风雨江城，与你同行——2027届武汉专版高三一轮慰问信复习讲义

风雨江城，与你同行 ——武汉专版高三一轮慰问信复习讲义 【使用说明】本讲义按"考什么→一轮搭框架→二轮升格→参考答案"四步编排。A组词块句型为全员必背；B组熟词生义与构词法供中等以上学生拔优。任务A全员限时完成，任务B供尖子生加餐。建议一课时走完一轮框架，半课时集中讲评升格对比。武汉本土素材（抗洪官兵、高温环卫工人、暴雨公交司机、外卖小哥、汉口江滩、东湖大道、黄鹤楼）贯穿始终，让学生有话可写。 一、这条线考什么 （一）慰问信的功能定位 慰问信是在他人遭遇困难、辛劳或伤痛时表达关怀、肯定与祝福的应用文。核心三要素：为何慰问、对方做了什么、我们如何牵挂。高考收信人多为一线工作者、遭遇挫折的同学或受灾地区的朋友，语气必须温暖真诚，切忌空喊口号。 （二）高考怎么考 全国卷虽未以"慰问信"为题单独命题，但"向他人表达关怀与感谢"这一功能反复融入复合写作任务——欢送外教、感谢志愿者、慰问受灾群众等题均要求学生写出得体的关怀段落。随着命题强调"立德树人"与时代关怀，慰问类书信（抗洪、抗疫、高温劳动者）是高频隐形考点。武汉经历过2020抗疫、每年梅汛抗洪、夏季极端高温，慰问信本土素材天然丰富。 （三）第五档评分要点（13—15分） ① 覆盖全部内容要点；② 应用较多语法结构和词汇；③ 少量语言错误系尝试复杂结构所致；④ 衔接紧凑、逻辑清晰；⑤ 完全达到写作交际目的。 （四）学生最容易丢分的地方 【考查重点】对方事迹具体、情感真挚不空洞、语气温暖有度、格式规范。 【常见毛病】① 通篇"We love you"无具体事迹；② 语气太正式像公文；③ 空喊口号（You are heroes!）没有细节；④ 过度煽情让人起鸡皮疙瘩；⑤ 忘了说"请照顾好自己"。 二、一轮搭框架 （一）慰问信三段式结构 开头段：得知消息+表达牵挂（1—2句，开门见山）； 主体段：肯定对方具体付出+表达理解（这一段是拉开分差的关键，必须写具体细节，3—4句）； 结尾段：祝福平安+期盼归来（1—2句，落到"请照顾好自己"）。 （二）核心词块（按功能排，带★为推荐必背） ◆ 开篇·得知消息+表达慰问 1. I was deeply concerned when I heard that... 听说……我深感牵挂 ★ 2. I am writing to express my deepest sympathy to... 我写信向……表达最深切的慰问 3. We are thinking of you at this difficult time. 在此艰难时刻我们与你们同在 ★ 4. Please accept our heartfelt concern. 请接受我们衷心的关怀 5. Learning that you are fighting on the front line, I am writing to extend our sincere sympathy and respect. 得知你们奋战在一线，我写信表达诚挚的慰问和敬意 ★ 6. It is with a mixture of admiration and concern that I write this letter. 我怀着钦佩与牵挂交织之情写这封信 7. On behalf of all the students, I want to say how much we appreciate what you are doing. 我谨代表全体同学，向你们所做的一切表示深深感谢 ◆ 主体·肯定付出+表达理解 8. We know how hard you have been working. 我们知道你们一直很辛苦 9. You have been standing in the water for hours. 你们已在水中站了数小时 10. Your efforts have kept us safe. 你们的努力守护了我们的安全 ★ 11. We appreciate your devotion and sacrifice. 我们感激你们的奉献和牺牲 12. Day and night, you have patrolled the levees without a moment's rest. 你们日夜巡逻堤坝，风雨无阻 ★ 13. What touches us most is that you never complain, even when your uniforms are soaked through. 最让我们感动的是你们从不抱怨，即使浑身湿透 ★ 14. It is people like you who hold back the floodwaters and hold together this city. 正是你们这样的人挡住了洪水、凝聚了这座城市 ★ 15. Every sandbag you carry means far more than any slogan. 你们扛的每一袋沙，都比任何口号实在 16. We cannot begin to imagine the exhaustion you must feel after a twelve-hour shift. 我们无法想象你们连续工作十二小时后的疲惫 17. What touches us most is that you wave back at every car that passes, even when the thermometer reads 40 degrees. 最让我们感动的是你们对每辆经过的车挥手，即使温度计显示40度 ◆ 结尾·祝福+期盼平安 18. Please take good care of yourselves. 请一定照顾好自己 ★ 19. We hope you stay safe and healthy. 希望你们平安健康 20. Thank you again for everything you do. 再次感谢你们所做的一切 21. We are looking forward to your safe return. 我们期待你们平安归来 ★ 22. As the water recedes and the sun returns, we hope you can finally get a warm meal and a good night's sleep. 当水位退去阳光重现，希望你们终于能吃上一顿热饭、睡个好觉 ★ 23. May you stay dry during the rain and stay cool in the heat. 愿你们雨中别淋着、暑中别热着 24. We will never forget those nights you spent away from your own families to protect ours. 我们永远不会忘记你们离开自己家人来守护我们的那些夜晚 （三）核心句型（通用句+武汉迁移+仿写） 句型1（现在分词开篇）：Learning that you are..., I am writing to extend our sincere sympathy. 【通用】Learning that you are recovering from the injury, I am writing to extend our sincere sympathy and hope for a speedy recovery. 【武汉迁移】Learning that you are fighting on the front line of flood control along the Yangtze, I am writing to extend our sincere sympathy and respect to every one of you. 【仿写】Learning that you are ____________________, I am writing to ____________________. 句型2（代表群众）：On behalf of..., I want to say how much we appreciate... 【通用】On behalf of the residents, I want to say how much we appreciate what you are doing for the community. 【武汉迁移】On behalf of the students of Wuhan No. 2 High School, I want to say how much we appreciate what you are doing to keep our city clean at 4 a.m. in the July heat. 【仿写】On behalf of ____________________, I want to say how much we ____________________. 句型3（排比+现在分词）：Day and night, you have..., braving... 【通用】Day and night, the nurses have worked long shifts, braving the risk of infection. 【武汉迁移】Day and night, you have patrolled the levees at Wuhan's Hankou riverfront, braving both the pouring rain and the rising Yangtze water. 【仿写】Day and night, you have ____________________, braving ____________________. 句型4（主语从句）：What touches us most is that... 【通用】What touches us most is that you remember every patient's name, even after a twelve-hour shift. 【武汉迁移】What touches us most is that you wave back at every passing car, even when the thermometer reads 40 degrees on the East Lake Avenue. 【仿写】What touches us most is that ____________________. 句型5（强调句）：It is people like you who... 【通用】It is people like you who make this city a better place to live. 【武汉迁移】It is people like you who hold back the floodwaters on the Yangtze and keep Wuhan dry when the sky falls. 【仿写】It is people like you who ____________________. 句型6（具体动作对比）：Every..., speaks louder than any slogan. 【通用】Every extra hour you spend tutoring the children speaks louder than any slogan about education. 【武汉迁移】Every broom you push through the early-morning fog along Jiangtan speaks louder than any slogan about a civilized city. 【仿写】Every ____________________ you ____________________ speaks louder than any slogan. 句型7（共情）：We cannot begin to imagine... 【通用】We cannot begin to imagine how tiring it must be to stand all day. 【武汉迁移】We cannot begin to imagine how heavy your rain-soaked uniforms must feel after a long night on duty. 【仿写】We cannot begin to imagine ____________________. 句型8（时间状语祝愿）：As the..., we hope you can finally... 【通用】As the exam season ends, we hope you can finally take a break. 【武汉迁移】As the water level along the Yangtze gradually falls, we hope you can finally sit down to a hot meal and a full night's sleep. 【仿写】As the ____________________, we hope you can finally ____________________. （四）A组·词句迁移过关练 1. 用所给词的适当形式填空（答案写在横线上） (1) ______ (learn) that you are fighting on the flood front, I am writing to extend our sympathy. _______________ (2) On behalf of the students, I want to say how much we ______ (appreciation) what you do. _______________ (3) Day and night, you have ______ (patrol) the levees, braving the downpour. _______________ (4) What ______ (touch) us most is that you never complain. _______________ (5) It is people like you ______ hold back the floodwaters. _______________ (6) Every sandbag you ______ (carry) speaks louder than any slogan. _______________ (7) We cannot begin ______ (imagine) the exhaustion you feel. _______________ (8) As the water ______ (recede), we hope you can get some rest. _______________ (9) May you stay ______ (dry) and know that the city stands behind you. _______________ (10) We will never forget the ______ (sacrifice) you have made. _______________ 2. 单句翻译（用括号里给的句型，写在横线上） (1) 得知你们奋战在长江抗洪一线，我写信向你们每一位表达诚挚的慰问和敬意。（Learning that...） ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ (2) 最让我们感动的是你们对每辆经过的车挥手，即使温度计显示40度。（What touches us most is that...） ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ (3) 正是你们这样的人挡住了洪水，凝聚了这座城市。（It is people like you who...） ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ (4) 当水位逐步回落，希望你们终于能坐下吃顿热饭、睡个整觉。（As the..., we hope...） ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ (5) 我们永远不会忘记你们离开自己家人来守护我们的那些夜晚。（We will never forget...） ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 语气得体判断（合适的打√，不合适的改一改） (1) You are the greatest heroes in the world! （ ） 修改：________________________________________ (2) We hope you can finally get a hot meal and a good night's sleep. （ ） (3) We hereby express our deepest gratitude to you. （ ） 修改：________________________________________ (4) You should have taken better care of yourselves. （ ） 修改：________________________________________ (5) Please remember to stay dry and stay strong. （ ） （五）B组·熟词生义与构词法（中等以上必做） 从高考真题和课本出发，练几个慰问信高频词的"另一面"。注意：加粗词是你要推断词义的目标。 1. When the heavy rain pounded Wuhan day and night, you were the first to stand in harm's way. 句中 pound 在此处作______词，意思是________。（提示：不是"磅"这个重量单位） 2. No words can fully convey the warmth you have brought to this city. 句中 convey 意思是________，它的名词形式是________。 3. Your relentless effort in the August heat has kept our streets clean. relentless 是由 relent（变温和、减弱）+ less 构成的形容词，意思是________。类似构词的词还有：________（举一个）。 4. We cannot begin to imagine the exhaustion you must feel after a twelve-hour shift. 句中 exhaustion 词性是______，意思是________。它的形容词形式是________。 5. Even when your uniforms are soaked through, you never complain. 句中 soaked 是过去分词作形容词，意思是________。soak 的本义是"浸泡"，be soaked through 意思是"________"。 6. It is people like you who hold back the floodwaters and keep our city safe. 句中 hold back 是短语动词，意思是________。hold back 还有一个意思是"犹豫、退缩"，请用这个意思造一个句子：________。 7. Every sandbag you carry and every watch you stand means far more than any slogan. 句中 stand 在此处意思是________，不是"站立"。stand a watch 是固定搭配，意思是"________"。 8. As the water recedes and the sun returns, we hope you can finally rest. 句中 recede 意思是________，它的反义词是________（提示：水"上涨"）。 三、二轮升格 （一）为什么你的慰问信总是"空"？ 很多同学写慰问信，主体段只有一句"You worked hard and we are grateful."——这就是上不了第五档的病根。第五档慰问信的主体段必须有"具体细节+情感升华"两层：先写一个你亲眼见过的细节（几点起床、在哪个地方、穿什么、做什么动作），再用一个高级句型升华一下。空喊"You are heroes"是慰问信最大的忌讳。 （二）升格对比·以"给抗洪官兵写慰问信"为例 【初稿·第四档水平】 Dear Soldiers, I heard you are fighting the flood. You worked very hard and we are grateful. Please take care. Good luck. Yours, Li Hua （问题：主体只有一句话，没有具体细节，像发电报；全文30词，要点覆盖不全；还写错了格式——慰问信可以用书信格式但语气要落地） 【升格稿·第五档水平】 Dear Soldiers, Learning that you are fighting on the front line of flood control along the Yangtze in Wuhan, I am writing on behalf of my school to extend our sincere sympathy and respect. Day and night, you have patrolled the Hankou riverfront levees, braving both the pouring rain and the rising water. What touches us most is that you never complain, even when your uniforms are soaked through and your lips are chapped. It is people like you who hold back the floodwaters and keep our city safe. Every sandbag you carry means far more than any slogan. As the water gradually falls, we hope you can finally get a hot meal and a good night's sleep. Please take care of yourselves—you are in our thoughts every day. Yours sincerely, Li Hua （升格后约100词，要点全覆盖） 【升格了什么？】 ① 开头用 Learning that 现在分词结构替代 I heard； ② 主体加了具体细节（汉口江滩巡逻、浑身湿透、嘴唇干裂、扛沙袋），不再空说 hard work； ③ 加了 What touches us most is that... 主语从句和 It is people like you who... 强调句； ④ 结尾用 As the water gradually falls 时间状语+具体祝愿（热饭、整觉），替代干巴巴的 Good luck； ⑤ 全程没喊一句"You are heroes"，但敬意自然出来了。 （三）段落升格小练 把下面这句单薄的主体句，扩写成3—4句丰满段落（要有具体细节，至少用一个高级句型）。 原句：You worked very hard in the heat and we are grateful. ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 四、实战演练·分层写作 任务A（全员必做·中等）给抗洪官兵写慰问信 【题目】 假定你是李华，长江武汉段水位超警戒，解放军官兵在汉口江滩昼夜值守。请给他们写一封慰问信，内容包括：①表达牵挂与敬意；②肯定他们的具体付出；③祝福他们平安。词数80左右。 【审题提示】 慰问对象：官兵；语气：庄重有温度，不空喊口号；三段式：开头牵挂→主体写具体付出（你在新闻里/上学路上看到的）→结尾祝福平安。 【参考范文】 Dear Soldiers, Learning that you are fighting on the front line of flood control along the Yangtze in Wuhan, I am writing on behalf of my school to extend our sincere sympathy and respect. Day and night, you have patrolled the Hankou riverfront levees, braving both the pouring rain and the rising water. What touches us most is that you never complain, even when your uniforms are soaked through. It is people like you who hold back the floodwaters and keep our city safe. As the water gradually falls, we hope you can finally get a hot meal and a good night's sleep. Please take care of yourselves—you are in our thoughts every day. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 任务B（尖子生加餐·高层）给高温环卫工人写慰问信 【题目】 假定你是李华，武汉七月气温连续40℃以上，环卫工人仍凌晨四点上街清扫。请给他们写一封慰问信，内容包括：①表达牵挂；②具体描述他们的辛劳（结合你上学路上的观察）；③祝福并呼吁同学尊重劳动。词数100左右。 【审题提示】 慰问对象：环卫工人；语气：亲近有敬意；高分策略：上学路上观察开头+主语从句说细节+强调句升华+May祝愿句结尾。 【参考范文】 Dear Workers, Every morning on my way to school, I see you already sweeping the streets near Jiangtan when the sun has not yet risen and the thermometer already reads 35 degrees. Learning that the temperature has stayed above 40°C for over a week, I am writing to tell you how much we care. What touches us most is that you wave back at every passing car, even when your shirts are soaked through and your lips are chapped. It is people like you who keep Wuhan spotless in the worst of the July heat. We noticed you even gave up your break to help an old lady carry her groceries across the street. May you stay cool, stay safe, and know that the entire city is grateful. We will never forget. Yours gratefully, Li Hua 【亮点可迁移】 ① Every morning I see you already...用自己上学路上的观察开头，比空泛的"We know you work hard"实在；② What touches us most is that...主语从句落到具体动作；③ It is people like you who...强调句升华；④ May you stay cool...祝愿句收尾；⑤ 全程没喊一句"You are heroes"，但敬意自然出来了。 任务C（课后巩固）给暴雨天公交司机写慰问信 【题目】 假定你是李华，上周武汉暴雨，公交司机张师傅在积水路段安全运送乘客。请给他写一封慰问信，内容包括：①表达感谢与牵挂；②描述他的暖心举动（你亲眼所见）；③祝福。词数80左右。 【参考范文】 Dear Mr. Zhang, I was on your bus last Thursday when the rain flooded the roads near the Yellow Crane Tower. Seeing that you got off to guide the passengers through the deep water, I wanted to write and say thank you. What touched me most was that you made sure every elderly passenger got off safely before you even thought about yourself. It is drivers like you who make even the worst storms feel manageable. We know how exhausting it must be to drive through that water for hours. Please take care, and stay dry. We are grateful for you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【当堂写作】 中等生：用任务A的框架，自选一个慰问对象（抗洪官兵/环卫工人/公交司机/外卖小哥）写一篇80词左右的慰问信。 优等生：参考任务B，至少用上3个高级句型，写一封慰问高温下外卖小哥的信，100词左右。 写作区： Dear ____________________, Yours, Li Hua 五、参考答案 （一）A组·词块填空答案 1. Learning（现在分词作状语，表"得知……"，句首大写；逗号后主句主语是I，和learn是主动关系） 2. appreciate（how much后接动词原形；别填appreciation——how much已经是感叹结构，需要动词） 3. have patrolled（现在完成时，have后接过去分词；别填patrol） 4. touches（what作主语谓语用单数；what touches us most是主语从句，谓语用第三人称单数） 5. who（强调句It is...who...，强调人用who；that也不算错但who更地道） 6. carry（一般现在时，you carry是定语从句修饰sandbag，主语是you；别填carries） 7. to imagine（cannot begin to do sth.固定搭配，"简直无法想象"；别填imagining） 8. recedes（一般现在时，主语water不可数，谓语加s；别填recede） 9. dry（stay后接形容词；别填dryly） 10. sacrifice（your后接名词；这里指总的牺牲，不可数） （二）A组·单句翻译参考 1. Learning that you are fighting on the front line of flood control along the Yangtze, I am writing to extend our sincere sympathy and respect to every one of you. 2. What touches us most is that you wave back at every passing car, even when the thermometer reads 40 degrees. 3. It is people like you who hold back the floodwaters and hold together this city. 4. As the water level gradually falls, we hope you can finally sit down to a hot meal and a full night's sleep. 5. We will never forget those nights you spent away from your own families to protect ours. （三）A组·语气得体答案 1. 不合适，过度煽情空喊口号。改为：We deeply appreciate your hard work on the levees. 2. 合适。 3. 不合适，太官方生硬。改为：We wanted to say thank you for everything you are doing. 4. 不合适，像指责。改为：We hope you remember to rest and take care of yourselves. 5. 合适。 （四）B组·熟词生义与构词法答案 1. 动词；（雨、雪等）猛烈袭击、连续敲打 2. 传达、表达；conveyance / conveyor（名词形式） 3. 不懈的、 relentless；如 careless / homeless / useless（-less 结尾表"无……的"） 4. 名词；疲惫、精疲力竭；exhausted 5. 湿透的；浑身湿透、湿到骨子里 6. 阻挡、抑制；造句示例：She held back her tears and smiled.（她忍住泪水笑了。） 7. 值守、站岗；站岗、值班 8. 退去、减弱；rise（上涨） （五）三、段落升格小练参考 What touches us most is that you keep sweeping the streets even when the thermometer reads 40 degrees. It is people like you who keep our city clean in the worst heat. We cannot begin to imagine how heavy your soaked uniforms must feel after a long shift. —— 全文完 —— 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $