Unit 2 Travelling Around 单元写作作业设计-2026-2027学年高中英语人教版（2019）必修第一册

必修一 Unit 2　Travelling Around 单元写作作业（教师版） 一、单元写作任务 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack打算暑假来中国旅游，来信请你推荐一个旅游目的地。请你给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1. 推荐一处目的地，并说明推荐理由； 2. 提供一份简要的行程安排（交通、住宿、活动）； 3. 表达祝愿并期待与他同游。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, 　　____________________________________________________________________ 　　____________________________________________________________________ 　　Yours, 　　Li Hua 二、审题建模（动笔前先想清楚这五件事） 项目 写作要点 体裁 应用文——推荐 + 建议类书信（电子邮件），格式为“称呼—正文—结束语—签名”。 人称 以第一人称（I）为主，兼用第二人称（you）拉近距离。 时态 介绍景点、说明理由用一般现在时；描述行程安排用一般将来时。 结构 三段式。Para 1：问候 + 点明写信目的 + 推荐目的地；Para 2：推荐理由（2条）+ 简要行程；Para 3：祝愿 + 期待同游。 要点 推荐理由要具体（历史、风景、美食、文化），不能只写“it is beautiful”；行程须“交通 + 住宿 + 活动”三要素齐全，按时间顺序展开。 语气 热情、有感染力。多用 You can…, It's well worth…, I'm sure you will… 等推荐句式。 三、话题词块梳理 Ⅰ. 话题词汇（中英对照，答案已填入） 话题词汇 1. castle n. 城堡 2. apply vi.&vt. 申请；请求 vt. 应用；涂 3. rent vt. 租用；出租 n. 租金 4. pack vi.&vt. 收拾（行李）n. 包 5. amazing adj. 令人惊奇的；令人惊喜的 6. arrangement n. 安排；筹备 7. extremely adv. 极其；非常 8. source n. 来源；出处 9. narrow adj. 狭窄的 10. flat adj. 平坦的 11. powerful adj. 强有力的 12. emperor n. 皇帝 13. site n. 地点；位置；现场 14. official adj. 官方的；正式的 n. 官员 15. recognise vt. 辨别出；承认；认可 16. flight n. 空中航行；航班；航程 17. accommodation n. 住处；停留处；膳宿 18. unique adj. 唯一的；独特的 19. path n. 小路；路线；道路 20. destination n. 目的地；终点 21. admire vt. 钦佩；赞赏 22. architecture n. 建筑设计；建筑学 23. brochure n. 资料（或广告）手册 24. civilisation n. 文明；文明世界 Ⅱ. 话题词块（答案已填入） 话题词块 1. apply for 申请 2. be made up of 由……组成 3. take control of 控制；接管 4. make up 构成；形成 5. package tour 包价旅游 6. check in 登记入住 7. check out 结账离开 8. look forward to doing sth. 期待做某事 9. spend time (in) doing 花时间做某事 10. be unique to ……特有的 11. a four-day walking tour 四天的徒步旅行 12. admire the architecture 欣赏建筑 13. take a flight to 乘航班去…… 14. book accommodation 预订住宿 15. travel brochure 旅游手册 16. tourist attraction 旅游景点 17. places of interest 名胜古迹 18. be well worth visiting 值得一游 19. be famous for 以……闻名 20. date back to 追溯到 21. take photos of 给……拍照 22. enjoy the local food 品尝当地美食 23. broaden one's horizons 开阔眼界 24. experience the local culture 体验当地文化 25. means of transport 交通方式 26. in advance 提前 27. set off / set out 出发 28. be amazed at / by 对……感到惊叹 29. leave a deep impression on 给……留下深刻印象 30. make a travel plan 制定旅行计划 Ⅲ. 词块升级（把左边的“基础表达”换成右边更高级的说法） 基础表达 升级表达 1. I think you should go to… It would be a wise choice to… / …is well worth a visit. 2. very beautiful breathtaking / attractive / picturesque 3. It is famous for… It is best known for… / What makes it famous is… 4. You can see many things. There is much to see and explore. 5. I hope you will come. I'm looking forward to your arrival. 6. because for the reason that / in that 7. I recommend… My top recommendation is… / I'd strongly recommend… 8. interesting fascinating / appealing 四、教材好句精选（根据汉语补全句子，注意课文句式与词块的用法） 1. 秘鲁是南美洲太平洋沿岸的一个国家，主要有三个地区。 　　Peru is a country on the Pacific coast of South America with three main areas. 2. 在15、16世纪，秘鲁是强大的古印加帝国的中心。 　　In the 1400s and 1500s, Peru was the centre of the powerful ancient Inca Empire. 3. 正是因为这个原因，西班牙语是秘鲁的主要官方语言。 　　It is for this reason that Spanish is the main official language of Peru. 4. 尤其令人惊叹的是印加人的干砌石建筑方法。 　　Especially amazing is the Incas' dry stone method of building. 5. 你可以随后在当地导游的带领下花三天时间探索雨林。 　　You can then spend three days exploring the rainforest with a local guide. 6. 这段四天的徒步之旅将带你沿着令人惊叹的小路穿越安第斯山脉。 　　This four-day walking tour will take you on amazing paths through the Andes Mountains. 7. 到达目的地后，你将有一天时间探索这座古城并为之惊叹。 　　After reaching your destination, you will have a day to explore and be amazed by this ancient city. 8. 我期待着参观马丘比丘。 　　I'm looking forward to visiting Machu Picchu. 9. 你决定好这次旅行了吗？ 　　Have you made a decision about your trip? 10. 这座古城建于五百多年前，至今保存完好。 　　The ancient city, which dates back more than 500 years, is still well preserved. 11. 旅行不仅能开阔我们的视野，还能丰富我们的生活。 　　Travelling can not only broaden our horizons but also enrich our lives. 12. 只有亲自去过，你才能真正感受到它的美。 　　Only when you go there yourself can you truly feel its beauty. 五、句式升级与仿写（按要求改写下列句子，体会“高级感”从何而来） 1. Peru is a country. It is on the Pacific coast of South America. 要求：用 with 复合结构补充“三个主要地区” → Peru is a country on the Pacific coast of South America with three main areas. 2. The city is very old. Many people visit it every year. 要求：用非限制性定语从句合并 → The city, which dates back to the 15th century, attracts thousands of visitors every year. 3. I was amazed. The scenery was so beautiful. 要求：用 so…that 倒装句改写 → So beautiful was the scenery that I was amazed. 4. You can take a train. You can also hike there. 要求：用 either…or… 合并 → You can either take a train or hike there. 5. If you go there in spring, you will see the best scenery. 要求：用 only + 状语置于句首的倒装句改写 → Only if you go there in spring can you see the best scenery. 6. The tour lasts four days. It takes you through the Andes. 要求：用复合形容词改写 → The four-day tour will take you through the Andes. 7. It is a good place. You should visit it. 要求：用 be worth doing 改写 → It is a place well worth visiting. 8. I recommend Lijiang. You will love it. 要求：用非限制性定语从句改写 → I strongly recommend Lijiang, where you are sure to fall in love with the ancient town. 9. I want to tell you something. It is about my trip. 要求：用 what 引导的主语从句改写 → What I want to tell you is something about my trip. 10. You can enjoy the food. You can also learn about the culture. 要求：用 not only…but also… 倒装改写 → Not only can you enjoy the local food, but you can also learn about the culture. 六、课外材料精编（读一读，背一背，用一用） Nestled in the mountains, the ancient town looks like a painting. 这座古镇依山而建，宛如一幅画。　（过去分词作状语） What struck me most was the breathtaking view from the top of the mountain. 最让我震撼的是山顶那令人叹为观止的景色。　（what 引导主语从句） Never have I seen such a fascinating place. 我从未见过如此迷人的地方。　（否定词置于句首的倒装） It was not until I stood on the Great Wall that I understood its greatness. 直到站在长城上，我才真正理解了它的伟大。　（强调句） The moment I arrived, I fell in love with the city. 我一到就爱上了这座城市。　（the moment 引导时间状语从句） With its long history and rich culture, Xi'an is well worth a visit. 西安历史悠久、文化灿烂，非常值得一游。　（with 复合结构） Not only does travel broaden our horizons, but it also enriches our mind. 旅行不仅能开阔视野，还能丰富心灵。　（not only 置于句首的倒装） The more places you visit, the more open-minded you will become. 你去过的地方越多，心胸就会越开阔。　（the + 比较级, the + 比较级） Compared with big cities, small towns offer a quieter and more relaxing experience. 与大城市的繁华相比，小镇能带来更宁静、更放松的体验。　（过去分词作状语） Should you need any help during your trip, please don't hesitate to contact me. 旅途中如需帮助，请随时与我联系。　（虚拟条件句的倒装） There is no better place to relax than the seaside. 没有比海边更适合放松的地方了。　（比较级表最高级） Standing on the top of the mountain, you can have a bird's-eye view of the whole city. 站在山顶，整座城市尽收眼底。　（现在分词作状语） It is said that the temple dates back to the Tang Dynasty. 据说这座寺庙可以追溯到唐朝。　（It is said that…） Whatever difficulties you meet on the way, keep an open mind and enjoy the journey. 无论途中遇到什么困难，都要保持开放的心态，享受旅程。　（whatever 引导让步状语从句） 七、同话题高考真题【2019年高考全国卷Ⅰ 应用文试题】 假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括： 1. 写信目的； 2. 个人优势； 3. 能做的事情。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【审题建模】 审体裁：申请信（正式书信），三段式。 审人称：以第一人称（I）为主。 审时态：介绍自身情况用一般现在时；说明“能做的事”用一般将来时或情态动词 can。 审内容：Para 1 说明信息来源 + 写信目的；Para 2 个人优势（语言、专业知识、性格）；Para 3 能做的事 + 期待回复。 审语气：正式、礼貌、自信而不自夸，结尾用 I would appreciate it if…。 【参考范文】 Dear Sir or Madam, 　　I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student studying in London this summer. Learning that an exhibition of Chinese painting will be held in your gallery, I'm writing to apply to work as a volunteer. 　　I believe I am well qualified for the position. To begin with, I have a good command of both Chinese and English, which enables me to communicate with visitors from different countries. What's more, I have learned Chinese painting for over ten years, so I can explain the meaning behind the works accurately. Besides, I am outgoing and patient, which helps me get along well with people. 　　If accepted, I can help to show visitors around the gallery, answer their questions and introduce the history of Chinese painting. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. 　　Yours sincerely, 　　Li Hua 【亮点句式】 ① Learning that…, I'm writing to…（现在分词作状语，一句话交代背景与目的） ② …which enables me to…（非限制性定语从句说明“优势带来的结果”） ③ If accepted, I can…（条件状语从句的省略，简洁正式） ④ I would appreciate it if you could…（礼貌请求的固定高级句式） 八、范文赏析 【参考范文】 Dear Jack, 　　Delighted to hear that you are planning a trip to China this summer. I'd like to recommend Xi'an, a city well worth a visit. 　　Xi'an is one of the oldest cities in China and served as the capital of thirteen dynasties, which is why it is often called the birthplace of Chinese civilisation. Here you can not only see the world-famous Terracotta Warriors but also cycle on the ancient city wall. 　　Here is a three-day plan for you. On the first day, you can take a flight to Xi'an and check in at a hotel near the Bell Tower. The next day, we will visit the Terracotta Warriors in the morning and enjoy the local food in the Muslim Quarter in the evening. On the last day, why not climb Mount Hua to admire the breathtaking scenery? 　　I'm sure you will be amazed by this city. Looking forward to seeing you soon. 　　Yours, 　　Li Hua 【学生习作】 Dear Jack, 　　I am very glad to hear from you. You want to come to China. I want to recommend you a place. The place is Beijing. 　　Beijing is very famous. It has a long history. There are many places of interest, such as the Great Wall and the Forbidden City. You can take photos there. The food is also very delicious. 　　You can go there by train. You can live in a hotel. You can visit the Great Wall and the Forbidden City. I think you will like it. 　　I hope you will come soon. 　　Yours, 　　Li Hua 【习作点评】 优点：要点齐全，推荐了具体目的地，也提到了交通与住宿，书信格式规范，时态基本正确。 问题一：句式单调。全文 14 个句子中 10 个是“主语 + be + 形容词”的简单句，建议用定语从句、非谓语动词改写，如“Beijing is very famous”可升级为“Beijing, which is known for its long history, is a city well worth a visit”。 问题二：词汇贫乏。“very famous / very delicious / very glad”反复出现，可替换为 well-known、mouth-watering、delighted。 问题三：行程安排只有“罗列”，没有时间顺序和细节。应写成 On the first day… The next day… 的结构，并补充“交通方式 + 具体活动 + 感受”，才能拿满内容分。 问题四：缺少衔接与情感。句与句之间没有 To begin with、What's more、Besides 等过渡词，结尾也没有表达期待，显得生硬。 【评分标准】（满分15分，按高考应用文评分细则） 档次 分数 评分描述 第五档 13—15分 覆盖全部要点，应用了较多语法结构和词汇，句式有变化，衔接自然，语法和拼写错误极少，完全达到交际目的。 第四档 10—12分 覆盖全部要点，语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求，衔接基本连贯，有少量错误但不影响理解。 第三档 7—9分 基本覆盖要点，语法结构单调，词汇有限，有一些错误，部分内容表达不清。 第二档 4—6分 遗漏较多要点，语法结构单调、词汇项目有限，错误较多，影响理解。 第一档 1—3分 只能写出个别单词，内容太少，无法传达信息。 【写作指导：本单元写作的三个得分点】 得分点一：推荐要“有理由”而非“有名字”。考官最怕看到“I recommend Beijing. It is very famous.”，而喜欢“Xi'an, which served as the capital of thirteen dynasties, is often called the birthplace of Chinese civilisation.”——一个具体事实胜过十个形容词。 得分点二：行程要“有时序”。用 On the first day / The next day / On the last day 串起“交通—住宿—活动”，每一条后面加一句“你能得到什么体验”，内容立刻饱满。 得分点三：本单元词块要用够。be well worth visiting、date back to、be famous for、admire the architecture、broaden one's horizons 至少出现 5 个，既踩点又显功底。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 必修一 Unit 2　Travelling Around 单元写作作业 一、单元写作任务 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack打算暑假来中国旅游，来信请你推荐一个旅游目的地。请你给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1. 推荐一处目的地，并说明推荐理由； 2. 提供一份简要的行程安排（交通、住宿、活动）； 3. 表达祝愿并期待与他同游。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, 　　____________________________________________________________________ 　　____________________________________________________________________ 　　Yours, 　　Li Hua 二、审题建模（动笔前先想清楚这五件事） 项目 写作要点 体裁 应用文——推荐 + 建议类书信（电子邮件），格式为“称呼—正文—结束语—签名”。 人称 以第一人称（I）为主，兼用第二人称（you）拉近距离。 时态 介绍景点、说明理由用一般现在时；描述行程安排用一般将来时。 结构 三段式。Para 1：问候 + 点明写信目的 + 推荐目的地；Para 2：推荐理由（2条）+ 简要行程；Para 3：祝愿 + 期待同游。 要点 推荐理由要具体（历史、风景、美食、文化），不能只写“it is beautiful”；行程须“交通 + 住宿 + 活动”三要素齐全，按时间顺序展开。 语气 热情、有感染力。多用 You can…, It's well worth…, I'm sure you will… 等推荐句式。 三、话题词块梳理 Ⅰ. 话题词汇（根据提示补全单词或词义） 话题词汇 1. castle n. ____________ 2. ____________ vi.&vt. 申请；请求 vt. 应用；涂 3. rent vt. ____________ n. ____________ 4. ____________ vi.&vt. 收拾（行李）n. 包 5. amazing adj. ____________ 6. ____________ n. 安排；筹备 7. extremely adv. ____________ 8. ____________ n. 来源；出处 9. narrow adj. ____________ 10. ____________ adj. 平坦的 11. powerful adj. ____________ 12. ____________ n. 皇帝 13. site n. ____________ 14. ____________ adj. 官方的；正式的 n. 官员 15. recognise vt. ____________ 16. flight n. ____________ 17. accommodation n. ____________ 18. ____________ adj. 唯一的；独特的 19. path n. ____________ 20. ____________ n. 目的地；终点 21. admire vt. ____________ 22. ____________ n. 建筑设计；建筑学 23. brochure n. ____________ 24. ____________ n. 文明；文明世界 Ⅱ. 话题词块（根据汉语补全短语，或根据短语写出汉语） 话题词块 1. apply for ____________ 2. ____________ 由……组成 3. take control of ____________ 4. ____________ 构成；形成 5. package tour ____________ 6. ____________ 登记入住 7. check out ____________ 8. ____________ 期待做某事 9. spend time (in) doing ____________ 10. ____________ ……特有的 11. a four-day walking tour ____________ 12. ____________ 欣赏建筑 13. take a flight to ____________ 14. ____________ 预订住宿 15. travel brochure ____________ 16. ____________ 旅游景点 17. places of interest ____________ 18. ____________ 值得一游 19. be famous for ____________ 20. ____________ 追溯到 21. take photos of ____________ 22. ____________ 品尝当地美食 23. broaden one's horizons ____________ 24. ____________ 体验当地文化 25. means of transport ____________ 26. ____________ 提前 27. set off / set out ____________ 28. ____________ 对……感到惊叹 29. leave a deep impression on ____________ 30. ____________ 制定旅行计划 Ⅲ. 词块升级（把左边的“基础表达”换成右边更高级的说法） 基础表达 升级表达 1. I think you should go to… ____________________ 2. very beautiful ____________________ 3. It is famous for… ____________________ 4. You can see many things. ____________________ 5. I hope you will come. ____________________ 6. because ____________________ 7. I recommend… ____________________ 8. interesting ____________________ 四、教材好句精选（根据汉语补全句子，注意课文句式与词块的用法） 1. 秘鲁是南美洲太平洋沿岸的一个国家，主要有三个地区。 　　Peru is a country on the Pacific coast of South America ________ three main areas. 2. 在15、16世纪，秘鲁是强大的古印加帝国的中心。 　　In the 1400s and 1500s, Peru was the ________ of the powerful ancient Inca Empire. 3. 正是因为这个原因，西班牙语是秘鲁的主要官方语言。 　　________ ________ ________ this reason that Spanish is the main official language of Peru. 4. 尤其令人惊叹的是印加人的干砌石建筑方法。 　　________ ________ is the Incas' dry stone method of building. 5. 你可以随后在当地导游的带领下花三天时间探索雨林。 　　You can then ________ three days ________ the rainforest with a local guide. 6. 这段四天的徒步之旅将带你沿着令人惊叹的小路穿越安第斯山脉。 　　This four-day walking tour will ________ you on ________ ________ through the Andes Mountains. 7. 到达目的地后，你将有一天时间探索这座古城并为之惊叹。 　　After ________ your ________, you will have a day to explore and be ________ by this ancient city. 8. 我期待着参观马丘比丘。 　　I'm ________ ________ ________ visiting Machu Picchu. 9. 你决定好这次旅行了吗？ 　　Have you ________ a ________ about your trip? 10. 这座古城建于五百多年前，至今保存完好。 　　The ancient city, which ________ ________ more than 500 years, is still well preserved. 11. 旅行不仅能开阔我们的视野，还能丰富我们的生活。 　　Travelling can ________ ________ broaden our horizons ________ ________ enrich our lives. 12. 只有亲自去过，你才能真正感受到它的美。 　　Only ________ you go there yourself ________ you truly feel its beauty. 五、句式升级与仿写（按要求改写下列句子，体会“高级感”从何而来） 1. Peru is a country. It is on the Pacific coast of South America. 要求：用 with 复合结构补充“三个主要地区” → ____________________________________________________________ 2. The city is very old. Many people visit it every year. 要求：用非限制性定语从句合并 → ____________________________________________________________ 3. I was amazed. The scenery was so beautiful. 要求：用 so…that 倒装句改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 4. You can take a train. You can also hike there. 要求：用 either…or… 合并 → ____________________________________________________________ 5. If you go there in spring, you will see the best scenery. 要求：用 only + 状语置于句首的倒装句改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 6. The tour lasts four days. It takes you through the Andes. 要求：用复合形容词改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 7. It is a good place. You should visit it. 要求：用 be worth doing 改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 8. I recommend Lijiang. You will love it. 要求：用非限制性定语从句改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 9. I want to tell you something. It is about my trip. 要求：用 what 引导的主语从句改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 10. You can enjoy the food. You can also learn about the culture. 要求：用 not only…but also… 倒装改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 六、课外材料精编（读一读，背一背，用一用） Nestled in the mountains, the ancient town looks like a painting. 这座古镇依山而建，宛如一幅画。　（过去分词作状语） What struck me most was the breathtaking view from the top of the mountain. 最让我震撼的是山顶那令人叹为观止的景色。　（what 引导主语从句） Never have I seen such a fascinating place. 我从未见过如此迷人的地方。　（否定词置于句首的倒装） It was not until I stood on the Great Wall that I understood its greatness. 直到站在长城上，我才真正理解了它的伟大。　（强调句） The moment I arrived, I fell in love with the city. 我一到就爱上了这座城市。　（the moment 引导时间状语从句） With its long history and rich culture, Xi'an is well worth a visit. 西安历史悠久、文化灿烂，非常值得一游。　（with 复合结构） Not only does travel broaden our horizons, but it also enriches our mind. 旅行不仅能开阔视野，还能丰富心灵。　（not only 置于句首的倒装） The more places you visit, the more open-minded you will become. 你去过的地方越多，心胸就会越开阔。　（the + 比较级, the + 比较级） Compared with big cities, small towns offer a quieter and more relaxing experience. 与大城市的繁华相比，小镇能带来更宁静、更放松的体验。　（过去分词作状语） Should you need any help during your trip, please don't hesitate to contact me. 旅途中如需帮助，请随时与我联系。　（虚拟条件句的倒装） There is no better place to relax than the seaside. 没有比海边更适合放松的地方了。　（比较级表最高级） Standing on the top of the mountain, you can have a bird's-eye view of the whole city. 站在山顶，整座城市尽收眼底。　（现在分词作状语） It is said that the temple dates back to the Tang Dynasty. 据说这座寺庙可以追溯到唐朝。　（It is said that…） Whatever difficulties you meet on the way, keep an open mind and enjoy the journey. 无论途中遇到什么困难，都要保持开放的心态，享受旅程。　（whatever 引导让步状语从句） 七、同话题高考真题【2019年高考全国卷Ⅰ 应用文试题】 假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括： 1. 写信目的； 2. 个人优势； 3. 能做的事情。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 八、范文赏析 【参考范文】 Dear Jack, 　　Delighted to hear that you are planning a trip to China this summer. I'd like to recommend Xi'an, a city well worth a visit. 　　Xi'an is one of the oldest cities in China and served as the capital of thirteen dynasties, which is why it is often called the birthplace of Chinese civilisation. Here you can not only see the world-famous Terracotta Warriors but also cycle on the ancient city wall. 　　Here is a three-day plan for you. On the first day, you can take a flight to Xi'an and check in at a hotel near the Bell Tower. The next day, we will visit the Terracotta Warriors in the morning and enjoy the local food in the Muslim Quarter in the evening. On the last day, why not climb Mount Hua to admire the breathtaking scenery? 　　I'm sure you will be amazed by this city. Looking forward to seeing you soon. 　　Yours, 　　Li Hua 【学生习作】 Dear Jack, 　　I am very glad to hear from you. You want to come to China. I want to recommend you a place. The place is Beijing. 　　Beijing is very famous. It has a long history. There are many places of interest, such as the Great Wall and the Forbidden City. You can take photos there. The food is also very delicious. 　　You can go there by train. You can live in a hotel. You can visit the Great Wall and the Forbidden City. I think you will like it. 　　I hope you will come soon. 　　Yours, 　　Li Hua 【自我修改清单】（写完对照检查） □ 推荐的理由是否具体（历史、风景、美食、文化），而不是只说 beautiful？ □ 行程是否写清了交通、住宿、活动，并按时间顺序展开？ □ 时态是否区分了“景点介绍（现在时）”与“行程安排（将来时）”？ □ 有没有出现三个以上的 very？能否换成 breathtaking、fascinating、delighted？ □ 是否用了至少一个从句和一个非谓语动词？ □ 结尾是否表达了祝愿与期待？ 九、参考答案 三、话题词块梳理 Ⅰ. 话题词汇 1. castle n. 城堡 2. apply vi.&vt. 申请；请求 vt. 应用；涂 3. rent vt. 租用；出租 n. 租金 4. pack vi.&vt. 收拾（行李）n. 包 5. amazing adj. 令人惊奇的；令人惊喜的 6. arrangement n. 安排；筹备 7. extremely adv. 极其；非常 8. source n. 来源；出处 9. narrow adj. 狭窄的 10. flat adj. 平坦的 11. powerful adj. 强有力的 12. emperor n. 皇帝 13. site n. 地点；位置；现场 14. official adj. 官方的；正式的 n. 官员 15. recognise vt. 辨别出；承认；认可 16. flight n. 空中航行；航班；航程 17. accommodation n. 住处；停留处；膳宿 18. unique adj. 唯一的；独特的 19. path n. 小路；路线；道路 20. destination n. 目的地；终点 21. admire vt. 钦佩；赞赏 22. architecture n. 建筑设计；建筑学 23. brochure n. 资料（或广告）手册 24. civilisation n. 文明；文明世界 Ⅱ. 话题词块 1. apply for 申请 2. be made up of 由……组成 3. take control of 控制；接管 4. make up 构成；形成 5. package tour 包价旅游 6. check in 登记入住 7. check out 结账离开 8. look forward to doing sth. 期待做某事 9. spend time (in) doing 花时间做某事 10. be unique to ……特有的 11. a four-day walking tour 四天的徒步旅行 12. admire the architecture 欣赏建筑 13. take a flight to 乘航班去…… 14. book accommodation 预订住宿 15. travel brochure 旅游手册 16. tourist attraction 旅游景点 17. places of interest 名胜古迹 18. be well worth visiting 值得一游 19. be famous for 以……闻名 20. date back to 追溯到 21. take photos of 给……拍照 22. enjoy the local food 品尝当地美食 23. broaden one's horizons 开阔眼界 24. experience the local culture 体验当地文化 25. means of transport 交通方式 26. in advance 提前 27. set off / set out 出发 28. be amazed at / by 对……感到惊叹 29. leave a deep impression on 给……留下深刻印象 30. make a travel plan 制定旅行计划 Ⅲ. 词块升级 1. It would be a wise choice to… / …is well worth a visit. 2. breathtaking / attractive / picturesque 3. It is best known for… / What makes it famous is… 4. There is much to see and explore. 5. I'm looking forward to your arrival. 6. for the reason that / in that 7. My top recommendation is… / I'd strongly recommend… 8. fascinating / appealing 四、教材好句精选 1. Peru is a country on the Pacific coast of South America with three main areas. 2. In the 1400s and 1500s, Peru was the centre of the powerful ancient Inca Empire. 3. It is for this reason that Spanish is the main official language of Peru. 4. Especially amazing is the Incas' dry stone method of building. 5. You can then spend three days exploring the rainforest with a local guide. 6. This four-day walking tour will take you on amazing paths through the Andes Mountains. 7. After reaching your destination, you will have a day to explore and be amazed by this ancient city. 8. I'm looking forward to visiting Machu Picchu. 9. Have you made a decision about your trip? 10. The ancient city, which dates back more than 500 years, is still well preserved. 11. Travelling can not only broaden our horizons but also enrich our lives. 12. Only when you go there yourself can you truly feel its beauty. 五、句式升级与仿写 1. Peru is a country on the Pacific coast of South America with three main areas. 2. The city, which dates back to the 15th century, attracts thousands of visitors every year. 3. So beautiful was the scenery that I was amazed. 4. You can either take a train or hike there. 5. Only if you go there in spring can you see the best scenery. 6. The four-day tour will take you through the Andes. 7. It is a place well worth visiting. 8. I strongly recommend Lijiang, where you are sure to fall in love with the ancient town. 9. What I want to tell you is something about my trip. 10. Not only can you enjoy the local food, but you can also learn about the culture. 七、同话题高考真题 审体裁：申请信（正式书信），三段式。 审人称：以第一人称（I）为主。 审时态：介绍自身情况用一般现在时；说明“能做的事”用一般将来时或情态动词 can。 审内容：Para 1 说明信息来源 + 写信目的；Para 2 个人优势（语言、专业知识、性格）；Para 3 能做的事 + 期待回复。 审语气：正式、礼貌、自信而不自夸，结尾用 I would appreciate it if…。 【参考范文】 Dear Sir or Madam, 　　I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student studying in London this summer. Learning that an exhibition of Chinese painting will be held in your gallery, I'm writing to apply to work as a volunteer. 　　I believe I am well qualified for the position. To begin with, I have a good command of both Chinese and English, which enables me to communicate with visitors from different countries. What's more, I have learned Chinese painting for over ten years, so I can explain the meaning behind the works accurately. Besides, I am outgoing and patient, which helps me get along well with people. 　　If accepted, I can help to show visitors around the gallery, answer their questions and introduce the history of Chinese painting. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. 　　Yours sincerely, 　　Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $