Units 1-4 单元话题书面表达过关20篇-2026-2027学年九年级英语上册单元模块满分必刷题（新教材人教版）

2026-2027学年九年级英语上册单元模块满分必刷题（新教材人教版) Units1-4单元话题书面表达过关20篇 Unit1:变化中的世界 1.你校英文报正在开展以“Great Changes Around Me”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请根据 下面海报中的要点提示，谈谈你身边发生的变化，并写一篇短文参加征文。 Great Changes Around Me◆写你家乡或生活中过去与现在的变化（如住房、出行、联 系方式等) ◆至少使用used to、现在完成时和比较级各一次 ◆语句通顺，条理清晰，词数80左右 ◆开头已给出，不计入总词数 Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. 2.假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom想了解你家乡这几年的变化。请根据下面要点提示，给他写一 封英文邮件。 Changes in My Hometown◆介绍你家乡过去与现在的变化（可从住房、出行、环境、购 物中选两个方面) ◆至少使用used to、现在完成时和比较级各一次 ◆说说你的感受和对家乡未来的期望 ◆ 语句通顺，条理清晰，词数80左右 ◆开头已给出，不计入总词数 Dear Tom, I'm glad to tell you something about my hometown 3.家乡的发展变化是我们身边最生动的写作素材。请以“Changes in My Hometown''为题，根据以下 提示写一篇英语短文：1.过去的情况（道路、房屋、交通等）；2.现在的变化（铁路、购物、网络等）； 3.你的感受。要求：80-120词，语句通顺，行文连贯。 4.进入初中以来，你的生活一定发生了很多变化。请以”The Changes in My Life”为题，从以下三个方 面中选择两个方面，写一写你生活中的变化。1.学校生活（科目、老师、同学、作息…）：2.家庭生活（住 房条件、与家人的相处方式…)；3.自我认识（外貌、爱好、性格、优势…）。 词数不少于80； The Changes in My Life 5.假如你是学生张华，你校学生会将组织一次主题为“Changes in my hometown'”的英语演讲比赛。 请你根据下列写作要点及要求，写一篇短文参赛，介绍你家乡的变化及你对此的感受。 写作要点： (1)What was your hometown like?(houses,roads,life) (2)Changes in your hometown. (3)Your feelings about these changes. 要求 (I)短文应包括所有的写作要点，可适当拓展，条理清楚，行文连贯： (2)短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名： (3)不少于80词，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hi,everyone!Here I will tell you about some changes in my hometown. That's all.Thank you! Unit2钦佩的人 6.题目：Changes Around Me and My Role Model要求： 1.描述身边的两处社会生活变化，介绍一位鼓舞你的榜样人物： 2.至少使用used to以及宾语从句； 3.词数75一95，语句通顺，逻辑连贯； 4.运用Unitl一Unit2核心词汇，无严重拼写语法错误。 7.在我们的生活中，总有一些人让我们敬佩。请以“The Person I Admire Most'为题，写一篇英语短 文，介绍你最敬佩的人。 内容提示： 1.你最敬佩的人是谁？他她的职业是什么？ 2.你为什么敬佩他/她？（至少两个理由） 3.他/她如何鼓励了你？你从他/她身上学到了什么？ 要求：1.包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，条理清晰： 3.词数80-100；4.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校。 The Person I Admire Most 8.学校英文报正在开展以“The Person I Admire the Most''为主题的征文话动。假如你是李华，请 根据下面海报中的要点提示，写一篇短文参加征文。 The Person I Admire the Most ◆写出你最敬佩的人是谁及职业 ◆简述他她的一两件事迹 ◆谈谈你的感受 ◆至少使用一次过去完成时 ◆语句通顺，条理清晰，词数80左右 ◆开头已给出，不计入总词数 The person I admire the most is Ms Wang,my English teacher. 9.学校英文报正在开展以“A Hero in My Heart''为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请根据下面海 报中的要点提示，写一篇短文参加征文。 ◆A Hero in My Heart ◆写出你心中的英雄是谁 ◆介绍他她的一两件事迹 ◆谈谈你的感受和打算 ◆至少使用一次过去完成时 ◆语句通顺，条理清晰，词数80左右 ◆开头已给出，不计入总词数 A Hero in My Heart There are many heroes in my heart,and the greatest one is Dr Zhong Nanshan. l0.学校英文报正在开展以“An Inspiring Person Around Me”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华， 请根据下面海报中的要点提示，写一篇短文参加征文。 An Inspiring Person Around Me ◆写出你身边鼓舞你的人是谁（如清洁工、志愿者、同学） ◆举一件具体的事例 ◆谈谈他/她对你的影响 ◆至少使用一次过去完成时 ◆语句通顺，条理清晰，词数80左右 ◆开头已给出，不计入总词数 An ordinary person can also be a great inspiration.For me,that person is Uncle Li,a cleaner in our neighbourhood. Unit3学习方法和策略 l1.假如你是李华，下周你将在学校英语俱乐部举办的“Smart Learning'”学习经验交流会上发言。 请你根据以下思维导图提示，写一篇英文发言稿，分享你的学习方法，并鼓励同学们一起成为智慧的学习 者。 How to Be a Smart Learner 4 What good learning What problem did you What advice do you habits do you have? meet and how did you want to give your (at least two) solve it? classmates? 要求： ()发言稿应包含思维导图中的全部信息； (2)语法正确，意思连贯，书写规范： (3)文中不得出现你的真实姓名、校名和地名： (4)至少使用一次宾语从句(that/if/whether引导)： (⑤)80词左右（已给出的开头不计入总词数）。 How to Be a Smart Learner Hello,everyone.I'm very glad to share my learning experience with you. l2.英语学习需要好方法。请以“How to Learn English Well''为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文： 1.英语学习的重要性； 2.你的学习方法（至少两点）： 3.呼吁大家坚持学习。要求：100一120词，语句通顺，逻辑清晰。 l3.好的学习习惯让人受益终身。请以“Good Stud凼Habits”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文： 1.好习惯的重要性；2.介绍你的一两个好习惯：3.呼吁大家养成好习惯。要求：100一140词，语句通顺， 逻辑清晰。 l4.假设你校英语报社正在举办题为“My Ways to Learn English'的征文活动，请结合你自身的学习 经历，写一篇英语短文投稿，分享你认为最有效的英语学习方法。 提示： 1.学习英语的重要性或你最初遇到的困难。 2.详细介绍2-3种你认为最有效的学习方法及其原因。 3.发表你的观点并鼓励同学们。 要求： 1.词数：100词左右。 2包含所有提示内容，内容连贯，结构清晰，语句通顺。 3.文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。 l5.你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“Smart Learning Makes Me Better'”为题的征文话动。请你用英语 写一篇短文，向专栏投稿，分享你在学习中使用的一种或几种学习方法，并谈谈这些方法如何帮助了你。 要求： 1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80： 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁： 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计： 4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。 Unit4记忆力 16.好的记忆力能让学习事半功倍。你的英国笔友Tom在来信中说，他最近总是记不住学过的知识， 非常苦恼。请你根据以下提示，用英语给他回一封电子邮件，介绍提高记忆力的方法。 提示内容： 1.Train your brain:try new things,pay attention; 2.Live a healthy life:eat a balanced diet,get enough rest; 3.其他建议：take notes,.review in time. 要求： 1.内容尽量包含提示信息，可适当发挥： 2.条理清楚，句式规范： 3.80词以上（开头已给出，不计入总词数）： 4.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 提示词汇：pay attention to,.take notes,.last but not least Dear Tom, Thanks for your letter.Don't worry too much about your memory-here is my advice. l7.记忆好是学好各科的重要基础。请以“How to Improve Your Memory”为题，根据以下提示写一 篇英语短文：1.记忆的重要性：2.提高记忆的方法（至少两点）：3.你的做法或呼吁。要求：100一140词， 语句通顺，逻辑清晰。 l8.成长里的回忆，藏着温暖与感动。学校英语社团将举办题为“An Unforgettable Memory in My Lf®”的分享活动。假如你是李华，请你写一篇短文讲述一段你的难忘回忆，参与分享。 提示：1.What happened? 2.When and where did it happen? 3.What have you learnt from this experience? 要求：1必须包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名； 3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 An Unforgettable Memory in My Life Hello,everyone!I'm Li Hua.There are many unforgettable memories in my life,but one still stays in my heart l9.题目：How to Improve Our Memory 要求： 1.介绍提升记忆力的实用方法： 2.至少写出3条建议： 3.词数80-100： 4语句通顺，语法正确，贴合本单元话题。 【答案】范文： 20.每个人都会遇到记忆问题。请以“How to Improve My Memory'为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍 你自己的记忆问题和改进记忆的方法。 要求： 1.至少使用两个本单元学到的短语或句型（如remind.about,,nix up..with,forget to do等）： 2.内容完整，语句通顺，80词左右； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 How to Improve My Memory 2026-2027学年九年级英语上册单元模块满分必刷题（新教材人教版） Units 1-4 单元话题书面表达过关20篇 Unit 1：变化中的世界 1．你校英文报正在开展以 “Great Changes Around Me” 为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请根据下面海报中的要点提示，谈谈你身边发生的变化，并写一篇短文参加征文。 Great Changes Around Me◆ 写你家乡或生活中过去与现在的变化（如住房、出行、联系方式等） ◆ 至少使用 used to、现在完成时和比较级各一次 ◆ 语句通顺，条理清晰，词数80左右 ◆ 开头已给出，不计入总词数 Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. In the past, people used to live in small and old houses. They walked or rode bikes to work. But now, they live in tall buildings, and many people drive cars. We also use mobile phones to communicate with others. It is much more convenient than before. My hometown has become more and more beautiful. The sky is bluer and the water is cleaner. I am very happy about these changes. I love my hometown very much. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般现在时和现在完成时为主 明确要点：家乡或生活中过去与现在的变化、必须使用used to、现在完成时和比较级各一次 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称；词数80左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，概括家乡近年来发生的巨大变化（已给出） 主体段：分别介绍过去与现在的具体变化 结尾段：总结感受，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡过去与现在的变化 住房变化：used to live in a small house/live in a tall building/used to live in an old house/live in a modern apartment等 出行变化：walked or rode bikes to work/drive cars/take the subway or drive a car/used to walk to school/take the bus now等 联系方式：use mobile phones to communicate with others/used to write letters/use the Internet to talk等 作用效果：more convenient/makes life easier/much faster/more comfortable等 要点二：个人感受 具体说明：become more and more beautiful/I love my hometown more/feel proud of my hometown等 总结：very happy about these changes/love my hometown very much/hope it will be better等 2．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom想了解你家乡这几年的变化。请根据下面要点提示，给他写一封英文邮件。 Changes in My Hometown◆ 介绍你家乡过去与现在的变化(可从住房、出行、环境、购物中选两个方面) ◆ 至少使用used to、现在完成时和比较级各一次 ◆ 说说你的感受和对家乡未来的期望 ◆ 语句通顺，条理清晰，词数80左右 ◆ 开头已给出，不计入总词数 Dear Tom, I’m glad to tell you something about my hometown. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Dear Tom, I’m glad to tell you something about my hometown. It used to be a poor village with narrow roads and low houses. There was no clean water, and people had to walk a long way to the town market. Great changes have taken place since 2018. Now the roads have become much wider, and many families have moved into new flats. A new highway connects our village with the city, and the journey takes only half an hour. I’m proud of my hometown. I hope it’ll be more and more beautiful and convenient. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：电子邮件，以一般过去时和现在完成时为主 明确要点：家乡过去与现在的变化、你的感受和对家乡未来的期望 确定人称：第一人称和第三人称 注意事项：至少使用used to、现在完成时和比较级各一次，语句通顺，条理清晰 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：直接引出变化 主体段：对比过去与现在 结尾段：总结感受，表达对未来的期望 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡过去与现在的变化 过去：used to be a poor village with narrow roads and low houses/no clean water/had to walk a long way/walked or rode bikes everywhere等 现在：the roads have become much wider/have moved into new flats/a new highway connects our village with the city/the environment has become cleaner and greener​等 要点二：你的感受和对家乡未来的期望 感受：I’m proud of my hometown./I feel proud of these changes.等 期望：I hope it’ll be more and more beautiful and convenient./I believe my hometown will become even better and more beautiful in the future.等 3．家乡的发展变化是我们身边最生动的写作素材。请以“Changes in My Hometown”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文：1. 过去的情况（道路、房屋、交通等） ；2. 现在的变化（铁路、购物、网络等） ；3. 你的感受。要求：80-120词，语句通顺，行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version (基础版) ： Changes in My Hometown My hometown is not what it used to be. In the past, the road was narrow, and people lived in old, low houses. Farmers carried their corn to the city by hand and the journey always took a long time. Now things are different. The government has built a new railway. The streets are wide and clean. Many families have moved into new bright flats, and people can buy all kinds of things online. I love my hometown deeply. I believe it will become more and more beautiful in the future. One possible version (高分版) ： Changes in My Hometown My hometown has taken on a new look over the past ten years. In the past, the villagers led a hard life. The muddy road was so narrow that people had to travel on foot for hours to reach the city. There were no buses or trains then. Thanks to the government, a new railway now runs through the town. Travelling to the city takes only forty minutes. Many new flats have been built, and the housing problem is solved. Farmers can sell their products online, which is very convenient. More and more young people have come back to start their own businesses. I’m proud of my hometown. I’ll work hard to make it even better in the future. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体： 介绍类说明文，描述过去的情况时用一般过去时，描述现在的变化时用一般现在时或现在完成时 明确要点：家乡过去的情况（如：道路、房屋、交通等）、现在的变化（如：铁路、购物、网络等）、自己的感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/my）为主 注意事项： 需包含题干中所有要点内容，80-120词 [第二步：构思布局] 四段式结构： 开头段： 概括家乡在过去的十年里发生了巨大变化，引出下文 主体段一： 详细描述过去艰苦的生活条件和落后的基础设施 主体段二： 详细描述现在的巨大变化（交通、住房、商业等） 结尾段： 表达对家乡变化的骄傲之情，并展望未来 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡过去的情况 情况选择：the villagers led a hard life/the muddy road was so narrow that people had to travel on foot for hours to reach the city/there were no buses or trains then/people lived in old, low houses/farmers carried their corn to the city by hand等 要点二：现在的变化 变化选择：a new railway now runs through the town/travelling to the city takes only forty minutes/many new flats have been built/farmers can sell their products online/more and more young people have come back to start their own businesses/the streets are wide and clean/people can buy all kinds of things online等 要点三：自己的感受 感受选择：I’m proud of my hometown/I love my hometown deeply/I feel happy to see these great changes/I love these changes/I am glad to see my hometown develop so quickly/it’s amazing to see how much my hometown has changed/I feel excited about the progress of my hometown等 4．进入初中以来, 你的生活一定发生了很多变化。请以”The Changes in My Life”为题, 从以下三个方面中选择两个方面, 写一写你生活中的变化。1.学校生活 (科目、老师、同学、作息……)；2.家庭生活 (住房条件、与家人的相处方式……)；3.自我认识 (外貌、爱好、性格、优势……)。 词数不少于80； The Changes in My Life ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Changes in My Life My life has changed a lot since I entered junior high school. First, my school life has changed. In the past, I had fewer subjects and more free time. But now I have more subjects and much more homework. I get up earlier and go to bed later than before. However, I have made many new friends. Second, I have changed myself. I am taller than before. I used to be shy, but now I am more outgoing and confident. These changes have made me grow into a better person. I will keep improving myself. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文/记叙文 (介绍生活中的变化)，以一般过去时和一般现在时为主 明确要点 (从三个方面中选择两个)： 学校生活：科目、老师、同学、作息 家庭生活：住房条件、与家人的相处方式 自我认识：外貌、爱好、性格、优势 确定人称：第一人称 (I/my) 注意事项：不得出现真实信息；词数不少于80词 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出进入初中以来生活发生了许多变化 主体段： 第一层：选择方面一，对比过去与现在 第二层：选择方面二，对比过去与现在 结尾段：总结变化带来的感受和成长 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：学校生活 (科目、老师、同学、作息) 常用表达：In the past, I used to.../But now, I.../I have more subjects than before./My teachers are stricter/more helpful./I have made many new friends./I get up earlier and go to bed later than before./I have more homework and less free time.等 要点二：家庭生活 (住房条件、与家人的相处方式) 常用表达：We moved to a bigger house./I have my own room now./I used to spend more time with my parents./Now I am busier, but we still have dinner together./I help my parents with housework./We communicate more than before./My parents understand me better now.等 要点三：自我认识 (外貌、爱好、性格、优势) 常用表达：I am taller than before./I used to be shy, but now I am more outgoing./I have taken up a new hobby./I am better at...than before./I have become more confident./I am more independent than before./I learn to face difficulties bravely.等 要点四：结尾段 (总结变化带来的感受和成长) grow/growth/change/improve/become better/learn a lot/experience/thankful/happy/confident/independent/mature/face challenges/keep moving forward/These changes have made me grow into a better person./I have learned a lot from these changes./Thanks to these changes, I have become more confident and independent./I am happy about these changes in my life./Every change brings me new growth and new chances./These changes have taught me to face difficulties bravely.等 5．假如你是学生张华，你校学生会将组织一次主题为“Changes in my hometown”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据下列写作要点及要求，写一篇短文参赛，介绍你家乡的变化及你对此的感受。 写作要点: (1)What was your hometown like? (houses, roads, life) (2)Changes in your hometown. (3)Your feelings about these changes. 要求: (1)短文应包括所有的写作要点，可适当拓展，条理清楚,行文连贯； (2)短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； (3)不少于80词，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hi, everyone! Here I will tell you about some changes in my hometown. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】例文 Hi, everyone! Here I will tell you about some changes in my hometown. I live in a small town. People used to live a hard life. Their houses were old and small. Roads were rough, so people could only walk to nearby places. Now great changes have taken place. People live in large modern buildings. Wide roads connect our town to big cities. It’s easy to travel by train or plane, and many have their own cars. I feel proud of these changes. I believe my hometown will become better and better in the future. That’s all. Thank you! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文，时态以一般过去时（描述过去的家乡）和一般现在时（描述现在的变化）为主 明确要点：家乡过去的样子（房屋、道路、生活……）、家乡的变化、对变化的感受 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：不得透露真实人名和地名，词数不少于80词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，点明演讲主题是家乡的变化 主体段：先描述家乡过去的样貌，再对比描述现在的变化 结尾段：表达对变化的感受，展望家乡未来 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡过去的样子 描述角度：houses/roads/life等 具体表述：old and small houses/rough roads/live a hard life/walk to nearby places等 要点二：家乡的变化 变化角度：housing/transportation/living conditions等 具体表述：live in large modern buildings/wide roads/travel by train or plane/have own cars等 要点三：对变化的感受 感受方向：pride/happiness/hope等 具体表述：feel proud of the changes/become better and better in the future等 Unit 2 钦佩的人 6．题目：Changes Around Me and My Role Model要求： 1. 描述身边的两处社会/生活变化，介绍一位鼓舞你的榜样人物； 2. 至少使用used to以及宾语从句； 3. 词数75—95，语句通顺，逻辑连贯； 4. 运用Unit1—Unit2核心词汇，无严重拼写语法错误。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Changes Around Me and My Role Model Great changes have taken place around us. People used to go out on foot or by bike, but now many families have private cars. Besides, people used to get information mainly from newspapers. Now the Internet brings us much news. I have a role model. He is a scientist. I think what he has done encourages lots of young people. He keeps working hard for our country. I look up to him very much. I will learn from his spirit. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，时态混合一般过去时、现在完成时、一般现在时 明确要点：①描述身边两处生活变化；②介绍一位鼓舞自己的榜样；③必须用到used to以及宾语从句；词数75—95，运用Unit1-Unit2核心词汇，无真实信息 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：逻辑连贯，语句通顺，满足语法句式要求 [第二步：构思布局] 二段式结构： 第一段：描述身边两处变化，使用used to对比过去与现在 第二段：介绍榜样人物，使用宾语从句，写出榜样带给自己的激励 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：身边两处生活变化 变化描述：People used to go out on foot or by bike/now many families have private cars/people used to get information from newspapers/now the Internet brings much news/public transport等 要点二：介绍榜样人物 人物描述：have a role model/a scientist/I think what he has done encourages young people/keep working hard for our country/look up to him/learn from his spirit/perseverance等 7．在我们的生活中，总有一些人让我们敬佩。请以“The Person I Admire Most”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你最敬佩的人。 内容提示： 1. 你最敬佩的人是谁？他/她的职业是什么？ 2. 你为什么敬佩他/她？(至少两个理由) 3. 他/她如何鼓励了你？你从他/她身上学到了什么？ 要求：1. 包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2. 语句通顺，条理清晰； 3. 词数80-100；4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校。 The Person I Admire Most ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The Person I Admire Most The person I admire most is Yuan Longping. He was a famous scientist and a pioneer in hybrid rice research. I look up to him for two reasons. First, he developed a new kind of rice and helped reduce hunger around the world. It was great of him to spend his whole life helping people. Second, he was full of courage and never gave up, even when he faced difficulties. Yuan Longping encourages me to study hard and never to give up on my dreams. I want to be a person who can help others, just like him. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般现在时、一般过去时为主 明确要点：介绍最敬佩的人及其职业；敬佩他或她的理由；人物对自己的鼓励与学到的东西 确定人称：第一人称(I)、第三人称(he) 注意事项：包含所有提示内容；不得透露真实姓名和学校名称；词数80-100 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：开篇点题，介绍最敬佩的人以及他的职业 主体段：分两点阐述敬佩这个人的理由，结合人物事迹说明 结尾段：总结人物精神，介绍他如何鼓励自己以及自己学到的东西    [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：介绍最敬佩的人及其职业 人物身份：scientist/pioneer/researcher/doctor等 主要贡献：developed a new kind of rice/helped reduce hunger around the world/saved many patients等    要点二：阐述敬佩人物的理由 人物品质：hard-working/brave/selfless/patient等 人物事迹：spend his whole life helping people/never gave up when he faced difficulties/kept working day and night等    要点三：人物对自己的鼓励与收获 精神鼓励：encourages me to study hard/encourages me never to give up on my dreams/pushes me to keep trying等 个人收获：learn to help others/keep trying when meeting difficulties/learn to care for people等 8．学校英文报正在开展以 “The Person I Admire the Most” 为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请根据下面海报中的要点提示，写一篇短文参加征文。 ◆ The Person I Admire the Most ◆ 写出你最敬佩的人是谁及职业 ◆ 简述他/她的一两件事迹 ◆ 谈谈你的感受 ◆ 至少使用一次过去完成时 ◆ 语句通顺，条理清晰，词数80左右 ◆ 开头已给出，不计入总词数 The person I admire the most is Ms Wang, my English teacher. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 The person I admire the most is Ms Wang, my English teacher.   She is kind and patient. She has taught English for over ten years. Once, I had trouble learning English grammar. She stayed after class to help me. By the time I finished middle school, she had helped hundreds of students like me. She always encourages us to read more and never gives up on anyone. Thanks to her, I have made great progress and become more confident.   I admire her because she is not only a good teacher but also a warm friend. I hope to be a person like her in the future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文/人物介绍类文章，以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，至少使用一次过去完成时 明确要点：最敬佩的人是谁及职业、一两件事迹、个人感受 确定人称：第三人称（she/her）和第一人称（I/my）为主 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，需涵盖所有要点并使用过去完成时 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：已给出，点明最敬佩的人及职业 主体段：描述她的一两件具体事迹 结尾段：表达感受，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：人物及职业 人物身份：Ms Wang, my English teacher等 职业表达：an English teacher/a doctor/a scientist等 人物品质：kind and patient/hard-working/helpful等 要点二：具体事迹 事迹一：stayed after class to help me with grammar/helped students in need等 事迹二：encourages us to read more/never gives up on anyone等 过去完成时使用：By the time I finished middle school, she had helped hundreds of students.等 要点三：个人感受 感受表达：I admire her/she is not only a good teacher but also a warm friend等 影响表达：Thanks to her, I have made great progress/more confident等 未来期望：I hope to be a person like her/try to help others等 9．学校英文报正在开展以 “A Hero in My Heart” 为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请根据下面海报中的要点提示，写一篇短文参加征文。 ◆ A Hero in My Heart ◆ 写出你心中的英雄是谁 ◆ 介绍他/她的一两件事迹 ◆ 谈谈你的感受和打算 ◆ 至少使用一次过去完成时 ◆ 语句通顺，条理清晰，词数80左右 ◆ 开头已给出，不计入总词数 A Hero in My Heart There are many heroes in my heart, and the greatest one is Dr Zhong Nanshan. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: A Hero in My Heart There are many heroes in my heart, and the greatest one is Dr Zhong Nanshan. Dr Zhong is a famous medical scientist. In 2020, when COVID-19 spread quickly, he went to Wuhan at once, although he was already eighty-four years old. By that time, he had fought against SARS in 2003, so he had much experience. He told people the truth and taught us how to protect ourselves. I admire him because he is brave, honest and responsible. I will study hard so that I can help others like him in the future. He is a true hero in my heart. 【详解】【第一步：写作步骤】   确定文体：英语征文短文，标题A Hero in My Heart 明确要点：①心中英雄是谁；②介绍一两件事迹；③个人感受与打算；至少使用一次过去完成时；词数80词左右；开头已给出不计入词数 确定人称：第三人称介绍英雄，第一人称抒发感受；时态：一般过去时为主，包含过去完成时 注意事项：覆盖全部要点，行文连贯，语法正确   【第二步：构思布局】   开头：已有开头，点明心中英雄是钟南山。 主体：讲述英雄事迹，使用过去完成时。 结尾：写自己的感受以及未来打算。   【第三步：要点展开】   要点一：心中英雄是谁 hero/greatest/medical scientist/famous/respected等 要点二：介绍一两件事迹 spread/go to/fight against/protect/truth/at once/experience/responsible等   要点三：你的感受和打算 admire/ brave/ honest/study hard/in the future/help others/follow one’s example等   10．学校英文报正在开展以 “An Inspiring Person Around Me” 为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请根据下面海报中的要点提示，写一篇短文参加征文。 ◆ An Inspiring Person Around Me 　　◆ 写出你身边鼓舞你的人是谁（如清洁工、志愿者、同学） 　　◆ 举一件具体的事例 　　◆ 谈谈他/她对你的影响 　　◆ 至少使用一次过去完成时 　　◆ 语句通顺，条理清晰，词数80左右 　　◆ 开头已给出，不计入总词数 An ordinary person can also be a great inspiration. For me, that person is Uncle Li, a cleaner in our neighbourhood. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： An Inspiring Person Around Me An ordinary person can also be a great inspiration. For me, that person is Uncle Li, a cleaner in our neighbourhood. Every morning, Uncle Li gets up early and cleans the streets before most people wake up. Last winter, it snowed heavily. By the time I went to school, he had already cleared away all the snow on our street. He smiled and said, “A clean street makes everyone’s day better.” Uncle Li never thinks his job is small. From him, I have learned that every small job is important. Now I always try to do small things well, and I want to be a person like him. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，时态以一般现在时、一般过去时为主，穿插过去完成时 明确要点：①介绍鼓舞自己的身边人物；②讲述一件具体事例；③谈谈人物对自己带来的影响；④至少使用一次过去完成时 确定人称：第一人称（I） 和第三人称（he） 注意事项：词数80词左右，开头已给出，必须包含所有提示信息并适当发挥，文中不得出现真实人名和校名 [第二步：构思布局] 四段式结构： 开头段：引出鼓舞自己的人物 —— 社区清洁工李叔叔； 主体段一：叙述去年冬天大雪，李叔叔在我上学前清扫完街道积雪的具体事例； 主体段二： 写出李叔叔带给自己的感悟 结尾段：自己今后的改变。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：介绍鼓舞自己的人物 人物身份：Uncle Li, a cleaner in our neighbourhood/a common cleaner in my community/an ordinary cleaning worker around me...等 要点二：一件具体事例 事例：cleared away all the snow on our street/clear snow on the street on snowy winter mornings/clean up heavy snow before students go to school/finish street cleaning ahead of time in bad weather...等 要点三：他对我的影响 感悟：every small job is important/value every ordinary job/stick to doing small things well/respect ordinary workers/improve myself from small details/learn to be responsible/form good working habits...等 Unit 3学习方法和策略 11．假如你是李华，下周你将在学校英语俱乐部举办的 “Smart Learning” 学习经验交流会上发言。请你根据以下思维导图提示，写一篇英文发言稿，分享你的学习方法，并鼓励同学们一起成为智慧的学习者。 要求： (1) 发言稿应包含思维导图中的全部信息； (2) 语法正确，意思连贯，书写规范； (3) 文中不得出现你的真实姓名、校名和地名； (4) 至少使用一次宾语从句 (that/if/whether引导)； (5) 80词左右（已给出的开头不计入总词数）。 How to Be a Smart Learner Hello, everyone. I’m very glad to share my learning experience with you. ____________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 How to Be a Smart Learner Hello, everyone. I’m very glad to share my learning experience with you. I have two good learning habits. First, I keep a learning diary and write down five new words every day. Second, I review my notes for ten minutes before bed. I think that reviewing is the best way to remember. Last term, I could not speak English well. I joined the English corner and practised with my classmates twice a week. Now I am much more confident. I hope you will find your own way to learn. Remember: small steps lead to big progress. Thank you! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意]   确定文体：发言稿（应用文），以第一人称叙述 明确要点：①至少两条良好的学习习惯；②曾经遇到的学习难题以及解决办法；③给同学们的学习建议，鼓励大家成为智慧的学习者 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 时态：一般现在时（介绍习惯、建议）+ 一般过去时（讲述过去遇到的困难） 注意事项：不能出现真实姓名、校名；至少包含一个由that/if/whether引导的宾语从句；词数80左右（给出开头不计入）    [第二步：构思布局] 开头段：题目已经给出开头，不用自己写 主体段：先介绍自己的良好学习习惯；再讲述曾经遇到的学习困难和解决方式；最后向同学提出学习建议 结尾段：鼓励同学们找到适合自己的学习方法，总结升华主题    [第三步：要点展开]    要点一：良好学习习惯 keep a learning diary and write down five new words every day/review notes for ten minutes before bedtime/take notes carefully in class and mark key points/ask teachers or classmates for help right away when meeting questions/listen to English podcasts every morning to improve listening skills等 要点二：遇到的难题与解决方法 Last term, I could not speak English well. I joined the English corner and practised with my classmates twice a week. Now I am much more confident./I found it hard to memorize grammar rules. I made grammar cards and read them whenever I was free./I was slow in reading. I kept reading short passages every day and learned to guess new words.等 要点三：给同学们的建议 I hope you will find your own way to learn. Remember: small steps lead to big progress./I think that you should learn to plan your study time wisely./Don’t be afraid of making mistakes, because mistakes can help you find out your weak points.等 12．英语学习需要好方法。请以“How to Learn English Well”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文： 1. 英语学习的重要性； 2. 你的学习方法（至少两点）； 3. 呼吁大家坚持学习。要求：100—120词，语句通顺，逻辑清晰。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to Learn English Well English is very important in our daily life. It opens a window to the world and helps us communicate with foreign people. So it is necessary for us to learn it well. Here are my ways of learning English. First, I keep reading English articles every day. It improves my reading skills and increases my vocabulary. Second, I try to speak English as much as possible. I often take notes in class and review them in time after school. Learning English is not easy. Don’t give up when you meet difficulties. Keep practicing every day, and you will make great progress in the end. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文；一般现在时为主，阐述观点、方法、呼吁 明确要点：英语学习的重要性；至少两点个人学习方法；呼吁坚持学习 确定人称：第一人称 (I)，第二人称 (you) 注意事项：词数100‑120 词，逻辑通顺，覆盖全部提示点 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明英语的重要性，引出话题 主体段：介绍自己的两点学习方法，补充简单效果 结尾段：说明学英语不易，呼吁坚持练习 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：英语学习的重要性 价值描述：important in daily life/opens a window to the world/communicate with foreign people/can read foreign books/watch English movies 表达：English is very important in our daily life. It opens a window to the world and helps us communicate with foreign people./Besides, we can read foreign books and watch English movies with it. So it is necessary for us to learn it well. 要点二：你的学习方法（至少两点） 方法一选择：keep reading English articles every day/spend 15 minutes on it every morning 方法二选择：try to speak English as much as possible/take notes in class and review them in time after school/I also join the English club to practice 效果：improves my reading skills/increases my vocabulary/improve oral ability/strengthen what I have learned in class 要点三：呼吁大家坚持学习 客观现状：Learning English is not easy 行为建议：Don’t give up when you meet difficulties/Keep practicing every day/progress won’t come in a short time 13．好的学习习惯让人受益终身。请以“Good Study Habits”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文：1. 好习惯的重要性；2. 介绍你的一两个好习惯；3. 呼吁大家养成好习惯。要求：100—140词，语句通顺，逻辑清晰。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version(基础版): Good Study Habits Good study habits are very important for students. They act as a steady helper on our journey of learning: with good habits, we can improve our learning efficiency greatly and   master new knowledge faster. I have two good habits. One is making a study plan before class, so I know what to do and never waste time on meaningless things. The other is asking questions actively in class. When I do not understand a point, I ask my teacher at once. Good habits are not born with us, but formed step by step through daily persistence. Let’s start from today and keep trying. I believe we can all do better.One possible version(高分版): Good Study Habits Good study habits are the key to success. A student with good habits can make the most of his or her time and energy. As for me, I have formed two habits that help me a lot. One is reviewing my lessons on time, so I never fall behind. The other is using the “little and often” method. Instead of cramming before exams, I spend twenty minutes practising every day. My teacher’s suggestion also reminds me to ask questions actively in class. In a word, good habits are built day by day. Let’s start small, keep going, and make progress together. The more we practise, the better we will be. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：议论文，时态以一般现在时为主 明确要点：①好习惯的重要性；②介绍自己一两个好习惯；③呼吁大家养成好习惯 确定人称：第一人称(I/my/our) 注意事项：控制词数，不得透露真实信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，点明良好学习习惯的重要性 主体段：介绍自己的两个好习惯，进行简单细节说明 结尾段：说明习惯需要慢慢培养，发出倡议，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：好习惯的重要性 重要性：important for students/act as a steady helper on our journey of learning/improve our learning efficiency greatly/master new knowledge faster/play an important role in/bring us lifelong benefits/make progress more easily/make full use of our time等 要点二：介绍自己一两个好习惯 具体习惯：making a study plan before class/know what to do/never waste time on meaningless things/asking questions actively in class/do not understand a point/ask my teacher at once/ahead of time/helps me make good use of every minute/being active to raise questions in class instead of keeping silent/turn to my teachers or classmates for help right away等 要点三：呼吁大家养成好习惯 呼吁：not born with us/formed step by step through daily persistence/start from today and keep trying/we can all do better/develop them little by little in our daily study/takes time and patience to form good study habits/make a big difference to our future等 14．假设你校英语报社正在举办题为“My Ways to Learn English”的征文活动，请结合你自身的学习经历，写一篇英语短文投稿，分享你认为最有效的英语学习方法。 提示： 1.学习英语的重要性或你最初遇到的困难。 2.详细介绍2-3种你认为最有效的学习方法及其原因。 3.发表你的观点并鼓励同学们。 要求： 1.词数：100词左右。 2.包含所有提示内容，内容连贯，结构清晰，语句通顺。 3.文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Ways to Learn English English is a very important language. At first, I met lots of difficulties in learning it. I was weak in listening and afraid to speak English in front of my classmates.     Now I have two useful ways to improve. First, I listen to English songs and watch short English videos in my free time. It improves my listening skills and makes English more interesting. Second, I read English articles aloud every morning. It helps me correct my pronunciation and build language sense.     Nothing is hard if we keep practicing. Let’s stick to our good ways and make great progress in English together. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：①学习英语的重要性或最初遇到的困难；②介绍2-3种最有效的英语学习方法及其原因；③发表观点并鼓励同学们 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：词数100左右，包含所有提示内容，内容连贯、结构清晰、语句通顺，文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名    [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，点明英语学习，写出学习英语的重要性或者自己初学遇到的困难 主体段：列举2-3种有效的英语学习方法，并分别说明方法有效的原因 结尾段：表达个人看法，鼓励同学们坚持学习英语    [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：学习英语的重要性/初学困难 可选句子：English is an important language./At first, I found it hard to learn English well等 要点二：英语学习方法及原因 方法1：listen to English songs/watch English videos 原因：It helps improve listening skills/makes us interested in English等 方法2：keep an English diary 原因：It is good for our writing/helps us remember new words等 方法3：read English articles aloud every morning 原因：It can improve our pronunciation/develop our sense of language等 要点三：观点与鼓励 可选句子：Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it./Let’s keep practicing等 15．你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“Smart Learning Makes Me Better”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿，分享你在学习中使用的一种或几种学习方法，并谈谈这些方法如何帮助了你。 要求： 1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： Smart Learning Makes Me Better Smart learning has helped me become a much better student. I used to study hard but got only average grades. Now I use several smart learning methods in my daily study. First, I make a study plan before each week starts. I decide what to learn each day and stick to the plan. Second, I take notes actively in class and review them after school. When I come across new words, I look them up and write them down. I also use the Pomodoro technique—I study for 25 minutes and then take a short break. Thanks to these methods, my grades have improved a lot. More importantly, I enjoy learning more than before. Smart learning truly makes me better! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时为主，少量一般过去时、现在完成时辅助叙事 明确要点：自身学习前后变化、实用的智慧学习方法、学习带来的成长与收获 确定人称：第一人称（I/my/me/mine） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名、学校等个人信息，紧扣“智慧学习让自我进步”核心主题，内容积极正向 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起全文，点明核心主题，对比自身过去低效学习、现在运用智慧学习的状态，引出文章主旨 主体段：分层列举具体的智慧学习方法，详细阐述每种学习方法的具体做法和作用 结尾段：总结智慧学习带来的成果，不仅成绩提升，更热爱学习，升华全文主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：学习规划方法 行为：make a study plan/stick to the plan/decide what to learn/arrange study time/finish daily learning tasks/adjust plans timely/standardize my study life/make my study more orderly等 要点二：课堂与课后学习方法 行为：take notes actively/review notes after school/look up new words/write down new words/listen carefully in class/sort out knowledge points/accumulate vocabulary/consolidate learning knowledge/expand my vocabulary/grasp key knowledge well等 要点三：时间管理学习方法 行为：use the Pomodoro technique/study for 25 minutes/take a short break/arrange work and rest reasonably/control study and rest time等 要点四：学习收获与成长 收获：grades have improved a lot/enjoy learning more/become more self-disciplined/have better learning habits/make progress continuously等 Unit 4记忆力 16．好的记忆力能让学习事半功倍。你的英国笔友Tom在来信中说，他最近总是记不住学过的知识，非常苦恼。请你根据以下提示，用英语给他回一封电子邮件，介绍提高记忆力的方法。 提示内容： 1. Train your brain: try new things, pay attention; 2. Live a healthy life: eat a balanced diet, get enough rest; 3. 其他建议：take notes, review in time... 要求： 1. 内容尽量包含提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 条理清楚，句式规范； 3. 80词以上 (开头已给出，不计入总词数) ； 4. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 提示词汇：pay attention to, take notes, last but not least Dear Tom, Thanks for your letter. Don’t worry too much about your memory—here is my advice. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Tom, Thanks for your letter. Don’t worry too much about your memory—here is my advice. To start with, train your brain. Try new things daily and pay full attention while studying. Besides, live a healthy life. Eat a balanced diet and get enough rest. Give your brain a break after 40 minutes’ study. Last but not least, take notes by writing down the key points and review knowledge in time. The more you review, the more likely you will remember. I believe your memory will improve if you follow my advice. I’m looking forward to your progress. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：训练大脑，健康生活，其他建议（记笔记、及时复习等） 确定人称：第二人称（you）为主，第一人称（I） 用来给出观点 注意事项：不得出现真实的校名和人名，80词以上 (开头已给出，不计入总词数) [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：回信问候，安慰Tom，引出下文的建议（题目已经给出开头） 主体段：分条给出三条提升记忆力的建议：训练大脑、健康生活、其他建议（记笔记、及时复习等） 结尾段：表达相信建议有效，期待对方进步 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：训练大脑 做法：try new things/pay full attention when you study/do brain games like word puzzles/try to retell what you learn等 要点二：健康生活 做法：eat a balanced diet/get enough rest/exercise often/don’t stay up/give your brain a break after studying for 40 minutes等 要点三：其他建议 做法：take notes by writing down the key points/review knowledge in time/connect new knowledge with your life experience/use memory cards to go over knowledge等 17．记忆好是学好各科的重要基础。请以“How to Improve Your Memory”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文：1. 记忆的重要性；2. 提高记忆的方法（至少两点）；3. 你的做法或呼吁。要求：100—140词，语句通顺，逻辑清晰。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 How to Improve Your Memory A good memory is like a treasure. It helps us learn faster and live better. But memory is not a gift; it is a skill that everyone can improve. In my opinion, three methods work best. First, pay attention in class. Many people forget things just because they do not listen carefully. Second, review in time. Our brain forgets fast, so we should repeat what we have learned within 24 hours. Third, use pictures and stories. When we connect new words with funny pictures, they stay in our mind longer. As for me, I keep a memory diary and retell my lessons to my parents every night. I believe that with good habits, everyone can have a wonderful memory. Let’s start from today! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：记忆力的作用、提升记忆力的3种方法、个人做法、号召倡议 确定人称：第一人称 (I/my/we/our) 注意事项：词数100—140词左右，讲如何提高记忆力，给出可行建议 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出话题，点明记忆力很重要，记忆力是可以提升的技能 主体段：列举3种提升记忆力的有效方法（课堂专心听讲、及时复习、借助图片和故事记忆） 结尾段：介绍自己的做法，表达观点，发出倡议 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：记忆力的重要性 like a treasure；learn faster；live better；not a gift；a skill that everyone can improve；improve one’s memory；of great importance；a useful skill等 要点二：提升记忆力的方法 方法1：课堂集中注意力 pay attention in class；forget things；listen carefully；focus on lessons；take notes；concentrate on等 方法2：及时复习 review in time；repeat what we have learned；go over lessons；fight against forgetting；as soon as possible等 方法3：使用图片、故事辅助记忆 use pictures and stories；stay in our mind longer；memory skills；make associations；remember things better等 要点三：个人做法、观点与倡议 个人做法：keep a memory diary；retell my lessons；read texts aloud every morning；make word cards to review knowledge等 观点：with good habits, everyone can have a wonderful memory；everyone can train their memory and make progress；if we keep trying, we can make our memory better等 倡议：Let’s start from today；Let’s take action now；Keep practicing, and we will get a great memory等 18．成长里的回忆，藏着温暖与感动。学校英语社团将举办题为“An Unforgettable Memory in My Life”的分享活动。假如你是李华，请你写一篇短文讲述一段你的难忘回忆，参与分享。 提示：1. What happened? 2. When and where did it happen? 3. What have you learnt from this experience? 要求：1.必须包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥; 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名; 3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 An Unforgettable Memory in My Life Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. There are many unforgettable memories in my life, but one still stays in my heart. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： An Unforgettable Memory in My Life Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. There are many unforgettable memories in my life, but one still stays in my heart. It was a rainy afternoon last autumn. I was walking home from school when I saw an old woman having difficulties carrying heavy bags near a bus stop. Without thinking twice, I went over and helped her carry the bags all the way to her home. She smiled and thanked me warmly. Helping others not only brings them happiness but also makes us feel good inside. This memory will always stay in my heart, and it reminds me to spread kindness whenever I can. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以一般过去时为主 明确要点：发生的事情、时间和地点、感悟 确定人称：第一人称（I） 注意事项：必须包含所有要点提示，不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引入话题 主体段：交代事件发生的时间、地点和经过 结尾段：总结感悟 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：发生的事情 I was walking home from school when I saw an old woman having difficulties carrying heavy bags near a bus stop. Without thinking twice, I went over and helped her carry the bags all the way to her home./I took part in an English speech contest. I was so nervous that I forgot almost everything and failed. I felt really upset and wanted to give up. Just then, my English teacher came to me and said, “Failure is the mother of success. Keep trying and you’ll make it.”等 要点二：时间和地点 时间：on a rainy afternoon last autumn/last year/last week等 地点：walking home from school/in the classroom等 要点三：感悟 Helping others not only brings them happiness but also makes us feel good inside./Failure is not terrible as long as we don’t lose heart等 19．题目：How to Improve Our Memory 要求： 1. 介绍提升记忆力的实用方法； 2. 至少写出3条建议； 3. 词数80–100； 4. 语句通顺，语法正确，贴合本单元话题。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文： How to Improve Our Memory Good memory is of great importance for our school study. There are several useful ways to improve it. To begin with, we should connect new information with our old knowledge. This helps our brain build close links and remember things more easily. Besides, retelling what we have learned is a good choice. It helps information turn into long-term memory. What’s more, we need enough sleep, because our brain stores information while we sleep. It is natural to forget things. As long as we keep practicing these skills, our memory will improve step by step. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：介绍提升记忆力的实用方法，至少写出3条建议 确定人称：第一人称(we/our) 注意事项：语句通顺，语法正确，贴合本单元话题；词数80-100    [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：开篇点题，点明好的记忆力对于学习很重要，引出提升记忆力有几种实用方法 主体段：分层介绍提升记忆力的三条办法，简单说明每种方法带来的作用 结尾段：说明遗忘是正常现象，坚持练习这些技巧，记忆力会逐步提升    [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：点明记忆力的重要性 重要性短语：be of great importance for/be very important for/several useful ways to improve it/many helpful ways to develop it等    要点二：介绍提升记忆力的方法及其作用 方法一：建立新旧知识联系 关联记忆短语：connect new information with/link new knowledge with/build close links/form strong connections等 方法二：复述所学内容 巩固记忆短语：retell what we have learned/repeat what we learn/turn into long-term memory/become lasting memory等 方法三：保证充足睡眠 养护大脑短语：enough sleep/sufficient sleep/store information/save information等    要点三：总结感悟，说明坚持练习的效果 感悟：It is natural to forget things/It’s normal to forget things等 行动与效果：keep practicing these skills/keep trying these ways/improve step by step/get better little by little等 20．每个人都会遇到记忆问题。请以“How to Improve My Memory”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你自己的记忆问题和改进记忆的方法。 要求： 1.至少使用两个本单元学到的短语或句型(如 remind...about, mix up...with, forget to do等)； 2.内容完整，语句通顺，80词左右； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 How to Improve My Memory ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： How to Improve My Memory I used to have a poor memory. I often forgot to do my homework and mixed up English words with Chinese ones. My teacher reminded me about the importance of good study habits. Now I have some good ways to improve my memory. First, I keep a small notebook and write down important things. Second, I get enough sleep every night, because the brain stores memories during sleep. Third, I do exercise every day. Thanks to these ways, my memory is getting better and better. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，时态以一般现在时为主 明确要点：①指出自己遇到的记忆问题；②介绍改进记忆的方法 确定人称：第一人称（I） 注意事项：满足词数要求（80词左右），不得出现真实个人信息，使用至少两个本单元学到的短语或句型 [第二步：构思布局] 采用三段式主体结构： 开头段：引出话题，描述自己的记忆问题 主体段：分点依次介绍改进记忆的具体方法，逻辑清晰 结尾段：总结改进记忆方法后的效果，表达积极态度 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：记忆问题 have a poor memory/forgot to do my homework/mixed up English words with Chinese ones/forget where I put my keys/can’t remember people’s names/reminded me about the importance of good study habits等 要点二：改进方法 keep a small notebook/write down important things/get enough sleep/do exercise every day/review what I have learned regularly/try to link new information with what I already know等 要点三：改进效果 my memory is getting better and better/are helpful to me/have made great progress in my memory等 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $