2027届高考英语读后续写专项复习----一把草坪椅的守望 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My mom loved her role as a grandma. Besides enjoying the time with her grandchildren, she never missed all kinds of their school games. In her fifties and sixties, she remained remarkably energetic, often mistaken for someone a decade younger. Then, the unexpected happened. Shortly after turning seventy, she started getting dizzy and was diagnosed with a rare disease. Despite her health decline, Mom managed to keep positive and cheerful. When another spring soccer season arrived, Mom, perhaps sensing her final months, resolved to attend every sports game. Though she used a walker at home, she refused to use it in public, insisting she could drive herself and not be a burden. Since the field was only a mile away, I reluctantly gave in, knowing the limited freedom left meant the world to her. She chose an old lightweight woven lawn chair. She would ease out of the car, place the chair before her, and inch forward, leaning heavily on the frame for balance. In spite of occasional falls, fortunately, she never suffered any serious injuries. At the field, she set up her chair and cheered with her usual enthusiasm. After each game, on the way to the parking lot, she refused any help. She would hold her head high and try to stay as independent as she could. That season proved her last one. She made it to every single game before passing away that year. Her determination, independence, and deep love have inspired my children and me ever since. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1：One afternoon, after watching her grandson's soccer match, Mom had a small fall on her way back to the car.　　　　　 ________________________________________________________________________　　　　　________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2：Years later, whenever my kids take part in sports events, they will bring the old woven lawn chair to the field.　　　　　 ________________________________________________________________________　　　　　________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1. 角色 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 2. 视角 第＿＿＿人称 3. 时空线 　　妈妈很喜欢祖母这个身份，喜欢陪伴孙辈，从不缺席他们各类校园赛事→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→五六十岁时精力充沛，常被人误以为年轻十岁。七十岁后，意外降临：她时常头晕，确诊一种罕见病。身体日渐衰弱，但妈妈依旧乐观开朗→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→春季足球赛季到来，她隐约感知到自己时日不多，决心看完每一场比赛。在家会用助行器，但在公共场合坚决不用，坚持自己开车，不想成为别人的负担。球场离家仅一英里，我不情愿地妥协，明白这份仅存的自由对她意义重大→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→她选了一把轻便的旧编织草坪椅，下车后把椅子放在身前，依靠椅身支撑，一步步缓慢挪动。虽然偶尔摔倒，但所幸从未重伤。在球场，她摆好椅子，一如既往热情呐喊助威。每场比赛结束走向停车场时，她拒绝任何人帮忙，昂首坚持独立→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→那个赛季成了她最后一季，她坚持看完所有比赛，同年离世。她的坚毅、独立与深爱一直激励着我和孩子们→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写）一天下午，看完孙子足球赛后，妈妈在回车上的路上轻轻摔倒了→（续写）多年以后，每当孩子们参加体育赛事，都会带上那把旧编织草坪椅到赛场 4. 细节问答 What was Mom like in her 50s and 60s?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ Why did Mom insist on attending every soccer game?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ What did Mom rely on to move forward at the field?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ What qualities of Mom influenced the family?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 5. 情节线 　　看完比赛返程途中，妈妈不小心摔倒。我连忙上前，担心她受伤。但她微笑着摆手拒绝搀扶，靠着那把草坪椅慢慢撑起身体。她说没关系，只要能到场看孙子比赛就足够。她忍着不适，坚持慢慢走回车里。多年之后，孩子们参加运动会，总会带上这把旧草坪椅。椅子摆在赛场边，仿佛奶奶依旧坐在那里为他们加油。椅子承载着奶奶的爱、独立与坚韧，时刻提醒家人铭记奶奶的精神。主题：亲情与怀念；生命最后的坚持；爱与精神的传承→＿＿＿→赛后摔倒，奶奶依旧倔强乐观，依靠草坪椅站起→＿＿＿→（续写）旧椅子代代携带，奶奶的爱与精神永远陪伴孩子 6. 情感线 　　Mom：energetic→ill but positive→determined to watch games→stubbornly independent→passed away；Family：worried→moved→miss Grandma→inspired and grateful→＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　英文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 8. 句式 宾语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 状语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 非谓语动词：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 并列句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 定语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 9. 本文主题 　　亲情感悟类：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 二.情节构造 One afternoon, after watching her grandson's soccer match, Mom had a small fall on her way back to the car. 　　衔接句1——What happened after the fall? What did Mom say and do? 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ Years later, whenever my kids take part in sports events, they will bring the old woven lawn chair to the field. 　　衔接句2——What do the kids do with the chair? What does the chair stand for? 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 三. 段落续写框架 　　第一段：一天下午，看完孙子足球赛后，妈妈在回车上的路上轻轻摔倒了。 　　→①＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→②＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→③＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿； 　　第二段：多年以后，每当孩子们参加体育赛事，都会带上那把旧编织草坪椅到赛场。 　　→④＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→⑤＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→⑥＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿。 四. 段落续写 One afternoon, after watching her grandson's soccer match, Mom had a small fall on her way back to the car. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ Years later, whenever my kids take part in sports events, they will bring the old woven lawn chair to the field. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1. 角色 　　叙述者（我，女儿/儿子）；妈妈（祖母）；我的孩子们（孙辈） 2. 视角 　　第一人称 3. 时空线 　　妈妈很喜欢祖母这个身份，喜欢陪伴孙辈，从不缺席他们各类校园赛事→五六十岁时精力充沛，常被人误以为年轻十岁。七十岁后，意外降临：她时常头晕，确诊一种罕见病。身体日渐衰弱，但妈妈依旧乐观开朗→春季足球赛季到来，她隐约感知到自己时日不多，决心看完每一场比赛。在家会用助行器，但在公共场合坚决不用，坚持自己开车，不想成为别人的负担。球场离家仅一英里，我不情愿地妥协，明白这份仅存的自由对她意义重大→她选了一把轻便的旧编织草坪椅，下车后把椅子放在身前，依靠椅身支撑，一步步缓慢挪动。虽然偶尔摔倒，但所幸从未重伤。在球场，她摆好椅子，一如既往热情呐喊助威。每场比赛结束走向停车场时，她拒绝任何人帮忙，昂首坚持独立→那个赛季成了她最后一季，她坚持看完所有比赛，同年离世。她的坚毅、独立与深爱一直激励着我和孩子们→（续写）一天下午，看完孙子足球赛后，妈妈在回车上的路上轻轻摔倒了→（续写）多年以后，每当孩子们参加体育赛事，都会带上那把旧编织草坪椅到赛场 4. 细节问答 　　What was Mom like in her 50s and 60s?：She was energetic and looked much younger than her real age. 　　Why did Mom insist on attending every soccer game?：She sensed her final months and wanted to cheer for her grandson at every game. 　　What did Mom rely on to move forward at the field?：She leaned heavily on the frame of the old woven lawn chair. 　　What qualities of Mom influenced the family?：Her determination, independence and deep love. 5. 情节线（约80字） 　　身患重病的奶奶不愿拖累家人，坚持独自去球场看孙子足球赛，依靠一把旧草坪椅支撑行走。一次赛后返程她不慎摔倒，但依旧坚强，拒绝别人搀扶。奶奶走完最后一个赛季后离世。多年后，孩子们参加比赛总会带上这把草坪椅，椅子承载着奶奶的爱与坚韧，让奶奶的精神一直陪伴、鼓舞着孩子们。 6. 情感线 　　Mom：energetic→ill but positive→determined to watch games→stubbornly independent→passed away；Family：worried→moved→miss Grandma→inspired and grateful→（续写）cherish and carry on 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：身患罕见病的奶奶，在生命最后的时光坚持到场看完孙子每一场足球比赛，依靠一把旧草坪椅艰难前行。一次赛后她不慎摔倒，依旧保持独立乐观。奶奶离世后，孩子们每次参赛都会带上这把椅子，传承奶奶的爱与坚韧。 　　英文：Suffering from a rare disease, Grandma insisted on watching every soccer game of her grandson with the help of an old lawn chair in her final days. Though she fell after one match, she remained independent. After her death, the kids bring the chair to games to remember her courage and love. 8. 句式 　　宾语从句：She insisted that she could drive herself and not be a burden. 　　状语从句：Though she used a walker at home, she refused to use it in public. 　　非谓语动词：knowing the limited freedom left meant the world to her 　　并列句：She would ease out of the car, place the chair before her, and inch forward. 　　定语从句：She chose an old lightweight woven lawn chair that supported her when she walked. 9. 本文主题 　　亲情感悟类：深沉的亲情与生命的坚守；爱与坚韧可以跨越生死，代代传承。 二.情节构造 One afternoon, after watching her grandson's soccer match, Mom had a small fall on her way back to the car. 　　衔接句1——What happened after the fall? What did Mom say and do? 　　I rushed to help her, but Mom smiled and refused my hand. She stood up slowly with the help of the lawn chair, saying she was fine. Years later, whenever my kids take part in sports events, they will bring the old woven lawn chair to the field. 　　衔接句2——What do the kids do with the chair? What does the chair stand for? 　　They place it beside the field as if Grandma was there cheering. The chair carries Grandma's love and spirit, inspiring them all the time. 三. 段落续写框架 　　第一段：一天下午，看完孙子足球赛后，妈妈在回车上的路上轻轻摔倒了。 　　→①我立刻跑过去，紧张地想扶她→②妈妈笑着阻止我，依靠草坪椅慢慢起身→③她没有受伤，依旧乐观，说能亲眼见证孙子比赛就无怨无悔； 　　第二段：多年以后，每当孩子们参加体育赛事，都会带上那把旧编织草坪椅到赛场。 　　→④孩子们把椅子摆在场边，如同奶奶坐在那里→⑤比赛时他们仿佛能听见奶奶的加油声→⑥椅子承载奶奶的爱、独立与坚韧，这份精神一直传承。 四. 段落续写 Paragraph 1： One afternoon, after watching her grandson’s soccer match, Mom had a small fall on her way back to the car. I rushed over anxiously, ready to help her stand up. However, she gently waved my hand away, trying to get up by herself. With the support of her lawn chair, she slowly rose to her feet, wearing a weak but bright smile. She told me not to worry, saying she still wanted to cheer for her grandson in the following games. Looking at her thin figure, I was touched by her strong will and deep love for the family. Paragraph 2： Years later, whenever my kids take part in sports events, they will bring the old woven lawn chair to the field. The chair is worn, but it carries grandma’s warm memories. Sitting on it, they seem to hear grandma’s loud cheers again. We often talk about her stories, reminding each other to be brave and independent in face of difficulties. Grandma’s spirit lives on in our family, guiding us all the time. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $