内容正文:
江城有礼,信达天下
——武汉专版高三一轮建议信复习讲义(考情·方法·词句·迁移·分层写作)
一、考情透视
(一)建议信考什么
建议信就是就某个问题给对方提建议、出主意。高考常考“给朋友/同学/外教提建议”,核心不是命令对方,而是有理有据地说清楚“为什么这么建议”。
(二)真题回顾
2023年新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷:外教Ryan随机分组练口语,李华指出问题并提改进建议,80词左右。
近三年体裁:2023建议信、2022邀请信、2021投稿。建议信轮考概率高,且常和“问题解决”绑在一起考。
(三)第五档(13—15分)长什么样
① 要点全覆盖 ② 语法结构多样(定从、非谓语、倒装等) ③ 小错误是因为用了复杂结构 ④ 衔接紧凑 ⑤ 完全达到写作目的
【失分重灾区】要点遗漏、通篇简单句、语气生硬(You must...)、建议空泛无细节。
二、建议信四步法
Step 1 审题
圈出体裁、人称、时态、要点——一个都不能漏。建议信以一般现在时为主,第一人称写、第二人称提建议。
Step 2 构思(三段式)
开头:我为什么写信 → 主体:2—3条建议+每条理由 → 结尾:希望有用/期待回复
Step 3 行文
用词块句型把要点扩成句子,用First of all / Additionally / Last but not least串起来。
Step 4 检查(四查)
查要点→查语法(尤其虚拟语气)→查字数(70—100)→查语气(别用命令式)
三、核心词块库(基础版保分·升级版冲高分)
(一)开头段:表明目的
【基础版】
1. I'm writing to give you some suggestions on... 我写信就……提建议
2. I'm glad to hear that you... 听说你……很高兴
3. Here are some tips for you. 给你一些建议
4. I'd like to offer you some advice. 我想给你提些建议
5. You asked me for advice on... 你就……征求我的建议
【升级版】
6. Learning that..., I'm writing to share some practical suggestions. 得知……,我写信分享实用建议
7. It is with great pleasure that I offer you the following advice. 非常高兴给你以下建议
8. What follows are some suggestions that I believe will be helpful. 以下建议我认为会有帮助
9. I would like to extend my warmest welcome and offer a few suggestions regarding... 致以欢迎并就……提建议
10. Given your interest in..., I think the following advice may be useful. 鉴于你对……感兴趣,以下建议可能有用
(二)主体段:提建议+理由
【基础版】
11. First of all, you should... 首先你应该……
12. What's more, it's a good idea to... 另外……是个好主意
13. Last but not least, you'd better... 最后你最好……
14. I suggest that you (should)... 我建议你……
15. The reason is that... 原因是……
【升级版】
16. To begin with, it is highly recommended that you (should)... 首先强烈建议你……
17. Additionally, you may as well..., which... 此外你不妨……,这……
18. Another suggestion I would like to offer is that you should... 另一个建议是你应该……
19. It is also advisable that you (should)... 你还可以……
20. Not only will..., but it will also... 不仅能……还能……
(三)结尾段:表达期望
【基础版】
21. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. 希望建议有用
22. I'm looking forward to your early reply. 期待早日回复
23. Wish you a good time! 祝玩得愉快!
24. I do hope my advice will be of benefit to you. 真希望建议对你有益
25. Please let me know if you need more information. 需要更多信息请告诉我
【升级版】
26. I'd appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. 如能考虑我的建议将不胜感激
27. I am convinced that you will... 我相信你会……
28. May your... be filled with wonderful memories. 愿你的……充满美好回忆
29. Should you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me. 有问题随时联系我
30. I sincerely hope that the suggestions above will help you... 真诚希望以上建议能帮你……
(四)易错警示
① advice不可数,“一条建议”是a piece of advice,不能说an advice;
② suggest/advise/recommend/insist(坚持要求)+ that从句 → 虚拟语气(should)+do,should可省;
③ insist表“坚持说事实”时用陈述语气,别搞混;
④ It is suggested/recommended/advisable that... 同样用虚拟;
⑤ be convinced that后接陈述语气,不虚拟;
⑥ 别用You must/You have to,太生硬。
四、核心句型库(通用→例句→仿写)
句型1:Learning that..., I'm writing to...(分词作状语·开头)
【通用】Learning that you are interested in Chinese culture, I'm writing to offer some suggestions. 得知你对中国文化感兴趣,我写信提建议。
【例句】Learning that you will come to Wuhan as an exchange student, I'm writing to share some practical suggestions. 得知你将来武汉做交换生,我写信分享实用建议。
[仿写] ______ (learn) that your friend will visit Wuhan next month, you are writing to give him some advice on local food.
句型2:It is highly recommended that...(虚拟语气·提建议)
【通用】It is highly recommended that you (should) make a detailed plan before the trip. 强烈建议旅行前制定详细计划。
【例句】It is highly recommended that you (should) climb the Yellow Crane Tower at sunset, when the golden light over the Yangtze River is simply breathtaking. 强烈建议日落时登黄鹤楼,长江金色光芒令人叹为观止。
[仿写] It is highly recommended that you ______ (try) hot dry noodles at Hubu Lane, where the most authentic version is served.
句型3:Not only... but also...(部分倒装·并列)
【通用】Not only will reading broaden your horizons, but it will also improve your writing skills. 阅读不仅开阔视野,还提高写作技能。
【例句】Not only does Hubei Provincial Museum house the ancient chime bells, but it also offers interactive exhibitions that bring history to life. 省博不仅收藏古代编钟,还提供互动展览。
[仿写] Not only ______ Wuhan ______ (have) a long history, but it also boasts a vibrant modern culture.
句型4:The reason why... is that...(定从+表从)
【通用】The reason why I recommend this book is that it offers practical advice for beginners. 我推荐这本书是因为它为初学者提供实用建议。
【例句】The reason why I recommend East Lake is that it offers a peaceful escape from the busy city, with vast waters and tree-lined paths. 我推荐东湖是因为它能让人远离城市喧嚣。
[仿写] The reason ______ I suggest visiting Jianghan Road is ______ it combines century-old architecture with trendy shops and cafes.
句型5:..., across which...(介词+which·定从)
【通用】You may as well visit the local museum, where you can learn about the city's history. 你不妨参观当地博物馆了解城市历史。
【例句】You may as well visit Hubu Lane, where you can taste various Wuhan snacks from hot dry noodles to doupi. 你不妨去户部巷品尝各种武汉小吃。
[仿写] I strongly recommend the Wuhan Yangtze River Bridge, across ______ you can walk to enjoy the view of both banks.
句型6:It is also advisable that...(形式主语·提建议)
【通用】It is also advisable that you (should) book tickets in advance during peak season. 旺季提前订票也是明智的。
【例句】It is also advisable that you (should) learn a few basic Chinese phrases before your trip, as many local shop owners may not speak English fluently. 旅行前学几句基础中文,因为许多店主英语不流利。
[仿写] It is also advisable that you ______ (bring) an umbrella, as Wuhan is known for its sudden rain showers in summer.
句型7:Another suggestion I would like to offer is that...(定从+表从)
【通用】Another suggestion I would like to offer is that you should keep a travel journal to record your experiences. 另一个建议是写旅行日志记录经历。
【例句】Another suggestion I would like to offer is that you should take a cruise on the Yangtze River at night, when the city skyline is beautifully illuminated. 另一个建议是晚上乘长江游轮,天际线被美丽点亮。
[仿写] Another suggestion I would like to offer is that you ______ (should) attend a Hubei opera performance to experience local traditional art.
句型8:I'd appreciate it if...(it作形式宾语·结尾)
【通用】I'd appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. 如能考虑我的建议将不胜感激。
【例句】I'd appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration and let me know how your trip goes. 如能考虑建议并告诉我旅行情况,将不胜感激。
[仿写] I'd appreciate ______ if you could share your experience in Wuhan with me after your visit.
句型9:I am convinced that...(形容词+宾从·结尾)
【通用】I am convinced that you will make rapid progress with consistent effort. 我相信持续努力你会快速进步。
【例句】I am convinced that you will find Wuhan a city of contrasts, where ancient traditions thrive alongside cutting-edge technology. 我相信你会发现武汉是反差之城,古老传统与前沿科技共存。
[仿写] I am convinced that you ______ (have) a wonderful time exploring the cultural treasures of Wuhan.
句型10:Should you have any questions...(倒装省略if·结尾)
【通用】Should you have any questions about the plan, do not hesitate to contact me. 如对计划有疑问,随时联系我。
【例句】Should you have any questions about your itinerary, do not hesitate to contact me anytime. 如对行程有疑问,随时联系我。
[仿写] Should you ______ (need) any help during your stay in Wuhan, I would be more than happy to assist you.
五、小试牛刀(学完就练·答案附后)
(一)单句语法填空
1. ______ (learn) that you will come to China, I'm writing to offer some suggestions.
2. I suggest that you ______ (visit) the local museum to learn about the history.
3. It is highly recommended that you ______ (book) tickets in advance.
4. Not only ______ (be) the scenery beautiful, but the food is also delicious.
5. I'd appreciate ______ if you could reply at your earliest convenience.
6. The reason ______ I recommend this restaurant is ______ it serves authentic local food.
7. Should you ______ (need) any help, please don't hesitate to tell me.
8. I am convinced that you ______ (enjoy) your stay here.
9. Another suggestion I would like to offer is that you ______ (should) try the local breakfast.
10. It is also advisable that you ______ (bring) a map, as the city is quite large.
(二)句型仿写(融入武汉元素)
1. 用Learning that...开头:得知你下周要来武汉,我写信给你提一些实用建议。
2. 用It is highly recommended that...:强烈建议你在日落时分登黄鹤楼。
3. 用Not only...but also...倒装:湖北省博物馆不仅收藏着曾侯乙编钟,还提供互动展览。
4. 用The reason why...is that...:我推荐东湖的原因是它能让人远离城市喧嚣。
5. 用Should you...倒装:如果你在武汉期间需要任何帮助,请随时联系我。
(三)单句翻译
1. 你不妨去户部巷,在那里可以品尝各种武汉小吃。(定从)
2. 你还可以在旅行前学几句基础中文,因为许多店主英语不流利。(形式主语)
3. 我想提的另一个建议是你应该在晚上乘长江游轮。(表从)
4. 如果你能考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激。(it作形式宾语)
5. 我相信你会爱上武汉这座历史与现代交融的城市。(形容词+宾从)
六、实战写作·分层训练
任务A(中等层·模板导写)给来汉交换生提建议
【题目】
假定你是李华,英国朋友Peter将作为交换生来武汉学习一年。写邮件内容包括:①表示欢迎 ②就旅游和语言文化体验提建议(至少两条)③表达期望。词数80左右。
【审题】体裁:建议信;人称:一+二人称;时态:一般现在时;要点:欢迎→旅游建议+理由→语言建议+理由→期望
【填空模板·直接套用】
Dear ______,
I'm glad to hear that you will come to Wuhan ______. I'm writing to give you some suggestions on ______.
First of all, I suggest that you should ______, where you can ______. What's more, it's a good idea to ______, which ______. Last but not least, you'd better ______, who can ______.
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Wish you a good time in Wuhan!
Yours, Li Hua
【参考范文(11—12分)】
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to hear that you will come to Wuhan as an exchange student. I'm writing to give you some suggestions on how to make the most of your stay here.
First of all, I suggest that you should visit the Yellow Crane Tower on weekends, where you can enjoy a beautiful view of the Yangtze River. What's more, it's a good idea to try hot dry noodles, the most famous local food in Wuhan. Last but not least, you'd better make some Chinese friends, who can help you improve your Chinese and introduce you to local culture.
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Wish you a good time in Wuhan!
Yours, Li Hua
任务B(高层·范文赏析与创新)给来汉游客推荐美食文化
【题目】
假定你是李华,外国朋友Chris计划来武汉旅游三天。写邮件内容包括:①推荐至少两个景点 ②推荐特色美食 ③提醒文化注意事项。词数80左右。
【审题】要点:景点(≥2个+理由)→美食→文化提醒;高分策略:分词开头+虚拟语气+倒装+定从
【参考范文(13—14分)】
Dear Chris,
Learning that you are planning a three-day trip to Wuhan, I'm writing to share some suggestions that will help you make the most of your visit.
To begin with, it is highly recommended that you (should) start with the Yellow Crane Tower, a landmark that has inspired poets for over a thousand years. After that, a visit to Hubei Provincial Museum is a must, where the 2,400-year-old chime bells still ring with ancient music. For food, you cannot miss hot dry noodles and doupi at Hubu Lane—these local specialties are the very soul of Wuhan's breakfast culture. It is also advisable that you (should) learn to use chopsticks before your trip, as most local restaurants do not provide forks.
Should you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me. May your trip be filled with wonderful memories!
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点提炼·可迁移到其他话题】
① 开头:Learning that you are planning..., I'm writing to share some suggestions that will help you...(分词作状语+定从,比I'm writing to give you advice紧凑)
② 提建议:It is highly recommended that you (should) start with..., a landmark that...(虚拟语气+同位语+定从,一句话含建议、对象、理由)
③ 强调:...is a must, where...(must名词表“必做之事”,where定从补细节)
④ 美食:you cannot miss...—these...are the very soul of...(cannot miss语气强,破折号后the very soul of提层次)
⑤ 提醒:It is also advisable that you (should)..., as...(虚拟语气+原因状从,比You should...委婉)
⑥ 结尾:Should you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me. May your trip be filled with...(倒装省略if+祝愿句,比I hope you have a good time正式)
任务C(巩固)给学校提建议·开展武汉文化周
【题目】
假定你是李华,校英文报征集“校园文化建设”建议。写邮件建议开展“武汉文化周”,内容包括:①活动目的 ②活动内容(至少两项)③预期效果。词数80左右。
【参考范文】
Dear Editor,
Learning that our school English newspaper is collecting suggestions on campus cultural activities, I'm writing to propose a “Wuhan Culture Week” that I believe will enrich students' understanding of our city.
To begin with, it is highly recommended that we (should) invite local opera performers to give a live Hubei opera show, allowing students to experience traditional art firsthand. Additionally, a photo exhibition featuring Wuhan's landmarks—from the Yellow Crane Tower to the Wuhan Yangtze River Bridge—would help students appreciate the city's history and modern development. Another suggestion is that we should hold a food-tasting event where students can try hot dry noodles and doupi while learning about Wuhan's unique breakfast culture.
I'd appreciate it if you could take my proposal into consideration. I am convinced that this event will strengthen students' bond with our city.
Yours,
Li Hua
七、答案与解析
(一)句型仿写答案
句型1【答案】Learning 【解析】现在分词作状语,表主动
句型2【答案】(should) try 【解析】It is recommended that...从句用虚拟语气
句型3【答案】does; have 【解析】Not only句首用部分倒装
句型4【答案】why; that 【解析】The reason why...is that...固定句型
句型5【答案】which 【解析】介词+which引导定从,across which=across the bridge;where也可接受
句型6【答案】(should) bring 【解析】It is advisable that...从句用虚拟语气
句型7【答案】(should) attend 【解析】suggestion后接表语从句用虚拟语气
句型8【答案】it 【解析】appreciate后接it作形式宾语,再接if从句
句型9【答案】will have 【解析】be convinced that后接陈述语气,不虚拟
句型10【答案】need 【解析】Should you need...=If you should need...倒装省略if
(二)单句语法填空答案
1.【答案】Learning 【解析】现在分词作状语,表主动
2.【答案】(should) visit 【解析】suggest that...从句用虚拟语气
3.【答案】(should) book 【解析】It is recommended that...从句用虚拟语气
4.【答案】is 【解析】Not only句首部分倒装,scenery不可数
5.【答案】it 【解析】appreciate后接it作形式宾语
6.【答案】why; that 【解析】The reason why...is that...固定句型
7.【答案】need 【解析】Should you need...倒装省略if
8.【答案】will enjoy 【解析】be convinced that后接陈述语气
9.【答案】(should) try 【解析】suggestion后接表语从句用虚拟语气
10.【答案】(should) bring 【解析】It is advisable that...从句用虚拟语气
(三)句型仿写参考答案
1. Learning that you will visit Wuhan next week, I'm writing to offer you some practical suggestions.
2. It is highly recommended that you (should) climb the Yellow Crane Tower at sunset to enjoy the breathtaking view of the Yangtze River.
3. Not only does Hubei Provincial Museum house the chime bells of Marquis Yi of Zeng, but it also offers interactive exhibitions.
4. The reason why I recommend East Lake is that it offers a peaceful escape from the busy city.
5. Should you need any help during your stay in Wuhan, do not hesitate to contact me.
(四)单句翻译参考答案
1. You may as well visit Hubu Lane, where you can taste a variety of Wuhan snacks.
2. It is also advisable that you (should) learn a few basic Chinese phrases before your trip, as many local shop owners may not speak English fluently.
3. Another suggestion I would like to offer is that you (should) take a cruise on the Yangtze River at night.
4. I'd appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration.
5. I am convinced that you will fall in love with Wuhan, a city where history and modernity coexist in perfect harmony.
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