Unit 1 Science and Scientists 征文投稿（含学习地图）（单元同步写作讲义）高中英语人教版选择性必修第二册

Unit 1 Science and Scientists｜征文投稿写作学习地图 主题 体裁 建议词数 核心任务 科学与科学家·科学精神 征文投稿 80词左右 阐释科学精神或讲述科学家故事，用表语从句论述 一、本讲义内容导航 模块 学什么 帮你解决什么问题 01 写作主题 明确对象、任务、重点与语气 知道写什么、写给谁 02 写作框架 开头亮明观点、主体论证、结尾总结 搭出完整论证结构 03 写作词汇 主题词汇与实用表达 积累可直接使用的表达 04 写作句型 表达观点、举例论证的常用句式 把观点和例证写得充分、有力 05 写作模板 标准版与提升版结构 快速组织完整征文 06 典例精练 结合真实情境练习方法 把方法落实到任务中 07 写作指导 审题、谋篇与表达方法 解决写什么、怎么写 08 参考范文 学习结构、语言与表达逻辑 借鉴完整成篇表达 09 拓展练习 不同情境下的迁移写作 形成独立写作能力 10 写作评价表 对照标准自查、修改、提升 发现问题并完成改进 二、本单元5个拓展练习练什么？ 练习主题 写作任务 重点训练 练习1｜科学精神主题投稿 人与社会·科学精神 观点立论、事例支撑、践行表达 练习2｜科学家坚守投稿 人与社会·科学家 人物与方向、坚守经历、影响迁移 练习3｜科研历程投稿 人与社会·人物传记 难题引述、突破叙述、致敬收尾 练习4｜失败价值投稿 人与社会·发明创造 现象分析、论证展开、观点收束 练习5｜科学态度投稿 人与社会·科学科普 经历切入、反思提炼、态度总结 三、系列训练亮点与学习路径 教材同步 结构完整 表达可用 练习分层 评价促改 紧扣单元主题与体裁 从审题到修改形成闭环 词汇句型模板可迁移 五类情境训练不重复 对照标准自查修改 学习路径 定任务 → 明信息 → 学描写 → 写成篇 → 完成练习 → 修改提升 Unit 1 Science and Scientists（单元同步写作讲义） 一、写作主题 单元主题：科学与科学家 应用文体裁：征文投稿 写作任务：为校英文报“科学”主题征文写一篇投稿，阐释科学精神或讲述科学家故事。 本讲义重点训练： 1. 阐释科学精神，表达个人观点。 2. 叙述科学家的探索经历与品质。 3. 用表语从句进行论述与总结。 4. 把单元词汇自然迁移到写作中。 二、写作框架 部分 内容要点 开头（1—2句） 点明征文主题或人物，给出总体观点，可用表语从句亮明立场。 主体（3—4句） 展开论述或叙述事例，结合 curious, breakthrough 等单元表达。 结尾（1—2句） 总结启发，呼应主题，表达个人践行意愿。 三、写作词汇 核心单词 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 brilliant 杰出的，聪颖的 评价科学家及其想法 curious 好奇的 描述科学态度 suspect 怀疑，猜想 描述提出疑问的研究过程 decrease 减少 描述数据或病例变化 transform 使改变 描述科学带来的变化 breakthrough 重大突破 评价研究成果 fundamental 基础的，根本的 强调科学精神的重要性 evaluate 评估 描述客观分析 gradually 逐渐地 描述研究进程 eventually 最终 描述结果 主题短语 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 come up with 想出，提出 描述提出理论或办法 put forward 提出 描述提出假设 draw a conclusion 得出结论 描述研究过程 contribute to 促成，有助于 描述科学家的贡献 be committed to 致力于 描述长期投入 核心词汇写作运用 词汇填空（用所给短语的适当形式填空） 1. The great scientist _______(come up with) a new theory to explain gravity. 2. Only after repeated experiments can you _______(draw a conclusion). 3. His discovery _______(contribute to) the development of modern medicine. 4. She _______(be committed to) scientific research all her life. 5. It took years before the number of cases began to _______(decrease). 句子翻译（将下列句子翻译成英文） 1. 事实是，真正的科学精神是求实与创新。（The fact is that...） ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 最重要的是，我们对世界保持好奇。（What matters most is that...） ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 屠呦呦毕生致力于医学研究。（be committed to） ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 正是无数次实验带来了这一重大突破。（lead to） ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 我的梦想是成为一名像钱学森一样杰出的科学家。（My dream is that...） ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 四、写作句型 开头句 1. When it comes to the spirit of science, what impresses me most is that scientists never stop questioning. 谈到科学精神，最打动我的是科学家从不停止质疑。 2. The person I admire most is _______, whose breakthroughs have changed our lives. 我最敬佩的人是_______，他/她的突破改变了我们的生活。 3. In my eyes, the spirit of science is that we seek truth bravely and keep innovating. 在我眼中，科学精神就是勇敢求真、不断创新。 中间句 1. What he / she did proves that failure is a natural part of scientific research. 他/她的经历证明，失败是科学研究的常态。 2. Faced with doubts, the scientist only believed what could be proved by facts. 面对质疑，这位科学家只相信能被事实证明的东西。 3. The reason why he / she succeeded is that he / she evaluated every result carefully. 他/她成功的原因是对每一次结果都进行认真评估。 4. It was years of patient work that finally brought the breakthrough. 正是多年的耐心工作最终带来了突破。 结尾句 1. The spirit of science teaches us that truth comes from practice. 科学精神告诉我们，真理来自实践。 2. That is why I will stay curious and brave on my way of learning. 这就是我在学习路上保持好奇与勇敢的原因。 3. In a word, science makes our life better, and scientists make science possible. 总之，科学让生活更美好，而科学家让科学成为可能。 五、写作模板 模板1：简洁标准版 _______(文章标题) When it comes to _______(主题), what impresses me most is that _______(核心观点). In my eyes, the spirit of science is that _______(自己的理解). Take _______(人物或事例) as an example. He / She _______(具体事迹). The reason why he / she succeeded is that _______(品质或态度). His / Her story has proved that _______(道理). That is why I will _______(自己的行动). I believe the spirit of science will light our way forward. 模板2：分层高分版 _______(文章标题) When it comes to _______(主题), the first thing that comes to my mind is that _______(核心观点). Science never grows in comfort; it grows from questions and repeated tests. _______(人物) is a living example. _______(具体经历). What is more moving is that _______(细节或转折). It was _______(关键因素) that finally led to _______(成果). From this story, I have learned that _______(启发). As a student, I will _______(自己的行动), for the future of science belongs to the curious and the brave. 六、典例精练 假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举办主题为 “My Dream of Science” 的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的科学梦想。内容包括： 1. 你的科学梦想； 2. 产生这一梦想的原因或经历； 3. 你为实现梦想的计划。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 My Dream of Science ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 七、拓展练习 练习1：科学精神主题投稿（人与社会-科学精神） 你校英文报正在举办主题为 “The Spirit of Science in My Heart” 的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，阐释你心中的科学精神。内容包括： 1. 你对科学精神的理解； 2. 用一位科学家的事例加以说明； 3. 你打算如何践行这种精神。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 The Spirit of Science in My Heart ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习2：科学家坚守主题投稿（人与社会-科学家） 你校英文报 “Science and Me” 专栏正在征集短文，主题为 “The Scientist Who Taught Me Persistence”。请你写一篇短文投稿，讲述一位科学家的科研坚守，并说明它带给你的影响。内容包括： 1. 这位科学家及其研究方向； 2. 他/她在科研困境中坚守的一段经历； 3. 这段经历对你的影响。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 The Scientist Who Taught Me Persistence ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习3：科研历程主题投稿（人与社会-人物传记） 你校英文报正在举办 “Science Stories” 主题征文。请你写一篇短文投稿，讲述屠呦呦团队发现青蒿素的历程并表达敬意。内容包括： 1. 团队面临的难题； 2. 发现青蒿素的过程； 3. 你的敬意与感想。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 The Story of Artemisinin ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习4：失败价值主题投稿（人与社会-发明与创造） 你校英文报正在征集 “Failure and Success in Science” 主题文章。请你写一篇短文投稿，论述科研探索中失败的价值并表达观点。内容包括： 1. 科研中失败的常见性； 2. 失败对突破的意义； 3. 你的观点与感悟。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 The Value of Failure in Science ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习5：科学态度主题投稿（人与社会-科学科普） 你校英文报正在举办 “Science and Me” 主题征文。请你写一篇短文投稿，结合一次实验课经历谈谈科学态度的养成。内容包括： 1. 实验课上的经历； 2. 你从中体会到的科学态度； 3. 你的收获或改变。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 A Lesson from the Lab ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 八、写作评价表 评价维度 分值 自评 同伴评 评价说明 结构 Structure 3分 ____ / 3 ____ / 3 文章标题居中，开头点题、主体展开、结尾升华，层次清楚。 内容 Content 6分 ____ / 6 ____ / 6 覆盖题目要点，观点明确，事例具体，感悟真实。 语言 Language 4分 ____ / 4 ____ / 4 能使用本单元核心词汇和表语从句等目标句式，表达准确连贯。 书写 Handwriting 2分 ____ / 2 ____ / 2 书写清楚，拼写、大小写和标点规范。 总分 Total 15分 ____ / 15 ____ / 15 综合评价：结构、内容、语言、书写整体表现。 自我反思与改进 我最需要改进的一项：□结构 □内容 □语言 □书写 具体改进计划：________________________ 评分参考 满分 15分；13-15 优秀；10-12 达标；7-9 需修改；6分及以下建议重写。 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 1 Science and Scientists｜征文投稿写作学习地图 主题 体裁 建议词数 核心任务 科学与科学家·科学精神 征文投稿 80词左右 阐释科学精神或讲述科学家故事，用表语从句论述 一、本讲义内容导航 模块 学什么 帮你解决什么问题 01 写作主题 明确对象、任务、重点与语气 知道写什么、写给谁 02 写作框架 开头亮明观点、主体论证、结尾总结 搭出完整论证结构 03 写作词汇 主题词汇与实用表达 积累可直接使用的表达 04 写作句型 表达观点、举例论证的常用句式 把观点和例证写得充分、有力 05 写作模板 标准版与提升版结构 快速组织完整征文 06 典例精练 结合真实情境练习方法 把方法落实到任务中 07 写作指导 审题、谋篇与表达方法 解决写什么、怎么写 08 参考范文 学习结构、语言与表达逻辑 借鉴完整成篇表达 09 拓展练习 不同情境下的迁移写作 形成独立写作能力 10 写作评价表 对照标准自查、修改、提升 发现问题并完成改进 二、本单元5个拓展练习练什么？ 练习主题 写作任务 重点训练 练习1｜科学精神主题投稿 人与社会·科学精神 观点立论、事例支撑、践行表达 练习2｜科学家坚守投稿 人与社会·科学家 人物与方向、坚守经历、影响迁移 练习3｜科研历程投稿 人与社会·人物传记 难题引述、突破叙述、致敬收尾 练习4｜失败价值投稿 人与社会·发明创造 现象分析、论证展开、观点收束 练习5｜科学态度投稿 人与社会·科学科普 经历切入、反思提炼、态度总结 三、系列训练亮点与学习路径 教材同步 结构完整 表达可用 练习分层 评价促改 紧扣单元主题与体裁 从审题到修改形成闭环 词汇句型模板可迁移 五类情境训练不重复 对照标准自查修改 学习路径 定任务 → 明信息 → 学描写 → 写成篇 → 完成练习 → 修改提升 Unit 1 Science and Scientists（单元同步写作讲义） 一、写作主题 单元主题：科学与科学家 应用文体裁：征文投稿 写作任务：为校英文报“科学”主题征文写一篇投稿，阐释科学精神或讲述科学家故事。 本讲义重点训练： 1. 阐释科学精神，表达个人观点。 2. 叙述科学家的探索经历与品质。 3. 用表语从句进行论述与总结。 4. 把单元词汇自然迁移到写作中。 二、写作框架 部分 内容要点 开头（1—2句） 点明征文主题或人物，给出总体观点，可用表语从句亮明立场。 主体（3—4句） 展开论述或叙述事例，结合 curious, breakthrough 等单元表达。 结尾（1—2句） 总结启发，呼应主题，表达个人践行意愿。 三、写作词汇 核心单词 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 brilliant 杰出的，聪颖的 评价科学家及其想法 curious 好奇的 描述科学态度 suspect 怀疑，猜想 描述提出疑问的研究过程 decrease 减少 描述数据或病例变化 transform 使改变 描述科学带来的变化 breakthrough 重大突破 评价研究成果 fundamental 基础的，根本的 强调科学精神的重要性 evaluate 评估 描述客观分析 gradually 逐渐地 描述研究进程 eventually 最终 描述结果 主题短语 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 come up with 想出，提出 描述提出理论或办法 put forward 提出 描述提出假设 draw a conclusion 得出结论 描述研究过程 contribute to 促成，有助于 描述科学家的贡献 be committed to 致力于 描述长期投入 核心词汇写作运用 词汇填空（用所给短语的适当形式填空） 1. The great scientist _______(come up with) a new theory to explain gravity. 2. Only after repeated experiments can you _______(draw a conclusion). 3. His discovery _______(contribute to) the development of modern medicine. 4. She _______(be committed to) scientific research all her life. 5. It took years before the number of cases began to _______(decrease). 参考答案： 1. 【答案】came up with 【解析】句子叙述过去的发现过程，come up with 用过去式 came up with。 2. 【答案】draw a conclusion 【解析】can 后接动词原形，draw a conclusion 表示“得出结论”。 3. 【答案】contributed to 【解析】contribute to 表示“促成；有助于”，描述已经产生的影响用一般过去时。 4. 【答案】was committed to 【解析】be committed to 表示“致力于”，all her life 提示叙述一生用一般过去时。 5. 【答案】decrease 【解析】begin to do 后接动词原形 decrease，表示“开始减少”。 句子翻译（将下列句子翻译成英文） 1. 事实是，真正的科学精神是求实与创新。（The fact is that...） ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 最重要的是，我们对世界保持好奇。（What matters most is that...） ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 屠呦呦毕生致力于医学研究。（be committed to） ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 正是无数次实验带来了这一重大突破。（lead to） ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 我的梦想是成为一名像钱学森一样杰出的科学家。（My dream is that...） ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： 1. 【答案】The fact is that true science means seeking truth and making innovations. 【解析】表语从句 The fact is that... 中 that 引导从句作表语，说明“事实”的具体内容。 2. 【答案】What matters most is that we stay curious about the world. 【解析】What matters most 为主语从句，is that 后接表语从句，双重从句结构是本单元重点。 3. 【答案】Tu Youyou was committed to medical research all her life. 【解析】be committed to 表示“致力于”，叙述人物一生用一般过去时。 4. 【答案】It was countless experiments that led to this great breakthrough. 【解析】强调句 It was...that... 强调主语 countless experiments；lead to 表示“带来”。 5. 【答案】My dream is that I will become a brilliant scientist like Qian Xuesen. 【解析】My dream is that... 为表语从句，that 引导完整句子说明梦想的内容。 四、写作句型 开头句 1. When it comes to the spirit of science, what impresses me most is that scientists never stop questioning. 谈到科学精神，最打动我的是科学家从不停止质疑。 2. The person I admire most is _______, whose breakthroughs have changed our lives. 我最敬佩的人是_______，他/她的突破改变了我们的生活。 3. In my eyes, the spirit of science is that we seek truth bravely and keep innovating. 在我眼中，科学精神就是勇敢求真、不断创新。 中间句 1. What he / she did proves that failure is a natural part of scientific research. 他/她的经历证明，失败是科学研究的常态。 2. Faced with doubts, the scientist only believed what could be proved by facts. 面对质疑，这位科学家只相信能被事实证明的东西。 3. The reason why he / she succeeded is that he / she evaluated every result carefully. 他/她成功的原因是对每一次结果都进行认真评估。 4. It was years of patient work that finally brought the breakthrough. 正是多年的耐心工作最终带来了突破。 结尾句 1. The spirit of science teaches us that truth comes from practice. 科学精神告诉我们，真理来自实践。 2. That is why I will stay curious and brave on my way of learning. 这就是我在学习路上保持好奇与勇敢的原因。 3. In a word, science makes our life better, and scientists make science possible. 总之，科学让生活更美好，而科学家让科学成为可能。 五、写作模板 模板1：简洁标准版 _______(文章标题) When it comes to _______(主题), what impresses me most is that _______(核心观点). In my eyes, the spirit of science is that _______(自己的理解). Take _______(人物或事例) as an example. He / She _______(具体事迹). The reason why he / she succeeded is that _______(品质或态度). His / Her story has proved that _______(道理). That is why I will _______(自己的行动). I believe the spirit of science will light our way forward. 模板2：分层高分版 _______(文章标题) When it comes to _______(主题), the first thing that comes to my mind is that _______(核心观点). Science never grows in comfort; it grows from questions and repeated tests. _______(人物) is a living example. _______(具体经历). What is more moving is that _______(细节或转折). It was _______(关键因素) that finally led to _______(成果). From this story, I have learned that _______(启发). As a student, I will _______(自己的行动), for the future of science belongs to the curious and the brave. 六、典例精练 假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举办主题为 “My Dream of Science” 的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的科学梦想。内容包括： 1. 你的科学梦想； 2. 产生这一梦想的原因或经历； 3. 你为实现梦想的计划。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 My Dream of Science ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作指导 第一步 审题谋篇 项目 内容 体裁 征文投稿 对象 校英文报读者 写作目的 谈谈科学梦想并表达践行计划 主题 科学梦想与科学精神 时态 一般现在时为主，叙述经历用一般过去时 人称 第一人称为主 语气 真诚、积极、有感染力 布局 标题居中；开头亮明梦想；主体写原因与计划；结尾升华 第二步 要点拆解与表达 中文要点 英文表达 句式说明 我的梦想是投身科学研究。 My dream is that I will devote myself to scientific research. 用表语从句点明梦想。 一次实验课点燃了我的好奇心。 A physics class first aroused my curiosity about science. 用具体经历支撑观点。 我会从夯实基础做起。 I will start by building a fundamental knowledge of science. 表达践行计划。 第三步 句式升级 原句 升级句 仿写句 说明 I want to be a scientist. My dream is that I will become a scientist devoted to exploration. My wish is that I can serve people with science. 用表语从句升级表达。 I became curious in a physics class. It was a physics class that first aroused my curiosity about science. It was a documentary that opened the door of science for me. 用强调句突出契机。 I will work hard. I will evaluate my learning methods regularly and make steady progress. I will reflect on my mistakes and keep improving. 用具体行动替代空泛表态。 第四步 同义替换 基础表达 升级表达 使用场景 good brilliant 评价人物或想法 find out come up with 描述提出想法 study hard be committed to 描述长期投入 make progress make breakthroughs 描述取得成果 at last eventually 描述最终结果 important fundamental 强调重要性 because of thanks to 表达原因 参考范文 基础版范文 My Dream of Science My dream is that I will become a scientist in the future. This dream came from a physics class last term. In that class, our teacher showed us a simple experiment about light. I was surprised and asked a lot of questions. My teacher told me that asking questions is the start of science. From then on, I began to read science books every week. To realize it, I will study hard and keep asking why. I believe that science will make our life better. 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 become a scientist devote myself to scientific research 用投身表达更显志向 was surprised was struck by the magic of it 强化震撼感受 asked a lot of questions raised questions one after another 描写主动探究 study hard build a fundamental knowledge of science 表达路径具体化 make our life better transform the way we live 用单元词提升表达 提高版范文 My Dream of Science My dream is that I will devote myself to scientific research. This dream was born in a physics class last term. In that class, a simple experiment about light was shown, and I was struck by the magic of it. I raised questions one after another, and my teacher said that asking questions is the start of science. Since then, I have read widely with a curious mind. To turn my dream into reality, I will build a fundamental knowledge of science step by step. I believe that science will transform the way we live. 范文点评 本文三次使用表语从句点明梦想与信念，以具体课堂经历支撑主题，结合 curious、fundamental、transform 等单元词汇，结构清晰、情感真挚。 七、拓展练习 练习1：科学精神主题投稿（人与社会-科学精神） 你校英文报正在举办主题为 “The Spirit of Science in My Heart” 的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，阐释你心中的科学精神。内容包括： 1. 你对科学精神的理解； 2. 用一位科学家的事例加以说明； 3. 你打算如何践行这种精神。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 The Spirit of Science in My Heart ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作思路 本文属于征文投稿，写作对象是校英文报读者，写作目的在于阐释科学精神。开头亮明对科学精神的理解；主体用科学家事例说明；结尾落到个人践行。可使用 curious, evaluate, breakthrough 等表达，并用表语从句亮明立场。 基础版范文 The Spirit of Science in My Heart The spirit of science in my heart is honesty and creativity. It means seeking truth and never giving up easily. Tu Youyou is a good example. She tested hundreds of herbs before she succeeded. Her story tells me that truth comes from countless experiments. Failure never made her stop. As a student, I will be honest in my study and brave enough to question. I will also keep a curious mind every day. That is the spirit I admire most. 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 is honesty and creativity lies in seeking truth and innovation 用单元句式升级立意 a good example a shining example 评价人物更有分量 tested hundreds of herbs evaluated hundreds of herbs one by one 突出严谨求实 tells me has taught me 表达影响更深刻 keep a curious mind stay curious and open-minded 呼应单元词汇 提高版范文 The Spirit of Science in My Heart The spirit of science in my heart lies in seeking truth and innovation. It means questioning bravely and testing patiently. Tu Youyou is a shining example. She evaluated hundreds of herbs one by one before she finally succeeded. Her story has taught me that truth comes from countless experiments. Failure never stopped her from moving forward. As a student, I will be honest in my study and brave enough to question. I will also stay curious and open-minded every day. That is the spirit I admire most. 练习2：科学家坚守主题投稿（人与社会-科学家） 你校英文报 “Science and Me” 专栏正在征集短文，主题为 “The Scientist Who Taught Me Persistence”。请你写一篇短文投稿，讲述一位科学家的科研坚守，并说明它带给你的影响。内容包括： 1. 这位科学家及其研究方向； 2. 他/她在科研困境中坚守的一段经历； 3. 这段经历对你的影响。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 The Scientist Who Taught Me Persistence ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作思路 本文属于征文投稿，写作对象是校英文报读者，写作目的在于讲述一位科学家的科研坚守，并说明这一坚守对自己的影响。开头点明人物与研究方向；主体叙述他/她在科研困境中坚守的一段经历；结尾用表语从句写出这一品质对自己的影响。可使用 brilliant, be committed to 等表达。 基础版范文 The Scientist Who Taught Me Persistence The scientist who taught me persistence is Qian Xuesen, a physicist who studied rockets in China. He returned to our country in the 1950s and started rocket research under hard conditions. There were no advanced labs, but he never lost heart. After years of effort, he helped build the foundation of our space industry. What I have learned from him is the courage to hold on. Now, when I meet a difficult problem in my study, I tell myself to try again. 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 a physicist a brilliant physicist 用单元词评价人物 studied rockets was committed to rocket research 用单元短语突出长期投入 never lost heart stayed strong in the face of difficulties 描写坚守更具体 the foundation of the fundamental base of 强调奠基意义 try again keep going 表达自我激励更简洁 提高版范文 The Scientist Who Taught Me Persistence The scientist who taught me persistence is Qian Xuesen, a brilliant physicist who was committed to rocket research in China. He returned to our country in the 1950s and started rocket research under hard conditions. There were no advanced labs, but he stayed strong in the face of difficulties. After years of effort, he helped build the fundamental base of our space industry. What I have learned from him is the courage to hold on. Now, when I meet a difficult problem in my study, I tell myself to keep going. 练习3：科研历程主题投稿（人与社会-人物传记） 你校英文报正在举办 “Science Stories” 主题征文。请你写一篇短文投稿，讲述屠呦呦团队发现青蒿素的历程并表达敬意。内容包括： 1. 团队面临的难题； 2. 发现青蒿素的过程； 3. 你的敬意与感想。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 The Story of Artemisinin ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作思路 本文属于征文投稿，写作对象是校英文报读者，写作目的在于记录科研突破并致敬奉献精神。开头引出人物与难题；主体按“难题—突破—成果”叙述；结尾表达敬意。可使用 gradually, eventually, draw a conclusion 等表达。 基础版范文 The Story of Artemisinin In the 1960s, malaria was taking many lives, and existing medicines were failing. Tu Youyou and her team began to search old medical books for answers. They tested many herbs, but the results were disappointing at first. Inspired by an ancient book, they tried a new way of processing sweet wormwood. The number of parasites in the tests finally dropped greatly. In this way, artemisinin was born. I admire the team for their patience and wisdom. Their story proves that success belongs to those who keep trying. 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 taking many lives threatening millions of lives 描述危机更有力度 search old medical books turn to ancient medical texts 表达更有文化感 disappointing at first far from satisfying at first 强调初期困境 dropped greatly decreased remarkably 用单元词描述数据 keep trying stay committed to their goal 呼应单元短语 提高版范文 The Story of Artemisinin In the 1960s, malaria was threatening millions of lives, and existing medicines were failing. Tu Youyou and her team began to turn to ancient medical texts for answers. They tested many herbs, but the results were far from satisfying at first. Inspired by an ancient book, they tried a new way of processing sweet wormwood. The number of parasites in the tests finally decreased remarkably. In this way, artemisinin was born. I admire the team for their patience and wisdom. Their story proves that success belongs to those who stay committed to their goal. 练习4：失败价值主题投稿（人与社会-发明与创造） 你校英文报正在征集 “Failure and Success in Science” 主题文章。请你写一篇短文投稿，论述科研探索中失败的价值并表达观点。内容包括： 1. 科研中失败的常见性； 2. 失败对突破的意义； 3. 你的观点与感悟。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 The Value of Failure in Science ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作思路 本文属于征文投稿，写作对象是校英文报读者，写作目的在于评析失败与突破的关系。开头提出观点；主体分析失败的意义并举例；结尾收束观点。可使用 suspect, evaluate, breakthrough 等表达，用表语从句亮明立场。 基础版范文 The Value of Failure in Science In scientific research, failure is not the end but a normal step. Edison failed thousands of times before the light bulb came out. Each failed test told him one more way that did not work. In this sense, failure is part of the road to success. What really matters is that we learn from it. My view is that failure is the price of breakthroughs. As long as we keep thinking and trying, every failure will light the way forward. 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 a normal step a natural part of exploration 表达更准确深刻 came out was finally invented 突出发明成果 told him taught him a valuable lesson 强调失败的价值 part of the road to success a stepping stone to breakthroughs 用单元词提升立意 keep thinking and trying keep questioning and testing 用单元动作更有科学味 提高版范文 The Value of Failure in Science In scientific research, failure is not the end but a natural part of exploration. Edison failed thousands of times before the light bulb was finally invented. Each failed test taught him a valuable lesson. In this sense, failure is a stepping stone to breakthroughs. What really matters is that we learn from it. My view is that failure is the price of progress. As long as we keep questioning and testing, every failure will light the way forward. 练习5：科学态度主题投稿（人与社会-科学科普） 你校英文报正在举办 “Science and Me” 主题征文。请你写一篇短文投稿，结合一次实验课经历谈谈科学态度的养成。内容包括： 1. 实验课上的经历； 2. 你从中体会到的科学态度； 3. 你的收获或改变。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 A Lesson from the Lab ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作思路 本文属于征文投稿，写作对象是校英文报读者，写作目的在于以亲历切入总结求实态度。开头引出实验课；主体叙述过程与体会；结尾写收获与改变。可使用 evaluate, gradually, draw a conclusion 等表达。 基础版范文 A Lesson from the Lab Last week, we did an experiment on plant growth in our biology class. My first result was different from the textbook, and I wanted to change the numbers. But my teacher asked me to record what I really saw and repeat the test. Two days later, I found the problem: my plant had got less water. The truth was simple, but I had to find it myself. This lesson taught me that honesty comes first in science. From now on, I will respect every fact I observe. 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 did an experiment carried out an experiment 搭配更地道 change the numbers make the data look better 揭示问题本质 repeat the test evaluate the results again 用单元词强调严谨 found the problem located the cause of the difference 描述探究过程更专业 respect every fact base every conclusion on facts 用单元短语点明求实 提高版范文 A Lesson from the Lab Last week, we carried out an experiment on plant growth in our biology class. My first result was different from the textbook, and I wanted to make the data look better. But my teacher asked me to record what I really saw and evaluate the results again. 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