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人教版高中英语 选择性必修二·单元语法写作范文(修改完善版)
颜色图例:红色=本单元单词 蓝色=本单元重点语法 绿色=其他语法现象
每篇均完整覆盖本单元全部单词(含词形变化),并综合体现限制性/非限制性定语从句、名词性从句(主语/宾语/表语/同位语)、虚拟语气、独立主格、非谓语动词(不定式/动名词/过去分词)、倒装、强调句型等语法现象。
Unit 1 Science and Scientists The Broad Street Pump: Evidence Beats Fear
写作题材:Write a news report about a scientific breakthrough(科学突破新闻报道)
语法点:过去分词作状语
(By Li Hua, School Science Post)
London, 1854. Confronted with a deadly epidemic, the city panicked: cholera broke out; thousands came down with severe diarrhoea and dehydration; frustrated people split into two contradictory camps. The truth is that the infection spread through water. Most subscribed to bad air; Snow suspected them of spreading germs infecting households.
Determined, Snow, in charge of the investigation, traced multiple deaths to a Broad Street water pump supplying raw, not pure, water. The pump that fed the street was removed; its handle gone, statistics recorded a substantial decrease. The fact that every death was linked to it settled it once and for all: the pump, to blame for it. Such methods, he argued, could transform medicine. Guided by solid findings, his intervention founded epidemiology, reshaping thinking, opening the way to vaccines. What's more, he attended to Queen Victoria; the initial drop held thanks to him.
Qian Xuesen, outstanding, gifted, shifted from mechanical engineering to aviation, determined to defend his homeland; at the Jet Propulsion Laboratory he studied jet, missile, plasma technology. Furthermore, besides a patriotic heart, his steady leadership inspired assistants, mechanics; above all, he poured energy into China's aerospace programme.
Stephen Hawking, brilliant astronomer whose mind outran a failing body, studied astronomy at Cambridge; unlike Fred Hoyle, he defended the big bang theory, rebuilding the theoretical framework through telescopes. Under a microscope, protein fills every cell; a virus, smaller than any germ. Vivid demonstration: non-Newtonian fluid poured on stage struck solid; light cast a rainbow shadow.
What makes a great scientist is testing every concept — trusting data instead of rumour, hunting faults, turning abstract concepts to concrete proof. Had each generation depended on authority alone, science would stall. To think like him, ask why. It is evidence that settles a question, not opinion — only then does doubt lift.
【中文翻译】
伦敦,1854年。面对一场致命的疫情,全城恐慌:数千人患上严重的腹泻与脱水;沮丧的人们分成了相互矛盾的两派。事实是:感染经由水传播。大多数人信奉“坏空气”之说,而斯诺怀疑他们正传播着感染千家万户的细菌。
斯诺下定决心。他负责调查,将多起死亡追溯到布罗德街的一台水泵——它供应的是生水,而非洁净水。喂养街道的那台水泵被拆除;把手取走后,统计数字大幅下降。每例死亡都与它有关——这一事实一劳永逸地解决了问题:水泵正是罪魁祸首。他指出,这样的方法能够变革医学。在可靠发现的指引下,他的干预开创了流行病学,重塑了思维,为疫苗开辟了道路。此外,他还为维多利亚女王诊疗;多亏了他,起初的下降得以保持。
钱学森出类拔萃、天资聪颖,从机械工程转向航空,决心报效祖国;在喷气推进实验室,他研究喷气、导弹与等离子体技术。此外,除了一颗爱国心,他沉稳的领导力鼓舞着助手与机械师;最重要的是,他把精力倾注到中国的航天事业中。
斯蒂芬·霍金——头脑跑赢衰弱身体的卓越宇宙学家——在剑桥研修天文学;与弗雷德·霍伊尔不同,他捍卫大爆炸理论,借助望远镜重建了宇宙的理论框架。显微镜下,蛋白质充满每个细胞,病毒比任何细菌都小。一次生动的演示:倒在台上的非牛顿流体一敲即固;光投下一道彩虹般的影子。
造就伟大科学家的,是检验每个概念:相信数据而非传言,搜寻缺陷,把抽象概念变成具体证据。若每代人都只依赖权威,科学将停滞。想拥有他那样的思维,就追问为什么。让问题水落石出的是证据,不是观点——只有这样,怀疑才会散去。
Unit 2 Bridging Cultures An Email from Rome: Growing Between Two Cultures
写作题材:Write an email about studying abroad and bridging cultures(留学与跨文化交流邮件)
语法点:名词性从句(主语/宾语/表语/同位语从句综合)
Dear Chris,
Since my departure from Rome, life feels tremendous, complex. What I did not expect was how heavy culture shock would feel: a dramatic new setting, overwhelming surroundings; homesickness depressed me. Had I stayed in my comfort zone, I would never have grown. My English qualification won me a place; the programme cost an arm and a leg; a firm shared the expense — budget held.
Advisor Aisha — a reasonable tutor — motivated me to participate in seminars, engage in debates, speak up, strengthening motivation. I got involved in a club; my first presentation taught me that participation builds competence. The friends with whom I now study come from every continent, cooperating from every angle. As far as I know, the Belt and Road Initiative supports such exchanges — no wonder participation keeps booming.
I recall one evening that changed my outlook: an ambitious applicant, asked about her ambition, dreamed of becoming a culture-bridging envoy. Rome, whose ancient streets surround us, became my classroom. Generally speaking, exposure to another culture brings insight, perspective, sharper grasp: beyond expectation, I cite examples from both histories, reading my favourite novel's Italian edition.
Adaptation has been gradual. Exposed to Italian meals, I behave like a local; flatmates and I take turns cooking — I feel at home; a messenger group links us nightly. We side with reason, arguments logical, weighing each outcome. Whether homesickness would win is no longer the question: I deny it no longer, optimistic. As far as I am concerned, the gain — a mature, competent, global self — outweighs every difficulty.
In summary, to anyone hesitating, I say: stepping outside your comfort zone qualifies you fastest. Encouraged by Aisha, I applied; confidence growing daily, challenges shrink. It is the struggle that has shaped me. Only by speaking up can we truly take part.
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
【中文翻译】
自从离开罗马,生活既精彩又复杂。我没有料到的是文化冲击竟如此沉重:全新的环境、令人应接不暇的周围一切;乡愁令人沮丧。若当初躲在舒适区里,我永远不会成长。我的英语资历为我赢得名额;项目贵得要命;一家公司分担了费用——预算撑住了。
导师艾莎——一位通情达理的辅导老师——鼓励我参加研讨课、投入辩论、大胆发声,增强了动力。我加入了一个社团;第一次展示让我懂得:参与造就能力。如今与我同窗的伙伴来自各大洲,从各个角度合作。据我所知,“一带一路”倡议正支持这样的交流——难怪参与人数持续攀升。
我记得一个改变我看法的夜晚:一位雄心勃勃的申请者被问及抱负时,梦想成为沟通文化的使者。罗马——古老街道环绕着我们——成了我的课堂。总的来说,接触另一种文化带来真知灼见、全新视角与更深的领悟:出乎意料,我既能引用两种历史的例子,也读起了最爱的那本小说的意大利语版。
适应,渐进的过程。尝惯了意大利菜,我举止已像本地人;我与室友轮流做饭——颇有宾至如归之感;一个群聊应用让我们夜夜相连。我们站在理性一边,讨论合乎逻辑,权衡每种结果。乡愁能否获胜已不再是问题;我不再否认它,反而乐观起来。在我看来,这份收获——一个更成熟、更称职、更具世界观的自我——胜过一切困难。
总而言之,想对犹豫的人说:走出舒适区,最能让你快速获得成长的资格。在艾莎的鼓励下,我递交了申请;信心日增,挑战缩小。正是奋斗塑造了我。只有敢于发声,我们才能真正参与。
此致
敬礼
李华
Unit 3 Food and Culture We Are What We Eat: A Taste of China
写作题材:Write a passage introducing Chinese food culture(中国饮食文化短文)
语法点:过去完成时及其被动语态
Chinese cuisine is world-famous; the reason is fundamental: what we eat shapes who we are. Prior to my first visit, my cafeteria-formed ideas had judged a whole country by one chilli, imagining dishes fiery — somewhat wrongly. The truth is that Chinese food consists of regional styles.
Sichuan: a bold chef sliced fat off pork, boiled red braised pork with peppercorn, chilli, white pepper — hot-tempered. Xinjiang: Kazak herders, whose lamb kebabs draw queues, season sliced onion; on the coast, elegant dim sum is steamed, buns stuffed with pork, bean curd, cabbage or garlic — hotel buns triple-filled, a case in point. The chefs' association ranks it first.
Earlier, at St Andrews, I had cooked haggis and dough pies, tasted bacon, ham, sausage, plus a local brand's figs, olives. Our canteen chef held that every food belongs to a category — balance is the trick. "Madam," he smiled — a pearl of wisdom — "chew slowly."
Jean Anthelme Brillat-Savarin said: we are what we eat; doctors refer to diet and health going hand in hand — the fact that diet relates to mood, accepted in many ways. Vegetables provide vitamins, fibre; dairy makes up a balanced plate; dessert: exceptional fresh fruit. Moderation is ideal: a modest quantity consumed, sugar at a minimum, calories stable. On the other hand: junk food, regardless of advertising, out — vegetarian or not.
Overall, consistent habits are up to us. A diet that mixes vegetables, dairy and lean pork builds strength; had I grown up on snacks, cooking would have passed me by. Dough rolled thin, pan steaming, we gather: cooking matters as much as eating. Served with vinegar, even a bun delights. It is balance that defines good food. To eat well, start with fresh ingredients, a good recipe; rarely does a careful meal disappoint.
【中文翻译】
中国菜举世闻名,原因很根本:吃什么,决定我们是什么样的人。第一次到中国之前,我那套被西式食堂塑造的观念,曾用一根辣椒评判整个国家,以为菜肴皆火辣——这有几分错误。事实是:中国菜由多个地方菜系构成。
四川:大胆的厨师剔去猪肉肥膘,用花椒、辣椒与白胡椒烹制红烧肉——火辣脾气。新疆:哈萨克牧民——他们的羊肉串排起长队——给切好的洋葱调味;沿海地区,精致的点心被蒸出,包子塞满猪肉、豆腐、白菜或蒜——酒店的包子三馅俱全,便是典型一例。厨师协会把它排在首位。
更早的时候,在圣安德鲁斯,我就已做过哈吉斯和面团馅饼,尝过培根、火腿、香肠,还有本地品牌的无花果、橄榄。我们食堂的主厨认为:每种食物都自有类别——平衡才是诀窍。“夫人,”他笑着说——智慧的珍珠——“要细嚼慢咽。”
让·安泰尔姆·布里亚-萨瓦兰说过:人如其食;医生们也提到饮食与健康携手同行——饮食关系到情绪,这一事实在许多方面得到认可。蔬菜提供维生素与纤维;奶制品构成均衡的餐盘;甜点首推新鲜水果,非同一般。适度才是理想:食量节制、糖量压到最低、热量稳定。另一方面:垃圾食品,无论广告如何,靠边站——无论你是否素食。
总之,习惯的一贯要靠我们自己。混合蔬菜、奶制品与少量瘦肉的饮食造就体力;若我从小只吃零食,做饭便与我无缘。面团擀薄、蒸锅冒气,我们相聚:做饭与吃饭同样重要。淋上醋端上桌,哪怕一个包子也令人欣喜。定义美食的是平衡。想吃得健康,从新鲜食材与好食谱开始;用心烹制的一餐很少令人失望。
Unit 4 Journey Across a Vast Land From the Atlantic to the Rockies: A Rail Journal
写作题材:Write a travel journal across a vast land(跨地域旅行日志)
语法点:省略(Ellipsis)
Dear Mum and Dad,
Writing from the observation car. Our train is bound west — this spectacular, long-anticipated journey. Jean-Philippe enrolled us via advertisement; in addition to a pleasant airline from Halifax to Vancouver, scenery, contrary to expectation, wasn't freezing cold: frost hung, mist over the bay, my bottle froze — the awesome bay literally took my breath away.
We went through Butchart Gardens — quarry turned garden, drill standing — a bunch of antique crafts filling a mall. A couple of hours ahead of schedule, we boarded the train that would pass through the Rockies: massive peaks into clouds; Lake Louise, whose water glows green, a misty curtain dropping from the shore; in the distance, a goat and a grizzly bear near Jasper; thunder astonishing. Ahead: prairie.
We proceeded to Edmonton, Winnipeg; steel bridges alongside Lake Huron; by dusk the St Lawrence appeared. All in all, highlights unforgettable — difficulties arising? Solved — anyhow, the only delay in the whole duration was one meal. We owe it to him: all the way from Ontario to Quebec, a French-accented photographer toasted us by the harbour; Montreal's cobblestone streets antique. Such trips are typical of Canada — a great number of travellers agree; in contrast to city life: pure freedom, as the idiom says.
The truth is that the best views come after the longest climbs. He said bears crossed the line at dawn. What struck me most was how strangers became family. The fact that people far from home still care remains.
Now bound for Toronto, then Niagara Falls; we'll pass through the border into Nova Scotia. Had I missed this trip, I'd regret it forever. To keep this journal coherent, nightly notes; travelling by rail teaches patience and wonder. Dusk falling, peaks vanish; tired but happy, I sleep. It is the journey that matters. Never have I seen such peaks.
【中文翻译】
此刻正从观景车厢写信。我们的火车正驶向西部——这段精彩而期盼已久的旅程。让-菲利普经广告为我们报了名;除了从哈利法克斯飞往温哥华的舒适航班,风景同样出乎意料地并不刺骨寒冷:薄霜悬空,薄雾覆湾,水壶冻住——美得惊人的海湾简直令我屏息。
我们游览了布查特花园——采石场改成的花园,钻机仍立——附近商场摆满成堆古董手工艺品。比原定时间早了几小时,我们登上那列将穿越落基山脉的火车:巍峨山峰没入云霄;路易斯湖——湖水泛绿——雾帘自岸垂落;远处,贾斯珀附近有山羊、灰熊;瀑布轰鸣,令人惊叹。前方:草原。
我们接着到埃德蒙顿、温尼伯;休伦湖畔钢桥矗立;黄昏时分圣劳伦斯河现身。总之,处处亮点难忘——偶有困难?当场解决——无论如何,整个旅程只误了一顿饭。这要归功于他:从安大略一路到魁北克,一位带法国口音的摄影师在海港边向我们举杯;蒙特利尔的鹅卵石街道古意盎然。这样的旅行正是加拿大的典型——许多旅行者都同意;与城市生活相比:纯粹的自由——正如谚语所说。
事实是:最美的风景总在最长攀登之后。他说,黎明时熊曾穿越铁轨。最打动我的是陌生人如何成了家人。身在千里之外的人们依然彼此关怀——这一事实常驻我心。
现在正驶向多伦多,接着尼亚加拉大瀑布;我们将穿过边境进入新斯科舍。若错过这次旅行,我会后悔终生。为了让日志条理清晰,每晚必记;乘火车旅行教会人耐心与惊奇。暮色四合,群峰隐没;又累又开心的我沉沉睡去。重要的是旅程本身。我从未见过这样的山峰。
Unit 5 First Aid What First Aid Taught Me
写作题材:Write a first-aid guide or an email describing an emergency and rescue(急救指南/急救经历)
语法点:名词性从句在急救语境中的运用(What... is that... 等句型)
What happened at a crowded diner one foggy morning in the suburbs taught me first aid's worth. Elderly Mr Taylor choked on his steak — purple-faced, unable to scream. Panic spread; we acted without delay. Our CPR leaflet returned: I remembered that a choking victim needs upward thrusts — obstruction: his throat.
Grabbed him: arms wrapped tightly round his waist, tight fist, firm motions, manual-style. Airway cleared, he swallowed again; we helped him to his feet, putting him at ease. A paramedic checked his vital signs, inserted an IV needle; the operator's ambulance came; the ward took him. Taylor, whose hands trembled, thanked fellow diners for their interrupted breakfast.
What matters next is speed. Burns are divided into three types; a minor acid splash or electric shock can harm an organ; stings inject toxins, training justified. Get burnt? Apply cool water to it; rays carry radiation. A swollen blister, millimetres wide, stays shut: loose fabric protects the layer underneath — nerves, the sense of touch. A sprained, swelling ankle? Should a child slip in the bathtub — hot baths relax, tiles betray — or an elderly person collapse on a carpet, lay him face up, stop bleeding, prevent delays from turning fatal.
The fact that anyone can learn these skills gives hope. Membership doubled: people suffer from a variety of emergencies, mosquito bites to drowning; practical techniques meet them. Never stand by: desperate moments want a firm slap, the Heimlich manoeuvre; breathing stopped? Mouth-to-mouth rescue breathing, CPR. Even the out-of-shape learn — never sleep in on training day.
Learning first aid means accepting responsibility for others' welfare. Inspired, I signed up for training. To make streets safer, join us: skills that take one afternoon to master save lives. It is ordinary people who make the difference. Never has a lesson felt so urgent.
【中文翻译】
郊区一个雾天的早晨,拥挤小餐馆里发生的事让我明白急救的价值。年长的泰勒先生被牛排噎住——脸色发紫,喊不出声。恐慌蔓延;我们立即行动。心肺复苏课的宣传单浮现在脑海:我记得被噎住的人需要向上冲击——堵塞物就卡在喉咙。
一把抓住他:双臂紧紧环住他的腰,握紧拳头,果断向上冲击——照手册的方法。气道畅通后,他能吞咽了;我们扶他站起,让他安心。急救人员检查生命体征,扎上静脉输液针;接线员的救护车赶到;病房接收了他。泰勒——双手颤抖——向为他中断早餐的食客们道谢。
接下来重要的是速度。烧伤分三类;一小点酸液飞溅或一次电击都可能伤害器官;蜇伤会注入毒素——培训由此有了理由。烫伤了?用凉水冲;阳光携带着辐射。几毫米宽的水疱不要弄破:松软的布料保护下面的皮层——神经与触觉所在。脚踝扭伤肿胀?万一孩子在浴缸里滑倒——热水澡舒服,瓷砖却骗人——或老人在地毯上昏倒,要让他面朝上平躺,按压止血,别让延误演变成致命。
人人都能学会这些技能——这一事实给人希望。社团成员翻倍:人们会遇到各种各样的紧急情况,从蚊子叮咬到溺水;实用的技术一一应对。绝不要袖手旁观:危急时刻需要果断拍背或海姆利希手法;呼吸停止了?口对口人工呼吸加心肺复苏。连身体不佳的人也能学会——训练日千万别睡懒觉。
学习急救,意味着为他人的安危担起责任。受此激励,我报名参训。为了让街道更安全,加入我们;一个下午便能掌握的技术,就能救命。创造不同的,正是普通人。课堂知识从未如此紧迫。
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