2027届高考英语读后续写专项复习----荒野遇险 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 James and Ally had been looking forward to their wilderness adventure for months. For the past year and a half, they had been working extra hours and saving every penny for what they believed would be the holiday of a lifetime. The six-day forest hike was to be the highlight of their trip—a chance to explore places few tourists ever reached. They had prepared carefully: a detailed map, a GPS device, enough food and water, and an emergency radio. Both were experienced hikers, and they felt confident about travelling through the forest on their own. The first two days were challenging but exciting. The heat was intense, and the air felt heavy. Colorful birds flew above them, and strange sounds could be heard everywhere. They walked alongside a river where they spotted a few wooden boats moving on it. The boats reminded them that local people lived nearby, but they thought little of it at the time. On the third night, they chose to camp on a small clearing on the hillside, far from the river, thinking it would be safer and drier. The sky was clear, and they fell asleep under the stars, believing the hardest part was behind them. But late that night, a violent storm hit without warning. Strong winds tore their tent apart, and rain poured down like a curtain. They hurried to gather their belongings, but the rain made everything wet within minutes. Their paper map became soft and wet. The GPS screen flashed and stopped working, and the emergency radio also failed. Most of their food was ruined, and only a few bottles of water and some snacks in their backpacks survived. Dawn broke over a changed world, and the forest around them looked unfamiliar. Without any tools to find their way, they were completely lost. For a long moment, neither spoke. Then Ally looked at the rushing river and said hopefully, “We saw wooden boats passing on this river before. Local villagers often travel by boat here. If we stay by the bank, maybe a boat will pass by and save us.” 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Hearing Ally's suggestion, James nodded in agreement.　　　　　 ________________________________________________________________________　　　　________________________________________________________________________ When they were at the point of giving up, soft sounds of rowing reached their ears.　　　　　 ________________________________________________________________________　　　　　________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1. 角色 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 2. 视角 第＿＿＿人称 3. 时空线 　　James 和 Ally 期待荒野徒步旅行很久，省吃俭用，做好充足准备，计划六天森林徒步→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→前两天徒步虽然辛苦但很愉快，途中看到河上有当地人的木船→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→第三天夜里突发暴风雨，帐篷被毁，地图、GPS、应急无线电全部损坏，大部分食物泡水。天亮之后，森林样貌大变，两人迷路→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→Ally提议前往河岸守候，等待路过村民的木船求救→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写）听到Ally的建议，James点头同意→（续写）就在他们快要放弃的时候，轻轻的划桨声传入耳中 4. 细节问答 Why did James and Ally make the forest hike?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ What preparations did they make before the hike?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ What damage did the violent storm cause?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ What was Ally's plan after they got lost?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 5. 情节线 　　两人动身赶往河岸，一路上小心穿过湿滑树林。到达河边后，他们耐心等待。时间一点点流逝，始终看不到船只。食物和水越来越少，疲惫和失望慢慢笼罩他们。就在快要绝望放弃之际，远处传来划桨声。他们大声挥手呼救。船上的村民发现了他们，伸出援手，成功营救二人。主题：野外探险安全；绝境之中不放弃希望；善意相助→＿＿＿→二人赶往河岸，长时间苦苦等待，希望一点点变淡→＿＿＿→（续写）听到划桨声，呼救后被当地村民搭救 6. 情感线 　　James & Ally：calm & hopeful→tired & disappointed→excited & relieved→＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　英文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 8. 句式 宾语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 状语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 非谓语动词：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 并列句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 定语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 9. 本文主题 　　故事感悟类：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 二.情节构造 Hearing Ally's suggestion, James nodded in agreement. 　　衔接句1——What did they do? How did they feel while waiting? 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ When they were at the point of giving up, soft sounds of rowing reached their ears. 　　衔接句2——What happened then? What was the ending? 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 三. 段落续写框架 　　第一段：听到Ally的建议，James点头同意。 　　→①＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→②＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→③＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿； 　　第二段：就在他们快要放弃的时候，轻轻的划桨声传入耳中。 　　→④＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→⑤＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→⑥＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿。 四. 段落续写 Hearing Ally's suggestion, James nodded in agreement. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ When they were at the point of giving up, soft sounds of rowing reached their ears. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1. 角色 　　James、Ally（两名徒步旅行者）；当地村民 2. 视角 　　第三人称 3. 时空线 　　James 和 Ally 期待荒野徒步旅行很久，省吃俭用，做好充足准备，计划六天森林徒步→前两天徒步虽然辛苦但很愉快，途中看到河上有当地人的木船→第三天夜里突发暴风雨，帐篷被毁，地图、GPS、应急无线电全部损坏，大部分食物泡水。天亮之后，森林样貌大变，两人迷路→Ally提议前往河岸守候，等待路过村民的木船求救→（续写）听到Ally的建议，James点头同意→（续写）就在他们快要放弃的时候，轻轻的划桨声传入耳中 4. 细节问答 　　Why did James and Ally make the forest hike?：They wanted to take the holiday of a lifetime and explore remote forest areas. 　　What preparations did they make before the hike?：They prepared a map, GPS, enough food, water and an emergency radio. 　　What damage did the violent storm cause?：It destroyed their tent, wet the map, broke GPS and radio, and ruined most of their food. 　　What was Ally's plan after they got lost?：They would stay by the river bank and wait for local wooden boats for help. 5. 情节线（约80字） 　　James和Ally满怀期待开启森林徒步，不料遭遇暴风雨，装备损毁，被困森林迷路。Ally提出到河边等候村民木船救援。两人艰难来到河岸苦苦等待，物资渐渐耗尽，几近绝望。就在准备放弃时，他们听到划桨声。大声呼救后，被路过的当地村民发现并成功营救。 6. 情感线 　　James & Ally：calm & hopeful→tired & disappointed→excited & relieved→（续写）safe and grateful 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：James和Ally开启期待已久的森林荒野徒步，突如其来的暴风雨毁掉他们的导航、通讯设备与大部分食物，导致二人在森林迷路。他们前往河边等候，最终被划船的当地村民救起。 　　英文：James and Ally went on a long-awaited forest hike. A sudden storm destroyed their equipment and food, leaving them lost in the woods. They waited by the riverbank and were finally rescued by a local villager rowing a wooden boat. 8. 句式 　　宾语从句：For the past year and a half, they had been working extra hours and saving every penny for what they believed would be the holiday of a lifetime. 　　状语从句：But late that night, a violent storm hit without warning. 　　非谓语动词：On the third night, they chose to camp on a small clearing on the hillside, far from the river, thinking it would be safer and drier. 　　并列句：Strong winds tore their tent apart, and rain poured down like a curtain. 　　定语从句：They walked alongside a river where they spotted a few wooden boats moving on it. 9. 本文主题 　　故事感悟类：野外探险存在风险，提前做好预案；身处绝境不要轻易放弃，希望总会存在。 二.情节构造 Hearing Ally's suggestion, James nodded in agreement. 　　衔接句1——What did they do? How did they feel while waiting? 　　They made their way to the riverbank and waited there. As time went by, no boat came. Their supplies were running out and they felt disappointed. When they were at the point of giving up, soft sounds of rowing reached their ears. 　　衔接句2——What happened then? What was the ending? 　　They shouted and waved. A villager saw them. He came to pick them up and took them to safety. They were so thankful for the rescue. 三. 段落续写框架 　　第一段：听到Ally的建议，James点头同意。 　　→①他们小心穿越湿漉漉的树林，来到河岸→②在岸边安静等候，但是很久没有船只经过→③食物水逐渐变少，希望慢慢消散； 　　第二段：就在他们快要放弃的时候，轻轻的划桨声传入耳中。 　　→④他们大声呼喊，用力挥手→⑤船上的村民注意到他们→⑥村民把船靠岸，营救了迷路的两人。 四. 段落续写 Hearing Ally's suggestion, James nodded in agreement.They struggled down the slippery hillside carefully and finally arrived at the river bank. They found a clean open spot and settled down to wait. Hours passed slowly. No boat appeared in sight. Their limited snacks and water were running low. Weariness and disappointment weighed heavily on them. Doubt began to creep into their minds as the sun started to sink. When they were at the point of giving up, soft sounds of rowing reached their ears.Instantly they jumped to their feet, waving their arms wildly and shouting at the top of their voices. A local villager in a wooden boat noticed them and steered the boat toward the bank. Learning about their terrible experience, the villager offered to take them back to the village. Safe at last, James and Ally felt extremely grateful for this unexpected rescue. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $