Unit 1 A world of cultures（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材译林版九年级下册

Unit 1 A world of cultures单元同步写作讲义 本单元写作隶属于“人与社会”主题语境下的 “多元文化理解与交流” 板块，紧扣单元核心主题 “A world of cultures”，聚焦世界不同国家的文化风貌、文化符号、地理与文化的关联以及跨文化生活体验。 写作要求学生能够： 1. 清晰介绍一个国家 / 地区的基础概况与文化特色； 2. 描述文化差异，表达对多元文化的理解、尊重与包容； 3. 分享异国生活 / 文化体验，传递文化感悟。 写作体裁以说明类短文为主，兼顾记叙、观点表达类写作，侧重考查学生信息整合、事物描述与逻辑表达的综合语言运用能力。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. cultural symbol 文化符号 2. be located in 坐落于 3. official language 官方语言 4. be famous for 因…… 闻名 5. places of interest 名胜古迹 6. traditional food 传统美食 7. be different from 与…… 不同 8. get used to 习惯于 9. be open-minded 思想开明的 10. learn about 了解 11. all over the world 世界各地 12. be good for 对…… 有益 句式积累 开头句： 1. ... is an amazing country with colourful cultures. 2. Let me introduce a famous cultural symbol of China to you. 中间句： 1. It is well known that the place has a long history of thousands of years. 2. You can not only enjoy beautiful sights but also taste delicious local food. 结尾句： 1. A trip to ... will be the experience of a lifetime. 2. Learning different cultures makes our life more colourful. 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：It is well known that Venice was built on water. 仿写：众所周知，长城是中国著名的文化符号。 _________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：If you are looking for ancient history, natural wonders or unique cultural experiences, China is one of the best choices. 仿写：如果你想要体验多元文化和特色美食，新加坡是一个很好的选择。 _________________________________________________________________________________________ 典例 假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友 Leslie 对中国传统文化很感兴趣，写信向你询问太极（tai chi）这一文化符号。请你根据以下提示，写一封回信介绍太极，词数 80-100。 要点提示： 基本特点：动作舒缓柔和，配合呼吸； 文化意义：中国传统文化的重要组成，体现 “和” 的思想； 流行现状：深受各年龄段人群喜爱，风靡全球。 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Leslie, I'm glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese culture. Let me tell you something about tai chi. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 题材：书信体说明文，介绍中国文化符号； ② 人称与时态：以第三人称为主介绍事物，时态以一般现在时为主； ③ 注意事项：需覆盖所有提示要点，可适当补充细节；注意书信格式与行文逻辑，避免语法和拼写错误。 谋篇布局 开头 承接来信，自然点明介绍对象——太极 中间 第一层：介绍太极的动作特点；第二层：阐释其文化内涵与意义；第三层：说明其流行现状 结尾 发出体验邀请，自然收尾 佳作展示 Dear Leslie, I'm glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese culture. Let me tell you something about tai chi. Tai chi is an important part of Chinese traditional culture. It is made up of a series of slow, gentle movements, and people need to control their breathing while practising it. It carries the idea of "harmony" in Chinese culture, and it is not only good for the body but also for the mind. Nowadays, tai chi is loved by people of all ages in China, and it has also become popular all over the world. If you come to China one day, I can take you to experience it. Yours, Li Hua 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： 1. be made up of 由…… 组成 2. a series of 一系列 3. carry the idea of 承载…… 的理念 4. be popular all over the world 风靡全球 高分句型： 1. It is made up of a series of slow, gentle movements, and people need to control their breathing while practising it. （while 引导时间状语从句的省略结构，句式简洁紧凑，体现高级语法运用能力） 2. It is not only good for the body but also for the mind. （not only...but also... 并列结构，清晰呈现太极的双重益处，逻辑鲜明） 3. If you come to China one day, I can take you to experience it. （条件状语从句收尾自然，既呼应话题又发出友好邀请，符合书信语境） （一） 1. （25-26 九上・南京玄武区・期中） 你的英国笔友 Simon 想了解一个有特色的亚洲国家。请你写一篇短文推荐印度，内容包括：地理位置、人口、语言、特色美食和著名景点。词数 80 左右。 （二） 2. （25-26 九上・苏州工业园区・期中） 某英文网站正在举办 “中国美食走向世界” 主题征文活动。请你写一篇短文介绍饺子（jiaozi），内容包括：外形特点、制作食材、食用方式以及文化意义。词数 80-100。 （三） 3. （25-26 九上・无锡滨湖区・期中） 请你以 “Learning to respect different cultures” 为题，结合本单元 Grace 移居意大利的经历，谈谈我们为什么要尊重不同文化，以及如何做到尊重文化差异。词数 90 左右。 （四） 4. （25-26 九上・常州天宁区・期中） 你的班级正在开展 “世界文化符号分享” 主题班会，请你写一篇发言稿，介绍一个你了解的外国文化符号（如俄罗斯芭蕾、巴西狂欢节、德国啤酒节等）。词数 80 左右。 （五） 5. （25-26 九上・扬州邗江区・期中） 请你以 “My experience of getting to know a new culture” 为题，写一篇短文，描述一次你了解异国文化的经历（如品尝外国美食、参加文化活动等），并谈谈你的收获。词数 90-100。 （六） 6. （25-26 九上・南通崇川区・期中） 新加坡被称为 “东西方文化交融的城市”。请你写一篇短文介绍新加坡的多元文化，从人口构成、饮食特色、文化特点三个方面进行说明。词数 80-100。 （七） 7. （25-26 九上・镇江京口区・期中） 某英语杂志社正在征稿，主题是 “Why should we learn about different cultures?”。请你写一篇短文投稿，阐述了解不同文化的意义。词数 80 左右。 （八） 8. （25-26 九上・泰州海陵区・期中） 请你推荐一座具有深厚文化底蕴的城市（国内外均可），说明推荐理由，包括文化特色、名胜古迹、美食等。词数 90 左右。 $Unit 1 A world of cultures单元同步写作讲义 本单元写作隶属于“人与社会”主题语境下的 “多元文化理解与交流” 板块，紧扣单元核心主题 “A world of cultures”，聚焦世界不同国家的文化风貌、文化符号、地理与文化的关联以及跨文化生活体验。 写作要求学生能够： 1. 清晰介绍一个国家 / 地区的基础概况与文化特色； 2. 描述文化差异，表达对多元文化的理解、尊重与包容； 3. 分享异国生活 / 文化体验，传递文化感悟。 写作体裁以说明类短文为主，兼顾记叙、观点表达类写作，侧重考查学生信息整合、事物描述与逻辑表达的综合语言运用能力。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. cultural symbol 文化符号 2. be located in 坐落于 3. official language 官方语言 4. be famous for 因…… 闻名 5. places of interest 名胜古迹 6. traditional food 传统美食 7. be different from 与…… 不同 8. get used to 习惯于 9. be open-minded 思想开明的 10. learn about 了解 11. all over the world 世界各地 12. be good for 对…… 有益 句式积累 开头句： 1. ... is an amazing country with colourful cultures. 2. Let me introduce a famous cultural symbol of China to you. 中间句： 1. It is well known that the place has a long history of thousands of years. 2. You can not only enjoy beautiful sights but also taste delicious local food. 结尾句： 1. A trip to ... will be the experience of a lifetime. 2. Learning different cultures makes our life more colourful. 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：It is well known that Venice was built on water. 仿写：众所周知，长城是中国著名的文化符号。 _________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：If you are looking for ancient history, natural wonders or unique cultural experiences, China is one of the best choices. 仿写：如果你想要体验多元文化和特色美食，新加坡是一个很好的选择。 _________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. It is well known that the Great Wall is a famous cultural symbol of China. 2. If you want to experience diverse cultures and special local food, Singapore is one of the best choices. 典例 假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友 Leslie 对中国传统文化很感兴趣，写信向你询问太极（tai chi）这一文化符号。请你根据以下提示，写一封回信介绍太极，词数 80-100。 要点提示： 基本特点：动作舒缓柔和，配合呼吸； 文化意义：中国传统文化的重要组成，体现 “和” 的思想； 流行现状：深受各年龄段人群喜爱，风靡全球。 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Leslie, I'm glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese culture. Let me tell you something about tai chi. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 题材：书信体说明文，介绍中国文化符号； ② 人称与时态：以第三人称为主介绍事物，时态以一般现在时为主； ③ 注意事项：需覆盖所有提示要点，可适当补充细节；注意书信格式与行文逻辑，避免语法和拼写错误。 谋篇布局 开头 承接来信，自然点明介绍对象——太极 中间 第一层：介绍太极的动作特点；第二层：阐释其文化内涵与意义；第三层：说明其流行现状 结尾 发出体验邀请，自然收尾 佳作展示 Dear Leslie, I'm glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese culture. Let me tell you something about tai chi. Tai chi is an important part of Chinese traditional culture. It is made up of a series of slow, gentle movements, and people need to control their breathing while practising it. It carries the idea of "harmony" in Chinese culture, and it is not only good for the body but also for the mind. Nowadays, tai chi is loved by people of all ages in China, and it has also become popular all over the world. If you come to China one day, I can take you to experience it. Yours, Li Hua 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： 1. be made up of 由…… 组成 2. a series of 一系列 3. carry the idea of 承载…… 的理念 4. be popular all over the world 风靡全球 高分句型： 1. It is made up of a series of slow, gentle movements, and people need to control their breathing while practising it. （while 引导时间状语从句的省略结构，句式简洁紧凑，体现高级语法运用能力） 2. It is not only good for the body but also for the mind. （not only...but also... 并列结构，清晰呈现太极的双重益处，逻辑鲜明） 3. If you come to China one day, I can take you to experience it. （条件状语从句收尾自然，既呼应话题又发出友好邀请，符合书信语境） （一） 1. （25-26 九上・南京玄武区・期中） 你的英国笔友 Simon 想了解一个有特色的亚洲国家。请你写一篇短文推荐印度，内容包括：地理位置、人口、语言、特色美食和著名景点。词数 80 左右。 【参考范文】 India is a wonderful Asian country with a long history and well worth visiting. It is located in South Asia. With about 1.4 billion people, it has one of the largest populations in the world. Hindi is its official language, and English is also widely used in big cities. Indian curry is famous all over the world, which is often served with rice or flatbread. The amazing Taj Mahal, made of special white stone, is a must-see attraction for tourists. [总体分析] ①题材：说明类推荐文，介绍国家概况与文化特色； ②时态：一般现在时； ③写作提示：完整覆盖地理位置、人口、语言、特色美食、著名景点五大要点，行文连贯，词数约 80 词。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点题，点明印度是值得游览的亚洲国家； 第二步：依次介绍地理位置、人口、官方语言、特色美食与著名景点； 第三步：收尾总结，强化景点推荐。 [亮点词汇] 1. be located in 坐落于 2. a must-see attraction 必看景点 3. be famous for 因…… 闻名 [高分句型] 1. With about 1.4 billion people, it has one of the largest populations in the world.（with 复合结构作伴随状语） 2. Indian curry is famous all over the world, which is often served with rice or flatbread.（which 引导非限制性定语从句） （二） 2. （25-26 九上・苏州工业园区・期中） 某英文网站正在举办 “中国美食走向世界” 主题征文活动。请你写一篇短文介绍饺子（jiaozi），内容包括：外形特点、制作食材、食用方式以及文化意义。词数 80-100。 【参考范文】 Jiaozi is a traditional Chinese food with a long history. It has a lovely half-moon shape and is made of flour with different fillings, usually a mix of pork, vegetables and other fresh ingredients. It can be boiled, fried or steamed, and people often eat it with vinegar. In China, jiaozi is not just food but also an important cultural symbol. It stands for family reunion, and people always make and eat jiaozi together during the Spring Festival. [总体分析] ①题材：说明类征文，介绍中国传统美食与文化内涵； ②时态：一般现在时； ③写作提示：涵盖外形特点、制作食材、食用方式、文化意义四个要点，突出文化属性，词数约 90 词。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇引入，点明饺子是有悠久历史的中国传统美食； 第二步：依次介绍外形特征、制作食材与常见食用方式； 第三步：升华主题，阐述饺子的文化象征与节日意义。 [亮点词汇] 1. traditional 传统的 2. stand for 代表 3. family reunion 家庭团圆 [高分句型] 1. It has a lovely half-moon shape and is made of flour with different fillings.（并列被动句，简洁描述事物特征） 2. In China, jiaozi is not just food but also an important cultural symbol.（not just...but also... 并列句型，升华文化内涵） （三） 3. （25-26 九上・无锡滨湖区・期中） 请你以 “Learning to respect different cultures” 为题，结合本单元 Grace 移居意大利的经历，谈谈我们为什么要尊重不同文化，以及如何做到尊重文化差异。词数 90 左右。 【参考范文】 Learning to respect different cultures The world is colourful because of its different cultures. Grace, a British girl, moved to Italy at the age of seven. She felt very uneasy at first because she could not speak Italian and knew nobody. However, with the help of her classmates, she gradually accepted the cultural differences and fell in love with Rome. Respecting different cultures helps us understand each other better. We should keep an open mind and learn about local customs when we meet different cultural backgrounds. It also helps us build true friendship across the world. [总体分析] ①题材：议论类短文，结合课文经历谈文化尊重的意义与做法； ②时态：一般过去时（叙述 Grace 的经历）+ 一般现在时（表达观点）； ③写作提示：结合 Grace 的移居经历，分别说明尊重文化差异的原因和具体做法，词数约 90 词。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点题，点明文化多样性让世界丰富多彩； 第二步：结合 Grace 的移居经历，论证文化差异与尊重的重要性； 第三步：提出具体做法，总结文化尊重的意义。 [亮点词汇] 1. accept 接受 2. keep an open mind 保持开放心态 3. custom 习俗 [高分句型] 1. However, with the help of her classmates, she gradually accepted the cultural differences and fell in love with Rome.（with 复合结构作状语，表伴随条件） 2. Respecting different cultures helps us understand each other better.（动名词短语作主语） （四） 4. （25-26 九上・常州天宁区・期中） 你的班级正在开展 “世界文化符号分享” 主题班会，请你写一篇发言稿，介绍一个你了解的外国文化符号（如俄罗斯芭蕾、巴西狂欢节、德国啤酒节等）。词数 80 左右。 【参考范文】 Dear classmates, Today I’d like to share a famous cultural symbol of Russia—ballet. Ballet has a special and important place in Russian culture, and many top ballet dancers around the world come from this country. The most famous work Swan Lake is known all over the world. It touches people’s hearts with its beautiful classical music and graceful dance moves. Russian ballet is a treasure of world art. I hope you can enjoy its beauty one day. Thank you. [总体分析] ①题材：主题班会发言稿，介绍外国文化符号； ②时态：一般现在时； ③写作提示：符合发言稿格式，突出文化符号的地位与艺术特色，词数约 80 词。 [写作步骤] 第一步：问候开场，点明要分享的俄罗斯文化符号 —— 芭蕾； 第二步：介绍其文化地位、代表作品与艺术特色； 第三步：总结评价，表达祝愿并收尾致谢。 [亮点词汇] 1. have a special place 占有特殊地位 2. graceful 优雅的 3. treasure 瑰宝 [高分句型] 1. The most famous work Swan Lake is known all over the world.（同位语补充说明结构） 2. It touches people’s hearts with its beautiful classical music and graceful dance moves.（with 介词短语表方式） （五） 5. （25-26 九上・扬州邗江区・期中） 请你以 “My experience of getting to know a new culture” 为题，写一篇短文，描述一次你了解异国文化的经历（如品尝外国美食、参加文化活动等），并谈谈你的收获。词数 90-100。 【参考范文】 My experience of getting to know a new culture Last term, I took part in a Japanese culture show held by our school’s international club. Before the show, I only knew Japanese culture from cartoons. At the show, I tried fresh sushi for the first time and watched a wonderful tea art performance. I also learned about the special culture behind traditional kimonos. This experience was really unforgettable and meaningful. It not only opened my eyes to the beauty of Japanese culture but also made me understand the importance of respecting different cultures around the world. [总体分析] ①题材：记叙类短文，分享文化体验经历与个人感悟； ②时态：一般过去时（叙述经历）+ 一般现在时（表达感悟）； ③写作提示：完整描述经历过程，点明个人收获与文化感悟，词数约 92 词。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇交代事件，点明自己参加学校日本文化展的经历； 第二步：具体描述活动中的体验内容； 第三步：总结收获，升华文化理解的主题。 [亮点词汇] 1. take part in 参加 2. open one’s eyes 开阔眼界 3. cultural difference 文化差异 [高分句型] 1. Last term, I took part in a Japanese culture show held by our school’s international club.（过去分词短语作后置定语） 2. It not only opened my eyes to the beauty of Japanese culture but also made me understand the importance of respecting different cultures.（not only...but also... 并列句型，表达双重收获） （六） 6. （25-26 九上・南通崇川区・期中） 新加坡被称为 “东西方文化交融的城市”。请你写一篇短文介绍新加坡的多元文化，从人口构成、饮食特色、文化特点三个方面进行说明。词数 80-100。 【参考范文】 Singapore is a small but beautiful Asian country where East meets West perfectly. Its population is mainly made up of Chinese, Malay and Indian people. Different groups bring their own traditions to the island, so you can enjoy food from all over the world, such as Chinese dim sum and Indian curry. Local food like chicken rice is also a mix of different cooking styles. People celebrate both traditional Chinese festivals and Western holidays. It is truly a wonderful place to experience mixed cultures. [总体分析] ①题材：说明类短文，介绍新加坡的多元文化特色； ②时态：一般现在时； ③写作提示：从人口构成、饮食特色、文化特点三个维度展开，结构清晰，词数约 85 词。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点题，点明新加坡 “东西方完美交融” 的核心特点； 第二步：分别从人口构成、饮食特色、节日文化三个方面具体说明； 第三步：总结评价，呼应开头主题。 [亮点词汇] 1. be made up of 由…… 组成 2. mix 融合 3. mixed cultures 多元文化 [高分句型] 1. Singapore is a small but beautiful Asian country where East meets West perfectly.（where 引导定语从句修饰地点） 2. People celebrate both traditional Chinese festivals and Western holidays.（both...and... 并列句型，体现文化交融） （七） 7. （25-26 九上・镇江京口区・期中） 某英语杂志社正在征稿，主题是 “Why should we learn about different cultures?”。请你写一篇短文投稿，阐述了解不同文化的意义。词数 80 左右。 【参考范文】 Why should we learn about different cultures? Learning about different cultures is very important for every one of us. First, it helps us open our minds and know more about the wonderful world. Second, it helps us communicate better and build true friendship with people from different backgrounds. It also teaches us to look at things from different angles. Besides, it makes our daily life more colourful and meaningful. In short, it helps us become more open-minded and grow better. [总体分析] ①题材：议论类征文，阐述学习多元文化的意义； ②时态：一般现在时； ③写作提示：层次清晰，分点阐述理由，观点明确，词数约 80 词。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇提出论点，点明了解不同文化的重要性； 第二步：分点阐述学习多元文化的具体意义； 第三步：总结全文，呼应开头观点。 [亮点词汇] 1. open one’s minds 开阔思想 2. background 背景 3. open-minded 思想开明的 [高分句型] 1. Learning about different cultures is very important for every one of us.（动名词短语作主语句型） 2. First, it helps us open our minds and know more about the wonderful world.（序数词分点论证，逻辑清晰） （八） 8. （25-26 九上・泰州海陵区・期中） 请你推荐一座具有深厚文化底蕴的城市（国内外均可），说明推荐理由，包括文化特色、名胜古迹、美食等。词数 90 左右。 【参考范文】 I’d like to recommend Xi’an, a famous ancient city in China, to you. It used to be the capital of many ancient dynasties, so it has deep cultural roots. There are many famous places of interest there. The world-famous Terracotta Army is one of the greatest ancient wonders, and you can also walk along the old City Wall. Besides, you can taste delicious local food and snacks such as roujiamo. Xi’an shows the long history of Chinese culture and is truly well worth a visit for everyone. [总体分析] ①题材：推荐类短文，介绍历史文化名城； ②时态：一般现在时； ③写作提示：涵盖文化特色、名胜古迹、特色美食三个要点，突出文化底蕴，词数约 90 词。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点明推荐城市西安，介绍其古都身份； 第二步：分别介绍名胜古迹与特色美食，突出文化底蕴； 第三步：总结评价，强化推荐理由。 [亮点词汇] 1. recommend 推荐 2. places of interest 名胜古迹 3. be well worth a visit 非常值得一游 [高分句型] 1. It used to be the capital of many ancient dynasties, so it has deep cultural roots.（so 连接并列句，表因果关系） 2. The world-famous Terracotta Army is one of the greatest ancient wonders.（one of + 形容词最高级 + 名词复数句型） $