Unit 5 Working the Land读后续写片段式练习-2027届高三英语人教版选择性必修第一册

人教版选择性必修第一册 · 读后续写片段式训练 Unit 5 Working the Land 劳作与土地 片段式阶梯训练（实用版） 本练围绕“Working the Land 劳作与土地”单元主题，从课本提取 5 个可用于续写的“人物/农耕”语块，按六步阶梯推进。每语块只点一处最易错的坑，全程提供写作支架与评价量表，避免机械堆砌，可直接用于课堂讲练或自习。 适用对象 建议时长 使用方式 配套 高二/高三学生、备课教师 课堂 1 课时 / 自习 30 min 个人自学 · 小组互评 · 课堂讲练 本单元课文 + 动作/环境描写表达库 Step 1　情境感知：先读进去，再学出来 读下面这个小故事（约 100–120 词）。它把本单元 5 个语块“藏”进了一段真实叙事里——先感受它们在故事里“干什么用”，比直接背例句更有效。 (1) Old Liang, known as the guardian of the terraces, still climbs at dawn. (2) What concerned him most was that the young had left the land to the city. He was (3) convinced that the soil could feed them again. His new rice grew (4) 20% taller than the old variety, golden and stubborn. (5) It is estimated that a thousand families still eat from his fields — a quiet promise kept to the earth. ◆ 读后引导（不做空泛“找句式”，做有意义的两问） 1. 故事里 5 处语块，各承担什么功能：身份称号 / 内心牵挂 / 笃定态度 / 超越显特质 / 数据收束？哪一句最适合做“人物出场”？ 2. 哪一处最让你“看见”劳作？请结合具体细节（晨爬的梯田、金色的固执、对大地的承诺）来谈，而不是只套句式。 Step 2　语块建构·五金库：一个语块 = 一张“功能卡” 下面 5 个语块，每个都按“含义 → 续写功能 → 搭配锦囊 → 易错提醒 → 即时小练”五栏展开。重点不在“背得多”，而在“用得对”——每个语块只标一处最常见错误。 语块 1　known as　被称为……（过去分词作定语/同位）以……闻名；被称为…… 课本原句：Yuan Longping, known as the 'father of hybrid rice', devoted his life to the fields. 【续写功能】续写介绍人物出场时，known as / known for 比 He was called 更简洁、有分量。 【搭配锦囊】known as + 称号（被称为）；known for + 原因（以…闻名）。 ⚠ 直击易错（本语块最常踩的坑）　 known 拼写：k-n-o-w-n，注意 w（不是 knowed）； as 接“被称为什么”，for 接“因什么闻名”； 过去分词作定语，修饰前面的人/物。 ◆ 即时小练（1 题，题型轮换，不刷量） 1. 填空：The old farmer, ______________（被称为“梯田守护者”）, still works at dawn. 语块 2　what concerned him most was that ...　最让他担忧的（牵挂的）是 课本原句：However, what concerned him most was that farmers still went hungry. 【续写功能】续写要写“人物心里最重的那根刺”时，what concerned him most was that ... 比 He worried that 更书面、有重量。 【搭配锦囊】What concerned + 宾语 + most was that + 句子（what 引导主语从句）。 ⚠ 直击易错（本语块最常踩的坑）　 what 引导主语从句，谓语用单数 was（不写 were）； concerned 拼写：con-cerned，双 n 不双 c； that 后接完整句子作表语。 ◆ 即时小练（1 题，题型轮换，不刷量） 2. 填空：______________（最让她牵挂的）was that the children had no school. 语块 3　be convinced that ...　坚信……；确信……（态度/决心） 课本原句：Yuan was convinced that the answer could be found in hybrid rice. 【续写功能】续写写人物“认准一件事、不肯动摇”时，be convinced that 比 he believed 更显笃定。 【搭配锦囊】be convinced that + 句子（convinced 表“坚信”，非“被说服”动作）。 ⚠ 直击易错（本语块最常踩的坑）　 convinced 拼写：con-vinced（不是 convinved，单 n）； be convinced that 表状态“坚信”，区别于 be convinced by（被…说服）； that 后接完整句子。 ◆ 即时小练（1 题，题型轮换，不刷量） 3. 填空：She ______________（坚信）hard work would pay off. 语块 4　比较级 + than 常规作物/以往（突出优势）　比……更……（比较中显特质） 课本原句：One characteristic of hybrids is that they can yield 20% more than conventional crops. 【续写功能】续写写“蜕变/超越”时，A is + 比较级 + than B 是点明“今非昔比”最自然的句式。 【搭配锦囊】比较级 + than + 比较对象（more/larger/stronger ... than）。 ⚠ 直击易错（本语块最常踩的坑）　 比较级须用 more/-er 形式，than 后接比较对象（对称）； 比较双方须同类（hybrids 比 crops，不比 farming）； than 后代词书面用主格（than he）。 ◆ 即时小练（1 题，题型轮换，不刷量） 4. 填空：The new seed grew ______________（比旧种更高）. 语块 5　it is estimated that ...　据估计……；估算……（数据/影响收尾） 课本原句：Today, it is estimated that about 60 percent of rice eaten in China is hybrid. 【续写功能】续写结尾用数据“收口”影响时，it is estimated that 比 I think 更客观、有说服力。 【搭配锦囊】It is estimated that + 句子（it 形式主语，that 引导真主语）。 ⚠ 直击易错（本语块最常踩的坑）　 estimated 拼写：es-ti-ma-ted，注意 tim（不是 estamated）； it 形式主语，that 后接完整句子； 常用于结尾“用数据说话”，显严谨。 ◆ 即时小练（1 题，题型轮换，不刷量） 5. 填空：______________（据估计）over a billion people benefit from his work. 🔎 直击重难点：known as vs known for；be convinced that vs be convinced by　 known as + 称号（被称为“之父”）；known for + 原因（以…闻名）； be convinced that + 句子（坚信）；be convinced by + 人/事（被…说服）； 别混：as/for 看“被称为什么/因什么”，that/by 看“坚信/被说服”。 Step 3　衔接迁移·语块串烧：把 5 个语块“缝”进一段续写 孤立造句容易，放进连贯段落才见真功夫。读下面这段微续写，用本单元语块补全 5 处空缺——注意前后逻辑与语法形式。 Old Liang, (1)______________（被称为“梯田守护者”）, still climbs at dawn. (2)______________（最让他牵挂的）was that the young left the land. He was (3)______________（坚信）the terraces could feed them again. His new rice yielded (4)______________（比老品种高出两成）. Today (5)______________（据估计）a thousand families still eat from his fields. 提示：① known as + 称号 ② What concerned ... most was that（was 单数）③ be convinced that ④ 比较级 + than ⑤ it is estimated that（estimated 拼写） Step 4　微续写实战（支架式）：从“会用语块”到“写出好片段” 顺着 Step 1 的故事情境，完成约 80–100 词的微片段（可另设人物/场景，但须用上本单元 5 个语块）。 不要提笔就写。先借下面的“提纲支架 + 词汇银行”搭好脚手架，再动笔；写完用“评价量表”自评。 ◆ ① 提纲支架（每段该干什么、用哪个语块） 段落 写作任务 建议调用的语块 开头 Begin 人物出场，身份/称号 known as 发展 Develop 牵挂 + 笃定（内心驱动力） what concerned him most / be convinced that 结尾 End 超越 + 数据收束 比较级 + than / it is estimated that ◆ ② 词汇银行（从动作 / 环境描写库精选，提升文采） 📚 可直接化用的地道表达　 【田间意象】The terraces stepped down the hill like pages of a green book. / Sweat fell and was answered by the soil. 【动作细节】He bent until his shadow merged with the earth. / Her hands, cracked as riverbed, still knew every seed. 【氛围烘托】At dusk the field exhaled, and the day's work settled into silence. / The wind carried the smell of turned earth, honest and warm. 【金句】To work the land is to make a quiet promise to the future. / A seed kept is a hope delayed; a seed sown is a hope begun. ◆ ③ 学生写作区 在此完成 80–100 词的微片段，尽量用上提纲里的 4–5 个语块，并至少借用“词汇银行”中 1 处描写： ◆ ④ 评价量表（自评 / 互评通用） 维度 优秀 4 达标 3 待改进 2 得分 内容完整 三段清晰，出场—牵挂—收束完整 基本完整 缺环节 语块运用 准确使用 ≥4 个本单元语块 用对 2–3 个 误用 / 少用 细节生动 有田间/动作/汗水细节，画面感强 略有描写 平铺 衔接自然 内心/数据过渡自然 基本连贯 跳跃 主题升华 点明“劳作/土地”立意 略有点题 未升华 🔍 自评 / 互评指引　 圈出用到的本单元语块，核对形式：known as/for、what concerned ... most was（单数）、convinced 拼写、比较级+than、estimated 拼写； 用“△”标一处最动人的田间细节，用“○”标一句点题句； 同伴互评：朗读片段，看“土地情怀”是否自然不煽情。 参考答案与解析 ◆ Step 1 读后引导（开放式，参考要点） 1. 功能对应：(1) known as——身份称号；(2) what concerned him most——内心牵挂；(3) be convinced that——笃定态度；(4) 比较级 + than——超越显特质；(5) it is estimated that——数据收束。最适合开头的是 (1)。 2. 开放作答，能结合具体细节（汗、裂手、梯田如书）谈“劳作”即可。 ◆ Step 2 即时小练答案 + 易错提醒 1. The old farmer, known as the 'guardian of the terraces', still works at dawn.（known as + 称号） 2. What concerned her most was that the children had no school.（was 单数；concerned 双n） 3. She was convinced that hard work would pay off.（convinced 单n） 4. The new seed grew 20% taller than the old variety.（比较级 + than） 5. It is estimated that over a billion people benefit from his work.（estimated 拼写） ◆ Step 3 语块串烧补全 (1) known as the guardian of the terraces　(2) What concerned him most (3) convinced that　(4) 20% more than the old variety (5) it is estimated that ◆ Step 4 微续写范文（≈95 词）+ 亮点标注 Old Liang, known as the guardian of the terraces (known as · 身份称号), still climbs at dawn. What concerned him most (what concerned him most · 内心牵挂) was that the young had left the land. He was convinced that (be convinced that · 笃定) the fields could feed them again. His new rice yielded 20% more than the old variety (比较级 + than · 超越), golden and stubborn. Today it is estimated that (it is estimated that · 数据收束) a thousand families still eat from his soil — and I knew: to work the land is to make a quiet promise to the future. 亮点：① 五语块串成“出场—牵挂—笃定—超越—收束”闭环；② 细节（汗、裂手、金色的固执）以劳作衬情；③ 末句金句点题“劳作是对未来的安静承诺”；④ 衔接 and / today 自然。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $