内容正文:
No.B1U2-P4 Class: Name:
课题:B1U2 Exploring English Type of lesson:Writing
主备:Marilyn 审核:Amy Li 授课: 课时:
Teaching Goals:
1. Master the "three-part" writing framework for a letter of advice: empathetic opening → point-by-point suggestions → encouragement and best wishes.
2. Accumulate and apply core vocabulary and high-scoring sentence patterns related to the topic of "language learning".
3. Independently write a well-structured and appropriately worded letter of advice (80–100 words).
写作任务(本次作业)
假设你是李华,你的朋友王明刚升入高中,他在英语学习上遇到了困难,感到有些焦虑。请你用英文给他一些学习策略的建议,内容包括:
1. 对他的处境表示理解并给予鼓励;
2. 提出具体、可行的学习建议。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 开头语与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 参考词汇:学习策略 learning strategies
Dear Wang Ming,
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Part 1范文引领(例题精析)
假设你是李华,最近,你的外国好友 Peter 在学习中文时遇到了困难,感到焦虑。请你根据以下提示,用英语给他回一封建议信,内容包括:
1. 表示理解;2. 给出建议;3. 表示鼓励和祝愿。
注意:1. 词数 80 左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【范文】
Dear Peter,
I'm sorry to hear that you're having trouble learning Chinese and feeling anxious. I completely understand how challenging it can be to learn a new language, especially one as complex as Chinese.
Here are some suggestions that might help. First, try to practice a little every day instead of studying for long hours occasionally. Consistency is key. Second, don't be afraid to make mistakes when speaking. Remember, making errors is a natural part of the learning process. You could also watch some Chinese movies or listen to songs to make learning more enjoyable. Most importantly, find a language partner to practice with regularly.
I believe that with patience and persistent effort, you will make great progress. Don't give up! I'm always here to support you. Best wishes for your Chinese learning journey!
Yours,
Li Hua
范文解析
1. 篇章结构(三段式)
段落
功能
写法要点
第一段
共情开头(表示理解)
先接住对方情绪: "I completely understand how challenging it can be..."
第二段
分点建议(主体)
用 First / Second / Most importantly 逐条给出可操作建议
第三段
鼓励祝愿(收尾)
"with patience and persistent effort, you will make great progress"
2. 语言亮点
I completely understand how challenging it can be to learn a new language, especially one as complex as Chinese.(how 引导宾语从句,先共情)
try to practice a little every day instead of studying for long hours occasionally(动名词短语作宾语,建议具体可执行)
词汇升级:have trouble (in) doing sth(做某事有困难);consistency is key(坚持是关键);make mistakes(犯错是自然的学习过程)
3. 建议要"可操作"
范文给出的每条建议都具体、可执行——不是空喊"要好好学习",而是"每天练一点" "看中文电影听歌" "找语伴",这是建议信得高分的关键。
Part 2写作锦囊(背下来就能用)
1. 建议信黄金框架(三段式模板)
Dear ________,
I'm sorry to hear that you ________. I completely understand how you feel.
Here are a few suggestions. To begin with, it is a good idea to ________. Then, it also helps to ________. Besides, ________ is also a good choice, as ________.
I believe that with patience and effort, you will make great progress. I'm always here to support you.
Yours,
Li Hua
2. 常用句型
开头(共情 / 理解)
I'm sorry to hear that you're having trouble (in) doing sth.
I completely understand how you feel.
It's quite normal to have difficulties when...
中间(提建议)
Here are some suggestions that might help.
To begin with / First, it's a good idea to...
Then / Second, it also helps to...
Besides / Most importantly, you'd better...
Remember, ... is a natural part of...
结尾(鼓励祝愿)
I believe that with patience and effort, you will make great progress.
Don't give up! I'm always here to support you.
Best wishes for your learning journey!
3. 语言学习类高频词汇短语
(1)做某事有困难 have t____________ / d____________ (in) doing sth
(2)克服困难 o____________ difficulties
(3)取得进步 make p____________
(4)持续练习 c____________ practice
(5)在语境中学单词 learn words i____________ c____________
(6)口语练习 o____________ practice
(7)掌握发音 m____________ pronunciation
(8)缺乏口语自信 lack c____________ i____________ speaking
(9)抓住一切机会练习 take every c____________ to practice
(10)复习与总结 review and s____________
Part 3独立写作(完成你的作业)
审题三问
1. 体裁是什么?对象和话题?必须包含哪两点?
写作提纲(三段式填空)
第一段(共情 + 鼓励):I know you're feeling ________ about your English study. But don't worry. It's normal to ________.
第二段(具体建议,用 Firstly / Secondly / Thirdly / Finally 分点):
阅读:read more English materials such as ________
口语:practice speaking, join ________ / talk with ________
听力:listen to ________ / watch ________
复习:review and summarize ________ regularly
第三段(信心 + 祝愿):I'm sure if you ________, you will ________.
参考答案(教师版)
1. trouble / difficulty
1. overcome
1. progress
1. consistent
1. in context
1. oral
1. master
1. confidence in
1. chance
1. summarize
以下为教师用参考范文及亮点解析,供批改与讲评使用,可按需裁剪。
【王明建议信 · 参考范文】
Dear Wang Ming,
I know you're feeling a bit worried about your English study since entering senior high school. But don't worry too much. It's normal to have difficulties at the beginning. I believe you can overcome them.
Here are some learning strategies for you. Firstly, read more English materials such as English novels and newspapers to improve your reading ability. Secondly, practice speaking English as much as possible. You can join an English club or talk with your classmates in English. Thirdly, listen to English podcasts or watch English movies to enhance your listening skills. Finally, don't forget to review and summarize what you have learned regularly.
I'm sure if you follow these suggestions and keep working hard, you will make great progress in English.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文 · 亮点解析】
词汇升级:worried → concerned / anxious;overcome → get over;suggestion → proposal / advice;progress → advancement
高分句型 1:I know you're feeling a bit worried about your English study...(省略 that 的宾语从句)
高分句型 2:don't forget to review and summarize what you have learned regularly(what 引导宾语从句)
高分句型 3:I'm sure if you follow these suggestions... you will make great progress(if 引导条件状语从句)
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