清单03 读后续写之人与自然·关爱动物类（知识清单）（全国通用）2027年高考英语一轮复习讲练测

清单03 读后续写之人与自然—关爱动植物类 目录导航 01知识脑图·核心脉络搭建——梳理专题框架，搭建知识体系 02 考点深研·知能分层突破——深挖高频考点，分层突破重难点 考点一 主题常用词汇和语块 考点二 构思过程 考点三 高考例题解析 03优题精练·专题实战通关——精选优质试题，强化实战应用 知识脑图·核心脉络搭建 考点深研●知能分层突破 人与动物的主题在“读后续写”中是一个备受青睐的题材，因为这种关系不仅充满温情，也容易唤起读者的情感共鸣。试题一般从两个角度展开，一是人和动植物和谐相处, 要么是人类帮助动植物解决问题，要么是动植物帮助人类解决问题；二是人类与动植物产生冲突，尤其遇到勇猛高大的动物，遇到危险，首先沉着冷静与动物周旋，后来向别人求助，之后成功脱险的故事。 ■主题常用词汇和语块 名词 1. ecosystem 生态系统 2. biodiversity 生物多样性 3. water lily睡莲 4. hardwood 阔叶树；硬材(阔叶树的木材) 5. mammal 哺乳动物 6. nutrient 营养素，营养物 7. shark 鲨鱼 8. whale 鲸 9. soil 土壤；国土，领土，土地10. region 地区，区域；行政区 11. continent 大陆，陆地，洲 12. species (pl. species) 种，物种 13. nut 坚果 14. wildlife 野生动植物，野生生物 13. frog 蛙，青蛙 14. insect 昆虫 17. cattle 牛 18. impact n. 影响，作用；撞击，冲撞 19. damage 损害，伤害，损坏，破坏20. climate 气候；倾向，风气 21. greenhouse 温室，暖房 22. gas 气体；煤气；汽油 23. drought 旱灾，久旱 24. belt 地带，地区；腰带；传送带 25. medal 奖章，勋章 26. image 形象；图像；意象 27. deer (pl.deer)鹿 28.camp 营地 29. far 皮毛 30. jaw 爪子 31. nail 尾巴 32. disaster n. 灾难，灾害；彻底失败 动词 1. protest vi. 反对，抗议 vt. 反对；坚持声称，申辩 n. 抗议，反对 2. profit n. 利润，收益；好处 vi. & vt. 获益，得到好处 3. process n. 过程，进程；步骤，流程 vt. 加工，处理 4. recycle vt. 回收利用，再利用 5. survive vi. 生存，存活 vt. 幸存，幸免于难 6. harm n. & vt. 伤害，损害 7. disappear vi. 不复存在，灭绝，消亡；消失；失踪 8. extinct adj. 灭绝的，绝种的 9.apply v. 应用；申请；涂；有关；运用 10. organize vt. 组织 11. defend vt. 保护；防御；辩白 12.seize 抓住，夺取；控制 13. inspect 检查；查看；审视；视察 14.restore 恢复；使复原；修复 15. advocate 提倡，倡议 16. pat 轻拍 17. approach 接近，靠近 形容词 1. towering adj. 高大的，高耸的；出色的 2. living adj. 活着的，活的；在使用的 3. nowhere adv. 无处，哪里都不 4. former adj. 昔日的，前任的；以前的，从前的 5. harmful adj. 有害的 6.harmless adj. 无害的 7.various adj. 各种不同的，各种各样的 8.agricultural adj. 农业的；农艺的 9.global adj. 全球的；全面的 10.organized adj. 有组织的；有条理的 11.entire adj. 完全的 12.absolute adj. 绝对的，完全的 13.defensive adj. 防御性的；自我保护的 14.economic adj. 经济的，经济上的；可赚钱的 15.further adj. 更多的，更进一步的 16. pure 干净的；纯的；纯粹的 17. fierce 凶猛的 18. thoughtful 考虑周到的 19. gentle 温柔的 20. crucial 至关重要的 词块/ 语块 1. gently cup the bird in hands轻轻捧起小鸟 2.bandage the bird's wound 为小鸟包扎伤口 3. place food in the shade 在树荫下放置食物 4.stroke with warm feathers 用温暖的羽毛轻抚 5.watch quietly by the nest 在巢边静静守护 6.build a shelter for the bird 为小鸟搭建庇护所 7.feed with a small spoon用小勺喂食 8.watch the bird in the sunlight 在阳光下观察小鸟 9.wrap in soft cloth 用柔软的布包裹 10.call softly from the branch在枝头轻声呼唤 11. call softly in the alley在巷子里轻声呼唤 12. stroke the cat's fur with fingers用手指轻抚猫的毛 13. leave cat food in the corner在角落里放置猫粮14. make eye contact with the cat与猫对视15.embrace with a warm hug用温暖的怀抱拥抱16. serve water in a small bowl 用小碗盛水 17.watch the cat in the moonlight在月光下观察猫 18. find the cat in the ruins在废墟中发现猫 19.keep the cat warm in the cold在寒冷中为猫保暖 20. run on the grass 在草地上奔跑 21.toss a ball to the dog用球逗狗 22.snuggle on the sofa在沙发上依偎 23. groom the dog's fur为狗梳理毛发 24.take a walk in the park 在公园里散步 25. lead with a leash 用狗链牵引 26.play by the lake在湖边嬉戏 27.reward with dog food用狗粮奖励 28.run in the rain 在雨中奔跑 29.keep company at night 在夜晚陪伴 30.clean the deer's wound为鹿清洗伤口 31. spot the injured deer in the bushes 在灌木丛中发现受伤的鹿 32.approach gently to avoid startling 轻轻靠近避免惊吓 33. shade the deer with leaves 用树叶为鹿遮荫 34.soothe the deer on the grass 在草地上安抚鹿 35. build a makeshift stretcher with branches 用树枝搭建简易担架 36. search for herbs in the forest 在森林中寻找草药 37. moisten the deer's lips with stream water 用溪水润湿鹿的嘴唇 38. watch over the injured deer in the moonlight 在月光下守护受伤的鹿 39. wrap the deer's wound with a scarf 用围巾包裹鹿的伤口 40.interact with the cat under the streetlight在街灯下与猫互动 ■构思过程 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Jack was awakened by a gunshot. He looked out toward the frozen lake. Near the trees he saw a shining piece of metal. When it moved, Jack saw that it was a long gun. A minute later, a man wearing hunting clothes came out of the woods. Suddenly a bird flew upward. The man quickly raised the gun and shot at it. Jack watched the bird, praying it had not been hurt. It flew near the ground and went into some tall bushes. The hunter didn’t move for a moment. Then he began to look for the bird. “No hunting!” Jack came out in his nightclothes and shouted. “No hunting on my land!” The man called back, “Where can I hunt?” Jack said, “Go South!” And then he pointed in the direction behind the man. The hunter started to walk away. After a while, Jack had just finished putting on his clothes when he heard another gunshot. He walked toward the lake. Fighting was the last thing he wanted, but the man must go. Suddenly he heard a bird s wings beating the dry grass. Jack moved quickly towards the sound. He saw a colored head... the head of a beautiful bird. The bird flapped its wings, one of which was broken completely. Jack decided to take the bird home and treat its broken wing so that it could fly again. He was almost going through the woods when he heard the hunter behind him. “You have just found that bird?” the hunter asked, stepping closer, and said, “Give me that bird!” “Leave here and don’t follow me,” Jack told him. The man’s face got red. “Mister,” he said, “I have been hunting here all my life. I grew up here.” Jack looked into the hunter’s gray eyes and raised his voice, “I do not know who you are and I do not care. I own this place and I am telling you to leave!” “Now look, Mister,” the hunter insisted, “be reasonable.” He raised his gun. A cold wind blew across Jack’s face. He felt a chill (冷风) going down his spine (脊柱). 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。 Jack stood there and became calm with the bird in his arms. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The hunter looked back from time to time and Jack signaled to him to leave quickly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 构思路线 第一步：提炼六个要素，获取主旨大意。 读后续写的阅读文本基本上都是记叙文，所以要提炼出六个基本要素：who, where, when, what, why和how。考生在阅读文本过程中只有把握好这六个要素，才能总结出文章大意和故事情节，进而推断出作者的写作意图，轻松获取故事的主旨大意。 第二步：理清故事脉络，把握情感变化。 线索是叙事性作品中贯穿整个故事的脉络，所有的情节均围绕文本主要线索展开。记叙文一般有两条故事发展线索：情节(plots)线索和情感(emotions)线索。考生可以利用图表法或思维导图法理清故事的发展脉络，把握作者的情感变化。这样，考生在续写时才可以更好地遵循原文的思路、风格和语言。 第三步：分析段落首句，精心设计问题。 分析续写后所给的两个段首句对提高所写内容和原文的融洽度至关重要。考生可以先分析一下所给的两个段首句之间的逻辑关系是顺承关系、转折关系还是因果关系等。然后，根据自己的判断设计小问题：根据段首句得知什么？续写开始写什么？接下来写什么？续写第一段的段尾如何衔接第二段的开头？续写第二段的段尾如何才能照应故事的主旨大意？ 第四步：设计结尾情节，拔高价值取向。 考生必须紧紧围绕故事的发展脉络，展开合理的想象，巧妙地设计所续写的两段的故事结尾情节。设计结尾情节时，考生可以借助前文的故事脉络设计一些具体的问题。还要注意设计好续写的第二段的结尾，让结尾处的情感得到升华或拔高，把故事所折射出的人生观、价值观充分体现出来。 第五步：列出关键词汇，续写连贯句群。 设计好要续写的两段的情节后，考生可以先在草稿纸上把原文出现的主要人物、发生的主要事件和描写人物或事件的情感词罗列出来，并按事件的发生顺序逐一理清。最后，考生用这些关键词汇重构句子，写出连贯一致的句群。 第六步：升格低级词句，誊写完善成文。 考生在写好两段的内容后，可以根据语法知识把一些低级的词汇或句式进行润色升格。升格低级词句的目的是让续写的内容更加符合原文的语言风格，与原文在衔接上更加融洽。完成这一步后，考生要迅速把写好的两段英文以清晰、规范、美观、流畅的书写誊写在答题纸上。 第一步: 读文章(文本阅读+信息梳理) (1)语篇类型：记叙文 (2)关键信息 when One Day in the Morning what Jack heard a gunshot, and found a man shot at a bird. Jack wanted to save the bird, but the man also wanted the bird. who Jack(听见枪响，加以制止，发现受伤，决定救助) ①Jack was awakened by a gunshot. ②“No hunting!” Jack came out in his nightclothes and shouted. ③He saw a colored head... the head of a beautiful bird. ④Jack decided to take the bird home and treat its broken wing. The Hunter(射杀小鸟，索要小鸟) ①The man quickly raised the gun and shot at it. ②“You have just found that bird?” the hunter asked, stepping closer, and said, “Give me that bird!” 第二步: 理清思路,把握全局 提炼文章主旨，定续写基调 Jack听到枪响后，发现有猎人在朝着一只小鸟开枪，Jack想要救它，但是猎人想要回这只受伤的鸟，并且态度非常强硬。这时，Jack会怎么做呢？最终能救下这只小鸟吗？ 第三步：推动情节，展开续写 (1)问题解决 主要的问题冲突：猎人打鸟，Jack想要救鸟合理的解决办法：Jack坚持要救下小鸟，猎人最终示弱离开 (2)情节发展 第一段：首句：看到小鸟受伤→与猎人强硬对抗→猎人示弱离开 第二段：首句：确认猎人离开→救治小鸟康复→放生小鸟回归自然 (3)主旨升华 Jack不惧猎人的威胁，用于救助受伤的小鸟，表达了对小鸟的关心，也展示了对动物，对生命的呵护。 第四步: 激活表达，精品输出 (1) 语言润色 ①非谓语动词的使用使得动作描写更加形象具体，句式也显得多样化，例如：“Holding it tightly in his arms, Jack knew that he just couldn’t give up this tiny life. ” ②“The steady gaze sent a strong message to the hunter that by no means would he give in. ”倒装句能使句子结构更加平衡，并且能突出作者想表达的重点。 (2) 结构衔接 使用表示时间的副词及表示结果的不定式，除了提升情感效果之外，还使文章结构清晰，例如：“And then to Jack’s great relief, the hunter began to walk away slowly.” (3) 高分范文赏读 Jack stood there and became calm with the bird in his arms. The bird struggled weakly and made a wild, strange sound. The sound made Jack’s heart ache. It seemed as if he could sense the bird’s fear and helplessness. Holding it tightly in his arms, Jack knew that he just couldn’t give up this tiny life. He raised his eyes and looked directly into the hunter’s. The steady gaze sent a strong message to the hunter that by no means would he give in. And then to Jack’s great relief, the hunter began to walk away slowly. The hunter looked back from time to time and Jack signaled to him to leave quickly. Jack watched until the hunter was gone and then he went to the house. He carefully laid the bird on the soft pillow, applied some medicine to the wound and bandaged its broken wing. With his careful nursing, the bird gradually recovered. One day Jack returned to find it eagerly flapping its wings, and he knew it was time to set it free. ■高考例题分析 例题1(2023浙江1月卷) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird(蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs(蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up. With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me. When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty? As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight. During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 例题2(2026-2027学年高三上·安徽·阶段检测) Photography has long been my favorite hobby and I’m always eager to record beautiful moments of nature with my camera. One morning, I was walking slowly along the lake near my neighborhood, expecting to capture a good moment, when I heard a weak and painful cry coming from the thick grass by the bank. Curious and concerned, I walked closer and found a little white egret(白鹭) trapped in an abandoned boat. Its wing was badly hurt, and it was struggling helplessly, unable to escape. Out of pity, I tried every means to free it without causing further injury. Finally, I rescued the poor creature and took it home temporarily. My mother works at a local animal hospital. She gave the egret simple and careful treatment immediately. Meanwhile, I used a large cardboard box to build a warm nest for it on the balcony. With good care, the egret gradually regained its strength, but recovered very slowly from the injury to its wing. The egret’s pure white feathers and elegant postures fascinated me deeply. Suddenly an idea occurred to me: If I could keep the rare and beautiful wild bird and take a series of exquisite(精美的) photos of it when it grew bigger, I could participate in the city’s photography competition and definitely win the grand prize. The prize money was exactly enough to cover the cost of my long-awaited professional camera. However, staring at the egret’s clear eyes and recalling how it struggled in pain before the rescue, I hesitated. Wild animals should belong in nature instead of being personal possessions. Finally, I firmly gave up this idea and decided to release it into the wild after it fully recovered. One afternoon, I returned home after school as usual. Shockingly, the cardboard nest was empty and the window was wide open. Thinking the egret must have flown away alone but hadn’t fully recovered from the injury, I felt a sharp sense of loss and worry. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Moments later, I received a call from my mother. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A month later, my mother and I returned to the lake to set the egret free. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 优题精练●专题实战通关 Passage 1 (2026-2027学年高三上·湖南张家界·阶段检测)On a cool autumn afternoon, Anna walked home from school. On her way, she spotted a small weak dog lying beside the roadside bushes. Its fur was dirty and thin. It trembled slightly and looked hungry. Anna felt sorry for the poor little animal. She looked around. No one nearby seemed to own the dog. She wanted to take it home, yet she worried her parents might disagree. Their small apartment was not suitable for raising pets. After hesitation, Anna carefully picked up the little dog and headed home. When Anna stepped through the front door with the dog in arms, her parents felt surprised. Her dad expressed concern about extra trouble and cost. Her mom worried about possible diseases the stray dog might carry. Anna explained how helpless the dog was and begged her parents to give it a chance. After long discussion, parents finally reached a compromise. They agreed to keep the dog for one week. Within seven days, Anna must find a proper new home for it, or they would send it to the local animal shelter. Anna accepted the condition happily. She named the little dog Lucky. Paragraph 1: During the following week, Anna spent almost all spare time staying with Lucky. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: On the seventh day, a classmate of Anna’s came to visit her house. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 (2026·云南·模拟预测)Beside our house stood a large azalea(杜鹃花). If left alone, it would grow wildly and take over our backyard. Every spring, I made a plan to cut its overgrown branches. Last spring I took my cutting tools and got ready for the yearly work. I carried my trimmers(修剪器) and climbed up a stepladder. Half of the big bush had already been neatly trimmed. Standing high on the ladder, I reached out toward its top branches. Suddenly a bird flew quickly out from the thick bush and rushed over the backyard. It was a brown thrasher(棕鸫鸟). For weeks, I had often seen this bird or its partner moving around behind our house. “Oh no, this may mean trouble,” I thought to myself. I gently pulled several branches apart and looked deep inside the azalea. There, I found a bird nest. Made of thin sticks and dry leaves, the simple nest held three helpless baby birds, their soft feathers still thin. I was caught in a difficult dilemma. If I continued trimming, I would greatly disturb the bird family. The parent bird had just been frightened away from the nest. Those weak baby chicks could not stay safe in the open air. The longer I kept working, the longer the parent birds would stay away. Worse still, more fallen leaves removed by cutting would further reduce the babies’ chance of survival, facing great danger from hawks, eagles and crows. If I stopped my work, however, the azalea would keep growing tall and messy. I imagined my untidy bush with its wild top would catch every neighbor’s eye. I was certain they would talk about its uncut and strange‑looking. 注意： 1. 写作词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Staring at the nest for a long time, I climbed down the ladder slowly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Following my decision, I kept an eye on the birds in the azalea now and then. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 (2026-2027学年高三上·重庆·阶段检测)Sharon’s cat Baby-Girl had been missing for six months. The small tabby(虎斑猫) disappeared from her parents’ house one summer when Sharon was moving between apartments. Whenever Sharon thought of her, she pictured Baby-Girl curled up inside the old decorative fireplace, where the cat would often settle for hours. Her dad Bill, the family’s “realist”, always prepared everyone for the worst. “She’s either hit by a car or taken in by someone,” he would warn. But Sharon refused to give up. Baby-Girl had once been a stray, a tough little cat surviving all on her own. As weeks turned into months, Sharon still held the quiet belief that they would meet again. Back home for Thanksgiving, Sharon was determined to look for her cat. She grabbed a cat carrier and asked Dad to drive her to the animal shelter. Dad agreed but reminded her with his familiar half-smile: “Be realistic. She has been gone too long. You won’t find her.” After all, “I don’t believe in miracles” was his favourite saying, even printed on his holiday shirt. At the shelter, a staff member showed them rows of cages. Sharon checked every cat carefully, yet none was Baby-Girl. Dad told her the back room held newly-arrived cats and her cat would not be there. Still, Sharon insisted on having a look. She stepped inside and caught a familiar meow. In one cage sat a thin tabby with big green eyes and a white left hind paw. Thinner than before, it was unmistakably Baby-Girl. Tears welled up in Sharon’s eyes. She opened the cage, and the cat nearly leaped into her arms. “Dad! It’s Baby-Girl!” she shouted. Dad stood frozen, whispering in disbelief: “It can’t be the same cat. Not after all this time.” Back home, Baby-Girl purred and rubbed against everyone’s legs, totally relaxed. But Dad still doubted its identity. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dad insisted, “If she sits in her favorite spot, I’ll believe it’s her.” ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Days later, the family gathered to celebrate Thanksgiving when Dad came downstairs, wearing his new holiday shirt. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 4 (2026-2027学年高三上·陕西商洛·阶段检测)Kara felt the weight of the world lift off her shoulders with every step into the Alaskan wilderness. She had saved for two years for this trip alone, desperate for a clean break from her busy city life. Her goal was simple: to find quiet, to breathe deeply, and to remember who she was away from screens and schedules. The vast land of tall spruce(云杉) trees and endless sky was the perfect cure. On her third day, she found a hidden valley full of ripe wild blueberries. A smile broke across her face. This was the place she had been searching for. She set down her pack and began to gently pick the juicy berries, filling her small container. Soft sunlight streamed through tree branches, painting golden spots across the green grass. The sun was warm, and a gentle wind carried the faint, sweet smell of the fruit. The only other sounds were the buzzing of bees and the distant call of a bird. For the first time in years, her mind was completely still, empty of the endless chatter that usually filled it. Then, a deep thump(重击声) of a small branch broke the silence. It was strangely loud, out of place. Every muscle in her body tensed, and cold sweat ran down her back. Less than fifty feet away, a huge brown bear stood at the edge of the blueberry field. It was very large and strong, its shoulders massive as it surveyed the land. Time seemed to stop. Every survival guide she had ever read flashed through her mind. Don’t run. Don’t make eye contact. Stay calm. Panic roared inside her, urging her to turn and flee, but she fought hard to follow those safety rules. Her heart beat wildly against her chest. She looked down, focusing on the ground near her boots. She forced herself to breathe slowly, in and out, waiting for a bad change. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 But the change never came. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Slowly, the bear turned and walked away into the trees. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 5 (2026·陕西商洛·一模)It was a cold Saturday morning. Lily decided to go jogging in the park near her neighbourhood. She put on her warm sports coat and set off. While running along the path, she noticed a little dog sitting beside the bush. It was shaking with cold. There was no owner nearby. The small dog wore a worn collar without any name tag. Lily stopped and bent down gently. The little dog looked scared. Lily took off her coat and wrapped the freezing little creature with part of the coat. She looked around again, hoping to find its owner. But nobody appeared. Lily thought for a moment. She could not leave the poor dog outside in such cold weather. Therefore, she decided to take it home first. When Lily arrived home, her parents were a little surprised to see the unexpected guest. They agreed that they should help the little dog find its original owner. They posted photos of the dog on their neighbourhood WeChat group and put up lost‑and‑found notices on community noticeboards. Then they waited. Day after day, nobody called to claim the dog. Lily grew fond of this lovely little dog. She fed it and played with it after school. Deep in her heart, she secretly hoped that nobody would come for it. 注意：续写两段，每段开头已给出；每段词数大约150；情节合理，语句通顺。 Paragraph 1: One afternoon three weeks later, the telephone in Lily’s house suddenly rang. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Seeing how upset Lily was, the dog’s owner spoke softly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 6 (2027·陕西商洛·模拟预测)Kate felt the weight of the world lift off her shoulders with every step into the Alaskan wilderness. She had saved for two years for this trip alone, desperate for a clean break from her busy city life. Her goal was simple: to find quiet, to breathe deeply, and to remember who she was away from screens and schedules. The vast land of tall spruce(云杉) trees and endless sky was the perfect cure. On her third day, she found a hidden valley full of ripe wild blueberries. A smile broke across her face. This was the peace she had been searching for. She set down her pack and began to gently pick the juicy berries, filling her small container. Soft sunlight streamed through tree branches, painting golden spots across the green grass. The sun was warm, and a gentle wind carried the faint, sweet smell of the fruit. The only other sounds were the buzzing of bees and the distant call of a bird. For the first time in years, her mind was completely still, empty of the endless chatter that usually filled it. Then, a sharp snap(咔嚓的折断声) of a small branch broke the silence. It was strangely loud, out of place. Kate froze, her hand stopped over a bunch of berries. Slowly, she turned her head. Her blood ran cold. Every muscle in her body tensed, and cold sweat ran down her back. Less than fifty feet away, a huge brown bear stood at the edge of the blueberry field. It was very large and strong, its shoulders moving as it surveyed the land. Time seemed to stop. Every survival guide she had ever read flashed through her mind. Don’t run. Don’t make eye contact. Stay calm. Panic screamed inside her, urging her to turn and flee, but she fought hard to follow those safety rules. Her heart beat wildly against her chest. She looked down, focusing on the ground near her boots. She forced herself to breathe slowly, in and out, waiting for a loud charge. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 But the charge never came. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Slowly, the bear turned and walked away into the trees. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 7 (2026-2027学年高三上·江苏苏州·开学考试)Phil, a 57-year-old property manager, had been thinking about getting a dog for over a year. His apartment lease(租约) changed recently to allow pets. He told himself he was just going to look — get a sense of what the process was like, not commit to anything. At the Hawthorn Shelter, a volunteer named Amber walked him through the kennels(狗屋). At the end of the row, Otto, who had been at Hawthorn for seven months and desperately needed a new owner, was introduced to him. Actually, he had been adopted once before — returned after two weeks with a note: “Too attached. Follows constantly. Can’t be left alone.” That note had followed Otto like a shadow ever since, scaring off almost every other visitor who paused at his kennel, yet Phil felt something special in Otto. Amber set Phil up in a small visiting room with Otto. Phil sat on the bench. Otto pressed against his leg immediately. They sat together for about twenty minutes — Phil looking through his phone, Otto staying close without demanding anything, occasionally resting his chin (下巴) on Phil’s knee with a soft sigh. When Phil’s phone rang, he stood up. Otto didn’t bark or jump. He simply stepped forward, placed both front paws around Phil’s leg, and held on. Phil took a step toward the door. Otto’s paws tightened. He pressed his forehead into Phil’s knee. His body trembled faintly. Phil stopped moving. He stood completely still for nearly a full minute, just looking down at this dog holding onto his leg in total silence, his heart heavy with something he couldn’t name. Amber, watching from the hallway, later said that the silence was the loudest thing she’d heard all week. Phil slowly sat back down on the floor. Otto climbed directly into his lap, curled into a tight ball. Phil sat there for another fifteen minutes, studying Otto’s peaceful, trusting face, and something deep inside him quietly shifted. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150词左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then he walked to the front desk. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Three days later, Amber received some photos of Otto from Phil on her phone. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 8 (2026·广东深圳·一模)Mum and Matt lived in the country next to a forest. Every weekend, they took walks through the forest. But everything changed after Mum found a new job in the city. They said goodbye to the trees and birds and moved to an apartment far from nature. They went to the park, but there were lots of people. It was hard to hear the birds when everybody was talking and laughing. Matt missed the peaceful countryside badly and could never feel at home in the busy city. One afternoon, there was a knock on their door. It was Mrs. Potter, their elderly neighbour. She was holding a large, potted tree. “I’m trying to bring this bonsai home, but it’s too heavy for me,” said Mrs. Potter with a warm smile. “Of course we can help,” Mum replied right away. “It’s lovely,” said Matt, looking at it with admiration. “It reminds me of the forest back home.” When Mrs. Potter opened the door to her apartment, Matt was surprised. It wasn’t a typical apartment at all. It was a tiny hidden forest! Dozens of trees sat in various pots, their green branches filling every corner with the calmness of wild woods. As Mum set down the bonsai, Matt immediately spotted a tiny bud (花蕾) on the smallest bonsai. Growing up around wild plants, Matt knew this bud would not bloom (开花) right away. It would need days of steady care. Still, it held new life, growing quietly in the city. “We can still keep trees around us even in the city,” Mum told him softly. “These potted greens are smaller, but they bring the same comfort as the forest trees you loved.” Mrs. Potter nodded in agreement. “Exactly, Matt. Nature has a way of finding us, wherever we are. Big trees grow in open forests, and little trees live in small pots, but both can bring peace to our hearts. I believe you will find your own joy here.” Matt looked around the tiny forest and felt something shift inside him, a feeling he couldn’t quite name, but it made him feel less like a visitor. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。     “Why don’t you choose one bonsai to take home?” Mrs. Potter suggested. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________     Days later, Matt knocked on Mrs. Potter’s door and called, “The bud bloomed!” ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 9 (2026-2027学年高三上·江苏镇江·开学考试)Jean and John were the proud owners of a popular general store in the small, quiet town of Emerald Forest. Nestled near dense forests and crystal-clear lakes, their cozy shop served both locals and tourists. However, one cold morning, their peaceful routine was suddenly shattered. Upon arriving at work, they found an unwelcome surprise in the candy department: sweets were scattered across the counter, and boxes of chocolates had been violently torn open, leaving a sticky mess! Puzzled and frustrated, they checked the rest of the store. Amazingly, nothing else was out of place. There was no sign of forced entry; the doors and windows were all securely locked. “Perhaps it was squirrels?” Jean suggested hopefully. But John shook his head, pointing out that squirrels couldn’t possibly have opened the front door. After a day of fruitless guessing, they concluded it must be rats. Determined to catch the thief, John set a trap and placed it near the candy display. The next morning, they found similar evidence of a break-in, but the rat trap remained completely untouched. Realizing the intruder(闯入者) was far cleverer than they had thought, Jean suggested installing(安装) a hidden camera. A technician quickly set up the equipment, and they waited anxiously for the night to pass. The following day, they rushed to check the recordings, expecting to see a raccoon(浣熊) or a particularly large rat. The scene on the screen left them absolutely speechless. Staring at the recordings, Jean froze all at once, breath held in her throat. John bent forward, eyes wide and brows raised high. Neither could believe their eyes when watching the unexpected intruder come and go again and again. Too surprised to say a single word, they were filled with a strong feeling of doubt about the strange sight on screen. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 It was a young bear, targeting their store for his nightly meals! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Instead of frightening the bear away, they decided to treat it outside the store. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 10 (2026-2027学年高三上·江苏扬州·开学考试)Every day on my way home from school, I passed a group of stray cats(流浪猫) behind our apartment building. They stayed together in cold corners, their fur dirty and their eyes filled with a mix of hope and fear. As I watched them suffer through changing weather, I could not shake the feeling that I needed to take action. These were not just wild animals. They were living creatures that deserved basic care, so I decided to do whatever I could to help them. Every morning before school, I packed small bags of cat food and bottled water. I went to the courtyard and poured food into several safe spots. At first, the cats ran away at my approach. Slowly they grew less afraid. Soon they would appear from dark corners, cautiously moving toward me. This daily feeding turned into a quiet routine that built trust between us. When winter drew near, temperatures dropped sharply. I could not bear to imagine them freezing in open air. I came up with a plan. With my parents’ permission, I cleaned the damp unused basement(地下室) of our building. I arranged old blankets to make warm, sheltered beds for the cats. It became their safe place to escape freezing wind and snow. Not every neighbour supported my work. One man complained loudly, saying stray cats were a trouble. He threatened to call Animal Control to remove them. We argued more than once. Still, I refused to back down. These cats had no one else to defend them. I started posting adoption information online and told my friends and relatives about the cats. Slowly, good news arrived. Three cats found warm permanent homes with loving families. One shy orange cat remained. No one seemed interested in him. I kept caring for him through the long winter. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As the cold winter continued, the shy orange cat became increasingly quiet and lonely. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Luckily, my aunt paid us a visit on a warm spring afternoon. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 17 / 17 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 清单03 读后续写之人与自然—关爱动植物类 目录导航 01知识脑图·核心脉络搭建——梳理专题框架，搭建知识体系 02 考点深研·知能分层突破——深挖高频考点，分层突破重难点 考点一 主题常用词汇和语块 考点二 构思过程 考点三 高考例题解析 03优题精练·专题实战通关——精选优质试题，强化实战应用 知识脑图·核心脉络搭建 考点深研●知能分层突破 人与动物的主题在“读后续写”中是一个备受青睐的题材，因为这种关系不仅充满温情，也容易唤起读者的情感共鸣。试题一般从两个角度展开，一是人和动植物和谐相处, 要么是人类帮助动植物解决问题，要么是动植物帮助人类解决问题；二是人类与动植物产生冲突，尤其遇到勇猛高大的动物，遇到危险，首先沉着冷静与动物周旋，后来向别人求助，之后成功脱险的故事。 ■主题常用词汇和语块 名词 1. ecosystem 生态系统 2. biodiversity 生物多样性 3. water lily睡莲 4. hardwood 阔叶树；硬材(阔叶树的木材) 5. mammal 哺乳动物 6. nutrient 营养素，营养物 7. shark 鲨鱼 8. whale 鲸 9. soil 土壤；国土，领土，土地10. region 地区，区域；行政区 11. continent 大陆，陆地，洲 12. species (pl. species) 种，物种 13. nut 坚果 14. wildlife 野生动植物，野生生物 13. frog 蛙，青蛙 14. insect 昆虫 17. cattle 牛 18. impact n. 影响，作用；撞击，冲撞 19. damage 损害，伤害，损坏，破坏20. climate 气候；倾向，风气 21. greenhouse 温室，暖房 22. gas 气体；煤气；汽油 23. drought 旱灾，久旱 24. belt 地带，地区；腰带；传送带 25. medal 奖章，勋章 26. image 形象；图像；意象 27. deer (pl.deer)鹿 28.camp 营地 29. far 皮毛 30. jaw 爪子 31. nail 尾巴 32. disaster n. 灾难，灾害；彻底失败 动词 1. protest vi. 反对，抗议 vt. 反对；坚持声称，申辩 n. 抗议，反对 2. profit n. 利润，收益；好处 vi. & vt. 获益，得到好处 3. process n. 过程，进程；步骤，流程 vt. 加工，处理 4. recycle vt. 回收利用，再利用 5. survive vi. 生存，存活 vt. 幸存，幸免于难 6. harm n. & vt. 伤害，损害 7. disappear vi. 不复存在，灭绝，消亡；消失；失踪 8. extinct adj. 灭绝的，绝种的 9.apply v. 应用；申请；涂；有关；运用 10. organize vt. 组织 11. defend vt. 保护；防御；辩白 12.seize 抓住，夺取；控制 13. inspect 检查；查看；审视；视察 14.restore 恢复；使复原；修复 15. advocate 提倡，倡议 16. pat 轻拍 17. approach 接近，靠近 形容词 1. towering adj. 高大的，高耸的；出色的 2. living adj. 活着的，活的；在使用的 3. nowhere adv. 无处，哪里都不 4. former adj. 昔日的，前任的；以前的，从前的 5. harmful adj. 有害的 6.harmless adj. 无害的 7.various adj. 各种不同的，各种各样的 8.agricultural adj. 农业的；农艺的 9.global adj. 全球的；全面的 10.organized adj. 有组织的；有条理的 11.entire adj. 完全的 12.absolute adj. 绝对的，完全的 13.defensive adj. 防御性的；自我保护的 14.economic adj. 经济的，经济上的；可赚钱的 15.further adj. 更多的，更进一步的 16. pure 干净的；纯的；纯粹的 17. fierce 凶猛的 18. thoughtful 考虑周到的 19. gentle 温柔的 20. crucial 至关重要的 词块/ 语块 1. gently cup the bird in hands轻轻捧起小鸟 2.bandage the bird's wound 为小鸟包扎伤口 3. place food in the shade 在树荫下放置食物 4.stroke with warm feathers 用温暖的羽毛轻抚 5.watch quietly by the nest 在巢边静静守护 6.build a shelter for the bird 为小鸟搭建庇护所 7.feed with a small spoon用小勺喂食 8.watch the bird in the sunlight 在阳光下观察小鸟 9.wrap in soft cloth 用柔软的布包裹 10.call softly from the branch在枝头轻声呼唤 11. call softly in the alley在巷子里轻声呼唤 12. stroke the cat's fur with fingers用手指轻抚猫的毛 13. leave cat food in the corner在角落里放置猫粮14. make eye contact with the cat与猫对视15.embrace with a warm hug用温暖的怀抱拥抱16. serve water in a small bowl 用小碗盛水 17.watch the cat in the moonlight在月光下观察猫 18. find the cat in the ruins在废墟中发现猫 19.keep the cat warm in the cold在寒冷中为猫保暖 20. run on the grass 在草地上奔跑 21.toss a ball to the dog用球逗狗 22.snuggle on the sofa在沙发上依偎 23. groom the dog's fur为狗梳理毛发 24.take a walk in the park 在公园里散步 25. lead with a leash 用狗链牵引 26.play by the lake在湖边嬉戏 27.reward with dog food用狗粮奖励 28.run in the rain 在雨中奔跑 29.keep company at night 在夜晚陪伴 30.clean the deer's wound为鹿清洗伤口 31. spot the injured deer in the bushes 在灌木丛中发现受伤的鹿 32.approach gently to avoid startling 轻轻靠近避免惊吓 33. shade the deer with leaves 用树叶为鹿遮荫 34.soothe the deer on the grass 在草地上安抚鹿 35. build a makeshift stretcher with branches 用树枝搭建简易担架 36. search for herbs in the forest 在森林中寻找草药 37. moisten the deer's lips with stream water 用溪水润湿鹿的嘴唇 38. watch over the injured deer in the moonlight 在月光下守护受伤的鹿 39. wrap the deer's wound with a scarf 用围巾包裹鹿的伤口 40.interact with the cat under the streetlight在街灯下与猫互动 ■构思过程 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Jack was awakened by a gunshot. He looked out toward the frozen lake. Near the trees he saw a shining piece of metal. When it moved, Jack saw that it was a long gun. A minute later, a man wearing hunting clothes came out of the woods. Suddenly a bird flew upward. The man quickly raised the gun and shot at it. Jack watched the bird, praying it had not been hurt. It flew near the ground and went into some tall bushes. The hunter didn’t move for a moment. Then he began to look for the bird. “No hunting!” Jack came out in his nightclothes and shouted. “No hunting on my land!” The man called back, “Where can I hunt?” Jack said, “Go South!” And then he pointed in the direction behind the man. The hunter started to walk away. After a while, Jack had just finished putting on his clothes when he heard another gunshot. He walked toward the lake. Fighting was the last thing he wanted, but the man must go. Suddenly he heard a bird s wings beating the dry grass. Jack moved quickly towards the sound. He saw a colored head... the head of a beautiful bird. The bird flapped its wings, one of which was broken completely. Jack decided to take the bird home and treat its broken wing so that it could fly again. He was almost going through the woods when he heard the hunter behind him. “You have just found that bird?” the hunter asked, stepping closer, and said, “Give me that bird!” “Leave here and don’t follow me,” Jack told him. The man’s face got red. “Mister,” he said, “I have been hunting here all my life. I grew up here.” Jack looked into the hunter’s gray eyes and raised his voice, “I do not know who you are and I do not care. I own this place and I am telling you to leave!” “Now look, Mister,” the hunter insisted, “be reasonable.” He raised his gun. A cold wind blew across Jack’s face. He felt a chill (冷风) going down his spine (脊柱). 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。 Jack stood there and became calm with the bird in his arms. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The hunter looked back from time to time and Jack signaled to him to leave quickly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 构思路线 第一步：提炼六个要素，获取主旨大意。 读后续写的阅读文本基本上都是记叙文，所以要提炼出六个基本要素：who, where, when, what, why和how。考生在阅读文本过程中只有把握好这六个要素，才能总结出文章大意和故事情节，进而推断出作者的写作意图，轻松获取故事的主旨大意。 第二步：理清故事脉络，把握情感变化。 线索是叙事性作品中贯穿整个故事的脉络，所有的情节均围绕文本主要线索展开。记叙文一般有两条故事发展线索：情节(plots)线索和情感(emotions)线索。考生可以利用图表法或思维导图法理清故事的发展脉络，把握作者的情感变化。这样，考生在续写时才可以更好地遵循原文的思路、风格和语言。 第三步：分析段落首句，精心设计问题。 分析续写后所给的两个段首句对提高所写内容和原文的融洽度至关重要。考生可以先分析一下所给的两个段首句之间的逻辑关系是顺承关系、转折关系还是因果关系等。然后，根据自己的判断设计小问题：根据段首句得知什么？续写开始写什么？接下来写什么？续写第一段的段尾如何衔接第二段的开头？续写第二段的段尾如何才能照应故事的主旨大意？ 第四步：设计结尾情节，拔高价值取向。 考生必须紧紧围绕故事的发展脉络，展开合理的想象，巧妙地设计所续写的两段的故事结尾情节。设计结尾情节时，考生可以借助前文的故事脉络设计一些具体的问题。还要注意设计好续写的第二段的结尾，让结尾处的情感得到升华或拔高，把故事所折射出的人生观、价值观充分体现出来。 第五步：列出关键词汇，续写连贯句群。 设计好要续写的两段的情节后，考生可以先在草稿纸上把原文出现的主要人物、发生的主要事件和描写人物或事件的情感词罗列出来，并按事件的发生顺序逐一理清。最后，考生用这些关键词汇重构句子，写出连贯一致的句群。 第六步：升格低级词句，誊写完善成文。 考生在写好两段的内容后，可以根据语法知识把一些低级的词汇或句式进行润色升格。升格低级词句的目的是让续写的内容更加符合原文的语言风格，与原文在衔接上更加融洽。完成这一步后，考生要迅速把写好的两段英文以清晰、规范、美观、流畅的书写誊写在答题纸上。 第一步: 读文章(文本阅读+信息梳理) (1)语篇类型：记叙文 (2)关键信息 when One Day in the Morning what Jack heard a gunshot, and found a man shot at a bird. Jack wanted to save the bird, but the man also wanted the bird. who Jack(听见枪响，加以制止，发现受伤，决定救助) ①Jack was awakened by a gunshot. ②“No hunting!” Jack came out in his nightclothes and shouted. ③He saw a colored head... the head of a beautiful bird. ④Jack decided to take the bird home and treat its broken wing. The Hunter(射杀小鸟，索要小鸟) ①The man quickly raised the gun and shot at it. ②“You have just found that bird?” the hunter asked, stepping closer, and said, “Give me that bird!” 第二步: 理清思路,把握全局 提炼文章主旨，定续写基调 Jack听到枪响后，发现有猎人在朝着一只小鸟开枪，Jack想要救它，但是猎人想要回这只受伤的鸟，并且态度非常强硬。这时，Jack会怎么做呢？最终能救下这只小鸟吗？ 第三步：推动情节，展开续写 (1)问题解决 主要的问题冲突：猎人打鸟，Jack想要救鸟合理的解决办法：Jack坚持要救下小鸟，猎人最终示弱离开 (2)情节发展 第一段：首句：看到小鸟受伤→与猎人强硬对抗→猎人示弱离开 第二段：首句：确认猎人离开→救治小鸟康复→放生小鸟回归自然 (3)主旨升华 Jack不惧猎人的威胁，用于救助受伤的小鸟，表达了对小鸟的关心，也展示了对动物，对生命的呵护。 第四步: 激活表达，精品输出 (1) 语言润色 ①非谓语动词的使用使得动作描写更加形象具体，句式也显得多样化，例如：“Holding it tightly in his arms, Jack knew that he just couldn’t give up this tiny life. ” ②“The steady gaze sent a strong message to the hunter that by no means would he give in. ”倒装句能使句子结构更加平衡，并且能突出作者想表达的重点。 (2) 结构衔接 使用表示时间的副词及表示结果的不定式，除了提升情感效果之外，还使文章结构清晰，例如：“And then to Jack’s great relief, the hunter began to walk away slowly.” (3) 高分范文赏读 Jack stood there and became calm with the bird in his arms. The bird struggled weakly and made a wild, strange sound. The sound made Jack’s heart ache. It seemed as if he could sense the bird’s fear and helplessness. Holding it tightly in his arms, Jack knew that he just couldn’t give up this tiny life. He raised his eyes and looked directly into the hunter’s. The steady gaze sent a strong message to the hunter that by no means would he give in. And then to Jack’s great relief, the hunter began to walk away slowly. The hunter looked back from time to time and Jack signaled to him to leave quickly. Jack watched until the hunter was gone and then he went to the house. He carefully laid the bird on the soft pillow, applied some medicine to the wound and bandaged its broken wing. With his careful nursing, the bird gradually recovered. One day Jack returned to find it eagerly flapping its wings, and he knew it was time to set it free. ■高考例题分析 例题1(2023浙江1月卷) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird(蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs(蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up. With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me. When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty? As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight. During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. I rushed back to the deserted house. It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. Leaving the house, I couldn’t help wondering how it was getting on now. Had it managed to find its way back home, or was it still out there somewhere struggling to survive? I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement caught my attention. I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air. It seemed that the bird was waiting for me, its beady eyes locked on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者被邀请去一个农场野餐，发现一个房子里有只蜂鸟被蜘蛛网困住了，作者把蜂鸟救了，把蜂鸟带出去的时候它迟迟不肯走，当作者走到一条布满黑莓的小路时，它开始动了，但是却不肯飞走，徘徊着，后来终于飞走了，当作者准备离开时，蜂鸟又飞到作者面前，好像是在和作者告别。 【详解】 1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“几个星期后，我又去了农场。”可知，第一段可描写作者回到农场时所看到的和所想到的。 ②由第二段首句内容“我正要离开，这时蜂鸟出现了。”可知，第二段可描写蜂鸟是如何对作者的以及作者的感想。 2.续写线索：想起救蜂鸟的时候——回到那个房子——想到那只蜂鸟——看见蜂鸟——蜂鸟的表现——作者的感想 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①思绪回到……：thoughts drift back to/thoughts return to ②匆匆回到：rush back to/hurry back to ③盯着：eyes locked on/eyes staring at 情绪类 ①宽慰：feel a surge of relief/feel relieved ②感激：grateful/thankful 【点睛】 [高分句型1]As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. (由as引导的时间状语从句和when引导的限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. (由that引导的主语从句) 例题2(2026-2027学年高三上·安徽·阶段检测) Photography has long been my favorite hobby and I’m always eager to record beautiful moments of nature with my camera. One morning, I was walking slowly along the lake near my neighborhood, expecting to capture a good moment, when I heard a weak and painful cry coming from the thick grass by the bank. Curious and concerned, I walked closer and found a little white egret(白鹭) trapped in an abandoned boat. Its wing was badly hurt, and it was struggling helplessly, unable to escape. Out of pity, I tried every means to free it without causing further injury. Finally, I rescued the poor creature and took it home temporarily. My mother works at a local animal hospital. She gave the egret simple and careful treatment immediately. Meanwhile, I used a large cardboard box to build a warm nest for it on the balcony. With good care, the egret gradually regained its strength, but recovered very slowly from the injury to its wing. The egret’s pure white feathers and elegant postures fascinated me deeply. Suddenly an idea occurred to me: If I could keep the rare and beautiful wild bird and take a series of exquisite(精美的) photos of it when it grew bigger, I could participate in the city’s photography competition and definitely win the grand prize. The prize money was exactly enough to cover the cost of my long-awaited professional camera. However, staring at the egret’s clear eyes and recalling how it struggled in pain before the rescue, I hesitated. Wild animals should belong in nature instead of being personal possessions. Finally, I firmly gave up this idea and decided to release it into the wild after it fully recovered. One afternoon, I returned home after school as usual. Shockingly, the cardboard nest was empty and the window was wide open. Thinking the egret must have flown away alone but hadn’t fully recovered from the injury, I felt a sharp sense of loss and worry. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Moments later, I received a call from my mother. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A month later, my mother and I returned to the lake to set the egret free. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Moments later, I received a call from my mother. She told me the egret was safe. She had found it near the hospital and brought it back for further treatment. Relieved, I rushed to the clinic. Seeing the bird resting quietly in a warm cage, its injured wing properly bandaged, I felt my worry melt away. Over the next few weeks, I visited it every day, watching its wing heal and its strength return. The idea of winning the photography prize gradually faded. Instead, I felt a deeper sense of fulfillment — one that came from caring for a life rather than capturing it. A month later, my mother and I returned to the lake to set the egret free. As I opened the cage, the egret hesitated for a moment, then stepped onto the grass. It stretched its wings, now fully healed, and took off gracefully into the sky. Watching it fly freely, I felt a surge of joy and pride. I realized that true beauty lies not in possessing something rare, but in giving it back to where it belongs. That day, I took my best photo ever — not with my camera, but with my heart. 【导语】本文以白鹭为线索展开，讲述了爱好摄影的作者救下受伤白鹭，曾想留下白鹭拍照参赛赢相机，最终决定等白鹭痊愈后放归自然。不料白鹭不见了，作者满心担忧，误以为未痊愈的白鹭独自飞走，随后接到妈妈的电话，才得知是妈妈提前将白鹭带回医院做后续康复养护。一个月后白鹭翅膀完全恢复，作者和妈妈回到当初发现白鹭的湖边将它放生的故事。 【详解】 1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容可知，第一段可描写妈妈来电告知白鹭在动物医院被找到，作者赶往医院探望，悉心照料白鹭，内心想法发生转变。 ②由第二段首句内容可知，第二段可描写作者和妈妈回到湖边放生白鹭，白鹭展翅飞向天空，作者感悟美的真谛。 2. 续写线索：接到妈妈电话得知白鹭消息——赶往医院探望照料——日复一日陪护白鹭康复——放弃获奖念头收获满足感——来到湖边打开笼子——白鹭展翅重返自然——作者领悟真正的美不在于占有 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①飞奔：rush → dash ②愈合：heal → recover ③消退：fade → vanish 情绪类 ①宽慰安心的：relieved → reassured ②满足感：fulfillment → gratification 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Instead, I felt a deeper sense of fulfillment — one that came from caring for a life rather than capturing it. (运用了that引导定语从句) 【高分句型2】Seeing the bird resting quietly in a warm cage, its injured wing properly bandaged, I felt my worry melt away. (运用了现在分词短语Seeing...作状语和独立主格结构its injured wing properly bandaged) 优题精练●专题实战通关 Passage 1 (2026-2027学年高三上·湖南张家界·阶段检测)On a cool autumn afternoon, Anna walked home from school. On her way, she spotted a small weak dog lying beside the roadside bushes. Its fur was dirty and thin. It trembled slightly and looked hungry. Anna felt sorry for the poor little animal. She looked around. No one nearby seemed to own the dog. She wanted to take it home, yet she worried her parents might disagree. Their small apartment was not suitable for raising pets. After hesitation, Anna carefully picked up the little dog and headed home. When Anna stepped through the front door with the dog in arms, her parents felt surprised. Her dad expressed concern about extra trouble and cost. Her mom worried about possible diseases the stray dog might carry. Anna explained how helpless the dog was and begged her parents to give it a chance. After long discussion, parents finally reached a compromise. They agreed to keep the dog for one week. Within seven days, Anna must find a proper new home for it, or they would send it to the local animal shelter. Anna accepted the condition happily. She named the little dog Lucky. Paragraph 1: During the following week, Anna spent almost all spare time staying with Lucky. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: On the seventh day, a classmate of Anna’s came to visit her house. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Paragraph 1: During the following week, Anna spent almost all spare time staying with Lucky. She fed the little dog carefully and bathed it to make its fur clean. Lucky gradually became energetic and lovely. It would wag its tail happily whenever Anna came home. Anna tried to ask her classmates and neighbors whether anyone wanted to adopt the dog. However, nobody could take it home, which made Anna worried. She really hated to send the poor dog to the animal shelter. Paragraph2: On the seventh day, a classmate of Anna’s came to visit her house. As soon as her classmate saw Lucky, she fell in love with the cute dog at once. She told Anna that her family had long expected to raise a pet dog. After talking with Anna’s parents, she promised to treat Lucky well. Seeing Lucky get a warm new home, Anna felt relieved and joyful. Though she would miss the little dog, she was glad Lucky would live a happy life. 【导语】本文以善良救助与温情传递为线索展开，讲述女孩Anna放学偶遇一只瘦弱无助的流浪小狗，心生怜悯将其带回家。父母担心养狗麻烦、卫生问题，最终妥协，允许Anna暂时收养小狗一周，要求她在七天内为小狗寻找合适新家，否则将送往动物收容所，Anna为小狗取名Lucky，用心照料，同时积极为它寻找收养人家。 【详解】 1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容可知，第一段可描写Anna悉心陪伴、照料小狗，让小狗逐渐变得活泼亲人。同时她四处求助邻里、同学为小狗寻找新家，但一直无果，Anna内心十分担忧，不舍将小狗送走。 ②由第二段首句内容可知，第二段可描写同学来访，一眼喜欢上乖巧可爱的小狗，恰好家人一直想饲养宠物。同学承诺用心善待小狗，成功收养Lucky，Anna虽有不舍，却为小狗拥有温暖归宿倍感欣慰。 2. 续写线索：悉心照料、陪伴小狗 —— 四处求助、寻找新家 —— 屡屡无果、心生担忧 —— 同学来访、一见钟情 —— 成功收养、圆满归宿 —— 不舍释怀、收获温暖 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ①告诉：tell / inform ②对待：treat/ look after 情绪类 ①担忧的：worried/anxious ②愉悦的：joyful/delighted 【点睛】 [高分句型 1]Anna tried to ask her classmates and neighbors whether anyone wanted to adopt the dog. (运用了whether引导时间状语从句) [高分句型 2]Though she would miss the little dog, she was glad Lucky would live a happy life. (运用了 though 让步状语从句) Passage 2 (2026·云南·模拟预测)Beside our house stood a large azalea(杜鹃花). If left alone, it would grow wildly and take over our backyard. Every spring, I made a plan to cut its overgrown branches. Last spring I took my cutting tools and got ready for the yearly work. I carried my trimmers(修剪器) and climbed up a stepladder. Half of the big bush had already been neatly trimmed. Standing high on the ladder, I reached out toward its top branches. Suddenly a bird flew quickly out from the thick bush and rushed over the backyard. It was a brown thrasher(棕鸫鸟). For weeks, I had often seen this bird or its partner moving around behind our house. “Oh no, this may mean trouble,” I thought to myself. I gently pulled several branches apart and looked deep inside the azalea. There, I found a bird nest. Made of thin sticks and dry leaves, the simple nest held three helpless baby birds, their soft feathers still thin. I was caught in a difficult dilemma. If I continued trimming, I would greatly disturb the bird family. The parent bird had just been frightened away from the nest. Those weak baby chicks could not stay safe in the open air. The longer I kept working, the longer the parent birds would stay away. Worse still, more fallen leaves removed by cutting would further reduce the babies’ chance of survival, facing great danger from hawks, eagles and crows. If I stopped my work, however, the azalea would keep growing tall and messy. I imagined my untidy bush with its wild top would catch every neighbor’s eye. I was certain they would talk about its uncut and strange‑looking. 注意： 1. 写作词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Staring at the nest for a long time, I climbed down the ladder slowly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Following my decision, I kept an eye on the birds in the azalea now and then. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Staring at the nest for a long time, I climbed down the ladder slowly. I made up my mind to put off the trimming work until the baby birds could fly. Carefully, I gathered the cut branches I had removed and placed them around the bush to hide the nest better. I packed up all my tools quietly and walked away, hoping not to frighten the parent birds again. My heart was filled with pity for the fragile little creatures. Though the azalea would grow wild for a while, nothing mattered more than protecting the little lives inside. Following my decision, I kept an eye on the birds in the azalea now and then. I watched from a distance to avoid disturbing them. Days later, I saw the parent birds fly back with food to feed their babies. Their busy movements brought me great joy. Several weeks passed, and the young birds finally left the nest. Only then did I return to finish trimming the azalea. This small experience taught me that sometimes we need to give up our own plans for the beauty of nature. 【导语】本文以人和动物为线索展开，讲述了“我”在修剪屋旁杜鹃花时发现枝丛中藏着一个鸟巢和三只雏鸟，陷入继续修剪还是停手的困境，最终选择推迟修剪、默默守护鸟家，直到幼鸟离巢后才完成修剪，并从中悟出为自然之美让步的道理。 【详解】 1. 段落续写 ① 由第一段首句可知，接下来可描写“我”决定推迟修剪，收集剪下的枝条遮蔽鸟巢，收好工具安静离开，心生怜惜，认为保护小鸟最重要。 ② 由第二段首句可知，接下来可描写“我”远距离观察，看到亲鸟回来喂食；几周后幼鸟离巢，“我”才修剪杜鹃，感悟要尊重自然生命。 2. 续写线索 发现鸟巢陷入两难 —— 决定推迟修剪 —— 用枝条遮蔽鸟巢、悄悄离开 —— 远远守护观察 —— 亲鸟归来喂食 —— 幼鸟离巢后补剪 —— 感悟为自然之美让步、守护小生命更有价值 3. 词类激活 行为类 ①决定：make up my mind to/be determined to ②推迟：put off/delay/postpone ③看见：see/spot/notice 情绪类 ①同情：pity/sympathy/compassion ②快乐：joy/delight 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Carefully, I gathered the cut branches I had removed and placed them around the bush to hide the nest better.(运用了省略关系代词which/that的定语从句修饰名词branches和不定式作目的状语) 【高分句型2】Only then did I return to finish trimming the azalea.(运用了“only+状语”置于句首引起的部分倒装) Passage 3 (2026-2027学年高三上·重庆·阶段检测)Sharon’s cat Baby-Girl had been missing for six months. The small tabby(虎斑猫) disappeared from her parents’ house one summer when Sharon was moving between apartments. Whenever Sharon thought of her, she pictured Baby-Girl curled up inside the old decorative fireplace, where the cat would often settle for hours. Her dad Bill, the family’s “realist”, always prepared everyone for the worst. “She’s either hit by a car or taken in by someone,” he would warn. But Sharon refused to give up. Baby-Girl had once been a stray, a tough little cat surviving all on her own. As weeks turned into months, Sharon still held the quiet belief that they would meet again. Back home for Thanksgiving, Sharon was determined to look for her cat. She grabbed a cat carrier and asked Dad to drive her to the animal shelter. Dad agreed but reminded her with his familiar half-smile: “Be realistic. She has been gone too long. You won’t find her.” After all, “I don’t believe in miracles” was his favourite saying, even printed on his holiday shirt. At the shelter, a staff member showed them rows of cages. Sharon checked every cat carefully, yet none was Baby-Girl. Dad told her the back room held newly-arrived cats and her cat would not be there. Still, Sharon insisted on having a look. She stepped inside and caught a familiar meow. In one cage sat a thin tabby with big green eyes and a white left hind paw. Thinner than before, it was unmistakably Baby-Girl. Tears welled up in Sharon’s eyes. She opened the cage, and the cat nearly leaped into her arms. “Dad! It’s Baby-Girl!” she shouted. Dad stood frozen, whispering in disbelief: “It can’t be the same cat. Not after all this time.” Back home, Baby-Girl purred and rubbed against everyone’s legs, totally relaxed. But Dad still doubted its identity. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dad insisted, “If she sits in her favorite spot, I’ll believe it’s her.” ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Days later, the family gathered to celebrate Thanksgiving when Dad came downstairs, wearing his new holiday shirt. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dad insisted, “If she sits in her favorite spot, I’ll believe it’s her.” Sharon looked toward the old decorative fireplace — the very spot Baby-Girl had always loved. The cat padded around the living room, sniffing at the sofa, then the bookshelf, as if relearning every corner. For a long moment she seemed unsure. Then, drawn by something deeper than memory, she walked straight to the fireplace, stepped inside, and curled into a perfect ball, just as she used to. Sharon caught her breath. Dad stood motionless, his lips pressed tight. Finally, he exhaled slowly and murmured, “Maybe it really is her.” Days later, the family gathered to celebrate Thanksgiving when Dad came downstairs, wearing his new holiday shirt. Everyone stared — gone was his old shirt with “I don’t believe in miracles” across the front. Instead, he was wearing a brand-new one that read: I BELIEVE IN MIRACLES! The room burst into laughter and cheers. “What changed your mind?” Sharon asked, grinning through happy tears. Dad picked up Baby-Girl, who had once again settled in her fireplace spot, and held her close. “This little one did,” he said softly. Baby-Girl purred, as though she had never doubted it for a moment. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述莎伦的虎斑猫走失半年，父亲一直理性悲观、不相信奇迹，劝女儿接受现实。感恩节回家后，莎伦坚持前往收容所寻找，意外找到猫咪。心存疑虑的父亲提出验证方式，最终猫咪的本能举动印证身份，让父亲彻底相信奇迹的故事。 【详解】 1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容可知，第一段可描写父亲以猫咪专属休息位置验证身份，猫咪凭借本能重回老位置蜷缩休息，父亲内心震撼、初步相信奇迹。 ②由第二段首句内容可知，第二段可描写感恩节当天父亲更换印有相信奇迹的新衬衫，坦诚被猫咪归来的奇迹打动，全家温馨欢笑。 2. 续写线索：提出验证——四处探索——重回旧窝——印证身份——打消疑虑——更换衣衫——坦诚感悟——相信奇迹 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ①放轻脚步走：pad/walk softly ②凝望：stared/gazed 情绪类 ①喜悦：happy/cheerful ②温柔：softly/gently 【点睛】 【高分句型 1】Then, drawn by something deeper than memory, she walked straight to the fireplace, stepped inside, and curled into a perfect ball, just as she used to.(运用了过去分词作状语以及as引导的方式状语从句) 【高分句型 2】Dad picked up Baby-Girl, who had once again settled in her fireplace spot, and held her close.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句) Passage 4 (2026-2027学年高三上·陕西商洛·阶段检测)Kara felt the weight of the world lift off her shoulders with every step into the Alaskan wilderness. She had saved for two years for this trip alone, desperate for a clean break from her busy city life. Her goal was simple: to find quiet, to breathe deeply, and to remember who she was away from screens and schedules. The vast land of tall spruce(云杉) trees and endless sky was the perfect cure. On her third day, she found a hidden valley full of ripe wild blueberries. A smile broke across her face. This was the place she had been searching for. She set down her pack and began to gently pick the juicy berries, filling her small container. Soft sunlight streamed through tree branches, painting golden spots across the green grass. The sun was warm, and a gentle wind carried the faint, sweet smell of the fruit. The only other sounds were the buzzing of bees and the distant call of a bird. For the first time in years, her mind was completely still, empty of the endless chatter that usually filled it. Then, a deep thump(重击声) of a small branch broke the silence. It was strangely loud, out of place. Every muscle in her body tensed, and cold sweat ran down her back. Less than fifty feet away, a huge brown bear stood at the edge of the blueberry field. It was very large and strong, its shoulders massive as it surveyed the land. Time seemed to stop. Every survival guide she had ever read flashed through her mind. Don’t run. Don’t make eye contact. Stay calm. Panic roared inside her, urging her to turn and flee, but she fought hard to follow those safety rules. Her heart beat wildly against her chest. She looked down, focusing on the ground near her boots. She forced herself to breathe slowly, in and out, waiting for a bad change. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 But the change never came. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Slowly, the bear turned and walked away into the trees. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 But the change never came. The bear just stood quietly, lowering its big head to eat blueberries. It seemed that it also came here for tasty fruit and hadn’t noticed Kara as a threat. Kara kept still, daring not to move an inch. She controlled her breath steadily, reminding herself not to disturb the wild creature. Minutes passed slowly, and she could hear her own heartbeat clearly. With the sun still streaming through the branches, she watched the bear peacefully, realizing that they were simply two beings sharing nature’s gift. What she had feared most turned into a moment of unexpected connection. Slowly, the bear turned and walked away into the trees. Kara waited for a long time until it totally disappeared. She let out a deep sigh of relief. This unforgettable experience taught her that humans should respect wildlife and live in harmony with nature. It was this brief encounter that showed her the true meaning of coexistence. She picked a few more berries and packed up her bag, leaving the quiet valley peacefully with new respect for the wild world. Only then did she understand that the wilderness had healed her mind and awakened her soul. 【导语】本文以 Kara在阿拉斯加荒野与棕熊的偶遇 为线索展开，讲述了Kara为逃离繁忙的城市生活，独自前往阿拉斯加荒野寻找宁静，在第三天发现一片长满野生蓝莓的隐秘山谷时，一头巨大的棕熊突然出现，她强忍恐慌，遵循生存法则等待事态发展的故事。 【详解】 1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容可知，第一段可描写棕熊并无攻击意图，只是低头采食蓝莓，卡拉保持静止、平稳呼吸，静静观察，紧张的对峙化为人与自然温柔共处的瞬间，打消内心的恐惧。 ②由第二段首句内容可知，第二段可描写棕熊离去后卡拉如释重负，结合此次奇遇心生感悟，明白人与自然应和谐共生，这场特别的相遇彻底治愈了她的内心，让她读懂了荒野与自然的真谛。 2.续写线索：发现蓝莓——棕熊出现——强忍恐慌——静待事态——熊只吃莓——心灵连接——熊离去——领悟共存——荒野治愈 3.词汇激活 行为类： ①吃：eat/consume/devour ②提醒：remind/warn/caution 情绪类： ①安静地：quietly/calmly/peacefully/tranquilly ②恐惧：fear/frighten 【点睛】 【高分句型1】With the sun still streaming through the branches, she watched the bear peacefully, realizing that they were simply two beings sharing nature’s gift. (运用了with复合结构“With the sun still streaming through the branches”作状语和现在分词 realizing作状语以及that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】Only then did she understand that the wilderness had healed her mind and awakened her soul. (运用了 Only+状语置于句首引起的部分倒装) Passage 5 (2026·陕西商洛·一模)It was a cold Saturday morning. Lily decided to go jogging in the park near her neighbourhood. She put on her warm sports coat and set off. While running along the path, she noticed a little dog sitting beside the bush. It was shaking with cold. There was no owner nearby. The small dog wore a worn collar without any name tag. Lily stopped and bent down gently. The little dog looked scared. Lily took off her coat and wrapped the freezing little creature with part of the coat. She looked around again, hoping to find its owner. But nobody appeared. Lily thought for a moment. She could not leave the poor dog outside in such cold weather. Therefore, she decided to take it home first. When Lily arrived home, her parents were a little surprised to see the unexpected guest. They agreed that they should help the little dog find its original owner. They posted photos of the dog on their neighbourhood WeChat group and put up lost‑and‑found notices on community noticeboards. Then they waited. Day after day, nobody called to claim the dog. Lily grew fond of this lovely little dog. She fed it and played with it after school. Deep in her heart, she secretly hoped that nobody would come for it. 注意：续写两段，每段开头已给出；每段词数大约150；情节合理，语句通顺。 Paragraph 1: One afternoon three weeks later, the telephone in Lily’s house suddenly rang. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Seeing how upset Lily was, the dog’s owner spoke softly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 One afternoon three weeks later, the telephone in Lily’s house suddenly rang. It was the dog’s owner. He had seen the notice in the community. He said he had been looking everywhere for his lost pet for almost a month. Lily’s heart sank. A mixture of sadness and disappointment washed over her. She had already got used to keeping the little dog around. After hanging up the phone, Lily sat on the sofa, holding the dog tightly in her arms. Soon the owner knocked at their front door. Tears welled up in Lily’s eyes as she had to say goodbye. Seeing how upset Lily was, the dog’s owner spoke softly. He thanked Lily sincerely for taking such good care of his dog during these cold weeks. Then he told Lily a piece of surprising news. He was moving abroad soon and could not take the pet with him any longer. He wondered whether Lily’s family would like to keep this lovely dog permanently. Lily’s eyes lit up immediately with joy. She could hardly believe her ears. She nodded excitedly. From then on, the little dog became a formal member of Lily’s warm family. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了莉莉在寒冷的早晨晨跑时发现一只受冻的小狗，将其带回家并悉心照料，同时和家人一起张贴寻主启事，但三周无人认领，莉莉内心暗暗希望留下它的故事。 【详解】 1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容可知，第一段可描写电话是狗的主人打来的，对方看到了社区里的启事，说已找了一个月；莉莉听后心情沉重、不舍，挂电话后抱着狗坐在沙发上，随后主人敲门到来。 ②由第二段首句内容可知，第二段可描写主人感谢莉莉的照顾，接着说出自己即将出国、无法带走小狗，询问莉莉家是否愿意永久收养；莉莉喜出望外，激动答应，小狗正式成为家庭一员。 2. 续写线索：接到主人电话——莉莉伤心不舍——主人上门——主人感谢并说明出国无法带走狗——提议莉莉家永久收养——莉莉激动答应——小狗成为家庭成员 3. 词汇积累 行为类 ①寻找：look for/search for/hunt for/seek for ②挂电话：hang up the phone/end the call/ring off ③照顾：take care of/tend to/attend to 情绪类 ①激动：excitedly/thrill ②喜悦：joy/delight 【点睛】 【高分句型1】After hanging up the phone, Lily sat on the sofa, holding the dog tightly in her arms.(运用了现在分词holding作状语和动名词hanging作宾语) 【高分句型2】He wondered whether Lily’s family would like to keep this lovely dog permanently.(运用了whether引导的宾语从句) Passage 6 (2027·陕西商洛·模拟预测)Kate felt the weight of the world lift off her shoulders with every step into the Alaskan wilderness. She had saved for two years for this trip alone, desperate for a clean break from her busy city life. Her goal was simple: to find quiet, to breathe deeply, and to remember who she was away from screens and schedules. The vast land of tall spruce(云杉) trees and endless sky was the perfect cure. On her third day, she found a hidden valley full of ripe wild blueberries. A smile broke across her face. This was the peace she had been searching for. She set down her pack and began to gently pick the juicy berries, filling her small container. Soft sunlight streamed through tree branches, painting golden spots across the green grass. The sun was warm, and a gentle wind carried the faint, sweet smell of the fruit. The only other sounds were the buzzing of bees and the distant call of a bird. For the first time in years, her mind was completely still, empty of the endless chatter that usually filled it. Then, a sharp snap(咔嚓的折断声) of a small branch broke the silence. It was strangely loud, out of place. Kate froze, her hand stopped over a bunch of berries. Slowly, she turned her head. Her blood ran cold. Every muscle in her body tensed, and cold sweat ran down her back. Less than fifty feet away, a huge brown bear stood at the edge of the blueberry field. It was very large and strong, its shoulders moving as it surveyed the land. Time seemed to stop. Every survival guide she had ever read flashed through her mind. Don’t run. Don’t make eye contact. Stay calm. Panic screamed inside her, urging her to turn and flee, but she fought hard to follow those safety rules. Her heart beat wildly against her chest. She looked down, focusing on the ground near her boots. She forced herself to breathe slowly, in and out, waiting for a loud charge. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 But the charge never came. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Slowly, the bear turned and walked away into the trees. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 But the charge never came. Kate kept her eyes fixed on the ground, holding her breath. She could feel the bear’s heavy gaze on her. She dared not move an inch, still remembering the survival rules. Minutes stretched like hours. The bear stood still, quietly watching her, its nose twitching now and then to smell the air. Kate’s hands trembled slightly, but she kept forcing steady breaths, trying not to show her fear. She wondered if the bear also came here for the sweet wild blueberries. Slowly, the bear turned and walked away into the trees. Kate waited for a long while before she dared to lift her head. Her legs felt weak, and her heart was still pounding wildly. The quiet valley returned, yet it felt different now. She packed her berries carefully and prepared to leave. This close encounter taught her that peace in the wild also meant respecting nature. She found her quietness, along with a new understanding of the wilderness. 【导语】本文讲述了Kate独自前往阿拉斯加荒野散心、逃离都市喧嚣。她在蓝莓山谷享受宁静时光，却偶遇一头棕熊。她牢记求生法则、保持镇定，最终熊安然离去。这次惊险偶遇让她收获宁静，也懂得了敬畏自然的真谛。 【详解】 1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容可知，第一段可描写Kate牢记求生法则、保持镇定。 ②由第二段首句内容可知，第二段可描写最终熊安然离去，这次惊险偶遇让她收获宁静，也懂得了敬畏自然的真谛。 2.续写线索：Kate牢记求生法则→保持镇定→熊离开→Kate感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①想起：remember/recall ②尊重：respect/show respect to 情绪类 ①恐惧：fear/worry ②虚弱：weak/frail 【点睛】 [高分句型1]She dared not move an inch, still remembering the survival rules.(运用了现在分词作状语) [高分句型2]She wondered if the bear also came here for the sweet wild blueberries.(运用了if引导宾语从句) Passage 7 (2026-2027学年高三上·江苏苏州·开学考试)Phil, a 57-year-old property manager, had been thinking about getting a dog for over a year. His apartment lease(租约) changed recently to allow pets. He told himself he was just going to look — get a sense of what the process was like, not commit to anything. At the Hawthorn Shelter, a volunteer named Amber walked him through the kennels(狗屋). At the end of the row, Otto, who had been at Hawthorn for seven months and desperately needed a new owner, was introduced to him. Actually, he had been adopted once before — returned after two weeks with a note: “Too attached. Follows constantly. Can’t be left alone.” That note had followed Otto like a shadow ever since, scaring off almost every other visitor who paused at his kennel, yet Phil felt something special in Otto. Amber set Phil up in a small visiting room with Otto. Phil sat on the bench. Otto pressed against his leg immediately. They sat together for about twenty minutes — Phil looking through his phone, Otto staying close without demanding anything, occasionally resting his chin (下巴) on Phil’s knee with a soft sigh. When Phil’s phone rang, he stood up. Otto didn’t bark or jump. He simply stepped forward, placed both front paws around Phil’s leg, and held on. Phil took a step toward the door. Otto’s paws tightened. He pressed his forehead into Phil’s knee. His body trembled faintly. Phil stopped moving. He stood completely still for nearly a full minute, just looking down at this dog holding onto his leg in total silence, his heart heavy with something he couldn’t name. Amber, watching from the hallway, later said that the silence was the loudest thing she’d heard all week. Phil slowly sat back down on the floor. Otto climbed directly into his lap, curled into a tight ball. Phil sat there for another fifteen minutes, studying Otto’s peaceful, trusting face, and something deep inside him quietly shifted. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150词左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then he walked to the front desk. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Three days later, Amber received some photos of Otto from Phil on her phone. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Then he walked to the front desk. Amber looked up, surprised. “I thought you were just looking,” she said. Phil smiled. “So did I.” He filled in the forms. When Amber brought Otto out, the dog stood still, as if afraid to believe it. Phil knelt and gently touched his head. “Let’s go home,” he said. Otto pressed against his leg and walked beside him, tail low but steady. In the car, the dog curled up on the passenger seat and let out a long sigh. Phil felt something warm settle in his chest.      Three days later, Amber received some photos of Otto from Phil on her phone. In one, Otto lay stretched across a sunlit sofa, eyes half closed. In another, he sat beside Phil at a café. The last showed him asleep on Phil’s bed. A message followed: “He follows me everywhere — and I don’t mind. He’s not ‘too attached’. He just needed someone who wouldn’t leave.” Amber smiled and saved the photos. Otto had finally found his home. 【导语】本文以Phil在动物收容所与Otto相遇的经历为线索展开，讲述了57岁的Phil本只是打算去收容所了解领养流程，并无领养打算。在和曾被退回的小狗Otto相处时，Otto紧紧抱住他的腿，这份依赖打动了Phil，他最终决定领养Otto，让这只缺乏安全感的小狗拥有了属于自己的家。 【详解】 1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容可知，第一段可描写Phil走向前台办理领养手续，Amber十分意外，Phil填好表格，带着Otto离开收容所，在车上Otto安心蜷缩，Phil内心倍感温暖。 ②由第二段首句内容可知，第二段可描写三天后Amber收到Phil发来的Otto的生活照片，照片记录下Otto在家放松的模样，附带消息说明Otto时刻相伴，而Phil乐意陪伴，Otto终于找到不会抛弃它的主人。 2. 续写线索： Phil走向前台办理领养→Amber惊讶，Phil完成手续→牵 Otto离开收容所，乘车回家→Phil给Amber发送Otto生活照片→留言感慨Otto只是需要不离不弃的主人→Otto找到了归宿 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①触碰：touch/ stroke/ pat ②跟随：follow/ shadow/ trail ③保存：save/ store 情绪类 ①惊讶的：surprised/ astonished ②温暖的：warm/comforting 【点睛】 【高分句型1】When Amber brought Otto out, the dog stood still, as if afraid to believe it. (运用了When引导的状语从句) 【高分句型2】He just needed someone who wouldn’t leave. (运用了who引导的定语从句) Passage 8 (2026·广东深圳·一模)Mum and Matt lived in the country next to a forest. Every weekend, they took walks through the forest. But everything changed after Mum found a new job in the city. They said goodbye to the trees and birds and moved to an apartment far from nature. They went to the park, but there were lots of people. It was hard to hear the birds when everybody was talking and laughing. Matt missed the peaceful countryside badly and could never feel at home in the busy city. One afternoon, there was a knock on their door. It was Mrs. Potter, their elderly neighbour. She was holding a large, potted tree. “I’m trying to bring this bonsai home, but it’s too heavy for me,” said Mrs. Potter with a warm smile. “Of course we can help,” Mum replied right away. “It’s lovely,” said Matt, looking at it with admiration. “It reminds me of the forest back home.” When Mrs. Potter opened the door to her apartment, Matt was surprised. It wasn’t a typical apartment at all. It was a tiny hidden forest! Dozens of trees sat in various pots, their green branches filling every corner with the calmness of wild woods. As Mum set down the bonsai, Matt immediately spotted a tiny bud (花蕾) on the smallest bonsai. Growing up around wild plants, Matt knew this bud would not bloom (开花) right away. It would need days of steady care. Still, it held new life, growing quietly in the city. “We can still keep trees around us even in the city,” Mum told him softly. “These potted greens are smaller, but they bring the same comfort as the forest trees you loved.” Mrs. Potter nodded in agreement. “Exactly, Matt. Nature has a way of finding us, wherever we are. Big trees grow in open forests, and little trees live in small pots, but both can bring peace to our hearts. I believe you will find your own joy here.” Matt looked around the tiny forest and felt something shift inside him, a feeling he couldn’t quite name, but it made him feel less like a visitor. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。     “Why don’t you choose one bonsai to take home?” Mrs. Potter suggested. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________     Days later, Matt knocked on Mrs. Potter’s door and called, “The bud bloomed!” ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 “Why don’t you choose one bonsai to take home?” Mrs. Potter suggested. Matt nodded and chose the smallest bonsai with the tiny bud. “I’d like this one,” he smiled. Mrs. Potter placed it in his hands and reminded him that good things take time and care. From then on, watering the bonsai became part of Matt’s daily routine. Every morning, he checked the bud before school; every evening, he watched it by the window. Day by day, as the plant grew stronger, the city felt warmer, and he missed the countryside less. Days later, Matt knocked on Mrs. Potter’s door and called, “The bud bloomed!” Mrs. Potter opened the door with a gentle smile. Matt proudly showed her the tiny flower and told her how he had moved it to catch sunlight and watered it patiently. “You made this happen,” she said warmly. “You brought nature into your home, and its roots have reached your heart.” Matt realized that nature’s peace was never limited to the distant forest. It could also be found in a tiny bonsai in a city apartment. For the first time since moving, he truly belonged. 【导语】本文以搬家后Matt在邻居家见到盆景的经历为线索展开，讲述了Matt一家从乡村搬到城市后，他十分怀念森林。邻居Mrs. Potter邀请他参观家中的微型森林，还送给他一盆带花蕾的盆景。Matt细心养护，见证花苞绽放，最终感悟到自然的安宁不必奔赴远方，在城市里也能寻得内心的归属感。 【详解】 1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容可知，第一段可描写Matt挑选那株带着小花蕾的最小盆景，带回家后把养护盆景纳入每日作息，坚持浇水观察，慢慢不再那么思念乡下。 ②由第二段首句内容可知，第二段可描写Matt兴奋地告诉Mrs. Potter花蕾绽放，向她分享自己细心照料的过程，最终明白自然的安宁不只存在远方森林，在城市公寓也能找到归属。 2. 续写线索：挑选带花蕾盆景→每日浇水观察养护→城市生活渐渐温暖→花蕾成功绽放→向Mrs. Potter展示花朵→领悟自然无处不在，找到归属感 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①浇水：water → irrigate ②观察：watch → observe ③实现，促成：make happen → bring about/bring it to fruition 情绪类 ①耐心地：patiently → with patience ②温和的：gentle → tender 【点睛】 【高分句型1】From then on, watering the bonsai became part of Matt’s daily routine. (运用了动名词短语watering the bonsai作主语) 【高分句型2】Matt realized that nature’s peace was never limited to the distant forest. (运用了that引导宾语从句) Passage 9 (2026-2027学年高三上·江苏镇江·开学考试)Jean and John were the proud owners of a popular general store in the small, quiet town of Emerald Forest. Nestled near dense forests and crystal-clear lakes, their cozy shop served both locals and tourists. However, one cold morning, their peaceful routine was suddenly shattered. Upon arriving at work, they found an unwelcome surprise in the candy department: sweets were scattered across the counter, and boxes of chocolates had been violently torn open, leaving a sticky mess! Puzzled and frustrated, they checked the rest of the store. Amazingly, nothing else was out of place. There was no sign of forced entry; the doors and windows were all securely locked. “Perhaps it was squirrels?” Jean suggested hopefully. But John shook his head, pointing out that squirrels couldn’t possibly have opened the front door. After a day of fruitless guessing, they concluded it must be rats. Determined to catch the thief, John set a trap and placed it near the candy display. The next morning, they found similar evidence of a break-in, but the rat trap remained completely untouched. Realizing the intruder(闯入者) was far cleverer than they had thought, Jean suggested installing(安装) a hidden camera. A technician quickly set up the equipment, and they waited anxiously for the night to pass. The following day, they rushed to check the recordings, expecting to see a raccoon(浣熊) or a particularly large rat. The scene on the screen left them absolutely speechless. Staring at the recordings, Jean froze all at once, breath held in her throat. John bent forward, eyes wide and brows raised high. Neither could believe their eyes when watching the unexpected intruder come and go again and again. Too surprised to say a single word, they were filled with a strong feeling of doubt about the strange sight on screen. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 It was a young bear, targeting their store for his nightly meals! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Instead of frightening the bear away, they decided to treat it outside the store. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 It was a young bear, targeting their store for his nightly meals! In the video, the bear pushed open the door with its claws, walked straight to the candy shelf, and stuffed its mouth with chocolates again and again. It even sat down, licking its sticky paws with satisfaction, completely unaware of being watched. “Look, he is not stealing; he is just hungry,” Jean whispered, her shock turning into amusement. John stared with wide eyes and could not help laughing, “I have never seen such a cute thief. Luckily it was not a real robber.” Watching the funny scene, they finally relaxed. Instead of frightening the bear away, they decided to treat it outside the store. First, John called a locksmith to fix the broken lock so that real thieves could not get in. Then they put a basket of fresh apples and honey on a rock far from the door, hoping the little bear would find it. The next morning, the basket was empty, and the candy shelf was left untouched. From then on, they refilled the basket every day, and the bear came for its treat instead of breaking in. Jean smiled as she realized that a little kindness had solved the mystery in such an unexpected way. 【导语】文章以人与动物为线索展开，讲述了杂货店店主夫妇发现店里糖果频频被偷，通过监控发现闯入者竟是一只贪吃的小熊。他们没有驱赶，而是用善意和食物引导小熊，最终巧妙化解了这场“盗窃”危机。 【详解】 1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句可知，本段可详细描写监控录像中这只小熊“偷吃”糖果的滑稽、可爱的具体动作，以及店主夫妇从最初的震惊到感到好笑的反应。 ②由第二段首句可知，本段应具体描写店主夫妇采取的行动(如修锁、在店外放置食物等)，以及小熊的反应，最后点明善意化解了这场危机的主题。 2. 续写线索： 查看监控画面 → 发现是小熊偷吃 → 小熊的滑稽动作 → 夫妇俩感到好笑 → 决定用食物吸引小熊 → 修好门锁 → 在店外放苹果和蜂蜜 → 小熊不再进店 → 善意解决问题 3. 词类激活： 行为类： ①观看：watch/stare at/ keep an eye on ②重新装满：refill/ replenish 情绪类： ①震惊的：shocked / astonished / amazed ②好笑的：amused / funny / hilarious 【点睛】 【高分句型1】It even sat down, licking its sticky paws with satisfaction, completely unaware of being watched. (运用了现在分词短语作状语) 【高分句型2】Then they put a basket of fresh apples and honey on a rock far from the door, hoping the little bear would find it. (运用了现在分词作状语的结构，以及省略that引导的宾语从句) Passage 10 (2026-2027学年高三上·江苏扬州·开学考试)Every day on my way home from school, I passed a group of stray cats(流浪猫) behind our apartment building. They stayed together in cold corners, their fur dirty and their eyes filled with a mix of hope and fear. As I watched them suffer through changing weather, I could not shake the feeling that I needed to take action. These were not just wild animals. They were living creatures that deserved basic care, so I decided to do whatever I could to help them. Every morning before school, I packed small bags of cat food and bottled water. I went to the courtyard and poured food into several safe spots. At first, the cats ran away at my approach. Slowly they grew less afraid. Soon they would appear from dark corners, cautiously moving toward me. This daily feeding turned into a quiet routine that built trust between us. When winter drew near, temperatures dropped sharply. I could not bear to imagine them freezing in open air. I came up with a plan. With my parents’ permission, I cleaned the damp unused basement(地下室) of our building. I arranged old blankets to make warm, sheltered beds for the cats. It became their safe place to escape freezing wind and snow. Not every neighbour supported my work. One man complained loudly, saying stray cats were a trouble. He threatened to call Animal Control to remove them. We argued more than once. Still, I refused to back down. These cats had no one else to defend them. I started posting adoption information online and told my friends and relatives about the cats. Slowly, good news arrived. Three cats found warm permanent homes with loving families. One shy orange cat remained. No one seemed interested in him. I kept caring for him through the long winter. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As the cold winter continued, the shy orange cat became increasingly quiet and lonely. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Luckily, my aunt paid us a visit on a warm spring afternoon. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Paragraph 1 As the cold winter continued, the shy orange cat became increasingly quiet and lonely. Hiding in a remote corner of the basement, it barely showed up, even for the food I prepared daily. Timid and inferior, it dared not wander around like other cats. Feeling sympathetic, I spared more time accompanying it, gently stroking its fur and whispering to comfort it. As it gradually trusted me more, it would rub my hand softly to express gratitude. Although the strict neighbor still complained, I remained firm in my kind choice. Paragraph 2 Luckily, my aunt paid us a visit on a warm spring afternoon. The moment she caught sight of the gentle orange cat, she was deeply fond of it and immediately decided to adopt it. Watching the cat leave for a warm new home, I was filled with a mix of sorrow and pride. Though unable to solve all problems facing stray cats, I had changed several helpless lives. I truly learned that kindness does not require great power. Instead, small, steady efforts can truly make a difference for those helpless around us. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者坚持救助流浪猫，在帮多数猫咪找到领养家庭后，悉心陪伴仅剩的胆小橘猫，最终姑姑收养了它，让作者领悟到微小持续的善意也能改变弱小生命。 【详解】 1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容可知，本段可描写橘猫冬日愈发孤僻胆怯，“我”耐心陪伴、悉心照料，坚持守护它的过程。 ②由第二段首句内容可知，本段可描写姑姑来访偶遇橘猫、心生喜爱并决定收养它，“我”从中收获感悟、明白善意的价值。 2.续写线索：猫咪孤寂——耐心陪伴——阿姨拜访——决定收养——不舍欣慰——感悟善意 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①躲藏：hide/conceal ②出现：show up/appear 情绪类 ①同情的：sympathetic/compassionate ②感激：gratitude/appreciation 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Hiding in a remote corner of the basement, it barely showed up, even for the food I prepared daily. (使用了现在分词Hiding作伴随状语) 【高分句型2】The moment she caught sight of the gentle orange cat, she was deeply fond of it and immediately decided to adopt it.(使用了The moment引导的时间状语从句) 21 / 29 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $