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清单03 应用文写作之建议信
目录导航
01知识脑图·核心脉络搭建——梳理专题框架,搭建知识体系
02 考点深研·知能分层突破——深挖高频考点,分层突破重难点
考点一 写作要求
考点二 基本格式
考点三 常用词汇句型
考点四 模板
03优题精练·专题实战通关——精选优质试题,强化实战应用
知识脑图·核心脉络搭建
考点深研●知能分层突破
■写作要求
建议信是写信人向收信人就生活,工作或者求学过程中遇到的问题或者困难对亲朋好友提出自己的建议或忠告而写的信件。
建议信的收信人可以是个人,写信人就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法;收信人也可以是某个组织或机构,写信人就其在改进服务、提升业务等方面提出建议或忠告。
写作核心时态:一般现在时(现状问题)+一般将来时(建议带来的好处)+ 情态动词 should/could/might(提建议专用)
■基本格式
1.首段:开门见山,表明写信意图,向对方提出建议;
2.主体段落:详细描述具体的建议和事由。通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或者to begin with/ start with, then, later, last but not least.等依次陈述建议。
3.结尾段:指出采纳建议的好处,并且表达愿望,希望所提建议能对收信人有所帮助。
■常用词汇句型
1. 开篇短语句型
(1)offer/put forward practical suggestions提出建议
(2)give advice on…就…… 提建议
(3)I am Li Hua, a senior high student. I’m writing to offer several suggestions about our school’s after-school clubs.我是高中生李华,写信就我校课后社团提几点建议。
(4)Having noticed some problems in our canteen, I’m writing to share my advice with you.注意到食堂存在一些问题,我写信向您提出我的建议。
(5)To make our campus more beautiful, I’d like to put forward some practical ideas.为让校园更美观,我想提出一些切实可行的想法。
(6)I’m writing to give some advice on how to improve our reading environment.我写信是为改善我们的阅读环境提供建议。
2. 主体段短语句型
(1)take one’s advice into consideration考虑某人建议
(2)adopt one’s suggestions 采纳建议
(3)in my opinion /from my point of view 依我看
(4)It would be a good idea to… 我认为…… 是个好主意
(5)We should/ought to… 我们应该……
(6)suggest doing sth. /advise sb. to do sth. 建议做某事
(7)You'd better...· I would like to suggest that... 你最好……·我想建议……
(8)If I were you / Were I you, I would... 如果我是你,我会…..
(9)In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action(s).
在我看来,采取以下措施是非常明智的。
(10)It would be a good idea if you take actively part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting.
如果你积极参加各种活动,那将是个好主意,这将有助于让生活变得更有趣。
(11)As for your study, you'd better make a timetable to manage your time better and turn to your classmates and teachers for help if necessary.
至于你的学习,你最好制定一个时间表来更好地管理你的时间,必要时向你的同学和老师寻求帮助。
(12)AI can help us in ways we cannot even imagine, but it also has the potential to overshadow our ability to think independently if we rely on it too much.
人工智能可以以我们无法想象的方式帮助我们,但如果我们过于依赖它,它也有可能掩盖我们独立思考的能力。
(13)At present, there are not enough sports equipment for us. Therefore, we hope the school can buy more basketballs and badminton rackets.
目前体育器材不足,因此我们希望学校采购更多篮球、羽毛球拍。
(14)First of all, it’s a good idea to hold a monthly reading sharing activity, which can encourage us to read more.
首先,每月举办读书分享会是个好主意,能鼓励我们多阅读。
(15)Besides, we can set up a suggestion box at the school gate so students can voice opinions anytime.
此外,在校门口设立意见箱,方便同学们随时反馈想法。
(16)If my suggestions are accepted, students will have more chances to relax and develop hobbies.
若我的建议被采纳,同学们会拥有更多放松、培养爱好的机会。
(17)Last but not least, teachers can organize outdoor study tours to get us close to nature.
最后,老师可以组织户外研学,让我们亲近自然。
3. 结尾段短语句型
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(1)I would highly appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account.若您能考虑我的建议,我将万分感激。
(2)Hope my advice will be helpful and bring some changes to our school.希望我的建议能有所帮助,为校园带来改变。
(3)I’m looking forward to seeing our school become better and better.期待看到我们的校园越来越好。
(4)Thank you for sparing your time to read my letter.感谢您抽空阅读来信。
(5)I hope you will find my advice / suggestions useful / helpful.希望您觉得我的建议有用。
(6)I would be very glad if you could find my suggestions useful /helpful.如果您觉得我的建议有用的话,我将非常感激。
(7)I hope you will take my advice / suggestions into consideration/account. 我希望您能考虑一下我的建议/意见。
(8)I would highly appreciate your consideration of my advice/suggestions / tips. 我非常感激您能考虑我的建议/意见/提示。
■模板
模板1
Dear Jim,
I’m delighted to receive your letter, in which you ask me for advice on ______(主题). Here are my practical suggestions for you.
At present, ______(简述现状 / 你的困扰). To make things better, I have two ideas. Firstly, you’d better ______(建议 1). In this way, you can ______(好处). Besides, it’s a good choice to ______(建议 2), which will help you ______(好处).
Hopefully my advice will be of great use. If you have any other questions, feel free to tell me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
模板2
Dear Sir/Madam/ Dear Teacher,
I am Li Hua, a senior three student from Hongxing Middle School. I’m writing to put forward several constructive suggestions about ______(校园事项).
Recently I’ve noticed that ______(现存问题), which brings inconvenience to us students. To solve the problem effectively, I have the following proposals.
To begin with, the school ought to ______(建议 1). Only by doing so can we ______(好处). Furthermore, it would be wise to ______(建议 2). We can also ______(配套小安排).
I would highly appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. Thank you for your time and attention.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
■高考例题分析
例1(2026·全国二卷)假定你是李华,外教Kate计划将你们班的英语作文汇编成册。请给Kate写封邮件,内容包括:
(1)建议配图。
(2)自荐承担画图工作。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右。
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Kate,
It’s a great idea to make a collection of our English essays.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Kate,
It’s a great idea to make a collection of our English essays. This compilation will surely be a wonderful showcase of our English learning achievements. I have a suggestion that might enhance the overall quality of this collection — adding relevant pictures.
Pictures can play a vital role in making the essays more engaging. For example, if an essay is about a travel experience, a vivid picture of the described scenery can bring the story to life, helping readers better visualize the places and emotions.
I’m quite interested in contributing to this project. As I have been learning drawing for years and have a good command of various drawing techniques, I believe I can create pictures that perfectly match the themes of the essays. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是李华给外教Kate写的邮件。外教Kate计划将班级英语作文汇编成册,李华在邮件中提出配图的建议,并自荐承担画图工作。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
帮助:help →assist
至关重要的:vital → crucial
增强:enhance → boost
各种各样的:various→ a variety of
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Pictures can play a vital role in making the essays more engaging.
拓展句:Pictures, which are an important visual element, can play a vital role in making the essays more engaging.
【高分句型1】I have a suggestion that might enhance the overall quality of this collection — adding relevant pictures.(运用了that引导定语从句)
【高分句型2】As I have been learning drawing for years and have a good command of various drawing techniques, I believe I can create pictures that perfectly match the themes of the essays.(运用了As引导原因状语从句;省略引导词that的宾语从句;that引导的定语从句)
例2(2025·北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动。你的外国好友Jim打算参加,为此发来邮件,就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 提出的建议;
2. 建议的理由。
提示词:倡议 proposal
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers. Here’s my advice.
I suggest focusing on environmental protection. As we know, the environment is facing serious problems, which affect everyone’s life. If we can raise awareness about it and encourage more people to take action, it will make a big difference. Another idea is to promote cultural exchange. We live in a world where different cultures coexist. By sharing our cultures and learning from each other, we can build a more harmonious global community.
I hope these suggestions help! Let me know if you need more ideas.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生针对外国好友Jim关于联合国全球青少年倡议征集活动的询问进行回复,给出倡议内容的建议及理由。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad → delighted
建议:suggest → advise
关注:focus on → concentrate on
提高:raise → enhance
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I’m glad to hear that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers.
拓展句:Hearing that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers, I feel glad.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】We live in a world where different cultures coexist.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Let me know if you need more ideas.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
例3(2024·北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1)建议投稿内容;
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article.
To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view.
Looking forward to reading your article!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,要求考生给他回复邮件,就此给予他建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
很好的:great → wonderful
成就:achievement→ accomplishment
建议:suggestion → advice
此外:In addition → what’s more
2.句式拓展
句式变换
原句:It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country.
拓展句:It’s great to hear what you’re planning to write about is China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
优题精练●专题实战通关
Passage 1
(2025-2026学年河南漯河市高级中学下学期高三年级期中考试)假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友Jack热爱中国文化,想要学唱中文歌,特意发邮件向你求助。请你给他回复一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示支持与鼓励;
2. 推荐一首中文歌曲并简单说明理由;
3. 给出简单学习建议。
注意:
1. 词数80-100;
2. 行文连贯,逻辑清晰;
参考词汇:lyrics 歌词; melody 旋律;曲调
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 2
(2025-2026学年山西省太原市师范学校附属学校高三下学期开学)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你校交换生Jim打算在暑假期间游览一些中国历史文化名城,向你征询建议。请你用英文给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 推荐两个城市并说明理由;
2. 提出旅行注意事项。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
(2025-2026学年广东名校联盟高三7月质量水平测试)假定你是李华,即将完成高中学业。如果可以回到过去,你想给刚进入高一的自己写一封信。内容包括:
1. 送上鼓励;
2. 给出最真心的建议;
3. 表达期许。
注意:
1. 词数应为80左右;
2. 请在答题卡相应位置作答。
Dear Me at Senior 1,
Hi! I am you three years later.
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 4
(2025-2026学年上海交通大学附属中学高三上学期10月月考)假设你是启明中学高三学生李明,你在本期你们校报的心理辅导专栏——“成长加油站(Guide to Growth)”读到Billy的来信(内容如下),你通过该专栏给Billy回信,帮他解决他的困惑并给他建议。在信中,你必须:
·谈谈你对于此现象的看法;
·给出具体的建议。
Dear Advisor,
Lately, I’ve been feeling confused about myself. To fit into a certain group of friends who are all into famous brands and trendy stuff, I used my savings to buy an expensive pair of sneakers that my family can hardly afford. Now I regret it. I feel like I’m losing myself just to gain approval from others. I see many students trying hard to be “cool” or popular. Is this what growing up is all about? How can I stay true to myself without feeling left out?
A confused student,
Billy
Dear Billy,
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Yours advisor,
Li Ming
Passage 5
(2025-2026学年山东济钢高级中学高三下学期5月第三次适应性测试)假定你是李华,你校即将开展“AI赋能学习周(AI-Enhanced Learning Week)”活动。外教Mr. Smith正向同学们征集关于“如何平衡AI辅助学习与独立思考”的创意提案。请你给Mr. Smith写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 你的提案(如:设立“AI伦理辩论角”或“AI辅助写作工作坊”);
2. 说明理由及预期效果;
3. 呼吁同学们关注数字化学习中的自律。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to share my proposal for the upcoming “AI-Enhanced Learning Week.”
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 6
(2026届山东省济南市历城第二中学模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Mary制作了一张关于中国端午节的海报(见右图),来信征求你的意见。请给她写一封回信,内容包括:
(1)你的评价;(2)你的建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mary,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 7
(2026届河南镇平县第一高级中学三轮复习临门一脚)假定你是李华。外教Mr. Smith对你校正在举办的“非遗进校园”活动非常感兴趣。请你写一封邮件向他介绍并推荐一项非遗体验项目。邮件内容包括:
1. 项目介绍;
2. 推荐理由。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr Smith,
I’m delighted to know you’re interested in our “Intangible Cultural Heritage on Campus” activity.
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 8
(2026届四川雅安市高三第一次诊断性考试)假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Mike写信向你分享他的课余活动安排表并询问你的意见,你认为他的课余活动安排不够科学,请给他回一封信,内容包括:
1. 指出Mike课余活动安排存在的问题;
2. 提出具体建议并阐明理由。
Mike’s After-school Activity Plan
Category
After-school Activities
Duration (min.)
Study
Homework and revision
70
Entertainment
Playing with electronic devices.
120
Exercise
Running
10
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Passage 9
(2026届江苏南京市高三年级考前综合训练题)假定你是李华,你的英国好友Chris计划拍摄一些短视频,帮助外国朋友了解中国人的日常生活,向你寻求建议。请你写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)给出建议;
(2)说明理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 10
(2026届安徽合肥一六八中学高三规范性训练(二)假定你是李华,你校举办茶文化海报设计大赛,交换生Chris制作了一版海报向你征求意见,请回复邮件,内容包括:
(1)你的评价;
(2)你的建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请在答题卡的对应位置作答。
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清单03 应用文写作之建议信
目录导航
01知识脑图·核心脉络搭建——梳理专题框架,搭建知识体系
02 考点深研·知能分层突破——深挖高频考点,分层突破重难点
考点一 写作要求
考点二 基本格式
考点三 常用词汇句型
考点四 模板
03优题精练·专题实战通关——精选优质试题,强化实战应用
知识脑图·核心脉络搭建
考点深研●知能分层突破
■写作要求
建议信是写信人向收信人就生活,工作或者求学过程中遇到的问题或者困难对亲朋好友提出自己的建议或忠告而写的信件。
建议信的收信人可以是个人,写信人就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法;收信人也可以是某个组织或机构,写信人就其在改进服务、提升业务等方面提出建议或忠告。
写作核心时态:一般现在时(现状问题)+一般将来时(建议带来的好处)+ 情态动词 should/could/might(提建议专用)
■基本格式
1.首段:开门见山,表明写信意图,向对方提出建议;
2.主体段落:详细描述具体的建议和事由。通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或者to begin with/ start with, then, later, last but not least.等依次陈述建议。
3.结尾段:指出采纳建议的好处,并且表达愿望,希望所提建议能对收信人有所帮助。
■常用词汇句型
1. 开篇短语句型
(1)offer/put forward practical suggestions提出建议
(2)give advice on…就…… 提建议
(3)I am Li Hua, a senior high student. I’m writing to offer several suggestions about our school’s after-school clubs.我是高中生李华,写信就我校课后社团提几点建议。
(4)Having noticed some problems in our canteen, I’m writing to share my advice with you.注意到食堂存在一些问题,我写信向您提出我的建议。
(5)To make our campus more beautiful, I’d like to put forward some practical ideas.为让校园更美观,我想提出一些切实可行的想法。
(6)I’m writing to give some advice on how to improve our reading environment.我写信是为改善我们的阅读环境提供建议。
2. 主体段短语句型
(1)take one’s advice into consideration考虑某人建议
(2)adopt one’s suggestions 采纳建议
(3)in my opinion /from my point of view 依我看
(4)It would be a good idea to… 我认为…… 是个好主意
(5)We should/ought to… 我们应该……
(6)suggest doing sth. /advise sb. to do sth. 建议做某事
(7)You'd better...· I would like to suggest that... 你最好……·我想建议……
(8)If I were you / Were I you, I would... 如果我是你,我会…..
(9)In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action(s).
在我看来,采取以下措施是非常明智的。
(10)It would be a good idea if you take actively part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting.
如果你积极参加各种活动,那将是个好主意,这将有助于让生活变得更有趣。
(11)As for your study, you'd better make a timetable to manage your time better and turn to your classmates and teachers for help if necessary.
至于你的学习,你最好制定一个时间表来更好地管理你的时间,必要时向你的同学和老师寻求帮助。
(12)AI can help us in ways we cannot even imagine, but it also has the potential to overshadow our ability to think independently if we rely on it too much.
人工智能可以以我们无法想象的方式帮助我们,但如果我们过于依赖它,它也有可能掩盖我们独立思考的能力。
(13)At present, there are not enough sports equipment for us. Therefore, we hope the school can buy more basketballs and badminton rackets.
目前体育器材不足,因此我们希望学校采购更多篮球、羽毛球拍。
(14)First of all, it’s a good idea to hold a monthly reading sharing activity, which can encourage us to read more.
首先,每月举办读书分享会是个好主意,能鼓励我们多阅读。
(15)Besides, we can set up a suggestion box at the school gate so students can voice opinions anytime.
此外,在校门口设立意见箱,方便同学们随时反馈想法。
(16)If my suggestions are accepted, students will have more chances to relax and develop hobbies.
若我的建议被采纳,同学们会拥有更多放松、培养爱好的机会。
(17)Last but not least, teachers can organize outdoor study tours to get us close to nature.
最后,老师可以组织户外研学,让我们亲近自然。
3. 结尾段短语句型
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(1)I would highly appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account.若您能考虑我的建议,我将万分感激。
(2)Hope my advice will be helpful and bring some changes to our school.希望我的建议能有所帮助,为校园带来改变。
(3)I’m looking forward to seeing our school become better and better.期待看到我们的校园越来越好。
(4)Thank you for sparing your time to read my letter.感谢您抽空阅读来信。
(5)I hope you will find my advice / suggestions useful / helpful.希望您觉得我的建议有用。
(6)I would be very glad if you could find my suggestions useful /helpful.如果您觉得我的建议有用的话,我将非常感激。
(7)I hope you will take my advice / suggestions into consideration/account. 我希望您能考虑一下我的建议/意见。
(8)I would highly appreciate your consideration of my advice/suggestions / tips. 我非常感激您能考虑我的建议/意见/提示。
■模板
模板1
Dear Jim,
I’m delighted to receive your letter, in which you ask me for advice on ______(主题). Here are my practical suggestions for you.
At present, ______(简述现状 / 你的困扰). To make things better, I have two ideas. Firstly, you’d better ______(建议 1). In this way, you can ______(好处). Besides, it’s a good choice to ______(建议 2), which will help you ______(好处).
Hopefully my advice will be of great use. If you have any other questions, feel free to tell me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
模板2
Dear Sir/Madam/ Dear Teacher,
I am Li Hua, a senior three student from Hongxing Middle School. I’m writing to put forward several constructive suggestions about ______(校园事项).
Recently I’ve noticed that ______(现存问题), which brings inconvenience to us students. To solve the problem effectively, I have the following proposals.
To begin with, the school ought to ______(建议 1). Only by doing so can we ______(好处). Furthermore, it would be wise to ______(建议 2). We can also ______(配套小安排).
I would highly appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. Thank you for your time and attention.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
■高考例题分析
例1(2026·全国二卷)假定你是李华,外教Kate计划将你们班的英语作文汇编成册。请给Kate写封邮件,内容包括:
(1)建议配图。
(2)自荐承担画图工作。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右。
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Kate,
It’s a great idea to make a collection of our English essays.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Kate,
It’s a great idea to make a collection of our English essays. This compilation will surely be a wonderful showcase of our English learning achievements. I have a suggestion that might enhance the overall quality of this collection — adding relevant pictures.
Pictures can play a vital role in making the essays more engaging. For example, if an essay is about a travel experience, a vivid picture of the described scenery can bring the story to life, helping readers better visualize the places and emotions.
I’m quite interested in contributing to this project. As I have been learning drawing for years and have a good command of various drawing techniques, I believe I can create pictures that perfectly match the themes of the essays. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是李华给外教Kate写的邮件。外教Kate计划将班级英语作文汇编成册,李华在邮件中提出配图的建议,并自荐承担画图工作。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
帮助:help →assist
至关重要的:vital → crucial
增强:enhance → boost
各种各样的:various→ a variety of
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Pictures can play a vital role in making the essays more engaging.
拓展句:Pictures, which are an important visual element, can play a vital role in making the essays more engaging.
【高分句型1】I have a suggestion that might enhance the overall quality of this collection — adding relevant pictures.(运用了that引导定语从句)
【高分句型2】As I have been learning drawing for years and have a good command of various drawing techniques, I believe I can create pictures that perfectly match the themes of the essays.(运用了As引导原因状语从句;省略引导词that的宾语从句;that引导的定语从句)
例2(2025·北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动。你的外国好友Jim打算参加,为此发来邮件,就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 提出的建议;
2. 建议的理由。
提示词:倡议 proposal
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers. Here’s my advice.
I suggest focusing on environmental protection. As we know, the environment is facing serious problems, which affect everyone’s life. If we can raise awareness about it and encourage more people to take action, it will make a big difference. Another idea is to promote cultural exchange. We live in a world where different cultures coexist. By sharing our cultures and learning from each other, we can build a more harmonious global community.
I hope these suggestions help! Let me know if you need more ideas.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生针对外国好友Jim关于联合国全球青少年倡议征集活动的询问进行回复,给出倡议内容的建议及理由。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad → delighted
建议:suggest → advise
关注:focus on → concentrate on
提高:raise → enhance
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I’m glad to hear that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers.
拓展句:Hearing that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers, I feel glad.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】We live in a world where different cultures coexist.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Let me know if you need more ideas.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
例3(2024·北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1)建议投稿内容;
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article.
To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view.
Looking forward to reading your article!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,要求考生给他回复邮件,就此给予他建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
很好的:great → wonderful
成就:achievement→ accomplishment
建议:suggestion → advice
此外:In addition → what’s more
2.句式拓展
句式变换
原句:It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country.
拓展句:It’s great to hear what you’re planning to write about is China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
优题精练●专题实战通关
Passage 1
(2025-2026学年河南漯河市高级中学下学期高三年级期中考试)假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友Jack热爱中国文化,想要学唱中文歌,特意发邮件向你求助。请你给他回复一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示支持与鼓励;
2. 推荐一首中文歌曲并简单说明理由;
3. 给出简单学习建议。
注意:
1. 词数80-100;
2. 行文连贯,逻辑清晰;
参考词汇:lyrics 歌词; melody 旋律;曲调
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
I’m really thrilled to hear that you want to learn to sing Chinese songs. I totally support your decision, for it’s a wonderful way to improve your Chinese as well as feel the beauty of Chinese traditional culture.
Here I’d like to recommend a famous traditional Chinese song Jasmine Flower. It has a soft and pleasant melody with simple and easy-to-understand lyrics. It is one of the most well-known Chinese folk songs, perfect for foreign learners to start with.
If you listen to it more often and read the lyrics gently, you will pick it up soon. I believe you will fall in love with this lovely song.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生给留学生朋友Jack回复一封邮件,表示支持与鼓励、推荐一首中文歌曲并简单说明理由以及给出简单学习建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
激动的:thrilled → athrill
方式:way → approach
完全:totally → completely
著名的:well-known → noted
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It is one of the most well-known Chinese folk songs, perfect for foreign learners to start with.
拓展句:It is one of the most well-known Chinese folk songs, which is perfect for foreign learners to start with.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m really thrilled to hear that you want to learn to sing Chinese songs.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】If you listen to it more often and read the lyrics gently, you will pick it up soon.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
Passage 2
(2025-2026学年山西省太原市师范学校附属学校高三下学期开学)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你校交换生Jim打算在暑假期间游览一些中国历史文化名城,向你征询建议。请你用英文给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 推荐两个城市并说明理由;
2. 提出旅行注意事项。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to know that you plan to visit some historical and cultural cities in China during the summer vacation. Here are my suggestions.
I strongly recommend Xi’an and Luoyang. Xi’an was the capital of many dynasties, where you can see the Terracotta Warriors and the well-preserved ancient City Wall. Luoyang, known as the capital of 13 dynasties, offers the Longmen Grottoes and the White Horse Temple, both of which are must-see sites.
Remember to book tickets online in advance, as summer is a peak travel season. Also, wear comfortable shoes, stay hydrated, and always follow the rules at historical sites.
I hope you have a wonderful trip!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】题目要求考生以李华的身份写信给交换生 Jim,推荐两座历史文化名城并向他给出相关旅行建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad → delighted
提前:in advance → beforehand
舒适的:comfortable → cozy
精彩的:wonderful → fantastic
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Here are my suggestions.
拓展句:Here are my suggestions which may be helpful to you.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m glad to know that you plan to visit some historical and cultural cities in China during the summer vacation. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Xi’an was the capital of many dynasties, where you can see the Terracotta Warriors and the well-preserved ancient City Wall. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 3
(2025-2026学年广东名校联盟高三7月质量水平测试)假定你是李华,即将完成高中学业。如果可以回到过去,你想给刚进入高一的自己写一封信。内容包括:
1. 送上鼓励;
2. 给出最真心的建议;
3. 表达期许。
注意:
1. 词数应为80左右;
2. 请在答题卡相应位置作答。
Dear Me at Senior 1,
Hi! I am you three years later.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Me at Senior 1,
Hi! I am you three years later. First of all, I want to tell you that all your efforts will finally pay off. The tough days that you are going through now will become precious memories.
I have some sincere advice for you. Focus on your studies steadily and never give up easily. Meanwhile, balance your study and rest to keep a positive state of mind.
I hope you can stick to your goals, cherish every moment and grow into a better version of yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以李华的身份,给刚升入高一的自己写一封信,内容需包含鼓励、真心建议以及对自己的期许。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
取得回报:pay off → bear fruit
经历:go through → undergo
集中注意力于:focus on → concentrate on
坚持:stick to → insist on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I have some sincere advice for you.
拓展句:I have some sincere advice which will help you.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】First of all, I want to tell you that all your efforts will finally pay off.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】The tough days that you are going through now will become precious memories.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
Passage 4
(2025-2026学年上海交通大学附属中学高三上学期10月月考)假设你是启明中学高三学生李明,你在本期你们校报的心理辅导专栏——“成长加油站(Guide to Growth)”读到Billy的来信(内容如下),你通过该专栏给Billy回信,帮他解决他的困惑并给他建议。在信中,你必须:
·谈谈你对于此现象的看法;
·给出具体的建议。
Dear Advisor,
Lately, I’ve been feeling confused about myself. To fit into a certain group of friends who are all into famous brands and trendy stuff, I used my savings to buy an expensive pair of sneakers that my family can hardly afford. Now I regret it. I feel like I’m losing myself just to gain approval from others. I see many students trying hard to be “cool” or popular. Is this what growing up is all about? How can I stay true to myself without feeling left out?
A confused student,
Billy
Dear Billy,
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Yours advisor,
Li Ming
【参考范文】
Dear Billy,
I’m Li Ming, a Senior Three student from Qiming High School. Having read your letter on our school newspaper column Guide to Growth, I fully understand your confusion and regret.
Actually, chasing famous brands to win peers’ recognition is a common teenage phenomenon, yet it’s far from the true meaning of growth. Popularity based on expensive goods is shallow and temporary. If we sacrifice family finances and lose our true personalities just to fit in, we will end up empty inside, just like what you are experiencing now. Real charm lies in our inner qualities rather than fancy sneakers or trendy items.
Here are my practical suggestions. First, value genuine friendship that accepts you without material conditions. Second, devote spare time to hobbies like reading or sports, which help you attract friends sharing the same interests. Third, remind yourself constantly that staying true to your heart matters more than avoiding being left out.
I hope my ideas can clear up your confusion.
Yours advisor,
Li Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生给通过专栏给Billy回信,在信中谈谈对于“追求昂贵流行品牌”现象的看法并给出具体的建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
困惑:confusion → puzzlement/perplexity/uncertainty
追逐/追求:chase → pursue/run after/go after
经历:experience → undergo/go through
建议:suggestion → recommendation
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Popularity based on expensive goods is shallow and temporary.
拓展句:The popularity, which is based on expensive goods, is shallow and temporary.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】If we sacrifice family finances and lose our true personalities just to fit in, we will end up empty inside, just like what you are experiencing now.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句,且“what you are experiencing now”为介词“like”的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Second, devote spare time to hobbies like reading or sports, which help you attract friends sharing the same interests.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
Passage 5
(2025-2026学年山东济钢高级中学高三下学期5月第三次适应性测试)假定你是李华,你校即将开展“AI赋能学习周(AI-Enhanced Learning Week)”活动。外教Mr. Smith正向同学们征集关于“如何平衡AI辅助学习与独立思考”的创意提案。请你给Mr. Smith写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 你的提案(如:设立“AI伦理辩论角”或“AI辅助写作工作坊”);
2. 说明理由及预期效果;
3. 呼吁同学们关注数字化学习中的自律。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to share my proposal for the upcoming “AI-Enhanced Learning Week.”
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to share my proposal for the upcoming “AI-Enhanced Learning Week.”
To better navigate this digital era, I suggest setting up an “AI Ethics Debate Corner.” This activity provides a great opportunity for us to discuss the boundaries of using AI in our assignments. It will not only help students realize the risks of over-reliance on technology but also sparks our enthusiasm for independent thinking.
In my view, while embracing AI as a powerful tool, we must remain self-disciplined to ensure our creativity isn’t replaced by algorithms. Hope my idea could be considered.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求学生给Mr. Smith写一封邮件,向他介绍你的关于“如何平衡AI辅助学习与独立思考”的创意提案。
【详解】
1.词汇积累:
建议:suggest → propose/recommend
确保:ensure → guarantee/make sure/confirm
提供:provide → supply/render
意识到:realize → be aware of/recognize/perceive
2.句式拓展:
陈述句变倒装句
原句:It will not only help students realize the risks of over-reliance on technology but also sparks our enthusiasm for independent thinking.
拓展句:Not only will it help students realize the risks of over-reliance on technology but it also sparks our enthusiasm for independent thinking.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】To better navigate this digital era, I suggest setting up an “AI Ethics Debate Corner.”(运用了不定式作目的状语。)
【高分句型2】In my view, while embracing AI as a powerful tool, we must remain self-disciplined to ensure our creativity isn’t replaced by algorithms.(运用了现在分词作状语和省略引导词that引导的宾语从句。)
Passage 6
(2026届山东省济南市历城第二中学模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Mary制作了一张关于中国端午节的海报(见右图),来信征求你的意见。请给她写一封回信,内容包括:
(1)你的评价;(2)你的建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mary,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mary,
I’m more than delighted to receive your letter and appreciate your poster about the Chinese Dragon Boat Festival. It is elegantly designed with a distinct theme and concise expressions, vividly presenting the charm of this traditional festival. Your work is truly impressive and highly praiseworthy.
To make it more perfect, I have some modest suggestions. You can add images of zongzi and dragon boat races to enrich visual effects. Besides, a brief introduction to the origin in memory of Qu Yuan will deepen its cultural meaning. Brighter traditional colors can also enhance the festive atmosphere.
I hope my advice will be helpful. Looking forward to your better version!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以李华的身份回信评价英国笔友的端午海报并提出改进建议。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
优雅地:elegantly → gracefully
简洁的:concise → brief
谦虚的: modest → humble
有帮助的:be helpful → be of help
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, a brief introduction to the origin in memory of Qu Yuan will deepen its cultural meaning.
拓展句:Besides, a brief introduction to the origin, which is in memory of Qu Yuan, will deepen its cultural meaning.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】It is elegantly designed with a distinct theme and concise expressions, vividly presenting the charm of this traditional festival.(运用了现在分词presenting作状语)
【高分句型2】I hope my advice will be helpful.(运用了省略了that的宾语从句)
Passage 7
(2026届河南镇平县第一高级中学三轮复习临门一脚)假定你是李华。外教Mr. Smith对你校正在举办的“非遗进校园”活动非常感兴趣。请你写一封邮件向他介绍并推荐一项非遗体验项目。邮件内容包括:
1. 项目介绍;
2. 推荐理由。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr Smith,
I’m delighted to know you’re interested in our “Intangible Cultural Heritage on Campus” activity.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m delighted to learn that you’re interested in our “Intangible Cultural Heritage on Campus” activity. I strongly recommend you try paper-cutting.
The process is simple yet fascinating. You fold a piece of red paper, draw a few lines, and cut along them with scissors. When unfolded, a vivid pattern — such as a flower or an animal — appears. What makes paper-cutting special is that it carries wishes for happiness and good luck, often displayed during festivals.
This hands-on experience offers a relaxing way to appreciate Chinese folk wisdom. I’m sure it will be an unforgettable cultural experience for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以李华的身份给外教Mr. Smith写邮件,介绍学校“非遗进校园”活动,推荐一项非遗体验项目并说明推荐理由。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
推荐:recommend → propose
迷人的:fascinating → appealing
亲身实践的:hands-on → practical
难忘的:unforgettable → memorable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:This hands-on experience offers a relaxing way to appreciate Chinese folk wisdom.
拓展句:This hands-on experience offers a relaxing way that we can appreciate Chinese folk wisdom.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】What makes paper-cutting special is that it carries wishes for happiness and good luck, often displayed during festivals.(运用了what引导主语从句以及that引导表语从句)
【高分句型2】I’m sure it will be an unforgettable cultural experience for you.(运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句)
Passage 8
(2026届四川雅安市高三第一次诊断性考试)假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Mike写信向你分享他的课余活动安排表并询问你的意见,你认为他的课余活动安排不够科学,请给他回一封信,内容包括:
1. 指出Mike课余活动安排存在的问题;
2. 提出具体建议并阐明理由。
Mike’s After-school Activity Plan
Category
After-school Activities
Duration (min.)
Study
Homework and revision
70
Entertainment
Playing with electronic devices.
120
Exercise
Running
10
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
Thank you for sharing your schedule with me. However, I think your current plan is a bit unbalanced. You spend too much time (120 minutes) on electronic entertainment, while your exercise time is far too short (only 10 minutes). Also, 70 minutes of study might not be enough for thorough revision.
I strongly suggest that you reduce screen time to 60 minutes and increase exercise to at least 40 minutes. Physical activity helps reduce eye strain and improves focus, which will actually boost your efficiency when you return to your homework. Remember, health is the foundation of good grades!
Hope this helps.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生给英国朋友Mike回一封信,指出Mike课余活动安排存在的问题,提出具体建议并阐明理由。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
足够的:enough → sufficient
减少:reduce → decrease
提升:improve → enhance
促进:boost → facilitate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Remember, health is the foundation of good grades!
拓展句:Only when health is guaranteed can you achieve good grades!
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I strongly suggest that you reduce screen time to 60 minutes and increase exercise to at least 40 minutes.(运用了that引导的宾语从句,从句使用虚拟语气)
【高分句型2】Physical activity helps reduce eye strain and improves focus, which will actually boost your efficiency when you return to your homework.(运用了which引导的定语从句,when引导的时间状语从句)
Passage 9
(2026届江苏南京市高三年级考前综合训练题)假定你是李华,你的英国好友Chris计划拍摄一些短视频,帮助外国朋友了解中国人的日常生活,向你寻求建议。请你写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)给出建议;
(2)说明理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
Learning that you are set to shoot short videos to present authentic Chinese daily life to foreign friends, I’m writing to share some detailed suggestions.
Specifically, you can capture people’s casual outdoor leisure pastimes, diverse local homemade food and prevalent digital services in daily scenarios.
For one thing, these life-themed scenes are warm and emotionally resonant, enabling foreign audiences to perceive the real life of ordinary Chinese residents. For another, they embody unique local traditions and modern efficiency, which helps overseas viewers form a comprehensive and objective perception of China.
Wish your videos every success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以李华的名义给英国好友Chris写一封邮件,给他一些拍摄帮助外国朋友了解中国人的日常生活的短视频的建议并说明理由。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
展示:present → showcase
建议:suggestion → recommendation
各种各样的:diverse → a wide range of
温暖人心的:warm → heartwarming
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Specifically, you can capture people’s casual outdoor leisure pastimes, diverse local homemade food and prevalent digital services in daily scenarios.
拓展句:Specifically, not only can you capture people’s casual outdoor leisure pastimes and diverse local homemade food, but you can also capture the prevalent digital services in daily scenarios.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Learning that you are set to shoot short videos to present authentic Chinese daily life to foreign friends, I’m writing to share some detailed suggestions. (运用了现在分词Learning作伴随状语)
【高分句型2】For another, they embody unique local traditions and modern efficiency, which helps overseas viewers form a comprehensive and objective perception of China. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 10
(2026届安徽合肥一六八中学高三规范性训练(二)假定你是李华,你校举办茶文化海报设计大赛,交换生Chris制作了一版海报向你征求意见,请回复邮件,内容包括:
(1)你的评价;
(2)你的建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请在答题卡的对应位置作答。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
Glad to receive your poster for the tea culture, I’m writing to offer some suggestions.
You did a good job with the tea leaves and three cups. However, “Tasty, sweet” doesn’t quite fit because Chinese tea often tastes a little bitter first but has a sweet aftertaste. So I suggest replacing them with “Bitter first, sweet later”. This better shows the true spirit of Chinese tea. Besides, you could show the steps of making tea on the poster, from picking to pouring, which would help viewers understand why tea culture is a valuable part of Chinese heritage.
Hopefully, these tips will be inspiring for you and your entry will harvest a good result!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以李华的身份,对交换生Chris设计的茶文化海报给出评价和建议。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
建议:suggest → recommend
展示:show → demonstrate/present
步骤:step → procedure
宝贵的:valuable → precious
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:So I suggest replacing them with “Bitter first, sweet later”. This better shows the true spirit of Chinese tea.
拓展句:So I suggest replacing them with “Bitter first, sweet later”, which better shows the true spirit of Chinese tea.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Glad to receive your poster for the tea culture, I’m writing to offer some suggestions. (运用了形容词短语Glad to receive your poster for the tea culture作状语)
【高分句型2】Besides, you could show the steps of making tea on the poster, from picking to pouring, which would help viewers understand why tea culture is a valuable part of Chinese heritage. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和why引导的宾语从句)
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