Unit 7 课时4 Section 3 Writing（教学课件）英语新教材沪教版九年级上册

Unit 7 Section 3 Writing Reading Mark Twain 新教材沪教版英语（九年级上） 1 学习目标 I can describe some characters in Mark Twain's stories. understand how Mark Twain's life experiences influenced his works. appreciate Mark Twain's writing style. make comments on a story I read. 2 01 新 课 导 入 03 应 用 实 践 06 回 顾 总 结 07 随 堂 小 练 02 学 习 理 解 04 迁 移 创 新 05 考 点 速 递 学习内容 3 新课导入 1 4 be written by be known as have many exciting experiences be well worth reading make a deep impression on in a simple way be absorbed in be particular about 有许多激动人心的经历 全神贯注于 值得一读 用浅显易懂的方法 由… 所写 留下深刻的印象 对…挑剔 作为…而出名 Play a game! (短语积累） 语材积累 How to introduce your favourite book？ What book? Who is the author? My favourite book is Journey to the West. The author is Wu Cheng’en. 语材积累 How to introduce your favourite book？ main characters The book tells the exciting adventure of four characters—Monk Xuanzang, Monkey King, Pigsty and Sha Wujing. 语材积累 How to introduce your favourite book？ Plot They go through all kinds of difficulties together, reach Mount Lingshan and get the Buddhist scriptures(佛经). 语材积累 How to introduce your favourite book？ comments What do you think of the main character? Why? My favourite character is Monkey King, not only because he is clever, but also because he is brave. 语材积累 How to introduce your favourite book？ Why do you like this book? The book teaches me success comes from a strong will. We should stick to our goals and keep trying. 语材积累 How to introduce your favourite book？ Summary Step one：What book? Who is the author? Step two：The main characters and the plot. Step three: Your comments. 学习理解 02 12 Writing a story review Writing 1 Wang Yao wrote a review after she read the story about Tom Sawyer. Read her story review below and label the different parts. Get ready for a fantastic Reading Week at your school! Write a story review and share it with your classmates. a b c a A brief introduction to the story and its main characters b The plot of the story c Her comments on the story(e.g. her favourite character) “ Tom Sawyer paints the fence” by Mark Twain “Tom Sawyer paints the fence” is a short story from The Adventures of Tom Sawyer written by Mark Twain. The story has two main characters: Tom Sawyer and Ben Rogers. Aunt Polly and some boys from the town also play a small part in the story. Aunt Polly wants Tom to paint their fence. However, Tom would prefer to play games. He pretends that painting the fence is not hard work, but fun. He tricks Ben Rogers and the other boys in the town into painting the fence for him. Tom is quite clever. Although he tricked his friends to help him get the work done, everyone is happy at the end of the story. 开头段：Introduction to the story（故事简介） 先点明故事出处、作者；再介绍主要人物与次要人物。 中间段：Plot（故事情节） 正文简要介绍故事的主要内容。 结尾段：My comments（个人评价） 评价人物 Tom，表达自己对故事的看法。 话题分析 如何写故事（书）的评论 　读书评论的撰写可以帮助读者强化阅读理解，提高分析故事和人物的能力。本单元主要话题是马克·吐温及其作品 ，相关写作题目可延伸为“我最喜欢的一本书”“一个有趣的故事” “我最喜欢的作家”等。命题内容以文学评论为主 ，要求先介绍故事的主要内容 ，然后分析人物特点 ，最后表达自己的看法。写作时应注意故事介绍要简洁 ，重点突出人物的性格特点和故事的寓意。 内容一般从以下几方面着手： • What is the name of the story? Who wrote it? 故事的名字是什么？作者是谁？ • What is the story mainly about? 故事主要讲了什么？ • What do you think of the main character? Why? 你觉得主角怎么样？ 为什么？ • What do you learn from the story? 你从这个故事中学到了什么？ 一般来说，读书评论（报告）应包含三部分的内容：作者及作品简介，作品内容概括（情节与主要人物分析），个人对作品的评价。在第一部分中，应提供与作品相关的社会历史背景介绍。为了理清脉络，写读书报告之前最好查阅有关资料，如作者的传记、作品创作的背景等。 第二部分的内容概括要简明扼要，通俗易懂，要做到围绕作品主题展开叙述，主观性要强。叙述小说、戏剧等故事情节一般用现在时，而历史故事等通常用过去时。第三部分是最重要的部分。在这一部分中，要对作品做出自己的个人理解，讨论作品的优点和不足，作品的社会或历史意义等。有能力的话，讨论作家的写作风格亦可。 写作步骤 ◆ 步骤一 ：开头点明要评论的故事 ，介绍其作者和出处。 ◆ 步骤二 ：正文简要介绍故事的主要内容 ，分析主角的性格特点。 ◆ 步骤三 ：结尾表达你对故事的评价和从中得到的启示。 写作框架 写作部分 核心内容 推荐时态 连接词/过渡语 开头 （总起） 点明故事名称 、作者和出处 一般现在时 “Tom Sawyer paints the fence” is a short story from...written by… It is one of the most famous stories by... 中间 （分述） 1. 故事的主要内容 2. 主角的性格特点分析 一般过去时/一般现在时 The story tells us about… Tom Sawyer is a boy who… He is very... because... 结尾 （总结） 对故事的评价和从中得到的启示 一般现在时 In my opinion. The story teaches us that… I think it is a... story because... 通用句式 一、开头介绍句式： 1.我想介绍这本名著……，作者是…… I’d like to talk about the famous book …, which is written by … 2.你读过故事……吗？它的作者是…… Have you ever read the story …? Its writer is … 二、故事内容句式： 1.这个故事主要讲述了…… The story mainly tells us about … 2.故事讲述主角……，他拥有许多刺激的经历。 It talks about the main character …, who has many exciting experiences. 三、人物分析句式： 1.汤姆·索亚是一个聪明但淘气的男孩 ，他有很多好主意。 Tom Sawyer is a clever but naughty boy who has many good ideas. 2.他非常善于跳出思维定式。 He is very good at thinking outside the box. 3.我认为主角很……（勇敢 / 聪明 / 诚实），因为…… I think the main character is …（brave/clever/honest）because … 四、结尾感悟句式： 1.在我看来 ，这是一个非常滑稽有趣的故事。 In my opinion, it is a very funny and interesting story. 2.这个故事告诉我们 ，有时我们可以用聪明的方法解决问题。 The story teaches us that sometimes we can solve problems in a clever way. 3.从这个故事，我学到日常生活中我们应当勇敢、诚实。 From this story, I learn that we should be brave and honest in our daily life. 应用实践 03 22 2. Now write your own story review. Step1 Plan Choose a story and note down some key information in the mind map. author setting how the story starts what happens to the main character main characters what they are like what I thought of the story how it made me feel why people should read it Introduction to the story Characters Plot My comments A story review Step 2 Write Write a story review. Use the mind map in step 1 to help you. Remember to include details about your favourite character in the story. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Step 3 Check and revise Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it. Review of "Tom Sawyer paints the fence" "Tom Sawyer paints the fence" is a short story from The Adventures of Tom Sawyer written by Mark Twain. It is one of the most famous stories by this great American writer. The story tells us about how Tom Sawyer tricked his friends into painting the fence for him. Aunt Polly asked Tom to paint the fence as a punishment, but Tom didn't want to do it. He pretended that painting the fence was a very interesting activity. Soon, all his friends wanted to try it, and they gave Tom their toys in exchange for a chance to paint the fence. Tom Sawyer is a clever but naughty boy who has many clever ideas. In my opinion, it is a very funny and humorous story. The story teaches us that sometimes we can solve problems in a creative way instead of working hard all the time. Charlotte’s Web by E. B. White Charlotte’s Web is a touching novel by E. B. White. It is the heart-warming story of the friendship between a pig named Wilbur and a clever spider named Charlotte. When Wilbur is in danger, Charlotte decides to do her best to save him. She comes up with a surprising solution, but will it succeed? I loved reading the book, and my favourite character was Charlotte. The character was well written and believable. It is hard to think of another character that is as kind, clever and selfless as her. Charlotte’s Web is about the true meaning of friendship, and I recommend it to anyone who loves touching and memorable stories. Sample writing The Little Prince by Antoine de Saint-Exupéry The Little Prince is a world-famous novel written by Antoine de Saint-Exupéry. It tells the beautiful story of a young prince who travels to strange places and meets lots of interesting characters on the way. During his journey, he learns important lessons about life. In one memorable scene, a fox teaches him that love and friendship are the most valuable things in the world. He also discovers that true beauty can only be seen with the heart. The prince was my favourite character in the book, and I really enjoyed reading about his adventures. He is one of the most unusual children’s book characters of all time. Throughout the story, he is kind, pure and curious. Sample writing No matter what happens, he always keeps his childlike heart and continues to look at the world with kindness. This book is written in a simple way, but it is also full of wisdom. I strongly recommend it to anyone who loves reading stories that make you think. 回顾总结 06 30 一、复习和总结读书评论词汇和句型。 二、通过范文学习，总结读书评论类文章的基本架构。 三、用所学的知识完成一篇写作任务。 课堂小练 07 32 be written by be known as have many exciting experiences be well worth reading make a deep impression on in a simple way be absorbed in be particular about 1.由…… 所写 2.作为……而出名；被称为 3.有许多激动人心的经历 4.很值得一读 5.给…… 留下深刻印象 6.以简单的方式 7.全神贯注于；专心于 8.对…… 挑剔；讲究 一、短语积累 have a great influence on try one’s best to do sth. carry on with pay attention to all sorts of at the end of the story. of all time more than be regarded as touching and memorable stories 9.对…产生巨大的影响 10.尽力做某事 11.继续（做某事） 12.注意 13.各种各样的 14.在故事的结尾 15.有史以来 16.超过；不仅仅 17.被认为是 18.感人且令人难忘的故事 句型积累 一、开头介绍句式： 1.我想介绍这本名著《老人与海》，作者是欧内斯特・海明威。 I’d like to talk about the famous book The Old Man and the Sea, which is written by Ernest Hemingway. 2.《老人与海》是伟大作家欧内斯特・海明威笔下最受欢迎的故事之一。 The Old Man and the Sea is one of the most popular stories by the great writer Ernest Hemingway. 3. 《汤姆・索亚刷栅栏》是马克・吐温所写的《汤姆・索亚历险记》中的一则短篇故事 “Tom Sawyer paints the fence” is a short story from The Adventures of Tom Sawyer written by Mark Twain. 二、故事内容句式： 1.这个故事主要讲述了唐僧师徒去西天取经的旅程。 The story mainly tells us about the journey of Tang Monk and his disciples to get scriptures in the west. 2.故事讲述主角孙悟空，他拥有许多刺激的经历。 It talks about the main character Sun Wukong, who has many exciting experiences. 三、人物分析句式： 1.汤姆·索亚是一个聪明但淘气的男孩 ，他有很多好主意。 Tom Sawyer is a clever but naughty boy who has many good ideas. 2.他非常善于跳出思维定式。 He is very good at thinking outside the box. 3.我认为主角很勇敢，因为他从不害怕危险。 I think the main character is brave because he is never afraid of danger. 结尾感悟句式： 1.在我看来 ，这是一个非常滑稽有趣的故事。 In my opinion, it is a very funny and interesting story. 2.这个故事告诉我们 ，有时我们可以用聪明的方法解决问题。 The story teaches us that sometimes we can solve problems in a clever way. 3.从这个故事，我学到日常生活中我们应当勇敢、诚实。 From this story, I learn that we should be brave and honest in our daily life. 4.这本书不仅仅是冒险故事，它教会我们宝贵的道理。 The book is more than an adventure story. It teaches us a valuable lesson. 书籍是人类的朋友,它们带我们走进不同的世界，感受不同的情感。相信在中学阶段， 你一定翻阅过无数丰富多彩、引人入胜的书吧？请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇不少于100词的短文，介绍你最喜欢的一本书。 提示： 1.这本书的名字是什么？ 2.这本书讲了什么故事？ 3.你最欢书中的哪个角色？ 4.这本书对你有什么启发？ My favourite book is Journey to the west. It is one of the most famous traditional Chinese stories. The author is Wu Cheng'en. The book tells the exciting adventure of four characters — Monk Xuanzang, Monkey King, Pigsty and Sha Wujing. Together they face many dangers but never give up until they finally reach Mount Lingshan and get the Buddhist scriptures. My favourite character is Monkey King, not only because he is clever, but also because he is brave. This wonderful book teaches me that success comes from a strong will. No matter how difficult life is, we should stick to our goals and keep trying. That’s why this book has become my all-time favourite. A Book Review of The Old Man and the Sea I’d like to review the book The Old Man and the Sea. It is written by the American writer Ernest Hemingway. The book is known as one of his greatest works. The story tells us about an old fisherman called Santiago. He has many exciting experiences at sea. For 84 days, he caught nothing. Finally, he got a huge marlin. But on his way back, sharks ate the big fish, leaving only bones. The old man is brave and strong-minded. He never gives up when facing difficulties. He makes a deep impression on me. I am absorbed in this story. The book is well worth reading. From the story, I learn that we should keep trying when we meet trouble. We can be destroyed, but we cannot be defeated. It encourages me to face difficulties bravely. 当前，全市各学校正开展 “智慧阅读” 活动。请你根据活动主题并结合表中所给信息，用英语写一篇 100 词左右的倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议。 读书的益处 1.获取知识，使人明辨是非 2.?（请你补充） 发出倡议 1.多读书，读好书 2.养成每天读书的好习惯 3. 与父母共读一本书 4. ?（请你补充） My dear friends, As we know, reading is very important._____________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ My dear friends, As we know, reading is very important in our life. It can help us get more knowledge and open our eyes. Through reading, we can tell what is right and what is wrong. Reading can also bring us a lot of joy and peace, and make us think deeply. So it's necessary for us to read more good books. Here are some suggestions. First, we should read good books which can help us learn better and grow up healthily. Second, we should form a good habit of reading every day. For example, we can spend half an hour on reading before going to bed. Third, we can read a book together with our parents at home. In this way, we can not only improve our knowledge but also get closer to our parents. Finally, after reading, we can share our ideas about books with classmates, which is also helpful to improve our speaking and writing skills. Let's take action now and enjoy the pleasure of smart reading together. I believe our school will become a better place with the smell of books. Thank you！ 44 $