Unit 3 课时4 Writing（分层作业）英语新教材沪教版九年级上册

**基本信息** 本练习以“家庭传统”为主题，通过A/B/C组+拓展的分层设计，构建“短语积累→句型运用→语篇写作→中考衔接”的知识巩固路径，助力语言能力与思维品质协同提升。 **分层设计** |层次|知识覆盖|设计特色| |----|----------|----------| |A组|场景/情感/主旨类短语及单元重点短语|基础词汇填空，夯实语言基础| |B组|开头/中间/结尾段高分句型|提供万能模板，强化句式结构| |C组|叙事要素（时间/地点/活动/感受）及主题升华|完整写作逻辑训练，提升语篇组织能力| |拓展|中考话题写作（My Favorite Family Tradition）|适配中考题型，实现能力迁移|

Unit 3 Family traditions Section 3 Writing分层练习 【短语积累】 一、描述家庭活动场景类短语 1.a fun family outing 2.a special Sunday brunch 3.a warm birthday celebration 4.a heart-to-heart talk 5.spend the holiday together 6.take a short trip 7.volunteer with parents 8.chat with parents 二、动作情感的短语 1 / 9 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.cheer me up 2.stay up to look after me 3.share childhood stories 4.encourage me not to give up 5.chat about my school life 6.full of happiness 7.feel moved and thankful 8.unforgettable moment 三、升华主旨类短语 1.leave an unforgettable mark in my mind 2.treasure this moment forever 3.learn to face difficulties bravely 4.get much closer to family 5.teach me the value of love 6.fill the room with laughter 四、本单元的重点短语 1.be fresh in one’s memory 2.with admiration 3.have a chance to do 4.come up against 5.put... into practice 6.nott… but 7.matters of right and wrong 8.have trouble doing 【句式积累】 ① 开头段·引入场景（开篇万能） 1.There are many sweet memories in my life, but one family moment stays fresh in my mind. 2. An ordinary family gathering turned into my most precious memory. 3.Whenever I look back on it, I still feel extremely warm. ② 中间段·描写时间地点+活动过程（主体高分） 1.It was on New Year’s Eve at my grandma’s house that we enjoyed great fun as a whole family. （强调句加分） 2.We carried out all kinds of activities hand in hand, filling the room with laughter. （现在分词作伴随状语） 3.It was a sunny weekend, and I spent wonderful time with my family at home. 4.While we were making dumplings, my parents shared interesting stories from their childhood. （while 时间状语从句） 5.During the whole process, my family always accompanied and encouraged me patiently. ③ 结尾段·抒发感受+升华主题（收尾满分） 1.The experience on that day made me realize how precious family love is. 2.This beautiful memory warms my heart all the time and teaches me to value my family. 3.It suddenly hit me that the simplest company with family is the greatest happiness. 4.This unforgettable experience helped me grow and made our family bond much stronger. 5.I will keep this unique family memory in my heart forever. 【实战演练一】 An Unforgettable Moment with My Family Last summer afternoon, I learned to ride a bike with my father in the community park. At first, I was very scared. I kept falling off the bike. My father held the back of the bike tightly and cheered for me softly every time I fell. He told me not to give up and helped me stand up again and again. After trying many times, I finally rode the bike alone for a long way. I was so excited and moved at that moment. I felt my father’s quiet and deep love. This moment is special because it not only taught me how to ride a bike, but also let me know my family will always support me when I meet difficulties. I will keep this warm memory in my heart forever. 范文二 The most memorable moment with my family was the night we had a big birthday party for my grandma last year. It happened at our home on a warm Saturday evening. All my relatives came to our house. My parents and I prepared a big dinner and a beautiful birthday cake. When my grandma walked into the room, we all sang "Happy Birthday" to her. She was so surprised and happy that tears came to her eyes. We ate the cake together and talked about old times. At that moment, I felt so warm and loved. This moment will always be fresh in my memory. I learnt that the best gift we can give to our family is our time and love. 【实战演练二】 My Favorite Family Tradition My favorite family tradition is having a big dinner together every Sunday evening. It has been our tradition for many years. Every Sunday, my parents come home early from work and cook delicious food. My grandparents also come to our house. We sit around the table and share what happened to us during the week. We laugh and talk happily. Sometimes we also play games after dinner. This tradition makes our family closer. I always look forward to Sunday evenings. It is the happiest time of my week. $Unit 3 Family traditions Section 3 Writing分层练习 A组 巩固过关 C组 思维拔高 B组 能力进阶 拓展 链接中考 【短语积累】 一、描述家庭活动场景类短语 1 / 9 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1._____________________一次愉快的家庭出游 2.____________________一顿特别的周日早午餐 3._____________________ 温馨的生日庆祝 4._____________________一次推心置腹的谈心 5._____________________一起度过节日 6._____________________短途旅行 7._____________________和父母一起做志愿 8._____________________和父母聊天 【答案】1.a fun family outing 2.a special Sunday brunch 3.a warm birthday celebration 4.a heart-to-heart talk 5.spend the holiday together 6.take a short trip 7.volunteer with parents 8.chat with parents 二、动作情感的短语 1._____________________为我打气、安慰我 2._____________________熬夜照顾我 3._____________________分享童年往事 4._____________________鼓励我不要放弃 5._____________________聊聊我的校园生活 6._____________________满心幸福 7._____________________感动又心怀感恩 8._____________________难忘的瞬间 【答案】1.cheer me up 2.stay up to look after me 3.share childhood stories 4.encourage me not to give up 5.chat about my school life 6.full of happiness 7.feel moved and thankful 8.unforgettable moment 三、升华主旨类短语 1.____________________在我心中留下深刻印记 2._____________________永远珍藏这段时光 3._____________________学会勇敢面对困难 4._____________________和家人变得更亲近 5._____________________教会我爱的意义 6._____________________满屋欢声笑语 【答案】1.leave an unforgettable mark in my mind 2.treasure this moment forever 3.learn to face difficulties bravely 4.get much closer to family 5.teach me the value of love 6.fill the room with laughter 四、本单元的重点短语 1._____________________记忆犹新 2._____________________钦佩地 3._____________________有机会做 4._____________________ 遭遇；碰到 5._____________________ 把…付诸实践 6._____________________不是….而是 7._____________________是非的问题 8._____________________做某事有困难 【答案】1.be fresh in one’s memory 2.with admiration 3.have a chance to do 4.come up against 5.put... into practice 6.nott… but 7.matters of right and wrong 8.have trouble doing 【句式积累】 ① 开头段·引入场景（开篇万能） 1.生活中有许多美好的回忆，但有一段家庭时光让我记忆犹新。 There are many sweet memories in my life, but one family moment stays fresh in my mind. 2.一次普通的家庭相聚，成为了我最珍贵的回忆。 An ordinary family gathering turned into my most precious memory. 3.每当我回想起这件事，我依然感到无比温暖。 Whenever I look back on it, I still feel extremely warm. ② 中间段·描写时间地点+活动过程（主体高分） 1.正是除夕夜在奶奶家，我们全家人度过了无比欢乐的时光。 It was on New Year’s Eve at my grandma’s house that we enjoyed great fun as a whole family. （强调句加分） 2.我们一起做各式各样的事，屋子里满是欢声笑语。 We carried out all kinds of activities hand in hand, filling the room with laughter. （现在分词作伴随状语） 3.那是一个晴朗的周末，我和家人在家共度美好时光。 It was a sunny weekend, and I spent wonderful time with my family at home. 4.我们包饺子时，父母和我分享了他们童年的趣事。 While we were making dumplings, my parents shared interesting stories from their childhood. （while 时间状语从句） 5.在整个过程中，我的家人一直耐心地陪伴和鼓励我。 During the whole process, my family always accompanied and encouraged me patiently. ③ 结尾段·抒发感受+升华主题（收尾满分） 1.那一天的经历让我深深体会到亲情的珍贵。 The experience on that day made me realize how precious family love is. 2.这段美好的回忆一直温暖着我的内心，让我更加珍惜家人。 This beautiful memory warms my heart all the time and teaches me to value my family. 3.我忽然意识到，家人最简单的陪伴就是最大的幸福。（高频高分句型） It suddenly hit me that the simplest company with family is the greatest happiness. 4.这次难忘的经历让我成长，也让我的家庭关系更加紧密。 This unforgettable experience helped me grow and made our family bond much stronger. 5.我会永远珍藏这段独一无二的家庭回忆。 I will keep this unique family memory in my heart forever. 话题分析 写一篇关于难忘家庭时刻的文章 　本单元以 Family Traditions（家庭传统与家庭温情）为核心话题，文体属于记叙文（叙事作文）。写作核心任务：记述一段真实、温暖、令人难忘的家庭经历，完整交代事件背景、活动过程、个人心情与特殊意义，展现亲情、陪伴、家风与成长的积极主题。在叙述过程中正确使用系动词。 开头：开门见山，点明最难忘的家庭小事 中间：详细叙事，写清楚事件全过程 结尾：抒发感受 + 点明这件事的特殊意义，升华亲情主题 写作四大必备要素（满分逻辑） 1.Time and place 时间与地点： 交代事件发生的具体时间、场景（节日、周末、假期、家中、公园等） 2.Activities 活动过程: 描写家人一起的具体行为、互动细节、完整经过 3.Feelings 内心感受： 描写当时的真实情绪、感动、开心、温暖、感恩等心理变化。 4.What made it special 特殊意义： 点明这件事为什么难忘、带给自己的成长、感悟与家风传承（全文升华点、高分关键） 【实战演练一】 人间烟火岁岁流转，总有一段与家人相伴的温馨瞬间，深深镌刻在心底，成为难以忘怀的珍贵回忆。你是否也珍藏着一段与家人共度的难忘时光？不妨提笔落笔，书写这段温暖美好的经历，细细讲述这份专属温情与动人故事。文章内容包括： 1.Time and place 2.Activities 3.Feelings 4.What made it special _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ An Unforgettable Moment with My Family Last summer afternoon, I learned to ride a bike with my father in the community park. At first, I was very scared. I kept falling off the bike. My father held the back of the bike tightly and cheered for me softly every time I fell. He told me not to give up and helped me stand up again and again. After trying many times, I finally rode the bike alone for a long way. I was so excited and moved at that moment. I felt my father’s quiet and deep love. This moment is special because it not only taught me how to ride a bike, but also let me know my family will always support me when I meet difficulties. I will keep this warm memory in my heart forever. 范文二 The most memorable moment with my family was the night we had a big birthday party for my grandma last year. It happened at our home on a warm Saturday evening. All my relatives came to our house. My parents and I prepared a big dinner and a beautiful birthday cake. When my grandma walked into the room, we all sang "Happy Birthday" to her. She was so surprised and happy that tears came to her eyes. We ate the cake together and talked about old times. At that moment, I felt so warm and loved. This moment will always be fresh in my memory. I learnt that the best gift we can give to our family is our time and love. 【实战演练一】 每个人都有自己的家庭传统 ，这些传统承载着家庭的爱与回忆。请以“My Favorite Family Tradition”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的一个家庭传统。 注意 ：1. 词数 80-120 词 ； 2. 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ My Favorite Family Tradition My favorite family tradition is having a big dinner together every Sunday evening. It has been our tradition for many years. Every Sunday, my parents come home early from work and cook delicious food. My grandparents also come to our house. We sit around the table and share what happened to us during the week. We laugh and talk happily. Sometimes we also play games after dinner. This tradition makes our family closer. I always look forward to Sunday evenings. It is the happiest time of my week. $Unit 3 Family traditions Section 3 Writing分层练习 A组 巩固过关 C组 思维拔高 B组 能力进阶 拓展 链接中考 【短语积累】 一、描述家庭活动场景类短语 1 / 9 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1._____________________一次愉快的家庭出游 2.____________________一顿特别的周日早午餐 3._____________________ 温馨的生日庆祝 4._____________________一次推心置腹的谈心 5._____________________一起度过节日 6._____________________短途旅行 7._____________________和父母一起做志愿 8._____________________和父母聊天 二、动作情感的短语 1._____________________为我打气、安慰我 2._____________________熬夜照顾我 3._____________________分享童年往事 4._____________________鼓励我不要放弃 5._____________________聊聊我的校园生活 6._____________________满心幸福 7._____________________感动又心怀感恩 8._____________________难忘的瞬间 三、升华主旨类短语 1.____________________在我心中留下深刻印记 2._____________________永远珍藏这段时光 3._____________________学会勇敢面对困难 4._____________________和家人变得更亲近 5._____________________教会我爱的意义 6._____________________满屋欢声笑语 四、本单元的重点短语 1._____________________记忆犹新 2._____________________钦佩地 3._____________________有机会做 4._____________________ 遭遇；碰到 5._____________________ 把…付诸实践 6._____________________不是….而是 7._____________________是非的问题 8._____________________做某事有困难 【句式积累】 ① 开头段·引入场景（开篇万能） 1.生活中有许多美好的回忆，但有一段家庭时光让我记忆犹新。 2.一次普通的家庭相聚，成为了我最珍贵的回忆。 3.每当我回想起这件事，我依然感到无比温暖。 ② 中间段·描写时间地点+活动过程（主体高分） 1.正是除夕夜在奶奶家，我们全家人度过了无比欢乐的时光。 2.我们一起做各式各样的事，屋子里满是欢声笑语。 3.那是一个晴朗的周末，我和家人在家共度美好时光。 4.我们包饺子时，父母和我分享了他们童年的趣事。 5.在整个过程中，我的家人一直耐心地陪伴和鼓励我。 ③ 结尾段·抒发感受+升华主题（收尾满分） 1.那一天的经历让我深深体会到亲情的珍贵。 2.这段美好的回忆一直温暖着我的内心，让我更加珍惜家人。 3.我忽然意识到，家人最简单的陪伴就是最大的幸福。（高频高分句型） 4.这次难忘的经历让我成长，也让我的家庭关系更加紧密。 5.我会永远珍藏这段独一无二的家庭回忆。 话题分析 写一篇关于难忘家庭时刻的文章 　本单元以 Family Traditions（家庭传统与家庭温情）为核心话题，文体属于记叙文（叙事作文）。写作核心任务：记述一段真实、温暖、令人难忘的家庭经历，完整交代事件背景、活动过程、个人心情与特殊意义，展现亲情、陪伴、家风与成长的积极主题。在叙述过程中正确使用系动词。 开头：开门见山，点明最难忘的家庭小事 中间：详细叙事，写清楚事件全过程 结尾：抒发感受 + 点明这件事的特殊意义，升华亲情主题 写作四大必备要素（满分逻辑） 1.Time and place 时间与地点： 交代事件发生的具体时间、场景（节日、周末、假期、家中、公园等） 2.Activities 活动过程: 描写家人一起的具体行为、互动细节、完整经过 3.Feelings 内心感受： 描写当时的真实情绪、感动、开心、温暖、感恩等心理变化。 4.What made it special 特殊意义： 点明这件事为什么难忘、带给自己的成长、感悟与家风传承（全文升华点、高分关键） 【实战演练一】 人间烟火岁岁流转，总有一段与家人相伴的温馨瞬间，深深镌刻在心底，成为难以忘怀的珍贵回忆。你是否也珍藏着一段与家人共度的难忘时光？不妨提笔落笔，书写这段温暖美好的经历，细细讲述这份专属温情与动人故事。文章内容包括： 1.Time and place 2.Activities 3.Feelings 4.What made it special _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【实战演练一】 每个人都有自己的家庭传统 ，这些传统承载着家庭的爱与回忆。请以“My Favorite Family Tradition”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的一个家庭传统。 注意 ：1. 词数 80-120 词 ； 2. 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $