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人与自我 热考话题一身心健康 命题前瞻 近年来，近视、肥胖、脊柱弯曲异常、龋齿以及心理行为异常等健康 问题正在影响着越来越多青少年的成长。守护身心健康已成为青少年成长 路上的重要课题。学校英语报正以“Keep Our Body and Mind Healthy”为 题举办征文活动。请你结合自身经历，谈淡你对青少年健康问题的看法以 及你的做法。 人称：以第一人称为主 声时态：以一般现在时为主 要求： 1.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现学生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右。 Keep Our Body and Mind Healthy 佳作赏析 Keep Our Body and Mind Healthy 得分点剖断 In recent years,more and more teenagers suffer from various health problems,including poor eyesight,obesity ①开篇点题，问题 and mental stress,which greatly influence our study and 切入简洁精准。 daily growth.① To stay healthy,I have developed good living habits. Firstly,I take regular exercise and spend more time 23 outdoors to protect my eyes.Secondly,I keep a balanced ②instead of巧妙形 成了两种处理方式 diet and correct my sitting posture in daily study.Moreover, 的对比。 I learn to relieve pressure properly instead of keeping ③以“Only+状语” 开头的部分倒装结 worries to myself② 构，既强调了“养 成健康习惯”这 As we all know,health is the foundation of growth 核心观点，又使结 Only by forming healthy habits can we enjoy a better 尾富有感召力。 teenage life,③ 热考话题二 梦想与坚持 命题前瞻 热爱可抵岁月漫长。青岛三十七中初三学生刘志高，在2026年3月的 世界街舞大赛中夺得冠军。他6岁结缘霹雳舞，九年坚持训练。即便备战 中考，他合理安排学习，每天刻苦练舞到深夜。赛前他仅希望进入八强， 却凭借实力斩获桂冠。 成功源于热爱与坚持。清以“The Power of Persistence'”为题，结合自 身经历，谈谈你对坚持的理解，以及坚持带给你的成长。 、严人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主 要求：时态：以一般过去时为主 1.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现学生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右。 The Power of Persistence 24 佳作赏析 The Power of Persistence 得分点剖析 The story of Liu Zhigao has deeply moved me.He kept ①so.that引导结 practising breaking dance for nine years,faced countless 果状语从句，生动 challenges and never gave up.Finally,he succeeded and 刻画作者自身受挫 won the world championship. 想要放弃的心境。 His experience teaches me the importance of perseverance.I used to learn to play the guitar.At first,my fingers hurt badly and I could not play any complete tune.I was so frustrated that I wanted to quit.Encouraged by Liu ②过去分词作原因 Zhigao's spirit,I stuck to practising for half an hour every 状语，衔接自然。 day.I corrected my posture and practised patiently again and again.Little by little,I made great progress and could play beautiful music. I firmly believe that no pain,no gain As long as we ③经典励志金句， stick to our goals and overcome difficulties bravely,we will 适配主题，升华文 章立意。 finally achieve success. 人与社会 热考话题三中华传统文化 命题前瞻 用英语讲好中国故事，向世界传播中国声音。在全球化的今天，语言 不仅是交流的工具，更是文化传播的桥梁。提升英语语言能力，有助于我 们向世界展示真实、立体、全面的中国，让中华优秀传统文化跨越国界、 深入人心。 假设China Daily的文化栏目正在举办征文活动，请你以“y Favourite Chinese Traditional Story”为题写一篇英语文章进行投稿，介绍你最喜欢的 中国故事（如Jingwei Fills the Sea、u Gong Moves the Mountains等）。 人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主 时态：以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 25 要点： 1.故事的主要内容； 2.故事带给你的影响和启发。 要求： 1.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现学生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右。 My Favourite Chinese Traditional Story 佳作赏析 得分点剖析 My Favourite Chinese Traditional Story ①故事类文体经典 There are many traditional stories in China.Among all 开头。 of the stories,I like Yu Gong Moves the Mountains best. Once upon a time,there was an old man called Yu Gong.There were two high mountains near his home.They were so high that it took him a long time to walk to the ②although引导让 other side.So he decided to move the mountains. 步状语从句，突出 愚公的坚持不懈。 Yu Gong and his family began to move the mountains. Although the work was very hard,they kept moving them day after day,year after year.Finally,he took the mountains away successfully. The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long ③结尾引出寓意，点 明主旨，升华主题。 as we work hard.And we should not give up when facing difficulties. 26 热考话题四 榜样人物 命题前瞻 榜样的力量催人奋进，杰出人物的贡献改变世界。在人类历史的长河中， 总有一些人以非凡的智慧和坚定的信念，推动着世界、国家与社会的进步， 他们的事迹和精神穿越时空，激励着一代又一代人。 假设学校校刊YOUTH中“YOUR VOICE”栏目正在征稿，请你以“The Greatest Person in My Heart'”为标题，用英语写一篇短文进行投稿。 产人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主时态：以一般现在时为主 要点： 1.Who is the greatest person in your heart? 2.Why do you think he/she is great? 3.What have you learnt from him/her? 要求： 1.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现学生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右。 The Greatest Person in My Heart 佳作赏析 The Greatest Person in My Heart 得分点剖析 It's a great honour for me to write to you to share the greatest person in my heart. In my eyes,Yuan Longping,known as the"Father ①表达个人观点的 常用短语，相当于 of Hybrid Rice",is the greatest person.He spent his life “in my opinion”。 researching how to grow more rice to help feed people. Because of his hard work,millions of people have enough 27 food to eat. ②用First..Second. His story teaches me two important things.First,we 分点阐述启发，条 理清晰，层次分明。 should work hard for our dreams.Second,helping others is a great thing to do.I will work hard like him and try my best to help people in need. ③结尾升华主题，表 I truly believe that his spirit will live on in all of us 达榜样精神的传承， 与开头呼应。 forever.Yuan Longping's inspiration encourages me to be a better person every day. 热考话题五 志愿服务 命题前瞻 你校英语报社组织同学们分享自己在社区进行志愿活动的经历，请你 根据表格中的提示写一篇短文投稿。 人称：以第一人称 时态：以一般过去时为主 Topic Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community Time last Sunday made eco--friendly(环保的)products Activities gave out reusable water bottles and bags worked at the learning stalls(摊位) 要求： 1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不能出现学生的真实姓名及学校名称； 3.词数80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing Community as a volunteer. 28 佳作赏析 Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community 得分点剖所 Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing Community as a ①直接点明时间、 volunteer. 地点与事件，简洁 明了，开门见山。 Before the event began,we gathered at the entrance of Hongxing Park at 9 o'clock.We volunteers were then divided into groups.Some made eco-friendly products. ②现在分词短语作 伴随状语，句式丰 Others gave out reusable water bottles and bags we made.I 富多样。 went out to work at the learning stalls,teaching neighbours how to properly recycle and how to reduce trash here in ③谚语式短句，简 town② 洁有力，朗朗上☐， 。 令人印象深刻。 I shared what I know with others through the activity. Sharing is caring.Wish everyone could care about our community and earth. 人与自然 热考话题六环境保护 命题前瞻 随着“低碳生活”理念不断地深入人心，“环保生活”已经成为大家 的共同心愿。假如你是校报记者，请根据以下提示，以“Green Life”为题 写一篇英语短文发表在校报上。人称：以第一人称为主 时态：以一般现在时为主 提示： 1.说明倡导环保生活的原因；2.提出践行环保生活的方式；3.号召大家进 行环保生活。 要求： 1.要包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥以使行文连贯；2.文中不得出现真实 的姓名、校名等信息；3.不少于100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 29 Green Life Nowadays,living a green life is becoming more and more popular. 佳作赏析 得分点剖析 Green Life ①善用连接词（组）， Nowadays,living a green life is becoming more and 层层递进讲解环保 生活的措施。 more popular.Why do we call on green life?First,it helps protect our environment.Second,it can deal with global warming.Third,it makes our world more beautiful. ②when引导时间 状语从句，体现环 Then how can we live a green life?To start witi地①， 保从小事做起。 we should reuse old things instead of throwing them away. Besides,we'd better ride bikes or walk to school.It not only reduces pollution but also keeps us healthy.What's more,remember to save water and electricity in daily life. For example,turn off the lights when we leave a room Let's take part in environmental activities together. Small actions can make a big difference.Join us and start from now！ 热考话题七航空航天 命题前瞻 假如你是一位航天员，正在中国空间站执行任务。联合国教科文组织 邀请你与全球青少年视频连线，介绍你在空间站一天的工作与生活，并分 享你的感受。请你结合以下要求，写一篇英文发言稿。 业人称：以第一人称为主体载：应用文 30 A Day in Space work life:do experiments,exercise,sleep in a sleeping bag,go for a spacewalk, read,talk with family... feeling(s):proud,excited,amazed... 要求： 1.短文要包含所给提示，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.文中不能出 现真实姓名和学校名称；3.词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总 词数)。 Dear young friends, I am an astronaut from China.I am so glad to meet all of you here today. Thank you! 佳作赏析 Dear young friends, 得分点剖斯 I am an astronaut from China.I am so glad to meet all of you here today.I would like to share with you a day in my life aboard the space station. My day starts with exercise.Since there is no gravity ①这些表达表明作 in space,we must exercise for two hours every day.Then 者按照时间顺序描 述太空生活，使得 I do some scientific experiments.Sometimes,I go for a 行文更有条理。 spacewalk.At night,I sleep in a sleeping bag that is fixed to the wall.Before going to bed,I like to read or talk with ②此处用宾语从句表 my family on the video call. 达对青少年寄予的 希望。 I feel proud and excited to work in space.I hope my experience can inspire you to explore the universe! Thank you! 热考话题/八保护野生动物 命题前瞻 每年10月4日是世界动物日(World Animal Day）。你校英语社团将 举行以“Protecting Wild Animals”为主题的演讲比赛。请你根据提示写一 篇80词左右的英语演讲稿。 提示： 1.野生动物的现状（栖息地减少、非法捕猎等）；2.保护野生动物的重要 性（保持生态平衡等）；3.我们应该怎么做（至少两点建议)。 要求： 1.文章不得出现真实的人名和校名等信息；2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear friends, Today I want to talk about protecting wild animals. 佳作赏析 得分点剖析 Dear friends, ①通过使用条件状 Today I want to talk about protecting wild animals. 语从句，将“保护” Many wild animals are in danger.Their living areas are 变成了“自保”。 getting smaller and some animals are hunted illegally. Protecting wild animals is important.They help keep the balance of nature.If they disappear,we humans will also be in trouble. ②使用take action to do sth将结尾收 As students,we should do something.First,we can 得干净利落。 learn more about wild animals and ask people around us to protect them.Second,we must refuse products made from wild animals.Let's take action to protect wild animals. 32