2027届高考英语读后续写专项复习 空油箱的道理 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Arjun shut his bedroom door hard after his mother, Deepa, had just said no to the gaming tournament. “Your math mid-terms are next month,” she said. “You need to focus.” “My grades are fine!” he shouted. “They dropped ten points last week,” she replied quietly. “And I know you slept in class. Your teacher called.” Arjun had no answer to that. He was still very angry. At seventeen, he felt he deserved trust, not control. However, his mother still treated him like a child who couldn't make his own decisions. For two days, they spoke only when necessary. Short answers. No eye contact. Deepa didn't push. She went about her work—cooking, cleaning, running the small home-based tailor shop that paid their bills. On the third evening, Arjun came home to find his mother sitting at her sewing machine. She wasn't sewing. She was holding his math notebook—the one he had left open on the table. “I wasn't snooping (窥探),” she said. “I was cleaning.” He grabbed it. “Then why are you looking?” “Because the last three pages are full of mistakes.” She stood up. “Not because you are stupid, Arjun. Because you are tired. You stay up gaming until midnight. I hear you. Every night.” Arjun opened his mouth to argue, but his mother raised a hand. “I am not saying no because I don't trust you,” she continued. “I am saying no because I see what you don't see in yourself. You are running on empty. And if I let you run a marathon on an empty tank, you will crash. That is not control. That is a mother's job.” She turned back to her sewing machine. “Dinner is in the kitchen.” Arjun stood there, holding his notebook. He wanted to be angry. But she hadn't shouted. She hadn't threatened. She had just… told the truth. He was tired. He had been making silly mistakes. He just hadn't wanted to admit it. 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。　　　　　 The next morning, Arjun woke up early—before his alarm. _______________________________________________________________________　　　　　________________________________________________________________________ Over the next two weeks, Arjun kept his word.　　　　　 ________________________________________________________________________　　　　　________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1. 角色 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 2. 视角 第＿＿＿人称 3. 时空线 　　17岁的Arjun想要参加游戏比赛，妈妈Deepa拒绝，理由是下个月数学期中考试，他成绩下滑，上课睡觉→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→Arjun很生气，觉得妈妈管控自己，不信任他。母子冷战两天，交流极少→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→第三天晚上，Arjun回家，看见妈妈拿着他摊在桌上的数学笔记本。妈妈解释不是窥探，是打扫时看到，发现大量错题。妈妈告诉他：不是不信任他，而是他熬夜打游戏，精力透支，就像油箱空了跑长跑会崩溃。这不是控制，是母亲的责任→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→Arjun想发火，却意识到妈妈说的是事实，自己确实疲惫，做题总犯低级错误→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写）第二天早上，Arjun在闹钟之前早早醒来→（续写）接下来两周，Arjun信守承诺 4. 细节问答 Why did Deepa refuse to let Arjun join the gaming tournament?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ What was Arjun's reaction at first?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ What does “running on empty” mean in the text?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ What did Arjun realize after talking with his mother?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 5. 情节线 　　Arjun早起后主动找妈妈沟通，承认自己熬夜打游戏导致精力不足、错题增多。他主动提出约定：先好好复习数学，保证休息；等考完试再商量游戏比赛。妈妈很惊讶，欣慰地答应。接下来两周，Arjun遵守约定，不再熬夜。合理分配时间，认真刷题，课堂不再犯困。期中考试数学成绩回升。母子之间隔阂消除，互相理解。主题：亲子沟通；理解父母的爱；自律与平衡；劳逸结合→＿＿＿→Arjun主动和母亲沟通，达成约定→＿＿＿→（续写）Arjun自律坚持复习，成绩回升，母子和解 6. 情感线 　Arjun：angry→cold & silent→confused & guilty→willing to compromise→responsible；Deepa：worried→calm & patient→hopeful→relieved→＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　英文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 8. 句式 宾语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 状语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 非谓语动词：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 并列句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 定语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 9. 本文主题 　　亲情成长类：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 二.情节构造 The next morning, Arjun woke up early—before his alarm. 　　衔接句1——What did Arjun do? What did he say to his mom? What agreement did they reach? 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ Over the next two weeks, Arjun kept his word. 　　衔接句2——What did Arjun do in the following weeks? What was the result? How was their relationship? 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 三. 段落续写框架 　　第一段：第二天早上，Arjun在闹钟之前早早醒来。 　　→①＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→②＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→③＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿； 　　第二段：接下来两周，Arjun信守承诺。 　　→④＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→⑤＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→⑥＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿。 四. 段落续写 The next morning, Arjun woke up early—before his alarm. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ Over the next two weeks, Arjun kept his word. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1. 角色 　　叙述者Arjun（17岁男孩）；妈妈Deepa（家庭裁缝） 2. 视角 　　第三人称 3. 时空线 　　17岁的Arjun想要参加游戏比赛，妈妈Deepa拒绝，理由是下个月数学期中考试，他成绩下滑，上课睡觉→Arjun很生气，觉得妈妈管控自己，不信任他。母子冷战两天，交流极少→第三天晚上，Arjun回家，看见妈妈拿着他摊在桌上的数学笔记本。妈妈解释不是窥探，是打扫时看到，发现大量错题。妈妈告诉他：不是不信任他，而是他熬夜打游戏，精力透支，就像油箱空了跑长跑会崩溃。这不是控制，是母亲的责任→Arjun想发火，却意识到妈妈说的是事实，自己确实疲惫，做题总犯低级错误→（续写）第二天早上，Arjun在闹钟之前早早醒来→（续写）接下来两周，Arjun信守承诺 4. 细节问答 　　Why did Deepa refuse to let Arjun join the gaming tournament?：Because Arjun's math grades fell and he often slept in class from staying up late gaming. 　　What was Arjun's reaction at first?：He felt angry, thinking his mother controlled him and didn't trust him. 　　What does “running on empty” mean in the text?：It means Arjun was exhausted and lacked energy because of staying up late. 　　What did Arjun realize after talking with his mother?：He realized his mother was telling the truth and he was really tired and making silly mistakes. 5. 情节线 　　17岁少年Arjun因妈妈不让参加游戏比赛而生气，母子陷入冷战。母亲平静地指出他熬夜游戏、精力透支，成绩下滑的事实，告诉他这是母亲的关心而非控制。Arjun内心受到触动。第二天一早他主动沟通，达成备考约定。之后两周他自律学习，不再熬夜，数学进步，母子之间互相理解，隔阂消散。 6. 情感线 　　Arjun：angry→cold & silent→confused & guilty→willing to compromise→responsible；Deepa：worried→calm & patient→hopeful→relieved→（续写）proud and content 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：17岁少年Arjun渴望参加游戏比赛，遭到母亲拒绝后十分生气。在母亲耐心开导下，他明白了母亲的担心并非管控，而是出于关心。他主动调整作息专心备考，用自律化解母子矛盾，学会平衡爱好与学业。 　　英文：Seventeen-year-old Arjun was upset when his mother refused to allow him to take part in a gaming tournament. After his mother's patient talk, he understood her concern rather than control. He made a deal to prepare for exams and balanced his hobby and schoolwork with self-discipline. 8. 句式 　　宾语从句：I am saying no because I see what you don't see in yourself. 　　状语从句：If I let you run a marathon on an empty tank, you will crash. 　　非谓语动词：Arjun shut his bedroom door hard after his mother, Deepa, had just said no to the gaming tournament. 　　并列句：She hadn't shouted. She hadn't threatened. 　　定语从句：the small home-based tailor shop that paid their bills 9. 本文主题 　　亲情成长类：父母的约束往往藏着关爱；青少年学会理解父母，自律才能平衡爱好与学业。 二.情节构造 The next morning, Arjun woke up early—before his alarm. 　　衔接句1——What did Arjun do? What did he say to his mom? What agreement did they reach? 　　He found his mom and admitted his problem. He promised to stop staying up late and focus on math exams. They agreed to talk about the tournament after the test. Over the next two weeks, Arjun kept his word. 　　衔接句2——What did Arjun do in the following weeks? What was the result? How was their relationship? 　　He went to bed on time and spent more time reviewing math. He made progress in the mid-term exam. The mother and son got along better. 三. 段落续写框架 　　第一段：第二天早上，Arjun在闹钟之前早早醒来。 　　→①他走出房间，找到正在忙活的妈妈→②主动承认熬夜打游戏的问题，理解妈妈的担心→③两人达成协议，专心备考，考完再讨论比赛； 　　第二段：接下来两周，Arjun信守承诺。 　　→④不再熬夜打游戏，合理安排学习→⑤上课专注，认真订正错题→⑥数学考试进步，母子关系变得更加融洽。 四. 段落续写 The next morning, Arjun woke up early—before his alarm.He walked out of his room and found his mother busy in her tailor shop. He apologized for his bad temper the other day and admitted staying up late for games drained his energy. He promised to give up late-night gaming and devote himself to math review. Deepa was surprised and moved, agreeing to discuss the gaming tournament once the mid-term was over. Over the next two weeks, Arjun kept his word.He went to bed before eleven every night and paid close attention in class. He carefully corrected every mistake in his notebook. Finally, his math mid-term score improved greatly. The cold silence between them disappeared. They talked more, and Arjun truly understood that his mother's strictness came from deep love. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $