Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good 青少年的身心健康（单元写作精练）英语译林版必修第一册

**基本信息** 聚焦青少年身心健康主题议论文写作，构建“结构指导-词汇句型-模板应用-分层训练”四维方法体系，系统培养观点表达与逻辑论证能力，提升语言运用与思维品质。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作指导|1单元主题|三段式结构（现状-原因-建议）、时态人称规范|从议论文文体特征到具体写作要求，构建写作框架| |词汇句型|8短语+24句型|分类功能句型（点明主题/论证原因/得出结论）|按写作逻辑链整合词汇与句型，形成表达工具库| |写作模板|4类模板|观点陈述/利弊分析/原因陈述/正反对比型结构|覆盖议论文核心类型，提供可迁移的结构化写作模型| |分层训练|11篇任务（基础2+提升6+拓展3）|原题解析+仿写+情境变式训练|从基础翻译仿写过渡到复杂情境写作，实现能力阶梯提升|

Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good 青少年的身心健康 单元写作精练 【主题】议论文--个人对青少年整容问题作出评论 本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于整容手术的议论文，是一篇观点类议论文。观点类议论文是一种表达自己观点，并用事实和例子来支持这种观点的文体。主要采用“三段式”：(1)首先说明现状。开篇点明你的观点是什么。(2)其次分析这种现状产生或存在的原因。 你要用几条理由、个人经历或证据来支持你的观点。 (3)最后，给予解决问题的建议或总结。注意：(1)注意议论文的写作特点。(2)文章应以一般现在时为主。(3)人称应该以第一人称和第三人称为主。 【写作词汇短语】 1. increasingly popular　　　越来越流行 2. bear the risk of 承担……的风险 3. in my view 依我看 4. hold the idea that. . . 持有……观点 5. various senses of beauty 不同的美感 6. a lifelong pain 终生的疼痛 7. satisfy one’s appetite for 满足某人对……的欲望 8. boost one’s confidence 增强某人的信心 9. facial expression 面部表情 【写作句型】 点明主题, 表达观点 1. It's important for us to learn to... 对我们来说，学习……是很重要的。 2. As we all know, ...is important, so you should pay attention to... 众所周知，……很重要，因此你应该关注…… 3. ...benefits us a lot. For one thing, it helps us... For another, it gives us the...we need. ……对我们有很多好处。一方面，它帮助我们……另一方面,它给了我们所需要的…… 4. Nowadays...is getting more and more popular. 如今，……正变得越来越流行。 5. Now more and more people are interested in... 现在越来越多的人对……感兴趣。 6. We are supposed to show respect for...because... 我们应该尊重……因为…… 7. Here are my suggestions for you. 这是我给你的建议。 8. How can you become a good...? I'll share some of my ideas with you. 你怎样才能成为一个好的……?我将与你分享我的一些想法。 表达观点和原因 1. In order to..., we'd better... 为了……，我们最好…… 2. In my opinion, we need..., such as... 在我看来，我们需要……，比如…… 3. Firstly, I strongly advise you to... 首先，我强烈建议你(们)…… 4. First of all, we should... 首先，我们应该…… 5. Second, we are supposed to... 其次，我们应该…… 6. Third, we ought to... 第三，我们应该…… 7. At the same time, we should... 同时，我们应该…… 8. In addition/Moreover/Also/What's more/Besides, ... 此外，…… 9. ...is/are also necessary. ……也有必要。 10. It is helpful for you to... ……对你是有帮助的。 11. Last but not least, ...also plays an important role in daily life. 最后但同样重要的是，……在日常生活中也扮演着一个重要的角色。 12. When..., I realized I must... 在……的时候，我意识到我必须…… 13. ...should also be stopped because... ……也应该被制止，因为…… 得出结论 1. In short, the earlier we..., the better it is for our future. 总之，我们越早……，对我们的未来就越好。 2. As long as we try our best and start now, beginning with ourselves, I believe...will become more and more beautiful... 只要我们竭尽全力，从现在开始，从自我做起，我相信……会变得越来越美…… 3. Through these activities, we can really relax ourselves and experience the joy of... Also, we will... 通过这些活动，我们可以真正放松自己，体验……的乐趣。此外，我们会…… 4. By doing these, I'm sure you will become...and your life will be much better. 通过做这些，我相信你会变得……，你的生活会好得多。 ◇Let's take action right now. 让我们现在就行动起来。 【写作模板1】--观点陈述型 has many advantages (引出话题). In the first place, . Second, . Third, . For all these advantages, it is really worthwhile(值得的) to .(阐述优点) However, there are some disadvantages in .It .Besides, .(阐述缺点) Therefore, it is a good thing , but on the other hand, we must pay attention to its disadvantages. (总结全文) 【写作模板2】--分析利弊型 ①With the improved standard of living, play(s)an important part in our everyday life.(引出话题或对象) But in my opinion, .(表明自己的观点) ②It is true that (话题或对象) bring(s) us into a whole new world where we can easily see the changes in our life. What’s more, .(话题或对象的优点) However, just like anything else, it / they also bring(s) us some problems. For example, .What’s worse, .(话题或对象的缺点) ③For all the above reasons, I believe that .(总结) 【写作模板3】-原因陈述型 ①Nowadays, we often hear/ see that . This phenomenon(现象) is not accidental, and there are social and individual backgrounds.(说明社会现象) ②Why can not? For one thing, . For another, . Therefore, we________________. (陈述原因,并提出解决措施) ③As far as I am concerned, I agree that , but I think that .(发表自己的见解) 【写作模板4】-正反观点对比型 ①There is a widespread concern over . But people have different opinions about this hot topic.(引出话题) ②Most people think that (观点一). It .(支持观点一的原因) However, the other people hold the idea that (观点二). In their point of view, .(支持观点二的原因) ③I firmly support the view that . It is because not only , but also . (我的观点) 【原题呈现】 假如你是李华，你们学校就“青少年是否应该整容”的问题进行讨论，要求每个同学以书信的形式投稿，请根据下面的提示写一篇短文。 1. 现在越来越多的人做整形手术，但你认为青少年不应该整容。 2. 你的理由：对身体有害；分散学习注意力；中学生过分注重外表不合适…… 注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题谋篇】 【参考范文】 Dear Editor, As is known to all，plastic surgery is becoming more and more popular. Because it can improve our appearance. But I strongly hold the view that teenagers shouldn’t have plastic surgery. Plastic surgery has many negative effects on teenagers. Firstly，caring about appearance too much will affect their studies. As a result，they can’t concentrate on their lessons. Secondly，teenagers are still growing and such surgery is likely to harm their health. Some teenagers had plastic surgery，which stopped them from returning to a normal life. Therefore，they regret having the surgery. In a word，a teenager should keep away from plastic surgery，and use knowledge to build self-confidence. Yours, Li Hua 【基础必做】 一、汉译英(主题要点翻译) 1. 整形手术 2. 消极作用 3. 在乎 4. 集中精力于…… 5. 总之 6. 恢复正常生活 7. 自信 ______________________ 8. 远离 【答案】 1. plastic surgery 2. negative effects 3. care about 4. concentrate on / upon 5. in a word 6. return to a normal life 7. self-confidence 8. keep away from 二、句型仿写(参照例句完成句子) 句型1：that引导的同位语从句 例句：I strongly hold the view that teenagers shouldn’t have plastic surgery. (1)我们队赢了那场比赛的消息是真的。 __________________________________________________ (2)毫无疑问，友谊在我们的生活中起着重要作用。 _____________________________________________________ 【答案】 (1)The news that our team have won the game is true. (2)There is no doubt that friendship plays an important part in our life. 句型2: which 引导非限制定语从句 例句：Some teenagers had plastic surgery，which stopped them from returning to a normal life. (1)他考试没及格，这使他的父亲很生气。 ____________________________________________________________ (2)但有时压力会很大，这反过来又让我感到焦虑。 _____________________________________________________________ 【答案】 (1)He failed the exam, which makes his father angry. (2)It can be quite stressful at times, though, which in turn makes me feel anxious. 【提升必做】 Passage 1 假设你是李华，你的朋友Daisy来信说她对自己的身材感到很不满意，想要做整形手术(plastic surgery)。请你给她写一封信，内容包括： 1. 表示担心； 2. 你的看法和建议； 3. 提出希望。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按以下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Daisy, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Daisy, Knowing that you want to have plastic surgery due to dissatisfaction with your body figure, I’m really anxious about you. Plastic surgery, like any type of surgery, is not without risks. It can bring negative consequences ranging from an unattractive result to even death. To shape your body, you’d better take regular exercise and eat a well balanced diet. Besides, keep in mind that nobody is perfect, so accept yourself and just do your best. I do hope you can find my advice useful and think of less risky ways to boost your body confidence. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给要做整形手术的朋友Daisy写一封信。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 因为：due to → because of 不满意：dissatisfaction → discontent 此外：Besides → what’s more 建议：advice → suggestion 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Plastic surgery, like any type of surgery, is not without risks. It can bring negative consequences ranging from an unattractive result to even death. 拓展句：Plastic surgery, like any type of surgery, is not without risks, which can bring negative consequences ranging from an unattractive result to even death. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Knowing that you want to have plastic surgery due to dissatisfaction with your body figure, I’m really anxious about you.(由连词that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】Besides, keep in mind that nobody is perfect, so accept yourself and just do your best.(由连词that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型3】I do hope you can find my advice useful and think of less risky ways to boost your body confidence.(由省略连词that引导的宾语从句) Passage 2 假定你是李华，你的好友Mary对自己的容貌非常不自信，十分苦恼，想去做整容手术，给你来信询问你对整容的看法，请用英文给她写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 表示不赞同；2. 整容的弊端；3. 你对美的看法。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：整容手术plastic surgery Dear Mary, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Mary, Knowing that you are upset about your appearance and have a desire for plastic surgery, I’m writing to share with you my opinion. I strongly disapprove of having plastic surgery and the reasons are as follows. To begin with, people don’t always get satisfactory results from plastic surgery. What’s worse, plastic surgery can be so dangerous that patients may suffer endless pains after failed plastic surgery or even die during operations, which may stop them from returning to a normal life. Personally, it is not the appearance but the inner beauty that matters. You should learn to see the good things about yourself and remember you are unique. Sincerely hope you can love and have confidence in yourself. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的好友Mary对自己的容貌非常不自信，十分苦恼，想去做整容手术，给你来信询问你对整容的看法，请用英文给她写一封回信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 首先：To begin with → First of all 更糟糕的是：What’s worse → Worse still 个人看来：Personally → In one’s opinion 真诚地：Sincerely → Honestly 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Knowing that you are upset about your appearance and have a desire for plastic surgery, I’m writing to share with you my opinion. 拓展句：Because I know you are upset about your appearance and have a desire for plastic surgery, I’m writing to share with you my opinion. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Knowing that you are upset about your appearance and have a desire for plastic surgery, I’m writing to share with you my opinion.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】What’s worse, plastic surgery can be so dangerous that patients may suffer endless pains after failed plastic surgery or even die during operations, which may stop them from returning to a normal life.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) Passage 3 假定你是李华，你们年级的英国交换生Tom正因自己的体重问题感到焦虑。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1. 指出你注意到的他的不良生活习惯； 2. 建议他改变生活习惯，并列举改变的方法； 3. 展望积极改变后的状态。 注意：词数80-100左右。 Dear Tom, I’ve noticed you’ve been feeling down about your weight lately, and I also saw you often … ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Tom, I’ve noticed you’ve been feeling down about your weight lately, and I have also seen you often stay up late and eat lots of high-sugar snacks in your spare time. These bad living habits may gradually cause weight gain and make you feel anxious. I’d like to give you some practical suggestions. You can replace junk food with fruits and vegetables. Besides, sticking to early sleep and proper exercise every day will help you to keep fit. If you keep these good habits, you will surely build a healthy body and become more confident and energetic soon. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以李华的身份，安慰因体重问题焦虑的交换生Tom，指出不良生活习惯、给出具体改善方法并展望积极改变后的状态。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 导致：cause → lead to 焦虑的：anxious → nervous 替代：replace → substitute 精力充沛的：energetic → vigorous 2. 句式拓展 句型转换 原句：These bad living habits may gradually cause weight gain and make you feel anxious. 拓展句：It is these bad living habits that may gradually cause weight gain and make you feel anxious. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Besides, sticking to early sleep and proper exercise every day will help you to keep fit.(运用了动名词短语作主语) 【高分句型2】If you keep these good habits, you will surely build a healthy body and become more confident and energetic soon.(运用了If引导条件状语从句) Passage 4 英语角开展以“健康饮食”为主题的演讲比赛，假如你是李华，请你以“A Healthy Diet”为题写一份英语演讲稿。要求：参照下表，阐述健康饮食的重要性，并给出合理的建议。 A Healthy Diet 健康饮食的重要性 1. 提供能量 2. 强壮身体 合理的建议 1. 按时吃饭 2. 多吃水果、蔬菜 3. …… (补充2点) 注意： (1)词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (2)可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。 A Healthy Diet Dear classmates, I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “A Healthy Diet”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening! 【参考范文】 A Healthy Diet Dear classmates, I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “A Healthy Diet”. As we all know, a healthy diet plays a vital role in our life. It can provide us with enough energy to study and play. Also, it helps build up our bodies and makes us stronger. So how can we have a healthy diet? First, we should eat regularly. Second, we are supposed to eat more fruits and vegetables, which are rich in vitamins. Third, drink more milk and water instead of sugary drinks. Last but not least, control the amount of food we eat and avoid overeating. Let’s start from now on and form a good eating habit. Only in this way can we keep healthy and enjoy a happy life. That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening! 【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以李华的身份，围绕“健康饮食”主题完成题为A Healthy Diet的英语演讲，阐述健康饮食的重要性并给出合理饮食建议。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 重要的：vital → essential/critical 足够的：enough → sufficient 规律地：regularly → on a regular basis 避免：avoid → refrain from 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：As we all know, a healthy diet plays a vital role in our life. It can provide us with enough energy to study and play. Also, it helps build up our bodies and makes us stronger. 拓展句：As we all know, a healthy diet plays a vital role in our life, which can not only provide us with enough energy to study and play but alsao help build up our bodies and makes us stronger. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Second, we are supposed to eat more fruits and vegetables, which are rich in vitamins. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Only in this way can we keep healthy and enjoy a happy life. (运用了部分倒装结构) Passage 5 假定你是李华，得知你的英国笔友Peter最近经常熬夜刷题、运动不足，身心状态不佳。请你给他写一封电子邮件，给他提出健康生活的建议，内容包括： 1. 合理规划作息，避免熬夜； 2. 坚持日常运动，放松身心； 3. 保持良好心态。 注意： 1.写作词数应为 80 个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Peter, Hearing that you’re not feeling well recently due to heavy study tasks and bad living habits, I’d like to offer you some practical suggestions to help you keep healthy. Firstly, it’s vital that you arrange your time properly and avoid staying up. Enough sleep can help you stay energetic the next day. Besides, you’d better stick to daily exercise to relax and reduce pressure. Last but not least, try to keep a positive mind. When you’re stressed, you can listen to music or talk with your friends. I hope my advice will be of great help to you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以李华的身份给英国笔友Peter写一封邮件，针对他熬夜刷题、缺乏运动、身心状态不佳的情况提出健康生活相关建议。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 重要的：vital → essential 适当地：properly → appropriately 足够的：enough → sufficient 积极的：positive → optimistic 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Enough sleep can help you stay energetic the next day. 拓展句：Sufficient sleep will enable you to maintain energy the following day. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Hearing that you’re not feeling well recently due to heavy study tasks and bad living habits, I’d like to offer you some practical suggestions to help you keep healthy. (运用了现在分词短语Hearing...作状语和that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】Firstly, it’s vital that you arrange your time properly and avoid staying up. (运用了it作形式主语，that引导的主语从句) Passage 6 假设你是李华。你班最近以“太空探索是否值得”为主题进行了一次讨论会。请你写一篇议论文，介绍你们讨论的情况并发表你的个人观点。内容包括： 一些同学赞同 1. 获得新知识； 2. 给人类带来更大的生存空间。 一些同学反对 1. 耗资巨大； 2. 宇航员的安全问题。 你的观点 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Outer space explorations, yes or no? We had an argument over whether it is necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day. Some of us feel it important to research the outer space. Firstly, people can get a better understanding of the outer space through space explorations. Secondly, these explorations can possibly bring new living space for human life. However, others think very differently. They say this kind of exploration is much too costly. Besides, it is very dangerous for astronauts to do such work. In my opinion, people should be pioneering and therefore such explorations into outer space are worth trying out. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇议论文，介绍最近班级以“太空探索是否值得”为主题的讨论会的情况，并发表个人的观点。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 首先：firstly → to begin with 此外：besides → what’s more 昂贵的，花钱多的：costly → expensive 依我看：in my opinion → as far as I’m concerned 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Some of us feel it important to research the outer space. 拓展句：Some of us feel it is important to research the outer space. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】We had an argument over whether it is necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day. (运用了whether引导的宾语从句以及it作形式主语和不定式作真正主语) 【高分句型2】In my opinion, people should be pioneering and therefore such explorations into outer space are worth trying out. (运用了连词and连接的并列句) 【拓展选做】 Passage 1 许多高中生熬夜学习。对此，不同人有不同意见，请你以“高中生应熬夜学习么”为题写一篇议论文。 要求：1. 从正反两个方面陈述人们不同意见； 2. 给出你的见解。 注意：词数100词左右；题目已经写出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：stay up 熬夜 Should Senior High Students Stay up for study? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Should Senior High Students Stay up for study? With the learning task increasing in high school, more and more high school students are beginning to stay up late to study. Some students are in favor of staying up late to study, while others are against it. Some think that staying up all night studying often does harm to the development and health of students. Not enough sleep will have an impact on our health, leading to a decrease in learning efficiency. Others believe that they can make full use of the night time to make up for the missed time during the day, improving their grades. In my opinion, I object to staying up all night studying, because it is not beneficial to our health and study in the long run. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文，许多高中生熬夜学习。对此，不同人有不同意见，请你以“高中生应熬夜学习么”为题写一篇议论文。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 ①充分利用：make full use of → make the most of ②导致：result in → lead to ③影响： have an effect on → have an impact on ④支持：be for → be in favor of 2. 句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Not enough sleep will have an impact on our health, leading to a decrease in learning efficiency. 拓展句：It is not enough sleep that will have an impact on our health, leading to a decrease in learning efficiency. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]Others believe that they can make full use of the night time to make up for the missed time during the day, improving their grades.(现在分词作状语) [高分句型2]In my opinion, I object to staying up all night studying, because it is not beneficial to our health and study in the long run.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句) Passage 2 假定你是李华，学校即将举行以“Is it necessary for humans to explore oceans?”为题的英语作文比赛，请按照下列要求写一篇议论文。要点如下： 1.使海洋可持续发展； 2.了解海洋环境； 3.更好地了解气候。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Is it necessary for humans to explore oceans? I agree with the view that it is necessary for humans to explore seas. First, it can establish the basic information needed to better understand environmental change, which helps scientists to address both current situations and to predict the future situations that may emerge. Moreover, it can also give us knowledge about what are available in oceans, how the life forms live, and find out how humans can survive down there or make good use of the depths’ resources, because the sea can be one of the resources for us to rely on to fulfill the needs such as food, energy, etc. In addition, it can help us keep track of climate change that happens to the ocean and what might affect our life. In sum, sea exploration will be of great benefit to humans. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇议论文，参加以“Is it necessary for humans to explore oceans?”为题的英语作文比赛。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 观点：view → opinion 此外：in addition → besides 影响：affect → influence 充分利用：make good use of → take full advantage of 2.句式拓展 句型转换 原句：In sum, sea exploration will be of great benefit to humans. 拓展句：In sum, it will be of great benefit for humans to conduct sea exploration. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]In addition, it can help us keep track of climate change that happens to the ocean and what might affect our life. (运用了that引导定语从句) [高分句型2]I agree with the view that it is necessary for humans to explore seas. (运用了that引导同位语从句) Passage 3 最近，社会上的整形医院(plastic surgery hospital)越来越多，很多人，尤其是年轻人，热衷于整容手术(cosmetic surgery)。请你谈谈自己对此现象的看法，并对自己的观点加以论证。 注意：1. 词数100左右; 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Should young people get plastic surgery? Recently, plastic surgery hospitals have sprung up all over the society. Many people, especially young people, are keen on cosmetic surgery. In this regard, I want to express my views. First of all, I don’t agree with the social trend that young people go for cosmetic surgery, because it promotes the bad influence of judging by appearance. Secondly, according to the news about the death caused by cosmetic surgery in recent years, a large number of irregular plastic surgery hospitals in the society cannot guarantee the life safety of young people. Finally, I think true beauty comes from the heart. No matter how beautiful the appearance of an ugly person is, it cannot make up for the lack of inner beauty. Therefore, I hope young people should make a careful decision when choosing cosmetic surgery. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文。要求考生对年轻人热衷于整容手术的现象谈谈自己的看法并进行论证。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 想要：would like → want 消息：information → news 最后：at last → finally 因此：hence → therefore 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Recently, plastic surgery hospitals have sprung up all over the society. 拓展句：Recently, plastic surgery hospitals have sprung up all over the society, which attracts people’s attention. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】No matter how beautiful the appearance of an ugly person is, it cannot make up for the lack of inner beauty. (运用了no matter how引导的让步状语从句) 【高分句型2】Therefore, I hope young people should make a careful decision when choosing cosmetic surgery.( when引导的时间状语从句中的省略，非谓语动词现在分词作状语) ( 14 / 17 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good 青少年的身心健康 单元写作精练 【主题】议论文--个人对青少年整容问题作出评论 本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于整容手术的议论文，是一篇观点类议论文。观点类议论文是一种表达自己观点，并用事实和例子来支持这种观点的文体。主要采用“三段式”：(1)首先说明现状。开篇点明你的观点是什么。(2)其次分析这种现状产生或存在的原因。 你要用几条理由、个人经历或证据来支持你的观点。 (3)最后，给予解决问题的建议或总结。注意：(1)注意议论文的写作特点。(2)文章应以一般现在时为主。(3)人称应该以第一人称和第三人称为主。 【写作词汇短语】 1. increasingly popular　　　越来越流行 2. bear the risk of 承担……的风险 3. in my view 依我看 4. hold the idea that. . . 持有……观点 5. various senses of beauty 不同的美感 6. a lifelong pain 终生的疼痛 7. satisfy one’s appetite for 满足某人对……的欲望 8. boost one’s confidence 增强某人的信心 9. facial expression 面部表情 【写作句型】 点明主题, 表达观点 1. It's important for us to learn to... 对我们来说，学习……是很重要的。 2. As we all know, ...is important, so you should pay attention to... 众所周知，……很重要，因此你应该关注…… 3. ...benefits us a lot. For one thing, it helps us... For another, it gives us the...we need. ……对我们有很多好处。一方面，它帮助我们……另一方面,它给了我们所需要的…… 4. Nowadays...is getting more and more popular. 如今，……正变得越来越流行。 5. Now more and more people are interested in... 现在越来越多的人对……感兴趣。 6. We are supposed to show respect for...because... 我们应该尊重……因为…… 7. Here are my suggestions for you. 这是我给你的建议。 8. How can you become a good...? I'll share some of my ideas with you. 你怎样才能成为一个好的……?我将与你分享我的一些想法。 表达观点和原因 1. In order to..., we'd better... 为了……，我们最好…… 2. In my opinion, we need..., such as... 在我看来，我们需要……，比如…… 3. Firstly, I strongly advise you to... 首先，我强烈建议你(们)…… 4. First of all, we should... 首先，我们应该…… 5. Second, we are supposed to... 其次，我们应该…… 6. Third, we ought to... 第三，我们应该…… 7. At the same time, we should... 同时，我们应该…… 8. In addition/Moreover/Also/What's more/Besides, ... 此外，…… 9. ...is/are also necessary. ……也有必要。 10. It is helpful for you to... ……对你是有帮助的。 11. Last but not least, ...also plays an important role in daily life. 最后但同样重要的是，……在日常生活中也扮演着一个重要的角色。 12. When..., I realized I must... 在……的时候，我意识到我必须…… 13. ...should also be stopped because... ……也应该被制止，因为…… 得出结论 1. In short, the earlier we..., the better it is for our future. 总之，我们越早……，对我们的未来就越好。 2. As long as we try our best and start now, beginning with ourselves, I believe...will become more and more beautiful... 只要我们竭尽全力，从现在开始，从自我做起，我相信……会变得越来越美…… 3. Through these activities, we can really relax ourselves and experience the joy of... Also, we will... 通过这些活动，我们可以真正放松自己，体验……的乐趣。此外，我们会…… 4. By doing these, I'm sure you will become...and your life will be much better. 通过做这些，我相信你会变得……，你的生活会好得多。 ◇Let's take action right now. 让我们现在就行动起来。 【写作模板1】--观点陈述型 has many advantages (引出话题). In the first place, . Second, . Third, . For all these advantages, it is really worthwhile(值得的) to .(阐述优点) However, there are some disadvantages in .It .Besides, .(阐述缺点) Therefore, it is a good thing , but on the other hand, we must pay attention to its disadvantages. (总结全文) 【写作模板2】--分析利弊型 ①With the improved standard of living, play(s)an important part in our everyday life.(引出话题或对象) But in my opinion, .(表明自己的观点) ②It is true that (话题或对象) bring(s) us into a whole new world where we can easily see the changes in our life. What’s more, .(话题或对象的优点) However, just like anything else, it / they also bring(s) us some problems. For example, .What’s worse, .(话题或对象的缺点) ③For all the above reasons, I believe that .(总结) 【写作模板3】-原因陈述型 ①Nowadays, we often hear/ see that . This phenomenon(现象) is not accidental, and there are social and individual backgrounds.(说明社会现象) ②Why can not? For one thing, . For another, . Therefore, we________________. (陈述原因,并提出解决措施) ③As far as I am concerned, I agree that , but I think that .(发表自己的见解) 【写作模板4】-正反观点对比型 ①There is a widespread concern over . But people have different opinions about this hot topic.(引出话题) ②Most people think that (观点一). It .(支持观点一的原因) However, the other people hold the idea that (观点二). In their point of view, .(支持观点二的原因) ③I firmly support the view that . It is because not only , but also . (我的观点) 【原题呈现】 假如你是李华，你们学校就“青少年是否应该整容”的问题进行讨论，要求每个同学以书信的形式投稿，请根据下面的提示写一篇短文。 1. 现在越来越多的人做整形手术，但你认为青少年不应该整容。 2. 你的理由：对身体有害；分散学习注意力；中学生过分注重外表不合适…… 注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题谋篇】 【参考范文】 Dear Editor, As is known to all，plastic surgery is becoming more and more popular. Because it can improve our appearance. But I strongly hold the view that teenagers shouldn’t have plastic surgery. Plastic surgery has many negative effects on teenagers. Firstly，caring about appearance too much will affect their studies. As a result，they can’t concentrate on their lessons. Secondly，teenagers are still growing and such surgery is likely to harm their health. Some teenagers had plastic surgery，which stopped them from returning to a normal life. Therefore，they regret having the surgery. In a word，a teenager should keep away from plastic surgery，and use knowledge to build self-confidence. Yours, Li Hua 【基础必做】 一、汉译英(主题要点翻译) 1. 整形手术 2. 消极作用 3. 在乎 4. 集中精力于…… 5. 总之 6. 恢复正常生活 7. 自信 ______________________ 8. 远离 二、句型仿写(参照例句完成句子) 句型1：that引导的同位语从句 例句：I strongly hold the view that teenagers shouldn’t have plastic surgery. (1)我们队赢了那场比赛的消息是真的。 __________________________________________________ (2)毫无疑问，友谊在我们的生活中起着重要作用。 _____________________________________________________ 句型2: which 引导非限制定语从句 例句：Some teenagers had plastic surgery，which stopped them from returning to a normal life. (1)他考试没及格，这使他的父亲很生气。 ____________________________________________________________ (2)但有时压力会很大，这反过来又让我感到焦虑。 _____________________________________________________________ 【提升必做】 Passage 1 假设你是李华，你的朋友Daisy来信说她对自己的身材感到很不满意，想要做整形手术(plastic surgery)。请你给她写一封信，内容包括： 1. 表示担心； 2. 你的看法和建议； 3. 提出希望。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按以下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Daisy, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 2 假定你是李华，你的好友Mary对自己的容貌非常不自信，十分苦恼，想去做整容手术，给你来信询问你对整容的看法，请用英文给她写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 表示不赞同；2. 整容的弊端；3. 你对美的看法。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：整容手术plastic surgery Dear Mary, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 3 假定你是李华，你们年级的英国交换生Tom正因自己的体重问题感到焦虑。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1. 指出你注意到的他的不良生活习惯； 2. 建议他改变生活习惯，并列举改变的方法； 3. 展望积极改变后的状态。 注意：词数80-100左右。 Dear Tom, I’ve noticed you’ve been feeling down about your weight lately, and I also saw you often … ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 4 英语角开展以“健康饮食”为主题的演讲比赛，假如你是李华，请你以“A Healthy Diet”为题写一份英语演讲稿。要求：参照下表，阐述健康饮食的重要性，并给出合理的建议。 A Healthy Diet 健康饮食的重要性 1. 提供能量 2. 强壮身体 合理的建议 1. 按时吃饭 2. 多吃水果、蔬菜 3. …… (补充2点) 注意： (1)词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (2)可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。 A Healthy Diet Dear classmates, I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “A Healthy Diet”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening! Passage 5 假定你是李华，得知你的英国笔友Peter最近经常熬夜刷题、运动不足，身心状态不佳。请你给他写一封电子邮件，给他提出健康生活的建议，内容包括： 1. 合理规划作息，避免熬夜； 2. 坚持日常运动，放松身心； 3. 保持良好心态。 注意： 1.写作词数应为 80 个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua Passage 6 假设你是李华。你班最近以“太空探索是否值得”为主题进行了一次讨论会。请你写一篇议论文，介绍你们讨论的情况并发表你的个人观点。内容包括： 一些同学赞同 1. 获得新知识； 2. 给人类带来更大的生存空间。 一些同学反对 1. 耗资巨大； 2. 宇航员的安全问题。 你的观点 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展选做】 Passage 1 许多高中生熬夜学习。对此，不同人有不同意见，请你以“高中生应熬夜学习么”为题写一篇议论文。 要求：1. 从正反两个方面陈述人们不同意见； 2. 给出你的见解。 注意：词数100词左右；题目已经写出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：stay up 熬夜 Should Senior High Students Stay up for study? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 假定你是李华，学校即将举行以“Is it necessary for humans to explore oceans?”为题的英语作文比赛，请按照下列要求写一篇议论文。要点如下： 1.使海洋可持续发展； 2.了解海洋环境； 3.更好地了解气候。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 最近，社会上的整形医院(plastic surgery hospital)越来越多，很多人，尤其是年轻人，热衷于整容手术(cosmetic surgery)。请你谈谈自己对此现象的看法，并对自己的观点加以论证。 注意：1. 词数100左右; 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 9 / 9 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $