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选择性必修第二册 Unit1 Science And Scientists 人物介绍
Introducing a person
单元写作早知道
写作任务
本单元写作要求同学们能用所学的词语和句型介绍一位具有科学家精神的人物,属于人物介绍类文章。该类文章是高考写作中常见的形式之一,以简单介绍人物的生平为主,内容主要包括人物生平最基本的信息和最重要的事迹。
人物介绍的正文一般可以分为三部分:
第一部分:引出人物并作简要信息的介绍;
第二部分:主要的经历和贡献;
第三部分:影响以及他人的评价。
常用表达
1. You said in your last letter that ...
2. Knowing from your letter that...
3. You have asked for my advice with regard to...
4. I am writing to try to make some suggestions on...
5. I am writing to express my views concerning...
7. I would like to suggest that...
8. There are several things we could do.
9. Maybe it would be better to...
10. Why don’t you ...?
11. Have you considered doing...?
12. I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
单元话题
真题展示
高考链接
人物介绍
2020年全国I卷
人物介绍类文章是高考写作中常见的形式之一,以简单介绍人物的生平为主,内容主要包括人物生平最基本的信息和最重要的事迹。
1. learn about the life story of Qian Xuesen and Stephen Hawking; 2. be able to express opinions on outstanding personalities of scientists;
3. write about what makes a great scientist; 4. learn to use the linking words and phrases to make the writing in a logical order.
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1. 人物简介;
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点:
1. 明确要求,确定作文题材为人物介绍,以及确定人称和写作时态;
2. 谋篇布局,确定段落,可以从个人生平、事迹和成就以及人物评价入手;
3. 能正确使用高级词汇和句型书写英语句子;
段落
内容
句子设计
第一段
引出人物并作简要信息的介绍
①The person(that) I admire most is ...
②Of all the outstanding people, I admire ... the most.
③There are many respectable people around us. The one who I admire most is...
①sb. was born in 某地/某年某月
was born on+具体日期
②show great interest in (doing)
have a passion for sth.
③ be gifted in (doing) sth.
have a gift for (doing)sth.
④graduate from +学校 in+专业
第二段
主要的经历和贡献
1 work as/ serve as+身份
② sb. devote ... to(doing) sth.
③ play a key role in sth.
④ strong will/ determination
⑤make a contribution to (doing) sth.
make contributions to (doing) sth.
⑥enable sb. to do sth.
第三段
影响以及启示
gain/ win a good fame for sb.
② speak/think highly of ...
③be awarded sth./be called ...
④ be well known/ famous for ...
⑤ set a good example to sb.
⑥deserve our admiration and respect
【必备句式】
第一部分:引出人物并作简要信息的介绍
1. The person I admire most is Zhong Nanshan, one of the most famous/ well-known medical scientists in China我最钦佩的人是钟南山,中国著名的医学家之一。
2. Born in October, 1936 in Nanjing, Zhong Nanshan is strong- minded/ determined, showing great interest in medical care. 钟南山,1936年10月出生于南京;他意志坚定,对医疗事业充满兴趣/热情。
3. When it comes to the person I admire most, I think of Yuan Longping, who is regarded as the father of hybrid rice. 提及我最敬爱的人,我就会想到袁隆平,他被称为杂交水稻之父。
第二部分:主要的经历和贡献
1. Throughout his entire life, he demonstrated incredible leadership, which allowed him to make grand achievements. 在他/她的一生中,他表现出了令人难以置信的领导力,使他能够取得伟大的成就。
2. With paper revolution making writing easier, cheaper, and more efficient, Cai Lun is credited with transforming the way people documented and exchanged information worldwide. 随着纸的革命使书写变得更容易、更便宜、更高效,蔡伦被认为改变了全世界人们记录和交换信息的方式。
3. Not only did Confucius’ philosophy focus on social harmony and proper relationships, but also emphasized virtues such as kindness, honesty, and wisdom for maintaining stability in society. 孔子的哲学思想不仅注重社会和谐和人际关系,而且强调善良、诚实、智慧等美德,以维护社会的稳定。
4. In the Spring of 2003, with strong will and professional skills, Mr. Zhong made a great contribution to fighting against SARS, which enabled people to find the cure for the disease. 2003年春,凭借坚强的意志和专业能力,钟南山在抗击“非典”(SARS) 中做出了巨大贡献,使人们找到治愈这种疾病的方法。
5. Not only did he make numerous contributions to solving the problem of world hunger, but also inspired more people to join him. 他不仅对解决世界饥荒问题做出巨大的贡献,也激励了更多的人加入到他的行列当中。
第三部分:影响、评价及启示
1. Confucius' legacy has profoundly shaped Chinese culture and values and his wisdom continues to inspire people worldwide. 孔子的遗产深刻地塑造了中国的文化和价值观,他的智慧继续激励着全世界的人们。
2. Having set a great example to us, he is really a patriotic and responsible doctor, who fully deserves our admiration and respect. 为我们树立了良好的榜样,他真的是一个爱国并且富有责任心的医生,完全值得我们的敬爱。
3. She is considered as a model for other people, inspiring more people to make great contributions to our country.她被认为是我们的模范,激励了更多的人为我们的祖国做出贡献。
【必背模板】
模板①
Born in_________________(出生地),_________________(人物)was/is_________________(职业或头衔).
When he/she was young,_________________(事件). In_________________(时间),(事件). From_________________(时间) to_________________(时间),he/she_________________(事件或经历). He/She made a great contribution to_________________(成就).
Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
【升级策略】
1. 人物介绍类写作应注意以下几点:
1 选取典型事例、重要成就来表现人物的优秀品质。介绍人物时,应有相应的事例作为支撑。正所谓“人因事显”,离开具体的事例,人物的性格、品质和精神面貌都无从表现出来。因此,选材一定要认真仔细,安排材料时还应分清主次,详略得当。
2 借助合理的写作手法突出人物的优秀品质。可以运用侧面描写、对比、衬托等手法来突出人物的形象。
3 写作时可根据需要采用顺叙、倒叙、插叙等不同的叙述方式,以突出重点信息。
4 写作过程中要注意人称的变化和时态的运用。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时,而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹等常用一般过去时。
5 恰当使用总结性语言,对人物的优秀品质进行点睛式的概括,从而进一步升华主题。
中国体育健儿门在2020年东京夏季奥运会上取得佳绩,实现了竞赛成绩和精神文明双丰收。为了弘扬奥运精神,你校英语报的体育专栏正在举办题“The Athlete I Admire Most”的征文活动,请你写一篇英文短文参加活动。主要内容包括:
1. 你最钦佩的运动员;
2. 你钦佩的原因;
3. 你的决心和打算。
注意:1. 词数100左右:
2. -可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The Athlete I Admire Most
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审题
定主题: 写短文介绍东京奥运会最钦佩的运动员、原因以及决心和打算
定文体: 记叙文
定人称: 由于是介绍一位运动员,主题应用第三人称;涉及自己决心打算应用第一人称
定时态: 因为涉及运动员奥运会表现应以一般过去时为主;涉及自己决心打算应用一般将来时
谋篇
第一段:你最钦佩的运动员
第二段:你钦佩的原因
第三段:你的决心和打算
遣词造句
【核心词汇】
1. 东京2021奥运会 the 2020 Tokyo Olympics
2. 女子10米气步枪 women's 10m air rifle
3. 女子10米跳台 the women’s 10-metre diving
4. 乒乓球男子单打 table tennis men’s single
5. 男子100米短跑 men’s 100m race
6. 赢得金牌 win the gold/silver/bronze medal
7. 传承奥林匹克精神 carry forward the spirit of the Olympics
8. 为国争光 win honour for our country
9. 效仿他 follow one’s example
10. 家喻户晓 a household name
11. 追逐梦想 chase one’s dream
12. 走出舒适区 walk out of my comfort zone
13. 充分挖掘潜力 exploit my potential to the fullest
15. 努力没有白费 hard work paid off
16. 使...与众不同 set…apart from sb
17. 为…打下坚实基础 lay a solid foundation for
18. 向……学习 learn from sb
19. 下决心努力学习 be determined to study harder
20. 为……做贡献 contribute to/make contributions to
【连词成句】
When it comes to the best athlete, the first that comes to my mind is Quan Hongchan, the gold medalist in the Tokyo Olympics.
The following are the very reasons why I admire Quan Hongchan best.
I’m firmly determined to follow the example of the distinguished athletes and spare no efforts to study harder.
【句式升级】
1. 将2、3句合成一个句子:
In my opinion, reading loudly even reciting some fantastic compositions is of great benefit to you, by which you can have better understanding of Chinese language.
2. 将5、6句合成一个句子:
On the eve of the test, you’d better to have a good sleep, so that you will have enough energy for the test.
组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联想内容,组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
【第一部分 基础题】
一、词性转换训练
(一)将下列动词转换为名词或形容词:
1.admire→ (n.) ______ → (adj.) ______
2.determine → (n.) ______ → (adj.) ______
3.devote → (n.) ______
(二)用括号内单词的正确形式填空:
1. _______(bear) in an ordinary family, she trained so hard every day that she made a remarkable achievement.
2. She is ________(consider) as a model for other people, inspiring more people to make great contributions to our country.
二、句子仿写改写
基础层:结构调整
1. 原句:Yuan Longping was born in Chongqing on 7th September 1930. He studied hard and showed a passion for agricultural science.
→ 合并为复合句:______
→ 用非谓语动词改写:______
提分层:高阶句型
1.原句: His commitment inspires young people to devote themselves to the medical care.
→ 强调重要性:______
2. 原句: He not only made numerous contributions to solving the problem of world hunger, but also inspired more people to join him.
倒装:______
三、翻译句子
1. 她为科研献出了一切, 对国家做出了巨大贡献。
2. 因此,他被尊称为“计算机科学之父”并闻名,因他对世界的巨大贡献被授予了许多奖项。
3. 他给我们树立了好的榜样,他真的是一位出色的科学家,值得我们崇拜和尊重。
【第二部分 提升题】
假如你是李华,你收到美国笔友Tom的来信:他想了解我国著名的农业科学家——袁隆平,请根据以下内容回信。
1. 概况:1930年9月7日出生于重庆,1953年毕业于西南农学院(Southwest Agriculture College)等。
2. 事迹和成就:增加水稻产量,为许多国家解决了粮食不足的问题,被尊称为“杂交水稻之父”,获得许多奖项等。
3. 评价和值得学习的地方。
注意:1. 词数:100左右。开头已为你写好,但不入总词数;
2. 内容可适当发挥,注意行文连贯。
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2. 某英文报社正在开展主题为“The admirable”的征稿活动,请你介绍一位你所崇拜的人并投稿。
注意:词数100左右
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3. 你校英语报的 The Admirable 栏目正面向全校学生征稿。请你根据所给提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你崇拜的人物——钟南山,并投稿。 1.1936年10月出生于一个医学世家,福建厦
2.1960年毕业于北京医学院(今北京大学医学部);
3.2003年他是抗击”非典”的英雄,2020年他在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎中作出突出贡献;
4.致力于呼吸道疾病的研究和治疗,受到中国人民的高度评价。 注意:1. 词数 100 左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:中国工程院院士 academician of the Chinese Academy of Engineering
呼吸道疾病respiratory disease.COVID-19
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【链接高考—经典诵读】
(2008湖南卷)请选择你最喜欢的一位人物,用英语写一篇120词左右的短文。要求根据所给信息作适当发挥,且需包括以下三部分内容:
1.对该人物的简单介绍:
2.喜欢该人物的理由:
3.从该人物身上得到的启示。
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选择性必修第二册 Unit1 Science And Scientists 人物介绍
Introducing a person
单元写作早知道
写作任务
本单元写作要求同学们能用所学的词语和句型介绍一位具有科学家精神的人物,属于人物介绍类文章。该类文章是高考写作中常见的形式之一,以简单介绍人物的生平为主,内容主要包括人物生平最基本的信息和最重要的事迹。
人物介绍的正文一般可以分为三部分:
第一部分:引出人物并作简要信息的介绍;
第二部分:主要的经历和贡献;
第三部分:影响以及他人的评价。
常用表达
1. You said in your last letter that ...
2. Knowing from your letter that...
3. You have asked for my advice with regard to...
4. I am writing to try to make some suggestions on...
5. I am writing to express my views concerning...
7. I would like to suggest that...
8. There are several things we could do.
9. Maybe it would be better to...
10. Why don’t you ...?
11. Have you considered doing...?
12. I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
单元话题
真题展示
高考链接
人物介绍
2020年全国I卷
人物介绍类文章是高考写作中常见的形式之一,以简单介绍人物的生平为主,内容主要包括人物生平最基本的信息和最重要的事迹。
1. learn about the life story of Qian Xuesen and Stephen Hawking; 2. be able to express opinions on outstanding personalities of scientists;
3. write about what makes a great scientist; 4. learn to use the linking words and phrases to make the writing in a logical order.
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1. 人物简介;
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点:
1. 明确要求,确定作文题材为人物介绍,以及确定人称和写作时态;
2. 谋篇布局,确定段落,可以从个人生平、事迹和成就以及人物评价入手;
3. 能正确使用高级词汇和句型书写英语句子;
段落
内容
句子设计
第一段
引出人物并作简要信息的介绍
①The person(that) I admire most is ...
②Of all the outstanding people, I admire ... the most.
③There are many respectable people around us. The one who I admire most is...
①sb. was born in 某地/某年某月
was born on+具体日期
②show great interest in (doing)
have a passion for sth.
③ be gifted in (doing) sth.
have a gift for (doing)sth.
④graduate from +学校 in+专业
第二段
主要的经历和贡献
1 work as/ serve as+身份
② sb. devote ... to(doing) sth.
③ play a key role in sth.
④ strong will/ determination
⑤make a contribution to (doing) sth.
make contributions to (doing) sth.
⑥enable sb. to do sth.
第三段
影响以及启示
gain/ win a good fame for sb.
② speak/think highly of ...
③be awarded sth./be called ...
④ be well known/ famous for ...
⑤ set a good example to sb.
⑥deserve our admiration and respect
【必备句式】
第一部分:引出人物并作简要信息的介绍
1. The person I admire most is Zhong Nanshan, one of the most famous/ well-known medical scientists in China我最钦佩的人是钟南山,中国著名的医学家之一。
2. Born in October, 1936 in Nanjing, Zhong Nanshan is strong- minded/ determined, showing great interest in medical care. 钟南山,1936年10月出生于南京;他意志坚定,对医疗事业充满兴趣/热情。
3. When it comes to the person I admire most, I think of Yuan Longping, who is regarded as the father of hybrid rice. 提及我最敬爱的人,我就会想到袁隆平,他被称为杂交水稻之父。
第二部分:主要的经历和贡献
1. Throughout his entire life, he demonstrated incredible leadership, which allowed him to make grand achievements. 在他/她的一生中,他表现出了令人难以置信的领导力,使他能够取得伟大的成就。
2. With paper revolution making writing easier, cheaper, and more efficient, Cai Lun is credited with transforming the way people documented and exchanged information worldwide. 随着纸的革命使书写变得更容易、更便宜、更高效,蔡伦被认为改变了全世界人们记录和交换信息的方式。
3. Not only did Confucius’ philosophy focus on social harmony and proper relationships, but also emphasized virtues such as kindness, honesty, and wisdom for maintaining stability in society. 孔子的哲学思想不仅注重社会和谐和人际关系,而且强调善良、诚实、智慧等美德,以维护社会的稳定。
4. In the Spring of 2003, with strong will and professional skills, Mr. Zhong made a great contribution to fighting against SARS, which enabled people to find the cure for the disease. 2003年春,凭借坚强的意志和专业能力,钟南山在抗击“非典”(SARS) 中做出了巨大贡献,使人们找到治愈这种疾病的方法。
5. Not only did he make numerous contributions to solving the problem of world hunger, but also inspired more people to join him. 他不仅对解决世界饥荒问题做出巨大的贡献,也激励了更多的人加入到他的行列当中。
第三部分:影响、评价及启示
1. Confucius' legacy has profoundly shaped Chinese culture and values and his wisdom continues to inspire people worldwide. 孔子的遗产深刻地塑造了中国的文化和价值观,他的智慧继续激励着全世界的人们。
2. Having set a great example to us, he is really a patriotic and responsible doctor, who fully deserves our admiration and respect. 为我们树立了良好的榜样,他真的是一个爱国并且富有责任心的医生,完全值得我们的敬爱。
3. She is considered as a model for other people, inspiring more people to make great contributions to our country.她被认为是我们的模范,激励了更多的人为我们的祖国做出贡献。
【必背模板】
模板①
Born in_________________(出生地),_________________(人物)was/is_________________(职业或头衔).
When he/she was young,_________________(事件). In_________________(时间),(事件). From_________________(时间) to_________________(时间),he/she_________________(事件或经历). He/She made a great contribution to_________________(成就).
Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
【升级策略】
1. 人物介绍类写作应注意以下几点:
1 选取典型事例、重要成就来表现人物的优秀品质。介绍人物时,应有相应的事例作为支撑。正所谓“人因事显”,离开具体的事例,人物的性格、品质和精神面貌都无从表现出来。因此,选材一定要认真仔细,安排材料时还应分清主次,详略得当。
2 借助合理的写作手法突出人物的优秀品质。可以运用侧面描写、对比、衬托等手法来突出人物的形象。
3 写作时可根据需要采用顺叙、倒叙、插叙等不同的叙述方式,以突出重点信息。
4 写作过程中要注意人称的变化和时态的运用。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时,而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹等常用一般过去时。
5 恰当使用总结性语言,对人物的优秀品质进行点睛式的概括,从而进一步升华主题。
中国体育健儿门在2020年东京夏季奥运会上取得佳绩,实现了竞赛成绩和精神文明双丰收。为了弘扬奥运精神,你校英语报的体育专栏正在举办题“The Athlete I Admire Most”的征文活动,请你写一篇英文短文参加活动。主要内容包括:
1. 你最钦佩的运动员;
2. 你钦佩的原因;
3. 你的决心和打算。
注意:1. 词数100左右:
2. -可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The Athlete I Admire Most
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审题
定主题: 写短文介绍东京奥运会最钦佩的运动员、原因以及决心和打算
定文体: 记叙文
定人称: 由于是介绍一位运动员,主题应用第三人称;涉及自己决心打算应用第一人称
定时态: 因为涉及运动员奥运会表现应以一般过去时为主;涉及自己决心打算应用一般将来时
谋篇
第一段:你最钦佩的运动员
第二段:你钦佩的原因
第三段:你的决心和打算
遣词造句
【核心词汇】
1. 东京2021奥运会 the 2020 Tokyo Olympics
2. 女子10米气步枪 women's 10m air rifle
3. 女子10米跳台 the women’s 10-metre diving
4. 乒乓球男子单打 table tennis men’s single
5. 男子100米短跑 men’s 100m race
6. 赢得金牌 win the gold/silver/bronze medal
7. 传承奥林匹克精神 carry forward the spirit of the Olympics
8. 为国争光 win honour for our country
9. 效仿他 follow one’s example
10. 家喻户晓 a household name
11. 追逐梦想 chase one’s dream
12. 走出舒适区 walk out of my comfort zone
13. 充分挖掘潜力 exploit my potential to the fullest
15. 努力没有白费 hard work paid off
16. 使...与众不同 set…apart from sb
17. 为…打下坚实基础 lay a solid foundation for
18. 向……学习 learn from sb
19. 下决心努力学习 be determined to study harder
20. 为……做贡献 contribute to/make contributions to
【连词成句】
When it comes to the best athlete, the first that comes to my mind is Quan Hongchan, the gold medalist in the Tokyo Olympics.
The following are the very reasons why I admire Quan Hongchan best.
I’m firmly determined to follow the example of the distinguished athletes and spare no efforts to study harder.
【句式升级】
1. 将2、3句合成一个句子:
In my opinion, reading loudly even reciting some fantastic compositions is of great benefit to you, by which you can have better understanding of Chinese language.
2. 将5、6句合成一个句子:
On the eve of the test, you’d better to have a good sleep, so that you will have enough energy for the test.
组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联想内容,组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
The athlete I admire most
As we all know, a number of excellent athletes performed well in the Tokyo Olympics. The athletes I admire most is Quan Hongchan, the women’s 10m diving champion.
Born in an ordinary family, she trained so hard every day that she made a remarkable achievement. Quan received perfect 10s by all seven judges on her way to winning the gold medal. She had such astonishing dives, almost non-existent splashing! When watching her amazing performance, I couldn’t help applauding her, feeling over the moon. Young as she is, she deserves our respect.
Quan Hongchan's achievements can be said to be the result of efforts. Just as the saying goes, "Practice makes perfect". Quan sets a good example for us secondary high school students. I’m determined to study harder than before and carry forward the spirit of the Olympics: faster, higher and stronger.
【第一部分 基础题】
一、词性转换训练
(一)将下列动词转换为名词或形容词:
1.admire→ (n.) ______ → (adj.) ______
2.determine → (n.) ______ → (adj.) ______
3.devote → (n.) ______
(二)用括号内单词的正确形式填空:
1. _______(bear) in an ordinary family, she trained so hard every day that she made a remarkable achievement.
2. She is ________(consider) as a model for other people, inspiring more people to make great contributions to our country.
【参考答案】
(一)1.admiration (n.), admirable(adj.); 2.determination (n.), determined (adj.); 3.devotion(n.)
(二)1.Born;2. considered
二、句子仿写改写
基础层:结构调整
1. 原句:Yuan Longping was born in Chongqing on 7th September 1930. He studied hard and showed a passion for agricultural science.
→ 合并为复合句:______
→ 用非谓语动词改写:______
【参考答案】
复合句:Yuan Longping was born in Chongqing on 7th September 1930, who studied hard and showed a passion for agricultural science.
非谓语:Born in Chongqing on 7th September 1930, Yuan Longping studied hard and showed a passion for agricultural science.
提分层:高阶句型
1.原句: His commitment inspires young people to devote themselves to the medical care.
→ 强调重要性:______
2. 原句: He not only made numerous contributions to solving the problem of world hunger, but also inspired more people to join him.
倒装:______
【参考答案】
1. It is his selfless commitment and great contribution that inspire the young to devote themselves to the medical care.
2. Not only did he make numerous contributions to solving the problem of world hunger, but also inspired more people to join him.
三、翻译句子
1. 她为科研献出了一切, 对国家作出了巨大贡献。
2. 因此,他被尊称为“计算机科学之父”并闻名,因他对世界的巨大贡献被授予了许多奖项。
3. 他给我们树立了好的榜样,他真的是一位出色的科学家,值得我们崇拜和尊重。
【参考答案】
1. She devoted herself to scientific research and made great contributions to her country.
2. As a result, he is honored and known as “Father of computer science”, rewarded with many prizes for his great contributions to the world.
3. Having set a great example to us, he is really an excellent scientist who deserves our admiration and respect.
【第二部分 提升题】
假如你是李华,你收到美国笔友Tom的来信:他想了解我国著名的农业科学家——袁隆平,请根据以下内容回信。
1. 概况:1930年9月7日出生于重庆,1953年毕业于西南农学院(Southwest Agriculture College)等。
2. 事迹和成就:增加水稻产量,为许多国家解决了粮食不足的问题,被尊称为“杂交水稻之父”,获得许多奖项等。
3. 评价和值得学习的地方。
注意:1. 词数:100左右。开头已为你写好,但不入总词数;
2. 内容可适当发挥,注意行文连贯。
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【满分作文】
Dear Tom,
How’s it going? Knowing that you desire to know Yuan Longping, one of the most famous scientists in China, I’m more than delighted to introduce him to you.
Born in Chongqing, on September 7th, 1930, Yuan studied hard, showing great interest in agriculture. He graduated from Southwest Agriculture College in 1953. Yuan has devoted his life to researching on rice. With strong will and great determination, Yuan has achieved great success in increasing rice harvest, which solved the problem of the lack of food for many countries. As a result, he is honored and known as “Father of Hybrid Rice”, rewarded with many prizes for his great contributions to the world. Famous as he is, he leads a simple life and cares little for money and fame.
Having set a great example to us, Yuan is really an excellent scientist who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
Yours,
Li Hua
2. 某英文报社正在开展主题为“The admirable”的征稿活动,请你介绍一位你所崇拜的人并投稿。
注意:词数100左右
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【佳作欣赏】
When it comes to the person I admire most, I think of Yuan Longping, who is regarded as the father of hybrid rice.
Born in1930, Yuan Longping had a passion for swimming at an early age. After graduation, he committed himself to agricultural research in Hunan, breeding the hybrid rice successfully in 1975. Not only did he make numerous contributions to solving the problem of world hunger, but also inspired more people to join him. In 2019, he was awarded to the Medal of the Republic for his outstanding contributions to the hybrid rice breeding. On 22 May 2021, Yuan passed away, and our whole country mourned the great loss of a brilliant scientist.
The reason why I admire him is that his dedication to work and to people sets me an good example, which truly inspires me to become a person like him in the future.
3. 你校英语报的 The Admirable 栏目正面向全校学生征稿。请你根据所给提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你崇拜的人物——钟南山,并投稿。 1.1936年10月出生于一个医学世家,福建厦
2.1960年毕业于北京医学院(今北京大学医学部);
3.2003年他是抗击”非典”的英雄,2020年他在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎中作出突出贡献;
4.致力于呼吸道疾病的研究和治疗,受到中国人民的高度评价。 注意:1. 词数 100 左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:中国工程院院士 academician of the Chinese Academy of Engineering
呼吸道疾病respiratory disease.COVID-19
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【佳作欣赏】
Born in a medical family, in Oct. 1936, Zhong Nanshan comes from Xiamen, Fujian Province. When he was young, he had a strong passion for medicine
Zhong Nanshan, who graduated from Peking University Medical School in 1960, is one of the academicians of the Chinese Academy of Engineering. In 2003, he was a hero in fighting against SARS, managing the SARS outbreak. In 2020, he made an outstanding contribution when fighting against COVID-19.
Zhong Nanshan has devoted much of his life to researching and treating respiratory diseases, whose work is highly thought of by all Chinese people.
【链接高考—经典诵读】
(2008湖南卷)请选择你最喜欢的一位人物,用英语写一篇120词左右的短文。要求根据所给信息作适当发挥,且需包括以下三部分内容:
1.对该人物的简单介绍:
2.喜欢该人物的理由:
3.从该人物身上得到的启示。
【佳作欣赏1】
Born in America, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor. He was once thought to be a boy who was not worth educating. In fact, he was a man full of imagination.
I admire Edison a lot because of his great contribution to the world. He had more than 1000 inventions. In his life time, he was always eager to know how things worked. He was so diligent that he worked day and night. And this explained why he had so many great inventions.
What impresses me most is his famous saying. “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration”. Probably I cannot be an Edison myself, but I can be a hardworking learner. From him, I realize the secret to success is not when or where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life.
【佳作欣赏2】
Marie Curie, a pioneering physicist and chemist, is the first woman to win a Nobel Prize and the only person to win in two different sciences—Physics and Chemistry.
Born in Poland in 1867, she dedicated her life to researching radioactivity, discovering elements like polonium and radium. I admire her not only for her groundbreaking achievements but also for her perseverance. Despite facing gender discrimination and financial struggles, she never gave up on her passion for science. Her relentless curiosity and hard work inspire me deeply.
From Marie Curie, I learn that determination and courage can overcome any obstacle. Her legacy teaches us to pursue knowledge fearlessly and to contribute selflessly to the world. She remains a timeless symbol of resilience and intellectual brilliance.
【佳作欣赏3】
Albert Einstein, one of the greatest physicists of all time, revolutionized science with his theory of relativity. Born in Germany in 1879, he also made key contributions to quantum mechanics and won the Nobel Prize in Physics in 1921.
I admire Einstein not just for his genius but also for his creativity and humility. He questioned conventional wisdom and thought deeply about the universe. Despite his fame, he remained down-to-earth and advocated for peace and education.
Einstein’s life teaches me that curiosity and independent thinking lead to great discoveries. His famous quote, “Imagination is more important than knowledge,” encourages me to think outside the box and never stop exploring.
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