Unit 2 On the money单元话题写作指导与训练2026-2027学年外研版英语九年级上册

Unit 2 On the money单元话题写作指导与训练2026-2027学年外研版九年级英语上册（含参考范文） 【版权使用说明】 本资源为个人教研原创汇编，仅可用于一线课堂教学、学生课后巩固等非商用教育场景。严禁截取本资料片段用于有偿授课、资料倒卖等商业行为。全部写作话题、参考范文均结合2024版新外研教材单元主题独立创编，未直接照搬教辅出版物，仅作教师备课研讨使用。 资源简介：本套资源适配2024新外研版九年级上册Unit 2单元，设置分层写作训练。包含写前词汇短语储备、教材语篇高分句型、分题写作框架、两道叙事感悟型写作任务以及参考范文。紧扣教材《梦想罐子》语篇与《麦琪的礼物》语篇，兼顾“存钱经历”仿写与“金钱观”叙事感悟表达，贴合中考书面表达要求，可用于课堂写作教学、课后作业训练。 资料板块设计说明：本单元设置两道分层写作任务，对标中考书面表达能力要求： 1. 任务一：结合Reading for writing语篇“梦想罐子”的叙事内核开展仿写练习，学习按“愿望—计划—行动—波折—达成”的顺序记叙一次攒钱（或理财）的经历，侧重过程与心理描写。 2. 任务二：结合“金钱观”主题，以一次与金钱有关的经历为叙事载体，从经历中感悟“关键不在于拥有多少，而在于怎样使用”的道理，做到以事悟理、叙议结合、结尾升华。 （教学建议：教师引导学生自主构思行文思路之后，再参考下文框架开展教学） 一、写前语言储备 1.话题核心词汇与写作短语 turn... into... / 把……变成…… make a good budget / 做好预算 give it a try / 试一试 mix them up / 把它们弄混 go on a trip abroad / 去国外旅行 worry about money / 为钱发愁 make any sense / 讲得通，有道理 deal with / 处理，应对 make a start / 开始行动 the key is not...but... / 关键不在于……而在于…… ten times more money / 多十倍的钱 one of the best ways to... / ……的最好方法之一 2.语篇高分句型积累（中英对照） （1）One of the best ways to get money is to use a dream tin. 存钱的最好方法之一就是用梦想罐子。 （2）Take a spare tin, turn it into a moneybox and write your dream on it. 找一个空罐子，把它变成存钱罐，把你的梦想写在上面。 （3）But ten times more money means ten times more problems. 可是多十倍的钱意味着多十倍的问题。 （4）The key is not how much money we have, but how we use it. 关键不在于我们有多少钱，而在于我们怎样使用它。 （5）First, we need to learn how to deal with our money. 首先，我们需要学会打理自己的钱。 （6）Why don't you simply make a start? 你为什么不干脆开始行动呢？ （7）My first wish was to go on a trip abroad. 我的第一个愿望是去国外旅行。 （8）"Okay, I'll give it a try... No, I mean, I'll do it," I promised. “好，我试一试……不，我是说，我一定做到。”我承诺道。 二、分层写作实践 任务一（记叙仿写） 写作题目：My telescope tin 写作要求：请模仿教材“梦想罐子”语篇的写法，按“愿望—计划—行动—波折—达成”的顺序，记叙你为某个愿望攒钱（或规划零花钱）的经历，建议词数80词以上。 写作框架（Writing Outline） 开篇：写愿望的由来（一个梦想多少钱） 主体：写存钱计划与行动、中途的动摇或意外花销、怎样坚持 结尾：写达成（或未达成）的结果与感受 参考范文 When I saw the stars through the school telescope last autumn, a dream was born: I wanted one of my own. The price — 560 yuan — was the biggest number in my life so far. So I made my own "dream tin": an old milk-powder can, turned into a moneybox, with "TELESCOPE" written boldly on it. My plan was simple: save 20 yuan a week from my pocket money and earn more by doing chores for Grandma. The first month went well. But then the tin faced its biggest test — the school book fair! My hand held twenty fresh yuan over the tin... and slowly put it back. Ten times more comics would mean ten times less telescope, I told myself. I gave it a try — no, I mean, I did it. Six months later, on a June evening, the tin rang heavy and full. Now my telescope stands by my window, and Saturn's rings belong to my own eyes. People say saving money is boring, but they are wrong: every coin in a dream tin makes a small, bright sound of "soon". 任务二（叙事感悟作文） 写作题目：The red envelope decision 写作要求：请以一次你决定怎样使用一笔钱（压岁钱、奖金、省下的零花钱）的经历为叙事载体，写出你的犹豫、选择与结果，并从经历中感悟你的金钱观，建议词数90词以上。 写作框架（Writing Outline） 开篇：交代那笔钱的来历与数目 主体：详细叙事——心里的几个方案、你怎样比较取舍、最终的选择与经过 结尾：从经历升华，写出你的金钱观 参考范文 Last Spring Festival, I received 2,000 yuan in red envelopes — the largest fortune of my thirteen years. For a week, the money lay in my drawer, and three plans fought in my head every night. Plan A: a new phone game console, like most of my classmates had. Plan B: save it all for the future — safe, but the drawer was not a bank. Plan C: something I had never considered until I visited Grandma that weekend. Her old radio, her only companion, had finally died. She waved her hand quickly: "Don't waste money on an old woman." But I had seen her ear lean towards the silent table, missing the evening opera. Back home, I made my decision. I bought a small new radio, set all her favourite channels, and stuck big paper labels on every button so she could find them herself. When the first note of opera filled her room, Grandma held my hand for a long, long time. I won't say the games wouldn't have been fun. But now I understand the line from our textbook: the key is not how much money we have, but how we use it. Two thousand yuan can buy many things, but only one of them made an old room sing again. Money is a servant — and that week, for the first time, I felt I had used it well. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $