Unit 3 writing 2026-2027学年沪教版英语九年级上册

9AU3 Writing 广州市越秀区教育局 There is no place like home. 家无与伦比。 East or west, home is the best. 金窝银窝，不如自家草窝。 。 Family is like a nest, which is warm and safe. 家就像一个窝，温暖而安全 Home is where the heart is. 家是心之所系。 Last summer, we went on a camping trip with my uncle's family. One morning, we decided to have a fishing competition. There was a prize for the person who caught the most fish. I was determined to win the prize! When everyone was ready, we all went to our favourite spots and started fishing. At the end of the day, there were six fish in my basket. Surely this was enough to win! But then I looked in my little brother's basket. He had seven fish! I thought it would be a real shame if he beat me, so I did something terrible: I removed two fish from his basket. “They're too small,” I said, and threw them back into the river. 例文1 An unforgettable moment when who what activity “my” inner thoughts Development problem my mistake “my” inner thoughts situation My little brother immediately started crying. No one believed him when he tried to tell the others what had happened, so they gave me the prize. But at that moment, I felt really awful. I told everyone the truth and gave the prize to my little brother. We all laugh about it now, but that day, I learnt an important lesson. If you cheat, it'll make you feel bad in the end. It's just not worth it! result my feelings my action my reflection and the lesson that I learnt Every time I meet difficult choices in life, a sweet moment with my parents is still fresh in my memory. It happened on a quiet winter afternoon. I accidentally broke my neighbor’s window when playing outside. I wanted to hide my mistake because no one saw me. However, my parents patiently talked with me about matters of right and wrong. They did not blame me but looked at me with admiration when I decided to apologize on my own. We went to the neighbor’s house together and corrected my mistake bravely. This simple experience taught me a lifelong lesson. It is not about avoiding trouble for ourselves, but about being honest and responsible whenever we make mistakes. From then on, I always choose to do the right thing even though no one is watching me. 例文2 introduce an unforgettable moment when my mistake my parents’ attitude our action to correct my mistake share the lesson I learnt Its influence on me An Unforgettable Moment with My Family Last summer afternoon, I learned to ride a bike with my father in the community park. At first, I was very scared. I kept falling off the bike. My father held the back of the bike tightly and cheered for me softly every time I fell. He told me not to give up and helped me stand up again and again. After trying many times, I finally rode the bike alone for a long way. I was so excited and moved at that moment. I felt my father’s quiet and deep love. This moment is special because it not only taught me how to ride a bike, but also let me know my family will always support me when I meet difficulties. I will keep this warm memory in my heart forever. when & what my feeling problem my father’s help result my feelings sum up the special moment and express feelings 写作四大必备要素（满分逻辑） 1.Time and place 时间与地点：  交代事件发生的具体时间、场景 （节日、周末、假期、家中、公园）                                                 2.Activities 活动过程:  描写家人一起的具体行为、互动细节、完整经过 3.Feelings 内心感受：  描写当时的真实情绪、感动、开心、温暖、感恩等心理变化。 4.What made it special 特殊意义：  点明这件事为什么难忘、带给自己的成长 感悟与家风传承（全文升华点、高分关键） When and where What How do you feel? Why Problems/difficulties My parents’ attitude/help Result Lessons that I learnt Influence on me Inner thoughts U3 Writing 【短语积累】 一、描述家庭活动场景类短语 1. _____________________一次愉快的家庭出游 2. ____________________一顿特别的周日早午餐 3. _____________________ 温馨的生日庆祝 4. _____________________一次推心置腹的谈心 5. _____________________一起度过节日 6. _____________________短途旅行 7. _____________________和父母一起做志愿 8. _____________________和父母聊天 a fun family outing a special Sunday brunch a warm birthday celebration a heart-to-heart talk spend the holiday together take a short trip volunteer with parents chat with parents 二、动作情感的短语 1. __________________________为我打气、安慰我 2. __________________________熬夜照顾我 3. __________________________分享童年往事 4. __________________________鼓励我不要放弃 5. __________________________聊聊我的校园生活 6. __________________________满心幸福 7. __________________________感动又心怀感恩 8. __________________________难忘的瞬间 cheer me up stay up to look after me share childhood stories encourage me not to give up chat about my school life full of happiness feel moved and thankful    unforgettable moment 三、升华主旨类短语 1. ____________________在我心中留下深刻印记 2. _____________________永远珍藏这段时光 3. _____________________学会勇敢面对困难 4. _____________________和家人变得更亲近 5. _____________________教会我爱的意义 6. _____________________满屋欢声笑语 leave an unforgettable mark in my mind treasure this moment forever learn to face difficulties bravely get much closer to family teach me the value of love fill the room with laughter 四、本单元的重点短语 1. _____________________记忆犹新 2._____________________钦佩地 3._____________________有机会做 4._____________________ 遭遇；碰到 5._____________________ 把…付诸实践 6._____________________不是….而是 7. _____________________是非的问题 8._____________________做某事有困难 1.  2. 3. 4. 5.  6.  7.  8. be fresh in one’s memory with admiration  have a chance to do come up against  put... into practice not… but matters of right and wrong have trouble doing ① 开头段·引入场景（开篇万能） 1.生活中有许多美好的回忆，但有一段家庭时光让我记忆犹新。   2.一次普通的家庭相聚，成为了我最珍贵的回忆。      3.每当我回想起这件事，我依然感到无比温暖。   There are many sweet memories in my life, but one family moment stays fresh in my mind.   An ordinary family gathering turned into my most precious memory.  Whenever I look back on it, I still feel extremely warm. ② 中间段·描写时间地点+活动过程（主体高分） 1.正是除夕夜在奶奶家，我们全家人度过了无比欢乐的时光。 It was on New Year’s Eve at my grandma’s house that we enjoyed great fun as a whole family. （强调句加分） 2.我们一起做各式各样的事，屋子里满是欢声笑语。   We carried out all kinds of activities hand in hand, filling the room with laughter. （现在分词作伴随状语） 3.那是一个晴朗的周末，我和家人在家共度美好时光。  It was a sunny weekend, and I spent wonderful time with my family at home. 4.我们包饺子时，父母和我分享了他们童年的趣事。 While we were making dumplings, my parents shared interesting stories from their childhood. (while 时间状从） 5.在整个过程中，我的家人一直耐心地陪伴和鼓励我。 During the whole process, my family always accompanied and encouraged me patiently. ③ 结尾段·抒发感受+升华主题（收尾满分） 1.那一天的经历让我深深体会到亲情的珍贵。 The experience on that day made me realize how precious family love is. 2.这段美好的回忆一直温暖着我的内心，让我更加珍惜家人。 This beautiful memory warms my heart all the time and teaches me to value my family. 3.我忽然意识到，家人最简单的陪伴就是最大的幸福。（高频高分句型） It suddenly hit me that the simplest company with family is the greatest happiness. 4.这次难忘的经历让我成长，也让我的家庭关系更加紧密。 This unforgettable experience helped me grow and made our family bond much stronger. 5.我会永远珍藏这段独一无二的家庭回忆。 I will keep this unique family memory in my heart forever.   话题分析 写一篇关于难忘家庭时刻的文章 　本单元以 Family Traditions（家庭传统与家庭温情）为核心话题，文体属于记叙文（叙事作文）。写作核心任务：记述一段真实、温暖、令人难忘的家庭经历，完整交代事件背景、活动过程、个人心情与特殊意义，展现亲情、陪伴、家风与成长的积极主题。在叙述过程中正确使用系动词。 开头：开门见山，点明最难忘的家庭小事 中间：详细叙事，写清楚事件全过程 结尾：抒发感受 + 点明这件事的特殊意义，升华亲情主题 写作四大必备要素（满分逻辑） 1.Time and place 时间与地点：  交代事件发生的具体时间、场景 （节日、周末、假期、家中、公园）                                                 2.Activities 活动过程:  描写家人一起的具体行为、互动细节、完整经过 3.Feelings 内心感受：  描写当时的真实情绪、感动、开心、温暖、感恩等心理变化。 4.What made it special 特殊意义：  点明这件事为什么难忘、带给自己的成长、感悟与家风传承（全文升华点、高分关键） When and where What How do you feel? Why 1. 我最喜欢的家庭传统是每周日晚上一起吃一顿丰盛的晚餐。 My favorite family tradition is having a big dinner together every Sunday evening. 2. 这已经是我们家多年的传统了。 It has been our tradition for many years. 3. 每个周日，我的父母早早下班回家，烹制美味的饭菜。 Every Sunday, my parents come home early from work and cook delicious food. 4. 我的祖父母也会来我们家。 My grandparents also come to our house. 5. 我们围坐在餐桌旁，分享这一周发生在我们身上的事情。 We sit around the table and share what happened to us during the week. 6. 我们开心地说笑。 We laugh and talk happily. 7. 有时候晚饭后我们还会一起玩游戏。 Sometimes we also play games after dinner. 8. 这个传统让我们一家人更加亲密。 This tradition makes our family closer. 9. 我总是期待周日夜晚的到来。 I always look forward to Sunday evenings. 10. 这是我一周当中最快乐的时光。 It is the happiest time of my week. The most memorable moment with my family was the night we had a big birthday party for my grandma last year. It happened at our home on a warm Saturday evening. All my relatives came to our house. My parents and I prepared a big dinner and a beautiful birthday cake. When my grandma walked into the room, we all sang "Happy Birthday" to her. She was so surprised and happy that tears came to her eyes. We ate the cake together and talked about old times. At that moment, I felt so warm and loved. This moment will always be fresh in my memory. I learnt that the best gift we can give to our family is our time and love. An Unforgettable Moment with My Family 1. 和家人在一起最难忘的瞬间，是去年我们为奶奶举办盛大生日派对的那个夜晚。 The most memorable moment with my family was the night we had a big birthday party for my grandma last year. 2. 事情发生在我们家里，一个温暖的周六傍晚。 It happened at our home on a warm Saturday evening. 3. 我所有的亲戚都来到了家里。 All my relatives came to our house. 4. 我和爸爸妈妈准备了丰盛的晚餐和一个漂亮的生日蛋糕。 My parents and I prepared a big dinner and a beautiful birthday cake. 5. 当奶奶走进房间时，我们一起为她唱《生日快乐》歌 When my grandma walked into the room, we all sang "Happy Birthday" to her. 6. 她又惊喜又开心，眼里泛起了泪水。 She was so surprised and happy that tears came to her eyes. 7. 我们一起吃蛋糕，聊起往日的时光。 We ate the cake together and talked about old times. 8. 在那一刻，我感到十分温暖，被浓浓的爱意包围。 At that moment, I felt so warm and loved. 9. 这个瞬间将永远清晰地留在我的记忆里。 This moment will always be fresh in my memory. 10. 我明白了，我们能给予家人最好的礼物，就是陪伴的时光与爱。 I learnt that the best gift we can give to our family is our time and love. My Favorite Family Tradition My favorite family tradition is having a big dinner together every Sunday evening. It has been our tradition for many years. Every Sunday, my parents come home early from work and cook delicious food. My grandparents also come to our house. We sit around the table and share what happened to us during the week. We laugh and talk happily. Sometimes we also play games after dinner. This tradition makes our family closer. I always look forward to Sunday evenings. It is the happiest time of my week. Think about a memorable moment you have shared with your family. Then think about what made it special. Some key information ① a talk with your father /mother 和父母的一次交谈 Time and place：one quiet evening；in the living‑room / my bedroom Activities：had a heart‑to‑heart talk；shared my worries；parents gave me advice；showed love and support Feelings：warm；moved；understood；loved ② a fun outing / vacation 一次有趣的外出/度假 Time and place：last summer holiday；to the mountain / the beach Activities：took photos；had a picnic；played games； laughed a lot；bought everyone together Feelings：happy；relaxed；excited；unforgettable ③ a holiday / birthday celebration 节日/生日庆祝 Time and place：Spring Festival / my birthday；at home Activities：a big family dinner；Spring Festival gathering； played board games；received gifts；made a wish；cut and shared the birthday cake Feelings：joyful；lucky；warm；special ④ a special Sunday brunch 特别的周日早午餐 Time and place：one Sunday morning；at home / in a nice restaurant Activities：cooked food together；enjoyed delicious food； chatted happily；shared little stories Feelings：pleasant；peaceful；sweet；meaningful Step 2 Write Write about your memorable moment with your family. Use the mind map in step 1 to help you. Find a family photo taken at that time and add it to the article. 第二步 写作 描写一个你和家人共度的难忘瞬间。 借助第一步中的思维导图来辅助写作。 找一张当时拍摄的家庭照片，并把它 添加到文章中。 One quiet evening, I had a heart‑to‑heart talk with my parents in my bedroom. I shared my worries about my schoolwork. They listened patiently and gave me lots of useful advice. They told me they would always give me love and support. Though it was just a short talk, it touched me deeply. I felt warm, moved and truly understood. I realized how much my family loved me. It is such a memorable moment that I will never forget. A talk with my parents One possible version Last summer holiday, my family went to the beach for a wonderful vacation. We took many nice photos and had a relaxing picnic by the sea. We played funny games and laughed a lot. The great time brought everyone together. We enjoyed the soft wind and beautiful views. I felt happy and relaxed during the trip. All the simple joys made this day unforgettable. I will keep this sweet memory deep in my heart. A fun outing with my family One possible version It was my birthday last weekend and we celebrated it at home. We had a big family dinner. After dinner, we played board games happily. I received lovely gifts and read sweet notes from my family. We lit candles on the cake and I made a quiet wish. I felt joyful and lucky to stay with my family. This warm and special celebration became one of my most memorable moments with my family. My birthday celebration One possible version One Sunday morning, my family enjoyed a special brunch at home. We cooked tasty food together in the kitchen. Later we sat at the table and enjoyed our delicious meal. We chatted happily and shared little interesting stories from our daily life. No one was in a hurry. I felt pleasant and peaceful. It was a simple but meaningful moment. The warm time with my family left a sweet memory in my mind. A special Sunday brunch One possible version Step 3 Check and revise Tick (✔) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it. 第三步 检查和修改 根据下面的清单检查并修改。 I included details about my memorable family moment. I used linking verbs and adjectives / nouns to describe how I felt. I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit. I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation. 例文1 Before-writing 书面表达 你们学校的英文校报开展主题为“How can we get on well with our parents?”的征文大赛。请根据要点，写一篇短文参加此次征文比赛,内容包括： 1. 部分孩子与父母相处的现状; 2. 与父母和谐相处的建议： ①我们应该理解和尊重我们的父母；②……；③……； 3. 号召同学们参与构建幸福的家庭。 布局结构、时态、人称 第一段 第二段 第三段 部分孩子与父母相处的现状 介绍3条与父母相处的建议 号召同学们构建幸福家庭 一般现在时 1.说明相处现状：许多孩子跟父母在沟通方面有困难。 Presentation Nowadays, many children have problems with family life.______ 2.父母孩子关系的重要性及引出本文的目的： Para.1 have trouble doing sth. so+adj.+that It is important for us to... Let me tell you sth about it. Para.1 Nowadays, many children have problems with family life. Some children have trouble communicating with their parents. Let me tell you something about it. Presentation Para.2 介绍3条父母孩子相处的建议： (1)我们应该理解和尊重我们的父母; (2)......; (3)...... Brain storming Can you think of any other suggestions? 建议2：我们可以和父母分享快乐,还可以分担忧伤。 (share … with …) We can share something happy and unhappy with parents. When/If we have problems, we can tell our parents to help us. Can you think of any other suggestions? 建议3：当我们空闲时，我们应该帮着做一些家务。 (help with...) We’d better help with some housework when we are free. Our parents must be very tired after a day’s work. Para.2 First, it is important for us to understand and respect our parents. When we want to tell them our opinions, we’d better talk to them in a polite way. In addition, we can share something happy and unhappy with parents. What’s more, we’d better help with some housework when we are free. Our parents must be very tired after a day’s work. Presentation Para.3 号召同学们构建幸福家庭： If we do all the things above, we’ll have a family full of love and happiness. The more we do, the happier our family life will be. 范文 Nowadays, many children have problems with family life. Some children have trouble communicating with their parents. Let me tell you something about it. First, it is important for us to understand and respect our parents. When we want to tell them our opinions, we’d better talk to them in a polite way. In addition, we can share something happy and unhappy with parents. What’s more, we’d better help with some housework when we are free. Our parents must be very tired after a day’s work. All in all, the more we do, the happier our family life will be. 例文2 家是远行归来时的避风港;家是黑暗道路旁的明灯;家是寒冷冬日中的暖阳。家庭生活对每一个孩子的成长都是至关重要的。学校将以“我爱我家”为主题开展演讲比赛,假如你是李辉,请你写一份英文演讲稿来介绍你的家庭生活。 内容包括:1.总体介绍(成员和个人物品方面); 2.具体描述(家务活、家庭活动和家规方面); 3.你对家庭生活的感受。 具体要求:1.词数80-100,开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数; 2.短文必须包括所给内容,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。 Hello, everyone. It's my pleasure to share my family life here. ___________________________________________________________ I love all my family very much. We have a close relationship, and we always support each other. Hello, everyone. It's my pleasure to share my family life here. There are five people in my family." I have got many things/ possessions: a big TV, a computer and a mobile phone. First,I often help with the housework. I wash the dishes and iron my shirts. Second,We like doing things together. We eat meals together every day, and my family always come to school events. What’s more,my parents set some rules for me. For example, unless I finish all my homework, I can't watch TV, and I can't go out with my friends either. I love all my family very much. We have a close relationship, and we always support each other. $