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小学英语六年级上册Unit1~Unit6主题写作专项训练(含范文)
适用教材:北师大版(三起)英语六年级上册
这册书六个单元,每个单元都配了一个写作主题:第一单元写成长,第二单元写身边的变化,第三单元写太空梦,第四单元写一次旅行,第五单元写艺术生活,第六单元是复习课,把成长、太空、艺术三个话题合在一起练。每个主题下面都写了写作要求、动笔前的小提醒和可以用到的词句,学生照着支架搭句子,不会没话说。范文统一放在后面,建议先让学生自己写,写完再对照范文找差距。
第一部分 各单元主题写作
第一单元 Growing:我的成长
题目:My Growth(我的成长)
这一单元我们认识了植物怎样生长,也学了用过去时讲以前的事。请以 My Growth 为题,写一写你成长中的变化,可以写你长高了、学会的新本领,也可以写一件让你变化的事。至少用上两个过去式的动词,句子在五到八句之间。
动笔前先想三件事:过去的你是什么样,现在的你是什么样,是什么让你发生了变化。开头不妨用 When I was little 引出过去,结尾用一句 I am happy to see my growth 收住。
可以用到这些词句:grew、learned、could、can;When I was little, I could not… Now I can…;I am getting taller and taller.
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第二单元 Changes:身边的变化
题目:Changes Around Me(我身边的变化)
过去和现在不一样,这就是变化。请以 Changes Around Me 为题,写一写你身边的变化,学校、街道、公园都可以。要用上 there was 或 there were 和一个比较级,句子在五到八句之间。
写的时候按时间顺序来:先写过去的样子,再写现在的样子,最后说说你的感受。There was no… before. Now there is… 这样的句式最能看出变化。
可以用到这些词句:was、were、before、now;There was no playground before. Now there is a big one.;The road is wider than before.
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第三单元 Into space:太空梦
题目:My Dream of Space(我的太空梦)
这一单元我们坐着飞船去了太空,认识了宇航员、火箭和行星。请以 My Dream of Space 为题,写一写你的太空梦,可以写你长大想做的事,也可以想象自己在太空里的样子。要用上 can 和至少两个太空词,句子在五到八句之间。
想清楚三件事再动笔:你的梦想是什么,到了太空会看到什么,会做什么。I want to be an astronaut 和 I can fly to the moon 都可以做开头。
可以用到这些词句:spaceship、rocket、moon、star、an astronaut;I want to be an astronaut.;In space, I can walk slowly and jump high.
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第四单元 Travelling:一次旅行
题目:My Last Trip(最近的一次旅行)
旅行是我们都喜欢的事。请以 My Last Trip 为题,写一写你最近的一次旅行:去了哪里、怎么去的、做了什么、心情怎么样。要用上一般过去时,句子在五到八句之间。
按事情发生的顺序写:先去哪里,再做什么,最后说说感受。想不起来太远的地方没关系,去公园、去乡下都可以写。Where did you go? How did you go there? 这两个问句能帮你想全内容。
可以用到这些词句:went、saw、took、by car;We went there by train.;We had a picnic on the grass.;It was a happy trip.
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第五单元 Feeling the art:艺术生活
题目:Art in My Life(艺术在我身边)
画画、唱歌、跳舞、听音乐,都是艺术。请以 Art in My Life 为题,写一写艺术在你生活中的样子。要用上 be good at 和一个 like 加动词 ing 的句子,句子在五到八句之间。
写之前想一想:你最喜欢哪种艺术,为什么喜欢,它带给你什么。I like painting pictures 和 I am good at drawing 都是现成的开头。
可以用到这些词句:painting、singing、dancing、listening to music;I like listening to music.;I am good at drawing animals.;Art makes my life colourful.
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第六单元 Review:综合主题写作
题目:三选一 I Have Changed a Lot./We Can Fly to the Moon One Day./Art Makes My Life Beautiful.
复习课把前面五个单元连在了一起,教材里给了三个句子:I have changed a lot.、We can fly to the moon one day.、Art makes my life beautiful. 请从这三个题目中选一个,写一段话。写的时候尽量用上学过的句型,句子在六到八句之间。
三个题目分别对应成长、太空和艺术:选第一个就想想自己哪里变了,选第二个就写写太空探索的愿望,选第三个就说说艺术怎么让你的生活变美。开头直接用题目里的句子,后面展开就行。
可以用到这些词句:changed、taller、spaceship、moon、makes me happy;I have changed a lot.;We can fly to the moon one day.;Art makes my life beautiful.
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第二部分 参考范文
范文是给大家参照的,不是标准答案。每个题目只有一篇,学生写成什么样都行,只要时态用对、句子通顺、扣住题目就可以。批改时重点看三处:过去式的动词用对没有,can 后面是不是原形,like 和 be good at 后面是不是 ing 形式。第三题如果学生选了 Art Makes My Life Beautiful,可以参照第五单元的范文来写。
第一单元 My Growth
When I was little, I was very short. I could not ride a bike. Last year, I learned to ride a bike. I fell down many times, but I did not give up. Now I can ride fast. I also planted a little tree last spring. Now the tree is taller than me. I am happy to see my growth.
第二单元 Changes Around Me
My school changed a lot. There was no playground before. Now there is a big playground. There were old trees near our classroom before. Now the trees are taller and greener. Our library was small before. Now it is bigger and brighter. I like my new school.
第三单元 My Dream of Space
I have a dream. I want to be an astronaut. I can fly to the moon one day. On the moon, I can walk slowly and jump high. I can see the stars and the Earth from the moon. The Earth is round and beautiful. I want to take many pictures in space. I will work hard for my dream.
第四单元 My Last Trip
Last month, I went to a mountain with my father. We went there by car. We climbed to the top and saw the sunrise. The view was beautiful. We took many photos there. We also had a picnic on the grass. It was a happy trip. I want to visit the mountain again.
第五单元 Art in My Life
Art is my good friend. I like painting pictures. I am good at drawing animals and flowers. My pictures make my room beautiful. I also like listening to music. Music makes me relaxed. After school, I often sing songs with my friends. Art makes my life colourful. I love it.
第六单元 I Have Changed a Lot.
I have changed a lot. I was short and thin before. Now I am taller and stronger. I could not swim two years ago. Now I can swim very well. I did not like vegetables before. Now I like them. My teachers say I work harder now. I am happy about my changes.
第六单元 We Can Fly to the Moon One Day.
We can fly to the moon one day. The spaceship will take us there. On the moon, we can jump high and walk slowly. We can see the Earth from the moon. It looks like a blue ball. We can learn many new things in space. I hope my dream comes true.
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