Unit 3 课时4 Section 3 Writing（教学课件）英语新教材沪教版九年级上册

该初中英语课件围绕“写一篇关于难忘家庭时刻的记叙文”展开，通过短语积累游戏和家庭场景语材积累导入，搭建从词汇、句型到篇章结构的学习支架，帮助学生逐步掌握事件背景、过程、感受及意义的写作要素。 其亮点在于以结构化写作指导（四大要素、三段式结构）和思维导图工具为核心，结合语言能力培养（提供通用句式）与思维品质提升（引导分析事件特殊意义），通过范文示例和修改步骤，助力学生系统掌握记叙文写作，教师可高效开展教学，学生能提升语言表达与逻辑思维能力。

Unit 3 Section 3 Writing Family traditions 沪教版2024英语（九年级上） 1 学习目标 I can talk about people with great ideas. understand different ways of coming up with new ideas. explain how a great idea solved a problem. find out how great ideas have changed our lives. 2 01 新 课 导 入 03 应 用 实 践 06 回 顾 总 结 07 随 堂 小 练 02 学 习 理 解 04 迁 移 创 新 05 考 点 速 递 学习内容 3 新课导入 1 4 a fun outing a special Sunday brunch a warm birthday celebration stay up to look after me an unforgettable moment teach me the value of love leave a deep impression in my mind fresh in one's memory 温馨的生日庆祝 在心里留下深刻的印象 熬夜照顾我 教会我爱的意义 一次有趣的外出游玩 一个难忘的时刻 记忆犹新 一顿特别的周日早午餐 Play a game! (短语积累） 语材积累 What unforgettable moments have you shared with your parents? What made it special to you? teach me to ride a bike My father taught me to ride a bike in the park last weekend. He held the bike and cheered me up every time I fell. It was special because I felt his quiet love and learned not to give up. What unforgettable moments have you shared with your parents? What made it special to you? I joined a volunteer activity with my parents last month. It was special because we brought warmth to the elderly and helping others could make our world become more beautiful and also made me happy. joined a volunteer activity What unforgettable moments have you shared with your parents? What made it special to you? My mom took good care of me day and night when I was ill. It was special because I deeply felt her selfless love for me. look after me when I was ill What unforgettable moments have you shared with your parents? What made it special to you? I went on a trip with my parents during the holiday. It was special because it suddenly hit me that the simplest company with family is the greatest happiness went on a trip What unforgettable moments have you shared with your parents? What made it special to you? I often chat with my parents on the sofa after dinner. It was special because we shared little daily stories and got much closer. chat with my parents What unforgettable moments have you shared with your parents? What made it special to you? My parents held a lovely birthday party for me with the whole family. It was special because I felt full of love and happiness from my family. This beautiful memory warms my heart all the time and teaches me to value my family. held a birthday party 学习理解 02 12 Writing an article about a memorable family moment 1.Think about a memorable moment you have shared with your family. Then think about what made it special. Writing ←→C ☆ Teen Life Magazine Can you think of a memorable moment you shared with your family? Write an article and tell us about it! Possible memorable moment · a talk with your father /mother · a fun outing /vacation · a holiday /birthday celebration · a special Sunday brunch 话题分析 写一篇关于难忘家庭时刻的文章 　本单元以 Family Traditions（家庭传统与家庭温情）为核心话题，文体属于记叙文（叙事作文）。写作核心任务：记述一段真实、温暖、令人难忘的家庭经历，完整交代事件背景、活动过程、个人心情与特殊意义，展现亲情、陪伴、家风与成长的积极主题。 开头：开门见山，点明最难忘的家庭小事 中间：详细叙事，写清楚事件全过程 结尾：抒发感受 + 点明这件事的特殊意义，升华亲情主题 写作四大必备要素（满分逻辑） 1.Time and place 时间与地点： 交代事件发生的具体时间、场景（节日、周末、假期、家中、公园等） 2.Activities 活动过程: 描写家人一起的具体行为、互动细节、完整经过 3.Feelings 内心感受： 描写当时的真实情绪、感动、开心、温暖、感恩等心理变化。 4.What made it special 特殊意义： 点明这件事为什么难忘、带给自己的成长、感悟与家风传承（全文升华 点、高分关键） 一、开头通用句式（引入难忘家庭往事） 1.那段温暖的家庭时光依旧让我记忆犹新。 That warm family moment is still fresh in my memory. 2.在我所有的家庭回忆中，和父母共度的那一天最令我难忘。 Among all my family memories, the day I spent with my parents stands out most. 3.每当我回想起这件事，我总能感受到满满的温暖。 Whenever I look back on it, I can always feel full of warmth. 4.生活中有许多美好的回忆，但有一段家庭经历深深打动了我。 There are many sweet memories in my life, but one family experience touches my heart deeply. 二、中间通用句式（交代时间、地点、活动、家人行动，叙事主体） 1.那是一个周末，我们在家附近的公园共度时光。 It was a weekend, and we spent happy time together in the park near our home. 2.爸爸妈妈陪伴我，一遍又一遍地鼓励我不要放弃。 My parents stayed with me and encouraged me not to give up again and again. 3.我们一起做各种各样的事，屋子里处处充满欢声笑语。 We did all kinds of things hand in hand, filling the house with laughter. 4.在我们包饺子 / 出游谈心时，父母和我分享了很多有趣的小事。 While we made dumplings /took a trip and chatted, my parents shared lots of interesting little stories with me. 5.每当我遇到困难，他们都会伸手帮助我，给我力量。 Every time I met trouble, they would reach out to help me and give me strength. 三、结尾通用句式（抒发感受、点明特殊意义、升华亲情） 1.那一刻，温暖与幸福包裹着我的内心。 A strong sense of warmth and happiness washed over me at that moment. 2.我忽然明白，家人平凡的陪伴就是最大的幸福。 It suddenly hit me that simple company from family is the greatest happiness. 3.这段珍贵的回忆在我心中留下深刻印记，我会永远珍藏。 This precious memory leaves an unforgettable mark in my mind and I will treasure it forever. 4.这次经历让我体会到深厚的亲情，也让我和家人更加亲近。 This experience lets me feel deep family love and makes our family bond much stronger. 5.这件事之所以特别，是因为它教会我感恩与勇敢。 What made it special is that it taught me to be thankful and brave. 应用实践 03 20 2. Now write an article about your memorable family moment. Step1 Plan Note down some key information in the mind map. Step 2 Write Write about your memorable moment with your family. Use the mind map in step 1 to help you. Find a family photo taken at that time and add it to the article. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I included details about my memorable family moment. I used linking verbs and adjectives / nouns to describe how I felt I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit. I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation. Step 3 Check and revise Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it. An Unforgettable Moment with My Family Last summer afternoon, I learned to ride a bike with my father in the community park. At first, I was very scared. I kept falling off the bike. My father held the back of the bike tightly and cheered for me softly every time I fell. He told me not to give up and helped me stand up again and again. After trying many times, I finally rode the bike alone for a long way. I was so excited and moved at that moment. I felt my father’s quiet and deep love. This moment is special because it not only taught me how to ride a bike, but also let me know my family will always support me when I meet difficulties. I will keep this warm memory in my heart forever. 回顾总结 06 25 一、复习和总结描述一次难忘的家庭时刻的词汇和句型。 二、通过思维导图，我们学习关于“写一篇关于难忘家庭时刻”的文章 。 三、用所学的知识完成一篇写作任务。 课堂小练 07 27 ① 开头段·引入场景（开篇万能） 1.生活中有许多美好的回忆，但有一段家庭时光让我记忆犹新。 There are many sweet memories in my life, but one family moment stays fresh in my mind. 2.一次普通的家庭相聚，成为了我最珍贵的回忆。 An ordinary family gathering turned into my most precious memory. 3.每当我回想起这件事，我依然感到无比温暖。 Whenever I look back on it, I still feel extremely warm. ② 中间段·描写时间地点+活动过程（主体高分） 1.正是除夕夜在奶奶家，我们全家人度过了无比欢乐的时光。 It was on New Year’s Eve at my grandma’s house that we enjoyed great fun as a whole family. （强调句加分） 2.我们一起做各式各样的事，屋子里满是欢声笑语。 We carried out all kinds of activities hand in hand, filling the room with laughter. （现在分词作伴随状语） 3.那是一个晴朗的周末，我和家人在家共度美好时光。 It was a sunny weekend, and I spent wonderful time with my family at home. 4.我们包饺子时，父母和我分享了他们童年的趣事。 While we were making dumplings, my parents shared interesting stories from their childhood. （while 时间状语从句） 5.在整个过程中，我的家人一直耐心地陪伴和鼓励我。 During the whole process, my family always accompanied and encouraged me patiently. ③ 结尾段·抒发感受+升华主题（收尾满分） 1.那一天的经历让我深深体会到亲情的珍贵。 The experience on that day made me realize how precious family love is. 2.这段美好的回忆一直温暖着我的内心，让我更加珍惜家人。 This beautiful memory warms my heart all the time and teaches me to value my family. 3.我忽然意识到，家人最简单的陪伴就是最大的幸福。（高频高分句型） It suddenly hit me that the simplest company with family is the greatest happiness. 4.这次难忘的经历让我成长，也让我的家庭关系更加紧密。 This unforgettable experience helped me grow and made our family bond much stronger. 5.我会永远珍藏这段独一无二的家庭回忆。 I will keep this unique family memory in my heart forever. 人间烟火岁岁流转，总有一段与家人相伴的温馨瞬间，深深镌刻在心底，成为难以忘怀的珍贵回忆。你是否也珍藏着一段与家人共度的难忘时光？不妨提笔落笔，书写这段温暖美好的经历，细细讲述这份专属温情与动人故事。文章内容包括： 1.Time and place 2.Activities 3.Feelings 4.What made it special A memorable moment with my family Last weekend, my parents took me to the seaside for a short trip. We left early in the morning and arrived at the quiet beach before noon. The soft sand and blue sea took my breath away. We walked along the shore to collect colorful shells and built a small sandcastle together. At noon, we had a picnic with homemade sandwiches and fruit. We took many photos to record our happy time as the wind blew gently. I felt light and delighted staying with my parents. This trip is meaningful to me because busy schoolwork always keeps us apart. It reminds me to value every chance to stay with my family and hold these warm moments tight. Thank you！ 33 $