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Unit 6
Plan for Yourself
主讲人:xxx
课型:读写课
Section B 3a-3c
能够基于 “撰写新年决心” 的写作需求,在教师引导下开展写作准备,梳理 “描述新年决心” 类短文的结构。(学习理解)
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能够将本单元所学词汇、阐述计划及说明意义的句型迁移应用到自己关于 “新年决心” 的短文写作中。(应用实践)
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通过自评和互评改进写作初稿,优化语篇结构、丰富内容表达、打磨语言表达,提升 “新年决心” 类短文的写作质量。(迁移创新)
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学习目标
Lead in
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Pre-writing
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While-writing
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Post-writing
04
Summary
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Language points
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Exercises
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Homework
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Contents
Lead in
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Lead in
What are the students’ New Year’s resolutions about?
Pre-writing
02
Pre-writing
1.What’s the passage mainly about?
New Year’s resolutions
2.What does “draw to a close ” mean? Can you find a word to replace it ?
End
3.How many ways to improve our lives does the writer mention ?
Four
4.How many resolutions is the writer going to make?
three
Pre-writing
New Year, New Me
As the year draws to a close, it is the perfect time to think about the changes we want to make in the coming new year. We can improve our lives by learning something new, forming good habits, working harder at something, or even improving our relationships with others. I hope to make next year better than this one, so I am going to make three resolutions.
即将结束
在即将到来的新年
改善
by doing sth. 通过做某事
形成
关系
The first one is about taking up a new hobby. I am going to join the school music club to improve my singing! I think singing is a great activity. And my friends and family all love my singing.
I am also going to get fitter. Besides jogging, I am going to do push-ups and sit-ups. I feel energetic after I exercise. I’m sure I’m going to be a healthier and happier person.
Last but not least, my English isn’t good enough, so I am going to study for two more hours each weekend. It might be hard, but I am going to get a lot better at English!
培养新爱好
除了
俯卧撑
仰卧起坐
精力充沛的
最后但同等重要
足够的
修饰比较级程度深 = much “得多”
Pre-writing
To improve … Resolution
1.
2.
3.
Take up a new hobby.
I am going to join the school music club to improve my singing!
Go to get fitter.
Besides jogging, I am going to do push-ups and sit-ups.
Go to study English for two more hours each weekend.
It might be hard, but I am going to get a lot better at English!
Pre-writing
Write down the things you want to improve and your resolutions.
3b
To improve ... My resolution
1.
2.
3.
Physical health
Go jogging for 30 minutes every morning and eat more vegetables.
Painting skills
Take a painting class every weekend and practice drawing for an hour daily.
Time management
Make a daily to-do list and follow it strictly, and avoid procrastinating(拖延).
While-writing
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While-writing
Use the notes above to write three paragraphs. In each paragraph, write what you are going to improve and how.
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3c
While-writing
写自己新年决心。用一般将来时态,用 be
going to 结构。
要点: what + how,模仿3a中的写作方式。
列提纲/打草稿---写作--通读检查。
写作指导:
While-writing
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谋篇布局
引出话题
具体介绍
表明决心
The New Year is coming soon. I hope to make the next year better, so I am going to make three resolutions.
My first resolution is about improving...
I am going to eat more fruit and vegetables...
My second resolution is...
I plan to take up a new hobby...
Last but not least, ...
I am sure my resolutions can come true if I...
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While-writing
Here I want to share my New Year’s resolutions with you.
My first resolution is about improving my physical health. Health is better than wealth. I am going to eat more healthily and get more exercise. Besides running, I plan to take up a new hobby, like swimming. My second resolution has to do with my parents. They’re quite busy every day. I am going to help them with housework when I’m free. So I can improve my relationship with them. Last but not least, I’m not good at maths, so I am going to listen to the teacher more carefully in class and work harder than before.
Where there’s a will, there’s a way. I’m sure I can keep my resolutions if I try my best.
Post-writing
04
Show time
Post-writing
项目 标准 自我评价 同伴评价 教师评价
结构
(1-2分) 段落合理,结构完整
衔接自然
内容
(6-7分) 要点:至少写出3个计划
语言
(3-4分) 时态:一般将来时为主
语法正确,拼写准确
卷面
(1-2分) 书写工整
Language points
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练
词
讲
例
Language points
draw
v. 画;进行,作(比较或对比);吸引;拉(动)
draw a picture 画画
draw to a close 即将结束
翻译:会议快结束了。
The meeting was drawing to a close .
Summary
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Summary
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Beginning
Body
Ending
The New Year is coming soon. I hope to make the next year better, so I am going to make three resolutions.
My first resolution is about improving...
I am going to eat more fruit and vegetables...
My second resolution is...
I plan to take up a new hobby...
Last but not least, ...
I am sure my resolutions can come true if I...
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Unit 6 Writing
Exercises
07
Exercises
1.In spring, we can see leaves turn green and everything seems _________ (energy) and active.
2. I spent too much time looking for my keys. ________ (final), I found them under my bed.
3.Having a good ___________ (relation) with your friends is very important in your life.
energetic
Finally
relationship
用括号内所给单词的正确形式填空。
Exercises
4.To develop children’s __________ (confident), parents should give them more chances.
5.The ________ (designer) of her dress is quite similar to mine , but the clothing material is different.
confidence
design
Homework
08
Homework
必做:
1. 熟读3a三遍;
2. 修改作文,写到作业本上。
选做:
拍摄一个英文“我的新年决心”vlog,和朋友分享。
感
谢
观
看
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