UNIT3 Section IV 写作指导-【成才之路·学案】2026-2027学年高中英语选择性必修第一册同步新课程学习指导(人教版)

070 Section IV ●演练佳作 假定你是秦皇岛市的一名中学生李华，请 根据以下要点向准备来你校做交换生的英国同 学介绍一下位于秦皇岛旅游区著名的河北海滨 国家森林公园。要点包括： 1.位于秦皇岛市北戴河区，占地1,600多公 顷； 2.森林茂密，栖息着多种珍稀动物，鸟类 380余种，占河北省鸟类总数的90%多； 3.欢迎游览。 注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：公顷hectare ●写作步骤 一、审题谋篇 体裁：旅游景点介绍 人称：第三人称 时态：一般现在时 文章结构： 开头段：整体介绍景点，例如它基本的地理位置 或人文环境； 主体段：具体介绍其代表性的历史价值或突出的 人文特色等； 结尾段：总结概括并吸引读者前去旅游。 二、核心词汇 1.介绍特色 ①the theme of the park公园的主题 ②enjoy doing...喜欢做… ③be known/famous for..因…出名 ④be home to..是…的家园 2.介绍地理位置 Dbe located/situated in the centre of... 坐落于…的中心 2lie in/to the south/east of... 位于…的南部/东部 ③on the top of在…的顶部 3.介绍面积 Dhave/cover an area of...square kilometers/ meters有…平方公里/平方米的面积 写作指导 2with an area of...square kilometers /meters 面积为…平方公里/平方米 4.介绍历史 ①have a history of...years有…年的历史 ②with a history of...years历史为…年 ③have witnessed too much..in history在历史 中见证了太多的… 5.介绍交通方式 ①reach the park./museum by..乘坐…可到 达公园/博物馆 ②get there a little more quickly by..乘坐… 更快一点儿到达那里 6.介绍收费情况 ①he admission fee to..…入场费 ②need to pay..for the entrance ticket需要支 付…入场券 ③pay an additional charge of..for..为… 支付…的额外费用 4charge no additional fees except the entrance ticket除入场券外，不收取额外费用 三、高级句式 1.介绍功能或特点 DIn my view,it is a good place for relaxation and amusement. 在我看来，这是一个放松和娱乐的好地方。 2 In addition,you can enjoy wonderful performances in the theme park. 此外，你可以在主题公园里欣赏精彩的表演。 2.介绍地理位置 1The theme park is located/situated in the west of our city near the High-speed Railway Station. 主题公园坐落在我们城市西郊的高铁站附近。 2The theme park lies in the northern part of Sichuan Province,which is well-known for its beautiful lakes. 主题公园位于四川省北部，以其美丽的湖泊 而闻名。 3.介绍面积 It will be a world-famous theme park covering with an area of 670,000 square metres. 它将成为世界著名的主题公园，占地67万平 方米。 4.介绍历史 It is a world-famous theme park which has a history of 50 years. 它是一个有着50年历史的世界著名的主题 公园。 5.介绍交通方式 DYou can reach the theme park by subway. 你可以乘地铁到主题公园。 2You can get there a little more quickly by taxi. 乘出租车去那里你可能会更快一点儿。 6.介绍收费情况 The admission fee to the park is 100 yuan,and all the activities in the park are free. 公园门票是100元，园内的所有活动都是免 费的。 四、要点陈述 1.河北海滨国家森林公园在中国是一个极好的 旅游景点。 Hebei Coastal National Forest Park is in China. 2.它位于秦皇岛市北戴河区。 It Beidaihe District. Qinhuangdao City. 3.它占地1,600多公顷。 1,600 hectares. 4.它以其令人叹为观止的美景吸引着来自世界 各地的游客。 from all over the world with its breathtaking beauty. 5.它也是一个以茂密的森林和大量珍稀动物， 特别是各种鸟类而闻名的公园。 It is also a park and abundance of rare animals,especially varieties of birds. 071 6.380余种鸟类生活在这里，占河北省鸟类总数 的90%多。 There are more than 380 varieties of birds which of the total amount of varieties of birds in Hebei Province. 7.河北海滨国家森林公园被认为是观鸟者的必 去之地。 Hebei Coastal National Forest Park a must for bird watchers. 8.任何时候你有时间，欢迎你来欣赏这里的美。 Any time you are available,you here. 五、句式升级 1.用非谓语动词作状语升级要点2，用定语从句 升级要点3，然后和要点1合并 Beidaihe District,Qinhuangdao City,Hebei Coastal National Forest Park, more than 1,600 hectares, is an incredible tourist attraction in China. 2.用wh复合结构升级要点4，然后和要点5合 并 With from all over the world,it is also a park best known for its thick forest and abundance of rare animals,especially varieties of birds 3.用非谓语动词作状语升级要点6 There are more than 380 varieties of birds living here, of the total amount of varieties of birds in Hebei Province. 六、连句成篇 夯基提能作业 请同学们认真完成练案[12]词汇拓展 1.adorable 2.amused amusing amusement 3.incredibly 4.appealing 5.fashionable 6.rarely 7.entertainment 词块识记 1.appeal to 2.be familiar with 3.up to 4.in addition to... 5.主题公园：主题乐园6.实现7.表演节目 8.颠倒：倒转：翻转 课文预读 1.A2.D3.C4.D5.A 要点探究 核心词汇 1.(1)prohibited (2)from (3)the new prohibition of drunk driving was introduced 2.(1)of (2)ahead of time (3)we will get ahead of them 3.(1)for (2)to spare (3)an (4)I am writing to appeal to everyone to take an active part in building a more beautiful school. 4.(1)about/around (2)to (3)to wander over the world 5.(1)yourself (2)at/by/with (3)amusements (4)were amused to pick peaches 6.(1)胜任(2)忙于，从事于(3)由…决定 (4)及得上，比得上(5)It is up to us to help those 7.(1)to entertain (2)entertainments (3)with (4)entertainment entertainer entertaining to entertain 重点句型 1.(1)Whenever (2)Whoever (3)whatever full use 2.(1)It is my confidence and determination that (2)It was not until his parents came back that (3)It is only by acting together that we can involve more people 随堂达标 I.1.displayed 2.appeal 3.route 4.fashion 5.splendid 6.Cycling 7.entertainment 8.amusement amusing amused 9.enormously 10.rarely II.1.of 2.To 3.by 4.what 5.to decide 6.to 7.to 8.around 9.with 10.that IlI.1.that/which 2.to 3.magical 4.adorable 5.to amuse 6.performances 7.made 8.and 9.walking 10.suddenly Section IV写作指导 1.an incredible tourist attraction 2.is located in 3.It covers an area of more than 4.It appeals to tourists 5.best known for its thick forest 6.living here account for over 90% 7.is thought to be 8.are welcome to enjoy the beauty 五、l.Located in which covers an area of 2.its breathtaking beauty appealing to tourists 3.accounting for over 90% 六、One possible version Located in Beidaihe District,Qinhuangdao City,Hebei Coastal National Forest Park,which covers an area of more than 1,600 hectares,is an incredible tourist attraction in China. With its breathtaking beauty appealing to tourists from all over the world,it is also a park best known for its thick forest and abundance of rare animals,especially varieties of birds. -18 There are more than 380 varieties of birds living here, accounting for over 90%of the total amount of varieties of birds in Hebei Province.What's more,Hebei Coastal National Forest Park is thought to be a must for bird watchers,and taking a walk in such a forest is not just a time for relaxation. Any time you are available,you are welcome to enjoy the beauty here.You will find your trip here enjoyable and rewarding. 读后续写技能之修辞（三） I.1.gave me a smile of victory 2.was singing 3.smiled down on us 4.danced 5.crept in II.1.The wind whispered secrets through the trees. 2.Stars winked at me in a darkening sky. 3.The heavy fog made us late for work by two hours. 4.He glanced at the dew-covered grass,and it winked back at him. 5.At the news,the hills were singing;the seas were dancing Ⅲ.思路点拨 1.通读全文，把握原文要领 (1)体裁：记叙文 (2)故事主线和线索： ①一个夏日，妈妈带作者去修理车胎时，作者看上了一个 漂亮的车筐，于是问妈妈能不能买下它。妈妈不同意，但 告诉作者有别的方法可以得到它。 ②续写线索：得到车筐一看到别人有一模一样的车 筐—失望地跑回家—告诉妈妈—妈妈教育作者。 2.细读续写段首句，推测故事情节 由续写首句内容“最后，我得到了我梦寐以求的车筐，但 很快我就悲伤地在别人的自行车上发现了同样的车筐！” 可知，可描写作者看到别人有和自己一模一样的车筐时 很失望，跑回家告诉妈妈，妈妈说了一些话让作者改变了 自己的看法，意识到努力的价值。 One possible version Finally,I got my dream basket,but soon I sadly found the same basket on others'bikes!So shocked and upset was I that I immediately went home to report this disaster to my Mom. Sorrow swallowed me up.Seeing my sad face,she gently wiped away my tears.Smile took hold of her and she spoke out what has become the lesson I still carry with me today."Your basket is not the same basket.It's unique because it was obtained by all your worthwhile effort and waiting." 单元评价 I.1.at the edge of on the edge of紧张不安 ad.双刃的：对双方皆不利的 2.doing ban sb.from(doing）sth.om宣布禁止某事/物 3.陪伴某人去某地用某种乐器为某人伴奏by accompany sb. 4.选…作为…；收养…为…采用方法/采纳建 议 adopted adoptive adoption 5.for blessing blessed feel blessed with 6.禁止/阻止某人做某事prohibition prohibited 7.go ahead超过；胜过ahead of ahead of time 8.呼吁某人某事appeal to sb.to do sth.to上诉呼吁 appealing 6