2027届高考英语读后续写专项复习---一场马拉松的生死救援 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Pham, an ordinary running enthusiast, took part in the Long Beach Half Marathon last month. As a regular runner who kept exercising to strengthen his body, he had long looked forward to this event. He hoped to challenge himself, finish the 21-kilometer race smoothly, and enjoy the simple pleasure and freedom that running brought him. Full of confidence and excitement, he started the race with thousands of other runners on the sunny morning. Everything went well in the first half of the race. Pham kept a steady pace, breathing calmly and enjoying the lively atmosphere along the track. However, near the 10-kilometer mark, extreme tiredness suddenly swept over his body. Before he could react, sharp pain struck his chest. Dizzy and weak, he suddenly fell heavily to the ground, suffering from an unexpected severe heart attack. The sudden accident instantly aroused chaos among the crowd. Spectators and fellow runners around him froze and panicked. Most of them were ordinary people with no professional medical knowledge, not knowing how to offer standard first aid properly. They could only stare anxiously, feeling helpless in the face of the dangerous emergency. By incredible pure chance, Dr. Chiu, an experienced cardiac surgeon, was having brunch at a seaside restaurant nearby with his friends. Originally, he had planned to finish his meal and leave early to return to his work. Yet his friends persuaded him to stay for several more minutes to appreciate the beautiful ocean view and gentle sea breeze. It was this tiny and casual delay that enabled him to witness this life-threatening emergency just outside the restaurant window. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150左右。 （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Without hesitation, Dr. Chiu rushed over to Pham immediately.　　　　　 ________________________________________________________________________　　　　　________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Minutes later, the ambulance arrived.　　　 ________________________________________________________________________　　　　　________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1. 角色 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 2. 视角 第＿＿＿人称 3. 时空线 　　跑步爱好者Pham参加长滩半程马拉松，期待完成21公里比赛→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→比赛前半程一切顺利，但跑到10公里处，他突发严重心脏病，重重倒地→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→现场人群陷入慌乱，普通人不懂专业急救，只能焦急围观→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→恰巧经验丰富的心脏外科医生Chiu正在附近海边餐厅和朋友吃早午餐。原本他打算吃完饭早点回去上班，朋友劝他多停留几分钟欣赏海景。正是这短暂的停留，让他在餐厅窗外目睹这场危及生命的意外→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写）Chiu医生毫不犹豫立刻冲向Pham→（续写）几分钟后，救护车赶到 4. 细节问答 What was Pham's purpose of joining the marathon?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ What happened to Pham near the 10-kilometer mark?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ How did the crowd respond to the accident?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ Why was Dr. Chiu able to see the emergency?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 5. 情节线 　　Chiu医生快速赶到，快速检查Pham状况，立刻实施心肺复苏，并指挥周围人维持秩序、腾出空间。在他专业持续的急救下，Pham慢慢恢复微弱脉搏。几分钟后救护车赶到。医护人员接手病人，把Pham送上救护车。众人向Chiu医生致谢。这次偶然的停留、及时的专业抢救挽救了一条生命。主题：医者担当；偶然的幸运；生命可贵；危急时刻专业力量的价值→＿＿＿→医生现场实施急救，维持患者生命体征→＿＿＿→（续写）救护车抵达，交接病人，生命获救，众人敬佩医生 6. 情感线 　　crowd：shocked→helpless→hopeful→grateful；Dr. Chiu：calm & determined→focused→relieved→＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　英文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 8. 句式 宾语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 状语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 非谓语动词：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 并列句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 定语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 9. 本文主题 　　人性温情类：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 二.情节构造 Without hesitation, Dr. Chiu rushed over to Pham immediately. 　　衔接句1——What did Dr. Chiu do? What was Pham's condition? 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ Minutes later, the ambulance arrived. 　　衔接句2——What happened after the ambulance came? What did people think? 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 三. 段落续写框架 　　第一段：Chiu医生毫不犹豫立刻冲向Pham。 　　→①＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→②＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→③＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿； 　　第二段：几分钟后，救护车赶到。 　　→④＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→⑤＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→⑥＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿。 四. 段落续写 Without hesitation, Dr. Chiu rushed over to Pham immediately. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ Minutes later, the ambulance arrived. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1. 角色 　　Pham（跑步爱好者）；Chiu医生（心脏外科医生）；围观群众、Chiu的朋友们 2. 视角 　　第三人称 3. 时空线 　　跑步爱好者Pham参加长滩半程马拉松，期待完成21公里比赛→比赛前半程一切顺利，但跑到10公里处，他突发严重心脏病，重重倒地→现场人群陷入慌乱，普通人不懂专业急救，只能焦急围观→恰巧经验丰富的心脏外科医生Chiu正在附近海边餐厅和朋友吃早午餐。原本他打算吃完饭早点回去上班，朋友劝他多停留几分钟欣赏海景。正是这短暂的停留，让他在餐厅窗外目睹这场危及生命的意外→（续写）Chiu医生毫不犹豫立刻冲向Pham→（续写）几分钟后，救护车赶到 4. 细节问答 　　What was Pham's purpose of joining the marathon?：He wanted to challenge himself, finish the race and enjoy the pleasure of running. 　　What happened to Pham near the 10-kilometer mark?：He suffered a severe heart attack and fell to the ground. 　　How did the crowd respond to the accident?：They felt panicked and helpless because they lacked professional first-aid knowledge. 　　Why was Dr. Chiu able to see the emergency?：His friends persuaded him to stay longer, so he saw the accident outside the restaurant window. 5. 情节线（约80字） 　　马拉松选手Pham在比赛途中突发心脏病倒地，围观人群惊慌无助。碰巧心脏外科医生Chiu因朋友挽留多停留片刻，目睹险情。他立刻上前实施专业心肺复苏抢救。不久救护车赶到，医护人员接手转运病人。这场偶然的相遇与及时的急救，挽救了Pham的生命，彰显医者的责任。 6. 情感线 　　crowd：shocked→helpless→hopeful→grateful；Dr. Chiu：calm & determined→focused→relieved→（续写）proud and satisfied 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：跑步爱好者Pham在半程马拉松途中突发心脏病倒地，围观群众因缺乏急救知识束手无策。心脏外科医生Chiu因偶然的停留目睹险情，立刻现场施救，等到救护车赶来，成功挽救Pham生命。 　　英文：Running lover Pham suffered a sudden heart attack during a marathon and fell down. The crowd felt helpless without professional first-aid skills. Luckily, cardiac surgeon Dr. Chiu saw the accident. He gave emergency treatment immediately until the ambulance came and saved Pham's life. 8. 句式 　　宾语从句：He hoped to challenge himself, finish the 21-kilometer race smoothly, and enjoy the simple pleasure and freedom that running brought him. 　　状语从句：Before he could react, sharp pain struck his chest. 　　非谓语动词：Dizzy and weak, he suddenly fell heavily to the ground, suffering from an unexpected severe heart attack. 　　并列句：Most of them were ordinary people with no professional medical knowledge, not knowing how to offer standard first aid properly. 　　定语从句：It was this tiny and casual delay that enabled him to witness this life-threatening emergency just outside the restaurant window. 9. 本文主题 　　人性温情类：医者心怀责任，危难时刻挺身而出；偶然的机遇，守护珍贵生命。 二.情节构造 Without hesitation, Dr. Chiu rushed over to Pham immediately. 　　衔接句1——What did Dr. Chiu do? What was Pham's condition? 　　He quickly checked Pham and started CPR at once. He told the crowd to keep back to leave enough space. Gradually Pham regained a weak pulse. Minutes later, the ambulance arrived. 　　衔接句2——What happened after the ambulance came? What did people think? 　　The medical workers took over the patient and carried him to the ambulance. People thanked Dr. Chiu. The timely rescue saved Pham's life. 三. 段落续写框架 　　第一段：Chiu医生毫不犹豫立刻冲向Pham。 　　→①快速评估Pham生命体征，马上实施心肺复苏→②指挥围观人群散开，保持空气流通→③持续急救，Pham逐渐恢复微弱脉搏； 　　第二段：几分钟后，救护车赶到。 　　→④急救人员接手Pham，转移上救护车→⑤围观群众向Chiu医生表达感谢→⑥感慨这次偶然相遇，专业急救挽救生命。 四. 段落续写 Paragraph 1:Without hesitation, Dr. Chiu rushed over to Pham immediately. Quickly bending down, he examined Pham and found he had no normal pulse. Without delay, he began CPR, ordering the surrounding crowd to step back to guarantee fresh air. Focused and calm, he kept performing first aid steadily, ignoring the noises around. Sweats rolled down his forehead, yet he never slowed his movements. Slowly, Pham showed a faint sign of life and regained a weak pulse under his continuous treatment. Minutes later, the ambulance arrived. Paragraph 2:The professional medical workers took over the patient and carefully moved Pham onto the ambulance. All the spectators sighed with relief and thanked Dr. Chiu sincerely. Waving goodbye to the ambulance, Dr. Chiu just smiled, saying any doctor would do the same. It was that short unexpected stay and the doctor's instant action that brought the runner a precious chance to survive. This small incident also reminded everyone that quick response matters greatly in life-saving moments. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $