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Unit 1 The secrets of happiness
Developing ideas
Reading for writing
幸福的秘诀 · 写一写“助人即幸福”的故事
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学习目标
通过本节课学习,学生能够:
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通过阅读周健捐发的故事,梳理“留发—剪发—捐发”的情节与“助人即幸福”的主题。
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运用 grow / cut / donate / help 等表达,谈论善举。
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运用五步法写一个“帮助他人带来快乐”的故事。
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Contents
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Lead in Free talk
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Pre-writing 读前准备
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While-writing 写作过程
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Post-writing 写作后
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Language points 语言点
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Summary & Homework 总结作业
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Lead in
Free talk
What makes you happy?
Helping others makes me happy.
Have you ever helped someone?
Yes, I helped a classmate with maths.
Why does helping others bring happiness?
Because it makes both people feel warm.
A boy kept his hair long for over two years... Why? Let's read his story!
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Pre-writing
Look at the pictures and answer the questions.
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1 What is happening in the pictures?
· A person is cutting long hair.
· Others are planting trees to help.
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Pre-writing
Read the words and predict.
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2 How can these actions bring happiness?
· They help other people.
· Doing good makes us happy.
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Pre-writing
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1 What is the structure of the story? 2 Match the parts.
Passage structure
Beginning Zhou Jian keeps his hair long.
Body People laugh, but he never gives up.
Ending He cuts and donates it; happiness grows.
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Pre-writing
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Complete the chart about Zhou Jian.
Time
What Zhou Jian does
Feeling / Effect
For 2 years
keeps his hair long
people laugh, he feels no shame
The day
cuts it short at a barber's
puts the hair in a bag
A week later
gets a thank-you letter
enough hair for three wigs
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Pre-writing
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Answer the questions.
1 Why did Zhou Jian keep his hair long?
He wanted to give his hair to help kids with cancer.
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Pre-writing
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Answer the questions.
2 What does the letter tell us?
His hair was enough for three wigs, and the hospital thanked him.
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Pre-writing
Pre-writing
Think and share
1 What good thing can you do for others?
I can help clean the classroom.
Tips:
• Name one action.
• Say who it helps.
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Pre-writing
Pre-writing
Think and share
2 How does it make you feel?
It makes me feel happy and proud.
Tips:
• Say your feeling.
• Give a reason.
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While-writing
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Write a story about helping others and feeling happy.
Step 1 Choose an opinion to write about.
• Happiness comes from doing good.
• Helping others is a secret of happiness.
• Small acts can make a big difference.
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While-writing
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Write a story about helping others and feeling happy.
Step 2 Think of examples and organise with a thinking map.
My idea:
When we help others, we grow happiness for ourselves too.
Example 1: A boy grew his hair for two years.
He gave it to kids with cancer.
Example 2: I helped an old man cross the road.
He smiled and thanked me.
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While-writing
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Write a story about helping others and feeling happy.
Step 3 Read a sample passage.
Happiness comes from doing good. Zhou Jian kept his hair long for two years. People laughed at him, but he never gave up. Finally he cut it short and gave it to kids with cancer. His hair was enough for three wigs! Helping others made him happy. I also feel happy when I help. Last week I helped an old man cross the road, and his smile warmed my heart. Doing good is the secret of happiness.
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While-writing
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Write a story about helping others and feeling happy.
Step 4 Check your writing.
✓
□ tell a clear story?
✓
□ use grow / cut / help?
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□ show the happiness?
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□ end with the secret of happiness?
Step 5 Share your passage with the class.
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Post-writing
Post-writing
Discuss and share
1 What does happiness mean to you?
It means doing good for others.
2 Have you ever helped someone?
Yes, I help my neighbour walk his dog.
3 What will you do this week?
I will do one kind thing every day.
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Language points
1. grow (v.) 生长;培养
Hope grew together with his hair.
grow 表“生长、培养”。
grow up 长大。
过去式 grew,过去分词 grown。
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Language points
2. cut it short (phrase) 剪短
Please cut it short and give me the hair.
cut sth. short 把某物剪短。
cut 的过去式仍为 cut。
对比:cut down 砍倒。
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Language points
3. laugh at (phrase) 嘲笑
Sometimes they laughed at him.
laugh at sb. 嘲笑某人。
laugh 表“大笑”。
勿与 smile at(微笑)混淆。
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Language points
4. do good (phrase) 做好事;行善
Happiness springs from doing good.
do good 表“行善”。
do good to sb. 对某人有益。
good 在此作名词,表“好处”。
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Language points
5. 记叙+点题写作框架
Story → Action → Meaning
结构:故事 → 善举 → 点题。
用细节打动人。
迁移:可用来写善举类记叙文。
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Exercise
一、根据汉语提示填空。
1. His hair ________ (生长) for two years.
2. Please ________ (剪短) your hair.
3. Don't ________ (嘲笑) others.
4. We should ________ (做好事) every day.
Answers / 答案
• grew
• short
• laugh at
• do good
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Exercise
二、单项选择。
1. He kept his hair long ________ two years.
A. for B. in C. at
2. Happiness comes from ________ good.
A. do B. doing C. did
3. She never felt any ________.
A. shame B. shames C. ashamed
Answers / 答案
• A
• B
• A
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Summary
Vocabulary
grow, cut it short, laugh at,
do good, help others, happiness
Reading for writing
We read Zhou Jian's hair-donation story.
We learned grow / cut short / laugh at.
We can write a helping story in 5 steps.
We practiced using "doing good" to explain happiness.
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Homework
Must do
• 记忆核心词汇与短语。
• 完成教材课后相关练习。
• 把“助人即幸福”故事润色并抄正。
Choose to do
• 以 The secret of happiness 为题写 60 词短文。
• 记录一周内你做的一件好事,用 3 句英文写下感受。
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Thank you
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