Unit 5 Music音乐（单元写作精练）英语人教版必修第二册

Unit 5 Music音乐 单元写作精练 【主题】 Music 音乐 音乐喜好介绍、音乐意义、音乐活动推荐与邀请（介绍类说明文、建议信、活动邮件、投稿短文） 一、单元核心话题 人与自我、人与社会 —— 音乐喜好、音乐治愈力量、音乐的意义、音乐活动、音乐人与音乐文化 围绕写作常见情景：介绍个人音乐喜好、阐述音乐对生活/学习的积极影响、推荐音乐类型、介绍校园音乐活动、邀请他人参加音乐演出/比赛、感悟音乐带给人的治愈与陪伴；主要输出文体：个人喜好介绍短文、建议邮件、活动邀请信、英文投稿作文。 二、高频高考写作题型 1. 喜好介绍类邮件（最高频）：向外国笔友介绍自己喜欢的音乐类型、喜爱的歌手、听歌习惯 2. 观点感悟类投稿短文：阐述音乐的力量、音乐缓解压力、丰富生活、陶冶情操 3. 衍生高频题型：校园音乐活动邀请信、音乐比赛推荐、音乐社团介绍、音乐学习建议信 三、核心考点（写作层面，语法 + 句式 + 表达） 考点 1：现在分词作状语 / 定语【单元重点语法】 用于描述音乐带来的效果、作用，是本单元最加分、最高频语法 例：Music can calm us down, relieving our pressure and anxiety. 音乐可以平复心情，缓解压力焦虑。 考点 2：不定式作目的状语 / 后置定语【重点句式】 用于表达听歌、参加音乐活动的目的与意义，行文逻辑清晰 例：I often listen to music to relax myself after long study hours. 考点 3：喜好介绍+价值感悟类固定表达【重点表达要求】 ① 喜好表达：be fond of / prefer / be attracted to 音乐类型； ② 音乐功能：减压、治愈、振奋心情、陪伴、陶冶情操； ③ 观点升华：音乐无国界、丰富生活、助力成长。 四、写作命题特点 词数：80–100 词，新高考应用文标准区间； 命题逻辑：介绍喜好/活动 → 阐述音乐作用 → 表达感悟/发出邀请/给出建议； 写作基调：轻松积极、情感真挚、语言优美，侧重个人感受与生活美育。 【写作词汇短语】 1. classical/pop/folk music 古典/流行/民谣音乐 2. be fond of / prefer music 喜欢音乐 3. relieve pressure and anxiety 缓解压力与焦虑 4. calm one’s mood 平复心情 5. lift one’s spirits 振奋人心 6. cure negative feelings 治愈负面情绪 7. enrich our spare life 丰富课余生活 8. attend a music concert 参加音乐会 9. take part in a music competition 参加音乐比赛 10. develop one’s musical talent 培养音乐天赋 11. cultivate one’s taste 陶冶情操 12. beyond borders 无国界 13. serve as good company 充当美好陪伴 14. a source of happiness 快乐的源泉 15. appreciate music 欣赏音乐 16. create a relaxing atmosphere 营造轻松氛围 17. practice singing / playing instruments 练习唱歌/乐器 18. in one’s spare time 在某人空闲时间 19. have a positive effect on 对……有积极影响 20. broaden one’s artistic horizons 拓宽艺术视野 【写作句型】基础 + 升级配套句型 开头句（引入话题、喜好、活动） 基础版 When it comes to music, I’d like to share my favorite type with you. 谈及音乐，我想和你分享我最喜欢的类型。 I’m writing to introduce my music hobby and the power of music. 我写信旨在介绍我的音乐爱好以及音乐的力量。 I’m glad to receive your letter, in which you asked me about my taste in music. 很高兴收到你的来信，你询问了我的音乐喜好。 升级版 When it comes to music, an indispensable part of my life, I can’t wait to share my feelings with you. 谈及音乐——我生活中不可或缺的一部分，我迫不及待与你分享我的感受。 I’m writing to briefly introduce my music preference and its positive influence on me. 我写信简要介绍我的音乐喜好及其对我的积极影响。 Delighted to receive your letter where you showed curiosity about my daily music life. 很高兴收到你的来信，你对我的日常音乐生活充满好奇。 中间句（介绍喜好、阐述作用、表达观点） 基础版 I prefer pop music because it sounds beautiful and easy to understand. 我更喜欢流行音乐，因为它悦耳动听、通俗易懂。 As far as I’m concerned, music can help us relax after busy study. 在我看来，音乐能帮助我们在繁忙学习后放松身心。 I think it is a good way to relieve stress by listening to music. 我认为听音乐是缓解压力的好方式。 Listening to music is a good choice to enrich our spare time. 听音乐是丰富课余生活的绝佳选择。 In my opinion, there is no need to feel upset when you have music as company. 我认为有音乐相伴，你无需感到失落。 As to improving our mood, you should remember music always works wonders. 至于改善心情，请牢记音乐总能创造奇迹。 升级版 Pop music, featuring simple melodies and sincere lyrics, always touches my heart deeply. 流行音乐以简洁的旋律、真挚的歌词，总能深深触动我。 From my perspective, music serves as a powerful cure for pressure and negative emotions. 在我看来，音乐是治愈压力与负面情绪的良药。 It would be highly beneficial if you listen to soft music to calm down your anxious mind. 如果你聆听轻音乐平复焦虑，将会受益匪浅。 Attending school music activities is a preferable option to develop our artistic taste. 参加校园音乐活动是培养艺术素养的绝佳选择。 As far as I’m concerned, there is no point feeling tired when music brightens our daily life. 我认为，只要音乐点亮生活，便无需疲惫。 When it comes to self-improvement, keep in mind that music purifies our mind and cultivates our temperament. 谈及自我提升，牢记音乐能够净化心灵、陶冶情操。 结尾句（总结、邀请、祝愿、感悟升华） 基础版 If you are interested, we can listen to music together sometime. 如果你感兴趣，我们有空可以一起听音乐。 I’ll be more than happy if you can feel the beauty of music as I do. 如果你能和我一样感受音乐之美，我会十分开心。 I hope my introduction will be helpful to you. 希望我的介绍对你有所帮助。 I hope you will find music a good partner in your daily life. 希望你能发现音乐是日常生活中的好伙伴。 升级版 Should you have an interest in Chinese music, feel free to let me share more with you. 倘若你对中国音乐感兴趣，随时告诉我，我与你分享更多。 I would appreciate it if you could enjoy the charm of music in your spare time. 若你能在课余感受音乐魅力，我将不胜欣喜。 I hope my brief sharing can help you understand the beauty and power of music. 希望我的简短分享能让你理解音乐的美好与力量。 I hope you will find music soothing and worthy of accompanying your life. 希望你能发现音乐治愈人心，值得终身相伴。 【写作模板】 （一） Music 音乐（爱好介绍/感悟分享类书信） Dear _______, I'm delighted to receive your letter asking for my introduction to my favorite music / my music hobby / the power of music(个人音乐爱好/喜欢的音乐类型/音乐的意义). I'd like to make a detailed introduction. To begin with, I prefer pop/classical/folk music because it can calm my mood and relieve my study pressure(平复心情、缓解学习压力). Then, it also helps to listen to music in my spare time(空闲时间听音乐) to enrich my daily life. Besides, attending music activities is also a good choice, as music can purify our mind and lift our spirits(音乐可以净化心灵、振奋人心). I hope you will find my sharing meaningful and practical. Yours sincerely, Li Hua （二） Dear _______, I'm delighted to receive your letter asking for my introduction to ________(音乐爱好/喜欢的歌手/校园音乐活动/音乐的作用). I'd like to make a detailed introduction. To begin with, ________. Then, it also helps to ________. Besides, doing ________ is also a good choice, as ________. I hope you will find my sharing meaningful and practical. Yours sincerely, Li Hua （三）音乐活动邀请 Dear _______, I’m writing to invite you to take part in our school music concert / music festival / singing competition(校园音乐会/音乐节/歌唱比赛). The activity will be held in our school hall at 3 p.m. this Sunday(时间地点). We will enjoy various music performances, which can offer us a great chance to feel the charm of music. I sincerely hope you can join us and share your feelings. Looking forward to your participation. Yours sincerely, Li Hua （四）博客/征文观点类 The Power of Music Music plays an essential role in our daily life. It is not just a kind of entertainment, but a precious spiritual companion. For one thing, music can effectively relieve our pressure and calm our anxious mind, especially after long hours of study. For another, it can lift our spirits and cultivate our artistic taste. Simple as it is, music brings us endless warmth and strength. In short, music makes our life more colorful and meaningful. Yours, Li Hua 【原题呈现】 （2025・全国名校高三模拟） 假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Tom来信询问你的音乐喜好以及音乐对你生活的影响，请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括： 1. 你喜欢的音乐类型； 2. 音乐带给你的积极作用； 3. 邀请对方分享他的音乐爱好。 注意： (1) 写作词数应为 80 个左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, Glad to receive your letter asking about my taste in music.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours, Li Hua 【审题构思】 体裁：介绍类邮件（应用文） 主题：音乐喜好与音乐的价值，贴合 Unit5 Music 单元核心话题 三段式标准写作提纲 ① 开篇承接来信，引出音乐话题 ② 主体分层介绍：个人喜爱的音乐类型、音乐缓解压力、丰富生活的积极作用 ③ 结尾互动提问，邀请对方分享音乐爱好 人称：第一、二人称；时态：一般现在时为主 词数要求：80 词左右 【范文呈现】 基础标准版（保底得分，句式简单、词汇基础，80 词左右，适合基础薄弱学生） Dear Tom, Glad to receive your letter asking about my taste in music. I like pop music best because its melodies are beautiful and easy to understand. Music plays an important role in my daily life. When I feel tired or stressed after study, listening to music can help me relax and cheer up. Besides, it enriches my spare time and makes my life more colorful. I wonder what kind of music you like. Would you like to share your favorite music with me? Yours, Li Hua 高分进阶版（培优提分，复合句、高级词汇、非谓语，85 词左右，冲刺高分） Dear Tom, Glad to receive your letter asking about my taste in music. I am particularly fond of pop music, featuring gentle melodies and sincere lyrics. As a vital part of my life, music can relieve my study pressure and soothe my anxious mood. Listening to music in spare time also enriches my daily life, offering me spiritual comfort and positive energy. I’m curious about your music preference. It would be great if you could share your favorite music with me. Yours, Li Hua 进阶版亮点清单 替换基础词：be particularly fond of (like best)；soothe (calm)；anxious mood (tired feeling)；preference (taste) 高级结构：非谓语作后置定语 featuring...；非谓语作伴随状语 offering me...；it 形式宾语高分句型 高级短语：relieve pressure 缓解压力；spiritual comfort 精神慰藉；positive energy 正能量 【亮点解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文邮件。要求介绍个人音乐喜好及音乐的积极意义，贴合本单元“音乐的价值与个人审美”核心写作话题，为高一高频模拟题型。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 放松：relax → soothe 压力：stress → pressure 丰富：enrich → diversify 喜好：taste → preference 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Listening to music enriches my daily life. 拓展句：Listening to music enriches my daily life, which helps me keep a positive attitude towards study and life. 【点睛】 【高分句型 1】I am particularly fond of pop music, featuring gentle melodies and sincere lyrics.（现在分词作后置定语，单元核心语法） 【高分句型2】 Listening to music in spare time also enriches my daily life, offering me spiritual comfort and positive energy.（动名词作主语+现在分词作结果状语，双重高分结构） 【基础必做】 一、汉译英（主题核心要点翻译） 1. 听音乐放松身心、缓解学习压力 2. 培养音乐素养、陶冶个人情操 3. 音乐是治愈情绪、传递温暖的力量 4. 参加校园音乐节与歌唱比赛 5. 欣赏不同风格的音乐、拓宽艺术视野 6. 音乐无国界，拉近人与人的距离 【参考答案】 1. listen to music to relax ourselves and relieve study pressure 2. develop musical accomplishment and cultivate personal temperament 3. Music is a power that cures emotions and delivers warmth. 4. take part in school music festivals and singing competitions 5. appreciate different styles of music and broaden artistic horizons 6. Music has no borders and brings people closer. 二、句型仿写（单元核心高频句型） 句型1：Doing sth. enables sb. to do… 做某事使某人能够……（动名词主语高频句型） 例句：Listening to music enables us to keep a positive mood. (1) 欣赏轻音乐能帮助我们平复焦虑、放松大脑。 (2) 学习音乐能够提升我们的审美能力。 参考答案 (1) Enjoying light music enables us to calm anxiety and relax our minds. (2) Learning music enables us to improve our aesthetic ability. 句型2：..., doing… 现在分词作结果/伴随状语（单元核心语法） 例句：Music enriches our life, bringing us endless joy and energy. (1) 音乐能够治愈负面情绪，让我们更加乐观自信。 (2) 积极参与音乐活动可以锻炼胆量，培养团队精神。 参考答案 (1) Music can cure negative emotions, making us more optimistic and confident. (2) Taking an active part in music activities can build up our courage and develop team spirit. 句型3：serve as… 充当/起到……作用（高级万能短语） 例句：Music serves as a good companion in our daily life. (1) 音乐是缓解压力、调节心情的有效方式。 (2) 温柔的音乐可以充当治愈心灵的良药。 参考答案 (1) Music serves as an effective way to relieve pressure and adjust our mood. (2) Soft music can serve as good medicine to heal our soul. 【提升必做】 1.（2025·湖北高一模拟）音乐喜好介绍邮件 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Mike 最近学习压力大、心情低落，来信向你求助。请你回信推荐适合他听的音乐，并说明理由。要点如下： 1. 推荐音乐类型； 2. 音乐带来的治愈作用； 3. 送上鼓励与祝福。 注意：词数80左右，行文连贯。 Dear Mike, ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Mike, I’m sorry to know that you are suffering from heavy study pressure and low spirits recently. I strongly recommend you listen to soft classical music. It has gentle melodies that can calm your anxious mind and relax your tired body. Besides, beautiful music can lift your spirits and help you keep a positive attitude towards study and life. I hope music can bring you comfort and you will become cheerful again soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】 本篇为建议类邮件，贴合单元“音乐治愈、音乐减压”核心话题，侧重生活实际应用。 词汇积累 低落：low spirits → negative mood 平复焦虑：calm anxiety → soothe anxious feelings 振奋心情：lift spirits → boost mood 句式拓展 原句：It has gentle melodies that can calm your anxious mind. 拓展句：It has gentle melodies that can calm your anxious mind and relieve your long-term study pressure. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】I’m sorry to know that you are suffering from heavy study pressure and low spirits recently.（that宾语从句） 【高分句型2】It has gentle melodies that can calm your anxious mind and relax your tired body.（that定语从句） 2.（2025·广东佛山高一统考）英文投稿：音乐的力量 假定你是李华，你校英文报社正在举办题为 The Power of Music 的征文活动。请你投稿，内容包括： 1. 音乐在生活中的作用； 2. 你的个人感悟。 注意：词数80左右。 The Power of Music ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 The Power of Music Music is an indispensable part of our daily life, which plays a positive role in our growth. For one thing, music can effectively relieve our pressure and comfort our lonely hearts. For another, it cultivates our artistic taste and enriches our spiritual world. Regardless of languages, music conveys warmth and strength to everyone. In short, music makes our life more colorful and meaningful. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】 本篇为观点议论类短文，为本单元Reading for Writing核心体裁，侧重感悟升华。 词汇积累 不可或缺的：indispensable → essential 精神世界：spiritual world → inner world 传递：convey → deliver 句式拓展 原句：Music is an indispensable part of our daily life. 拓展句：Music is an indispensable part of our daily life, bringing us endless warmth and motivation. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Music is an indispensable part of our daily life, which plays a positive role in our growth.（which非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Regardless of languages, music conveys warmth and strength to everyone.（高级介词短语） 3.（2026·湖南长沙高一预测）校园音乐活动邀请信 假定你是李华，你校即将举办校园音乐节，请你写信邀请你的外教 Mr. Brown 参加并担任评委。内容包括： 1. 活动时间、地点； 2. 活动内容； 3. 邀请理由。 注意：词数100左右。 Dear Mr. Brown, ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Mr. Brown, I’m writing to invite you to serve as a judge at our school music festival. The festival will take place in the school stadium next Saturday afternoon. Students will put on various music performances, including singing and instrumental playing. Since you are professional in music, we sincerely hope you can join us and give us professional comments. Looking forward to your favorable reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】 本篇为高频活动邀请信，结合单元音乐话题，适配校园生活类写作。 词汇积累 担任评委：serve as a judge → work as a judge 举办：take place → be held 专业的：professional → expert 句式拓展 原句：Students will put on various music performances. 拓展句：Students will put on various music performances, showing their musical talent and passion. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】I’m writing to invite you to serve as a judge at our school music festival.（不定式作目的状语） 【高分句型2】Since you are professional in music, we sincerely hope you can join us.（since引导原因状语从句） 4.（2025·全国新高考模拟）音乐学习建议信 假定你是李华，你的笔友 Linda 想学一门乐器但无从下手，写信向你求助。请你回信给出建议，内容包括： 1. 选择适合自己的乐器； 2. 坚持练习、培养兴趣； 3. 享受音乐、放松身心。 注意：词数100左右。 Dear Linda, ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Linda, Glad to know that you plan to learn a musical instrument. Here are some practical suggestions for you. First, choose an instrument that suits your interest and personality. Interest is the best teacher. Besides, you need to stick to daily practice to make progress. Most importantly, never treat music learning as a burden. Instead, enjoy the process and let music bring you relaxation and happiness. I hope my advice will be helpful to you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】 本篇为建议信，聚焦音乐学习、兴趣培养，贴合单元育人主题。 词汇积累 坚持：stick to → insist on 取得进步：make progress → achieve improvement 负担：burden → pressure 句式拓展 原句：Interest is the best teacher. 拓展句：As we all know, interest is the best teacher, which inspires us to keep learning. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】choose an instrument that suits your interest and personality.（定语从句） 【高分句型2】never treat music learning as a burden.（否定祈使句+高级搭配） 5.（2025·江苏苏州高一阶段检测）音乐社团介绍邮件 假定你是李华，你的英国交换生朋友 Jack 想加入学校社团，请你写信向他介绍学校音乐社团。内容包括： 1. 社团日常活动； 2. 社团优势； 3. 欢迎加入。 注意：词数80左右。 Dear Jack, ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Jack, Knowing that you want to join a school club, I’d like to introduce our school music club to you. Our club holds regular activities every week, including singing training and music sharing. We can learn from each other and enjoy the beauty of music. Joining the club can enrich our spare life and help us make more like-minded friends. I sincerely welcome you to join us. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】 本篇为介绍类应用文，侧重校园音乐生活介绍。 词汇积累 定期的：regular → routine 志同道合的：like-minded → sharing the same interest 丰富生活：enrich life → diversify life 句式拓展 原句：We can learn from each other and enjoy the beauty of music. 拓展句：We can learn from each other and enjoy the beauty of music, relaxing ourselves from heavy study. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Knowing that you want to join a school club, I’d like to introduce…（现在分词作状语） 【高分句型2】Joining the club can enrich our spare life…（动名词作主语） 6.（2026·浙江杭州高一预测）博客投稿：如何用好音乐助力生活 假定你是李华，你校英语博客面向学生征集短文，主题为 Make Music Serve Our Life。请你投稿，内容包括： 1. 音乐的积极作用； 2. 合理利用音乐的建议。 注意：词数80左右。 Make Music Serve Our Life ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Make Music Serve Our Life Music is a precious treasure in our life, which can bring us strength and comfort. Properly enjoying music can relieve tiredness and improve our study efficiency. However, we should not listen to music while studying, which may distract us. It’s better to enjoy music after finishing study tasks. Let music brighten our life and serve us better. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】 本篇为单元核心博客文体，辩证看待音乐使用，贴合新高考思辨写作趋势。 词汇积累 适当的：properly → appropriately 提高效率：improve efficiency → boost efficiency 分散注意力：distract → take one’s attention away 句式拓展 原句：It’s better to enjoy music after finishing study tasks. 拓展句：It’s better to enjoy music after finishing study tasks, so that we can balance study and relaxation well. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】we should not listen to music while studying.（状语从句省略） 【高分句型2】which may distract us.（非限制性定语从句） 【拓展选做】 （2025・山东青岛高一模块检测） 假定你是李华，你将参加学校的英语分享活动，需要写一篇发言稿介绍中西音乐差异与魅力。请你写一篇短文，要点如下： 1. 中西音乐各自特色； 2. 你的看法与感悟。 注意：词数 100 左右；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Chinese traditional music and Western music have their unique charms respectively. Traditional Chinese music is soft and gentle, focusing on artistic conception and inner feelings. By contrast, Western music is usually powerful and passionate, bringing people strong spiritual impact. Despite their differences, both of them can purify our mind and enrich our life. In my view, music has no boundaries. We should appreciate different music styles and embrace diverse cultures. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】 本篇为拔高思辨类写作，对比中西音乐文化，难度高于常规题型，适合培优训练。 词汇积累 各自地：respectively → separately 意境：artistic conception → artistic mood 多样的：diverse → various 句式拓展 原句：We should appreciate different music styles and embrace diverse cultures. 拓展句：We should appreciate different music styles and embrace diverse cultures, broadening our artistic horizons. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】By contrast, Western music is usually powerful and passionate…（对比衔接高级句型） 【高分句型2】Despite their differences, both of them can purify our mind and enrich our life.（介词让步结构） 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 / 14 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 5 Music音乐 单元写作精练 【主题】 Music 音乐 音乐喜好介绍、音乐意义、音乐活动推荐与邀请（介绍类说明文、建议信、活动邮件、投稿短文） 一、单元核心话题 人与自我、人与社会 —— 音乐喜好、音乐治愈力量、音乐的意义、音乐活动、音乐人与音乐文化 围绕写作常见情景：介绍个人音乐喜好、阐述音乐对生活/学习的积极影响、推荐音乐类型、介绍校园音乐活动、邀请他人参加音乐演出/比赛、感悟音乐带给人的治愈与陪伴；主要输出文体：个人喜好介绍短文、建议邮件、活动邀请信、英文投稿作文。 二、高频高考写作题型 1. 喜好介绍类邮件（最高频）：向外国笔友介绍自己喜欢的音乐类型、喜爱的歌手、听歌习惯 2. 观点感悟类投稿短文：阐述音乐的力量、音乐缓解压力、丰富生活、陶冶情操 3. 衍生高频题型：校园音乐活动邀请信、音乐比赛推荐、音乐社团介绍、音乐学习建议信 三、核心考点（写作层面，语法 + 句式 + 表达） 考点 1：现在分词作状语 / 定语【单元重点语法】 用于描述音乐带来的效果、作用，是本单元最加分、最高频语法 例：Music can calm us down, relieving our pressure and anxiety. 音乐可以平复心情，缓解压力焦虑。 考点 2：不定式作目的状语 / 后置定语【重点句式】 用于表达听歌、参加音乐活动的目的与意义，行文逻辑清晰 例：I often listen to music to relax myself after long study hours. 考点 3：喜好介绍+价值感悟类固定表达【重点表达要求】 ① 喜好表达：be fond of / prefer / be attracted to 音乐类型； ② 音乐功能：减压、治愈、振奋心情、陪伴、陶冶情操； ③ 观点升华：音乐无国界、丰富生活、助力成长。 四、写作命题特点 词数：80–100 词，新高考应用文标准区间； 命题逻辑：介绍喜好/活动 → 阐述音乐作用 → 表达感悟/发出邀请/给出建议； 写作基调：轻松积极、情感真挚、语言优美，侧重个人感受与生活美育。 【写作词汇短语】 1. classical/pop/folk music 古典/流行/民谣音乐 2. be fond of / prefer music 喜欢音乐 3. relieve pressure and anxiety 缓解压力与焦虑 4. calm one’s mood 平复心情 5. lift one’s spirits 振奋人心 6. cure negative feelings 治愈负面情绪 7. enrich our spare life 丰富课余生活 8. attend a music concert 参加音乐会 9. take part in a music competition 参加音乐比赛 10. develop one’s musical talent 培养音乐天赋 11. cultivate one’s taste 陶冶情操 12. beyond borders 无国界 13. serve as good company 充当美好陪伴 14. a source of happiness 快乐的源泉 15. appreciate music 欣赏音乐 16. create a relaxing atmosphere 营造轻松氛围 17. practice singing / playing instruments 练习唱歌/乐器 18. in one’s spare time 在某人空闲时间 19. have a positive effect on 对……有积极影响 20. broaden one’s artistic horizons 拓宽艺术视野 【写作句型】基础 + 升级配套句型 开头句（引入话题、喜好、活动） 基础版 When it comes to music, I’d like to share my favorite type with you. 谈及音乐，我想和你分享我最喜欢的类型。 I’m writing to introduce my music hobby and the power of music. 我写信旨在介绍我的音乐爱好以及音乐的力量。 I’m glad to receive your letter, in which you asked me about my taste in music. 很高兴收到你的来信，你询问了我的音乐喜好。 升级版 When it comes to music, an indispensable part of my life, I can’t wait to share my feelings with you. 谈及音乐——我生活中不可或缺的一部分，我迫不及待与你分享我的感受。 I’m writing to briefly introduce my music preference and its positive influence on me. 我写信简要介绍我的音乐喜好及其对我的积极影响。 Delighted to receive your letter where you showed curiosity about my daily music life. 很高兴收到你的来信，你对我的日常音乐生活充满好奇。 中间句（介绍喜好、阐述作用、表达观点） 基础版 I prefer pop music because it sounds beautiful and easy to understand. 我更喜欢流行音乐，因为它悦耳动听、通俗易懂。 As far as I’m concerned, music can help us relax after busy study. 在我看来，音乐能帮助我们在繁忙学习后放松身心。 I think it is a good way to relieve stress by listening to music. 我认为听音乐是缓解压力的好方式。 Listening to music is a good choice to enrich our spare time. 听音乐是丰富课余生活的绝佳选择。 In my opinion, there is no need to feel upset when you have music as company. 我认为有音乐相伴，你无需感到失落。 As to improving our mood, you should remember music always works wonders. 至于改善心情，请牢记音乐总能创造奇迹。 升级版 Pop music, featuring simple melodies and sincere lyrics, always touches my heart deeply. 流行音乐以简洁的旋律、真挚的歌词，总能深深触动我。 From my perspective, music serves as a powerful cure for pressure and negative emotions. 在我看来，音乐是治愈压力与负面情绪的良药。 It would be highly beneficial if you listen to soft music to calm down your anxious mind. 如果你聆听轻音乐平复焦虑，将会受益匪浅。 Attending school music activities is a preferable option to develop our artistic taste. 参加校园音乐活动是培养艺术素养的绝佳选择。 As far as I’m concerned, there is no point feeling tired when music brightens our daily life. 我认为，只要音乐点亮生活，便无需疲惫。 When it comes to self-improvement, keep in mind that music purifies our mind and cultivates our temperament. 谈及自我提升，牢记音乐能够净化心灵、陶冶情操。 结尾句（总结、邀请、祝愿、感悟升华） 基础版 If you are interested, we can listen to music together sometime. 如果你感兴趣，我们有空可以一起听音乐。 I’ll be more than happy if you can feel the beauty of music as I do. 如果你能和我一样感受音乐之美，我会十分开心。 I hope my introduction will be helpful to you. 希望我的介绍对你有所帮助。 I hope you will find music a good partner in your daily life. 希望你能发现音乐是日常生活中的好伙伴。 升级版 Should you have an interest in Chinese music, feel free to let me share more with you. 倘若你对中国音乐感兴趣，随时告诉我，我与你分享更多。 I would appreciate it if you could enjoy the charm of music in your spare time. 若你能在课余感受音乐魅力，我将不胜欣喜。 I hope my brief sharing can help you understand the beauty and power of music. 希望我的简短分享能让你理解音乐的美好与力量。 I hope you will find music soothing and worthy of accompanying your life. 希望你能发现音乐治愈人心，值得终身相伴。 【写作模板】 （一） Music 音乐（爱好介绍/感悟分享类书信） Dear _______, I'm delighted to receive your letter asking for my introduction to my favorite music / my music hobby / the power of music(个人音乐爱好/喜欢的音乐类型/音乐的意义). I'd like to make a detailed introduction. To begin with, I prefer pop/classical/folk music because it can calm my mood and relieve my study pressure(平复心情、缓解学习压力). Then, it also helps to listen to music in my spare time(空闲时间听音乐) to enrich my daily life. Besides, attending music activities is also a good choice, as music can purify our mind and lift our spirits(音乐可以净化心灵、振奋人心). I hope you will find my sharing meaningful and practical. Yours sincerely, Li Hua （二） Dear _______, I'm delighted to receive your letter asking for my introduction to ________(音乐爱好/喜欢的歌手/校园音乐活动/音乐的作用). I'd like to make a detailed introduction. To begin with, ________. Then, it also helps to ________. Besides, doing ________ is also a good choice, as ________. I hope you will find my sharing meaningful and practical. Yours sincerely, Li Hua （三）音乐活动邀请 Dear _______, I’m writing to invite you to take part in our school music concert / music festival / singing competition(校园音乐会/音乐节/歌唱比赛). The activity will be held in our school hall at 3 p.m. this Sunday(时间地点). We will enjoy various music performances, which can offer us a great chance to feel the charm of music. I sincerely hope you can join us and share your feelings. Looking forward to your participation. Yours sincerely, Li Hua （四）博客/征文观点类 The Power of Music Music plays an essential role in our daily life. It is not just a kind of entertainment, but a precious spiritual companion. For one thing, music can effectively relieve our pressure and calm our anxious mind, especially after long hours of study. For another, it can lift our spirits and cultivate our artistic taste. Simple as it is, music brings us endless warmth and strength. In short, music makes our life more colorful and meaningful. Yours, Li Hua 【原题呈现】 （2025・全国名校高三模拟） 假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Tom来信询问你的音乐喜好以及音乐对你生活的影响，请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括： 1. 你喜欢的音乐类型； 2. 音乐带给你的积极作用； 3. 邀请对方分享他的音乐爱好。 注意： (1) 写作词数应为 80 个左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, Glad to receive your letter asking about my taste in music.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours, Li Hua 【审题构思】 体裁：介绍类邮件（应用文） 主题：音乐喜好与音乐的价值，贴合 Unit5 Music 单元核心话题 三段式标准写作提纲 ① 开篇承接来信，引出音乐话题 ② 主体分层介绍：个人喜爱的音乐类型、音乐缓解压力、丰富生活的积极作用 ③ 结尾互动提问，邀请对方分享音乐爱好 人称：第一、二人称；时态：一般现在时为主 词数要求：80 词左右 【范文呈现】 基础标准版（保底得分，句式简单、词汇基础，80 词左右，适合基础薄弱学生） Dear Tom, Glad to receive your letter asking about my taste in music. I like pop music best because its melodies are beautiful and easy to understand. Music plays an important role in my daily life. When I feel tired or stressed after study, listening to music can help me relax and cheer up. Besides, it enriches my spare time and makes my life more colorful. I wonder what kind of music you like. Would you like to share your favorite music with me? Yours, Li Hua 高分进阶版（培优提分，复合句、高级词汇、非谓语，85 词左右，冲刺高分） Dear Tom, Glad to receive your letter asking about my taste in music. I am particularly fond of pop music, featuring gentle melodies and sincere lyrics. As a vital part of my life, music can relieve my study pressure and soothe my anxious mood. Listening to music in spare time also enriches my daily life, offering me spiritual comfort and positive energy. I’m curious about your music preference. It would be great if you could share your favorite music with me. Yours, Li Hua 进阶版亮点清单 替换基础词：be particularly fond of (like best)；soothe (calm)；anxious mood (tired feeling)；preference (taste) 高级结构：非谓语作后置定语 featuring...；非谓语作伴随状语 offering me...；it 形式宾语高分句型 高级短语：relieve pressure 缓解压力；spiritual comfort 精神慰藉；positive energy 正能量 【亮点解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文邮件。要求介绍个人音乐喜好及音乐的积极意义，贴合本单元“音乐的价值与个人审美”核心写作话题，为高一高频模拟题型。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 放松：relax → soothe 压力：stress → pressure 丰富：enrich → diversify 喜好：taste → preference 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Listening to music enriches my daily life. 拓展句：Listening to music enriches my daily life, which helps me keep a positive attitude towards study and life. 【点睛】 【高分句型 1】I am particularly fond of pop music, featuring gentle melodies and sincere lyrics.（现在分词作后置定语，单元核心语法） 【高分句型2】 Listening to music in spare time also enriches my daily life, offering me spiritual comfort and positive energy.（动名词作主语+现在分词作结果状语，双重高分结构） 【基础必做】 一、汉译英（主题核心要点翻译） 1. 听音乐放松身心、缓解学习压力 2. 培养音乐素养、陶冶个人情操 3. 音乐是治愈情绪、传递温暖的力量 4. 参加校园音乐节与歌唱比赛 5. 欣赏不同风格的音乐、拓宽艺术视野 6. 音乐无国界，拉近人与人的距离 二、句型仿写（单元核心高频句型） 句型1：Doing sth. enables sb. to do… 做某事使某人能够……（动名词主语高频句型） 例句：Listening to music enables us to keep a positive mood. (1) 欣赏轻音乐能帮助我们平复焦虑、放松大脑。 (2) 学习音乐能够提升我们的审美能力。 句型2：..., doing… 现在分词作结果/伴随状语（单元核心语法） 例句：Music enriches our life, bringing us endless joy and energy. (1) 音乐能够治愈负面情绪，让我们更加乐观自信。 (2) 积极参与音乐活动可以锻炼胆量，培养团队精神。 句型3：serve as… 充当/起到……作用（高级万能短语） 例句：Music serves as a good companion in our daily life. (1) 音乐是缓解压力、调节心情的有效方式。 (2) 温柔的音乐可以充当治愈心灵的良药。 【提升必做】 1.（2025·湖北高一模拟）音乐喜好介绍邮件 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Mike 最近学习压力大、心情低落，来信向你求助。请你回信推荐适合他听的音乐，并说明理由。要点如下： 1. 推荐音乐类型； 2. 音乐带来的治愈作用； 3. 送上鼓励与祝福。 注意：词数80左右，行文连贯。 Dear Mike, ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2.（2025·广东佛山高一统考）英文投稿：音乐的力量 假定你是李华，你校英文报社正在举办题为 The Power of Music 的征文活动。请你投稿，内容包括： 1. 音乐在生活中的作用； 2. 你的个人感悟。 注意：词数80左右。 The Power of Music ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3.（2026·湖南长沙高一预测）校园音乐活动邀请信 假定你是李华，你校即将举办校园音乐节，请你写信邀请你的外教 Mr. Brown 参加并担任评委。内容包括： 1. 活动时间、地点； 2. 活动内容； 3. 邀请理由。 注意：词数100左右。 Dear Mr. Brown, ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4.（2025·全国新高考模拟）音乐学习建议信 假定你是李华，你的笔友 Linda 想学一门乐器但无从下手，写信向你求助。请你回信给出建议，内容包括： 1. 选择适合自己的乐器； 2. 坚持练习、培养兴趣； 3. 享受音乐、放松身心。 注意：词数100左右。 Dear Linda, ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5.（2025·江苏苏州高一阶段检测）音乐社团介绍邮件 假定你是李华，你的英国交换生朋友 Jack 想加入学校社团，请你写信向他介绍学校音乐社团。内容包括： 1. 社团日常活动； 2. 社团优势； 3. 欢迎加入。 注意：词数80左右。 Dear Jack, ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 6.（2026·浙江杭州高一预测）博客投稿：如何用好音乐助力生活 假定你是李华，你校英语博客面向学生征集短文，主题为 Make Music Serve Our Life。请你投稿，内容包括： 1. 音乐的积极作用； 2. 合理利用音乐的建议。 注意：词数80左右。 Make Music Serve Our Life ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展选做】 （2025・山东青岛高一模块检测） 假定你是李华，你将参加学校的英语分享活动，需要写一篇发言稿介绍中西音乐差异与魅力。请你写一篇短文，要点如下： 1. 中西音乐各自特色； 2. 你的看法与感悟。 注意：词数 100 左右；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 / 14 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $