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学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ 期中总复习之单元话题写作满分范文预测15篇 （Units 1-4，紧贴新教材话题） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，选题均为25-26学年最新名校或地区统考卷真题或外刊原题改编，质量较高。老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．每位同学都有自己擅长的科目。为帮助大家更好地学习，英语老师将在周五下午举行主题为 “Let’s be better learners together” 的讨论会，邀请大家分享自己平时如何学习自己擅长的科目。请你用英文写一篇发言稿。 要点如下： (1)说明自己最擅长的科目是什么； (2)阐述自己是如何学习这个科目的 (3点)； (3)你如何看待这些学习方法。 注意: (1)不少于80词； (2)补充细节，以使行文连贯； (3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Good afternoon, everyone! Among all the subjects, I do best in __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you. 2．你校英语公众号要推出一期主题为“How I’ve Changed! ”的专题推送。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你初中两年的变化及感悟。 提示词语：used to, encourage, advice, progress 内容提示： 1. How have you changed? 2. What have you got from it? How time flies! I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot in the past two years. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你心目中的英雄是世界著名科学家钱学森。请根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇介绍钱学森的短文。可适当加入自己的感想和评论。题目自拟。80个词左右。 1.1911年出生于上海，中国著名的物理学家，被称为“中国导弹之父(The Father of Chinese Missile) ”。 2. 1938年在美国得到博士学位(doctor's degree)。1950年争取回国，遭到美国政府的阻挠。1955年终于回到祖国的怀抱。 3. 他把自己的一切都奉献给了祖国的航天事业。 4. 自己的感想是…… ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．每个人都希望自己的家乡越来越美好。近年来，随着社会的发展，家乡发生了巨大的变化，人们的生活水平提高了，但环境问题也随之而来。学校英语报正在举办题为“Changes in My Hometown and How I Go Green”的征文活动。请你根据下列导图中的信息，写一篇英语短文投稿。 注意事项：必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Changes in My Hometown and How I Go Green With the development of industry, great changes have taken place in my hometown. But unluckily, they also bring us some environmental problems. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．在我们的生活中总会有一些值得我们敬佩的人，比如扶贫干部黄文秀，被称为“大山的女儿”。请根据以下信息，谈一谈黄文秀这位人物以及自己的感悟。 Introduction born in April 1989 and passed away on June 17, 2019. return to hometown… Contribution(贡献) make Baini Village change a lot e.g. develop industries and farming In the past…, but now… Your feeling 至少两点 提示：fight poverty扶贫；a Communist Party member党员；serve服务； 要求:     1. 语句通顺，条理清楚，将省略号处补充完整。 2. 词数100左右。 To me, one of the most inspiring people is Huang Wenxiu. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．学校英语公众号“Learning Tips”栏目正在征稿，请你以“How I Became an Active Learner”为题写一篇短文投稿，讲述你从“被动学习”走向“主动学习”的经历。 参考词汇：passive (被动的) learner, aloud, enjoyable, resources, take advantage of ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．某校英语校刊正在征集题为“The Memory That Changed Me”的短文。请结合Unit 4 Our Memory话题，写一篇英语短文投稿。 提示： 1. 简要描述这段记忆发生的时间、地点和经过； 2. 谈谈它对你学习或做人的影响/感悟； 3. 词数100左右； 4. 逻辑清晰，包含至少1个宾语从句。 The Memory That Changed Me __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mary向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据以下提示给她写一封回信，提出你的建议。短文需要包括以下要点： 注意：词数100左右 (短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Mary, I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 9．好的记忆力能让学习事半功倍。你的英国笔友Tom在来信中说，他最近总是记不住学过的知识，非常苦恼。请你根据以下提示，用英语给他回一封电子邮件，介绍提高记忆力的方法。 提示内容： 1. Train your brain: try new things, pay attention; 2. Live a healthy life: eat a balanced diet, get enough rest; 3. 其他建议：take notes, review in time... 要求： 1. 内容尽量包含提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 条理清楚，句式规范； 3. 80词以上 (开头已给出，不计入总词数) ； 4. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 提示词汇：pay attention to, take notes, last but not least Dear Tom, Thanks for your letter. Don’t worry too much about your memory—here is my advice. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假如你是九年级学生李华，你的加拿大笔友 Tim 来信询问你学习英语的方法。请你根据以下要点，用英语给他回一封电子邮件。 要点提示：1. 你的两条英语学习方法及效果； 2. 你学习中遇到的一个困难及解决办法； 3. 你本学期的英语学习目标。 写作要求：1. 包含以上要点，可适当发挥； 2. 不少于 80 词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 Dear Tim, 　　I am glad to hear from you. You asked me about my ways of learning English. Let me tell you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Please write to me soon. Yours, Li Hua 能力综合实践5篇 11．十多年来，中国发展迅速，人们生活发生了巨大变化。假如你是Alex，十多年前曾作为交换生在国内一所中学学习。此次重返中国，你的母校邀请你做一场分享演讲，向全校师生讲述你亲眼所见的中国发展变化。请你写一篇演讲稿，从交通出行、生态环境、电子支付、居住条件、日常购物中选取两个令你印象最深的方面进行介绍，并谈谈你对中国发展的感想。 写作要点： 1.你选择的两个方面的具体变化； 2.你对中国飞速发展的感受。 写作要求： 1.演讲稿应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2.演讲稿100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：扫描二维码scan a QR code Hello, everyone! I’m Alex. I came to China as an exchange student more than ten years ago. Now I’m back in China, and I find life here has greatly changed. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening! 12．伟人对世界产生了巨大的影响。是什么使他们成为了伟人？请根据以下提示，以“What makes a great person”为题写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。 提示： 1. Who is the greatest person in your mind? (e.g., Yuan Longping, Tu Youyou, Confucius...) 2. What do you know about him or her? (Achievements, spirit, etc.) 3. How has he or she influenced the world? 注意： （1）短文须包括以上内容，可适当发挥，语言流畅，逻辑清晰，书写规范； （2）词数：80-100词。 What makes a great person ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．某英文网站正在开展以“致敬伟大发明家”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的发明家，他/她为什么是你最喜欢的发明家以及你从他/她身上学到了什么。字数120字左右。 提示词：scientist, invent, great, teach 提示问题： 1. Who is your favourite inventor? 2. Why is he/she your favourite inventor? 3. What did you learn from him/her?   There are many famous inventors. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．题目：My Ways to Improve Memory 假设你校英语报正在举办“学习方法与技巧”主题征文活动。请你写一篇短文，分享你提升记忆力的方法。要求： 1. 包含以下三方面内容： 你曾经遇到的记忆困难 你使用的至少两种提升记忆力的方法 这些方法带来的效果或你的感悟 2. 词数80左右 3. 以下划线句子为开头（不计入总词数） 答题区 My Ways to Improve Memory Memory plays an important role in our daily learning. Here are my ways to improve it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．假定你是李华，你班将举行以“Changes in My Learning”为主题的英语分享会。请结合图示信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，与同学们分享你学习上的变化。 注意： 1.短文须包含图中三个要点，所给词汇仅供参考，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 词数80~100。 Changes in My Learning ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页（共3页） 试卷第1页（共3页） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ 期中总复习之单元话题写作满分范文预测15篇 （Units 1-4，紧贴新教材话题） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，选题均为25-26学年最新名校或地区统考卷真题或外刊原题改编，质量较高。老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．每位同学都有自己擅长的科目。为帮助大家更好地学习，英语老师将在周五下午举行主题为 “Let’s be better learners together” 的讨论会，邀请大家分享自己平时如何学习自己擅长的科目。请你用英文写一篇发言稿。 要点如下： (1)说明自己最擅长的科目是什么； (2)阐述自己是如何学习这个科目的 (3点)； (3)你如何看待这些学习方法。 注意: (1)不少于80词； (2)补充细节，以使行文连贯； (3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Good afternoon, everyone! Among all the subjects, I do best in __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you. 【答案】范文 Good afternoon, everyone! Among all the subjects, I do best in English. I’d like to share my secrets to learning this subject well. First, I always take an active part in class. I believe the best way to gain new knowledge is to listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. Second, I try to use and review what I’ve learned whenever I can. For example, after learning a new grammar rule, I often practise making more sentences with it. Third, I make English learning interesting by watching English movies and listening to English songs. I think these methods are useful and practical, and I hope they can help you as well. Thank you. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意]   确定文体： 应用文，一般现在时 明确要点： 自己最擅长的科目是什么；自己是如何学习这个科目的 (3点)；你如何看待这些学习方法。 确定人称：第一人称（I） 注意事项： 不少于80词；补充细节，以使行文连贯；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段： 问候，点明自己英语学得最好，引出要分享学习秘诀。 主体段： 分三点介绍学习方法，辅以举例说明。 结尾段： 评价这些方法有用，希望能帮助大家，致谢收尾。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一： 最擅长的科目 English/Chinese/Physics等 要点二：如何学习这个科目 take an active part in class/try to use and review what I’ve learned whenever I can/make English learning interesting by watching English movies and listening to English songs/read more good articles in free time/keep diaries to practise writing/take notes of beautiful sentences and recite them/watch experiments carefully in class/try to understand basic rules instead of memorizing/connect knowledge with daily life等 要点三：如何看待这些学习方法 these methods are useful and practical, and I hope they can help you as well/These methods are helpful, and I hope they can work for you as well/These ways are simple but useful, and I hope they can help you too等 2．你校英语公众号要推出一期主题为“How I’ve Changed! ”的专题推送。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你初中两年的变化及感悟。 提示词语：used to, encourage, advice, progress 内容提示： 1. How have you changed? 2. What have you got from it? How time flies! I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot in the past two years. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How I’ve Changed! How time flies! I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot in the past two years. І used to be short, but now I’m one of the tallest students in my class. I used to be shy and quiet, but now I’m more outgoing. The most important change in my life is that I have made much progress in English learning. I used to be poor at English. But my English teacher encouraged me and gave me some useful advice. With her help, now I am good at English, and I often get good grades on my English exams, too. I have changed so much. I believe I can become better and better. I will never forget the unforgettable middle school life! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，可适当添加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，列举初中两年所发生的变化； 第二步，谈谈在变化中所得到的东西； 第三步，书写结语，表达初中生活的难忘。 [亮点词汇] ①used to be过去常常 ②with one’s help在某人的帮助下 ③be good at擅长 [高分句型] The most important change in my life is that I have made much progress in English learning.（that引导的表语从句） 3．假如你心目中的英雄是世界著名科学家钱学森。请根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇介绍钱学森的短文。可适当加入自己的感想和评论。题目自拟。80个词左右。 1.1911年出生于上海，中国著名的物理学家，被称为“中国导弹之父(The Father of Chinese Missile) ”。 2. 1938年在美国得到博士学位(doctor's degree)。1950年争取回国，遭到美国政府的阻挠。1955年终于回到祖国的怀抱。 3. 他把自己的一切都奉献给了祖国的航天事业。 4. 自己的感想是…… ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Qian Xuesen is a famous scientist in the world. He was named “The Father of Chinese Missile”. He is the hero in my heart. And he is also the hero of all Chinese people. Qian Xuesen was born in Shanghai in 1911. He completed his doctor's degree in 1938 in America. He tried to come back to China in 1950, but the American government stopped him. He didn't come back until 1955. He gave his life to Chinese space flight technology. I will learn from him, and study hard for our country. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要求按照提示信息第一段介绍钱学森；第二段介绍钱学森取得的成就以及自己的感想。 2.写作指导：本文第一段对人物客观事实的陈述，主要采用一般现在时态；第二段对人物所取得成就进行陈述，主要采用一般过去时，最后写出自己的感想，需要把握好时态，叙述完整，保证条理清晰。 4．每个人都希望自己的家乡越来越美好。近年来，随着社会的发展，家乡发生了巨大的变化，人们的生活水平提高了，但环境问题也随之而来。学校英语报正在举办题为“Changes in My Hometown and How I Go Green”的征文活动。请你根据下列导图中的信息，写一篇英语短文投稿。 注意事项：必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Changes in My Hometown and How I Go Green With the development of industry, great changes have taken place in my hometown. But unluckily, they also bring us some environmental problems. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 With the development of industry, great changes have taken place in my hometown. But unluckily, they also bring us some environmental problems. There used to be clean rivers and green trees everywhere. Now more tall buildings stand here, but the water is dirty and there is serious air pollution. We can also see much rubbish on the streets. As a student, I try to go green. I save water and electricity every day. I use reusable bags instead of plastic ones and walk or ride bikes to school. I will ask people around me to protect the environment. I believe our hometown will be more beautiful with our efforts. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般过去时和一般现在时为主 明确要点：家乡变化(过去与现在的对比，环境问题的具体表现)，个人环保行动(节约资源，绿色出行，宣传呼吁，美好展望) 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：必须包含所有提示信息，词数80左右，开头已给出不计入总词数 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句(已给出)，引出家乡变化及带来的环境问题 主体段：对比家乡过去与现在的变化，列举具体环境问题 结尾段：描述个人环保行动，发出呼吁并展望美好未来 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡变化与环境问题 过去状况：clean rivers/green trees everywhere/blue sky/fresh air等 现在变化：more tall buildings/modern factories/new roads/shopping malls等 环境问题：dirty water/serious air pollution/much rubbish on the streets/white pollution等 对比表达：used to be/there be/now/but等 要点二：个人环保行动 节约资源：save water/electricity/turn off the lights/use both sides of paper等 绿色出行：walk/ride bikes/take public transport/go to school on foot等 减少污染：use reusable bags instead of plastic ones/refuse single-use plastics/sort the rubbish等 宣传呼吁：ask people around me to protect the environment/spread the idea/take part in cleaning activities等 美好展望：believe our hometown will be more beautiful/with our efforts/hope to see a greener hometown等 5．在我们的生活中总会有一些值得我们敬佩的人，比如扶贫干部黄文秀，被称为“大山的女儿”。请根据以下信息，谈一谈黄文秀这位人物以及自己的感悟。 Introduction born in April 1989 and passed away on June 17, 2019. return to hometown… Contribution(贡献) make Baini Village change a lot e.g. develop industries and farming In the past…, but now… Your feeling 至少两点 提示：fight poverty扶贫；a Communist Party member党员；serve服务； 要求:     1. 语句通顺，条理清楚，将省略号处补充完整。 2. 词数100左右。 To me, one of the most inspiring people is Huang Wenxiu. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 To me, one of the most inspiring people is Huang Wenxiu. Huang Wenxiu was born in April 1989 and passed away on June 17, 2019. She was a dedicated Communist Party member. Instead of staying in big cities, she chose to return to her hometown to serve the people. In 2018, she volunteered to work in Baini Village. In the past, the village was poor, but now Huang helped make Baini Village change a lot. During her work, she devoted herself to fighting poverty. She helped them develop local industries and farming. Huang Wenxiu’s spirit of selflessness, responsibility and dedication will always inspire us. I should learn from Huang Wenxiu and try my best to help others. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文（人物介绍+感悟），以一般过去时和一般现在时为主 明确要点：人物介绍（出生、离世、回乡、党员身份）、贡献（百坭村变化、发展产业和农业、过去与现在的对比）、感受（至少两点） 确定人称：第三人称（she/her）和第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：词数100左右；补充省略号处的内容；不得出现真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出人物，介绍基本信息（出生、离世、身份） 主体段：介绍她的贡献（回乡扶贫、发展产业、村庄变化） 结尾段：表达个人感受（至少两点）及学习决心 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：人物介绍 出生与离世：born in April 1989 and passed away on June 17, 2019/passed away in 2019 at a young age等 身份与回乡：return to hometown/serve the people/a dedicated Communist Party member/volunteered to work in Baini Village/settle in the village等 要点二：贡献 总体变化：make Baini Village change a lot/help the village get out of poverty等 具体做法：develop industries and farming/help villagers grow fruit trees and raise pigs等 过去与现在对比：In the past, the village was poor, but now it is rich and beautiful/used to be poor, but now…等 要点三：感受 敬佩与感动：inspire us/deeply moved by her spirit/admire her courage and dedication/feel proud of her等 学习与行动：learn her spirit of selflessness and responsibility/try my best to help others/be a useful person to society等 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．学校英语公众号“Learning Tips”栏目正在征稿，请你以“How I Became an Active Learner”为题写一篇短文投稿，讲述你从“被动学习”走向“主动学习”的经历。 参考词汇：passive (被动的) learner, aloud, enjoyable, resources, take advantage of ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How I Became an Active Learner I used to be a passive learner. In class, I only listened to the teacher and never asked questions. One day, I had a talk with my English teacher. She told me that learning is my own business. That talk changed my mind. Now I often ask questions and read English aloud every morning. I also take advantage of online resources to learn more. I find learning more enjoyable now. I have learned that we should be the master of our own study. Active learning helps us make great progress. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以一般过去时和一般现在时为主 明确要点：过去有什么问题（过去是被动学习者）；是什么让你发生了改变（一次谈话/一本书/一次考试等）；现在你有什么不同的做法；你从这次改变中学到了什么 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：需使用参考词汇（passive learner, aloud, enjoyable, resources, take advantage of）中的部分。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明自己过去是一个被动学习者，是什么问题 主体段： 第一层：说明是什么让你发生了改变 第二层：描述现在的不同做法 第三层：说明从改变中学到了什么 结尾段：总结，鼓励大家成为主动学习者 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：过去的状态 I used to be a passive learner./In the past, I only listened to the teacher and never asked questions./I just waited for the teacher to tell me what to do./I didn’t know how to learn by myself.等 要点二：改变的契机 One day, I had a talk with my teacher./My teacher told me that learning is my own business./I read a book about how to learn well./I failed an exam and decided to change./That talk changed my mind.等 要点三：现在的不同做法 Now I often ask questions in class./I read English aloud every morning./I take advantage of online resources to learn more./I make a study plan and stick to it./I preview lessons before class and review them after class./I find learning more enjoyable.等 要点四：学到的道理 I have learned that active learning is important./I realize that we should be the master of our own study./I learned to take control of my own learning./Learning becomes easier and more enjoyable when we are active.等 7．某校英语校刊正在征集题为“The Memory That Changed Me”的短文。请结合Unit 4 Our Memory话题，写一篇英语短文投稿。 提示： 1. 简要描述这段记忆发生的时间、地点和经过； 2. 谈谈它对你学习或做人的影响/感悟； 3. 词数100左右； 4. 逻辑清晰，包含至少1个宾语从句。 The Memory That Changed Me __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 The Memory That Changed Me Last winter, I sat with my grandma in the warm kitchen. She took out an old letter and told me she saved money for years to buy a dictionary for my father. I didn’t know that such a small book meant so much. From that moment, I understood why she kept old things. The memory changed me because I learned that objects carry love and hard times. Now I review my notes not only for exams, but to remember who I am. I believe that a good memory comes from a thankful heart. Whenever I want to give up, I recall Grandma’s letter and keep going. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：叙事记叙文，以一般过去时为主，穿插一般现在时表达感悟 明确要点：简述记忆的时间、地点、事件经过；讲述这件事带来的学习或做人方面的感悟；作文至少包含1个宾语从句 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：词数100左右；逻辑清晰；文中不得出现真实姓名、学校信息；作文需要包含至少一处宾语从句 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：交代故事背景，引出这段改变自己的记忆，点明人物、时间与地点 主体段：叙述事件完整经过，介绍奶奶的往事，体现这件事带来的初步触动（内含宾语从句） 结尾段：阐述这件记忆带给我的感悟与长久激励，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：事件经过 时间地点：last winter/in the warm kitchen/on a cold evening等 事件过程：sat with my grandma/took out an old letter/told me her story等 细节描写：saved money for years/buy a dictionary for my father/meant so much等 要点二：事件带来的感悟与自身改变 理解感悟：understood why she kept old things/learned that objects carry love等 自身改变：review my notes not only for exams/remember who I am等 深层思考：things carry love and hard times/treasure small valuable objects等 要点三：主题升华 观点表达：believe that a good memory comes from a thankful heart/keep a thankful heart等 激励行动：want to give up/recall Grandma’s letter/keep going等 情感总结：the memory changes my attitude towards life/teaches me to value love等 8．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mary向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据以下提示给她写一封回信，提出你的建议。短文需要包括以下要点： 注意：词数100左右 (短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Mary, I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Mary, I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory. First of all, it is important to understand what you want to remember. You can try to connect new knowledge with what you have already known. Secondly, forming a picture in your mind is also a good way, which can make things easier to remember. Thirdly, having a healthy diet is necessary. Eating more healthy food like vegetables and fish is good for your brain. Last but not least, you’d better get enough sleep because a good sleep can help your brain work better. I hope that these suggestions will be helpful to you. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 第一步：审题立意 确定文体：书信应用文，用一般现在时 确定要点：就如何提高记忆力给出建议 确定人称：第二人称（you/your） 注意事项：词数100左右 (短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) 第二步：构思布局 三段式结构： 开头段：导入正文 主体段：给出建议 结尾段：表达祝福 第三步：要点展开 要点：建议 First of all…Secondly…Thirdly… Last but not least…/want to /try to/ connect… with…/what you have already known/First…Second…Third…Finally… form a picture in your mind/a good way/make things easier to remember/try to form a picture in your mind/make it much easier to remember things… have a healthy diet/ necessary/Eating more healthy food/good for your brain/ important for your brain… you’d better/get enough sleep/because/help your brain work better/A good sleep/not be too nervous and keep relaxed… 9．好的记忆力能让学习事半功倍。你的英国笔友Tom在来信中说，他最近总是记不住学过的知识，非常苦恼。请你根据以下提示，用英语给他回一封电子邮件，介绍提高记忆力的方法。 提示内容： 1. Train your brain: try new things, pay attention; 2. Live a healthy life: eat a balanced diet, get enough rest; 3. 其他建议：take notes, review in time... 要求： 1. 内容尽量包含提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 条理清楚，句式规范； 3. 80词以上 (开头已给出，不计入总词数) ； 4. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 提示词汇：pay attention to, take notes, last but not least Dear Tom, Thanks for your letter. Don’t worry too much about your memory—here is my advice. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Tom, Thanks for your letter. Don’t worry too much about your memory—here is my advice. To start with, train your brain. Try new things daily and pay full attention while studying. Besides, live a healthy life. Eat a balanced diet and get enough rest. Give your brain a break after 40 minutes’ study. Last but not least, take notes by writing down the key points and review knowledge in time. The more you review, the more likely you will remember. I believe your memory will improve if you follow my advice. I’m looking forward to your progress. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：训练大脑，健康生活，其他建议（记笔记、及时复习等） 确定人称：第二人称（you）为主，第一人称（I） 用来给出观点 注意事项：不得出现真实的校名和人名，80词以上 (开头已给出，不计入总词数) [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：回信问候，安慰Tom，引出下文的建议（题目已经给出开头） 主体段：分条给出三条提升记忆力的建议：训练大脑、健康生活、其他建议（记笔记、及时复习等） 结尾段：表达相信建议有效，期待对方进步 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：训练大脑 做法：try new things/pay full attention when you study/do brain games like word puzzles/try to retell what you learn等 要点二：健康生活 做法：eat a balanced diet/get enough rest/exercise often/don’t stay up/give your brain a break after studying for 40 minutes等 要点三：其他建议 做法：take notes by writing down the key points/review knowledge in time/connect new knowledge with your life experience/use memory cards to go over knowledge等 10．假如你是九年级学生李华，你的加拿大笔友 Tim 来信询问你学习英语的方法。请你根据以下要点，用英语给他回一封电子邮件。 要点提示：1. 你的两条英语学习方法及效果； 2. 你学习中遇到的一个困难及解决办法； 3. 你本学期的英语学习目标。 写作要求：1. 包含以上要点，可适当发挥； 2. 不少于 80 词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 Dear Tim, 　　I am glad to hear from you. You asked me about my ways of learning English. Let me tell you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Please write to me soon. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Tim, 　　I am glad to hear from you. You asked me about my ways of learning English. Let me tell you. 　　First, I read English aloud every morning. It helps me remember new words and improves my spoken English. Second, I keep a diary in English twice a week. It is a good way to practice writing and review what I have learned. I used to forget words quickly, so I made a word list and reviewed it before going to bed. Little by little, my vocabulary has grown much bigger than before. 　　My goal this term is to get better grades in English and talk with foreigners bravely. I believe that where there is a will, there is a way. 　　Please write to me soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文（电子邮件），以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 明确要点：两条英语学习方法及效果、学习中遇到的一个困难及解决办法、本学期的英语学习目标 确定人称：以第一人称（I/my/me）为主 注意事项：需包含题干中所有要点，可适当发挥，词数不少于80。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。 [第二步：构思布局] 四段式结构： 开头：表达收到来信的喜悦，引出介绍英语学习方法的话题。 主体段一：先写两条学习方法及效果；再写遇到的困难及解决办法。 主体段二：说明本学期目标。 结尾：表达希望收到回信。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：英语学习方法及效果 学习方法：read aloud/keep a diary/listen to English songs/watch English movies/make word cards等 学习效果：help sb. do/improve/practice/review/be a good way to等 要点二：困难及解决办法 困难：forget words quickly/have trouble in/be poor at等 解决办法：make a word list/review before going to bed/little by little/ask sb. for help/practice more等 要点三：本学期的英语学习目标 my goal is to/I hope to/I plan to/I will try my best to/where there is a will, there is a way/practice makes perfect等 能力综合实践5篇 11．十多年来，中国发展迅速，人们生活发生了巨大变化。假如你是Alex，十多年前曾作为交换生在国内一所中学学习。此次重返中国，你的母校邀请你做一场分享演讲，向全校师生讲述你亲眼所见的中国发展变化。请你写一篇演讲稿，从交通出行、生态环境、电子支付、居住条件、日常购物中选取两个令你印象最深的方面进行介绍，并谈谈你对中国发展的感想。 写作要点： 1.你选择的两个方面的具体变化； 2.你对中国飞速发展的感受。 写作要求： 1.演讲稿应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2.演讲稿100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：扫描二维码scan a QR code Hello, everyone! I’m Alex. I came to China as an exchange student more than ten years ago. Now I’m back in China, and I find life here has greatly changed. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening! 【答案】 例文： Hello, everyone! I’m Alex. I came to China as an exchange student more than ten years ago. Now I’m back in China, and I find life here has greatly changed. First, transport has improved a lot. High-speed trains run across the country. They are much faster and more comfortable than before. We can travel between cities in just a few hours. Second, mobile payment is widely used. We can scan a QR code to pay for almost everything in shops or restaurants. We seldom use cash now. I am truly amazed by China’s rapid development. It makes our life easier and more convenient. I feel proud of what China has achieved. I believe China will be even stronger and more beautiful in the future. Thanks for listening! 【详解】写作步骤： [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：演讲稿，用一般现在时和现在完成时为主（对比过去用一般过去时） 明确要点：根据题目要求，包含：从五个方面（交通出行、生态环境、电子支付、居住条件、日常购物）中选取两个，介绍具体变化；对中国飞速发展的感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/my）为主 注意事项：词数控制在100词左右；题目给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数；选取两个方面来写，不要多写；行文连贯，符合演讲语境。 [第二步：构思布局] 四段式结构： 开头段：已给出（自我介绍+重返中国的总体感受） 第二段：具体介绍两个方面的变化（如交通出行） 第三段：谈谈对中国发展的感受（惊叹、自豪、期待） 结尾段：已给出（感谢聆听） [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：具体变化（选择两个） 交通出行：high-speed trains/faster and more comfortable/shared bikes/subways 生态环境：cleaner air/more green parks/blue skies 电子支付：mobile payment/scan a QR code/pay for almost everything/seldom use cash 居住条件：bigger houses/better living environment 日常购物：online shopping/delivery is fast/choose from many products 句型：First, ... has improved a lot./Second, ... is widely used./We can.../... than before. 要点二：对中国飞速发展的感受 感受词：amazed/proud/surprised 影响：makes our life easier and more convenient 展望：I believe China will be even stronger and more beautiful in the future. 句型：I am truly amazed by.../I feel proud of... 12．伟人对世界产生了巨大的影响。是什么使他们成为了伟人？请根据以下提示，以“What makes a great person”为题写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。 提示： 1. Who is the greatest person in your mind? (e.g., Yuan Longping, Tu Youyou, Confucius...) 2. What do you know about him or her? (Achievements, spirit, etc.) 3. How has he or she influenced the world? 注意： （1）短文须包括以上内容，可适当发挥，语言流畅，逻辑清晰，书写规范； （2）词数：80-100词。 What makes a great person ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： What makes a great person In my mind, the greatest person is Yuan Longping. He was a great scientist who worked hard to solve the food problem. He spent most of his life growing hybrid rice. Because of his work, millions of people in China and around the world could have enough food. What makes him great is not just his achievement, but also his simple life and never-give-up spirit. He always kept working even when he was old.   Yuan Longping influenced the world by feeding so many people. His story inspires us to work hard for a better world. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文/人物介绍类文章，以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 明确要点：心中最伟大的人是谁、对他/她的了解（成就、精神等）、他/她如何影响世界 确定人称：第三人称（he/him）和第一人称（I/my）为主 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，需涵盖所有提示内容 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明心中最伟大的人物 主体段：介绍该人物的成就和精神 结尾段：阐述其世界影响力及个人感悟 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：人物选择 人物选择：Yuan Longping/Tu Youyou/Confucius/Mother Teresa等 表达方式：In my mind, the greatest person is.../I think...is the greatest person等 要点二：成就与贡献 袁隆平：grow hybrid rice/solve the food problem/feed millions of people等 屠呦呦：discover artemisinin/help treat malaria/save many lives等 孔子：have wise ideas/teach about kindness/help build Chinese culture等 要点三：精神品质 精神表达：simple life/never-give-up spirit/hard-working/kind等 奋斗历程：spent most of his life doing.../kept working even when old等 要点四：世界影响 影响表达：feed so many people/save millions of lives/influence the world/help shape culture等 个人感悟：inspire us to work hard/teach us to never give up/make the world a better place等 13．某英文网站正在开展以“致敬伟大发明家”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的发明家，他/她为什么是你最喜欢的发明家以及你从他/她身上学到了什么。字数120字左右。 提示词：scientist, invent, great, teach 提示问题： 1. Who is your favourite inventor? 2. Why is he/she your favourite inventor? 3. What did you learn from him/her?   There are many famous inventors. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文：   There are many famous inventors. My favourite one is Thomas Edison. He was a great American scientist who invented over 1,000 things, including the light bulb.​​   ​He is my favourite inventor not only because of his brilliant inventions, but also because of his positive attitude. His famous saying, “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration,” has taught me a lot. It shows that hard work is the key to success, not just talent.​​ ​  From him, I learned that we should never give up easily when facing difficulties. His spirit encourages me to keep trying in my own study and life. He is truly a great person to learn from.​ 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步：开篇点明最喜欢的发明家是托马斯·爱迪生，并简要介绍其身份和代表性发明； 第二步：从发明成就和个人态度两个维度阐述喜欢原因，重点引用其名言说明成功真谛； 第三步：总结从爱迪生身上学到的道理，说明其精神对个人的积极影响。 ［亮点词汇］ ①brilliant杰出的 ②positive积极的 ③not only ... but also...不但……而且…… ［高分句型］ ①He was a great American scientist who invented over 1,000 things, including the light bulb. (运用who引导定语从句) ②He is my favourite inventor not only because of his brilliant inventions, but also because of his positive attitude. (运用not only ... but also...并列连词结构) 14．题目：My Ways to Improve Memory 假设你校英语报正在举办“学习方法与技巧”主题征文活动。请你写一篇短文，分享你提升记忆力的方法。要求： 1. 包含以下三方面内容： 你曾经遇到的记忆困难 你使用的至少两种提升记忆力的方法 这些方法带来的效果或你的感悟 2. 词数80左右 3. 以下划线句子为开头（不计入总词数） 答题区 My Ways to Improve Memory Memory plays an important role in our daily learning. Here are my ways to improve it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： My Ways to Improve Memory Memory plays an important role in our daily learning. Here are my ways to improve it. I used to forget English words easily, even right after memorizing them. That made me upset. Then I learned about spaced repetition—reviewing words after one day, three days, and one week. This method has worked wonders for me. I also used mind maps to connect new words with old knowledge. Besides, I made sure to get enough sleep. These strategies have greatly improved my memory. Now I feel more confident in my studies. I believe that with the right methods, anyone can improve their memory. 【详解】写作步骤解析 [第一步：审题立意] 确认文体：这是一篇方法分享类说明文，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 明确要点：需包含曾经遇到的记忆困难、至少两种提升记忆力的方法以及方法带来的效果或感悟 确定人称：第一人称 (I/my) 注意事项：词数80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 第一段：承接已给出开头，引出记忆困难 第二段：介绍提升记忆力的方法 第三段：阐述方法带来的效果或感悟 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：记忆困难 困难描述：used to forget English words easily/even right after memorizing them/couldn’t remember what I learned the day before/had trouble recalling facts in exams等 感受：That made me upset/I felt frustrated/I worried about my grades等 具体说明：I used to forget English words easily, even right after memorizing them. That made me upset. 要点二：提升记忆力的方法 方法一：spaced repetition/reviewing words after one day, three days, and one week/review regularly at intervals/practice active recall/test yourself instead of just reading等 方法二：use mind maps to connect new words with old knowledge/create pictures in my mind/use association techniques/put information into stories等 方法三：get enough sleep/have a good rest before exams/keep a healthy diet/exercise regularly等 其它方法：take notes in class/use colours to highlight key points/teach others what I have learned等 具体说明：Then I learned about spaced repetition—reviewing words after one day, three days, and one week. This method has worked wonders for me. I also used mind maps to connect new words with old knowledge. Besides, I made sure to get enough sleep. 要点三：效果与感悟 效果：These strategies have greatly improved my memory./I remember things much better now./My grades have gone up.等 感受：Now I feel more confident in my studies./I feel less stressed about exams.等 感悟：I believe that with the right methods, anyone can improve their memory./Good memory habits take time but they pay off.等 15．假定你是李华，你班将举行以“Changes in My Learning”为主题的英语分享会。请结合图示信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，与同学们分享你学习上的变化。 注意： 1.短文须包含图中三个要点，所给词汇仅供参考，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 词数80~100。 Changes in My Learning ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Changes in My Learning Hello everyone! I am Li Hua. I am very happy to share the changes in my learning with you. In the past, I used to memorize word lists, but I found that I forgot them easily. Now, I have changed my ways of learning. First, I review my lessons in time. Second, I try to connect new knowledge with my daily life. What’s more, doing group work with my classmates helps me a lot. Because of these changes, I feel more confident in my studies. I really enjoy learning now and these experiences are unforgettable. Thank you for listening! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：发言稿，属于应用文，以一般过去时、一般现在时为主，注意时态对比 明确要点：过去的学习方式、现在的学习方法、学习后的感受（思维导图三个要点必须全部包含） 确定人称：第一人称 (I/my) 注意事项：词数控制 80–100 词；发言稿要有开头问候与结尾致谢；不得出现真实个人信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段：问候 + 自我介绍，引出主题，开启分享 主体段：对比过去与现在的学习变化，把思维导图里的学习方法要点写清楚 结尾段：表达感受，总结升华，致谢结束 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：过去的学习 词汇表达：used to memorize word lists/forgot them easily/learned words by rote/had trouble remembering words等 要点二：现在的学习方法 词汇表达：review my lessons in time/connect …with…/group work/take notes/discuss ideas/put what I learn into use/learn from classmates等 效果说明：helps me a lot/learn much more easily/open up my mind/improve my understanding等 要点三：学习感受 词汇表达：confident/unforgettable/happy/meaningful等 作用效果： feel more confident in my studies/really enjoy learning/these experiences are unforgettable/make great progress等 试卷第1页（共3页） 试卷第1页（共3页） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $