内容正文:
期中复习之书面表达16篇
(江苏专用)
1.假设你叫刘颖,你所在的英语社团本周演讲活动的主题是“Getting to Know My School Life”,你打算在此次活动上发言,请你根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿为发言做准备。
内容要点:1.介绍自己的姓名、年龄和一个爱好。
2.描述学校里你最喜欢的一处场所及原因。
3.简述你在学校一天的典型活动。
4.对学校及学校生活的感受。
要求:1.语言通顺,逻辑清晰,涵盖各要点,可适当发挥。
2.词数不少于90词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入词数)
Getting to Know My School Life
Dear friends,
I’m Liu Ying, 13 years old. My hobby is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening!
2.假如你是王明,你校英语俱乐部举行“The Role Model Around Us”评选活动,你想推荐同学吴刚。根据提示,请你给负责人胡老师写一封信,内容需包含表格中所有要点。
基本情况
13 years old, tall and strong, love ...
推荐理由
polite, kind (各举一例)
smart, helpful (各举一例)
…
注意:1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
2. 词数80词左右,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文章须包含全部要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Dear Mr. Hu,
I want to recommend (推荐) Wu Gang for “The Role Model Around Us”. Wu Gang is ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think Wu Gang is a great role model. I hope he can get the award (奖).
Yours,
Wang Ming
3.青年者,国家之魂。一个民族只有寄望青春、永葆青春,才能兴旺发达。请根据下图提示,以“How to Be a Good Student”为题,谈谈我们应该怎样做好自己,不负时代赋予我们的责任。
注意:1.文章必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息;
3.词数90左右。(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。)
参考词汇:personalities性格;habit习惯
How to Be a Good Student
It’s very important to be a good student. As teenagers, what should we do?
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.根据下列表格中的信息,以“My best friend”为题,写一篇短文。
要求:1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2.必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;
3.不得出现真实姓名、地名等;
4.80词左右。
姓名
Tom
年龄
13
外貌特征
又高又强壮,短发戴眼镜。
学校情况
学校很大还非常漂亮,有礼堂、体育馆及现代化图书馆,学校教他学会团队精神;学校离家不远。
特长和爱好
最喜欢数学;擅长踢足球。
理想
……
My best friend
Tom is my best friend. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.阳光中学英语网站正在组织以“My School Life”为主题的征文活动,假如你是Millie,请根据提示写一篇英语短文投稿。
要求:
1、作文需包含所有要点,可适当补充,要求语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
2、词数 80 个左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My School Life
I’m Millie from Grade 7. This is my first term at Sunshine Middle School. I feel great!
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.假设你们学校参加了“城乡结对”活动,你是七年级学生张桥。请你根据下表内容,给结对学校的学生王涛写一封信,向他介绍一下你自己和你的学校日常生活。
1
外貌和性格……
2
爱好及原因……
3
社团或实践活动……
4
感想……
要求:
1. 内容完整,可适当发挥;
2. 不得出现真实姓名和学校信息;
3. 表达清楚,意思连贯,符合逻辑;
4. 70 词左右。开头和结尾已给,不计入总词数。
Dear Wang Tao,
I’m glad to introduce myself and my school life.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What about you and your school life? I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Zhang Qiao
7.假如你是李华,以My school life为题,介绍你的学校生活,要点如下:
基本情况
来自北京,13岁,在徐州上学。
学校生活
(1)学校又大又现代。
(2)周一至周五上课,住得离学校近,步行上学。
(3)老师……,同学……,课程……
空余时间
(1)经常阅读,了解世界。
(2)爱好……
理想
……
要求:
(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯; (2)要点完整,省略号部分可作适当发挥;
(3)80词左右,不包括开头结尾。 (4)文中不得提及真实校名、人名等信息。
My school life
Dear everyone,
I’m glad to be here and tell you something about my school life in Xuzhou.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I enjoy my colorful school life in Xuzhou very much.
8.假如你是七年级学生王浩,你的英国网友Alice发Email询问你校的课后活动情况。请你根据以下要点提示给她回复,介绍你校的课后活动。
1. 学校有哪些课后活动(至少举2个例子);
2. 你最喜欢的课后活动及原因;
3. 课后活动给你带来的好处。
要求:
1. 电子邮件内容须包含以上要点提示,可适当发挥;
2. 词数不少于70词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Alice,
I’m glad to receive your letter. You asked about the after-school activities in my school. Now let me tell you about them. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What about the after-school activities in your school? Please tell me.
Yours,
Wang Hao
9.升入初中已经半学期了,新学期中一定认识了很多新朋友吧?假如你是Betty,请根据以下信息,向你的朋友Sally介绍你的好朋友和你的学校生活。
新朋友
姓名
Millie
外貌
13岁,短发;大大的眼睛;高而可爱;
爱好
热爱阅读,是阅读俱乐部的成员;
学校情况
1.校园很美丽,不大,但很干净。
2.所有的功课都有趣,很喜欢……
3.老师们……
4.同学们……,课后经常一起……
感受
……;愿望……
要求:
1.文章内容包含表中所有要点,省略部分适当发挥。
2.词数80词左右,文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3.语义通顺,意思连贯,条理清晰,字迹工整。
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名,校名及地名。
Dear Sally,
I’d like to tell you something about my friend and my school life.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All the best,
Betty
10.学校英语俱乐部正举办以“My Life and Dream”为题的演讲比赛。请根据下图所提示的要点,用英语写一篇演讲稿。
注意:
1. 表达中必须包含所给的要点,省略号部分需适当发挥。
2. 词数70词左右。开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
3. 表达中请勿提及真实姓名。
My Life and Dream
Hello, everyone! Let me tell you something about myself.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11. 亲爱的同学们,初中生活开启了我们人生的新旅程。请结合要点提示,以“My Wonderful School Life”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍你的学校生活。
美丽校园
1. 我的学校看起来漂亮又新式。
2. 有3栋教学楼,40间教室,每个教室既干净又明亮。
3. ……
友善师生
1. 我有很多乐于助人的朋友和善良的老师。
2. 他们都对我很好。
3. ……
最爱学科
1. 我最喜欢的学科是英语。
2. 学习英语有趣。
3. ……
精彩活动
1. 我们学校有各种各样的社团。
2. 课外活动使我非常快乐。
3. ……
要求:
1. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容涵盖要点,全文连贯通顺,可适当发挥;
3. 请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。
My Wonderful School Life
Hello, everyone. I am a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life in my school.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12.进入初中生活和学习已经两个多月了,假如你是Su Hai,请根据下面的图表,给你的网友Sandy写一封电子邮件,谈谈你的学习及生活情况。
要点:
自身情况
喜欢各门学科;擅长数学、英语和足球;学校足球队的一员
学校生活
结交很多新朋友,师生友好,很关心我;
喜欢阅读,经常去图书馆读书,因为想要了解……;
喜欢学校的绿色空地,可以和老师和朋友在那里聊天;
每天在操场做早操,帮我们做好一天的准备;
课后参加社团活动……
自身感受
……
要求:
1. 语句通顺,省略号部分适当发挥;
2. 不得出现真实校名和姓名;
3. 开头和结尾均已给出 (不计入总词数),词数80左右。
Dear Sandy,
How are you? I’m now studying at Sunshine Middle School._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What about your school life? Please e-mail me soon!
Yours,
Su Hai
13.假如你是李华,以“My school life”为题,介绍你的学校生活,要点如下:
基本情况
来自北京,13岁,在淮安上学。
学校生活
1.学校又大又现代。
2.周一至周五上课,住得离学校近,步行上学。
3.老师……,同学……,课程……
空余时间
1.经常阅读,了解世界。
2.爱好运动,周末与同学们练习打网球。
3.……
理想
……
要求:(1)语言通顺,条理清晰,书写规范;
(2)要点完整,省略号部分可作适当发挥;
(3)80词左右。开头结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数。
(4)文中不得提及真实校名、人名等信息。
My school life
Dear everyone,
I’m glad to be here and tell you something about my school life in Huai’an. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I enjoy my colorful school life in Huai’an very much.
14.作为初一新生,同学们已经熟悉了自己的学校和校园生活。阳光中学正在举办以“My School Life” 为题的演讲比赛,假如你是Simon,也想参加此次比赛,请根据下列要点,用英语写一篇短文,介绍自己的校园生活。
What’s in your school? (classroom building, playground, ...)
What subject do you like best?
What do you often do after class?
...
注意事项:
1.80词左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.包含提示信息内容并适当发挥,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
3.不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
My School Life
Hello, everyone! My name is Simon. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15.阳光日报正在举行“寻找最美校园”活动,请根据以下提示,以“My wonderful school”为题,用英语向大家介绍一下你的学校。
要求:1. 内容完整,可适当发挥;
2. 表达清楚,意思连贯,符合逻辑;
3. 70 词左右。开头已给,不计入总词数。
My wonderful school
Hello, welcome to my school. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
16.根据下面的提示,以“My best friend”为题,写一篇英语短文介绍你的好朋友Tom。
基本信息
1. 中文名:张飞(Zhang Fei); 2. 年龄:13;
3. 班级:七年级一班 4. 短发、戴眼镜
个人情况
1. 爱好广泛,喜欢……因为……
2. 乐于助人(举一例说明)
3. 最喜欢……学科,因为……
理想
他希望在未来成为一名……我希望他的梦想成真。
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括表格中的相关信息,并适当发挥;
3. 保持书写工整,卷面整洁;
4. 70词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数),不得使用真实姓名、学校和地名等。
My best friend
Tom is my best friend.
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期中复习之书面表达16篇
(江苏专用)
1.假设你叫刘颖,你所在的英语社团本周演讲活动的主题是“Getting to Know My School Life”,你打算在此次活动上发言,请你根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿为发言做准备。
内容要点:1.介绍自己的姓名、年龄和一个爱好。
2.描述学校里你最喜欢的一处场所及原因。
3.简述你在学校一天的典型活动。
4.对学校及学校生活的感受。
要求:1.语言通顺,逻辑清晰,涵盖各要点,可适当发挥。
2.词数不少于90词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入词数)
Getting to Know My School Life
Dear friends,
I’m Liu Ying, 13 years old. My hobby is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening!
【答案】例文
Getting to Know My School Life
Dear friends,
I’m Liu Ying, 13 years old. My hobby is reading. I often spend my free time reading storybooks in the school library.
My favorite place in school is the library. It’s quiet and bright, with thousands of books. I can learn a lot of knowledge there and open my mind. On a typical school day, I get up at 7:00 a.m. and walk to school. Classes start at 8:15 a.m. I have six lessons a day, including English, Math and Science. After school, I join the reading club and sometimes play badminton with my classmates. My school is big and modern, and my teachers and classmates are very kind. I feel happy and lucky to study here. I really enjoy my colorful school life.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:英语社团演讲稿,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:自我介绍(姓名、年龄、爱好)、最喜欢的校园场所及原因、校内典型一日活动、对校园生活的感受
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名以外的个人隐私信息,内容符合口语表达习惯,适合现场朗读
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:承接给定开头,补充爱好相关的简单说明,自然引入校园主题
主体段:依次介绍最喜欢的校园场所及理由,再完整讲述一天的典型校园活动
结尾段:表达对学校和校园生活的真实感受,贴合演讲稿的发言氛围
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:自我介绍
爱好表达:reading/dancing/playing badminton/drawing等
爱好补充说明:I often spend my free time reading storybooks in the school library/I practice it for half an hour every day after class/I join the school club to share my works with others等
要点二:最喜欢的校园场所及原因
场所选择:library/playground/art room/music room等
原因描述:It’s quiet and bright, with thousands of books. I can learn a lot of knowledge there and open my mind/It has a large playground with green grass, where I can run and relax after classes/It is full of colorful paintings and soft music, which makes me feel peaceful等
要点三:典型一日校园活动
时间线描述:On a typical school day, I get up at 7:00 a.m. and walk to school. Classes start at 8:15 a.m. I have six lessons a day, including English, Math and Science. After school, I join the reading club and sometimes play badminton with my classmates/I arrive at school at 7:40 and do morning reading first. We have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. After finishing my homework in the classroom, I often chat with my deskmate before going home等
要点四:校园生活感受
感受表达:My school is big and modern, and my teachers and classmates are very kind. I feel happy and lucky to study here. I really enjoy my colorful school life/The school gives me warm memories and new friends. Every day here is fresh and meaningful, and I will cherish every moment with my classmates等
2.假如你是王明,你校英语俱乐部举行“The Role Model Around Us”评选活动,你想推荐同学吴刚。根据提示,请你给负责人胡老师写一封信,内容需包含表格中所有要点。
基本情况
13 years old, tall and strong, love ...
推荐理由
polite, kind (各举一例)
smart, helpful (各举一例)
…
注意:1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
2. 词数80词左右,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文章须包含全部要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Dear Mr. Hu,
I want to recommend (推荐) Wu Gang for “The Role Model Around Us”. Wu Gang is ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think Wu Gang is a great role model. I hope he can get the award (奖).
Yours,
Wang Ming
【答案】范文:
Dear Mr. Hu,
I want to recommend Wu Gang for “The Role Model Around Us”. Wu Gang is 13 years old. He is tall and strong. He has many hobbies. He likes sports and he often plays football in his free time.
Wu Gang is polite. He always greets his classmates and teachers when they meet. He is kind as well. He is nice to everyone and cares about old people. He is also smart. He does well in all the subjects. Besides, he is helpful. He is always ready to help his classmates with their problems after school. Everybody around likes him very much. He sets a good example for us.
I think Wu Gang is a great role model. I hope he can get the award.
Yours,
Wang Ming
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文推荐信,以一般现在时为主,用具体日常小事支撑推荐理由
明确要点:介绍吴刚的基本年龄外形爱好、分别用具体事例体现他的礼貌、善良、聪明、乐于助人的品质、总结他作为榜样的意义
确定人称:第三人称(he/his)为主,以第一人称(I/my)的推荐视角串联全文
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名、校名等隐私信息,所有事例贴合普通校园生活场景,词数控制在80词左右
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:承接题目给出的总起句,完整介绍吴刚的年龄、外形与爱好
主体段:依次用具体小事对应四个品质要点,自然串联内容,补充一句大家对他的评价
结尾段:沿用题目给出的收尾句,点明吴刚是值得大家学习的好榜样
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:吴刚的基本情况
年龄外形:13 years old / tall and strong
兴趣爱好:loves sports / he plays football in his free time等
要点二:礼貌与善良的具体事例
礼貌表现:always says hello to every teacher he meets / never talks loudly in the library等
善良表现:often shares his snacks with classmates / he helps the old man carry things on his way home等
要点三:聪慧与乐于助人的具体事例
聪慧表现:good at all his lessons / he always comes up with new ideas in group work等
乐于助人表现:helps me with my math homework every week / he fixes broken stationery for classmates for free等
要点四:收尾补充
他人评价:all our classmates like him very much等
榜样意义:he sets a warm and good example for all of us等
3.青年者,国家之魂。一个民族只有寄望青春、永葆青春,才能兴旺发达。请根据下图提示,以“How to Be a Good Student”为题,谈谈我们应该怎样做好自己,不负时代赋予我们的责任。
注意:1.文章必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息;
3.词数90左右。(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。)
参考词汇:personalities性格;habit习惯
How to Be a Good Student
It’s very important to be a good student. As teenagers, what should we do?
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【答案】例文
How to Be a Good Student
It’s very important to be a good student. As teenagers, what should we do?
First of all, it’s important for us to keep healthy. We can do some sports. Doing sports makes us strong. We should also have a healthy diet. Besides, we should go to bed early and get up early. Secondly, we should develop our own good hobbies. Good hobbies can make us feel happy. Thirdly, we need good personalities. We should be polite, honest and warm-hearted to offer help to others. Last but not least, we should develop good learning habits. We must listen carefully to the teacher in class.
I hope everyone can try to be a good student.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文,时态以一般现在时为主
明确要点:1. 保持健康(运动、饮食、作息);2. 培养爱好(使人快乐);3. 培养品质(礼貌、乐于助人);4. 养成学习习惯(认真听讲)
确定人称:第一人称
注意事项:词数控制在90词左右;必须包含所有要点;不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:点明成为好学生的重要性,并引出下文的具体做法。
主体段:使用表示逻辑顺序的连接词,条理清晰地分点阐述四个方面的具体做法。
结尾段:总结全文,表达期望。
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:保持健康
运动锻炼:We can do some sports./Playing sports makes us strong./We should take an active part in physical exercise.等
健康饮食:We should also have a healthy diet./Eating a balanced diet is necessary./We’d better eat more fruit and vegetables.等
规律作息:We should go to bed early and get up early./It is important to keep a good sleeping habit./We shouldn’t stay up late.等
要点二:培养爱好
爱好益处:Good hobbies can make us feel happy./Hobbies can enrich our lives and relax our minds./We can read books or listen to music in our free time.等
要点三:塑造良好性格
良好的性格:be polite, honest and warm-hearted/be friendly and always help those in trouble/be polite and ready to help people in need等
要点四:养成良好的学习习惯
良好的学习习惯:listen carefully to the teacher in class/pay attention to what the teacher says/taking notes in class/finish our homework on time等
4.根据下列表格中的信息,以“My best friend”为题,写一篇短文。
要求:1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2.必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;
3.不得出现真实姓名、地名等;
4.80词左右。
姓名
Tom
年龄
13
外貌特征
又高又强壮,短发戴眼镜。
学校情况
学校很大还非常漂亮,有礼堂、体育馆及现代化图书馆,学校教他学会团队精神;学校离家不远。
特长和爱好
最喜欢数学;擅长踢足球。
理想
……
My best friend
Tom is my best friend. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
My best friend Tom is my best friend. He is 13 years old. He is tall and strong with short hair. He wears glasses. His school is big and beautiful. There is a hall, a gym and a modern library in it. The school teaches him team spirit. It is not far from his home. He likes math best. He is also good at playing football. He wants to be a math teacher in the future. I hope his dream comes true. We often help each other.
【详解】写作步骤
【第一步:审题立意】
确定文体:人物介绍类记叙文,全文以一般现在时为主
明确要点:包含Tom的年龄、外貌、学校环境、特长爱好、个人理想全部表格信息,可适当拓展
确定人称:第三人称(he/Tom)为主,结尾可用第一人称补充互动
注意事项:不得出现真实姓名、地名,词数控制在80词左右
【第二步:构思布局】
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,点明Tom是我最好的朋友
主体段:依次介绍年龄外貌、校园环境、特长爱好三大表格核心信息
结尾段:介绍理想,补充两人日常相处,升华友情主题
【第三步:要点展开】
要点一:人物基础信息
年龄:13 years old/teenager/youngster
外貌:tall and strong/short hair/wear glasses/slim/handsome/curly hair/round face/put on glasses
要点二:校园相关内容
校内设施:hall/gym/modern library/classroom/playground/dining hall/art room
校园收获:learn team spirit/cooperate/teamwork/learn to work together
位置描述:not far from his home/near/close to/a short walk away
要点三:特长与爱好
擅长学科:like math best/favourite subject/be fond of math/love math most
运动特长:be good at playing football/do well in football/play football well/be skilled at football
要点四:理想与结尾拓展
理想职业:a math teacher in the future/math educator/in the years to come/later on
收尾升华:hope his dream comes true/we often help each other/realize his dream/achieve his goal/learn from one another
5.阳光中学英语网站正在组织以“My School Life”为主题的征文活动,假如你是Millie,请根据提示写一篇英语短文投稿。
要求:
1、作文需包含所有要点,可适当补充,要求语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
2、词数 80 个左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My School Life
I’m Millie from Grade 7. This is my first term at Sunshine Middle School. I feel great!
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【答案】【例文】
My School Life
I’m Millie from Grade 7. This is my first term at Sunshine Middle School. I feel great!
Sandy is my best classmate. She is tall and slim. She is very polite, she always says “please” and “thank you”. She is interested in music, and she can play the piano well.
I love my school days. My favourite place is the playground. My new friends and I often play ping-pong there. I also like the teachers. They care about us a lot. Besides, I like Chinese best, and I’m good at it. I think my school life is very interesting.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文,以一般现在时为主,客观描述校园生活的人物、场景与感受
明确要点:介绍最好的同学,描述校园生活,表达对校园生活的感受
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:需包含所有要点,语句通顺连贯,词数80左右,开头已给出不计入词数,结构完整自然
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构
开头段:题目已给出固定开头,无需额外创作,直接承接
中间段:介绍最好的同学,描述校园生活
结尾段:总结感受,点明对校园生活的喜爱
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:介绍最好的同学
同学信息:She is tall and slim/very polite/is interested in music/she can play the piano well/outgoing等
要点二:描述校园生活
校园生活:my favourite place/play ping-pong there/the teachers care about us/like Chinese best/be good at it/play board games等
要点三:表达对校园生活的感受
感受:I feel great!/I think my school life is very interesting/happy等
6.假设你们学校参加了“城乡结对”活动,你是七年级学生张桥。请你根据下表内容,给结对学校的学生王涛写一封信,向他介绍一下你自己和你的学校日常生活。
1
外貌和性格……
2
爱好及原因……
3
社团或实践活动……
4
感想……
要求:
1. 内容完整,可适当发挥;
2. 不得出现真实姓名和学校信息;
3. 表达清楚,意思连贯,符合逻辑;
4. 70 词左右。开头和结尾已给,不计入总词数。
Dear Wang Tao,
I’m glad to introduce myself and my school life.
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What about you and your school life? I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Zhang Qiao
【答案】
例文:
Dear Wang Tao,
I’m glad to introduce myself and my school life.
I’m a 13-year-old boy with short hair and big eyes. I’m friendly and outgoing, always ready to help others. My hobbies are reading and playing basketball. Reading helps me know the world, while basketball keeps me healthy and happy. At school, I’m in the science club and do fun experiments weekly. I also join tree-planting activities. My school life is colorful and meaningful. I like it.
What about you and your school life? I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Zhang Qiao
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材: 本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,适当增加细节,使文章重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开头表明写信目的,为下文介绍自己及学校生活作铺垫;
第二步:具体介绍自己,包括基本信息、外貌性格、兴趣爱好等内容,接着介绍学校生活,如参加的社团和活动等;
第三步:总结全文,询问对方情况并表达期待回信。
[亮点词汇]
①13-year-old boy 13岁男孩
②friendly and outgoing友善且外向
③always ready to help others总是乐于助人
④do fun experiments做有趣的实验
⑤tree-planting activities植树活动
[高分句型]
Reading helps me know the world, while basketball keeps me healthy and happy. (while连接两个并列句,表示对比关系)
7.假如你是李华,以My school life为题,介绍你的学校生活,要点如下:
基本情况
来自北京,13岁,在徐州上学。
学校生活
(1)学校又大又现代。
(2)周一至周五上课,住得离学校近,步行上学。
(3)老师……,同学……,课程……
空余时间
(1)经常阅读,了解世界。
(2)爱好……
理想
……
要求:
(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯; (2)要点完整,省略号部分可作适当发挥;
(3)80词左右,不包括开头结尾。 (4)文中不得提及真实校名、人名等信息。
My school life
Dear everyone,
I’m glad to be here and tell you something about my school life in Xuzhou.
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I enjoy my colorful school life in Xuzhou very much.
【答案】例文:
My school life
Dear everyone,
I’m glad to be here and tell you something about my school life in Xuzhou.
I’m 13, from Beijing but study in Xuzhou at a big, modern school. My classroom is on the first floor. I have classes from Monday to Friday. I live near the school, so I go to school on foot. My teachers are kind and my classmates are friendly. My courses are interesting and I don’t have much homework. I often read books, which is a good way to understand the world. My hobby is sports. I practice playing tennis with my classmates. I want to be a teacher in the future.
I enjoy my colorful school life in Xuzhou very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:围绕学校生活展开,需涵盖基本情况、校园日常、课余活动及理想,适当补充省略号内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇点题。用“I’m glad to be here...”自然引出主题——介绍自己在徐州的学校生活。
第二步:依次展开要点。先交代基本信息(年龄、籍贯、就读地),再描述学校环境、上课时间、上学方式;接着补充师生关系、课程感受;随后说明课余活动;最后可简要提及理想。
第三步:总结感受,呼应开头,表达对学校生活的热爱。
[亮点词汇]
①from…to…从……到……
②a good way to do sth.做某事的好方法
③in the future将来
[高分句型]
I often read books, which is a good way to understand the world. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
8.假如你是七年级学生王浩,你的英国网友Alice发Email询问你校的课后活动情况。请你根据以下要点提示给她回复,介绍你校的课后活动。
1. 学校有哪些课后活动(至少举2个例子);
2. 你最喜欢的课后活动及原因;
3. 课后活动给你带来的好处。
要求:
1. 电子邮件内容须包含以上要点提示,可适当发挥;
2. 词数不少于70词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Alice,
I’m glad to receive your letter. You asked about the after-school activities in my school. Now let me tell you about them. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What about the after-school activities in your school? Please tell me.
Yours,
Wang Hao
【答案】
例文
Dear Alice,
I’m glad to receive your letter. You asked about the after-school activities in my school. Now let me tell you about them.
Our school has fun after-school activities. We have a reading club, where we share books and talk about stories. There’s a basketball team—boys practice daily. We also have a handicraft group, where we make paper-cuts or clay works.
My favorite is the reading club. I meet classmates who love reading too, and we recommend good books.
These activities help me relax after class. I learn new skills and make more friends. I look forward to them daily!
What about the after-school activities in your school? Please tell me.
Yours,
Wang Hao
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材: 本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏课后活动的内容,喜欢的类型及原因和课后活动带来的好处等内容,适当增加细节,使文章重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步:具体介绍学校的课后活动;
第二步:介绍你最喜欢的课后活动及原因;
第三步:说明课后活动给你带来的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①reading club阅读俱乐部
②share books分享书籍
③practice训练
④clay works泥塑作品
⑤recommend good books推荐好书
[高分句型]
①We have a reading club, where we share books and talk about stories. (where引导的定语从句)
②These activities help me relax after class, and I learn new skills and make more friends. (and连接两个并列的句子)
9.升入初中已经半学期了,新学期中一定认识了很多新朋友吧?假如你是Betty,请根据以下信息,向你的朋友Sally介绍你的好朋友和你的学校生活。
新朋友
姓名
Millie
外貌
13岁,短发;大大的眼睛;高而可爱;
爱好
热爱阅读,是阅读俱乐部的成员;
学校情况
1.校园很美丽,不大,但很干净。
2.所有的功课都有趣,很喜欢……
3.老师们……
4.同学们……,课后经常一起……
感受
……;愿望……
要求:
1.文章内容包含表中所有要点,省略部分适当发挥。
2.词数80词左右,文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3.语义通顺,意思连贯,条理清晰,字迹工整。
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名,校名及地名。
Dear Sally,
I’d like to tell you something about my friend and my school life.
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All the best,
Betty
【答案】例文
Dear Sally,
I’d like to tell you something about my friend and my school life.
First, I want to introduce my new friend to you. She’s Millie, 13, with short hair and big eyes. She is tall and cute. She loves reading and is in the Reading Club.
My school is beautiful, small yet clean. I like all the subjects because they are interesting. My favorite subject is English. All my teachers are nice, and our classmates often help each other. We often play games together after class.
I am happy in the school. I want to be a teacher when I grow up.
All the best,
Betty
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已明确给出,包括新朋友的外貌、爱好,以及学校的情况和个人感受。考生需确保不遗漏这些要点,并适当添加细节,以丰富文章内容,同时突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开头直接表明了写作目的,即“I’d like to tell you something about my friend and my school life.”,通过这一句,引出了接下来要介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从新朋友的外貌、爱好,以及学校环境、课程、老师、同学和课后活动等多个方面进行了详细介绍;
第三步,书写结语。结尾表达了作者在学校的快乐感受以及未来的愿望,即“I am happy in the school. I want to be a teacher when I grow up.”,同时以祝福语“All the best,”结束了全文。
[亮点词汇]
①with short hair留着短发
②be in the Reading Club在阅读俱乐部
③nice友好的
④help each other互相帮助
⑤play games together一起玩游戏
[高分句型]
①I like all the subjects because they are interesting.(原因状语从句)
10.学校英语俱乐部正举办以“My Life and Dream”为题的演讲比赛。请根据下图所提示的要点,用英语写一篇演讲稿。
注意:
1. 表达中必须包含所给的要点,省略号部分需适当发挥。
2. 词数70词左右。开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
3. 表达中请勿提及真实姓名。
My Life and Dream
Hello, everyone! Let me tell you something about myself.
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【答案】例文:
My Life and Dream
Hello, everyone! Let me tell you something about myself.
I’m a 13-year-old student. I’m in Grade 7, Class 7. I love playing football because it is fun. I often play it with my friends after school.
My school life is busy but happy. There are so many subjects. I like Chinese best, because the Chinese language is really amazing. I have many good friends. We study and play together.
My dream is to be a teacher. I will study hard for it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写作开头已给出。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,主要围绕“基本情况”和“学校生活”展开,适当补充,丰富细节。
第三步,书写结语,说明未来梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①love doing sth 喜欢做某事
②after school 放学后
③the Chinese language 中国语言
[高分句型]
①I love playing football because it is fun. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②There are so many subjects. (There be句型)
11. 亲爱的同学们,初中生活开启了我们人生的新旅程。请结合要点提示,以“My Wonderful School Life”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍你的学校生活。
美丽校园
1. 我的学校看起来漂亮又新式。
2. 有3栋教学楼,40间教室,每个教室既干净又明亮。
3. ……
友善师生
1. 我有很多乐于助人的朋友和善良的老师。
2. 他们都对我很好。
3. ……
最爱学科
1. 我最喜欢的学科是英语。
2. 学习英语有趣。
3. ……
精彩活动
1. 我们学校有各种各样的社团。
2. 课外活动使我非常快乐。
3. ……
要求:
1. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容涵盖要点,全文连贯通顺,可适当发挥;
3. 请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。
My Wonderful School Life
Hello, everyone. I am a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life in my school.
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【答案】
My Wonderful School Life
Hello, everyone. I am a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life in my school.
My school looks beautiful and modern. There are three teaching buildings with forty classrooms. Each classroom is clean and bright.
I have many helpful friends and kind teachers. They are all friendly to me. When I have problems, they always help me patiently.
My favorite subject is English. It is very interesting because we play games and watch English videos in class.
Our school has many clubs. After-class activities make me very happy. They not only help me learn but also make my life colorful.
I love my school life!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材: 本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,介绍校园环境;
第二步,具体阐述师生关系,介绍最喜欢的英语学科,描述校园活动;
第三步,书写结语,表达喜爱学校的情感。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to对……友好
②not only…but also不仅……而且
[高分句型]
①When I have problems, they always help me patiently. (时间状语从句)
②It is very interesting because we play games and watch English videos in class.(原因状语从句)
12.进入初中生活和学习已经两个多月了,假如你是Su Hai,请根据下面的图表,给你的网友Sandy写一封电子邮件,谈谈你的学习及生活情况。
要点:
自身情况
喜欢各门学科;擅长数学、英语和足球;学校足球队的一员
学校生活
结交很多新朋友,师生友好,很关心我;
喜欢阅读,经常去图书馆读书,因为想要了解……;
喜欢学校的绿色空地,可以和老师和朋友在那里聊天;
每天在操场做早操,帮我们做好一天的准备;
课后参加社团活动……
自身感受
……
要求:
1. 语句通顺,省略号部分适当发挥;
2. 不得出现真实校名和姓名;
3. 开头和结尾均已给出 (不计入总词数),词数80左右。
Dear Sandy,
How are you? I’m now studying at Sunshine Middle School._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What about your school life? Please e-mail me soon!
Yours,
Su Hai
【答案】
例文:
Dear Sandy,
How are you? I’m now studying at Sunshine Middle School. I am good at Maths, English and football and I am in the school football team.
The teachers and students care about me a lot. I love reading and often go to the library because I want to learn more about the world. There is a green open area. I like chatting with my teachers and friends there. We do morning exercises every day. It helps us get ready for the day. After class, I take part in club activities. I am very happy with my new school life.
What about your school life? Please e-mail me soon!
Yours,
Su Hai
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:需包含学习情况、学校生活等要点,介绍个人在初中的学习及生活状况,突出校园生活的丰富与自身的收获。
[写作步骤]
第一步,阐述写作意图,说明自己在阳光中学的学习生活;
第二步,详细介绍学习情况和学校生活;
第三步,表达对新学校生活的满意感受,询问对方的校园生活。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②care about关心
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
I love reading and often go to the library because I want to learn more about the world. (because引导原因状语从句)
13.假如你是李华,以“My school life”为题,介绍你的学校生活,要点如下:
基本情况
来自北京,13岁,在淮安上学。
学校生活
1.学校又大又现代。
2.周一至周五上课,住得离学校近,步行上学。
3.老师……,同学……,课程……
空余时间
1.经常阅读,了解世界。
2.爱好运动,周末与同学们练习打网球。
3.……
理想
……
要求:(1)语言通顺,条理清晰,书写规范;
(2)要点完整,省略号部分可作适当发挥;
(3)80词左右。开头结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数。
(4)文中不得提及真实校名、人名等信息。
My school life
Dear everyone,
I’m glad to be here and tell you something about my school life in Huai’an. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I enjoy my colorful school life in Huai’an very much.
【答案】例文
My school life
Dear everyone,
I’m glad to be here and tell you something about my school life in Huain’an.
I come from Beijing. I’m 13 years old. I go to school in Huain’an. The school is big and modern. My classroom is on the first floor. I have classes at school from Monday to Friday. I live near the school, so I go to school on foot. My teachers are kind and my classmates are friendly. My courses are interesting and I don’t have much homework. I often read books. I think this is a good way to understand the world. My hobby is sports. I practice playing tennis with my classmates on weekends. I have a dancing class on Saturday afternoon. I love talking about festivals with my friends. I like the Spring Festival best because I can receive lucky money. I sometimes visit museums and sometimes have a picnic in the park with my parents. I want to be a teacher in the future.
I enjoy my colorful school life in Huain’an very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“我的个人情况,学校生活,空闲时间我的爱好和理想”,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我很高兴来到这里,告诉你我在淮安的学校生活。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“我的个人情况,学校生活,空闲时间我的爱好和理想”重点介绍我的学校生活;
第三步,书写结语。表达“我非常喜欢我在淮安丰富多彩的学校生活。”
[亮点词汇]
①on foot步行
②practice doing sth.练习做某事
[高分句型]
①I think this is a good way to understand the world.(省略that的宾语从句)
②I like the Spring Festival best because I can receive lucky money.(because引导的原因状语从句)
14.作为初一新生,同学们已经熟悉了自己的学校和校园生活。阳光中学正在举办以“My School Life” 为题的演讲比赛,假如你是Simon,也想参加此次比赛,请根据下列要点,用英语写一篇短文,介绍自己的校园生活。
What’s in your school? (classroom building, playground, ...)
What subject do you like best?
What do you often do after class?
...
注意事项:
1.80词左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.包含提示信息内容并适当发挥,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
3.不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
My School Life
Hello, everyone! My name is Simon. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My School Life
Hello, everyone! My name is Simon.
Our school is big and really nice. We have two classroom buildings and a large playground. There is a music room, an art room and two computer rooms in the buildings. Of all the subjects, I like English and Chinese best. I learn a lot about the world in the classes. After class, I often do sports. I’m a member of the Football Club. Our school has different kinds of clubs. We can join our favourite clubs and make friends with others. Our school is a perfect place for us to study.
I feel very happy at school.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出;
第二步,介绍学校的情况,学习的学科以及课后活动;
第三步,表达对学校的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①like…best最喜欢
②do sports做运动
③kinds of各种各样的
④make friends with和……交朋友
[高分句型]
There is a music room, an art room and two computer rooms in the buildings. (there be句型)
15.阳光日报正在举行“寻找最美校园”活动,请根据以下提示,以“My wonderful school”为题,用英语向大家介绍一下你的学校。
要求:1. 内容完整,可适当发挥;
2. 表达清楚,意思连贯,符合逻辑;
3. 70 词左右。开头已给,不计入总词数。
My wonderful school
Hello, welcome to my school. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My wonderful school
Hello, welcome to my school. My school is big and beautiful. It has a big library where I can read all kinds of books. There are three bright classroom buildings and a playground. We have Chinese, maths, English, art, music, P.E. and so on. We have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. After school, we have different kinds of activities, such as soccer matches and art festivals. They make my school days exciting.
I feel happy here because I have a busy and wonderful life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己的学校,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍学校的校园设施、课程安排和课余活动;
第三步,介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①and so on等等
②after school放学后
③different kinds of不同种类的
[高分句型]
①It has a big library where I can read all kinds of books. (定语从句)
②I feel happy here because I have a busy and wonderful life. (原因状语从句)
16.根据下面的提示,以“My best friend”为题,写一篇英语短文介绍你的好朋友Tom。
基本信息
1. 中文名:张飞(Zhang Fei); 2. 年龄:13;
3. 班级:七年级一班 4. 短发、戴眼镜
个人情况
1. 爱好广泛,喜欢……因为……
2. 乐于助人(举一例说明)
3. 最喜欢……学科,因为……
理想
他希望在未来成为一名……我希望他的梦想成真。
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括表格中的相关信息,并适当发挥;
3. 保持书写工整,卷面整洁;
4. 70词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数),不得使用真实姓名、学校和地名等。
My best friend
Tom is my best friend.
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【答案】例文
My best friend
Tom is my best friend. He is 13 years old. He comes from America but now he lives in Huai’an. His Chinese name is Zhang Fei. He has short hair and he wears glasses. He studies in Class 1, Grade 7.
He has a lot of hobbies. He is good at sports. His favorite sport is basketball. He thinks playing sports can make him healthy. He often helps his classmates with their English. He likes all the subjects and he works hard. His favorite subject is Chinese because he thinks it’s interesting.
He hopes to be an astronaut because he wants to explore the universe. I hope his dream comes true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,介绍自己的好朋友,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并注意适当添加细节,突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍Tom的基本信息;
第二步,介绍个人信息,学科及爱好等;
第三步,介绍他的理想并表达对他的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①come from来自
②interesting有趣的
③be good at擅长
④healthy健康的
⑤help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事
⑥want to do sth.想做某事
[高分句型]
①He thinks playing sports can make him healthy.(宾语从句;动名词作主语)
②His favorite subject is Chinese because he thinks it’s interesting.(原因状语从句;宾语从句)
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