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9A Unit 7 The big screen 作文讲义
一、话题解读
1.核心话题:介绍自己最喜欢的电影,简要交代影片类型与主要情节,结合具体内容说明喜爱理由、个人感受及从中得到的启发。
2.写作要求:① 写清影片名称、类型、主要情节、喜爱理由与收获;
② 介绍情节多用现在时,个人观影经历可用过去时;
③ 恰当运用although/though、so...that、such...that或so that;
④ 词数90-120,以具体题目要求为准。
3.中考定位:本话题可迁移为“我最喜欢的电影”“一次难忘的观影经历”“向朋友推荐电影”等写作。重点是情节简明、理由具体、感受真实。
二、写作任务
本单元的主要写作任务是介绍自己最喜欢的电影。参考教材中关于Dangal的影评,按“影片简介—主要情节—个人评价与启发”组织内容,也可以迁移练习电影推荐信。
三、审题指导
先确定影片,再选择能支持自己观点的情节。介绍故事时写清人物、困难与结果;说明喜欢的理由时,可以从以下问题入手:
What is your favourite film?(你最喜欢的电影是什么?)
What kind of film is it?(它属于哪种类型的电影?)
What is the film about?(这部电影讲了什么故事?)
What is your favourite part of the film?(你最喜欢影片的哪一部分?)
Why do you like the film?(你为什么喜欢这部电影?)
What can you learn from it?(你能从中学到什么?)
四、写作步骤
◆ 步骤一:开头点明影片名称,简要介绍影片类型、国别或故事背景。
◆ 步骤二:用少量语句概括主要情节,写出人物面对的困难、行动与结果。
◆ 步骤三:结合影片内容说明喜爱理由,表达感受、收获或推荐意愿。
五、写作框架
写作部分
核心内容
推荐时态
连接词/过渡语
开头(总起)
点明影片名称,介绍类型、国别或故事背景
一般现在时
一般过去时
My favourite film is...,
It is a(n)...film.
It is based on a true story.
中间(分述)
简述主要情节,结合具体内容说明喜爱理由
一般现在时
一般过去时
The film tells the story of...,
Although..., ...
I love this film because...
结尾(总结)
写出个人感受与启发,表达推荐意愿或行动
一般现在时
一般将来时
From this film I learn that...,
It is so...that...,
I would like to recommend it to...
六、素材宝库
1.词汇积累
影片与情节类
评价与感受类
主题与表达类
连接词类
film 电影
funny 有趣的
dream 梦想
because 因为
cartoon 动画片
touching 感人的
courage 勇气
although 虽然
comedy 喜剧
inspiring 鼓舞人心的
support 支持
however 然而
action film 动作片
meaningful 有意义的
teamwork 团队合作
at first 开始时
sci-fi film 科幻片
exciting 令人兴奋的
give up 放弃
finally 最后
plot 情节
moving 感动人的
work hard 努力
besides 此外
character 角色
interesting 有趣的
be based on 基于……
so that 以便
ending 结尾
wonderful 精彩的
come true 实现
in my opinion 在我看来
2. 句型积累
1. My favourite film is ... . 我最喜欢的电影是……。
2. It is a(n) ... film. 它是一部……电影。
3. It is based on a true story. 它以一个真实的故事为基础。
4. The film tells the story of ... . 这部电影讲述了……的故事。
5. Although ..., ... . 虽然……,但是……。
6. I love this film because ... . 我喜欢这部电影,因为……。
7. It is so ... that ... . / It is such a(n) ... film that ... . 它如此……以至于……。
8. From this film I learn that ... . 从这部电影中,我学到了……。
表达要点:although/though与but不连用;so+形容词/副词+that从句,such+(a/an)+形容词+名词+that从句。so that可表目的,后接含can/could等的从句。
3. 写作模板
电影介绍模板
My favourite film is [片名]. It is a(n) [类型/国别] film. It is based on [真实故事等].
The film tells the story of [主人公] who [主要经历]. Although [遇到的困难], [人物的行动与结果]. My favourite part is [喜爱的情节].
I love this film because [具体理由]. It is so [形容词] that [个人感受]. From this film I learn that [收获或启发]. I hope to [今后的行动].
电影推荐信模板
Dear [收信人姓名],
I would like to recommend [片名] to you. It is a(n) [类型] film about [故事主题].
The story begins with [故事起点]. Then, [主要经历与结果]. I enjoy it because [具体理由]. It is such a(n) [形容词] film that [感受或评价].
From this film, we can learn [启发]. I believe you will like it too. Please tell me what you think after watching it.
Yours,
[你的姓名]
七、参考范文
1.电影介绍
My favourite film
My favourite film is Dangal. It is an Indian film based on a true story. I find it both funny and touching.
The film is about a father who trains his daughters to become great wrestlers. Although the training is difficult, the girls keep working hard. Finally, the elder daughter wins a gold medal. My favourite part is the moment when she makes her dream come true.
I love this film because it shows the power of hard work and family support. It is so inspiring that I want to watch it again. From it I learn that we should never give up our dreams, even when life is hard.
2.影片评价与感悟
A film that inspires me
Zootopia is one of my favourite films. It is an animated film about Judy Hopps, a rabbit who dreams of becoming a police officer.
Judy works with a fox called Nick Wilde to solve a mystery. Although she faces many difficulties, she keeps trying. I like her because she is brave and never loses hope. The story is so interesting that it holds my attention from beginning to end.
The film teaches me not to judge others by their appearance. Everyone has something special to offer, and working together can make a difference. It is such a meaningful film that I would like to recommend it to my friends.
3.变式训练题目
假如你是李华,请给朋友Mike写一封信,推荐动画电影The Lion King(1994年版)。要点:主人公Simba在父亲去世后离开家,在朋友帮助下找回勇气,回到家乡并承担责任;故事感人,音乐优美;说明自己的感受与收获。
要求:要点齐全,语言连贯;词数100左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I would like to recommend a film called The Lion King to you.
答案范文:
Dear Mike,
I would like to recommend a film called The Lion King to you.
It is an animated film made in 1994. It tells the story of a young lion called Simba. After his father dies, Simba leaves home. With his friends' help, he finds the courage to return and take responsibility.
I love the film because the story is touching and the music is beautiful. Although Simba feels lost at first, he learns to face his problems. His journey encourages me to be brave when I meet difficulties. It also teaches me the importance of friendship. I think you will enjoy it and learn something from it too.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文翻译:
亲爱的Mike:我想向你推荐一部名叫The Lion King的电影。
这是一部1994年制作的动画电影,讲述了主人公Simba的故事。父亲去世后,他离开家。在朋友们的帮助下,他找回了回家的勇气,并承担起自己的责任。
我喜欢这部电影,因为故事感人,音乐优美。Simba开始时虽很无助,但他学会了面对问题。他的经历鼓励我勇于面对困难,也让我明白友情的重要性。我想你也会喜欢,并从中有所收获。你的朋友,李华。
影片资料:教材第103-104页;Disney Animation(disneyanimation.com/films/zootopia/;disneyanimation.com/films/the-lion-king/)。
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