2027届高考英语读后续写专项复习 傍晚迷路导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In August last year, my parents and I visited our relatives in Princeton Junction, New Jersey. Every day I enjoyed walking a circular route starting from their house. One evening I decided to be adventurous and changed from my regular way — I was looking forward to a longer walk, confident that I would be able to find my way back. My walk took me beyond the living area and into a beautiful place with an expanse of fields on both sides of the road. With the sun beginning to set, it was really a wonderful sight. After about thirty minutes, I noticed that I was not heading back in the direction I had come. I searched for my mobile phone to get help, but it turned out to be left at home. However, I remained calm. Although there weren't any people about, there was some traffic and I was sure that someone would stop and point me in the right direction. As each car or truck came, I stopped and waved, but time after time each one passed me by. No one seemed to feel any pity for me. About forty minutes later, I was beginning to feel worried. There was no one in sight and my family was completely in the dark as to my position. When I just gave up all hope, a black SUV approached me and stopped. A mother and daughter were willing to help. I told them I was lost and gave them my address. The mother pointed to a turning a little further down the road and told me I was pretty close to home. Expressing my thanks, I started off at a fast pace. I had been walking for about five minutes when I heard a car drive up behind me and stop. It was the mother and daughter again. They realized that they had not given me the correct direction. 注意：续写词数应为150左右；请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 They offered to drop me home, and I was so grateful for their help. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ After arriving at my relatives' house, I turned around to thank them once more. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 一、文本分析 1. 角色 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 2. 视角 第＿＿＿人称 3. 时空线 　　去年八月，我和父母去新泽西亲戚家，我习惯出门环形散步→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→一天傍晚我尝试走新路线，欣赏田野日落景色，不久发现迷路，手机忘在家里→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→我挥手拦车求助，车辆都径直驶过，四十分钟后我开始焦虑，家人不知道我的位置→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→就在绝望时，一对母女开黑色SUV停下帮忙，她们指错方向，开车折返追上我→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写）她们提出送我回家，我十分感激→（续写）到达亲戚家后，我再次转身向她们道谢 4. 细节问答 Why did the writer get lost?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ What trouble did the writer have when lost?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ What did the writer do to ask for help?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ Why did the mother and daughter catch up with the writer?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 5. 情节线 　　我在亲戚家附近散步，冒险更换路线，欣赏田野美景，不慎迷路，手机落在家中→＿＿＿→我挥手拦车求助，无人停下，渐渐焦虑，陷入无助→＿＿＿→一对母女停车指路，但方向出错，她们意识到问题，开车追上我→＿＿＿→（续写）母女主动提出送我回家，我满心感激→（续写）抵达亲戚家，我再次向热心母女表达感谢 6. 情感线 　　I: excited and confident→＿＿＿＿＿＿→calm→＿＿＿＿＿＿→hopeless→＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写）；the mother and daughter: warm and responsible→＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　英文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 8. 句式 宾语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 状语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 非谓语动词：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 并列句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 定语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 9. 本文主题 　　温情助人类：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: They offered to drop me home, and I was so grateful for their help. 　　衔接句1——What happened on the way back to my relatives' house? 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ Paragraph 2: After arriving at my relatives' house, I turned around to thank them once more. 　　衔接句2——How did my family react and what lesson did I learn? 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 三. 段落续写框架 　　第一段：她们提出开车送我回家，我十分感激她们的帮助。 　　→①＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→②＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→③＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿； 　　第二段：到达亲戚家后，我转过身再次向她们道谢。 　　→④＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→⑤＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→⑥＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿。 四. 段落续写 They offered to drop me home, and I was so grateful for their help. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ After arriving at my relatives' house, I turned around to thank them once more. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1. 角色 　　叙事者“我”：在亲戚家散步，更换路线后迷路，冷静求助；一对陌生母女：热心善良，发现指错路后折返，主动开车送我回家；父母与亲戚：在家等候，为迷路的我担心。 2. 视角 　　第一人称 3. 时空线 　　去年八月，我和父母去新泽西亲戚家，我习惯出门环形散步→一天傍晚我尝试走新路线，欣赏田野日落景色，不久发现迷路，手机忘在家里→我挥手拦车求助，车辆都径直驶过，四十分钟后我开始焦虑，家人不知道我的位置→就在绝望时，一对母女开黑色SUV停下帮忙，她们指错方向，开车折返追上我→（续写）她们提出送我回家，我十分感激→（续写）到达亲戚家后，我再次转身向她们道谢 4. 细节问答 　　Why did the writer get lost?：He chose a new adventurous route and lost his way while walking. 　　What trouble did the writer have when lost?：He left his phone at home and no cars stopped to give help. 　　What did the writer do to ask for help?：He stopped and waved to passing cars for directions. 　　Why did the mother and daughter catch up with the writer?：They found they had given the wrong direction. 5. 情节线（约80字） 　　去年八月，我在新泽西亲戚家散步，冒险更换路线，欣赏田野美景后迷路，手机遗落家中。我挥手拦车求助却无人停下，渐渐焦虑无助。一对母女停车指路，发现方向有误后折返追上我，主动开车送我回家。到家后，我再次向她们致谢。 6. 情感线 　　I: excited and confident→calm→anxious and hopeless→（续写）grateful and relieved；the mother and daughter: warm and responsible→（续写）glad to help 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：作者傍晚散步，尝试新路线而迷路，手机忘在家中，拦车求助无果，陷入担忧。绝望之际一对母女热心指路，意识到指错方向后折返回来，主动开车送作者回到亲戚住处。这次经历让作者感受到陌生人的善意，铭记这份温暖。 　　英文：While visiting relatives, the writer took a new walking route and got lost without a phone. He waved to passing cars but nobody stopped. Luckily, a mother and daughter tried to help. Realizing they gave wrong directions, they returned and drove him safely home. The writer was deeply touched by their kindness. 8. 句式 　　宾语从句：I was sure that someone would stop and point me in the right direction. 　　状语从句：When I just gave up all hope, a black SUV approached me and stopped. 　　非谓语动词：Expressing my thanks, I started off at a fast pace. 　　并列句：The sun began to set, and the sight of fields was amazing. 　　定语从句：The route that I chose led me far away from the neighborhood. 9. 本文主题 　　温情助人类：陌生人之间的善意十分珍贵；做人要有责任心，发现失误及时补救；外出远行要做好准备，不要随意独自冒险。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: They offered to drop me home, and I was so grateful for their help. 　　衔接句1——What happened on the way back to my relatives' house? 　　I got into their car. We chatted gently and they safely drove me toward my relatives' home. Paragraph 2: After arriving at my relatives' house, I turned around to thank them once more. 　　衔接句2——How did my family react and what lesson did I learn? 　　My worried family rushed out. I learned that kindness and responsibility exist among strangers. 三. 段落续写框架 　　第一段：她们提出开车送我回家，我十分感激她们的帮助。 　　→①我欣然上车，一路上我们轻松交谈，欣赏路边黄昏景色→②母女细心确认地址，专心开车，很快靠近目的地→③悬着的心终于放下，内心满是感动； 　　第二段：到达亲戚家后，我转过身再次向她们道谢。 　　→④焦急等待的家人连忙跑出门，见到我平安归来十分欣慰→⑤我真诚感谢母女二人，她们笑着说只是举手之劳→⑥这件事让我感受到陌生人的善意，也提醒我外出不可盲目冒险。 4. 段落续写 Paragraph 1: They offered to drop me home, and I was so grateful for their help. I quickly got into their SUV, my heart still beating fast after the wrong turn. During the short ride, we talked casually about the beautiful countryside scenery. Green fields spread along the road. The mother kept checking the address carefully on her phone to make sure we wouldn’t take a wrong turn again. Her daughter chatted softly with me to ease my tension. Watching the road ahead, I felt a huge wave of relief wash over me. Paragraph 2: After arriving at my relatives' house, I turned around to thank them once more. My parents and relatives rushed out anxiously, greatly relieved to see me safe and sound. I expressed my sincere gratitude to the kind mother and daughter for taking the trouble to send me back. They smiled warmly and said they just did what they should do. This unforgettable experience taught me that true kindness lies in taking responsibility and correcting mistakes, even when it brings extra trouble. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $