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八年级上册
Integration (II)
滨海县第一初级中学 郭凤娟
Learning aims of this lesson
By the end of this lesson, we will be able to:
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know the basic elements (time, place, activity, reason, steps, feelings) of a DIY diary entry;
write a diary entry about a DIY activity following the model, using sequencing words (first, next, then, finally) and useful expressions;
understand the significance of hands-on DIY activities and create and share more DIY experiences.
自学自练展素养
Review
Review the steps to tie-dye a piece of cloth
Twist a piece of cloth
Tie it with thread
Dye the material
Untie it when it is dry
First
Next
Then
Finally
自学自练展素养
What kind of DIY activity do you want to make?
自学自练展素养
Tools for DIY activities
tape
glue
coloured paper
hammer
screwdriver
[ˈskru:draɪvə(r)]
brush
rope
scissors
glove
cloth
chalk
研学随练展收获
Do you have any experiences about DIY activities?
Amy is sharing her experience about a DIY activity. Let’s read it.
What type is the article?
A diary
day
date
weather
Which person(人称) do we usually use in our own diary?
A. First person.
B. Second person.
C. Third person
We use _____________ tense
in the diary.
simple past
研学随练展收获
①
②
③
④
⑤
⑥
Read for structure
How to make
When:?
Where:?
What: ?
How did Amy feel ?
研学随练展收获
Why did they choose an old glove?
protect the environment
save money
reduce waste
How did Amy show the step clearly?
What other words can we use to show the order of steps?
✷Firstly / First of all / To begin with / The first step is to do sth.
✷Secondly / Second / After that, …
Meanwhile / At the same time, …
✷Lastly / Finally / The final step is to do sth/Last but not least
研学随练展收获
We chose a glove.
We made the legs and arms.
We made the head, body and eyes.
We added the thread.
Which expression is better? Why?
Expressions
Because the writer adds more details.
magic expressions
① adj./prepositional phrase
② verbs
③ others
made…from
use…as….
glue…
add...onto...
研学随练展收获
How does Amy make her diary excellent?
1. a clear structure and correct tense
2. uses “First, … Next, … Then, … Finally” to show the order/steps
3. use different verbs , phrases , sentenses
研学随练展收获
First
_______ your favourite fruit
Choose
________the fruit
Wash
Next
________
the larger fruit _____ small pieces carefully
Cut
into
Then
_____them together.
_____some salad cream.
Mix
Add
Finally
Pre-writing
检学综练展成效
Last/On..., I/we went to...
We made...from...
First, we made/chose...
Next, we...
Then, we...
Finally, we added...
We had to be careful not to...
We felt very proud and happy/pleased/...
1. Understand the topic
Think about your suggestion letter to your head teacher.
2. Plan the structure and make a list of ideas
* Dear...,
* Introduction: Say why you are writing.
* Main body: Politely make your suggestions and give reasons.
* Conclusion: Add a sentence to conclude the letter.
* Signature
Before Writing: Planning and Brainstorming
During Writing: Expression and Organization
1. Add specific details
2. Use smooth transitions
After Writing: Review and Polish
1. Check grammar and spelling
2. Check the flow and logic
3. Check for coherence
写作前:规划与头脑风暴
1. 理解主题
2. 规划段落结构并列出想法
写作中:表达与组织
1. 添加具体细节
2. 使用流畅的过渡语
写作后:检查与润色
1. 检查语法和拼写
2. 检查行文流畅性和逻辑性
3. 检查连贯性
My DIY activity
Last Sunday, I made a fruit salad at home.
First, I chose my favourite fruit in season.I also picked different colours to make my fruit salad look as good as it tasted.
Next,I washed them to make sure they were clean.
Then, I cut some of the larger fruit into small pieces on a clean and smooth surface carefully.
Finally,I mixed them together and added some salad cream.
After I finished the fruit salad, I gave it to my son. He enjoyed it very much. I felt very satisfied and proud.
检学综练展成效
Sample 1
检学综练展成效
Wednesday, 3 November Sunny
On Saturday, I made two special greeting cards for my family at home.
First, I chose two bright-coloured cards, a red one for my brother and a blue one for my parents.
Second, I folded the cards in half.
Next, I cut out fun patterns from coloured paper with scissors. Then I glued the patterns onto the cards. I had to be careful not to make a mess.
After that, I drew around the patterns with a yellow marker pen to make them stand out. I also wrote some Chinese characters on the cards to wish my family good luck and health.
Finally, I wrote messages inside the cards.
I was very pleased with my finished cards and my family loved them. It is fun to make things and it is nice to do something special for our loved ones.
Sample 2
检学综练展成效
Workbook (P131)
检学综练展成效
mess
am crazy about
joy
impossible
method
instructions
mistake
Workbook (P131)
检学综练展成效
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检学综练展成效
They come togethr to show their kites.
A large piece of paper, two sticks, some string and glue.
Decorate the paper.
Tie a long pieve of string to the kite.
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Choose to do
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Must do
Homework
1. Memorize the writing skills.
2. Polish your writing and share it with your best friend.
Do more DIY to improve your skills and experirnce hands-on fun.
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