Unit1 Section 3-Writing课件 2026-2027学年沪教版英语九年级上册

该初中英语课件围绕“伟大人物的社会贡献”主题，通过Warm-up环节讨论陈望道、袁隆平等人物激活背景知识，从词汇学习（如background, significant）到结对讨论人物成就与品质，再结合陈望道范文示例，搭建“输入-讨论-输出”的写作学习支架。 其亮点在于融合文化意识与语言能力培养，以中国伟大人物（如邓稼先）为写作素材，通过谋篇布局（基本信息、经历贡献、评价）和高分表达（如make contributions to, devote oneself to）提升语言表达，作业分层（个人背诵与小组互评）发展学习能力。学生能增强家国情怀与写作技能，教师可依托系统步骤高效教学。

Unit 1 Great people 沪教牛津版九年级上册 How did great people contribute to our society? Key question 主题范畴：人与社会 Writing 1 Warm-up & Lead-in Chen Wangdao Yuan Longping Tu Youyou Discussion Who are these people? What do you know about them? Today we are going to learn how to write an article about a great person. background /'bækgraʊnd/ significant /sɪɡ'nɪfɪkənt/ milestone /'maɪlstəʊn/ manage /'mænɪdʒ/ impact /'ɪmpækt/ be fond of n. 背景 adj. 有重大意义的;显著的 n. 重要事件；里程碑 v. 完成（困难的事） n. 巨大影响；强大作用 喜爱 New words and phrases Step 1: Pre-writing background /'bækgraʊnd/ n. 背景 He wrote about his childhood background in the article. 他在文章里写了自己的童年背景。 significant /sɪɡ'nɪfɪkənt/ adj. 有重大意义的；显著的 This meeting is a significant step for us. 这次会议对我们来说是意义重大的一步。 milestone /'maɪlstəʊn/ n. 重要事件；里程碑 The book is a milestone in her writing life. 这本书是她写作生涯的里程碑。。 例句 manage /'mænɪdʒ/ v. 完成（困难的事） She managed to finish the task before dark. 她设法在天黑前完成了这项艰巨任务。 impact /'ɪmpækt/ n. 巨大影响；强大作用 The scientist’s work has a deep impact on the world. 这位科学家的研究对世界有着深远的巨大影响。 be fond of 喜爱 Most kids are fond of interesting science stories. 大多数孩子都喜爱有趣的科学故事。 Discuss the questions Who is he / she? What are his / her main achievements? How did he / she become successful? Why do people admire him/her? What personal qualities helped him/her succeed? Step 2: Pair Work Example (Chen Wangdao) Early life & background He was born in Zhejiang Province. He studied in Japan, and he developed a strong interest in Marxism when he studied there. Qualities He was hard-working and persistent. He was devoted to seeking and spreading the truth. Achievements & contributions He was the first Chinese to translate The Communist Manifesto. He was also a well-known educator and a revolutionary. People’s opinions on him People respected him as a pioneer of Marxism in China. He is remembered for devoting his whole life to spreading revolutionary ideas. From a young age, he / she showed a strong interest in ... Inspired by ..., he / she developed a passion for ... A significant milestone in his / her life was when ... Through hard work, he / she managed to ... The impact of his / her contributions can still be seen in ... Step 3: While-writing Chen Wangdao was born in Zhejiang Province. From a young age, he showed a strong interest in new ideas. Later he went to Japan to study. Inspired by revolutionary thoughts there, he was fond of learning Marxism and looking for the truth. He was hard-working and never gave up. A significant milestone in his life was when he decided to translate The Communist Manifesto. Through his hard work, he managed to finish its first complete Chinese translation. Besides this great work, he was also a famous teacher and revolutionary. The impact of his contributions can still be seen in the spread of revolutionary ideas across China. People all respect him as a pioneer of Marxism in China. He is remembered for spending his whole life telling people the truth. One possible version: I wrote about the person’s early life, contributions and what others think of him / her. I used appropriate adjectives to describe the person’s qualities. I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit. I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation. Step 4: Post-writing 03 More exercise 双语学习报 邓稼先是我国著名的核物理学家，为我国的核武器发展做出了巨大的贡献。请你根据下面表格提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍这位伟大的科学家。80 词左右，可适当发挥。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 提示： 基本信息 1924. 6. 25 -1986. 7. 29，核物理学家（nuclear physicist） 主 要 经 历 及贡献 1. 出生于安徽怀宁，从小受到父亲严格的教育； 2. 1941 年进入大学学习物理； 3. 1948 年 10 月赴美深造，1950 年完成学业； 4. 1958 年至 1986 年，带领研制了中国第一颗原子弹和氢弹（atomic bomb and hydrogen bomb）。 人物评价 中国核计划之父（Father of China’s Nuclear Program） 人与社会——历史、社会与文化 文体：说明文 人称：以________________为主 时态：以________________为主 Step 1: 题干细审 第三人称 一般过去时 ·He __________ (出生在) Anhui Province on June 25th, 1924. ·He _______________________ (接受严格教育) from his father when he was young. ·He died on July 29th, 1986 ____________ (由于) a serious disease. Basic information 02 01 03 Comment Step 2: 谋篇布局 1 Deng Jiaxian Experience and contributions was born in received a strict education because of · In 1941, he ________ (进入) university and studied physics. · In 1948, he went to __________________ (深造) in the USA. · In 1950, he ___________________ (完成学业) and returned to China. · From 1958 to 1986, he led a group of young scientists and ___________________ (成功研发了) China’s first atomic bomb and hydrogen bomb. · He spent nearly 30 years ____________ (为……工作) China’s nuclear program. Basic information 02 01 Step 2: 谋篇布局 1 Deng Jiaxian Experience and contributions entered further his education completed his studies successfully developed working for He ___________ (被称作) “Father of China’s Nuclear Program”. Basic information 02 01 03 Comment Step 2: 谋篇布局 1 Deng Jiaxian Experience and contributions was called ★ 常用连接词： 1. 虽然；尽管 _____________________ 2. 因此 _____________________ Step 3: 句子提升 even though as a result ★ 高分表达： 3. 脱颖而出 stand out 4. 做贡献 ________________ 5. 被……录取 be admitted to ； 6. 献身；致力 ________________ 7. 并肩 side by side 8. 由于due to 9. no longer 不再 10. 被誉为 ________________ 11. 成功做某事 ________________ Step 3: 句子提升 make contributions to devote oneself to is honored as succeed in doing sth. 基础版范文 Step 4: 扩充成文 There were lots of famous scientists in China, and Deng Jiaxian, a famous nuclear physicist, was one of them. Deng Jiaxian was born on June 25, 1924 in Huaining, Anhui Province. When he was young, his father was very strict with him. In 1941, he entered a university and studied physics there. In October 1948, he went to America and finished his studies there in 1950. From 1958 to 1986, he led a team of young scientists and successfully developed China’s first atomic bomb and hydrogen bomb. Deng Jiaxian died on July 29, 1986. People call him the “Founding Father of China’s Two Bombs”. 进阶版范文 Among the many famous scientists in China, Deng Jiaxian stands out as one of the greatest. As a well-known nuclear physicist, he made great contributions to the development of China’s nuclear weapons. Born on June 25, 1924 in Huaining, Anhui Province, Deng Jiaxian received a strict education from his father when he was young. In 1941, he was admitted to a university, where he majored in physics. Later, in October 1948, he went to further his education in the USA and two years later, he successfully completed his studies. After returning to China, he devoted himself to the country’s nuclear program. 进阶版范文 From 1958 to 1986, he worked side by side with a team of young scientists in the research and succeeded in developing China’s first atomic bomb as well as the hydrogen bomb. Unfortunately, Deng Jiaxian passed away on July 29, 1986 due to a serious disease. Even though he is no longer with us, his spirit lives on. As a result, he is honored as the “Founding Father of China’s Two Bombs”, and his name will always be remembered by the Chinese people. Share your article with your classmates. “双减”背景下，作业如何合理分层 25 ⭐可参考作业布置如下： Samples: Homework 个人作业（可选） 小组作业（可选） 1. 背诵本篇作文，将其抄入作文集锦中。 1. 互评作文。 2. 完成《阳光》writing部分 26 27 $