctor with an AI assistant. While the machine reads scans and suggests treatments, I hold patients' hands and listen to their stories. 　　To make this picture real, I am now working hard at biology and English, and running every morning to keep up with a doctor's life pace. 　　The future may be full of smart machines, but I believe the warmest technology will always be a human heart that never stops caring. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 外研版选择性必修三 Unit 4　A Glimpse of the Future 单元写作作业（教师版） 一、单元写作任务 假定你是李华，你校英文报正在开展以"A Day in 2045"为主题的征稿活动，请想象并记叙二十年后你生活中的一天（可涉及交通、学习、医疗等方面），内容包括： 1. 描绘2045年某一天你的生活场景（两至三个方面）； 2. 写一件当天发生的、让你印象深刻的小事； 3. 表达你对未来的期待与思考。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 二、审题建模（动笔前先想清楚这六件事） 项目 写作要点 体裁 想象类记叙文（英文报征稿）：设定时间—按时间顺序记叙一天—落在一件事—收在感悟，标题已给。 人称 第一人称（I）记叙，行文中可用 it/they 指代智能设备。 时态 想象未来用一般将来时（will do / will be doing），穿插一般现在时谈普遍状况；结尾谈思考可用一般现在时。 结构 四段式（Para 2、3 也可合为一段，写成三段）。Para 1：一句点题（2045年的一个清晨醒来）；Para 2：写两三个场景（无人驾驶通勤、虚拟课堂、远程医疗）；Para 3：一件小事（AI 医生帮祖母诊病/全息影像里"见到"外地的父母）；Para 4：期待与思考（技术为生活服务，但温度仍来自人）。 要点 想象要"有凭据"：从今天的趋势合理外推（新能源、自动驾驶、远程医疗），不写成科幻小说；必须落到"一件小事"，否则容易堆砌场景、有景无情。 语气 新奇中带温情。多用具体画面（阳光、屏幕亮起、祖母的笑脸），少用"科技改变世界"式空话。 三、话题词块梳理 Ⅰ. 话题词汇（中英对照，答案已填入） 话题词汇 1. future n. 未来；将来 2. predict vt. 预言；预测 3. prediction n. 预言；预测 4. technology n. 技术；科技 5. artificial intelligence 人工智能 6. robot n. 机器人 7. virtual adj. 虚拟的；模拟的 8. transform vt. 使改观；使转型 9. intelligent adj. 智能的；聪明的 10. automatic/autonomous adj. 自动的；自动驾驶的 11. medical adj. 医学的；医疗的 12. cure vt. 治愈；治好 13. energy n. 能源；能量 14. solar adj. 太阳的；太阳能的 15. renewable adj. 可再生的 16. sustainable adj. 可持续的 17. convenience n. 方便；便利 18. advance n. 进步；进展 vi. 前进 19. breakthrough n. 突破；重大进展 20. screen n. 屏幕 21. explore vt. 探索；探究 22. imagination n. 想象（力） 23. trend n. 趋势；倾向 24. application n. 应用；申请 Ⅱ. 话题词块（答案已填入） 话题词块 1. in the future 在将来 2. in twenty years' time 二十年之后 3. come true （梦想等）实现 4. make predictions 做预测 5. dream of 梦想；向往 6. thanks to 多亏；由于 7. play an important role in 在……中起重要作用 8. be equipped with 配备有 9. get around 出行；四处走动 10. at one's fingertips 触手可及；唾手可得 11. have access to 有权使用；能接触到 12. lead a...life 过着……的生活 13. keep in touch with 与……保持联系 14. deal with 处理；解决 15. cure diseases 治愈疾病 16. run on 以……为动力 17. no longer 不再 18. take the place of 取代；替代 19. look forward to 期待；盼望 20. bring about 带来；引起 21. a glimpse of 一瞥；……的缩影 22. be curious about 对……感到好奇 23. as for 至于；关于 24. take...for granted 视为理所当然 25. wake up 醒来 26. holographic image 全息影像 27. self-driving car 无人驾驶汽车 28. virtual classroom 虚拟教室 29. to be honest 说实话 30. what matters more 更重要的是 Ⅲ. 词块升级（把左边的“基础表达”换成右边更高级的说法） 基础表达 升级表达 1. In the future, cars will be very smart. In 2045, cars will drive themselves quietly through streets lined with solar trees. 2. Technology will change our lives. Technology will rewrite the way we live, learn and heal. 3. We can see the doctor at home. A full check-up will take place at home, with the hospital a call away. 4. Life will be very convenient. Life will move at a gentler pace, yet everything we need will be at our fingertips. 5. I think the future is good. The future, I believe, is bright with promise. 6. People will not get sick easily. Diseases that frighten us today will be caught and cured before they start. 7. I will live in a smart house. My home will wake me with sunlight, not an alarm. 8. We should welcome the future. Rather than fear what is coming, we should welcome it with open arms. 四、教材好句精选（根据汉语补全句子，注意课文句式与词块的用法） 1. 二十年后，人工智能将深刻改变我们的生活方式。 　　In twenty years' time, artificial intelligence will have transformed the way we live profoundly. 2. 无人驾驶汽车将载着我在城市间穿行。 　　Self-driving cars will carry me smoothly from one corner of the city to another. 3. 多亏了远程医疗，祖母足不出户就能看上专家门诊。 　　Thanks to telemedicine, Grandma can see a top doctor without leaving home. 4. 未来的教室将是虚拟的，老师来自世界任何角落。 　　Classrooms of the future will be virtual, with teachers joining from any corner of the world. 5. 那天早上，我的房间被晨光而不是闹钟唤醒。 　　That morning, my room was woken up by sunlight instead of an alarm. 6. 曾经令人恐惧的疾病，将能被早发现、早治愈。 　　Diseases that frighten us today will be caught and cured before they start. 7. 借助全息影像，我"来到"了两千公里外的祖母身边。 　　With a holographic image, I "arrived" at my grandma's side, two thousand kilometres away. 8. 无论技术多么发达，我们都不能把它视为理所当然。 　　No matter how advanced technology becomes, we should never take it for granted. 9. 正是那次视频问诊，让我第一次感到未来触手可及。 　　It was that video consultation that made me feel the future at my fingertips. 10. 只有让技术服务于人，未来才会真正美好。 　　Only when technology serves people will the future be truly bright. 11. 我们期待的不是更快的机器，而是更温暖的生活。 　　What we look forward to is not faster machines, but warmer lives. 12. 那一天让我明白：未来不在别处，正在我们手中。 　　That day taught me that the future lies nowhere else but in our own hands. 五、句式升级与仿写（按要求改写下列句子，体会“高级感”从何而来） 1. In the future, cars will drive themselves. 要求：加一个地点/方式状语，让画面更具体 → In 2045, self-driving cars will glide silently through streets lined with solar trees. 2. My grandmother is ill. She lives far away. 要求：用 with 复合结构合并，并用远程医疗表达 → With telemedicine available everywhere, my grandmother's doctor is always a call away. 3. We will have classes at home in the future. 要求：用 There be 句型 + 定语从句改写 → There will be a virtual classroom at home, where we can attend lessons given by teachers from far away. 4. Technology makes life convenient. 要求：用 so…that… 改写 → Technology makes life so convenient that almost everything is at our fingertips. 5. People will no longer wait in long queues at hospitals. 要求：用 It + will be + adj. + to do 句型改写 → It will be unnecessary for patients to wait in long queues at hospitals. 6. I believe the future will be wonderful. 要求：用 What…is that… 改写 → What I believe is that the future will be as warm as we make it. 7. Machines will do many jobs for us. 要求：用 not only…but also 的倒装句扩展 → Not only will machines do repetitive jobs for us, but they will also free our time for creation. 8. If we use technology wisely, life will be better. 要求：用祈使句 + and 改写 → Use technology wisely, and the coming decades will reward every one of us. 9. The future is full of hope. We should work for it. 要求：用 which 引导的非限制性定语从句合并 → The future is full of hope, which is exactly why we should start working for it now. 10. I woke up in a smart home in 2045. 要求：用分词短语开头改写，增强画面感 → Waking up in a smart home in 2045, I found sunlight already waiting at my bedside. 六、课外材料精编（读一读，背一背，用一用） The best way to predict the future is to create it. 预测未来最好的方式，就是创造未来。　（不定式作表语 + 对称） Technology will rewrite the way we live, learn and heal. 技术将改写我们生活、学习与疗愈的方式。　（the way 后省略关系词 + 三项排比） In 2045, my home will wake me with sunlight, not an alarm. 2045年，唤醒我的将是阳光，而不是闹钟。　（not 对比收尾） What machines will never copy is the warmth of a human hand. 机器永远无法复制的，是人手的温度。　（what 主语从句） Diseases that frighten us today will be caught and cured before they start. 今天令我们恐惧的疾病，将来来得及在开始前被捕获、被治愈。　（定语从句 + before 状语从句） The further we travel into the future, the more we realise what matters never changes. 我们向未来走得越远，越会明白：真正重要的东西从未改变。　（the + 比较级, the + 比较级） Only when screens learn to listen will people truly learn to speak. 只有当屏幕学会倾听，人们才真正学会表达。　（only + when 从句倒装） So fast is technology moving that yesterday's science fiction is tomorrow's homework. 技术飞速向前，昨日的科幻已是明日的作业。　（so…that 倒装） With every question answered by a machine, let us keep some for each other. 当机器回答一切问题时，请留一些问题给我们彼此。　（with 复合结构 + 祈使句） The future is not a place we go to, but a world we build. 未来不是一个我们要抵达的地方，而是一个我们要建造的世界。　（not…but… + 定语从句） Convenience should save our time, not replace our lives. 便利应当节省我们的时间，而不是取代我们的生活。　（should + not 对比） A glimpse of 2045 tells us less about machines and more about ourselves. 对2045年的惊鸿一瞥，与其说让我们看见机器，不如说让我们看见自己。　（less…and more 对比） Never has a generation stood closer to tomorrow than ours. 从来没有哪一代人比我们离明天更近。　（否定词前置倒装 + 比较级） Where the road ends, imagination begins. 道路的尽头，正是想象力的起点。　（where 引导地点状语从句 + 对偶） 七、同话题高考真题【改编自高考应用文真题·主题征文，情境已替换】 某英文网站正就"My Life in Twenty Years"征集短文。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 描述二十年后你的职业与生活方式； 2. 说明为此你正在做的准备； 3. 表达你的信心或期待。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 本题根据高考英语应用文"网站征文"真题改编，情境已替换为本单元话题。 【审题建模】 审体裁：网站征文（第一人称叙述+议论），三段式，无称呼落款。 审人称：第一人称（I）贯穿全文。 审时态：二十年后的生活用一般将来时；现在的准备用一般现在时或现在进行时。 审内容：Para 1 二十年后的画面（AI 辅助的乡村医生）；Para 2 现在的准备（学好生物与英语、坚持长跑）；Para 3 期待收束（科技越发达，越需要"人味"）。 审语气：自信而不夸口；用具体职业与具体准备让"未来"落地。 【参考范文】 My Life in Twenty Years 　　In twenty years, I see myself as a village doctor with an AI assistant. While the machine reads scans and suggests treatments, I hold patients' hands and listen to their stories. 　　To make this picture real, I am now working hard at biology and English, and running every morning to keep up with a doctor's life pace. 　　The future may be full of smart machines, but I believe the warmest technology will always be a human heart that never stops caring. 【亮点句式】 ① …I see myself as…（see myself as 代替 I will be，画面感更强） ② While the machine reads scans…I hold patients' hands…（while 对比人机分工，立意自现） ③ To make this picture real…（不定式作目的状语，衔接自然） ④ …the warmest technology will always be a human heart…（形容词最高级 + 隐喻，收束有温度） 八、范文赏析 【参考范文】 A Day in 2045 　　On a bright morning in 2045, sunlight—not an alarm—wakes me up. A self-driving pod glides me to the community learning centre, where my virtual classroom is already waiting. 　　History class feels like time travel: with a pair of smart glasses, I walk through the Palace Museum of a hundred years ago. In the afternoon, Grandma has her monthly check-up at home. The AI doctor reads her reports in seconds, but it is the real doctor's video call, smiling and joking, that makes her laugh. 　　That evening, I think about the day: machines have taken over our chores, but never our hugs. I look forward to 2045—not because everything will be fast, but because what matters will remain human. 【学生习作】 A Day in 2045 　　In 2045, the world will be very different. Everything will be smart. Cars can fly in the sky. Robots will do all the housework for us. We will not need to work any more. 　　In the morning, I will wake up and the robot will make breakfast for me. Then I will go to school by flying car. At school, teachers will be robots too. We will learn everything on computers. 　　In the evening, I will play virtual reality games. Life will be very easy and fun. I think the future will be wonderful. I can't wait! 【习作点评】 优点：想象大胆，场景丰富（飞行汽车、机器人管家、VR游戏），时态基本正确，条理清楚。 问题一：只有"场景清单"，没有"一件小事"。全文是景点的罗列，缺少打动人的一瞬，应加入一件具体小事（如全息影像里"见到"外地的祖母）。 问题二："We will not need to work any more"立意欠妥，也偏离征稿要求；未来想象应积极健康，且要与结尾的"思考"呼应。 问题三：句式单一，全是"主语 + will + 动词"，缺少倒装（Only when…will…）、强调句和 with 复合结构。 问题四：本单元词块运用不足（thanks to、be equipped with、at one's fingertips、take...for granted、look forward to 等基本没出现），结尾"I can't wait!"过于口语化随意。 【评分标准】（满分15分，按高考应用文评分细则） 档次 分数 评分描述 第五档 13—15分 覆盖全部要点，应用了较多语法结构和词汇，句式有变化，衔接自然，语法和拼写错误极少，完全达到交际目的。 第四档 10—12分 覆盖全部要点，语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求，衔接基本连贯，有少量错误但不影响理解。 第三档 7—9分 基本覆盖要点，语法结构单调，词汇有限，有一些错误，部分内容表达不清。 第二档 4—6分 遗漏较多要点，语法结构单调、词汇项目有限，错误较多，影响理解。 第一档 1—3分 只能写出个别单词，内容太少，无法传达信息。 【写作指导：本单元写作的三个得分点】 得分点一：想象要"贴地飞行"。从无人驾驶、远程医疗、虚拟课堂等今天的趋势往前推二十年，每个场景配一个画面（阳光唤醒、智能眼镜"走进"故宫），评委才会相信你的2045。 得分点二：必须有"一件小事"。场景是骨架，事件是心跳：AI 秒读报告，但让祖母笑起来的是真人医生的问候——用这一对比写出"科技与人"的思考，立意立刻高出对手。 得分点三：句式为想象服务。用一般将来时铺陈，用 Only when technology serves people will the future be truly bright 这类倒装句收束观点，再嵌入 thanks to、at one's fingertips、look forward to 等词块，文章就"未来感"与"高级感"兼备。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $