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必修一U1-U4单元话题写作讲解
Unit2 单元话题建议信写作
题目一: 假设你是中学生李华,你的朋友Rebecca最近和父母关系紧张,发邮件向你询问如何改善与父母的关系。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1.写信的目的;
2.提出建议并说明理由;
3.表达美好的祝愿。
注意:写作词数应为110个左右。
Dear Rebecca,
_______________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
一、审题
✅体裁:建议邮件(应用文),给朋友的建议信,语气真诚温和
✅人称:第一人称 I;第二人称 you
✅时态:一般现在时为主
✅文章结构(三段式)
1.开头段:听到对方烦恼,表示理解,点明写信目的
2.主体段:分三点给出建议(沟通→共同活动→尊重观点)
3.结尾段:希望建议有用 + 美好祝愿
✅必写得分要点:
①写信目的 ②多条建议 ③美好祝愿
二、积累短语
1. _____________________________与某人相处困难
2. _____________________________理解你的感受
3. _____________________________提供实用的建议
4. _____________________________首先
5. _____________________________冷静下来
6. _____________________________分享想法与感受
7. _____________________________祝你一切顺利。
8. _____________________________持有不同观点
9. _____________________________总而言之
三、句型拆分:开头句 / 主体句 / 结尾句
①开头句(点明写信目的+共情)
1.听到你和父母相处不顺,我十分难过。我很理解你的感受。我写这封信给你一些实用建议。
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
②主体句(三层建议)
👉建议1
2.首先,先冷静下来,试着和父母分享你的想法和感受,这会帮助你们更好地互相理解。
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
👉建议2
3.而且,找一些你们可以一起完成的活动是个好主意,比如晚饭后散步,有助于改善你们的关系。
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
👉建议3
4.此外,即便你们持有不同观点,也要学会尊重他们的想法。
_____________________________________________________________________
③结尾句(祝福)
5.总而言之,希望我的建议对你有用。祝你一切顺利。
_____________________________________________________________________
四、重点句式仿写
句型1:it’s a good idea to do sth 做某事是个好主意(建议信高频句型)
花些时间共处是个好主意,因为紧密家庭纽带的关键是经常性沟通。
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
句型2:祈使句 + , which…
冷静地和父母分享你的想法,这会帮助你们更好地互相理解。
_____________________________________________________________________
五、完整范文
Dear Rebecca,
_______________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【原题】假定你是李华。你的同学Anna最近和父母爆发矛盾:父母不支持她发展爱好,强迫她把所有时间用来学习,她感到压抑,向你求助。请写邮件开导并给出建议。
要点:
1. 安抚情绪;
2. 提出解决办法;
3. 鼓励。
_______________________________________________________________________________
一、审题
体裁:建议邮件(应用文),给朋友的建议信,语气真诚温和
人称:第一人称 I;第二人称 you
时态:一般现在时为主
文章结构(三段式)
1. 开头段:听到对方烦恼,表示理解,安抚情绪
2. 主体段:分点给出建议(谈心→制定时间表→平衡学习爱好→主动沟通)
3. 结尾段:给予鼓励,相信能找到解决方案
必写得分要点:
① 安抚情绪,共情理解
② 提出多条可行解决建议
③ 结尾鼓励
二、积累短语
1. _____________________________感到压抑
2. _____________________________培养爱好
3. _____________________________逼迫某人做某事
4. _____________________________把全部时间投入学习
5. _____________________________和某人坦诚谈心
6. _____________________________缓解压力
7. _____________________________提升学习效率
8. _____________________________制定合理的时间表
9. _____________________________妥善安排时间
10. _____________________________平衡学习与爱好
11. _____________________________拒绝沟通
12. _____________________________拉大隔阂/代沟
13. _____________________________找到满意的解决方案
三、句型拆分:开头句 / 主体句 / 结尾句
①开头万能句(共情+写信目的)
1.听说你最近压力很大,因为父母不允许你发展爱好,还逼迫你把所有时间都用来学习,我深感遗憾。别担心,青少年遇到这类问题是很正常的。
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
②主体高分句
2. 我建议(或你应该)与父母进行一次坦诚的交谈。(recommend虚拟语气,建议句型)
_____________________________________________________________________
3. You can explain that hobbies can reduce pressure, which helps improve your study efficiency.(which引导非限制性定语从句)你可以解释说,培养爱好有助于减轻压力,进而提升你的学习效率。
4. 制定一个合理的日程安排,以妥善规划你的时间,这是明智之举。(it作形式主语)
_____________________________________________________________________
5. 只有当你的父母意识到你既能兼顾学业又能兼顾爱好时,他们才会认可你的爱好。(Only+状语从句置于句首,主句部分倒装)
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
③结尾万能句
6.我相信你能找到令人满意的解决方案。
_____________________________________________________________________
四、句型仿写
1. Only+状语从句倒装
只有每天坚持练习,你才能取得稳步进步。
_____________________________________________________________________
2. recommend 后宾语从句虚拟语气:(should)+动词原形,should可省略, which引导非限制性定语从句,指代前面整件事
我建议你参加课外活动。你可以学到很多新技能,这将会丰富你的校园生活。
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
5. 满分范文
Dear Anna,
_______________________________________________________________________________
__________
Yours,
Li Hua
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$必修一U1-U4单元话题写作讲解
Unit2单元话题建议信写作
题目一:
假设你是中学生李华,你的朋友Rebecca最近和父母关系紧张,发
邮件向你询问如何改善与父母的关系。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1.写信的目的;
2.提出建议并说明理由;
3表达美好的祝愿。
注意:写作词数应为110个左右。
Dear Rebecca,
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
一、审题
√体裁:建议邮件(应用文),给朋友的建议信,语气真诚温和
√人称:第一人称I:第二人称you
√时态:一般现在时为主
√文章结构(三段式)
1.开头段:听到对方烦恼,表示理解,点明写信目的
2.主体段:分三点给出建议(沟通→共同活动→尊重观点)
3结尾段:希望建议有用+美好祝愿
√必写得分要点:
①写信目的②多条建议③美好祝愿
二、积累短语
1.have difficulty getting along with sb与某人相处困难
2.nde1 stand your feeling理解你的感受
3.offer practical suggestions提供实用的建议
4.first and foremost首先
5.calm down冷静下来
6.share ideas and feelings分享想法与感受
7.May everything go well with you.祝你一切顺利。
8.hold different views持有不同观点
9.all in all总而言之
三、句型拆分:开头句/主体句/结尾句
①开头句(点明写信目的+共情)
I'm extremely sorry to hear that you have difficulty getting along with your parents.I
really understand your feeling.I'm writing to offer you some practical suggestions.
听到你和父母相处不顺,我十分难过。我很理解你的感受。我写这封信给你一些
实用建议。
②主体句(三层建议)
飞建议1
First and foremost,take a minute to calm down and try to share your ideas and
feelings with them,which will help you understand each other better.
首先,先冷静下来,试着和父母分享你的想法和感受,这会帮助你们更好地互相
理解。
飞建议2
Furthermore,it's a good idea to find some activities you can do together,like going
for a walk after dinner,which helps improve your relationship.
而且,找一些你们可以一起完成的活动是个好主意,比如晚饭后散步,有助于改
善你们的关系。
飞建议3
Besides,learn to respect their opinions even when you hold different views.
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此外,即便你们持有不同观点,也要学会尊重他们的想法。
③结尾句(祝福)
All in all,I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.May everything go well with
you.
总而言之,希望我的建议对你有用。祝你一切顺利。
四、重点句式仿写
句型1:it's a good idea to do sth做某事是个好主意(建议信高频句型)
It is a good idea to spend some time together,because the key to close family ties is
regular communication.花些时间共处是个好主意,因为紧密家庭纽带的关键是经
常性沟通。
句型2:祈使句+,which.
Share your thoughts with your parents calmly,which will help you understand each
other better.
冷静地和父母分享你的想法,这会帮助你们更好地互相理解。
五、完整范文
Dear Rebecca,
I'm extremely sory to hear that you have difficulty getting along with your
parents.I really understand your feeling.I'm writing to offer you some practical
suggestions
First and foremost,take a minute to calm down and try to share your ideas and
feelings with them,which will help you understand each other better.Furthermore,
it's a good idea to find some activities you can do together,like going for a walk after
dinner,which helps improve your relationship.Besides,learn to respect their opinions
even when you hold different views.
All in all,I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.May everything go well
with you.Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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【原题】假定你是李华。你的同学Ana最近和父母爆发矛盾:父母不支持
她发展爱好,强迫她把所有时间用来学习,她感到压抑,向你求助。请写邮件开
导并给出建议。
要点:
1.安抚情绪:
2.提出解决办法:
3.鼓励。
一、审题
体裁:建议邮件(应用文),给朋友的建议信,语气真诚温和
人称:第一人称I:第二人称you
时态:一般现在时为主
文章结构(三段式)
1.开头段:听到对方烦恼,表示理解,安抚情绪
2.主体段:分点给出建议(谈心→制定时间表→平衡学习爱好→主动沟通)
3.结尾段:给予鼓励,相信能找到解决方案
必写得分要点:
①安抚情绪,共情理解
②提出多条可行解决建议
③结尾鼓励
二、积累短语
1.feel stressed感到压抑
2.develop hobbies培养爱好
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3.push sb to do sth逼迫某人做某事
4.spend all one's time on study把全部时间投入学习
5.have a heart-to-heart talk with sb和某人坦诚谈心
6.reduce pressure缓解压力
7.improve study efficiency提升学习效率
8.make a reasonable schedule制定合理的时间表
9.anrange time properly妥善安排时间
l0.balance study and hobbies平衡学习与爱好
1l.refuse to communicate拒绝沟通
12.widen the gap拉大隔阂/代沟
l3.work out a satisfying solution找到满意的解决方案
三、句型拆分:开头句/主体句/结尾句
①开头万能句(共情+写信目的)
I am extremely sorry to hear that you feel stressed recently because your parents do
not allow you to develop hobbies and push you to spend all your time on study.Don't
worry.It is completely normal for teenagers to have the same problem
翻译:听说你最近压力很大,因为父母不允许你发展爱好,还逼迫你把所有时间
都用来学习,我深感遗憾。别担心,青少年遇到这类问题是很正常的。
②主体高分句
2.I recommend that you (should)have a heart-to-heart talk with your parents.
(recommend虚拟语气,建议句型)我建议(或你应该)与父母进行一次坦诚的
交谈。
3.You can explain that hobbies can reduce pressure,which helps improve your study
efficiency..(wich引导非限制性定语从句)你可以解释说,培养爱好有助于减轻
压力,进而提升你的学习效率。
4.It's wise to make a reasonable schedule to arrange your time properly..(it作形式主
语)制定一个合理的日程安排,以妥善规划你的时间,这是明智之举。
5.Only when your parents realize you can balance study and hobbies well will they
accept your hobbies..(Only+状语从句置于句首,主句部分倒装,高分亮点句)
只有当你的父母意识到你既能兼顾学业又能兼顾爱好时,他们才会认可你的爱好。
③结尾万能句
6.I believe you can work out a satisfying solution.我相信你能找到令人满意的解决
方案。
四、句型仿写
1.Oly+状语从句倒装
Only when you keep practicing every day will you make steady progress.只有每天坚
持练习,你才能取得稳步进步。
2.recommend后宾语从句虚拟语气:(should)十动词原形,should可省略,which
引导非限制性定语从句,指代前面整件事
I recommend that you (should)take part in after-school activities.You can learn many
new skills,which will enrich your school life.
我建议你参加课外活动。你可以学到很多新技能,这将会丰富你的校园生活。
五.满分范文
Dear Anna,
I am extremely sorry to hear that you feel stressed recently because your parents
do not allow you to develop hobbies and push you to spend all your time on study.
Don't worry.It is completely normal for teenagers to have the same problem
Here are some suggestions that may help you.First and foremost,I recommend
that you have a heart-to-heart talk with your parents.You can explain that hobbies can
reduce pressure,which helps improve your study efficiency.In addition,it's wise to
make a reasonable schedule to arrange your time properly.Only when your parents
realize you can balance study and hobbies well will they accept your hobbies..Don't
refuse to communicate,as silence will only widen the gap.
I believe you can work out a satisfying solution.
Yours,
Li Hua
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